Fantasy ? Raavan ? ( Ek Naam Ya Ek Razz )

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[Nevil singh]

Update 7

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hawa bhi aj yese bah rahi thi ki jiski wajah se pedo se ajib si awaj aa rahi thi

ssssssssssaaaaarrrr sssssssaaaarrr

purnima ki raat thi par jese badal aur chand ke bich jung chidi hui thi badal puri tarah se chand ki roshni ko niglne ki kossis kar raha ho aur chand apni roshni falane par wo raat thi

"red blood moon" ki

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mosum apna alag hi rang dikha raha tha bijliya ke shath- shath barish ho rahi thi ghadi mae awaj gunji

taaaannnnn taaaaaaannn taaaaan

aur idhar docter ke hatho mae ek sundar sa bacha jisko dekh kar koi bhi doctor ya nurse apna dhyan nahi hata paa rahi thi ek alag sa akarsan mae sab kedh ho gaye

par jub unhone bacche ki ankho ko dekha to sab daar gai aur tik usi wakt

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doctor ke hatho mae wo baccha khel raha tha aur doctor aur nuras kisi pathar ke but ki tarah us bacche ko nihar rahi thi baccha tha hi itna masum ki koi bhi usse apni nazar na hata paye

par jub doctor ne usski ankho ko dekha to ek minat ke liye dar gai kyuki uski ankho ka color dark red tha jese ankho mae khun uthar ayaha ho tabhi acchank jese samya ruk ss gaya har chij ruk gai sirf us bacche ko chod kar room mae ek roshni fell gai aur uss roshni se ek hath uss bacche ke upar gaya aur uski ankho ka color dark blue ho gaya aur roshni bhi gayab ho gaya aur jo samya ruka hua tha fir se chalne laga aur baccha bhi rone laga

tabhi nursh bahar nikai aur

nursh- mr sing mubarak ho app pita ban gaye ladka hua hai

To imtro time ( dosto abhi short intro dunga taki app log confuse na ho jaye uske baat ek full intro dunga with image)

mr smrat sing - hero ke pita

mis sima sing - hero ki ma ( apke liye mom )

mr samar sing - smart ke chotr bhai aur hero ke chacha

miss simar sing - samar ki patni aur hero ki chachi

baccha ka abhi koi intro nahi hoga unko intro sidhe full intro mae bas itns ki samar aur simar ke do bacche hai

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jub nursh ne ye khushkabri sunai to samar samrat ke gake lagta hua

samar - mubarak ho bhiya mubarak ho app papa ban gayi aur main chacha hamre parivar ka varish aa gaya bhiya

samrat( nam ankho ke shath) - ha mere bhai tujhko bhi bahut bahut mubarak akhir mujhse jada khushi tum dono ko hai

tabhi samrat ki nazar simar ( bahu) par padi jiski ankho se anshu bah rahe the

smarat samar se- dekh bahu kyu ro rahi hai ja chup kara usko main tab tak doctor se baat kar leta hu

samar apni biwi ke pass jakar uske kandhe par hath rakhkar

samar- ye kya hai simar aj wo hua jiske liye tumne hamne kitni manat kiya aur year sub mooke par tum ansu baha rahi ho

simar( apne ansu ko pochte hue) - are ye to khushi ke anshu hai app nahi samjh pawoge jante hai jub bi didi ( sima) mere baccho pae aona pyar lutati to unki mamta dekh mere man bhi hota ki kas didi ki bhi koi aulad hoti jispar mae apna payar luta sakti aur aj dekho mera sapna pura ho gaya sab un gurudev ki kripa hai

samar- tum sahi bol rahi ho simar hum sab ne aasa hi chod di thi par un gurudev ki baat sach sabit hui

aur dono kuch bate karte rahe ab samrat ki aur kahani modte hai


samrat doctor se - nurse meri biwi aur bacche kese hai kya main unse mil sakta hu

doctor - mr samrat ma aur baccha dono bilkul tik hai koi chinta ki baat nahi hai aur abhi abhi biwi ko nind ka injection diya gaya taki toda unko aram mile aur bacche ki kuch normal janch ki jaa rahi hai fir app dono se mil sakte hai

samrat itna sunke toda relax ho gaya aur ek nurse ko bola kar
apni jeb se noto ki gadi nikak kar
- pure hospital main mitai batwa do
nurse khushi - khushi chali jaati hain

todi der baad doctor samrat aur unki family ko andar ane ko bolte hai aur samrat ke hatho main uske bacche ko sop deti hai tabhi sima ko bhi hose ane lagta hai to

simar- main didi ki madad karti hu

samrat aur samar dono ko kuch bhan hi nahi raha ki simar ne kya bola kyuki dono to bas us pyare se bacche main kho gaya the aur dono ki ankh nam ho chuki baccha bhi dono ko dekj kar muskura raha tha

tab tak sima puri tarah se hose mae aa chuki thi

sima( tode dard se) - choti mera baccha kaha hai

simar- ab app tik to hai na didi aur hamara beta bilkul tik hai rukiye main lati hu usko

simar jake donoko awaj ddeti hai par dono koi response nahi dete

tab simar samar ki hila kar bolti hai - are sara din kya app dono baccho hi payar karoge are abhi uski maa aur chachi bhi dijiye

dono bhai bacche ko dena nahi chahte the par dena pada tabhi doctor boli

doctor - app dono bahsr jaiye bacche ko dudh pilana hai dono bhai bahar ki aur nikal gae

sima dard mse thi par jab wo aone bacche ko dekhti hai to jese uske sarir ka room khil utha uske andar ek nai urja aa gai ho aur uska sara dard mit gaya

jese ki har ma apni santan ko is duniya mae lane ke liya kitne dard ka samna karti hai aur apne bacche ko dekhkar aona sara dard bhul jati hai
par aj is dhuniya main wahi aulad apne hi ma baap ko ghar se bahar nikal deta hai jisko is duniya mae lane ke liye aur aur palane ke liya ma baap na jane kitni ki muskili ko samna karte hai jab wahi aulad uske budape mai jab usnko sabse jada jarurat hoti hai tabhi wo unko unhi ke ghar se nikal deta hai

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to jab sima aone bacche ko dekhti hai to usko chumne lagti hai aur rone bhi lagti hai

simar- didi chaliye rona band kijiye aur mere bacche ko dudh pils dijiye usko bhuk lagi ho

kher ab isnko yahi chodte hai

sima ko kuch din bad hospital se chuti mil gai aur wo log ghar wapas aa gae

jaha rat ko sabhi log holl mae bethe hue the

samar- bhiya ab hame hamare bete ka namkarn bhi kara dena chahiye

samrat- to tik bol raha hai chote aur shath mae ek mega party bhi

sima- wo sab tik hai ji par sabse pahake isko gurudev ke asram bhi le jana hai

simar- koi baat nahi didi ek kaam karte app aur bhiya dono guruji ke asram nikakl jana main aur ye (samar) party ki sari tayari kar lenge

samar- simar ka idea tik hai bhiya app log kal hi nikak jaiye guru je assram

" zindagi bhi kyu khel khelti hai dost jinko aona samjha usne hi zindagi ka sabse bada dhoka de diya "

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[Nevil singh]

Update 8

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To apne wade ke mutabik samrat aur uski patni apne bacche sahit gurudev ke asram ki aur subha hi nikal gaye aur idhar samar aur simar dono hi party ki tayari mae lag gae

asaram unke ghar se kuch 2 ghabte ki duri mae tha

aashram ek nadi ke kinare par bana hua tha chuki pani tha isliye charo aur hi hariyali thi chote chote jiw jantu apni awajh se mahol ko aur sundar bana rahe the

aashram ke samne bade se bord par likha hua tha

" shanti kunj" ye us aashram ka naam tha dono pati patni aashram ke andar chal pade

inke gurudev ka naam swami agnivesh tha jise main swami ke naam se likhunga

ye aashram apne ayurved ilaj ke liye bahut prasid tha aur eajha thi yaha ke sadhu jinko lagbhag har bimari ka ilaj pata tha

ab in bato ka yahi rokte hai aur age badte hai

dono aashram ke andar gaye samne ek sadhu pedo ko pani de rage the

samrat - pranam baba ji

baba- aayesman bhaw putr kya kis kaam liya yaha aana hua hai

samrat- ji hume gurudev se milna hai unhone hame bulaya tha

baba- acha to tum dono samrat aur sima sing ho gurudev ne bata diya tha ki ajj tum dono ane wale ho ( ek kutiya ki aur is hara karke)
chaliye mere sheath

samrat aur sima dono hi us kutiya main chale gale

baba- tum dono todi der aaram karo gurudev abhi dhyan main hai

samrat- ji baba

todi der bitne ke baad gurudev aa gai unke ate hi dono pati patni ne unke pwo chu kar ashirwad liya

gurudev - kalyan ho putr, सदा suhagan raho beti yaha beth jaoo

gurudev - sab kuch kushal mangal hai na putr

samrat - ji gurudev app ke ashirwad se sab kuch theek hai

sima- gurudev hamne to aasha hi chod di thi ki hamre vansh mae koi ladka peda hoga par apki wajha se ajj muje wo sukh mila hai uske liye dhyanwad gurudev

gurudev-beti isme mene kuch nahi kiya hai jo kuch hua wo sab samya ke mutabuk hi hua hai

samrat - gurudev ab app mere bete ka namkaran kar dijiye

gurudev - lawo bacche ko muje do

sima ne bacche ko gurudev ke hatho mae diya
baccha unko dekhkar muskura raha tha

gurudev - tum dono yahi par mere aane tak intjar karo

aur gurudev apne kamre main chale gaye

ab inko yahi chod dete hai ab chlte ek haweli mae jaha par 2- log kuch bate kar rahe the

boss- kya khabar hai raghu jo tune muje is wakat jaga diya agar koi bina kaam ke khabar hogi to teri ghand mae garam masala dala dunga

raghu - malik khabar yesi hai jiske liye app ajj tak intjar kaar rahe the jisko sun kar app mujko mhu manga inam denge

boss- accha yesi kyu kabar hai raghu

raghu- malik suna hai ki ajj samrat singh ke ghar ek bahut badi party hai

boss- to bosdk main waha jaa kar nachu

raghu- malik puri baat to suno khabar mili hai ki samrat baap ban gaya hai

boss ek dham se kurs se uth khada hua aur raghu ke khnde par hath rakhkar

boss - raghu kabar paki hai na agar ye galat hua to

raghu - nahi malik ye dekhiye

aur raghu ne indirection card dikhya jisme party aur bacche ke baare mae jankari thi

boss- waa waa raghu waa zindagi mae phali baar tune ek acchi khabar sunie hai sabash ab mera ek kaam kar agar tune kar diya to tujko itni daulat dunga ki teri 7 puste bhi beth kar kha sakegi

raghu - ha malik bolo kya kaam hai

boss- samrat shing ke ghar mai kushi ka mahol hai na usko matam mai badlna hoga

raghu- tik hai malik main uske gjar ko hi udha dunga par waha to bahut jada security hogi

boss - nahi raghu bilkul nahi tu sirf us bacche ko marega aur kisi ko nahi aur tu security ki chinta mat kar tujko main andar pauncha dunga tu bas apne kaam par dhyan de aur jaa SAMJA

raghu - ji malik par malik appse ek baat puchni thi kya main puch sakta hu

boss - puch ajj tune bahut acchi khabar di hai puch jo puchna chahta hai

raghu- malik agar app ka dusmani samrat se hai to app usko kyu nahi maar dete sirf bacche ko kyu

boss- tu nahi samjha ga raghu nahi samjhe ga fir tu mera khash hai isliye bata deta hu tujko sun ek baat bata agar ek baap jinda ho aur uski aulad maar jae to uss baap ko kesa lagega

raghu - malik fir to baap ki nark main badal jayegi wo jite ji maar jayega

boss- sahi kaha raghu bilkul sahi bas isi dard mae main us samrat ko jalte hue dekhna chahta hu uski aankhon se hi nahi uske dil se bhi khun ke anshu bahe ye chahta hu ab tu ja aur ye le ( ek lifafa aur ek address) is aadmi se mil lena ye tujko uske ghar andar paucha dega ab ja

raghu lifafa hath mai lekar chala gaya aur boss ek photo ki aur mhu karkr jisme haar tanga hua tha

boss- ajj main jis dard se guzar raha hu tujko bhi wahi dard sahna hoga samrat sing jese main apni aulad ke liye pal pal tadap raha hu tujhko bhi tadapna hoga tadapna hoga ha ha ha ha.....

puri haweli uski hansi se gunj uti


aur idhar gurudev bhi apne kamare se bhar aa gae aur bacche ko sima ko soop kar bole

gurudev - beti tumhara ye beta bahut hi utam samy main peda hua hai ye balak har gun se sampan hoga saktisali hoga, buddhiman hoga aur apne aur apno par har aane wale har paresani aur musibat ka vinash kardega isliye isla nahi avinash hoga

samrat aur sima in sabhi ko sun kar bahut khush hue

gurudev - parantu tumhare parivar ka atit ispe prqbawo dalega beti

sima( chintit hote hue) - par gurudev wo sharp to khatm ho gaya na tabhi to

gurudev ( bich mai hi) - nahi beti ek tapasvi brhamn ke sharp ko khatm karne ki sakti to isvar ke pass bhi nahi parantu tum aur tumhare parivar ke punya ne uska prabwa kam jarur kar diya kintu is balak par iska prabwo hoga iskliye ye blak krodhi hoga aur samrat tum kese bhul gaye ki tum ek raj gharne se ho ek raja ke bete ho tum isliye is balak ki adat ek raja ki tarah hogi ye har kisi par razz karega jaha bhi iske kadam padega us jagh par apna adhikar karne ki kosis karega aur jo iske raste main ayega wo tabha ho jaega

gurudev - putri jab ye balak 5 sala ka ho jae to tumko isko appne se dur karna hoga

sima( rote hue) - ye app kya bol rahe rahe hai gurudev jis aulad ko paane ke liye hamne na jane kitne puja paat daan katinei utha usko main apni mamta se kese dur kar du

gurudev - beti main janta hu ek maa ke kiye ye bahut hi katin samya hai par tumhare samne sirf 2 raste honge ya to apni mamta ka blidam ya fir apne aulad ke jiwan ka balidan...

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gurudev ( bich mai hi) - nahi beti ek tapasvi brhamn ke sharp ko khatm karne ki sakti to isvar ke pass bhi nahi parantu tum aur tumhare parivar ke punya ne uska prabwa kam jarur kar diya kintu is balak par iska prabwo hoga iskliye ye blak krodhi hoga aur samrat tum kese bhul gaye ki tum ek raj gharne se ho ek raja ke bete ho tum isliye is balak ki adat ek raja ki tarah hogi ye har kisi par razz karega jaha bhi iske kadam padega us jagh par apna adhikar karne ki kosis karega aur jo iske raste main ayega wo tabha ho jaega

gurudev - putri jab ye balak 5 sala ka ho jae to tumko isko appne se dur karna hoga

sima( rote hue) - ye app kya bol rahe rahe hai gurudev jis aulad ko paane ke liye hamne na jane kitne puja paat daan katinei utha usko main apni mamta se kese dur kar du

gurudev - beti main janta hu ek maa ke kiye ye bahut hi katin samya hai par tumhare samne sirf 2 raste honge ya to apni mamta ka blidam ya fir apne aulad ke jiwan ka balidan...




ab age

sima aur samrat ki aankhon se anshu bah rahe hai aur dono bolte hain

- gurudev ye app kya bol rahe abhi apne bola ki mera beta hamre parivaar ki har mushkil ko khatm kar dega aur abhi app bol rahe hai ki iski jaan

sima- gurudev ye kya samya hai kya paap kiye the hamne ki phale hamare parivar ko kabhi bhi baacha ( ladka) nahi hoga aur jab mujhe aulad mila to app bol rahe hai ki uski zindagi khatre main hogi kyu gurudev kyu

gurudev - beti main kalpana bhi nahi kar sakta ki is samya tumhare dil mae kitna kitna dard tumko kesa mahsus ho raha hoga ek maa se uski aulad ko dur karne ka vichar bhi nahi aana chahiye par beti yahi samay chahta hai isliye pahle meri baat suno uske baat vichar karna

samrat jiski ankhu main bhi anshu the par unko control karkr rakha hua tha kyuki usko apni patni ko sambhala tha

smrat- sima shant ho jawo dekho baba ki har baat aj tak galat sabit nahi hui hai ek baar gurudev ki puri baat sun lete hain boliye gurudev

gurudev - samrat tum jante ho ki tumhare pita ko ye sharp us mahan tapasvi ne diya ki "aj ke baad tere pure vansh mae koi bhi chirag( Ladka) peda nahi hoga" jiske karna tumhare balak se pura kisi ke yaha ladaka puda nahi hua fir uske baad tumhari maa bhabhi aur tumhari patni tino ne kai sadhu shanto ki seva ki jisme main bhi ek hu aur hum sabhi sadhu ke muh se sirf tumhari patni ke liye shantan ka ahsirwad diya jiske karan ham sabhi sadhu ke ahsirwad us sharap ko khatm to nahi sake par uska prabhwo jarur kam kiya isliye tumko ladkee ki prapti hui ab age suno tumko kya karana hai

is balak ke upar 5 sal se lekar 18 sal tak mrutu ki chya rahegi agar ye apni maa ke pas raha to parntu agar tum is balak ko apne pass iske 5 janamdin tak rakh sakte ho uske baad isko agle 18 janamdin tak apne se dur rakhna hoga uske baad iske upar se mruty ki chaya hat jaegi wese bhi beti ye balak tumse adhik tumhari bahan jesi nanad simar se pyara karega tumhare pass 5 sal honge apni mamta lutane ke liye uske baad apni vansh ke ek matr chirag ki zindagi ke liya usko apne dur rakhna hoga

beti ab tumhare nirna par sab kuch tika hua hai ki tum kya chahti ho

sima( jo kafi had tak samaj chuki thi) - gurudev kon si maa nahi chayegi ki uski santan lamba jiwan jiye tik hai guru dev main apne avi ke jiwan ke liye uske apne se dur kar dungi

gurudev - ab apne ghar ki jawo beti aur ha beti ek baat yaad rakhna is bacche ko jo dud tum pilawogi us bartan ko sabse pahle bhagwon ke pass rahkna ( man mae maf karna beti mene tumse bahut si baatein chupiye hai par ye mere guru ka addesh tha)

ab aur kon si baat jo chupi hui hai isliye apko story phdte rahna hoga

aur fir samrat aur uski patni apne ghar ki aur nhikal padte hai

yaha boss kisi ko coll karta hai

boss - main bol raha hu

samne- ji sir kahiye kya kaam hai

boss- tumhare pass jarur samrat sing ke party ka inviteesn aya hoga

samne- ha ahr mujhe pata hai ki mujhe nahi jana hai app chinta mat karo

boss- chup bsdk pahale meri baat sun tujko us party main jana hoga aur ek baat dhyan se sun mera ek aadmi aa raha hai tere pass wo tujko ek lifafa dega aur us lifafe main jo hai wo samrat tak pauchna hoga tujko par uske ye nahi pata chalna chahiye ki lifafa tune diya aur us aadmi ko kese bhi karke uske ghar ke andar pucha dena samjha ab rak phone


boss- tumhare pass ek tofa behj raha hu samrat ha ha ha

aur is taraf pargy ki tayari ho chuki thi

car main samrat sima se

samrat- sima kya tum sach main avi ko apne se dur rkh pawogi

sima- agar mujhse door rahne par mere bacche ki zindagi sahi salamat ho to main isko apne se door kar dungi

samrat- kya is baat ko samar aur simar ko

sima bich mae hi- nahi nahi abhi kuch dino tak ye baat ham dono ke bich ho rahegi

samrat- par sima kabhi na kabhi to un dono ko ye baat batani hogi na

sima- ha app sahi bol rahe hai par jub sahi saymay aayega tab main unko ye baat bata dungi tab unko kush rahne dijiye

samrat- sayad tum sahi bol rahi ho

unke ghar jane tak party
ki lagbhg sabhi tayari ho chuki thi holl mai simar intjar kar rahi thi shath mae 2 bacche bhi the

simar- lawo didi mere bete ko mujhko do app dono aram karo

sima- are choti ab tere beta ka naam bhi hai

simar- dekho didi koi acha sa naam hi hona chahiye tik hai

sima( haste hue) ha Accha sa naam hai avinash aur hum sab ke liye avi

simar- hmm bahut accha naam hai mera avi

samrat - samir kaha hai

simar- ji bhaiya unhone sabko paety ke baare main bata diya sirf hamre kuch karibi ko kud hi batane gae hai baki sab tayari ho chuki hai app chinta mat kijiye

sima- choti tu bhi tum dono ke hote hue muhe chinta ki kya jarurat
chalo ab apni pasand ka apne bete ko kapde pahna do

simar- ji didi aur app apni dono rajkumariy ko

aur fir sabhi log kaode badlne chale gae
sham ho jati hai aur party suru ho jati hai kyunki samrat ek bahut bada businessman tha isliye party main high profile log aaye hue the in sab mae wo bhi tha jiske sath boss ka admi aaya hua tha

aadmi( man mai) - ye ishwar ye kis paap ki zaja de raha mujhe agar mene us (boss) ki baat nahi mani to mera pura parivar khatre main aa jaega aur main ajj apne parivaar ke liye sing parivar ko khatre main dal raha hu ye iswar ajj kuch yese ki hum dono ka parivar baach jaye

tab tak raghu boss ko coll karta hai

raghu - ha hallo malik main sing house pauch chuka hu ab age kya krana hai

boss- bahut khub raghu ab meri baat dyan se sun tere pass jo zahar hai uski tujko us bacche ko pilya jane wale dudh main mila dena hai par dhyan se kisi ko khabar nahi honi chahiye

raghu - tik hai makik uska janamdin hi uska maran din hoga ha ha ha....

kuch der baad ak pati patni ghar ke andar ate

reshma kapur aur ramesh kapur

( in sabhi ka full intro baad main dunga)

ramesh- samrat ke gake milta hua congratulations mere bhai akhir iswar ne teri sun li tujko papa aur mujhko chacha bana diya air bhabhi ki tabyat tik hai
aur ek baat bata ye party to tik hai par apni party ka kya hoga

samrat - shhh toda dhire bol agar teri bhabhi ne sun liya to

ramesh - hat bhabhi se apni biwi se darta hai

samrat- accha tu nahi darta ruk abhi bulata hu reshma bhabhi ko bhabhi

ramesh- are chup kar bhai main to majak kar raha tha

samrat- ha bhai ham dono ki hakat ek jesi hi hai bahar sher ghar mae billi par tu chinta mat kar apni party bhi hogi

idhar reshma aur sima apni baat par lage hue the

Reshma (toda haste hue) - sima toda apni sundarta ka raj to bata
Sima- o o o Mae
Reshma - koi Yoga ya fir ( apni ankhe utha kar or ankh mar kar) y fir hamare Bahi sahab ka pyaar hai ha
Or sabhi aurate hasne lagti hai
Sima - chup kar kamini
Reshma - hai meri jaan kese shrma rahi hai hmm





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update 1


To chaliye suru karte hai jese ki lagbhag har fantasy story mae hota hai universe ka nirman kese hua to yaha bhi wese hi hoga

To hum rahte hai earth par aur hamre earth ke alawa 8 aur grh hai aur hamara sun ( Suraj)

To aj se na jane kitno Samy pehle ( kya pata hamre universe ka nirman kis time hua hoga) jab kuch nahi bhi nahi tha us wakt sirf ek bahut hi chamkili urja thi ( isme har rang mile hue the)
Aur urja mae ek wisfot ( blast) hua aur wo urja na jane kitne hi bhago mae bat gaya par iske par ek pramuk urja pind ( jo ek ande jesa tha) iske 3 tukdo hye jinme jivan hua matlab jinhone apna rup liya
Magar usme bahut samya tha aur is samya sirf us paramuk urja aur unke hi jese urja ne rup liya jisko hum parampita ke nan se janege wo bilkul hi ek safed aur golden colour ki unki skin thi jo chamak rahi thi aur chamkile ball bhi aur unke saath unhi ke jese ek stri bhi bani jinko rani maa bolenge un dono ki ankhe band thi kuch samya bad unki chetna ka vikas hua aur unhone apni ankhe koli aur sabhi aur dekhne lage aur sochne loge ki - hame kisne banaya hai aur kis liye tabhi us urja se awaj aai

Urja- tumko mene janam diya hai baccho ek tarha se tum meri hi santan ho

Dono ne urja ko dekha aur juk gae

Urja- utho baccho aur jo bhi sawal hai tum dono ke man man mae bolo Aur haa tum dono pati patni ho

Parmpita- main jan gaya ki app ne hame banaya hai par kyu aur humko kya karna hoga

Urja- ab is universe ki jimedari tumko utani hogi aur ha ek baat dhyan rahe tum dono ke andar meri saktiya hai

Parmpita- tik hai magar muje uske liye kya karna hoga

Urja- tumko sirf intjar karna hoga in do urja ko dekh rahe ho

Paempita ke samne 2 urja ke gole the ek jo safed tha par puri tarha se nahi usme kuch kali roshni bhi thi jabhi dusre mae kali aur lal roshni jada thi

Urja- in dono se 2 jivan ka nirman hoga ek jisko tumhe lord king nam dena hoga aur dusre ko demon king ye dono hi is Universe mae achi aur buri sakti ke malik honge

Parampita - ji tik par duniya ke liye kya- kya lagega

Tab us urja ke anginat tukde the usnese bahut si galaxy ka nirmn hua aur sath hi unke andar taro, grh aur bhi bahut kuch par us pramuk urja se ek 7 rango ( 7 Rambo) ki roshni nikli aur us roshni ne rup lena suru kiya aur ek bahut hi sundar stri mae badal gai

Parampita- ye kon hai

Urja- ye hai prkriti ( nature) hai ye tumhari madad karegi is duniya ko chalne mae ye is puri duniya mae rahegi kisi na kisi rup mae

Aur fir wo nature kai alag alag urja se har ek grh mae chali gai

Parampita- tik hai par ab jivan ka nirman

Fir us urja ne apne andar se anginat chote chote roshni ( atma) jo ki alag alag jiv bane

Urja - ab jo main bol raha dhyan se suno ab in dono urja se jinka nirman hoga unki mili juli adat se ( achi- buri) se insano ki rachna karna aur mujhe ek vachan ( promise) do ki tum inko kabhi pata lagne nahi doge ki tumhare upar bhi koi hai inke liye sirf tum hi inke janamdata ho jawoo aur devo ka nirman karo jo in 5 tatwo ( element) par apna control kare

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In sab ke bad wo urja gaayab ho gya aur parampita aur unki patni ke liye us urja ne mahal ka nirman kiya

Samya apni raftar se chalta gaya aur earth par anyek ( deferent) prakar ke jivan bane aur khatam hua

Aur is bich demon king aur lord king ne parampita aur apni soch mila kar insano ki rachna ki aur un sabhi mae jivn us pramuk urja ( atma) se aai

Aur sun ko chod sabhi 8 grh mae jivan ki rachna hui

Par samya ne apna khel khela aur demon, lord ke bich dusmani badi ( ye dusmani kese hua isliye apko intjar karna hoga iska razz bahut bad open hoga)

To ab Chalate hain sirf 4 grh ke introduction par

1 Tha lighting grh - iska yesa nam is liye pada Kyuki yaha par Phoenix's ka Raz tha
( phoenix - ek yesa jiv jiska asli rup ek chil ki tarah hota hai aur iske pankho ki jagah agg hoti hai phoenix ek tarah se immortal hote hai Kyuki ye fir se apni rakh se wapas jinda ho jate hai inki kai powers hoti hai joki apko story mae pata chalge)

2 Tha lord grh- yaha par lord unki family aur unki Vishal sena ka razz tha Kyuki lord bhi us urja se baane the unke pass bahut si powers thi inki powers aur inki family ke bare mae dhire dhire apko pata chalega


3- Tha dark grh- ya Razz tha demon king unki family aur sena ka inke bare mae bhi baad mae pata chalega


4- earth - yani hamara ghar jaha par kisi ka raj nahi tha balki yaha sabhi jiv jantu aur insaan apne hisab se ji rahe the

Par samya fir badla aur insaan ke andar buraiyo ko apnane lage aur khun, lut- pat rep, jese crime hone lage demon king ki soch se kuch insaan ne kali takto ki puja karna suru kiya
Wahi lord king ki soch se achi takto ki bhi puja hui ( note yaha gods ki puja ka jikr nahi kiya ja raha hai)

Demon king aur lord dono hi duniya par raj karna chahte the par parampita unko rok diya

Samya badta gaya aur lord demon king ki powers bhi badti gai aur insano ka Lalach bhi aur aa gaya 21 century matlab science ka yug ab sab kuch badal chuka tha insaan ne ek dusre se age hone ki hod mae yese yese vinashak weapon ka nirman kar liya jinke upyog se sab kuch barbad ho sakta tha

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[Naik]

Update 2

Demon king aur lord dono hi duniya par raj karna chahte the par parampita unko rok diya

Samya badta gaya aur lord demon king ki powers bhi badti gai aur insano ka Lalach bhi aur aa gaya 21 century matlab science ka yug ab sab kuch badal chuka tha insaan ne ek dusre se age hone ki hod mae yese yese vinashak weapon ka nirman kar liya jinke upyog se sab kuch barbad ho sakta tha


Ab age chalte hai

Ab demon king bahut takat war ho chuka tha aur chalak bhi aur wo kuch soch raha tha

Demon king - hmm lord ne bahut si power jama kar li hai ab mujhe kuch yesa karna hoga ki lord aur uski ko sena ( angel) kaap uthe par kya

Kuch der sochna ke baad unko apne sabse budiman (mind) salahkar ko bula liya

Introduce- draco ? -
Wese to demon king ke pass mantri ki kami nahi thi par unsab mae draco sabse jyada budiman tha

Draco- maharaj ki jay ho muje yaha bulane ki wajah maharaj

Demon king - awoo draco betho

Draco apni jagha par beth jata hai

? demon king - draco tumko pata hi hai ki kya ho raha lord apni sakti badha raha

Draco- ji maharaj muje pata hai

Demon king - isliye maine tumko yaad kiya draco tumne hamesa muje ek sahi rasta bataya hai

( Note - dosto mera demon king ek bahut hi kunkhar raja hai par jaha jarurat ho wo apne logo se madad jarur leta hai )

Draco - sukriya maharaj apne meri itni tarif ki uske liye ( fir kuch de ? chup rahne ke baad ) maharaj ab samya aa gaya ki apko ek yesi power ka nirman ( invasion ) karna hoga jo ap ki tarah hi kun kar ho aur saktisali bhi par

Demon king uske par par usko dhyan se dekhne lage

Draco - wo ek khubsurat ladki ? ( sala tarki? ) honi chahiye ?

Demon king - kunkar aur chalak to tik hai par ladki kyu

Draco - maharaj aj tak apne jitni ko banya hai sabhi badsurat ? the aur ? unko dekh kar hi angel ko pata chal jata ki ye apki tarf se hai isliye ab hamko ek bala ki ? sundar ladki jisko dekh hi lalach aa jay yesa banana hoga aur isko hum earth par bejenge

Draco - ab mujh agya de maharaj aur meri batha ko dhyan de

Demon king sochne laga draco ki bato ko aur usko draco ki bate jach gai

Demon king - hmm draco ne sahi kaha mujh yahi karna chaiye

Par muskil ye thi ki uske pure grh mae yesa koi nahi tha jo ek beautiful ladki ho. Tabhi usko kuch yaad aa gaya aur wo turant utha aur apne gupat kamre mae gaya ( note - is kamre mae sirf demon king ja sakta tha aur koi nahi ? )

Waha usne ek kamal ( lots) full ( flower ) ko utha liya

( Note - to ab ap sab soch rahe honge ki is flower ka wo kya karga aur nahi soch rahe ho to scho? To ye flower demon king ko fairies queen ne diya tha ( iska intro update 3 main milega adha ? ) is flower main ye power thi ki iske istmal se demon king ek sundar ladki bana sakta jo uski beti hogi ( yahi shart rakhi thi fairies queen ne )

To demon king ne us flower mae apni kuch khun ( blood ) ki bundo ko dala aur sahth hi apni kali aur lal urja jo roshani ke roop main thi

Aur kuch hi palo mae uske samne ek bahut hi khubsurat ladki aa gai jo yesi dhikti hai



Ladki apna sar juka kar - mera kis kaam ke liye nirman hua hai pitaji

Demon king age bada aur uske Sir par hath rakh diya jiske karan usko kya karna hai aur kese karna hai iska gyaan mil gaya

Demon king - jaoo meri bacchi aur kahatm kar do mere dusmano ko jaao

Ladki - pita ji tik hai par mera koi naam bhi rakh dijiye

Demon king - jarur meri bacchi jarur tumhara naam hoga death queen

Death queen - sukriya pita ji ,

Aur wo chali gai ab demon king muskurakar

Demon king - mene apni chal chal di ab tumhari bari lord king ha ha ha ha





Death queen

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