Fantasy ? Raavan ? ( Ek Naam Ya Ek Razz )

[Rohit1988]

Update 3

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Ladki - pita ji tik hai par mera koi naam bhi rakh dijiye

Demon king - jarur meri bacchi jarur tumhara naam hoga death queen

Death queen - sukriya pita ji ,

Aur wo chali gai ab demon king muskurakar

Demon king - mene apni chal chal di ab tumhari bari lord king ha ha ha ha


Ab age chalte hain ?

ab hum log chod dete hai demon king ko aur chalte hain grh 2 jaha lord ka rajya tha

to toda lord ke mahal ke bare main jaan lete hai ?

to lord bahut takatwar the to jahir si baat hai uska mahal bhi uski anusar hoga to lord ka mahal jo hai ek sunahri jil ( ) ke bich bana hua tha aur jiske charo aur ek sundar sa jangal tha

jese mene bola ki lord bahut takatwar hai to uski wo jil bhi magical thi matlab wo jil suraj ki roshani mae pani tha aur jab suraj ki roshni nahi hoti wo pura jil golden ho jata ( matlab sone ka pani) ? aur us jil aur lord ke mahal ki surkcha ek golden dragon karta ? tha jisko sirf lord aur uske kuch chuninda log kabu kar sakte the






lord ka mahal bhi raat mae jil ke jese hi golden ho jata tha aur ye mahal jil mae hamesa apni jagha badalta rahta tha ?

lord ka darbar jaha wo betha hua tha aur is darbar ki sabse badi baat ye thi ki is darbar mae rahne wale kisi bhi ko na to bhuk lagti na pyaas, na gussa na kamjori ya takawat








to ye huwa lord ke mahal ke bare mae ab chalte hai story par ?

( ap sabhi soch rahe honge mene sab ko paka diya aur yaha light off hai ? aur muje ? ? gussa aa raha hai fir bhi update likh raha hu ? review nahi mila tho kaat daalunga ? )

To jab apni death queen earth ki aur nikli to jese hi wo dark planet ki sima ( ladki ka naam nahi ?) se bahar nikli ( wo jo story main bolte hai na ki portal khola aur is grh paunch gaya lol yesa nahi hota portal tabhi kaam karta hai jab ek jagh se dusri jagha ki duru jada na ho aur yaha to dusre grh jana hai)

tab lord ko kisi anjan sakti ka ayesas ho gaya aur usne turan usko khojne ki kosis ki jab usko pata chala ki dark grh se koi sakti earth ki aur ja rahi hai to usne socha ki demon hoga par jub usne "death queen" ko dekha to soch ? mae pad gaya

apne darbar main wo kisi ka intezaar kar raha tha aur soch mae gum tha?

lord- hmm pahli baar yesa hua ki demon king ki chal ne mujhe chinta ( tension) main dal diya akhir wo kon thi

ki tabhi uske darbar main marco aya ( draco aur marco dono hi bhai hai par sohotele ( stepbrother) )

marco_ maharaja ki jay wo apne mujhe ki kaam ke liye yaad kiya maharaja

lord - betho marco fir main tumko yaha bulane ki wajah batata hu

marco apne bhai draco ki tarha hi apne apne maharaja ka wafadar tha aur hosyar ( intelligent) usne lord ke chahre ( face) ko dekh kar hi samaj gaya ki baat kuch gambhir hai ( Gotham gambhir nahi ?) fir wo apni jagha beth gaya fir lord ne chupi todte hue bola

lord - marco abhi abhi mujhe pata chala ki demon king ne ek nai (new) rachana ( invention) ki hai jo ki dharti ki aur ja rahi hai

marco- tik hai maharaja par apne bola ki ja rahi hai iska matlab ki

lord bich mae tokte hue ( sala aj kal to sab log bich mae apni naak gusad dete hai ?)

lord - ha tum sahi soch rahe ho is baar koi ladki hai dekho

aur lord apna hath agge karte hai jisse ek roshni marco ki ankho mae jati hai aur usko wo dikhta hai jo lord ne dekha tha

lord - yahi baat mujhe pareshaan kar rahi hai ki ye kon si sakti hai jo demon king ke pass hai kyunki uss sakti se white energy mahesu ho rahi hai

jaha lord ye sab bol rahe the wahi marco soch raha tha aur uske chahre par muskaan ☺ aa gai

marco- maharaja mujhe pata chal gaya demon king ki us power ke bare mein

lord- kya ?itni jaldi par kese wo sab chodo aur ye batao kon si sakti hai wo

marco- maharaj wo sakti apke bhi pass hai

lord- kya mere pass bhi hai par

marco- maharaja apne syaad dhyaan nahi diya ki us ladki ke charo aur hari ( green) roshni thi aur sath hi bahut si titliya thi aur dono chije sirf ek hi prajti ke pass hai








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lord - tumhara matlab hai fairies tik hai maan liya ki wo fairies hai par usme kali sakti kese hai
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marco- maharaja app bhul rahe hai ki jub apne aur demon king ne fairies queen ko ye wada kiya tha ( kya wada tha uske liye padte rahe story ?) tab fairies queen ne app dono ko wo magical kamal ka fool diya aur bola ki isse ap dono jub bhi chaho ek fairies bana sakte ho aur usme apni sakti daal sakte ho par wo fairies apki beti hogi aur mujhe ye wiswas hai ki demon king ne us sakti ka istemaal kiya hoga

ab lord ko puri baat samajh main aa gai aur usne bhi us fool ka use karke ek sakti ka nirman kiya aur usko angel of life ka naam dekar earth ki aur bej diya

Fantastic update bhai ji

 

[AAS]

Nice update

 

[king of darkness0411]

jo log mera update padte hai review jarur de na next update aj raat tak

 

[aka3829]

To dosto isse phale ki main is story ke update apko du is story ke baare mae jan lete hai aur ha yaha sirf nam ek saman hoga ( is story mae kisi bhi gods ya devo ke nam ka upayog nahi hoga unki jagha ek kalpanik nam aur character ka upyog hoga)

story concept - ye story ek fantasy, magical, adventure, action, suspense thriller and blood se bhari hogi


( note - is story ka kisi bhi religions ko hart nahi karega isme kisi bhi tarah se ramayan ke kisi bhi character ke nam upyoug nahi hoga)

Raavan jab bhi hum is naam ko sunte hai to hame ramayan ke sabse khunkar rakchas aur asuro ke raja ki yaad ati ek khunkar, gamandi, dust aur papi par uske kuch ache chije bhi jo ki apko pata hogi aur nahi to mae apko bata deta hu
Ek prakand Pandit, ek itna Gyani ki uska gayan hum jese 10 sir( dimag) mae bhi na sama paye, bagwan mahadev ke mahan bhakto mae se ek, jisne apni Bhakti aur tapsya ke bal par itni adhik shakti arjit kr li ko ek ajit raja ban gaya
Par kahte hai na zada sakti ghamnd ka karan banti hai aur ghamnd vinash ka karan banta hai aur yahi gamand Raavan aur uske puri jati ko le duba

( note - to dosto mene jo upar likha hai us par dhyan jarur dena Kyuki is story ka hero ya villian ki adat usi ke jese hogi)


YY mera purani story king of death hi hai bus suruwat ke update alag honge

Congratulations 4 new story. Lekin ise pura jarur karna mere bhai.

 

[aka3829]

update 1


To chaliye suru karte hai jese ki lagbhag har fantasy story mae hota hai universe ka nirman kese hua to yaha bhi wese hi hoga

To hum rahte hai earth par aur hamre earth ke alawa 8 aur grh hai aur hamara sun ( Suraj)

To aj se na jane kitno Samy pehle ( kya pata hamre universe ka nirman kis time hua hoga) jab kuch nahi bhi nahi tha us wakt sirf ek bahut hi chamkili urja thi ( isme har rang mile hue the)
Aur urja mae ek wisfot ( blast) hua aur wo urja na jane kitne hi bhago mae bat gaya par iske par ek pramuk urja pind ( jo ek ande jesa tha) iske 3 tukdo hye jinme jivan hua matlab jinhone apna rup liya
Magar usme bahut samya tha aur is samya sirf us paramuk urja aur unke hi jese urja ne rup liya jisko hum parampita ke nan se janege wo bilkul hi ek safed aur golden colour ki unki skin thi jo chamak rahi thi aur chamkile ball bhi aur unke saath unhi ke jese ek stri bhi bani jinko rani maa bolenge un dono ki ankhe band thi kuch samya bad unki chetna ka vikas hua aur unhone apni ankhe koli aur sabhi aur dekhne lage aur sochne loge ki - hame kisne banaya hai aur kis liye tabhi us urja se awaj aai

Urja- tumko mene janam diya hai baccho ek tarha se tum meri hi santan ho

Dono ne urja ko dekha aur juk gae

Urja- utho baccho aur jo bhi sawal hai tum dono ke man man mae bolo Aur haa tum dono pati patni ho

Parmpita- main jan gaya ki app ne hame banaya hai par kyu aur humko kya karna hoga

Urja- ab is universe ki jimedari tumko utani hogi aur ha ek baat dhyan rahe tum dono ke andar meri saktiya hai

Parmpita- tik hai magar muje uske liye kya karna hoga

Urja- tumko sirf intjar karna hoga in do urja ko dekh rahe ho

Paempita ke samne 2 urja ke gole the ek jo safed tha par puri tarha se nahi usme kuch kali roshni bhi thi jabhi dusre mae kali aur lal roshni jada thi

Urja- in dono se 2 jivan ka nirman hoga ek jisko tumhe lord king nam dena hoga aur dusre ko demon king ye dono hi is Universe mae achi aur buri sakti ke malik honge

Parampita - ji tik par duniya ke liye kya- kya lagega

Tab us urja ke anginat tukde the usnese bahut si galaxy ka nirmn hua aur sath hi unke andar taro, grh aur bhi bahut kuch par us pramuk urja se ek 7 rango ( 7 Rambo) ki roshni nikli aur us roshni ne rup lena suru kiya aur ek bahut hi sundar stri mae badal gai

Parampita- ye kon hai

Urja- ye hai prkriti ( nature) hai ye tumhari madad karegi is duniya ko chalne mae ye is puri duniya mae rahegi kisi na kisi rup mae

Aur fir wo nature kai alag alag urja se har ek grh mae chali gai

Parampita- tik hai par ab jivan ka nirman

Fir us urja ne apne andar se anginat chote chote roshni ( atma) jo ki alag alag jiv bane

Urja - ab jo main bol raha dhyan se suno ab in dono urja se jinka nirman hoga unki mili juli adat se ( achi- buri) se insano ki rachna karna aur mujhe ek vachan ( promise) do ki tum inko kabhi pata lagne nahi doge ki tumhare upar bhi koi hai inke liye sirf tum hi inke janamdata ho jawoo aur devo ka nirman karo jo in 5 tatwo ( element) par apna control kare

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In sab ke bad wo urja gaayab ho gya aur parampita aur unki patni ke liye us urja ne mahal ka nirman kiya

Samya apni raftar se chalta gaya aur earth par anyek ( deferent) prakar ke jivan bane aur khatam hua

Aur is bich demon king aur lord king ne parampita aur apni soch mila kar insano ki rachna ki aur un sabhi mae jivn us pramuk urja ( atma) se aai

Aur sun ko chod sabhi 8 grh mae jivan ki rachna hui

Par samya ne apna khel khela aur demon, lord ke bich dusmani badi ( ye dusmani kese hua isliye apko intjar karna hoga iska razz bahut bad open hoga)

To ab Chalate hain sirf 4 grh ke introduction par

1 Tha lighting grh - iska yesa nam is liye pada Kyuki yaha par Phoenix's ka Raz tha
( phoenix - ek yesa jiv jiska asli rup ek chil ki tarah hota hai aur iske pankho ki jagah agg hoti hai phoenix ek tarah se immortal hote hai Kyuki ye fir se apni rakh se wapas jinda ho jate hai inki kai powers hoti hai joki apko story mae pata chalge)

2 Tha lord grh- yaha par lord unki family aur unki Vishal sena ka razz tha Kyuki lord bhi us urja se baane the unke pass bahut si powers thi inki powers aur inki family ke bare mae dhire dhire apko pata chalega


3- Tha dark grh- ya Razz tha demon king unki family aur sena ka inke bare mae bhi baad mae pata chalega


4- earth - yani hamara ghar jaha par kisi ka raj nahi tha balki yaha sabhi jiv jantu aur insaan apne hisab se ji rahe the

Par samya fir badla aur insaan ke andar buraiyo ko apnane lage aur khun, lut- pat rep, jese crime hone lage demon king ki soch se kuch insaan ne kali takto ki puja karna suru kiya
Wahi lord king ki soch se achi takto ki bhi puja hui ( note yaha gods ki puja ka jikr nahi kiya ja raha hai)

Demon king aur lord dono hi duniya par raj karna chahte the par parampita unko rok diya

Samya badta gaya aur lord demon king ki powers bhi badti gai aur insano ka Lalach bhi aur aa gaya 21 century matlab science ka yug ab sab kuch badal chuka tha insaan ne ek dusre se age hone ki hod mae yese yese vinashak weapon ka nirman kar liya jinke upyog se sab kuch barbad ho sakta tha

Bahut achha update diya he. To yaha se suruat hoti he in graho aur lord evam demon king ki. Earth par 21vi sadi bhi suru ho gayi. Good

 

[aka3829]

Update 2

Demon king aur lord dono hi duniya par raj karna chahte the par parampita unko rok diya

Samya badta gaya aur lord demon king ki powers bhi badti gai aur insano ka Lalach bhi aur aa gaya 21 century matlab science ka yug ab sab kuch badal chuka tha insaan ne ek dusre se age hone ki hod mae yese yese vinashak weapon ka nirman kar liya jinke upyog se sab kuch barbad ho sakta tha


Ab age chalte hai

Ab demon king bahut takat war ho chuka tha aur chalak bhi aur wo kuch soch raha tha

Demon king - hmm lord ne bahut si power jama kar li hai ab mujhe kuch yesa karna hoga ki lord aur uski ko sena ( angel) kaap uthe par kya

Kuch der sochna ke baad unko apne sabse budiman (mind) salahkar ko bula liya

Introduce- draco ? -
Wese to demon king ke pass mantri ki kami nahi thi par unsab mae draco sabse jyada budiman tha

Draco- maharaj ki jay ho muje yaha bulane ki wajah maharaj

Demon king - awoo draco betho

Draco apni jagha par beth jata hai

? demon king - draco tumko pata hi hai ki kya ho raha lord apni sakti badha raha

Draco- ji maharaj muje pata hai

Demon king - isliye maine tumko yaad kiya draco tumne hamesa muje ek sahi rasta bataya hai

( Note - dosto mera demon king ek bahut hi kunkhar raja hai par jaha jarurat ho wo apne logo se madad jarur leta hai )

Draco - sukriya maharaj apne meri itni tarif ki uske liye ( fir kuch de ? chup rahne ke baad ) maharaj ab samya aa gaya ki apko ek yesi power ka nirman ( invasion ) karna hoga jo ap ki tarah hi kun kar ho aur saktisali bhi par

Demon king uske par par usko dhyan se dekhne lage

Draco - wo ek khubsurat ladki ? ( sala tarki? ) honi chahiye ?

Demon king - kunkar aur chalak to tik hai par ladki kyu

Draco - maharaj aj tak apne jitni ko banya hai sabhi badsurat ? the aur ? unko dekh kar hi angel ko pata chal jata ki ye apki tarf se hai isliye ab hamko ek bala ki ? sundar ladki jisko dekh hi lalach aa jay yesa banana hoga aur isko hum earth par bejenge

Draco - ab mujh agya de maharaj aur meri batha ko dhyan de

Demon king sochne laga draco ki bato ko aur usko draco ki bate jach gai

Demon king - hmm draco ne sahi kaha mujh yahi karna chaiye

Par muskil ye thi ki uske pure grh mae yesa koi nahi tha jo ek beautiful ladki ho. Tabhi usko kuch yaad aa gaya aur wo turant utha aur apne gupat kamre mae gaya ( note - is kamre mae sirf demon king ja sakta tha aur koi nahi ? )

Waha usne ek kamal ( lots) full ( flower ) ko utha liya

( Note - to ab ap sab soch rahe honge ki is flower ka wo kya karga aur nahi soch rahe ho to scho? To ye flower demon king ko fairies queen ne diya tha ( iska intro update 3 main milega adha ? ) is flower main ye power thi ki iske istmal se demon king ek sundar ladki bana sakta jo uski beti hogi ( yahi shart rakhi thi fairies queen ne )

To demon king ne us flower mae apni kuch khun ( blood ) ki bundo ko dala aur sahth hi apni kali aur lal urja jo roshani ke roop main thi

Aur kuch hi palo mae uske samne ek bahut hi khubsurat ladki aa gai jo yesi dhikti hai



Ladki apna sar juka kar - mera kis kaam ke liye nirman hua hai pitaji

Demon king age bada aur uske Sir par hath rakh diya jiske karan usko kya karna hai aur kese karna hai iska gyaan mil gaya

Demon king - jaoo meri bacchi aur kahatm kar do mere dusmano ko jaao

Ladki - pita ji tik hai par mera koi naam bhi rakh dijiye

Demon king - jarur meri bacchi jarur tumhara naam hoga death queen

Death queen - sukriya pita ji ,

Aur wo chali gai ab demon king muskurakar

Demon king - mene apni chal chal di ab tumhari bari lord king ha ha ha ha





Death queen

Hmm bahut achha update. Fairy queen ka raz nahi khola. Draco ki jagah doremon rakh lete wo jyada tharki he. Demon king ki beti queen of death khubsurat he aur khunkhar bhi. Lagta he ise kisi lord ke bete se pyaar ho jayega. Aur inka beta hi is kahani ka hero hoga. Aur usame lord king aur demon king dono ki powers hongi. Ab ye dekhna he ki wo kya banta he lord ki tarah ya fir demon ki tarah.

 

[aka3829]

Update 3

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Ladki - pita ji tik hai par mera koi naam bhi rakh dijiye

Demon king - jarur meri bacchi jarur tumhara naam hoga death queen

Death queen - sukriya pita ji ,

Aur wo chali gai ab demon king muskurakar

Demon king - mene apni chal chal di ab tumhari bari lord king ha ha ha ha


Ab age chalte hain ?

ab hum log chod dete hai demon king ko aur chalte hain grh 2 jaha lord ka rajya tha

to toda lord ke mahal ke bare main jaan lete hai ?

to lord bahut takatwar the to jahir si baat hai uska mahal bhi uski anusar hoga to lord ka mahal jo hai ek sunahri jil ( ) ke bich bana hua tha aur jiske charo aur ek sundar sa jangal tha

jese mene bola ki lord bahut takatwar hai to uski wo jil bhi magical thi matlab wo jil suraj ki roshani mae pani tha aur jab suraj ki roshni nahi hoti wo pura jil golden ho jata ( matlab sone ka pani) ? aur us jil aur lord ke mahal ki surkcha ek golden dragon karta ? tha jisko sirf lord aur uske kuch chuninda log kabu kar sakte the






lord ka mahal bhi raat mae jil ke jese hi golden ho jata tha aur ye mahal jil mae hamesa apni jagha badalta rahta tha ?

lord ka darbar jaha wo betha hua tha aur is darbar ki sabse badi baat ye thi ki is darbar mae rahne wale kisi bhi ko na to bhuk lagti na pyaas, na gussa na kamjori ya takawat








to ye huwa lord ke mahal ke bare mae ab chalte hai story par ?

( ap sabhi soch rahe honge mene sab ko paka diya aur yaha light off hai ? aur muje ? ? gussa aa raha hai fir bhi update likh raha hu ? review nahi mila tho kaat daalunga ? )

To jab apni death queen earth ki aur nikli to jese hi wo dark planet ki sima ( ladki ka naam nahi ?) se bahar nikli ( wo jo story main bolte hai na ki portal khola aur is grh paunch gaya lol yesa nahi hota portal tabhi kaam karta hai jab ek jagh se dusri jagha ki duru jada na ho aur yaha to dusre grh jana hai)

tab lord ko kisi anjan sakti ka ayesas ho gaya aur usne turan usko khojne ki kosis ki jab usko pata chala ki dark grh se koi sakti earth ki aur ja rahi hai to usne socha ki demon hoga par jub usne "death queen" ko dekha to soch ? mae pad gaya

apne darbar main wo kisi ka intezaar kar raha tha aur soch mae gum tha?

lord- hmm pahli baar yesa hua ki demon king ki chal ne mujhe chinta ( tension) main dal diya akhir wo kon thi

ki tabhi uske darbar main marco aya ( draco aur marco dono hi bhai hai par sohotele ( stepbrother) )

marco_ maharaja ki jay wo apne mujhe ki kaam ke liye yaad kiya maharaja

lord - betho marco fir main tumko yaha bulane ki wajah batata hu

marco apne bhai draco ki tarha hi apne apne maharaja ka wafadar tha aur hosyar ( intelligent) usne lord ke chahre ( face) ko dekh kar hi samaj gaya ki baat kuch gambhir hai ( Gotham gambhir nahi ?) fir wo apni jagha beth gaya fir lord ne chupi todte hue bola

lord - marco abhi abhi mujhe pata chala ki demon king ne ek nai (new) rachana ( invention) ki hai jo ki dharti ki aur ja rahi hai

marco- tik hai maharaja par apne bola ki ja rahi hai iska matlab ki

lord bich mae tokte hue ( sala aj kal to sab log bich mae apni naak gusad dete hai ?)

lord - ha tum sahi soch rahe ho is baar koi ladki hai dekho

aur lord apna hath agge karte hai jisse ek roshni marco ki ankho mae jati hai aur usko wo dikhta hai jo lord ne dekha tha

lord - yahi baat mujhe pareshaan kar rahi hai ki ye kon si sakti hai jo demon king ke pass hai kyunki uss sakti se white energy mahesu ho rahi hai

jaha lord ye sab bol rahe the wahi marco soch raha tha aur uske chahre par muskaan ☺ aa gai

marco- maharaja mujhe pata chal gaya demon king ki us power ke bare mein

lord- kya ?itni jaldi par kese wo sab chodo aur ye batao kon si sakti hai wo

marco- maharaj wo sakti apke bhi pass hai

lord- kya mere pass bhi hai par

marco- maharaja apne syaad dhyaan nahi diya ki us ladki ke charo aur hari ( green) roshni thi aur sath hi bahut si titliya thi aur dono chije sirf ek hi prajti ke pass hai








google do a coin flip


lord - tumhara matlab hai fairies tik hai maan liya ki wo fairies hai par usme kali sakti kese hai
.

marco- maharaja app bhul rahe hai ki jub apne aur demon king ne fairies queen ko ye wada kiya tha ( kya wada tha uske liye padte rahe story ?) tab fairies queen ne app dono ko wo magical kamal ka fool diya aur bola ki isse ap dono jub bhi chaho ek fairies bana sakte ho aur usme apni sakti daal sakte ho par wo fairies apki beti hogi aur mujhe ye wiswas hai ki demon king ne us sakti ka istemaal kiya hoga

ab lord ko puri baat samajh main aa gai aur usne bhi us fool ka use karke ek sakti ka nirman kiya aur usko angel of life ka naam dekar earth ki aur bej diya

To queen of death ke sath hi angel of life ka bhi nirmaan ho gya. Aur dono hi khubsurat kanya ban gayi. Ab ya to ye dono apas me takrayengi ya fir dono ek hi ladke se pyar karengi.

 

[Aryanv]

Awesome update

 

[king of darkness0411]

Update 4

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marco- maharaja app bhul rahe hai ki jub apne aur demon king ne fairies queen ko ye wada kiya tha ( kya wada tha uske liye padte rahe story ?) tab fairies queen ne app dono ko wo magical kamal ka fool diya aur bola ki isse ap dono jub bhi chaho ek fairies bana sakte ho aur usme apni sakti daal sakte ho par wo fairies apki beti hogi aur mujhe ye wiswas hai ki demon king ne us sakti ka istemaal kiya hoga

ab lord ko puri baat samajh main aa gai aur usne bhi us fool ka use karke ek sakti ka nirman kiya aur usko angel of life ka naam dekar earth ki aur bej diya


Ab age Chalate hain

jab bhi demon aur lord king kisi bhi tarah ki nai (new) rachana karte uske bare mae parampita ko pata chal jata Aur in sabhi chijo ko parampita apne Mahal mae beth kar dekh rahe the aur apni soch mae gum the ki in dono sakti ke karan kahi dharti ke logo ko koi nuksaan na ho kyunki ye dono sakti ( death queen, angel of life) dono hi lord aur demon king ki dusri kisi bhi rachana se kahi jada takatwar aur alag the aur kyunki
Unke bagal mae mae bethi rani ne unke chahre ko dekh kar hi jan liya ki wo kuch paresan hai

Rani- kya hua apko mae intne dino se dekh rahi hu app pareshan lag rahe hai kya wajha hai iski ?

Parampita- lord aur demon king dono hi samya ke shath shath saktisali ho chuke hai aur ye dono ab baki ke grh par raj karna chahte hai aur insaano par bhi

Rani- par inssan par kyu wo to sadarn hai ?

Parampita - shadarn hai par unki puja se lord aur demon dono ki sakti badti hai aur in par raj karna bhi aasan hai kyuki dosri grh ke wasi ki tarah inke pass koi sakti nahi hoti hai sayd pita ji ( urja) ne sahi kaha tha ki ane wale samya mae is pure brahmand ke liye khatra honge

Rani parampita ki batao ko sunrahi thi aur unko kuch yad aatha hai

Rani- par app unki kuch batho ko bhul rahe hai

Parampita rani ko yese dekhte hai ki puch rahe ?ho kon si baat

Rani- pitaji ne ye bhi bola tha jub yesa samya aayega wo kudh hamara marg darshan karnge

Tabhi waha par bahut hi urja aa gaya dono pati patni apne jagha se uth kar us urja ke samne juk gae ??
( ye urja unke pita hai jinse unka nirman hua update 1)

Dono ek saath - pranaam pitaji

Urja- uth jaao mere bachon

Dono khade ho gya

Parampita - pitaji apki ane ki wajah kyu kuch hone wala hai

Urja- jab tum dono ka nirman hua us samy mene Tum ko kuch bate kahi thi tumko yaad hai bete

Parampita - ji pita ji mujko un sabhi bato ka dhyan hai

Urja- to ab samy aa gaya hai

Rani- kya samy aa gaya hai pita ji

Urja- beti ab is duniya ko santulit kare ka samy aa gaya hai

Parampita - kis prakar ka santulan pitaji

Urja- bete tumse bhi ye baat nhi chupi hai ki ajj ke samy mae lord aur demon king dono ki sakti bad cuki hai aur dono hi apni sakti ke bal mae any nirdosh jivo ko apne adhin karne mae lage wo kai grh par apna kabja jama kar khun baha rahe hai

Parampita - ji pita ji par wonko roke kese main unko

Urja- nahi bete tum un dono ko kuch nhi bologe bas tumo earth ke charo aur in kavach ka nirman karna hoga joki ajse 21 salo bad khud ba khud khatam ho jaye ga

Parampita - kavach ka nirman to main kar dunga par 22 bad wo kudh nast ho jayega to iska faydha kya hogo pita ji

Urja- bete kuch yesi wajah hai ki tum demon aur lord ko kabu nahi kar sakte Kyuki tum tino ek hi pind se bane ho agar tum tino ki saktiya apas mae takra gai to tum tino ke sath ye puri duniya khatm ho jayengi Isliye tum ab shant ho jaao aur bas ab jo hoga usko dehko aur ek baat jis ka tum nirman karoge usme meri bhi urja milegi jiske karan in 22 salo mae earth par jo bhi hoga usko na tum dekh ya mahsus kar pawoge aur na hi demon aur lord aur jinko bhi lord aur demon king ne dharti par bejha hai ab unko kuch bhi yaad nahi rahega ki unko kisne aur kyu banya hai ya beja hai par ye baat demon aur lord ko pata nahi lagni chahiye tik hai

Parampita - par kyu pita ji

Urja- bete kuch kyu ka Jawab samy kudh deta hai isliye bas intjaar karo aur ek baat kuch yese bhi razz hai joki tumhe ( aur ap sabhi reader ko bhi) nahi Maalum hai isliye ab bas intjaar karo

Aur ye bol kar urja gaayab ho jati hai par apne piche chod jate hain kuch sawaal jo parampita aur rani ke Dimag mae ghum rahi thi par parampita ko apne pita ke Aadesh ka palan kiya aur earth ke charo aur kavach ka nirman kiya aur jese hi kavach bana demon aur lord dono ke apne gulam ya duto se sampark tut gaya

Demon king - ye kya hua mujhko Dharti se kuch mahesus kyu nahi ho raha hai ?

Wahi lord king

Lord king- ajj mujko dharti ke andar kuch dikh kyu nahi raha
?
Tabhi dono ke Mahal mae parampita ki Aawaj gunji

Parampita - lord, demon tum dono ko koi chinta nahi honi chahiye humne Dharti par kavach ka nirman kiya hai isliye aj se 21 salo tak tum dharti se na koi sampark hoga na hi dharti mae gaye hue tumhari thakte waapas aa sakenge
Aur awaaj band ho gaya

Aur is awaaj ke baad demon aur lord dono hi kuch soch mae gum ho gae ?
?

par yaha ek aur kham use urja ne kar diya urja ne un dono sakti ( death queen aur life queen) ko ek hi urja mae badal kal kisi ke garb mae bhej diya

( kiske yaha aur kyu soch and keep supporting me next update 9 October)

 

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Behad hi shandar or jabardast update

Thanks bhai for lovely comment update posted