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Fantasy ? Raavan ? ( Ek Naam Ya Ek Razz )

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Update 4

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marco- maharaja app bhul rahe hai ki jub apne aur demon king ne fairies queen ko ye wada kiya tha ( kya wada tha uske liye padte rahe story ?) tab fairies queen ne app dono ko wo magical kamal ka fool diya aur bola ki isse ap dono jub bhi chaho ek fairies bana sakte ho aur usme apni sakti daal sakte ho par wo fairies apki beti hogi aur mujhe ye wiswas hai ki demon king ne us sakti ka istemaal kiya hoga

ab lord ko puri baat samajh main aa gai aur usne bhi us fool ka use karke ek sakti ka nirman kiya aur usko angel of life ka naam dekar earth ki aur bej diya


Ab age Chalate hain

jab bhi demon aur lord king kisi bhi tarah ki nai (new) rachana karte uske bare mae parampita ko pata chal jata Aur in sabhi chijo ko parampita apne Mahal mae beth kar dekh rahe the aur apni soch mae gum the ki in dono sakti ke karan kahi dharti ke logo ko koi nuksaan na ho kyunki ye dono sakti ( death queen, angel of life) dono hi lord aur demon king ki dusri kisi bhi rachana se kahi jada takatwar aur alag the aur kyunki
Unke bagal mae mae bethi rani ne unke chahre ko dekh kar hi jan liya ki wo kuch paresan hai

Rani- kya hua apko mae intne dino se dekh rahi hu app pareshan lag rahe hai kya wajha hai iski ?

Parampita- lord aur demon king dono hi samya ke shath shath saktisali ho chuke hai aur ye dono ab baki ke grh par raj karna chahte hai aur insaano par bhi

Rani- par inssan par kyu wo to sadarn hai ?

Parampita - shadarn hai par unki puja se lord aur demon dono ki sakti badti hai aur in par raj karna bhi aasan hai kyuki dosri grh ke wasi ki tarah inke pass koi sakti nahi hoti hai sayd pita ji ( urja) ne sahi kaha tha ki ane wale samya mae is pure brahmand ke liye khatra honge

Rani parampita ki batao ko sunrahi thi aur unko kuch yad aatha hai

Rani- par app unki kuch batho ko bhul rahe hai

Parampita rani ko yese dekhte hai ki puch rahe ?ho kon si baat

Rani- pitaji ne ye bhi bola tha jub yesa samya aayega wo kudh hamara marg darshan karnge

Tabhi waha par bahut hi urja aa gaya dono pati patni apne jagha se uth kar us urja ke samne juk gae ??
( ye urja unke pita hai jinse unka nirman hua update 1)

Dono ek saath - pranaam pitaji

Urja- uth jaao mere bachon

Dono khade ho gya

Parampita - pitaji apki ane ki wajah kyu kuch hone wala hai

Urja- jab tum dono ka nirman hua us samy mene Tum ko kuch bate kahi thi tumko yaad hai bete

Parampita - ji pita ji mujko un sabhi bato ka dhyan hai

Urja- to ab samy aa gaya hai

Rani- kya samy aa gaya hai pita ji

Urja- beti ab is duniya ko santulit kare ka samy aa gaya hai

Parampita - kis prakar ka santulan pitaji

Urja- bete tumse bhi ye baat nhi chupi hai ki ajj ke samy mae lord aur demon king dono ki sakti bad cuki hai aur dono hi apni sakti ke bal mae any nirdosh jivo ko apne adhin karne mae lage wo kai grh par apna kabja jama kar khun baha rahe hai

Parampita - ji pita ji par wonko roke kese main unko

Urja- nahi bete tum un dono ko kuch nhi bologe bas tumo earth ke charo aur in kavach ka nirman karna hoga joki ajse 21 salo bad khud ba khud khatam ho jaye ga

Parampita - kavach ka nirman to main kar dunga par 22 bad wo kudh nast ho jayega to iska faydha kya hogo pita ji

Urja- bete kuch yesi wajah hai ki tum demon aur lord ko kabu nahi kar sakte Kyuki tum tino ek hi pind se bane ho agar tum tino ki saktiya apas mae takra gai to tum tino ke sath ye puri duniya khatm ho jayengi Isliye tum ab shant ho jaao aur bas ab jo hoga usko dehko aur ek baat jis ka tum nirman karoge usme meri bhi urja milegi jiske karan in 22 salo mae earth par jo bhi hoga usko na tum dekh ya mahsus kar pawoge aur na hi demon aur lord aur jinko bhi lord aur demon king ne dharti par bejha hai ab unko kuch bhi yaad nahi rahega ki unko kisne aur kyu banya hai ya beja hai par ye baat demon aur lord ko pata nahi lagni chahiye tik hai

Parampita - par kyu pita ji

Urja- bete kuch kyu ka Jawab samy kudh deta hai isliye bas intjaar karo aur ek baat kuch yese bhi razz hai joki tumhe ( aur ap sabhi reader ko bhi) nahi Maalum hai isliye ab bas intjaar karo

Aur ye bol kar urja gaayab ho jati hai par apne piche chod jate hain kuch sawaal jo parampita aur rani ke Dimag mae ghum rahi thi par parampita ko apne pita ke Aadesh ka palan kiya aur earth ke charo aur kavach ka nirman kiya aur jese hi kavach bana demon aur lord dono ke apne gulam ya duto se sampark tut gaya

Demon king - ye kya hua mujhko Dharti se kuch mahesus kyu nahi ho raha hai ?

Wahi lord king

Lord king- ajj mujko dharti ke andar kuch dikh kyu nahi raha
?
Tabhi dono ke Mahal mae parampita ki Aawaj gunji

Parampita - lord, demon tum dono ko koi chinta nahi honi chahiye humne Dharti par kavach ka nirman kiya hai isliye aj se 21 salo tak tum dharti se na koi sampark hoga na hi dharti mae gaye hue tumhari thakte waapas aa sakenge
Aur awaaj band ho gaya

Aur is awaaj ke baad demon aur lord dono hi kuch soch mae gum ho gae ?
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par yaha ek aur kham use urja ne kar diya urja ne un dono sakti ( death queen aur life queen) ko ek hi urja mae badal kal kisi ke garb mae bhej diya

( kiske yaha aur kyu soch and keep supporting me next update 9 October)
Nice update bhai but slow
 

king of darkness0411

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Hmm bahut achha update. Fairy queen ka raz nahi khola. Draco ki jagah doremon rakh lete wo jyada tharki he. Demon king ki beti queen of death khubsurat he aur khunkhar bhi. Lagta he ise kisi lord ke bete se pyaar ho jayega. Aur inka beta hi is kahani ka hero hoga. Aur usame lord king aur demon king dono ki powers hongi. Ab ye dekhna he ki wo kya banta he lord ki tarah ya fir demon ki tarah.
Thanks for review bhai par is story aur death king ki story alag alag hai sirf
 
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To queen of death ke sath hi angel of life ka bhi nirmaan ho gya. Aur dono hi khubsurat kanya ban gayi. Ab ya to ye dono apas me takrayengi ya fir dono ek hi ladke se pyar karengi.
Thanks bro for lovely comment update posted
 
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