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Incest Raaz Nafrat Ka

Aap is Story ke baare me kya sochate he?

  • Good Story.

    Votes: 11 47.8%
  • Good Story but Incest Part jyada ho to Story aur Achhi ban Sakti he.

    Votes: 8 34.8%
  • Above Average Story.

    Votes: 3 13.0%
  • Average Story.

    Votes: 1 4.3%
  • Boring Story.

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Bakwas Story. Biklul bhi Maja nahi aaya.

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Total voters
    23
  • Poll closed .

DEXSTER

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Dear Bro bura naa manay lakin lugta hay kay koi cycle saa chulgaya hay kay hero kee insult kee jay chalay kahani kaa aak tareqa hay but bro aak cheez kaa khyal rukhay hero apni bahno ka salook khamosi say burdast kurta hay woo aak elahda baat hay lakin juu aap nay dekhaya kay uss kee sis kay boyfriends uss kee insult kur rahay hay woo koi bhi burdast nahi kursukta aak khudar insan kisi bahirwalay kaa ek lufz iysa burdast nahi kur sukta is cheez kaa khyal rukhay or aak hud huny caheya aap nay tuu pahlay 2 update main hero koo belkul hee wimp sisy type dekhaya hay yea bohut hee ajeeb hay hero kisi wajah say ager apni bahno kee baat sun raha hay kuch bol nahi raha tuu is ka mutlab yea nahi kay agla kuch bhi kur lay aak limit hoty hay khamosi kee canteen wala juu scene dekhaya chalo chair say gernay pay khamosi thee lakin us ke sis kay BF bakwas kuray or woo sunay woo kun us kay maa baap koo gali dee jaa rahi hay or woo sun raha hay please bhai hero kay kerdar kaa bulatkar tuu naa karo yaar please

Me aapka Point samaj gya aur Apka Point sahi he aap ke Point of Views as Reader se.
Abhi aap ne 2 Updates padhke yahi socha, ki Aryan ese kese Apni Insult koi bhi kare bardast kar raha he, Aryan to bikul weak banda he.
Me bhi as Reader kisi story me esa Padhta to yahi sochta, kyuki kafi Readers koi Story padhte he to Main character me khud ko imagine karte he, wo uske sath jese link sa ho jate he. Aur jahir si bat he koi bhi chup nahi rahega agar uski insult koi ese Insult kare Unless Uske Pass kuch apne Reasons ho.
So May be yahi baat he ki abhi aap ko Story me esa kyu he, uske reasons kya he, wo pata nahi he, To Aryan ka character weak laga aapko. Par sirf 2 hi updates hue he abhi to.
Jese jese aage ke Updates aayege, I'm sure fir aapki ye sikayat dur ho jayegi. :smile:
 
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mass8787

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Me aapka Point samaj gya aur Apka Point sahi he aap ke Point of Views as Reader se.
Abhi aap ne 2 Updates padhke yahi socha, ki Aryan ese kese Apni Insult koi bhi kare bardast kar raha he, Aryan to bikul weak banda he.
Me bhi as Reader kisi story me esa Padhta to yahi sochta, kyuki kafi Readers koi Story padhte he to Main character me khud ko imagine karte he, wo uske sath jese link sa ho jate he. Aur jahir si bat he koi bhi chup nahi rahega agar uski insult koi ese Insult kare Unless Uske Pass kuch apne Reasons ho.
So May be yahi baat he ki abhi aap ko Story me esa kyu he, uske reasons kya he, wo pata nahi he, To Aryan ka character weak laga aapko. Par sirf 2 hi updates hue he abhi to.
Jese jese aage ke Updates aayege, I'm sure fir aapki ye sikayat dur ho jayegi. :smile:



You are right shayad main belawajah hee bohut juldi bool gaya any way please keep going
 

DEXSTER

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Update 3

Aryan Canteen se apne ankho me ansoo liye fir apne class ki or chal deta he. Uska pet to wo logo ke taunts se bad bhar chukka tha.

Thode bad wo apne class room me pahonch jata he. Classroom pura khali tha kyuki abhi lunch break jo tha.

Wo ek bench pe beth jata he aur apna sir bench pe rakh deta he aur sochne lagta he,
" Ye jo kuch bhi ho raha he wo akhir kab khatm hoga? Aur kab tak ye sab sehna padega? Kya sab ko sach bata du? Nahi, Nahi. Mana ke ye muskil he par agar sach bata diya to Sab aur bigad sakta he. "

Thode der wo ese hi khyalo me khoya raha.
Fir thodi chahal pahal hui tab uski ankhe khuli aur tab usne realise kiya ke uski ankh lag gai thi.
Usne time dekha tha to bas 15 min bache the lecture shuru hone me.
Fir to wo 15 min bhi bit gye. Professor lecturer lene bhi aa gye aur lecture shuru ho gya, Aryan ne dekha ke Janvi aur uski team ne ye lecture bhi bunk Kiya tha.
Uske bad me lecture me bhi wo log nahi aaye.
Sab lectures attend karne ke bad Aryan bungalow jane nikal jata he aur Thode der me wo bungalow pahonch jata he.
Aryan dekhta he ke bungalow pe abhi Sirf Kavya Aur Jyotika hi the. Joki kitchen me kam kar rahe the. Wo sidha room me fresh hone chala jata he, jha wo fir se wahi soch me kho jata he.
Sab soch ke fir se uski ankhe nam ho jati he.
Thode der tak fir se ese hi wo khyalo me khoya raha. Par thodi der bad wo un khyalo se bahar aya aur khud ko sambhala aur Fresh hone chala gya.
Fresh hoke aur change karke Aryan Niche hall ki or chal diya.
Hall me aake Aryan ne dekha ki Anmol, Kavya aur Jyotika bethe hue the.
Anmol ne Aryan ko Niche ate hue dekha, to usne Aryan se pucha,
Anmol : Oh, Aryan kese ho beta?

Aryan : Me thik hu Dad.
Aryan ab tak sabke pass aake beth gya tha.

Kavya : Betu, Bhukh lagi he na? Ruko me tumhare liye Nasta lati hu.
Aur Kavya wha se nasta lene chali jati he.

Aryan whi soch ne lagta he , " Pata nahi Mom ko kese pata chal jata he ke muje bhulh lagi he. Mom meri kitni Care rakhati he. "

Jyotika : To study kesi chal rahi he?
Jyotika ki awaj sunke Aryan apne soch se bahar aaya. Fir usne Jyotika ke taraf dekh ke answer diya,

Aryan : Badhiya.

Jyotika: Good Beta. Ese hi achhe se padho aur khub tarraki karo.

Tabhi Kavya wha nasta leke aa jati he.
Kavya : Chlo beta. Nasta karlo ab. Chlo me tumhe apne hatho se khilati hu, Aur pata he Aryan, Naste me jo he use dekh ke na tum khush ho jaoge.

Aryan : Achha , Esa kya he Naste me Mom?

Kavya : Jab khilau tab khud hi dekh lena.

Utna bolke wo naste ki plate leke aryan ke pass aa ke beth jati he.
Aryan dekhta he to uski favorite, Sandwich thi Naste me.
Usko apne mom ke hath sab khana pasand tha. Par Kavya ke hath ki sandwich use bhot pasand thi.

Fir Kavya apne hath se use sandwich khilane lagti he.
Dhire dhire Do sandwich Aryan Khatam karta he.
Lekin tab use realise hua ke Kavya ki ankhe thodi nam thi, wo udas lag rahi thi.

Aryan : Mom, kya hua?

Kavya: K.. Kya? Muje kya hua he? Me to thik hu.
Itna bolke Kavya juthi muskan apne chere pe la deti he. Jise Aryan samaj hi jata he ke wo muskan juthi he.

Aryan : Mom, ab mujse to juth mat bolo. Ye juthi muskan kyu Mom? Mujse koi galti hui he kya?

Par ye sunte Kavya ki ankho me anshu aa jate he.
Wo thoda siskne lagti he.

Kavya : Beta, tumhe pata he tumhe, tum sab bachho ko ese dekhke kitna dard hota he muje? Akhir kab tak esa chalega hah?

Aryan : Mom, aap sab meri strength ho. Ab aap log ese rone lage to socho me kaha jaunga? Mera kya hoga?

Jyotika: Kavya? Aryan bilkul sahi bol raha he. Plz sambhalo aapne aap ko.

Anmol: Haan Kavya. Dukh muje bhi he ke me apne bachho ko is halat me dekh raha hu.

Kavya : Ye baat hum sab khud badha rahe he. Uske jimmedar hum sab hi he.

Aryan : Mom, Usme aap sabki kya Galti?

Kavya : Kyuki hum sabhi bhi to tumhara sath de rahe he tumhari Jid me.

Jyotika : Kavya, Dekho sab waqt pe chhod do. Dekhan sab thik ho jayega.

Aryan : Haan Mom. Plz aap chup ho jao. Dekhna waqt ke sath sab thik ho jayega. Ruko, Me aapko pani pilata hu.

Aur Phir Aryan, Kavya ko pani pilata he.

Pani pike Kavya, Aryan ko kas ke hug kar leti he.

Aryan apne man me soch raha tha, " I know Mom and Dad, App dono bhot dukhi he, abhi ke halat se. Par jald hi me sab sahi kar dunga. Fir hummari family pahele jese Ho jayegi. "
 
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