Adultery Raj-- hero of the family

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Upcoming...Update 230....
Villian....Death halo on Monday night between 10 to 11pm

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Nice update

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Superb update

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Bawal update, shocking update tha !!
Jabardast scenes create kiye the ju ne bhai gajab.

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Jabardast update bhai

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Bohot hi maze ka or pyaar bhara update tha Sandeep singh nirwan bhai

Thank you lion heart bro ....pata h ek logic h main jis jis ka nam story mai add kiya wo shaks achanak se bahut jayda busy ho gaya ...AAG xabhi sanki valentine rider...lionheart ....

is update m kaafi kuch huwa...
action, mystery, masti, mazaak, pyaar, ghussaa...

Ha ....mix up

ab dekhte hain k woh unknown shakhs kon hai jisne Raj k peeche laga diya hais sabko...

Eo unknown ayega samne ....

zaroor Raj k past se hi koi hai jo kabhi uske kareeb tha...

Bilkul ismai koyi sak nahi h

shayad koi school wala..
ya shayad uska chaacha bhi ho sakta hai...jisse Raj se itni nafrat hai k usse maarne k liye Killer Organisation jaise logon se bhi haath mila sakta hai..

Bilkul chacha mousi ....javed ya ravi ki family se ....
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Sandeep Bhai abhi story aise hi read ker rha tha to ek sawal hai .......
Raj ka dusman jo Mandawa me tha thakur Hari Singh wo bhi sr victor ke liye kaam kerta tha , sr victor ne khud Hari Singh ko lagaya tha Sahdev ke pariwar walon ke liye ki unke(Sahdev) pariwar me koi Zinda to nhi bacha hai , kya yahi baat sr victor death halo ko btaya hoga ?
Kyuki sr victor ko Shak tha ki kahi Sahdev singh ke pariwar se koi Zinda to nhi bacha hai kyuki usko bhi to pta hoga ki haveli me sab jal Gaye the but usko Shak tha isliye usne Hari Singh lagaya tha jasoosi kerne ke liye .

Agar sr victor ne death halo ko btaya hoga to phir death halo kya pta Mandawa aa Jaye khojte khojte ?

Nahi unhe doubt h par yakin nahi unhe lagta h ye koyi dusri nirwaan family h kyoki school ya kanhi bhi raj ke mother father ka naam documents mai nahi h....par ye point ghatsk ho sakta h bahut.....

Mind blowing update

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A big war coming soon
is war k baad bohat se raz khul jain gy

Ha bahut sare nahi toh khass kuch toh raj khilega atit ka ....

death halo raj aur sunil dono k peechy hai
nirwana ko b dhodh raha hai

Ha kyoki raj ko markar jinhone uske bhai ko mara dhukh pahuchna chahta h plus nirwana se juda h raj

killer orgnization ka raaz b khuly ga

sher sing b mil gya sath

Sher singh sher dil....

poonam ka pyar
richa ki chahat

Sonali ka gusa....rajni ki flirting ....

sab kuch abhi baqi hai
waiting for next

Ha rajni kuch jaldi mai h ....

Storm......
Laate h stormy mai bhi

Nice update bro

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[Sandeep singh nirwan]

ek dum dhamakedar update

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Nice update Bhai. Bhai ab iss death hallow ka matter close kar do. Aur iss tarah close karo k underworld bhi tharra uthe.

Countdown suru h facts khul rahe h sab incidents. Sath judh jayenge aur phir war suru...

Mast update bhai

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Woohoo fantastic update boss jesaa jesaa story agaaa jayaa rayi hai excitement or Hoti jayaa rayi hai ...

Thank you dil bro...abhi toh bomb fatne wala h....

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Congratulations for 1800 pages

Thank you sweetkaran bro

Nice update

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Fabulous update

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Bohot hi umdha update Sandeep bhai

Thank you tiger bro...

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Wah... kya update tha... to dono traf se sainay saj gayi hain... yudh ka shankhnaad baj chuka hai...

Countdown bhi suru ho gaya h ...

Pehle part me Richa aur Raj ka interaction accha raha, akhir Richa ne kuch kadwahat to kam ker hi di hai... Koi jab kisi ko kayamat se bhi jyada chaahe, to dil dobara jodne me time to lagega hi...

Actual richa ka charecter agai bahut strong hone wala h ....richa he is story ka wo part h jo raj ki life change karegi...

Akhir Death Halo Raj ke friends ke circle ke karib pahunch chuka hai... shayad family ke karib bhi pahunch jaaye... Sunil akela kaise kab tak use rok payega... Udhar Sonali bhi tadap rahi hai...

Sunil ka charecter bhi abhi pura bahar nahi aya h ....phase 3 mai uska role bhi bahut uthne wala h ...sona toh sona h meri favourite ....

Kundan ka character padh ker maza aa gaya... maut ke saamne bhi hanste huye usko gale laga liya... Jis tarah se usne Sanki ko bataya ki weh Nirwan ke baare me nahi jaanta... Sanki ek dam samajh gaya ki weh sach bol raha hai...

Kundan isliye hansa kyoki ek taraf sanki kahta h ki wo janta h nirwana kanha h....aur ek taraf raj ko dhundh raha h...

Ab jaldi hi Raj ko bhi Killer Organisation ke baare me lead milni chahiye... Anu se kya rahasye khulne wala hai... besabri se intazar rahega...

Ha next update mai kuch clue milne wale h tabhi story mai twist ayega ...wo bhi agle update mai boom ho chuka h
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Dhamekedaar update tha Bhai . Aakhir deathhalo apna daav khelna shuru kar diya. Ab maza aayega Nirwana kaise badla leta hai dekhenge aanewaale updates mein

Death halo ke daanv abhi aur jabardast ane wale h mahabharat .....ramayan...ki tarah he in sab mai yudh hone wala h ....
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per Bhai ye death halo ka master bhi to kisi ke hath ki kathputli hai is hisaab se to main villain wahi hua kyuki death halo ke master ne bhi to kaha hai ki Sahdev singh ke pariwar walon ko agar Mai nhi maar paya to wo khud marenge.(jiske hath ki kathputli khud death halo ka master hai )

Nahi cutputli toh nahi kah sakte but ha juda huvatoh kisi se ....ha isai jarur saaf h ki dhusma jo sabse upar h wo aya nahi h ....aur ussi jaise matlb he na ho raj ki family se....

Bhai ye galat baat hai update ka timing afternoon se night ho gya

Thoda busy ho jata hu ya padhne ki wajah se upar niche ho jati h timing...

Sandeep Bhai sonali ko kya fax aaya hoga ? Kya usko Mumbai Jana hoga ?
Aur Mumbai commissioner ko 2 letter me kya aaya hoga jisse wo soch me pad gaye I think sonali aur shiwani ka transfer order hoga jo ab sayad Mumbai me hoga unka transfer .

Ye sab futre parts h but fax mai secret report bhi toh asakti h...

Zabardast fantastic update

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[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Wonderful update Bhai

Thank you

Update 175
Bahot zabardast shaandar update bhai
Raj ki halat dekhne wali thi college m bheegi Billi ban gaya tha bechara lekin Poonam n Raj ki halat samajh linor teeno waha se nikal gayi
Bua ki gaadi per attack ho gaya yamdoot n bahot achcha muqabla kia jr victor ki Sena se or Raj n aaker sari Sena ko yamlok pohcha dia zabardast
Ab dekhte h Richa ko kitna sunata h ya fir
Badhiya shaandar update

Isai ek baat sasf h ki yumdoot bahut capable h usne sahi waqt sahi decision liya h .....ladayi toh suru huvi h abhi toh sab bikhar jayega....Richa ka dekhna wala seen hoga ki wo kaise kya karti h...
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Update 176
Bahot zabardast shaandar update
Sonali ki sirf BAAT sunker us rapist ki jaban toote ki tarah bolne lagi sahi h

Sona sona h raj ka gusa us par utar diya soch raha hu raj ka kya hoga..

Richa ko tow Raj k maa baap k baare m bahot kuch pata h yaha tak naa ki family k baare m hi zaroor uske maa baap n bataya hoga

Right anirudh ne he sab kuch batays h

chalo Raj yeh jaanker or Richa kia ker Rahi h uske baare m jaanker Richa ki liye thodi hi sahi nafrat Kam tow huwi

Richa ne sahi waqt par sahi baat kahkar kuch kdwahat dur karli

Bechara woh reporter Kundan mara gaya
Anjana ko Sunil n bacha lia uski saheli n khaber di paisa kuch bhi Kara Sakta h

Ek pal ki bhi deri mai uska kidnap hona tay tha...ya marna tay tha

Ab Death halo ki paas Raj ki family ki poori jankari lag bhag aa gayi h
Dekhte h kia kerta h woh
Behtareen zabardast shaandar
Lajawab update bhai

Wo cards collects kar raha h phir asli daanv khelega....
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Koi baat ni yaar kal tak na kar dena

Khud padhte padhte editing karte time lag jata h....kya karu isliye der ho gayi

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update bro

 

[prem pujari]

Update 66 me hai

vaha par shak jataya gaya tha ki uska mama ho sakta hai

 

[Lonetiger]

Update 177—Obstrusion….

War……countdown……begins

19 ..updats too left …..



“ Raj Raj ruko bhi”

Raj —kya huva chudail ….

Anu — tummm…

Raj — bhadak kyo rahi h ….mazak kar raha hu …

Anu — wo main ye kah rahi thi ki….

Raj — are tu toh sharmane legi ….jaise hum …

Anu — chii chii kitne gande ho tum….

Raj-- lo main kaha se ganda hu…..subhe he naha ke aya hu …

Anu — tum chup hokar meri baat sunoge….phir sharmate huve kya hum ….aj raat dinner par chale ….

Raj — oh …..date par …..

Date ka naam sunte he anu sharmane lagi……” wo aj mera birthday h ”

Raj oh …very very happy birthday phir toh party banti h…

Raj ne birthday wish karte waqt anu ko hug kar liya aur isi pal …poonam kavita manisha jo college mai entry kar rahi thi unhone dekh liya ..aur unki feelings jaisi bhi thi par poonam ke chahre par muskaan barkarar thi ..jab ki do ke dimag ki gusai se seeti baj rahi thi….

Raj — ok tonight dinner at my home mere hatho se…

Anu — really tum cooking jante ho..

Raj - khake dekh lena phir yakin ho jayega

Dono baat karte huve apni class ki taraf jane lage..piche khadi manisha kavita poonam unhe jata dekhti rahi …

Manisha “ dekh rahi h cutie wanha madhu rinky …..aur yanha anu…… is ladke ke charo taraf hamesa ladkiya titli ki tarah mandrati rahti h …pata nahi aisa kya dikhta h ismai…

Kavita — ha diiii ….aur chudail ko dekho kaise chipak rahi h sabke samne he…..pata laga jald he bhai ki biwi banke mile humse…

Poonam khilkhilakar hans padi “ Tum dono bhi yaar itna bhi unhe pressure mai mat lao….manisha meri bahan tu he toh kahti wo ek emotional ladka h jo reletionship ki care karta h …aur cutie tune shweta se sab soona h na apne bhai ke bare mai fir bhi pareshan ho rahi h …raj ji jarur kisi wajah se uske pass h warna itna toh main bhi jaan gayii hu…unhe aisi ladkiya toh bilkul pasand nahi ayengi …..

Kavita — Di pyar main kya he kahu apko ap bahut bholi h is bare mai…. London mai subhe i love you toh raat ko pyar bistar mai ho jata tha ..aur aj ki indian high fi ladkiyo ka bhi koyi bharosa nahi h abhi i love you toh raat ko pyar bistar mai khatam hota h…

Manisha poonam hairani se kavita ko dekhne lagi jiski wajah se kavita ko samaj aya ki gusai mai wo kya kah gayi ….

Poonam manisha ko bhi jor se hansi agayiiii

Poonam — jayda mat soch cutie …chal ….class ka time ho gaya h….ab mood tikh kar kab tak tu aise he tikhi mirch bani rahegi sare ladke tuje he dekh rahe h….

Kavita — diiiiiii…itna kah usne muu fula liya poonam ko jor se hansi agayi aur usai apne se sata liya ……..



Mumbayi outer….

Xabhi gusai se ubal raha the —maine kitni baar kaha tha ki galti mat karna par nahi usai hero giri karni ….gadha abhi yanha hota toh more.. bana kar pure jungle mai nachta gadha kanhi ka…

AAG — ha ha ha tuje bhi pata h tu aisa kuch nahi karta …

Xabhi tedi nazar se AAG ko dekhne lage

AAG-tu wajah ache se janta h…phir bhi aise dekh raha h…..

Xabhi — vidya bhabhi …

AAG — toh phir ghatiya sa expression kyo diya …wo dekh killers organisation ke log…

Xabhi — marna nahi h unhe hume unka tikhna dhundhna h main chodunga nahi …us kutte ko ….

AAG-- tikh chal…. Jo tu kahe ab toh mood tikh kar

Xabhi — muje mat sikha…chal

Aur dono agai ki jagah scan karte huve unka picha karne lage…….



In call…

Tujhe pura yakin h…

Admi — ha bhai ….wo basti aagaya h….muje aaj he apne admi se information mili h…

Shakhs — mere itni admi markar usai jinda kaise chod sakta hu …ikhatta kar sabko kal wo kisi bhi haal mai bachna nahi chahiye h….hum gherkar marenge sale ko koyi mouka nahi denge is baar bachne ka…usai bhi pata lage tillu se panga lena kitna bhari padta h

Admi — ji bhai main ikhatta karta hu sab .. chokre logo ko….



Dhaarawayi….

Sherdil — main tikh hu maa….

Maa — tu tikh h tu meri baate kyo nahi sunta h …agar wo khuda ka nek farishta na aya hota toh tu…..itna kah wo ro padi….

Sherdil — kya ….abba abhi jinda hote toh wo ye nahi karte…..

Maa — wo nahi h isliye tujse kah rahi hu hume hamara maksad pura karna h……ye sab hamare maksad se bahut chota h aur hamre maksad ke bich hum kisi aur ko nahi ane de sakte h….

Rifat - maa ap phir suru ho gayi bhai ko chot lagi huvi h ……waise koun tha wo shakhs bhai….

Sherdil — meri bhi samaj se bahar h…bolta h tujse ladna h isliye bachaya….

Rifat sir khujlaate huve — matlb khudki jaan jhokhim daal ke apko bachaya sirf apse ladne ke liye…

Sherdil — ha aur ek cr diye h ladne ke liye aur bacha kar apne ghar bhi lekar gaya ..bahut bada bungla tha….aur uska body gaurd wo toh 7 feet ka saand tha …

Rifat — hhhhh….. ek cr…diye…sirf ladne ke liye

Sherdil — ab khana bhi khilayegi ya enquiry he karti rahegi….aur tu school kyo nahi ja rahi h….2 din se

Rifat — ha abhi banati hu khana wo ap nahi aye ghar toh man nahi tha school jane ka…

Sherdil — ek cr cash h mere pass abki baar aisa kiya toh boarding school bhej dunga padi rahna samjhi.

Rift jib nikalar eeeeeee- bade aye boarding bhejne wale meri jutti bhi na jaye ap dono se dur…

Itna kah dono jor jor se hasne lage ..

Par inhe kya pata tha ki jald he….unke sir par bahut badi musibat ane wali h…..



Mumbayi college…



Class mai Anu chip chip kar raj ko he dekh rahi thi….aur jaise he raj uski taraf dekhta wo jeeb nikalkar usai chidane lagti …..kaafi dair se yahi sab chalta raha ….

Rajni — Both of you stand up and getout from my class….

Raj ne anu ko ghoora phir sorry bolta huva chup chap bahar chala gaya aur aisa he anu ne kiya….

“Are ruk ja akduu insaan…”

Raj - kya kar rahi thi class mai ab nikaal kar dikha teri jeeb kaat ke rakh dunga….

Anu — sorry gusa kyo hota h chal canteen ….chalte h…

Raj — tu aj alag behave kar rahi h sab tikh toh h na ….dekh main …

Anu — chup ..chup…kuch mat bolna ….waise ek baat bata bus aise he maan le …..sirf manna h…..tikh h na…faltu kuch mat sochna bus just imagine

Raj — bolegi toh manunga aur imagine karunga…

Anu — sharmate huve ….agar teri meri shadi ho jaye …..kya phir bhi tu aise he tang karega muje….hamesha..

Raj jhatke se ruka aur anu ko dekhna laga phir sir par hath laga kar dekha. “ tabiyat toh tikh h teri…phir bahki bahki baate kyo kar rahi h”

Anu — pata tha tu mazak he udayega …mera

Raj — tu mujse pyar karti h ye toh tune kaha tha par ….shadi karna chahti h ye aj kah rahi h…

Anu — haa ….itna kah wo gardan nichi karke ….khadi ho gayi….

Raj serious hokar ——tu mujse bahut pyar karti h…

Anu — ha aur aj main yahi kahne wali thi ki tera ladna ..tang karna …muje bahut acha lagta h ….sabko izzat deta h kisi ke bhi dil mai jagah bana leta h….

Raj — ha ha ha ha you must kidding …..tum mujse shadi karna chahti ho …ha ha ha …..itni acting…..

Anu ankhe nikalkar— raj i m serious….

Raj — ok toh tum serious ho phir kuch pal ruk kar mujse shadi karne ke liye tumhe meri ek condtion puri karni hogi…..

Anu — kya ….bolo na sab karungi

Raj — tum palat jaogi ek he mouka dunga bus main..….

Anu — palat jaye wo anu nahi tum bus bolo ab chand lane ko kahoge mujse nahi ho payega…

Raj — tumhe ek muder karna hoga….

Anu ki ankhe choudi ho gayi..phir chahre par muskaan agayi….ab tum mere sath mazak kar rahe ho…

Raj — i m serious…kisi ko meri ankho ke samne gun se shoot karna hoga….tab jaakar muje yakin hoga h dum ….

Anu raj ki ankho mai dekhne lagi aur bina kuch bole he wanha se chali gayi.,

Raj — waqt nahi h ab mere pass…aur ab anu chali gayi h ab muje dusra tarika apnana he hoga…….

Raj jaise he canteen pahucha waiter phir se uske pass agaya ….

Waiter — ye apke liye ….

Raj — are phir se tum raj ne tiffin ko le liya ….aur khola toh aj bhi usmai pepar fold kiya huva tha..raj ne open kiya toh …

“Narajgi toh h…par sikayat nahi…ankho mai gahri nind h ….phir soye kyo nahi……mana ki……apna ka khyal jaruri h…..phir khud ka khayal kyo nahiiii……..”



“ Ye khubsara khana h ache se khayiyega raj ji aur khud ka dhayan rakhiye…. apki dost aur bahan ka main dhayan rakhungi

Apki Dost ….poonam waise …main he dost manti hu ya ap bhi mante ho dost muje”



Raj ke chahre par badi si muskaan thi….par is baar ye badi si muskaan dekhne ke liye poonam moujud nahi thi …….aur jab wo free lecture mai canteen pahuchi ….

Waiter — dii wo tiifin toh wo le gaye ..

Poonam -kya …kab ….

Waiter — ji di …sayad koyi class free thi unki ….isliye subhe jaldi he agaye the

Poonam raj ka reaction dekhna chahti thi par usai dukh huva ki wo dekh nahi payiiii …uska chehra latak gaya aur waiter college ki teen khubsoorat tigdi mai se ek khusoorat ladki ko kaise aise dekh sakta tha

Waiter — Di muje pata h ap unhe chip chip kar dekhti ho …isliye ye dekho maine unki har pal ki photo khinch li thi…taki ap udaas na ho

Poonam ki ankhe khusi se chamak gayii jab usne wo sari pics dekhi …….usmai har wo pal moujud the jo wo dekhna chahti thi….” Thank you so much bhai……tum ek ache dil ke insaan ho main ye help kabhi nahi bulanga..

Waiter — Di bus pyar se koyi bhi 2 baat bolde thodi izzat de de garib ko isai acha jayda muje kuch nahi chahiye h…

Poonam — tumhe kabhi bhi jarurat ho ek baar is bahan ko jarurat yaad karna….

Poonam table par baithkar sari photo dekh he rahi thi ki kavita aur manisha bhi wash room se agayiii…..

Kavita aur manisha ko bilkul nahi pata tha ki poonam tiffin lekar aati h raj ke liye aur body gaurd jo raj ne rakhwaya h usi ke pass se canteen mai pahuchwa deti h…….poonam ke chahre par badi si muskaan thi …

Kavita — oye hoye aj meri dii badi muskara rahi h kanhi ….kuch…

Poonam — cutieeee ..bahut bolne lagi h…

Manisha — gadbad toh h cutiee …

Poonam apni badi badi ankho se manisha ko ghurne lagiii..

Manisha — kabhi toh batayegi he na…..

Kavita — kya dii batao na…..muje bhi pata lage ki dii kya chupa rahi h wo bhi mujse…

Poonam — No …..bilkul nahi manisha ……dekh tu meri bahan h…

Kavita ne poonam ke muu par hath rakh diye aur boli “bola na di kya baat h”

Manisha- isai kisi se kaafi waqt se pyar h aur ab wo pyar isai mil gaya h par wo kambhakhat …pyar se dur bhagta h….

Kavita — wao …Diii….

Manisha — dheere cutiee sab h…mere kareeb aaa jara…

Kavita — sorry diii….

Manisha — waise khus tuje hona chahiye h…

Kavita — are afcourse i m too much happy …

Poonam — no no please maanja manisha ….

Manisha — aur agar us ladke ne haa kardi toh ….hum teeno hamesa sath rahengi..hamesha

Kavita hum teeno hamesha sath rahengi ….

Poonam hath chalakar manishsa ko rokne lagi par manisha kanha rookne wali thiii….

Kavita confusion se manisha ko dekhne lagi ….

Manisha — kyoki tu iski nanand ho jayegi na….

Kavita — nanand ho jayegi….kya mat…ll…b…oh my god …oh my god …..ohhh…myyyyy…godddd….ye usne bahut jor se kaha tha ….

Manisha — controle cutiee chal campus park chalte h

Aur jaise he park pahuche tab kavita ne poonam ko jor se gale laga liya …

Kavita — Are bhai meri aur shweta ki baat taal he nahi sakte h main aur shweta h na ….hum puri help karenge apki ….i m so happy ….ap bhabhi ban gayi toh bhai ko phir kabhi akelapan mahsus nahi hoga ……..kavita khushi se nachne lagi ….aur poonam manisha se ladne lagi usai bahut sharam arahi thi…

Teeno tikdiyo ne lectures attend kiye aur gap sap marne ke liye teen tigdi aj poonam ke ghar he ruki huvi thi….aur aj is khusi ka celebration raat ko manane ki taiyari kar rahi thi….kavita ne bhabhi bhabhi kahkar poonam ko sharam se pani pani kar rakha tha aur manisha ne bhi poonam ko chedne mai koyi kasar nahi choudiii…….



Toh Dusri taraf raj …ghar mai Poonam ke khane ko garam karke aram se kha raha tha…..usne poonam ke hath ka khana teesari baar he khaya tha par uski band ankhe bata rahi thi ki usai khana kitna swadisht lag raha tha ….” Are 2 tiffin ho gaye h poonam ji ke muje unhe wapas kar dena chahiye kal college mai kar dunga …nahi nahi wanha wo dono nahi charo hongi manishs kavita anu aur rajni kisi ne bhi dekh liya toh jaan kha jayengi meri toh kya karu abhi waqt bhi h anu ka jawab ane mai fir mouka nahi milega toh ghar dekar ajau …..par ghar par acha lagega ….Anirudh uncle kya sochenge …oh shit wo toh tour par gaye h….honge aunty he hongi …shamko de…aunga ….phir soch kar ha yahi tikh rahega…. par khali hath jana acha nahi rahta h …kya lekar jau….shweta se puchu …nahi deepika di se puchu ….nahi gusa hongi …madhu ji se pucchta hu” itna kah usne call laga diya …

Madhu — Toh janab ko 10 din baad yaad ayi h….

Raj — apko pata h ki meri jindgi mai sukun nahi h waise ….judwa kaise h…

Madhu — dhukhi karte h kick marte h ….

Raj ke chahre par muskasn agayi …. “Uncle kaise h

Madhu — sab ache h tumhe yaad karte h bol rahe the ki jab bacho ka namkaran karenge tumhe bulayenge …ab unhe kaise kahu ki baap ko toh bulana he padega na…”

Raj — ap khus ho main isai khus hu….main aunga apke pass…aur waqt bhi bitaunga acha muje apki help chahiye…

Madhu — meri help ..

Raj — agar kisi ladki ko thank you bolna ho toh sath mai kya dena chahiye…

Madhu — so finally mere hero ko ladki pasand agayii…

Raj ,- ap bhi na apki kasam aisa kuch nahi h sirf thank you bolna h friend h…

Madhu —hmmm …waise ladki mordern ho toh koyi bag perfume ya dress pasand karti h…aur agar ladki simple dikhawati nahi h toh chocklet …. flowers passnd karti h….

Raj — Dono le jau toh

Madhu — aur bhi acha h….

Raj — Thank you tc ..

Madhu — ok mere pati dev jo agya apki aur kuch filhal toh kar nahi sakti hu apke liye jab waqt mile tab milte rahna…

Raj —ap bhi na koyi mouka nahi chodti ho.. ok aunga ….tc…bye apna dhayan rakhna ….

Madhu - bye miss you..

Itna kah raj ne phone rakha aur polution mask lagakar bahar nikal gaya…rose aur chockletes lene… usne time dekha toh 4 baj rahe the ……..abhi wo nikla he tha ki usai apne tikh samne anu car ke bahar khadi dikhayi dii…

Raj serious ho gaya….anu uske karib ayi aur boli …

Anu — main taiyar hu tumhari condition puri karne ko car mai gun h …tum jisai kahoge main shoot kar dungi …par ek baat yaad rakhna agar tumne wada toda ya muje dhokha diya….toh trust me puri duniya mai chipne ki jagah nahi milegi ….mere papa bacha lenge muje aur agar phir bhi pakdi gayi toh bhi jail se loutkar tumhe barbad kar dungi …….mera pyar mazak nahi h ….isliye ab chahe katil kahlau ya kuch main sirf tumhari aur tum sirf mere rahoge…

Raj bus hairani se usai dekhta raha tha….wo dekhna chahta tha ki kya sach mai anu kar payegi sab filhal wo raj ke pahle test mai pass ho gayi thi ….ab bari thi dusre test ki yani action ki …..raj chup chap car mai baith gaya aur as per plan usne yamdoot ko ek location par bhej diya aur khud anu ko jaan bhuj kar deri karke lekar wanha pahuch gaya ……

Raj ne yanha wanha dekha ….aur phir bola ..

Raj — us shakhs ko dekh rahi usne muje bahut baar beizzat kiya h jab mai mumbayi aya tha…apne sathiyo ke sath milkar bahut mara tha bhale he main buildings par tezi se chakma de kar bhag sakta tha par isne khule maidan mai gherkar mara tha jiski wajah se main 20 din tak hospital mai admit raha tha….isliye he maine wo bodygaurd rakha huva h…meri nazar tab se he h is par..

Anu ka gusa dheere dheere raj ki baate soon kar badh gaya…..koyi bhi chahe koyi bhi raj ko hurt nahi kar sakta tha ….usne dashboard mai se gun nikali aur dubara magzine ko nikal kar check kari …

Raj — Tumhe gun chalani aati h…

Anu — shooting sikhi h maine…

Raj good main tumhara intezar ghar par karunga……ab tum kaise aati ho kaise nahi ye sab tum par rahega par shoot karte he nikal jana ….

Raj wanha se nikalkar dur chip gaya….usai abhi bhi doubt tha anu par ….par anu ne sabkuch uske viprit kiya usne car mai se vodka ka minicher nikala aur ek he ghunt mai pii gayi karib 10 minut mai he uski ankho mai jo hichkichahat thi wo dur ho gayiii…… “ sala harami mere pyar ko marega ….aj ke baad tu kabhi duniya mai dikhega he nahi….”itna kah wo us shakhs yani mirtydoot ke piche pahuchi aur 2 goliya uski pith mai daag dii….goliyo ki tez awaj huvi aur aas pass ke log jo 50 meter ki he duri par the wo alert ho gaye anu tezi se wapas bhagi aur car start he chodi thi usne wo turant wanha se rawana ho gayi …uske rawana hone ke baad he mirtyudoot kamar ko sidhi karta huva khada huva aur bullets ke proof jo rah gaye the usai uthakar chipa liye aur wo bhi gayab ho gaya wanha se ….koyi kuch bhi samaj nahi paya…

Raj jo dur se usai dekh raha tha…. “ Good…ab anu ko sach bataya ja sakta h…. Anu mere liye kuch bhi kar sakti h ab….isai ye baat toh saaf h..” ye kahte kahte uske chahre par badi si muskaan thi… akhir ho kya na itne dino se apni h bahan ke sath pyar ka natak jo karna padh raha tha….aur is natak mai usne bhai bahan ki limits se agai badhkar kiss tak kari thi…..

Anu car ko bhagati huvi sidhi raj ke ghar ke bahar le ayi aur ghar ke andar firdge mai daru dhundhne lagi…..car mai jab usne ye socha ki usne murder kar diya h toh uska dil jor jor se dhadhkne laga tha…usai jald he kitchen ke ek koune mai chipa kar rakhi huvi wine mil gayi …aur raj jab tak mityudoot ke sath ghar pahucha …..toh wo bhi hairan ho gaya sofe par anu toon hokar ludki huvi thi aur farsh par wine ki khali bottle giri huvi thi…..

Mityudoot — lagta h ghabra gayi h miss anu…

Raj — apne sahi kaha isiliye ….isne pii li h par wine kanha se ayi…

Mityudoot ne gardan ghuma li

Raj - main isai ghar chod kar ata hu…ap mera ek chota sa kaam kardenge…

Mityudoot ne gardan ha mai hila di…

Raj - muje white Roses aur chocklets chahiye h khub sare….

Mityudoot ne apne ungli daal kar jor se kaan ko hilaya aur tookar tookar raj ko dekhne laga phir bola “ ji main lekar ata hu”

Mityudoot ke jate he raj ne anu ko godhi mai uthaya aur uske ghar pahuch gaya…

Anu mom-- ye kya h…

Raj — Birthday h na toh mere sath khushi khushi mai jayda pili ….ap chinta na kare wine pi h….raat bhar soyegi toh normal ho jayegi…..main isai room mai sulakar ata hu ….

Anu mom raj ko upar anu ko lejata dekh kar “ ye ladki bhi na kitna acha ladka h agar iske aisi he drame rahe toh raj dur na ho jaye isai “

Upar raj ne anu ko sulaya aur forehead par kiss kari aur sticky not likh kar chod diya anu ke liye…..raj ne anu ke ghar ke bahar aakar time dekha toh raat ke 9 baj gaye the … “ late ho gaya rahne du kya ….par roses aur chocklet …main unhe kah deta hu wanhi le ayenge…..”inform aur kuch instructions mityudoot ko dene ke baad raj tiffin uthakar jaldi se poonam ke ghar ki taraf nikal gaya ….aur idhar is baat se anjaan….

Teeno akeli ghar par khana etc taiyar kar rahi thi home theater bhi ready kar liya tha movie ke liye ….jismai poonam aata ghunth kar just free huvi thi usne hath bhi saaf nahi kiye the…

Kavita-- kass mamta didi yanha hoti toh aur maza aajata….unhe pata lagega na apke baare mai toh khushi se jhoom uthengiii….waise dii socha h bhai ko kaise manana h ..

Poonam — pyar jabardasti nahi hota h cutiee wo toh ho jata h ….main bus unko care ….apni feelings dikha sakti hu….aur jab unke dil mai mere liye feelings ayengi tab ….khud he pata lag jayega …

Manisha — chod cutiee iska pyar nirala h ye samne se ye kabhi nahi kahegi ….par ye uski itni care karegi ki raj ko khud realise ho jaye….

Kavita — dii muje na pyar samaj he nahi ata h…

Poonam-- pyar sirf pyar h cutiee ismai tera mera kuch nahi …jo jaisa h usai waisa he usai apnana aur sath dena hota h…ek dusre ko samjna he pyar h…..jab tuje hoga tab pata lag jayega…..



Ting…… dong….ghar ki door bell ki awaj huvi …..toh teeno ka dhayan gaya…

Poonam-- badi maa aur papa toh aj ane wale nahi h ….toh phir koun aya h…

Manisha — toh dhek le jab tak hum taiyar karte h sab kitchen mai …

Poonam jiske baal bikhre aur hath mai abhi bhi aata laga huva tha ….wo usi halat mai ayi…aur jab usne door khola toh uski ankhe mai khusi ki chamak agayiiiii

Poonam “aappp”

Raj hath agai badh kar “hello friend poonam ji kaisi h ap”

Poonam ki toh waise he raj ko dekhte he sochne samajne ke dimagi purje hil jaate the usne turant wo aate wale hathse he hath mila liya …

Raj ne poonam ke hath ko dekha “ lagta h ap khana bana rahi thi maine disturb kar diya”

Poonam ne raj ke hathpar aata laga dekha toh boli “hey bhagwaan bus ek minut” aur turant kitchen ki taraf bhagi poonam kavita kuch bolti usai pahle he wo kapda uthakar bahar ki taraf bhag gayi ..piche khadi manisha kavita ne ek dusre ko dekha aur kitchen se bahar aakar dekha toh…unki choudhi ho gayi aur muu khule ke khule rah gaye kyoki poonam ne raj ka hath pakad rakha tha aur apne hath mai pakde kapde se raj ke hath ko saaf kar rahi thi….

Raj “koyi baat nahi poonam ji ….main ye tifins dene aya tha.”

Boom….kitchen se just bahar ayi manisha aur kavita ko jhatka sa laga….dono ek dusre ko dekh kar “ tiffin khana” dono dubara se raj aur poonam ko dekhne lagi ….

Poonam “ nahi raj ji main bhi na apke hath kharab kar diye ….ap andar ayiye na …”

Raj — ok ….

Raj ko kya pata tha ki uska ye ok….kya rang lane wale tha wo poonam ke piche ek kadam he chala tha ki poonam ko yaad agaya aur usne tutant tiffin ko side mai chipa diya ….

Raj kuch bol pata ….

“ Wao tiffin khana bahut khayal rakha ja raha h is gadhe ka aur tum mujse milne ka time nahi h tumhare pass yanha tiffin loutaye ja rahe h….”



Raj ne apni jeeb danto se kaat li aur man he man bola “ bhagwan kya chahte ho ap matlb ab thank you bhi nahi bol sakta hu kya….wo bhi tikh h aur apko bhabhi he kyo milti h har baar aisi situation mai ab ye chodengi nahi muje” turant uske dimag mai idea aya…

Raj — are ap toh hukka pani lekar chad gayi mujh par muje pata tha ap teeno ek sath he ho …

Kavita-- wo kaise pata …

Raj — Bodygaurd …..bodygaurd rakha h na apke piche usi ne bataya…

Manisha — toh phir tikh h…bach gaye tum…

Raj man mai thank god bach gaya….

Manisha — aur ye tiffin ka chakkar…

Raj samaj gaya ki indono ko tiffin ka pata nahi usne ek nazar poonam ko dekha jo ghabra rahi thi jaise uski chori samne wali ho “ tiffin kya…. wo poonamji khana acha banati h toh

Poonam ji ko kahkar mangwaya tha ab ap toh banti nahi ho warna apko kah deta waise kab bana kar khila rahi ho”

Raj ki baat se manisha ….backfoot par agayi “sikh rahi hu jald he khilaungi”

Kavita — gale lagte huve i love you bhai…

Raj - love you too kabbu…..

Kavita — bhai galat baat khali hath koyi aise thank you bolta h …..apne poonam bh….diii ko kuch nahi diya …

Raj oh i m sorry ab kya kare….

Poonam — koyi baat nahi…..waise ek chocklet toh banti he thi….

Raj ke chahre par muskarahat agayii….

Poonam main coffee lati hu…..

Kavita — bhai …ek baat kahu mana toh nahi karoge….

Raj — are tu bolna kya chahiye ….

Kavita — pakka na please mana mat karna …..ap aj raat yanhi rook jao na agar apko kaam nahi ho toh…please bhai …poonam jo kitchen ke pass pahuchi thi wo bhi kavita ki baat sunkar rook gayii….aur raj ke reply ka wait karne lagii…

Manisha — Raj Dehradhun ki tarah please na…

Raj — par poonam ji akeli h…acha nahi lagega…

Manisha — bus yahi dikat h main khud anirudh uncle se puch leti hu …

Raj — ok ok ap dono jeeti ….main rook jata hu ….

Poonam ki toh khushi ka tikhana he nahi raha ……usai aur kya chahiye tha ….wo khushi khusi raj ke liye achi si coffee bana kar le ayi …..tabhi ek baar fir ghar ki door bell baji….

Poonam “ Ab koun hoga “

Kavita - Di ab toh bhai bhi yanha phir kyo itna soch rahi ho…

Poonam aur raj ki ankhe mili raj ke chahre par pyari si muskaan dekh ek pal wo usai he dekhti rahi fir …door open karne ke liye chali gayiii…..

Security gaurd — mam ye apke liye aye h….

Poonam ne bahar jhank kar dekha toh uski ankhe badi badi ho gayi ….bahar khubsare fresh white flower aur usmai red flowers ke mix bookai rakhe huve the har bookai ke sath alag types ki bahut sari chocklets rakhi huvi thi….poonam ne agai badh kar ek bookai par tange sticker ko uthaya jis par likha tha Thank you…..poonam ke chahre par is waqt jo muskaan ayi thi agar koyi bhi ladka dekh le toh wo apni jaan dene ko bhi taiyar ho jata …..usne piche moodkar raj ki taraf dekha jo usi he ki taraf muskurata huva dekh raha tha…….poonam ki ankho mai khusi ke ansuu agaye …..kyoki ye pahli baar tha jab usai aise kisi ne thank you bola tha …

Raj ne bhi poonam ki ansuo se bheeghi ankhe dekh li thi poonam ne jaldi se apne apne ansuu punche ….aur ek bookai aur chockelet ka packet uthakar agayii…..

Poonam — Thank you …

Raj — Thank you toh muje kahna h aur ye thank you us khane ke agai kuch nahi h ap really bahut acha khana banati h….specially alluparathe….

Kavita manisha — thank you itni sari chocklet aur ye bookai …

Poonam — bahar jaakar dekho ….cutiee tu bol rahi thi na raj ji kuch nahi laye …

Manisha aur kavita ek ke bad ek khub sare bookai aur chocklets laate gayi…

Raj bhi hairan tha wo matha pitna chahta tha par teeno ke chahre par specially poonam ko khus dekh kar wo bahut khus tha……..

Raat ko sab ne ek sath khana khaya aur baat karne lage….manisha aur kavita baat karte karte so gayi….poonam ne Ac ko kam kiya aur halka sa dono ko cover kar diya taki thand na lage…..



Poonam ki nazar raj par gayii “ kya soch rahe h raj ji nind nahi arahi h..”

Raj nahi …thak gaya hu halka sir dard h …apne ap tikh ho jayega ap so jayiye ap thak gayi h …

Poonam pahle toh hichkichayi par wo apne pyar ko jara sa bhi dard mai kaise dekh sakti thi ….

Poonam turant gayi aur anirudh goswami ke room se navratan tail lekar aagayiii…..

Poonam-- ap idhar sofe par baith jayiye …

Raj — poonam ji raat ke ek baj gaye h ap so jaiyiye ap bhi thak gayi hongi ….

Poonam — ek dost pareshan h toh dusre dost ko nind kaise ayegi bhala …

Raj — apse baato mai koyi nahi jeet sakta h ..

Poonam — Toh baith jayiye ….aur raj ke baith te he ….

Usne thoda sa tail raj ke sir par gira kar ….malish suru kardi ….ab poonam ye maalish 10 saal ki umar se he apne chacha ke sir par karti ayi thi ek minut mai he ….raj ka sir dard dur ho gaya ….

Raj - ek baat puchu …

Poonam — ha …

Raj — ap kaise kar leti ho sab ….

Poonam ke chahre par muskurahat agayiii….. “ jab 7 saal ki thi tab ek baar chacha chachi ko baat karte sun liya ki main unki beti nahi unke bhai ki beti hu …..khub royi chacha chachi ne bahut samjhaya …par dhukh toh huva he tha par sambhal gayi buus tabse ….he sab badal gaya main ghar ka kaam karti…..padhayi karti…chacha chachi ka dhayan rakhti…..

Raj — kitna badal jata h na jab pata lage ki duniya mai akela jeena h….

Poonam — raj ji….kami toh koyi bhi maabaap ki puri nahi kar sakta h par phir bhi aaspass bahut se aise bhi h jo hume bahut chahte h hume unke liye jeena hota h….

Raj — ap bahut heemat wali ho …..

Poonam — ap aur main ek he jaisi kashti par sawar h ….sayad isiliye bhagwan ne hume milaya h ….

Raj ke chahre par muskaan agayiii….. “ap jiski jindgi mai jaogi wo bahut khusnaseeb hoga…..

Poonam — pyar bhi naseeb se milta h raj ji ….

Raj — pyar h kanha is duniya mai pyar mai log ….apno se jayda dusro par yakeen karte h …aur sirf paiso ko pyar se jayda importance dete h….

Poonam — raj ji bura mat manna ….pyar mai galatfahmi aam h ….kabhi jo dikhta h wo hota nahi h…..par humari responsiblity hoti hum ek dusre par viswaas dikhaye …..jaruri nahi h pyar mai dono taraf he samajdaar ho ….kabhi kabhi jhukhna aur samjhana bhi padta h ..tabhi pyar ki dor aur majboot hoti h

Raj poonam ki baat ko gahrayi se samjta raha phir usne palat kar poonam ko dekha ….poonam ke chahre par hamesa ki tarah muskurahat thi…..dono ek dusre ko kaafi dair tak aise he dekhte rahe ……

Poonam —ab sir dard kaisa h…

Raj - bilkul gayab ho gaya h Thank you so much….

Poonam — acha dosti mai Thank you bhi kahte h….

Raj — ok ap jeeti itna kah wo muskurane laga….

Poonam — “ Bus ye hansi kabhi bhi jane mat dijiyega….kyoki ap ki ye hansi bahut pyari h …..

Raj man mai “ pata nahi kyo par main jab bhi poonam se mita hu khud ko usai alag he nahi kar pata hu kya koyi rishta h purane janam ka …”

Poonam — kanha kho gaye raj ji…

Raj “ kanhi nahi …ap so jaiye main nahi chahta ki meri dost pareshan ho”…

Poonam “ good night raj ji”

Raj “ good night ….poonam ji”

Poonam apne room mai jane ke bajaye teeno ke pass he pade sofe par late gayi kuch dair baad uski nighahe raj ki taraf gayi toh raj usi ki taraf chahra karke gahri nind mai so gaya tha……half hour baad poonam uthi aur raj ke pass gayi jab usai yakin ho gaya ki raj so gaya h toh uske sir par hath firakar forehead par kis kardi ….usne dekha ki raj ke pass pani nahi h toh pani kitchen se laakar uske pass rakh diya…….aur sofe par jaakar so gayiii…..uske dil mai gahra sukun tha kyoki ek patni ki tarah usne raj ka pura khayal rakha tha aur raj ke dil mai apni gahri jagah banati ja rahi thi……….jab subhe uski nind 6 baje khuli toh raj ka sota huva chahra abhi bhi uski he taraf he tha….wo khudse he boli “ ek din wo ayega jab roj main raj ko apne samne paungi”

Dusri taraf anu ki nind khuli toh wo uska sir chakra raha tha…..usne table se uthakar pani piya aur passpade sticky note ko uthaya jis par likha tha “ Sab tikh h jab uth jao 10 baje ghar aakar milna bahut jaruri baat karni h mere tumhare rishte ko lekar…..Raj”



Idhar raj ki nind khuli toh …usne time dekha 7 baj rahe the …..wo man mai bola “ waqt agaya h ab sach pata karne ka ….bahut khel liya tu apno ke sath mama urf victor ab meri bari h….apno ka dhokha kaisa lagta h ab tuje pata lagega”



Aj ke liye itna he….Deri ke liye maafi…

Masti mai padhne ka bindass likes aur revoes pelne ka ……

Nice update Bhai. Kya anu ka father hi Victor hy. Ya doosra koi aur mama bhi hy. Poonam aur Raaj k pyar ki aankh macholi achhi lagi. Chalo poonam k bhi do votes toh ho Gaye.

 

[ellysperry]

vaha par shak jataya gaya tha ki uska mama ho sakta hai

Nhi waha per kisi ko Shak nhi hua tha kyuki kisi ko pta hi nhi tha ki victor kaun hai , dada ji kahi sune the but unko victor ka name yaad nhi aa rha tha ki victor kaun hai .
( Dadaji....Matlab unhe aj bi sak h ki sahdev ka beta jinda h.......hmmm toh ye baat h itne saal baad bi unhe apni badshahat jane ka dar h unhe dar h ki wafadar log phir se na khade ho jaye unke khilaf unke jurmo ke khilaf kyoki unhe pata h ki sirf ek umid chahiye h dubara khade hone ki isliye wo ye akhiri umid mitana chahte h....)

 

[Sandeep singh nirwan]

Nhi waha per kisi ko Shak nhi hua tha kyuki kisi ko pta hi nhi tha ki victor kaun hai , dada ji kahi sune the but unko victor ka name yaad nhi aa rha tha ki victor kaun hai .
( Dadaji....Matlab unhe aj bi sak h ki sahdev ka beta jinda h.......hmmm toh ye baat h itne saal baad bi unhe apni badshahat jane ka dar h unhe dar h ki wafadar log phir se na khade ho jaye unke khilaf unke jurmo ke khilaf kyoki unhe pata h ki sirf ek umid chahiye h dubara khade hone ki isliye wo ye akhiri umid mitana chahte h....)

Ellysperry bro sabra karo ye writer h abhi aur ghumayega ...sach ajane do bahar pata laga sr victor jr victor baap bete na hokar bhai nikle toh ..ya jr victor koyi aur senior victer koyi aur nikla toh....
Aur dar toh h he ki sahdev ka beta agaya toh support wale log jo chip gaye h wo sab agaye toh ....bawal ho jayega...

 

[ellysperry]

Ellysperry bro sabra karo ye writer h abhi aur ghumayega ...sach ajane do bahar pata laga sr victor jr victor baap bete na hokar bhai nikle toh ..ya jr victor koyi aur senior victer koyi aur nikla toh....
Aur dar toh h he ki sahdev ka beta agaya toh support wale log jo chip gaye h wo sab agaye toh ....bawal ho jayega...

Bhai Sabra hi ker rha hoon wo aaphi ka reader hai Mai apna point of view use bta rha tha ki Aisa hua hai ? Aisa ho sakta ?