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Dear ap pahle sure ho jao ap kya kahna chahte ho pichle comment mai ap kahte ho ki formality kar rahe ho updates ki aj ap kah rahe ho ki update nahi dete ho .....kabhi ap kahte ho take your time......Dear lagta h k aj ka update nhe aae ga thore der bad jawab aae ga k update mangel ko aae ga
Jabardast Update.Update 96
Finding past—begins
Punisher....
Jaipur....pichle ek din se bheema danger bhai ko dhund raha par uska kuch pata nahi lag paya
Raat ......
Ek resturant and baar shamshan bana huva tha...20 log serious enjured aur baki behosh niche pade the....
Bheema--- Danger bhai.....
Mmm muje nahi malum bheema bhai....
Bheema chalo isai nahi pata...
Shivani--- par apko kaise yakeen h ki ye sach bol raha h...
Bheema--- kyoki jhut ki saja isai pata h isliye rajasthan mai muje janne wala kabhi bhi jhut nahi bolega.......
Sonali--- ab....
Bheema--- milega wo kida bi milega.
6 hour baad ek purani bulding mai lashe padi thi aur unke bich danger bhai ghutno ke bal baitha tha.....
bheema bhai maaf kardo
Bheema--- jo bi ye puche bata dena warna tere piche rone wala koyi nahi rahega ....
Danger – ho ho bhai....
Bheema--- ab chalta hu .....
Sonali--- ji
Phir usai ghasitkar commissioner office le gayi aur sabke samne
Sonali--- naam bata ......
Danger --- ma...ma.....madam
Sp aur inspecter ki halat kharab ho gayi thi .... ab hakikat samne ane wali thi wo khisakne lage.
Danger – Sp aur inspecter jugnu....
Sonali--- shivanii...
Shivani ishara samaj lagi dande se todne aur dande tut te rahe ,hadiya tutne ki awaj ati rahi... dono ko marte marte bahar le gayi....
Sonali--- bola tha tumhari halat bahut buri hogi aur maut bi .... dekho mout asspass he h ...
Bahar logo ki bheed lag gayi thi...
Shivani--- ye dono desh drohi h aur antakwatiyo ka sathi h ye ab tumhare hawale h jo karna h karo inke sath.....sp aur inspecter ki halat kharab ho gayi...
Aur janta ne wahi kiya jo karti h maar diya aur bheed ko koyi saja nahi hoti h ...iska itihaas gawah h..
Bahar ka scene dekha toh danger ek he saans sab batata gaya .....jisai sun sabki ankhe fati rah gayi....
3 din baad.......
Aurat kabhi bhagti toh kabi chupte huve pichle ek hour se ja rahi thi ....Jaisemout uska picha kar rahi ho .....jald he wo pahuch gayi....
Samne se – iske 1000 hajar he milenge
Aurat paise leke chupte huve alag alag taxi leke bachte huve wapas agayi apni beti ke pass. Aj usne apne pita ki akhiri nishani apni beti ko surakhsit karne ke liye bech di thiii...
Ladki--- ap kanha gayi thi mumma...
Aurat jhuti muskarahat laa kar apke liye khana lane ye dekho choclet bi h ....
Jisai dekh bachi ke chahre pe masoom muskaan agayii ...
Aurat--- man mai jald he mela suru ho jayega isi ka faida utha ke haridwar aur wanha se bahut dur chali jaungi ...mera pahle he sab chin chuka h ...ab main meri beti ko kuch nahi hone dungi ...
Kuch dair baad 2 admi ate h usi dukaan par tune usai yanhi dekha tha
Dusra paka yahi dekha tha yaar ...is aurat ki khak hum pure uttrakhand mai kar rahe h wo yanha nainitaal mai h....ab jab ye pata lag gaya h toh usai dhund he nikalenge sare raste pe apne admi lagwa do......
Haridwar.....
Bus stand...mai raka khud safayi karamchariyo ki dress mai mojud tha aur is wajah se kisi ko koyi shak nahi huva aur na he dhayan se checking huvi...
Raka--- kisi ko hamari planing ki khabar nahi lagegi sab yahi sochenge ki khatra mele mai hoga par unki soch unko le dubegi....aur wo afghani khus ho jayenge....bus ek button dabaya aur boom sab khatm ....ha ha ha...
Raka ne 6 bomb 3 location par fit kar diye jo ki behad he rush wali jagah thi....raka ke chehre pe kroor muskaan thi jo rah rahkar chahre pe bani huvi thi .raka sare kaam nipta kar wapas apne adai pe agaya ab intezar tha bus sahi din ka...
Dehradhun----
Dr good ab tumhare ghav kafi bhar gaye h...bus kuch din aur rest karo tum bilkul tikh ho jaoge......
Raj—thank you dr
dr ke jane ke baad chehre pe muskaan agayi ....aur wo khada huva....aur dress change karne laga uske chehre pe kayi bhav the jo koyi dekh le toh pass ane ki heemat na kare ....
Madhu—piche khadi raj ko he dekh rahi thi aur mirror mai uski laal ankhe jinmai aye bhav ko dekh wo bi sihar gayi ...
Raj palatkar are ap yanhi h main raat ko late aunga....
Madhu—dar se hhhh ha ha ok...
Raj—apko kya huva ....ap toh meri sweet wifee ho na ....
Aur madhu ke dono gaal khinch kar bahar nikal gaya par andar madhu ki dar se dil jor jor se dhadak raha tha .....Wo alag he soch mai ghum thi kyoki usne raj ko khanjar rakhte dekh liya tha aur uske chehre ke bhav bahut kuch kah gaye the aj madhu kisi dusre he raj ko dekh rahi thi.....
4 hour ke baad
Raj - aram se car se niche kadam rakhta h
Rajeev tum tikh nahi ho ...abhi...
Raj—devil smile ke sath karma sir karma jo mere sath kiya in kutto ne..uska heesab toh dena he hoga na ..main bi aj aisa nahi hota meri maa muje is waqt apne hath se khana khila rahi hoti ,main bi maa ki godh mai sir rakh kar chain se so raha hota,apni bahno ke sath hans raha hota par in kutto ne tabah kar diya....
Raj ki ankhe jal uthi...
Rajeev--- uske ane ka samay ho gaya h....
Kuch dair baad
Road se ek police ki fortuner arahi thi ...aur aake road par ruki ....samne ka drishya he aisa tha...
Driver—sir ek admi gira huva h ..
Sp—dekh ke ao.
Kuch minut baad ab isai kya huva kanha mar gaya bc na pine dete h na jeene dete h aur jaise he gate khola
thud.....ki awaj se ek hath gale pe padta h aur ankhe band ho jati h jab dubara hosh ata h...tab khud ko latka huva pata h aur jaise he hilta h usai bahut jor se dard ki lahar mahusu hoti h .... uski cheek nikal jati h wo upar dekhta h toh uske hath nukele kaanto wale taar se bandhe the jo heelne se uski kalayi mai ghus gaye the dard mai usne pairo ko heelaya toh phir dard se chillaya niche board mai lagane wali pins pairo mai ghus gayi ...dard se uska sara sarir kanp gaya ....phir kuch dair baad bola koun h muje kyo pakda h ..... ......wo kuch dekh bi nahi sakta tha kyoki ankho pe patti bandhi thi....phir ek baar wo gaand faad chillaya kyoki uske pichwade pe garam sariya jo laga tha....wo dard se bil bilata chillaya main police wala hu wo itna he bola tha ki usko khud ki gotiyo se current ata huva pure sari mai mahusus huva aur wo jhatke khane laga...wo jitna bolta utna chikta...usai samaj agaya ki bolna bekar h ......3 hour tak u he chikta raha
Raj jo samne baitha tha...usne cutting playar ko utha liya aur ek ek karke uske nakhun ukhadne suru kiye wo jeetna hilta niche pin chubti upar wire kalayi mai aur andar ghus jate...uski cheek chillahat chikte chikte ab bandh ho gayi thi ....wo behosh ho gaya aur jab dubara hosh aya tab usne itna he bola kya chate ho par samne se usai koyi jawab nahi mila .mila toh sirf namak jo uske nakhuno ki jagah lagaya gaya uski tadap dekh raj ka nirwana jaag raha tha par ye ladayi ek bete ke badle ki thi.....72 hour tadpaane ke baad agle din raj ne keel uthayi aur uske dono pairo mai thok diii wo hila par heemat he nahi thi ki pairo ko utha sake...wo itna he bol pa raha tha...kya chahte ho
Ek awaj sunayiii....di usai kano mai...
Raj sirf ek sawal jawab ache se yaad karke dena aj se 16 saal pahle ... Ek pariwar par hamla huva tha jismai 3 aurte ek bacha aur baki mard the unke sath kya huva tha aur kisne kiya tha aur tune kyo kuch nahi kiya yaad karlena ek ghanta h tere pass ....
Raj—bol...
jaise jaise wo bolta gaya raj ki ankhe gusai aur ansuo se bharti gayi ...
Jaise he usne bolna band kiya .....Pura kamar cheek cheek chillahat se ghunjta gaya har pal raj ke gusai ki aag bhadti gayi...aur ant mai shanti cha gayi pure mahol mai ......sirf piche Sp latka huva tha jisai garam sariye se kitni maar padi thi jism par koyi andaza nahi tha ...raj ne uske pair ki hadiyo ke kitne tukde kiye usai khud nahi pata tha....
Rajeev--- Raj ...
Par raj ne koyi jawab nahi diya aur samne dekhta raha ......
Rajeev--- beta raj.....jo beet gaya h usko nahi roke paye uska afsouse mat karo ...aur usai dhundo jiski abhi aass baki h....
Raj—15 saal se jayda ho gaye h sir ...pata nahi kaisi hongi par main bi kasam khata unhe patal se bi dhund nikalunga ....bua ap chinta mat karna...main apko kuch nahi hone dunga....
Raj wapas ghar pahucha toh madhu shweta aur rinky manisha sab moujud thi shweta bahut chintit thi pichle kayi dino se. wo sab chod wapas agayi thi raj ke liye.... Madhu kuch bolti usai pahle he shweta ne rok diya ....aur boli abhi nahi mam...
Shweta--- coffee... Lati hu bhai...
Aur dheere se sabko samja kar wapas bhej diya unki bi kya galti thi raj 5 dinon se gayab tha aur kabhi kabhi phone pe ha na ka jawab deta tha....
Raj sofe be baith tha aur thakan uske chehre pe saaf dikh rahi thi...jo shweta ke dil ko rula rahi thi....
Shweta coffee piyo ...
Ye khamosi 10 minut aur rahi ....phir shweta ne raj ka sir apni godh mai rakh liya aur uske balo mai hath firane lagi ....raj piche 5 din aur rato se ache se soya nahi tha jaise he bahan ke pyar bhare sparsh mila wo nind ke agosh mai samata gaya ....kuch pal he sahi uske jeevan mai chinta dhuk gusa dur ho gaya tha ...shweta ne bi raj ke chahre se bhavo ko badalte huve dekha aur wo bi waise he sogayi......dono he pichle kayi salo se ek dusre ke sath dil se jude huve h...isliye kuch dino ki duri ke baad ek dusre ke ahsas ne dono ko he sukun diya....
Subhe jab madhu ayi ....
Madhu—oh ye dono toh yanhi he so gaye.....sach he kaha h maa ke baad agar bina moh ka pyar stree roop mai h toh wo bahan ka pyar h ....uparwala indono ko kabhi alag na kare....dekho jara kaise apne bhai ke upar he so rahi h .....Abhi disturb nahi karna chahiye Sunday h waise bi......ye huk mera hota agar raj muje pahle mila hota .....kismat kisai kya de de aur kya le le kuch pata nahi hota h par raj main tumse jo chahti hu wo toh leke rahungi aur muje viswas h tum mana nahi karoge.....
Subhe shweta ki nind khuli toh uske chahre pe bahut pyari ......muskaan thi wo dheere se khadi huvi aur chali gayi fresh hone........thodi dair baad he raj ki nind khul gayi....
Raj—oh....raat ko main shweta ki godh mai he sogaya.......achanak he uske expression change ho gaye aur phone nikalkar .....phone milaya...rajeev sir second target ...
Rajeev--- ok...kab
Raj—jald he .....
Rajeev—sp ka kya...??
Raj—jinda rahega itni jaldi maut nahi milegi ....bahut tadpega wo.....wo usi tahkhane mai tadap tadap ke marega bhuk pyas se ...
2 din pahle ki ghatna ......
Ek ladki bilakh bilakh ke ro rahi thi......
Pass mai ek aurat aur 2 admi khade the ...
Ladki--- meri bhul thi.... .....main uske bina nahi ji sakti hu ....wo jo saja dega main sab maan lungi ...par ussai main alag nahi rah sakti hu .....ab ap he mera akhiri sahara ho ..... wo muje kabhi maaf nahi karega....
Shaks—utho......anirudh isai bithao aur supriya isai pani pilao...
Anirudh—Thakur saab ek baar chote thakur saab ne hume jeevan daan diya tha hamri rakhsa karke....main aj apse apni beti ki khusiya bikh mai mangta hu ....ap ke yanha se kabhi koyi nirash hoke nahi gaya h hume bi nirash mat kijiye ..
Dadaji--- uth ke sahdev aur vidya ki photo ke pass gaye .....aur man mai bole dekh rahe ho sahdev main ek kasamkas mai fans gaya hu ek taraf wo h jo kuch na mang kar bi apna sara jeevan raj ke naam kar chuki h aur ek ye h jo raj ke sath jeene marne ki kasam kha chuki h ..aur vidya tumahre bete ko in dono ke samarpan ka ahsaas he nahi h ...main kya karu aj main pahli baar uljhan mai hu...ek taraf ek ko diya mera vachan h toh ek taraf raj ka pyar aur is ladki ki ankho ki sachayiiii...kya karu main....
Kuch dair baad ...
Dadaji--- tum mere sath ao ....
Ek hour tak dadaji ke room mai bate chali....
Jab richa bahar ayi toh uska chehra pila pada huva tha....ankho ke niche ansuo ki lakeere sukh chuki thi...ankhe puri trah lal ho chuki thiii......
Apni beti ki aisi halat dekh ek baap ka dil bi dhahal gaya ...
Richa ne sabke pair chuve aur wo wapas chal di uske dil mai kya tha aur kya nahi ye kisi ko bi nahi pata tha wo delhi tak chup chap baithi rahi aur agle din apni padhayi ke liye nikal gayi heemachal.....aur apni jindgi ki nayi suruwat kari usne subhe ki nayi kiran ke sath....
Aj ke liye itna he...
Apna beshkeemti likes aur sabd jarur likhe.....
Dhanyawad...
Dear kia kare ap ke update ka intjar rhta ha ap n khud h shadul bana ke dea h os time p update nhe aata tu maja nhe aata ap bhot aacha lekhte ho ager mare koe bat bure lage ho tu majratDear ap pahle sure ho jao ap kya kahna chahte ho pichle comment mai ap kahte ho ki formality kar rahe ho updates ki aj ap kah rahe ho ki update nahi dete ho .....kabhi ap kahte ho take your time......
Aisa kaisa chalega dear
Bura nahi confuse ho gaya tha update dont worry week mai 3 ayenge he ayenge jab update ko aur behter banane ki kosis ki jati h tab thoda time aur chahiye hota h ....readers ki umide badh gayi h dear .....thats why i need more time for OP update ....Dear kia kare ap ke update ka intjar rhta ha ap n khud h shadul bana ke dea h os time p update nhe aata tu maja nhe aata ap bhot aacha lekhte ho ager mare koe bat bure lage ho tu majrat
It's OK dearBura nahi confuse ho gaya tha update dont worry week mai 3 ayenge he ayenge jab update ko aur behter banane ki kosis ki jati h tab thoda time aur chahiye hota h ....readers ki umide badh gayi h dear .....thats why in need more time for OP update ....
Phle 4 update aate th ab sunday ko updat nhe aae geIt's OK dear
Bro adultery form mai isiliye rakhi h kyoki incest likh nahi sakta.....shivraj bhai....ap read karte jao story abhi first phase mai h phase bhadte jayenge aur levels bi apko sab samaj ajayega ...Bhai Raj ko supernatural power of Trinity milengi to vo itni sari ladkiyan shadi karke apni maa bua aur behen ko bachane me kamayab hoga.
Right isiliye kaha need more time for better update agai updates level push ho raha h ....dear.....Phle 4 update aate th ab sunday ko updat nhe aae ge
Nahi yanha thodi si mistake ho gayi h pashupati main gunda tha attack walo mai se aur jo us time us area ka inspecter tha wo aj sp ban gaya h usai utha liya hEpic update Sandeep singh nirwan bhai. Bahut hi badhiya, jahkaas wala tha ye Update.
To hmare Raj ne Pashupati ko utha liya Qiki us time ka Sp to wahi tha na.
Right yanha dono pahuchte h ya kuch aur ye dekhna wakayi dilchasp hone wala h yakuch aur different he seen ho jaye....Aur use such me itna tadpaya ki wo juth bolne ki soch bhi na sake. Usne uske sath jo bhi kiya mai to bahut happy hu is baat hai . Sath me ye to abhi shuruaat hai abhi to uske karmo ka fal bahut lamba chalne wala hai.
Ab aate hai is Raka par aakhir isne mele me nahi to kaha BOOM git kiya hai. Aur un sub jagah ka pata SS ki team lagati hai ya apna Raj ye bhi dekhne wali baat hogi.
Yes wo he jiske balbhute pe aj dadaji is umar tak jinda h .....agai ....pata lagega apkoSS ka dhmaka aur bheema chacha ka dar bhi bahut khub dikhaya aapne. Isase saaf pata chlta hai bheema chacha bhi koi mamuli person nahi hai.
Bus aa he gayo kaglo mandra rayo h bi ka seer par ...Raka ke din bhi bahut jldi hi aane wale hai.
Ek raj ki mausi thi aur ek raj ke pita....aur yanha sab richa ke liye galat anumaan laga rahe h...Aur ye last me jo ladki thi ye definitely Richa thi aur wo dono unke maa aur papa usne apne parents ko sub in short smjha diya hoga
Ye abhi nahi bata paunga but ha itna jarur kahunga ki raj ke regarding room mai 2 minut he baat huvi thi sirf..... Aur wo bhi khusi khusi maan gaye honge aakhir kon se maa baap raj aur aise parivar ko mana karenge. Aur Dada ji bhi dhram sankat me fas gaye lakin ant me wo maan hi gaye honge sath me unhone Richa ko raj ki sari sacchayi bhi bata diya hoga
Richa kya richa ka role he gayab ho gaya h ......ab kafi update tak 10 15 20may bi 30 update tak....jise sun kar hi uska ye haal hua hoga aur ab wo normal Richa nahi hogi wo Raj ke liye ek new Richa ban kr uske samne jayegi aur jitni ho ske uski help karegi.
Ha ye seen jarur best banane ki kosis karunga main.....iske liye time lag raha h ....Bua aur uski beti ke bare me bhi raj ko pata chal gaya hai ab dekhte hai wo kaise unko dundh nikalta hai. Ab unke dukh ke din bhi khtam hone wale hai.
Bus 97 98 99 100 ye full of thrill h....Dekhte hai aage aur kitna bawal hona bacha hai. Aur ye Second target kon hai.