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Update 263 ONE TWO THREE Posted Masti Mai padhne ka bindaas likes aur revoes pelne ka
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Thank youSuperb update![]()
Thank youNice update
Eagerly waiting for next update
Thank youNice update bhot awala par Kar Maza aya gya ab new update Ka intazar ha ha bhaii
Thank youUpdate 215
Awesome update
Bhai is actions scene ko jldi sa finish kro ab aur wait ne hta.......
Thank youToo
Too Good Sandeep bhai...![]()
Wo khatre mai hAction action aur sirf action...
Deepika safe.... Thanks to awesomeness of Abbay bhai...
Simran, shawini aur Rajni mam baki hai...
Likhna suru kar diya h jald milegaBhai ab wait ne ho rha is action scene ko jldi khatam kro next update thora jadli da
Bilkul raj ka war mai utarna toh abhi baki hRaj abi tak war ma utra b nai aur phli kamyabi mil gai hai thanks to his team n family....
Sex story toh har jagah but action emotion bahut kam hAnd again without sex or intimate scene this story is awesome with full of action suspense and thriller...
Thank youShandar update bro
Bilkul deta rahunga..Waaaaaaah sandeep bhai…maja aa gaya isi tarah jaldi jaldi updates dete raho to kya hi baat…awesome….![]()
Jald milega ..Bhai ab jaldi se aage le update do ab or intjaar nhi ho rha h
Thank youFantastic update![]()
Thank youAwesome update![]()
Thank youZabardast shandaar update![]()
Thank youBhut bhut shandar update bro
Thank youNic update
Ha ho sakta h rahul bhai...nanhe jasus jo h...Surprise update
Mandawa per hamla hone wala hai aur esse nikalne me Ajay aur janvi bahut help karengi drone se
Thank youBahut hi Shandaar update
Thank youNice update bro
Thank youYeh Jung to bohot katrnak or romanchak mod le Rahi hai.jab shuru hogi to or bi katarnak hogi Jung
Superb update
Thank you bro215 aur 216 dono updates dildhadak diye. Bhai Wakai aapki lekhani kamal ki hai. Pratiksha agle rasprd update ki
Thank youBeautiful update and excellent story
Jald milega..Intezar rahega next update ka bro
Thank youSuper update Bhai
Thank youKhatarnak update bhai. Hulk ne 2 level four ke ghost ko nipta diya. Maza a gya. Waiting for next
Thank youNice Update Dear nD thanks f0r Update 216
Thank youNice Update Dear
Bilkul bilkul ...Pa g zra jldi Sy
choti jasos kafi fast ja rhi hy
Ha ha ha .....wajah toh honi chahiye na action ke liyeSandeep bhai
Kya karwa kar manoge
Deepika to safe ho gayi
Abhi kya kah sakte h par unhone jasusi toh suru kar he di h kya pata kuch dikh he jayeBut Ajay aur janvi ke wajeh se haveli bhi safe ho jayegi
Kyoki unko sab pata chal jayega
Aur beema chacha alert ho jayenge
Ak ak ko chun chun kar marenge
Nahi aisa kuch nahi h sabke apne trap h aur sab perfectly game khel rahe h...aur unka result bhi khatarnaak he ayegaBut ap har kisi ko kaise bachaoge
But mujhe pata h ap bacha loge
Kyoki abhi kuch kirdar chupe hue h
Jaise wo wideshi fighter
Wo seene unki behan ka hona chahiye tha
Road wala jo apne pucha tha
Wo kaise bachayegi....Maza aagaya
Mujhe to deth hello aur raj ki fight ka intjar h
Aur mujhe is bar aisa kyo lagta h
Ki poonam aayegi fir se raj ko bachane
Kaho toh bharwadu uski maang kuch bhi ho sakta h bro...kuch bhi....maine toh soch rakha h wo kisi ne bhi socha nahi h...Is bar ak game aur mere demag mai aaya h
Kyoki dada ji ko pandit ne bataya tha
Ki raj ki pahli shadi hogi aur raj ko pata bhi n chalega
Kahi is fighte ke beech raj ke khoon se poonam ki mang to n bharne wale ap
Poonam khass h aur ho sakta h shadi ho bhi jaye par confirm nahi kah sakta huKyoki poonam ki kanya rashi h
Aur poonam hi kai bar apni jaan ko dav par laga kar raj ko bachayegi
Abhi toh aur maza ayega....Maza aa gaya pad kar
Thank youFantastic update
Thank youmast jabardast update diya hai brother
Aise suspense dete rahiye humara bp badate rahiye..
Thank youZabardast update brother.
Thank youDo no update mast hai
Thank youbhai ji Supper fantastic updates
Thank you so much samar bhaiMind-blowing awesome super se bhi uparrrr story and update![]()
Bilkul sabse protection shield he usko unlock ho gayi h ...aur baki teen toh giraft mai aahe chuki hEverything is going insane, mandwa par ranjan ka attack hone vala hai, Raj ki identity disclose ho chuki hai Jo shayad Raj ki sabse badi protection sheild thi ki uski real identity koi nahi janta but ab aisa nahi hai, Delhi par bhi attack ka pura plan taiyar hai Rajni aur Shiwani kidnap ho chuki hai aur sabse bada khatra khud Raj ke sath hi hai Death Halo.
Ultimate point samar bhai ..raj ab akela nahi h aur dhushman uski family ke baare mai sab janta h ...aur ab toh family bilkul pass h agar death halo ne zara bhi kami apan dikhays toh raj ki maut confirm ho jayegiii...Jab warrior akele ho to ladna aur dushman ko marna bahut aasan ho jata hai lekin agar aaspas apne log ho to pehli priority unhe bachane ki hoti hai Kavita Anu Poonam Manisha insab ke rehte Raj ke liye Death Halo se ladna aasan nahi hoga.
Point toh sahi pakda h ..par death halo ka motive raj ko buri tarah todna h aur baki ko ko marna aur agar baki ko na bhi maar paya raj ko he maar diya toh bhi wo jeet gaya....Deepika bechari karna to sahi chahti hai lekin filhal sab galat ho rha hai, use to Raj ne Abhay ki help se bacha liya, I thought ki ab kidnap hone ke baad direct Raj se death Halo ke samne hi mulakat hogi uski, akhir insab ki shuruaat to usi se huyi thi.
Ha ha ha level 4 ka jhappad thaYe Rahul to ek chaped me hi chitt ho gya, well level 4 ka thappad khaya hai to koi dosh nahi bechare ka![]()
Jab apke samne ayega tab sab clear ho jayega...aur apko wajeeb bhi lagega...Ek saal skip karna lekin ye death Halo vala chapter close karke, action scene skip mat kar dena![]()
Bilkul past ke update mai kya huva ye janne ki jigyasa rah jayegi sabke dil maiVaise ek saal skip karoge to bahut kuch reh jaega, vo Raj ke nana ke yahan kushti ka challenge aur uske bade mama ki ladki ki jo jabardasti shadi karva rahe hai.
Pasand ayega bus yahi kahungaWell let's see how you shape the whole plot.
Bilkul sahi kaha samar bhai ek writer ya story ko isiliye yaad kiya jata h ki kitni achi thi timely update arahe the ya nahi alag kya tha puri huvi thi ya nahi...dubara wo writer story likhega kya ...Ek kahani kitni achi hai iska sabse aasan paimana hai ki uske bare me reader baad me kitna sochte hai, agar koi buri kahani hogi to use koi yaad nahi karega agar kahani achi hogi to vo dimag se hategi hi nahi, aisi hi hai aapki ye story padkar bas do mag chalta rehta hai ki ab aage kya, what's next, you know alag alag scenario bante rehte hai.
Tahe dil se sukhriyaOne of the my two favourite story from here.
Pata h samar bhai likes he bahut hote h ....par kuch h ...ab main toh sab dekhta hu isliye pata hota h ki koun kanha maa bete ki chudayi update par bhi likh deta h mast update bhaiLekin har baar review dena possible nahi ho pata, I hope you understand. Whenever I came to your story koshish rehti hai ki sare previous update par like kar du.
Ek baar siraj bhai se consult karlo wo definetly koyi solution apko provide kara denge....Lekin index yaa phir pinned post se update link par click karne se xforum ki bajay exforum khul jata hai to phir se login karna padta hai. Isliye sab updates like nahi ho pati. Because main har update par online nahi aata.
Bada update h jo approx 4 k likh chuka hu pechida h waqt lagega bro..Sandeep bahi update Ka bhot besabri se intezar Kar rahe hai I hope ki kal Raat tak a Jaye ga update or ye bhi pata hai ki bahut zabrdast update ho ga I'm vetting for updates Bhai
Ayega ayega