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Fantasy Raj tha son of God

Egin

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Heroine apna sister nahi banana
Hallo friends me ek aur story start karne ja rha hu asha hi app sb sath denge

phle me apko story ke character ka introduction de rha hu 1 Update night me ayega 7 din me se 4 din update ayega





Character introduction of story............


1. ) Hero ....... Raj Pratap Singh Thakur

2 . ) Father of hero ......... Pratap Singh Thakur

3 . ) Real mother of hero ........ Swati Pratap Singh Thakur

4. ) Second mother of hero......... Shalini Pratap Singh Thakur

5 . ) Heroine od story ( sister of Raj ) ......
Priya Pratap Singh Thakur


6.) Grand father of hero ......... Veer Pratap Thakur ( ye Rajgadh ke Raja hi )

7. ) Grand mother of hero .......... Rati bai Thakur ( ye Rajgadh ki maharani hi )

Age jese jese character Nate rahenge me introduction deta Rhunga

Friends ye story kai part me hi

First part me magic nhi hoga
heroine aapna sister nai banana chaiyetha bhai achchha nai lagrahahe ye mera opinion he baaki aapka marji.
 

Raj Singh Thakur

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Heroine apna sister nahi banana

heroine aapna sister nai banana chaiyetha bhai achchha nai lagrahahe ye mera opinion he baaki aapka marji.
Egin bhai heroine hero ki real sister nhi ye ek Raaz hi ji bad me khulega
Bs app sath dete rhe heroine ek bhut bada Raaz hi ji bad me pta chlega bhai app sath bnaye rakhe
 

Raj Singh Thakur

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Heroine apna sister nahi banana

heroine aapna sister nai banana chaiyetha bhai achchha nai lagrahahe ye mera opinion he baaki aapka marji.
Bhai meri story me sex nhai add hoga hoga to magic aur sacha pyar Thriller and war between powerfull person app ka khna sahi hi mene heroine hero ki sis ko nhi add kia hi sister me ek bhut bada Raaz hi age dekhte jayie kya hota hi

Wese bhi mugjhe insects story achi nhi lagti
Sister , mother ye samaj ke pavitra rishta hota hi

App ne is bare me dyan dia uske liye Thank you Egin bhai
Meri koi bhi story me insects nhi hoga
Thanks ....... Raj Singh Thakur
 

Raj Singh Thakur

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Update ............ 3

( Dosto story ko age se likhunga ab kuch update bad flashback start hoga )





Ajj pheli bar Raj Thakur har gya ghin a rhi thi mugje kudh pr itna niche kya koi itna niche bhi gir sakta tha pta nhai lakin me gir gya



Ma rona chahta tha likin ro nhai pa rha tha jine ki kwaies khatam ho gyi thi

marna chta tha likin mout mere jise badnasib ko nhi mili bs mila to badnami

ka wo dag jo kabhi mera daman nhai chorega



AJJ pheli bar me sharab pi rha tha log khte hi ki jo jindagi se har jaye use ye sahara de sakta tha kam se kam kuch ghante hi shi lakin mugje koi asar nhai ho rha tha



Log kahte hi ki is sharab ko piker

Sare gam bulaye jate hi

Lakin unko nhai pata Raj itna badnasib hi ki use is sali

Sharab ne bhi dokha de dia

lakin is sharab ka kya kasoor

Sala kasoor to apni kismat ka hi na.





sharab pita ja rha tha aur car chlata ja rha tha ankhon se ansu gir rhe the

lakin in Anson ka kya kasoor ye ajj tk jb vhi gire the inko girne se pehle usne rok lia tha lakin ajj wo nhai thi mere pas wo mugh se bhut dur chli gyai thi itni dur syad ab kabhi na mile



gin a rhai thi ajj mugjhe khud se kub rona chahta tha akele gadi ki speed itna tez thi ki jitna wo bhag sakti thi ut a tez kr dia tha mene.



Ajj pehli bar esa hua tha ki mughe dar Laga tha koi apni chez khone ka dar

ajj dunia khatam ho gyi thi meri



jb Priya us ladke ki baho me thi to esa laga ki jese me ye kaynat hi mita du

ajj ek tamna thi to thi ye ki mughe mout miljay



ajj dar dikha tha mugjhe jo dar me puri duniya ko dikhaya tha ajj is jahan ne mughe dikha dia tha



Ajj me Raj Pratap Singh Thakur ( Tha king ) marna chahta tha



Tha king ......... wo nam hi jisse ye puri duniya thar - thar kapti thi bade - bade underworld don ye nam sun kud ko kud hi mout ke ghar utar dete the



ye wo nam hi jise mene masoum Raj se Tha king banne pr rkha tha ajj duniya mere pero pr thi pr mera sb kuch lut chuka tha









Dil me itna dard ho rha tha ki is dard se acha tha ki meri jan chli jati



Me apni socho me pahuch gya ki ajj mene kya socha tha aur kya ho gya Subha me kitna kush tha ki ajj me apni jan se 8 salo bad milunga



Koi pyar karta hi to 6 mahine se 1 year se 2 year se aur mene pure 10 salo se jb mughe ye vhi nhai bhi pata tha ki pyar ka matalab kya hota hi



Kya socha tha hmne aur kya ho gya



Jb us ladke ki baho me hmne apni jan ko dekha to esa laga ki me usi pal mar jau



Marne bhi ja rha tha lakin phir socha use bhi me mar dunga jisne meri jan ko hath lagay ajj to me ghar ja nhai sakta tha



Kyoki mene itni sharab pi li thi ki ager me ghar jata to pta nhai kya ho jata ye mughe bhi nhai pata



Me Rajgadh se bhut dur agya tha rote - rote daribe karte karte mene ek hotel dekh kr apni car roki aur car se nikla aur ander chla gya



sath me mene 2000 ki kuch noto ke bandal le lia



jb me car se nikla to sb mugje hi dekh rhe the



kyoki me 16 year ka ladka jo itna acha lagta tha ki sb kahte ki kya koi itna bhi sumder ho sakta hi



gale me diamond ki mala hato me diamond ki rings aur ek diamond ki watch jb me hotel ke ander gya









( Dosto mene bhut bada updete likha tha lekin copy nhai kia tha aur wo delete ho gya bhut dimag bekar ho gya lakin fir bhi mene likha dosto ab me 3 days roj 2 update donga kyoki ajj mene app sb ko bda Update nhai de paya

thanks read and enjoy friend






 

Luffy

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Update ............ 3

( Dosto story ko age se likhunga ab kuch update bad flashback start hoga )





Ajj pheli bar Raj Thakur har gya ghin a rhi thi mugje kudh pr itna niche kya koi itna niche bhi gir sakta tha pta nhai lakin me gir gya



Ma rona chahta tha likin ro nhai pa rha tha jine ki kwaies khatam ho gyi thi

marna chta tha likin mout mere jise badnasib ko nhi mili bs mila to badnami

ka wo dag jo kabhi mera daman nhai chorega



AJJ pheli bar me sharab pi rha tha log khte hi ki jo jindagi se har jaye use ye sahara de sakta tha kam se kam kuch ghante hi shi lakin mugje koi asar nhai ho rha tha



Log kahte hi ki is sharab ko piker

Sare gam bulaye jate hi

Lakin unko nhai pata Raj itna badnasib hi ki use is sali

Sharab ne bhi dokha de dia

lakin is sharab ka kya kasoor

Sala kasoor to apni kismat ka hi na.





sharab pita ja rha tha aur car chlata ja rha tha ankhon se ansu gir rhe the

lakin in Anson ka kya kasoor ye ajj tk jb vhi gire the inko girne se pehle usne rok lia tha lakin ajj wo nhai thi mere pas wo mugh se bhut dur chli gyai thi itni dur syad ab kabhi na mile



gin a rhai thi ajj mugjhe khud se kub rona chahta tha akele gadi ki speed itna tez thi ki jitna wo bhag sakti thi ut a tez kr dia tha mene.



Ajj pehli bar esa hua tha ki mughe dar Laga tha koi apni chez khone ka dar

ajj dunia khatam ho gyi thi meri



jb Priya us ladke ki baho me thi to esa laga ki jese me ye kaynat hi mita du

ajj ek tamna thi to thi ye ki mughe mout miljay



ajj dar dikha tha mugjhe jo dar me puri duniya ko dikhaya tha ajj is jahan ne mughe dikha dia tha



Ajj me Raj Pratap Singh Thakur ( Tha king ) marna chahta tha



Tha king ......... wo nam hi jisse ye puri duniya thar - thar kapti thi bade - bade underworld don ye nam sun kud ko kud hi mout ke ghar utar dete the



ye wo nam hi jise mene masoum Raj se Tha king banne pr rkha tha ajj duniya mere pero pr thi pr mera sb kuch lut chuka tha









Dil me itna dard ho rha tha ki is dard se acha tha ki meri jan chli jati



Me apni socho me pahuch gya ki ajj mene kya socha tha aur kya ho gya Subha me kitna kush tha ki ajj me apni jan se 8 salo bad milunga



Koi pyar karta hi to 6 mahine se 1 year se 2 year se aur mene pure 10 salo se jb mughe ye vhi nhai bhi pata tha ki pyar ka matalab kya hota hi



Kya socha tha hmne aur kya ho gya



Jb us ladke ki baho me hmne apni jan ko dekha to esa laga ki me usi pal mar jau



Marne bhi ja rha tha lakin phir socha use bhi me mar dunga jisne meri jan ko hath lagay ajj to me ghar ja nhai sakta tha



Kyoki mene itni sharab pi li thi ki ager me ghar jata to pta nhai kya ho jata ye mughe bhi nhai pata



Me Rajgadh se bhut dur agya tha rote - rote daribe karte karte mene ek hotel dekh kr apni car roki aur car se nikla aur ander chla gya



sath me mene 2000 ki kuch noto ke bandal le lia



jb me car se nikla to sb mugje hi dekh rhe the



kyoki me 16 year ka ladka jo itna acha lagta tha ki sb kahte ki kya koi itna bhi sumder ho sakta hi



gale me diamond ki mala hato me diamond ki rings aur ek diamond ki watch jb me hotel ke ander gya









( Dosto mene bhut bada updete likha tha lekin copy nhai kia tha aur wo delete ho gya bhut dimag bekar ho gya lakin fir bhi mene likha dosto ab me 3 days roj 2 update donga kyoki ajj mene app sb ko bda Update nhai de paya

thanks read and enjoy friend
Awesome update
 
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