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Fantasy Raj tha son of God

ABHISHEK TRIPATHI

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Update ............ 3

( Dosto story ko age se likhunga ab kuch update bad flashback start hoga )





Ajj pheli bar Raj Thakur har gya ghin a rhi thi mugje kudh pr itna niche kya koi itna niche bhi gir sakta tha pta nhai lakin me gir gya



Ma rona chahta tha likin ro nhai pa rha tha jine ki kwaies khatam ho gyi thi

marna chta tha likin mout mere jise badnasib ko nhi mili bs mila to badnami

ka wo dag jo kabhi mera daman nhai chorega



AJJ pheli bar me sharab pi rha tha log khte hi ki jo jindagi se har jaye use ye sahara de sakta tha kam se kam kuch ghante hi shi lakin mugje koi asar nhai ho rha tha



Log kahte hi ki is sharab ko piker

Sare gam bulaye jate hi

Lakin unko nhai pata Raj itna badnasib hi ki use is sali

Sharab ne bhi dokha de dia

lakin is sharab ka kya kasoor

Sala kasoor to apni kismat ka hi na.





sharab pita ja rha tha aur car chlata ja rha tha ankhon se ansu gir rhe the

lakin in Anson ka kya kasoor ye ajj tk jb vhi gire the inko girne se pehle usne rok lia tha lakin ajj wo nhai thi mere pas wo mugh se bhut dur chli gyai thi itni dur syad ab kabhi na mile



gin a rhai thi ajj mugjhe khud se kub rona chahta tha akele gadi ki speed itna tez thi ki jitna wo bhag sakti thi ut a tez kr dia tha mene.



Ajj pehli bar esa hua tha ki mughe dar Laga tha koi apni chez khone ka dar

ajj dunia khatam ho gyi thi meri



jb Priya us ladke ki baho me thi to esa laga ki jese me ye kaynat hi mita du

ajj ek tamna thi to thi ye ki mughe mout miljay



ajj dar dikha tha mugjhe jo dar me puri duniya ko dikhaya tha ajj is jahan ne mughe dikha dia tha



Ajj me Raj Pratap Singh Thakur ( Tha king ) marna chahta tha



Tha king ......... wo nam hi jisse ye puri duniya thar - thar kapti thi bade - bade underworld don ye nam sun kud ko kud hi mout ke ghar utar dete the



ye wo nam hi jise mene masoum Raj se Tha king banne pr rkha tha ajj duniya mere pero pr thi pr mera sb kuch lut chuka tha









Dil me itna dard ho rha tha ki is dard se acha tha ki meri jan chli jati



Me apni socho me pahuch gya ki ajj mene kya socha tha aur kya ho gya Subha me kitna kush tha ki ajj me apni jan se 8 salo bad milunga



Koi pyar karta hi to 6 mahine se 1 year se 2 year se aur mene pure 10 salo se jb mughe ye vhi nhai bhi pata tha ki pyar ka matalab kya hota hi



Kya socha tha hmne aur kya ho gya



Jb us ladke ki baho me hmne apni jan ko dekha to esa laga ki me usi pal mar jau



Marne bhi ja rha tha lakin phir socha use bhi me mar dunga jisne meri jan ko hath lagay ajj to me ghar ja nhai sakta tha



Kyoki mene itni sharab pi li thi ki ager me ghar jata to pta nhai kya ho jata ye mughe bhi nhai pata



Me Rajgadh se bhut dur agya tha rote - rote daribe karte karte mene ek hotel dekh kr apni car roki aur car se nikla aur ander chla gya



sath me mene 2000 ki kuch noto ke bandal le lia



jb me car se nikla to sb mugje hi dekh rhe the



kyoki me 16 year ka ladka jo itna acha lagta tha ki sb kahte ki kya koi itna bhi sumder ho sakta hi



gale me diamond ki mala hato me diamond ki rings aur ek diamond ki watch jb me hotel ke ander gya









( Dosto mene bhut bada updete likha tha lekin copy nhai kia tha aur wo delete ho gya bhut dimag bekar ho gya lakin fir bhi mene likha dosto ab me 3 days roj 2 update donga kyoki ajj mene app sb ko bda Update nhai de paya

thanks read and enjoy friend






Nice update
 

Egin

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Bhai meri story me sex nhai add hoga hoga to magic aur sacha pyar Thriller and war between powerfull person app ka khna sahi hi mene heroine hero ki sis ko nhi add kia hi sister me ek bhut bada Raaz hi age dekhte jayie kya hota hi

Wese bhi mugjhe insects story achi nhi lagti
Sister , mother ye samaj ke pavitra rishta hota hi

App ne is bare me dyan dia uske liye Thank you Egin bhai
Meri koi bhi story me insects nhi hoga
Thanks ....... Raj Singh Thakur
Thank u bro.
 

Lucky..

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Hallo friends me ek aur story start karne ja rha hu asha hi app sb sath denge

phle me apko story ke character ka introduction de rha hu 1 Update night me ayega 7 din me se 4 din update ayega





Character introduction of story............


1. ) Hero ....... Raj Pratap Singh Thakur

2 . ) Father of hero ......... Pratap Singh Thakur

3 . ) Real mother of hero ........ Swati Pratap Singh Thakur

4. ) Second mother of hero......... Shalini Pratap Singh Thakur

5 . ) Heroine od story ( sister of Raj ) ......
Priya Pratap Singh Thakur


6.) Grand father of hero ......... Veer Pratap Thakur ( ye Rajgadh ke Raja hi )

7. ) Grand mother of hero .......... Rati bai Thakur ( ye Rajgadh ki maharani hi )

Age jese jese character Nate rahenge me introduction deta Rhunga

Friends ye story kai part me hi

First part me magic nhi hoga
Nice INTRO
 

Lucky..

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Update number .......... Second (2)
kuch der bad Pratap aur uske ghar wale Raj Mahal pahuche wha unhe ajj rhna tha kl unhe wha se Rajnagar ke liye Nikalna tha

kuch ser bad sb fresh hokr aye aur hall me bethe

Rati Devi .......... Pratap beta fresh ho liye

Pratap ......... Ji maa sa

Veer Pratap Singh .......... Beta mara aur tumhari maa ka ye khna hi ki ab tumhe shadi kr lena chahiye

Pratap Singh Thakur ( kabhi apne mata pita ke baat ka ulnghn nhi karta tha ) ..... Je jesa app khe Pita ji

Veer Pratap........ Beta ab tum 24 year ke ho gye ho ab tumhe shadi kr lena chahiye hmne tumhari shadi hmare bchpan ke Mitra Kabir Thakur ki dono beti se krne ka feshla lia tha kya nam tha un dono ka ha Swati aur Shalini

AB bhut din hogya hi Kabir se baat hi nhi huI hi jb se unke mata pita ka dehant ho gya pta nhi wo kha chle gye

Tumahra itna bada phuch hi kisi Aadmi se kh do pta karne ke liye ajj hm chalte hi evining tk unse riste ke liye baat karne

Pratap ....... Pita ji galti ki mafhi dena lakin kya 2 ladkiyo se shadi karna thik rhega

Rati Devi ...... Hahaha mra pyara beta hmarinitni ijjat karta hu ki apni baat khne se bhi darta hi
beta Tum ab kuch hi mhino me Rajgadh ke Raja banne wale ho aur wo dono ladkiya bhi bhen hi wo bhi judwa aur samaj dar bhi hi tum is baat ki chinta mt karo

Veer Pratap Singh Thakur....... Ha beta tumhari maa sa shi kh rhi hi

Pratap ....... Jesi app dono ki marji me abhi pta karta hu

fir uske bad Pratap Singh Thakur ne kisi ko phone kia aur kAbir Singh ki kuch information di aur unhe pta karne ko kha

Pratap Singh Thakur....... Pita ji hmne unka pata karne ke liye kh dia hi bs kuch der me pta chl jayega

Veer Aur Rati ...... Thik hi beta

uske bad kuch khas nhi hua evining tk Pratap Singh Thakur ke Aadmi ne ye pata kr ke bta dia ki Kabir Ji kha rhte hi

Time ....... Evining 4.00 baje

Pratap Singh Thakur apne mata pita ke room me gye

pratap ........ Pita ji hmne pta kr lia hi unke bare me wo log Delhi ki Tender clony me rhte hi

Veer ....... Bhut ache ab hm kuch der me unke yha jayenge

Veer aur Rati Devi bhut kush nthe akhir ho bhi kyo na unke bete ki shadi ka Rishta laker jo ja rhe the

kuch der bad Rati ,Veer aur Pratap Singh Thakur ek bhut achi car me jo ki india me abhi nI ayi thi usse aur age paiche security ki 100 gadi sath me Z security aur duniya ke top Asians ke sath us colony ki trafh chl dia jha se inka kafhila niklata log dekhne lagte

Ab ayie thoda Kabir Singh ke bare me Jan lete hi

kabir Singh Rathod......... Ye phle Maharaja Veer Pratap Singh Thakur ke dost the aur ye bhut ache insan hi inki do beti hi aur inki patni ki deth ho gyi hi ye ek collage me professor hi

Shalini Singh Rathod ........ Ye kabir singh ki beti hi inke bare me app ko story me pta chlega bs abhi ke liye app itna samajh lijiye ki ye bhut achi hi aur sabki madad karti hi

Swati Singh Rathod ...... Ye kabir singh ki dushari beti hi aur ye bhi bhut achi hi apni bhen ki trah

kuch der bad Pratap Singh Thakur ka kaphila kabir ji ke ghar phuchta hi

jb Pratap Singh Thakur aur Maharaja Veer Pratap Singh Thakur aur Maharani Rati bai Thakur aur sath me sekado asian aur z security aur body gurd rhte hi

jb ye sb wha puchte hi to dekhte hi
ki Kabir Ji kuch Aadmi ke sath bate kr rhe hot hi wha do ladke rhte hi aur unke mata pita jo Shalini aur Swati ko dekhne aye the

Veer jaldi se apne dost ki trafh badhe lekin unki baat sun le rok gye fir bhut gussa ho gye

Aadmi ........ mera beta mere bete world business king Pratap Singh Thakur ki company me kam karte hi jo sb ka sapna hota hi

Aur app hame itna km dahej de rhe hi

Nhi karna hme ye Rishta

Tbi wha ek robdar awaj gunjti hi

veer Pratap Singh Thakur...... Tum kya ye Rishta kroge ager ek sabad bhi bola to dubara bolne ke liye tum jinda hi nhi rhahoge

jise hi wo sb aur Shalini Swati aur kabir ji mudkr itne Security dekh kr to sb khade ho gye

tbhi piche se Pratap Singh Thakur aya kuch security use gher hui thi

Pratap Singh Thakur....... Hto sb jese hi sb hte un logo ne jb Pratap Singh Thakur ko dekha to sock ho gye

Ladka 1 ...... Dad ye to world business king Kuwar Pratap Singh Thakur hi

sab ekdm sann rh gye ki duniya ka sbse bada biasness man aya kya kr rha hi

Pratap Singh Thakur phle jaker kabir ke pair chuye to sb aur bhi sock ho gye

Veer Pratap Singh Thakur ...... Tumhari himmat kese Hui kabir ki tum hmari bahuwo ki sadi khi aur krawo jb ki tumhara Damad tumhare pass hi

Veer ...... Rati dekh kya rhi ho jao apni bahu se milo

rati devi gyi aur Swati aur Shalini ko apne gle se lga lia
Veer ..... Kabir phle insb ko yha se bhejo me tum sb se bad me milta hu

Security ne unhe bahr kia Beer Pratap Singh Thakur doud kr kabir ki gale lga lia

kabir ... Kese ho Veer bhai

Veer Pratap Singh Thakur...... Me thik hu lakin ye tum acha nhi kr rhe ho tumhara Damad hote hue bhi tum apni beti ki shadi dushri jagah kr rhe ho

kabir ...... Kha app Raja aur kha me bhikhari
app ka aur mera kya brabri kha Pratap beta world biasness king kha meri betiya

Rati Devi ...... Bhai shahb ager dobara meri betiyo ko apne kuch bhi kha to acha nhi hoga

Pratap Singh Thakur........ Papa ji me Pratap Singh Thakur app ko wachan deta hu jb tk mere sharir me jaan rhegi me apke dono betiyo ko koi bhi dukh nhi hone dunga

Kabir ....... Beta kha app kha me
Nice update
 

Jaguaar

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Update ............ 3

( Dosto story ko age se likhunga ab kuch update bad flashback start hoga )





Ajj pheli bar Raj Thakur har gya ghin a rhi thi mugje kudh pr itna niche kya koi itna niche bhi gir sakta tha pta nhai lakin me gir gya



Ma rona chahta tha likin ro nhai pa rha tha jine ki kwaies khatam ho gyi thi

marna chta tha likin mout mere jise badnasib ko nhi mili bs mila to badnami

ka wo dag jo kabhi mera daman nhai chorega



AJJ pheli bar me sharab pi rha tha log khte hi ki jo jindagi se har jaye use ye sahara de sakta tha kam se kam kuch ghante hi shi lakin mugje koi asar nhai ho rha tha



Log kahte hi ki is sharab ko piker

Sare gam bulaye jate hi

Lakin unko nhai pata Raj itna badnasib hi ki use is sali

Sharab ne bhi dokha de dia

lakin is sharab ka kya kasoor

Sala kasoor to apni kismat ka hi na.





sharab pita ja rha tha aur car chlata ja rha tha ankhon se ansu gir rhe the

lakin in Anson ka kya kasoor ye ajj tk jb vhi gire the inko girne se pehle usne rok lia tha lakin ajj wo nhai thi mere pas wo mugh se bhut dur chli gyai thi itni dur syad ab kabhi na mile



gin a rhai thi ajj mugjhe khud se kub rona chahta tha akele gadi ki speed itna tez thi ki jitna wo bhag sakti thi ut a tez kr dia tha mene.



Ajj pehli bar esa hua tha ki mughe dar Laga tha koi apni chez khone ka dar

ajj dunia khatam ho gyi thi meri



jb Priya us ladke ki baho me thi to esa laga ki jese me ye kaynat hi mita du

ajj ek tamna thi to thi ye ki mughe mout miljay



ajj dar dikha tha mugjhe jo dar me puri duniya ko dikhaya tha ajj is jahan ne mughe dikha dia tha



Ajj me Raj Pratap Singh Thakur ( Tha king ) marna chahta tha



Tha king ......... wo nam hi jisse ye puri duniya thar - thar kapti thi bade - bade underworld don ye nam sun kud ko kud hi mout ke ghar utar dete the



ye wo nam hi jise mene masoum Raj se Tha king banne pr rkha tha ajj duniya mere pero pr thi pr mera sb kuch lut chuka tha









Dil me itna dard ho rha tha ki is dard se acha tha ki meri jan chli jati



Me apni socho me pahuch gya ki ajj mene kya socha tha aur kya ho gya Subha me kitna kush tha ki ajj me apni jan se 8 salo bad milunga



Koi pyar karta hi to 6 mahine se 1 year se 2 year se aur mene pure 10 salo se jb mughe ye vhi nhai bhi pata tha ki pyar ka matalab kya hota hi



Kya socha tha hmne aur kya ho gya



Jb us ladke ki baho me hmne apni jan ko dekha to esa laga ki me usi pal mar jau



Marne bhi ja rha tha lakin phir socha use bhi me mar dunga jisne meri jan ko hath lagay ajj to me ghar ja nhai sakta tha



Kyoki mene itni sharab pi li thi ki ager me ghar jata to pta nhai kya ho jata ye mughe bhi nhai pata



Me Rajgadh se bhut dur agya tha rote - rote daribe karte karte mene ek hotel dekh kr apni car roki aur car se nikla aur ander chla gya



sath me mene 2000 ki kuch noto ke bandal le lia



jb me car se nikla to sb mugje hi dekh rhe the



kyoki me 16 year ka ladka jo itna acha lagta tha ki sb kahte ki kya koi itna bhi sumder ho sakta hi



gale me diamond ki mala hato me diamond ki rings aur ek diamond ki watch jb me hotel ke ander gya









( Dosto mene bhut bada updete likha tha lekin copy nhai kia tha aur wo delete ho gya bhut dimag bekar ho gya lakin fir bhi mene likha dosto ab me 3 days roj 2 update donga kyoki ajj mene app sb ko bda Update nhai de paya

thanks read and enjoy friend
Nice Update
 

Nevil singh

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Update ............ 3

( Dosto story ko age se likhunga ab kuch update bad flashback start hoga )





Ajj pheli bar Raj Thakur har gya ghin a rhi thi mugje kudh pr itna niche kya koi itna niche bhi gir sakta tha pta nhai lakin me gir gya



Ma rona chahta tha likin ro nhai pa rha tha jine ki kwaies khatam ho gyi thi

marna chta tha likin mout mere jise badnasib ko nhi mili bs mila to badnami

ka wo dag jo kabhi mera daman nhai chorega



AJJ pheli bar me sharab pi rha tha log khte hi ki jo jindagi se har jaye use ye sahara de sakta tha kam se kam kuch ghante hi shi lakin mugje koi asar nhai ho rha tha



Log kahte hi ki is sharab ko piker

Sare gam bulaye jate hi

Lakin unko nhai pata Raj itna badnasib hi ki use is sali

Sharab ne bhi dokha de dia

lakin is sharab ka kya kasoor

Sala kasoor to apni kismat ka hi na.





sharab pita ja rha tha aur car chlata ja rha tha ankhon se ansu gir rhe the

lakin in Anson ka kya kasoor ye ajj tk jb vhi gire the inko girne se pehle usne rok lia tha lakin ajj wo nhai thi mere pas wo mugh se bhut dur chli gyai thi itni dur syad ab kabhi na mile



gin a rhai thi ajj mugjhe khud se kub rona chahta tha akele gadi ki speed itna tez thi ki jitna wo bhag sakti thi ut a tez kr dia tha mene.



Ajj pehli bar esa hua tha ki mughe dar Laga tha koi apni chez khone ka dar

ajj dunia khatam ho gyi thi meri



jb Priya us ladke ki baho me thi to esa laga ki jese me ye kaynat hi mita du

ajj ek tamna thi to thi ye ki mughe mout miljay



ajj dar dikha tha mugjhe jo dar me puri duniya ko dikhaya tha ajj is jahan ne mughe dikha dia tha



Ajj me Raj Pratap Singh Thakur ( Tha king ) marna chahta tha



Tha king ......... wo nam hi jisse ye puri duniya thar - thar kapti thi bade - bade underworld don ye nam sun kud ko kud hi mout ke ghar utar dete the



ye wo nam hi jise mene masoum Raj se Tha king banne pr rkha tha ajj duniya mere pero pr thi pr mera sb kuch lut chuka tha









Dil me itna dard ho rha tha ki is dard se acha tha ki meri jan chli jati



Me apni socho me pahuch gya ki ajj mene kya socha tha aur kya ho gya Subha me kitna kush tha ki ajj me apni jan se 8 salo bad milunga



Koi pyar karta hi to 6 mahine se 1 year se 2 year se aur mene pure 10 salo se jb mughe ye vhi nhai bhi pata tha ki pyar ka matalab kya hota hi



Kya socha tha hmne aur kya ho gya



Jb us ladke ki baho me hmne apni jan ko dekha to esa laga ki me usi pal mar jau



Marne bhi ja rha tha lakin phir socha use bhi me mar dunga jisne meri jan ko hath lagay ajj to me ghar ja nhai sakta tha



Kyoki mene itni sharab pi li thi ki ager me ghar jata to pta nhai kya ho jata ye mughe bhi nhai pata



Me Rajgadh se bhut dur agya tha rote - rote daribe karte karte mene ek hotel dekh kr apni car roki aur car se nikla aur ander chla gya



sath me mene 2000 ki kuch noto ke bandal le lia



jb me car se nikla to sb mugje hi dekh rhe the



kyoki me 16 year ka ladka jo itna acha lagta tha ki sb kahte ki kya koi itna bhi sumder ho sakta hi



gale me diamond ki mala hato me diamond ki rings aur ek diamond ki watch jb me hotel ke ander gya









( Dosto mene bhut bada updete likha tha lekin copy nhai kia tha aur wo delete ho gya bhut dimag bekar ho gya lakin fir bhi mene likha dosto ab me 3 days roj 2 update donga kyoki ajj mene app sb ko bda Update nhai de paya

thanks read and enjoy friend






Nice update dost
 
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