Fantasy RAJ -The mystery man (thriller & Magic)

[Naughtyrishabh]

Intjar

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

waiting for the next update

 

[mysteryman]

शानदार अपडेट भाई

Mast update h bhai Maza aa gya

Super update hai bhai waiting for next update

awesome

Ye Dil Mange More!!!!

Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Aage ka intjar

waiting for the next update

Aap sabhi logon ka bohot bohot sukriya support karne ke liye.

kuchh karno kr chalte mein regular updatrs nhi de pa rha hun jis ki bajah se is story ke liye logo ka intrest khatam ho gya hai...


Regular update na dene ke liye mein maafi mangna chahata hun for reading story...

aaj sham tak ek update to mil hi jayega shayad do bhi de dun.

 

[Malik-18]

Aap sabhi logon ka bohot bohot sukriya support karne ke liye.

kuchh karno kr chalte mein regular updatrs nhi de pa rha hun jis ki bajah se is story ke liye logo ka intrest khatam ho gya hai...


Regular update na dene ke liye mein maafi mangna chahata hun for reading story...
aaj sham tak ek update to mil hi jayega shayad do bhi de dun.

CHLO BHAI INTZAAR RHE GA AP K UPDATE KA...

YE TO AP NE THK KAHA K UPDATES REGULAR NAH ANE KI WAJAH SE STORY SE INTEREST KHATAM HO RHA HAI...

WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE...​

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

okay bhai waiting for the next update

 

[mysteryman]

CHLO BHAI INTZAAR RHE GA AP K UPDATE KA...

YE TO AP NE THK KAHA K UPDATES REGULAR NAH ANE KI WAJAH SE STORY SE INTEREST KHATAM HO RHA HAI...

WAITING FOR NEXT UPDATE...​

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ha bhai ek reader hone ki vajah se mujhe pta hai ki meri story kaisi hai aur kitna intrest ho sakta hai readers ka ab tak ki story mein...sachhai ko jhutlane ki meri adat nhi ab tak ki story mein aisa kuchh khas nhi hua hai jo readers ka intrest banaye rakhe aur unhe bandhe rakhe...


khair achha laga apko is story ke sath bane hue dekhkar asha hai aaj ka update kuchh behtar ho pichhle walon se...

 

[mysteryman]

okay bhai waiting for the next update

Thanks for supporting bhai...likh rha hun jald se jald koshish rahegi post karne ki...

 

[Malik-18]

ha bhai ek reader hone ki vajah se mujhe pta hai ki meri story kaisi hai aur kitna intrest ho sakta hai readers ka ab tak ki story mein...sachhai ko jhutlane ki meri adat nhi ab tak ki story mein aisa kuchh khas nhi hua hai jo readers ka intrest banaye rakhe aur unhe bandhe rakhe...


khair achha laga apko is story ke sath bane hue dekhkar asha hai aaj ka update kuchh behtar ho pichhle walon se...

BHAI YE BAAT NAHI HAI K STORY INTERESTING NAHI HAI...STORY ACHI HAI...

JESE STORY START HUI...RAJ APNI BEHAN SE ITNA PYAR KARTA HAI...US KI BADI CHACHI US SE NAFRAT KARTI HAI...WO KYUN KARTI HAI...WAGERA WAGERA...

CHOTI CHACHI AUR PRIYA KA BHI SUSPENSE ACHA CHAL RAHI HAI...

DEKHA JAYE TO STORY FULLY INTERESTED HAI...BAS REGULAR NAH HONE KI WAJAH SE INTEREST THORA KAM HO GEYA...​

 

[CG]

Nice updates ......

4 next one bhai....... koi baat nahi real life comes first.

 

[Saif119]

Ok bhai waiting for todays update