Fantasy RAJ -The mystery man (thriller & Magic)

[mysteryman]

Waaaaaaah

kya baat kyaa baat kyaa baat

keep rocking liek this bhai,...... marvelous update .

apka comment pad kar bahut achha laga jis baat ke liye wah wah ki hai vo bhi likh dete to aur jyada achha lagta ....anyway

THANKS FOR READING STORY AND COMMENTING

KEEP SUPPORTING

 

[Rocky2602]

Nice

 

[Hacker]

Nice

 

[CG]

apka comment pad kar bahut achha laga jis baat ke liye wah wah ki hai vo bhi likh dete to aur jyada achha lagta ....anyway

THANKS FOR READING STORY AND COMMENTING

KEEP SUPPORTING

Love and Emotions ko jis bakhubi se dikhaya hai uske liye tha Waah waaah..... whole update was worth it.

4 next one ki continuation mein kya hota hai.

Baat se samajh aa gaya ki Priya bahut hi Suljhi huyi ladki hai aur wo nahi chahti ki jab tak apna hero saksham naa ho jaaye tab tak usko sacchayi nahi bataani hai ki Priya ki bhuwa ya yun kahlo ki choti chachi ne usko force kiya tha badi chachi ke kahne se..... jo ki ab Priya samajh chuki hai lekin baat ko usne wahin khatm kar diya apni kasam de kar......

Waise udhar Rani , Divya and now Priya

mazaa aayega aage . Lekhak mahoday kripya kar ke update thodi jaldi jaldi dene ka kasht karein.......

 

[crazyrex]

VEry nice update

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

awesome update
love feel ho gaya

 

[mysteryman]

Love and Emotions ko jis bakhubi se dikhaya hai uske liye tha Waah waaah..... whole update was worth it.

4 next one ki continuation mein kya hota hai.

Baat se samajh aa gaya ki Priya bahut hi Suljhi huyi ladki hai aur wo nahi chahti ki jab tak apna hero saksham naa ho jaaye tab tak usko sacchayi nahi bataani hai ki Priya ki bhuwa ya yun kahlo ki choti chachi ne usko force kiya tha badi chachi ke kahne se..... jo ki ab Priya samajh chuki hai lekin baat ko usne wahin khatm kar diya apni kasam de kar......

Waise udhar Rani , Divya and now Priya

mazaa aayega aage . Lekhak mahoday kripya kar ke update thodi jaldi jaldi dene ka kasht karein.......

Itne bade review ke liye bohot bohot dhanyabad

1. ye baat bilkul sahi hai ki priya ek bahut hi suljhi hui ladki aur bhi bohot kuchh hai vo ye baat aage aage pta chal jayegi...
2. ye to abhi nhi pta kisne kiske kahne par force kiya ya nhi bhi kiya ye baatein par hai koi apna hi...ye bhi pakka hai...
3. Apne itna bda rebu diya isliye ek raaz khol deta hun jin teen chaharcters ka apne naam liya umne se shayad 1 ya 2 hi story mein rahein ...par ye pakka hai 3 nhi raheinge...
4. update dene ki jaldi mujhe bji rahti hai...par kabhi kabhi situation hi aisi ban jati hai ki tym hi nhi milta

THANKS FOR COMMENTING AND KEEP SUPPORTING

 

[CG]

Bhai Priya and Rani ke saath emotional attachment hai apne hero ka ....ya to inme se kisi ko marwa do story min aur badlaa lene k liye taiyaar karo nahi to Divya ko hataa do scene mein se kyunki uske sath koi aisa relation nahi hai and wo apne khadoos baap ke sath transfere leke jaa sakti hai.

kabhi mouka milega to future mein milwa dena hero ko us se ....

Baaki Rani aur Priya ko rahnaa chahiye.... Rani to support him all the time and Priya jo aage chal kar Raaz kholegi.

 

[mysteryman]

awesome update
love feel ho gaya

Thanks for reading and commenting...agar bada comment karte to jyada achha lagta...

 

[LONEWOLF27]

Nice update bhai
Waiting for next update