Fantasy RAJ -The mystery man (thriller & Magic)

[mysteryman]

Update 17

BwhBe hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Ek behtareen emotional update tha bhai.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.
Khas kar Kavita to laajwab thi.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjar

Tareef ke liye bohot bohot sukriya bhai...

apke comment ko padkar bohot achha laga khaskar kavita ke bare mein...

isi kavita ki wajah se update 1 din late bhi hua...par kuchh bhi sahi readers ko pasand aayi to mujhe bhi bahot khushi hui...
KEEP READING
KEEP SUPPORTING

 

[mysteryman]

Story plot is good

Chachi nafrat karti hai

Behan pyar bhi karti hai

Hero apna ghonchu type hai
Isse dekh feel hota hai ki yeh chutiya type hai koi bhi kese bhi hero ko sunata hai

Kal ka update padhne se lag raha hai ki hero aur Priya ke vich kuch kadwo yadein hai

Dekhte hai next update mein kya hota hai

Waiting for it

Kin sabdon mein karein ham apka sukriya,
apke is comment ne to hame moh liya,

ek baar phir story padne ke liye dhanyabad...

Jo bhi gaon ki story ka plot leta hai vo jyadatar sahi hi hota hai...par story koi complete nhi kar pata isliye mai jaldi hi story ko complete karne ki sochunga...

han filhal tak to hero ko ghonchu type hi dikhaya hai...har koi suna deta hai agar mere sath sab kuchh sahi rha to hero ke sath abhi bohot kuchh hoga...

 

[LoveStar]

Wetting for next update Bhai

 

[usana]

Waiting

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

waiting for the next update

 

[lover585]

awesome

 

[Sushant prasad]

Nice update

 

[aks 21]

Waiting for next

 

[King]

Bhai reply he dete rahoge ya update bhi doge aab

 

[CG]

Waiting