Fantasy RAJ -The mystery man (thriller & Magic)

[aka3829]

Wah bhai kya mast update diya he. Wo kaun sa raaz he kise priya bata nahi pa rahi he . Aur aisa kya hua tha past me . Sab suspense me he. Lekin fir love in the air hua. Dono ek dusare ko pyar bare pal diye ja rahe the. Aur fir last ki wo lines jaise cheery on the cake.
Waiting 4 next update.

 

[mysteryman]

Nice update bhai
Waiting for next update

Bohot badiya laga bhai apko apni story par dekhkar comment karne ke liye bohot bohot sukriya agar aur thoda bada comment karte to thoda aur jyada badiya laga...

 

[Tahirtahir111]

Nic update

 

[mysteryman]

Wah bhai kya mast update diya he. Wo kaun sa raaz he kise priya bata nahi pa rahi he . Aur aisa kya hua tha past me . Sab suspense me he. Lekin fir love in the air hua. Dono ek dusare ko pyar bare pal diye ja rahe the. Aur fir last ki wo lines jaise cheery on the cake.
Waiting 4 next update.

Amtul bhai pahle to bohot sukriya story ke sath bane rahne ke liye asha hai aap isi tarah aage bhi hoshla badate rahenge...

Baat kuchh is tarah hai ki Priya ek to Raz se thodi badi hai aur mature bhi jyada hai...isliye vo abhi Raj ko kisi musibat mein faste dekhna nhi chahti...

past mein jo kuchh bhi hua ab to uske liye eo chhota sa flashback denapadega...aur abhi flashback ka time nhi hai so wait for suspence to be open...

last ki lines ke liye hi ye pura update likha gya nhi to ye shuru ki lines thi...

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[mysteryman]

Nic update

Lagta hai update pasand nhi aaya bhai ko...

 

[usana]

Very nice update waiting for next

 

[mysteryman]

Very nice update waiting for next

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[sonukale]

Superb update

 

[Sanju]

Nice update

 

[RAJIV SHAW]

Super update hai bhai waiting for next update