Fantasy RAJ -The mystery man (thriller & Magic)

[mysteryman]

Achi i story ha.
But update bhot kam mil rhay han.

story ki tarif karne ke liye bohot bohot sukriya ...kam updates ke bare mein jo sabhi writers ka kahna hota hai vahi mera hai...


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[mysteryman]

Nice update

comment ke liye bohot bohot dhanyabad agar thoda bada or karte to achha lagta...

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[mysteryman]

Super update hai bhai waiting for next update

THANKS BHAI

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[mysteryman]

Nice update bhai . ...aur past me aisa kya hua tha jo dono alag the? Aur ab kiska call tha? Aage ka intazar

thanks for commenting.

past mein jo kuchh bhi hua uska to pta future mein tha ,
filhal to yahi pta lagana hai ki ye call kiska tha ...

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[mysteryman]

Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Behtareen dhang se dikhaya h aapne sari baton ko.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.
Kya jabardast zazbat vyakt kiye h dono ne shbdon ke jariye.
Lekin last me suspense kya hua ??

Or isilye ,
Aage ka intjar

Apke is bahumulya comment ke liye bohot bohot sukriya...

jis tarah apko update padkar maza aaya usi tarah mujhe apka ye comment padkar maza aaya...

last mein jo kuchh bhi hua vo agle update mein pta lag jayega...

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[Cuck120]

Superb Update Bhai...

 

[crazyrex]

Very nice and fantastic update

 

[mysteryman]

Bahut hi mast update diye ho bhai. Aur priya ka izhar e ishq bhi mast laga. Raj ne bhi koi kasar nahi chhodi . Maza aaya dono ki pyar bhari bato se. Lekin ye last me kya suspense daal diye ho bhai. Kuch to hint dete.
Waiting 4 next update.

itne mast comment ke liye bohot bohot dhanyabad ...

jab koi tareeb karta hai to bohot achha lagta hai aur aage aur bhi achha karne ki koshish rahti hai...

last wale suspance se shayad ek aur suspance ka janm ho jaye lekin ye bala suspance shayad agle hi update mein khatam ho jaye ...

aur is ke baad ek insan RAJ se nafrat krna kam kar dega...

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[mysteryman]

Kisi ne dekh liya lagtaa hai....... Ya fir Chachi ko kidnap kar liya hai.

Kahin Priya natak to nahi kar rahi .....

Apka bohot bohot sukriya story padne ke liye ...

apne is suspance ke baare mein teen batein kahin ...

unme se ek sahi hai ab ye pta agle update mein lagega ki kon si lekin phir bhi ek point kam kar deta hun...

priya ka pyar sachha hai...lekin abhi toda kachcha hai...

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[CG]

Apka bohot bohot sukriya story padne ke liye ...

apne is suspance ke baare mein teen batein kahin ...

unme se ek sahi hai ab ye pta agle update mein lagega ki kon si lekin phir bhi ek point kam kar deta hun...

priya ka pyar sachha hai...lekin abhi toda kachcha hai...

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reader wahi jo sahi se padh ke probabilities / views share kare....writer wahi jo update ko aisi jagah laa kar chode ki koi bhi straigh away naa bataa paaye ki aage kya hone wala hai.......

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bhai jaldi update dene ki koshish karo.....