Fantasy RAJ -The mystery man (thriller & Magic)

[mysteryman]

reader wahi jo sahi se padh ke probabilities / views share kare....writer wahi jo update ko aisi jagah laa kar chode ki koi bhi straigh away naa bataa paaye ki aage kya hone wala hai.......

Keep rocking

bhai jaldi update dene ki koshish karo.....

HAAN BHAI YE TO AAPNE SAHI KAHA

UPDATE DENE KI KOSHISH TO JALDI HI RAHTI HAI...PAR KABH KABHI PARISTITHIYAN LIKHANE KE ANKOOL NAHI HOTI AUT UPDATE LATE HO JATE HEIN

 

[CG]

HAAN BHAI YE TO AAPNE SAHI KAHA

UPDATE DENE KI KOSHISH TO JALDI HI RAHTI HAI...PAR KABH KABHI PARISTITHIYAN LIKHANE KE ANKOOL NAHI HOTI AUT UPDATE LATE HO JATE HEIN

koi baat nahi dost..... Real life allways comes first...free ho jaao to update jaroor post kar dena

 

[Aj1980]

Shandar update bhai

 

[Winsam20]

Awesome update bhai waiting for next

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

waiting for the next update

 

[Loveshuda111]

Verygood update bhai dono ko uska pyar mil gya
Ab priya ko kya tension hui

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Intjar

 

[Blacksoul]

Priya k kirdar se mujhe dhokhe mki bu aa rahi hai
Shayad yeh mera beham bhi ho

Dusra yaar agar romance dikhao to sahi
Aur emotions ko sahi se plan kiya karo

Emotions pe ake tumhari imagination feeki c ho jati hai


Aur hero ko thoda sa deemag wala banao

 

[mysteryman]

Priya k kirdar se mujhe dhokhe mki bu aa rahi hai
Shayad yeh mera beham bhi ho

Dusra yaar agar romance dikhao to sahi
Aur emotions ko sahi se plan kiya karo

Emotions pe ake tumhari imagination feeki c ho jati hai


Aur hero ko thoda sa deemag wala banao

Blacksoul bhai pahle to apka bohot bohot dhanyabad story padne aur comment karne ke liye...

jaisa ki mai pahle bhi kah chuka hun Priya ka pyar bilkul sachha hai vo Raj ko dhoka nhi degi...

abhi mai jyada kuchh janta nhi likhne ke bare mei bas jo dil mein aata hai likh deta hun isliye galtiya hona to lazmi hai ...

aage se likhne mai sudhar karne ki poori koshish rahegi...

aage bhi kahani padte rahiye aur jo galtiyan ho unhe uzagar karte rahiye...


KEEP READING
KEEP SUPPORTING

 

[aks 21]

Superb awesome update bhai