Fantasy RAJ -The mystery man (thriller & Magic)

[mysteryman]

Bhai update kab milaga

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[Genius]

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[mysteryman]

UPDATE-20

Priya...isme se ek Rasta to sahar ki taraf jata hai isliye vo wahan to jayeinge nhi...ab in teen mai se do jangal ki taraf jate hein...


mai...gaye to vo jangal mein hi honge lekin kon se bale mein...

priya kuchh sochane lagti hai ki fir se uska phone bajta hai...

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ABB AAGE.......................

AAJ KI KAHANI PRIYA KI JUBANI

. {NOTE-aaj Priya ki jagah mai likha jayega Raj ko Raj or Asha chachi ko bhua isliye koi confusion na ho to hi behtar hai}


update-20


Aaj ke din jitni bhi baar ye phone baja tha kuchh na kuchh musibat lekar hi aaya tha...pahle to ghar par room mein Raj ke sath ,Phir khet par,Phir bhua(chachi) ke kidnapping ki khabar ...



Aaj ke din jitni bhi baar ye phone baja tha kuchh na kuchh musibat lekar hi aaya tha...pahle to ghar par room mein Raj ke sath ,Phir khet par,Phir bhua(chachi) ke kidnapping ki khabar ...

ab dekhna ye tha ki ye bala call musibat ko badata hai ya kam karta hai...


ye call julie ka tha.......


julie...mam! jo apne no bataya tha uski location to stable ho gyi hai lekin...

mai...lekin kya..

julie- maine pahle us no ki location ke sath bale 4 or no. ko trace kar liya tha jo ki bilkul aapke bale bataye gye no ki same location par the...

julie-aur un logon ki location is wakt ****** jangal ki aur jate hue bata rhi hai...

mai...ok team ko kitni der mein lagegi wahan tak pahunchane mein...


julie...team ko kai 45 min lag jayeingi...

mai...ok mai wahan nikalti hun...team ko jald se jald mere se connect karo aur unlogon ki location ko bhi mere phone se connect karo...


uska call cut hone ke bad maine apni gadi ko us jangal ki aur dauda diya...

ab andhera pura andhera chha gya tha aur ham tezi Thar mein se jangal ki bad rhe the...



Raj bhi mujh se kai sawal puchh rha tha jaise ki.....



1... tum ye sab kaise kar rhi ho?

2... aur ye team ka kya matter hai?

3. kahin tum koi secret agent to nhi?

4. ..vo log tumse kya pana chahte hein?


5. ..aur unhone chachi ko hi kyon kidnap kiya?

6. . ye talwarein ye guns akhir kar tum ho kya?


abhi mere pass itna wakt nhi tha ki in sab sabalon ka jawab de sakun...


maine bas itna kah diya ki abhi tumhare sawalon ki list aur badne wali hai ...aur mai tumhe sab kuchh bata dungi par pahle bhua ko bachana hai...


koi 10 min baad ham tezi se jaate hue jangal mein pahunch gye the lekin ab tak unlogon ki location aana band ho gya tha ...


maine julie ko contact kiya to pata chal ki shayad wahan koi expert hai jisne signal ko hach kar liya hai aur mai unko is location se aage yahan se trace nhi kar sakti hun...


julie...ab to apko khud hi pta lagana hoga ki vo log kahan gye hein ...


mai...hmm be in contact and try to reach here as early as possible!

mai...mujhe aisa lag rha hai ko yahan bohot planning kar ke hame laya gya hai....

phir maine gadi mai se ek bag nikala jis mai NIGHT VISION GOOGLES the jo ki ek maine pahan liya aur ek Raj ko diya ...



us bag mai aur kayi cheezein the jaise ki night vision binoculars(durbeen),
chaku , gun.etc...

Raj ke liye to sab kuchh naya tha vo to aaj bilkul shock mai tha ki ho kya rha hai uske sath ...

jab usne night vision goggles lagaye to bilkul chakit rah gya kyonki us ki bajah se vo raat mein bhi dekh sakta hai kahan pahle bina gadi ke light ke kuchh nhi dikh rha tha...


aur ab sab kuchh ki tabhi usne bag mai gun or chaku bhi dekhe...to mujhse puchh ''akhir tum ho kya''


maine kaha - ''dushmano ke liye yum aur tumhare liye bas ek maa se kam''


to mainrme gadi aagr bada di thodi dur jaane par ek kachha rasta dikha ab phir pareshani aa gyi aage gye hone ya kachhe raste par...


maine utar kar dekha to us raste par tyres ke nishan the jo ki is baat ka sabut tha ki vi log vahin se gye the ....


to maine ham unke chakrachinhon(tyre prints ) par chal pade aur koi 10 -15 min ho gye the aur mai team se contact mai thi to pata chala ki vo bhi yahan ke liye nikal chuke hein...

par abhi bhi unhe kareeb 30 se 40 se min lag jayeingi yahan pahunchane mein...


ki tabhi gadi se kuchh takrane ki awaj aati hai...


bahar ki aur jab hamara dhyan gya to pta chala ki kayi taraf se log hampar dhuandhar firing kar rhe hein ,


mai....Raj ab to tumhe pta chal gya hoga is

THAR ko lane ka reason...

Raj...han ye to bullet proof hai ...


mai...aur bhi bohot kuchh hai...


maine bhi apni gun lekar unme se ek ko tapka diya tha...aur tezi se aage badte hue jo samne se fire kar rha tha usko takkar mari aur vo bhi mar gya...

ye sab kuchh bas kuchh hi seconds mai hua tha...


Ran ki to jaise ye sab dekhkar ankhein hi bahar nikal aayi...Raj kya koi bhi pahli baar is tarah ke mazar ko dekhega to iska bhi hal Raj ki tarah hi hoga...


do ko to maine maar diya tha lekin firing ab bhi jari thi aur aage jane ka rasta bhi band tha... aur ab koi dikh bhi nhi rha tha...


shayad firing pedon se ho rhi thi khair maine gadi roki aur peeche ki taraf hui to gadi mai ek bag rakha tha jise maine khola to jo har bar hota hai vahi hui matlb Raj shocked....




kyonki vo bag hathiyaron se bhara tha aur usme tarah tarah ki dangerous guns thi goliyan thi ek do talwar bhi thi...

maine us mai se ek riffel nikal aur durbeen se pedon par dekha to abhi do aadmi ham par firing kar rhe the ...


to maine unme se ek ko jaldi hi kisi tute aam ki tarah neeche gira diya...


aur dusre ke pair aur hathon par goliya chalai to vo bhi neeche aa gya...


vo bohot unchai se gira tha isliye usne chhilane ke alawa koi harkat nhi ki...


ab charo taraf dekhne ke baad ham bilkul nischint ho gye the ki yahan koi nhi hai...

mai gadi se bahar utar kar us admi ke pass gyi jisko ki ped se jinda neeche giraya gya tha...


mai uske pass pahunchi to usne khud hi apni jaan chaku se le li...

ab Rasta band tha to maine Raj se se gadi ke pass rukne ko kaha aur kaha ki team ke aane ka intjar karein ...


lekin vo nhi mana aur usne kahne laga ki mai tumhe akela nhi jane dunga mai bhi tumahre satha chalunga


mai...samjha karo tum mere liye bohot important hao mai tumhari jaan ko jokhim mai nhi daal skti...

Raj...meri jaan to tum ho ab mai bhi tumhare bagair nhi rah sakta hun ...tumhe MERI KASAM jo tum mujhe jaane se roko...


mai..huh chalo fir isme se talwar le lo apne liye jo chahe vo gun le lo...


usne apni pasan ki talwarein aur guns le li aur maine bhi jaruri samana aur guns ,magazines le li...


aur aage chal pade kuchh hi dur chalne ke baad hame wahan ek khandar sa dikha...

( hame andhere mai jaisa ki pahle bhi bataya hai night vision goggles ki wajah se dikb rha hai)


ham thoda aur us bangle ke pass gye aur ek jhadi ke peechhe chhipakar durbeen se wahan ka jayaja liya to do wahan gate par do log guns ke sath pahra de rhe the...




to maine apne sath layi hui guns mai se night vision sniper

nikali ek palak jhapkte hi dono ki atma ko sarir se mukti de di...


wahan goli ki awaj sunkar chhat par bhi kuchh halchal hui to wahan dekha to wahan bhi yahi haal tha....


chemical formula of aluminum sulfate



unme se jaise hi ek ko goli mari to dusra kahin chhipgya aur andha dhund goli chalane gya...

na uska koi nishana tha na koi lakhsya bas vo to hawa mai goli chala rha tha...


to maine koi pratikriya nhi ki kyonki mujhe pta tha ki jab iski goliya khatam ho jayeingi to ye koi goliwari na dekh kar bahar jarur nikalega...


aur hua bhi aisa hi kuchh der baad bo bahar nikala ki palak jhapkte hi chhat se neeche ...

ab andar jane ka rasta bilkul saaf dikh rha tha kyonki aas pass koi nhi dikh rha tha ...

phir bhi khatra na lete hue thermal binocular se dekha to koi kareeb andar 20 -25 admi nazar aa rhe the lekin na to koi chhat pe tha na koi bahar..

lekin ab tak goliyon ki awaz sunkar andar jo admi the vo chokanna ho gye hone...



phir kar kya skte hein andar jaane ke alawa koi chara bhi nazar nhi aa rha tha...


to maine Raj se kaha ki tum upar chhat par ja kar wahan ka jayaza lo aur unki nazaro mai aaye bagair chachi ko dhundhne ki koshish karna...


or agar koi bhi samne aaye to use marne mai hichkichana nhi ye sabhi contarct killers lag rhe hein isliye jo samne aaye use maar do...


aur phir mai use itna kahkar andar jane lagi lekin mujhe uski bohot chinta ho rhi thi kyonki ye bohot khatarnak log the or wo gaon ka ek seedha sadha insan ...


''Bhagwan ki lekhni ko kon mita skta hai'' yahi sochkar mai andar chali gyi...


wahan filhal to bilkul sannata tha kuchh der haweli ko khangalne ke baad mujhe ek hall mai 5 admi dikhe jinme se ek unka boss tha...


maine koi der kiye bagair unme se ek ko tapka diya...

mai...akhir tumne apni maut ko bula hi liya...


boss...haste hue. abhi tere dudh ke daant tute nhi tu mujhe maregi...

boss...khade khade mera munh kya dekh rahe ho ise maut ke ghat utar do...


vo apni guns tan hi rahe the ki maine furti dikhate hue 2 ke hatb kaat kat diye...


or teesara goli chalane hi bala hi ki maine pair mai lage hue ek chaku ko nikal kar uske gale mein maar diya...


uske haat he chaku lagne ke sath fire to ho gya lekin chaku lagne ki bajah se uski gun gir gyi or vo bhi mar gya...


to maine us boss ki taraf gun karte hue kaha ki ab tujhe kon bachayega...


ki tabhi fire hota hai aur ek goli akar mere peeth par lagti hai...


TO BE CONTINUED. .....

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[lover585]

awesome update

 

[crazyrex]

Very nice update

 

[Acme]

Fantastic update bhai keep writing....

 

[Aj1980]

Shandar update bhai

 

[Rocky2602]

Nice

 

[CG]

Bhuwa ne lagtaa hai pith mein Chhura ghompa hai......Priya ke


jo bhi hai dialogue mast tha ...Yum aur tumhaare liye maa se kam

awesome bhai

aise hi jabardast likhte raho ...keep it up

for next update

 

[spritemathews]

Keep posting.