Fantasy RAJ -The mystery man (thriller & Magic)

[Maya Loves R]

Mast yahan heroine hero se jyada dum kham wali hain magar kab tak

 

[W@gle]

Nice story biradar...
Keep going...
Priya ne to Kamal kar diya bhai...
Or ek twist ke saath Apne update v khatam kar do...
Ab aage ka intezaar rahega..... waiting

 

[mysteryman]

Mast yahan heroine hero se jyada dum kham wali hain magar kab tak

jab tak hai jaan

 

[mk2244]

super update bhai
waiting next

 

[Super lovely]

ap ke story awesome hai is may koi shak nahi..
Xp par maynay ap ke story pari thi..
Or jab pahli bar yahan par ap ke story dhaykhi toh mujay bht kushi hui..
Lekin ap ke story maynay last month say nahi pari qk ap k update raguler nahi aatay..
Ab ai updates par toh itna waite karnay k bad bhe mujay doh he updates milay..
or aj maynay updates paray or wo bhe ap nay hiro ka lavel low kar dia ho sakay toh yahan par aysa karo k sb raj ko dhaykh kar shok ho ji..
Or raj ko magic power mil ji..
sorry agar kuch glt kaha ho..
Jis tarhan righter ko readers k sath kuch eumidayn hoti hain toh usi tarhan readers ko bhe righters k sath kuch eumidayn hoti hain..
Or aj update ai ga kya??.

 

[mysteryman]

ap ke story awesome hai is may koi shak nahi..
Xp par maynay ap ke story pari thi..
Or jab pahli bar yahan par ap ke story dhaykhi toh mujay bht kushi hui..
Lekin ap ke story maynay last month say nahi pari qk ap k update raguler nahi aatay..
Ab ai updates par toh itna waite karnay k bad bhe mujay doh he updates milay..
or aj maynay updates paray or wo bhe ap nay hiro ka lavel low kar dia ho sakay toh yahan par aysa karo k sb raj ko dhaykh kar shok ho ji..
Or raj ko magic power mil ji..
sorry agar kuch glt kaha ho..
Jis tarhan righter ko readers k sath kuch eumidayn hoti hain toh usi tarhan readers ko bhe righters k sath kuch eumidayn hoti hain..
Or aj update ai ga kya??.

IS UPDATE KE BAAD SABSE JYADA YAHI POINT NIKAL KAR AAYA HAI KI HERO BILKUL KAMZOR HAI...

AUR ABHI TAK YE SAHI BHI HAI AUR MAI PAHLE BHI KAH CHUKA HUN JAB HERO YAHAN SE GAON JAYEGA TO BILKUL BADAL CHUKA HOGA AUR AGLE UPDATE MAI BHI KUCHH DUM KHUM DIKHAYEGA...

RAJ KO POWERS BHI MILENGI LEKIN AUR STORIES KI TARAH
NHI...SHAYAD KUCHH ALAG ...

MAI EK 12TH KA STUDENT HUN TO TYM KAM MIL PATA HAI ISLIYE UPDATES LATE AATE HEIN...

AUR MUJHE KISI BHI COMMENT KA KOI BURA NHI LAGA ..

KEEP READING ...
KEEP COMMENTING...

 

[DiNu DraCula]

Superb update Bhai...
Aapki kahani bhot achi lagi...
Sayad sab bhul gaye hoge lekin hero me bhi aapni jaan par ek puri family ko bachaya tha...
Hero bhi damdar he...
Bs abhi vo shock me he priya ki vajah se...
Almost story bhot achi he..
Aur Heroin ka character bhi jabardast he...
Aapne jis tarah priya ka character darshaya he vo kabile tarif he...
Aese Hi likhte rahiye...
All The Best..

Aur ha meri kahani jarur padhe...

NagMani---part 1

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

awesome update
super

 

[Prince sarkash]

Waiting

 

[Zas23]

Nice update.

Waiting for next