Romance Randi ka aashiq ( mohabbat ka mara ek awara)

[Casinar]

Thank you so much bhai for review..

Shuru me i love you isliye kaha hero ne ki asal me ye ek true story hai usi according kahani chal rahi hai well sorry for mistakes

koyi mistake nahin hai, main ussi true wale ladke ke bare mein keh raha hoon ke i love you keh dala too early

 

[The Survivor]

bhaifor for starting brand new story
review
kya kahe hum.....??
shabd hi nahi hai hamare paas.

bimar hai lekin firbhi bhi tabiyat se review dene ki koshish karenge wo bhi teeno update ke,main koi rating nahi dene wala (agar aap rating chahte hai to mujhe pm kijiyega).

sabse pahle plot,
bhai plot copy kiya gaya hai
meri luv shtori se (par naa wo koi randi thi aur naa main koi chutiya....)I mean kayiyo ke zindgi ki sachayi hai yeh ki kisiko dil-e-jaan se pyar karo aur mile sirf dhoka nafarat ke is bazar me sache pyar kimat fatne wale made in china ke condom se bhi sasti hai....
khair plot jabardast hai ab aur waqt jaya naa karte huye mudde pe ate hai
update 1

waahhh.....starting me hi lead character ka asali chehra dhikha diya jo thoda confusing hai aur hona bhi chahiye (character interesting banane ke liye) jo dheere dheere age chalkar explain hota jayega, bhai main yaha pe baaki ke kuch common aur spoiler bhari chize skip karunga aur sirf do important cheezo ke baare me baat karna chahunga,
first,bhai main is first update ko story me included karne ke bajay description me include karna chahunga, aur bhai koi khas jarurat nahi thi thi teeno ke separate point of view ko mention karne ki.
second, intro-bhai agar intro alag se dete to mujhe wo jyada acha lagata khair pehla update mere liye story ka hissa nahi hai mere liye ye ek badhiya sa dil ko chune wala Thoda sa emotional type ka confessing sa intro cum description tha.

ab aate hai asal story pe,
update 2
bhai hindi me rajasthani tadka waah yaar maza agaya boleto na kam na jyada, humour jabardast,
and the explanation of feelings like pehla pehla pyaar hai na filmy tha naa mangadant tha bilkul hi real incident lag raha tha,hero ka naam pahle jab padha to laga ki galat padha hai isliye zhoom karke dekhe(fenk rahe hai) to maa kasam raat ke 2 baje ghar me jab sanata tha tab achanak jor se has pad(yeh sach hai)
I mean really unexpected men
khir ab aate hai 3update par
yeh update bhi dhansu tha jaise sabhi riya naam ki ladkiyon ko req bhejna (sasura pagla gaya tha pyar ma) aur achanak se propose kar dena ye thoda unexpected tha utna unexpected riya ka use aproch krna bhi tha (saala sach me chutiya hai jo uske aise unexpected behaviour ke baujood kutto ki tarah piche pada hai)bhai chota sa review dene wala tha without ratings lekin likhte likhte ye tumhare update se bhi lamba ho gaya

inshort,
ⓩⓐⓑⓐⓡⓓⓐⓢⓣ story mujhe to lagi ab jinhe nahi padhni wo jaakr shaktimaan dekhe.......

akhir me seriously ek hi baat kehna chahunga...

ana quanda sachme......

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Bhai apka review pad ke mai bahut has raha hu haste haste pet ful gya...

Apne kaha story copy hai Naam bhi likha tha us kahani ka to bhai ye story bilkul bhi copy nahi hai shayad kuch cheeze mil rahi ho ye ek sachi kahani hai aur jo asli aq k sath hua wohi usi tarah mai is kahani ko dikhane ki koshish kar raha hu.. Aur bhai riya ka jo character show karaya hai ye Sirf ek jhalak thi jo asal me wo hai us bare me soch bhi nahi sakte abhi to shuruat hai age Jaa k story banegi...

apki comment ek dum fadu hai superb rating ka intezaar

 

[The Survivor]

koyi mistake nahin hai, main ussi true wale ladke ke bare mein keh raha hoon ke i love you keh dala too early

Bhai age pata chalega itni fast bolne ke pichey ka reason...

Thank you so much

 

[🅡 🅐 🅥 🅐 🅝]

Bhai apka review pad ke mai bahut has raha hu haste haste pet ful gya...

Apne kaha story copy hai Naam bhi likha tha us kahani ka to bhai ye story bilkul bhi copy nahi hai shayad kuch cheeze mil rahi ho ye ek sachi kahani hai aur jo asli aq k sath hua wohi usi tarah mai is kahani ko dikhane ki koshish kar raha hu.. Aur bhai riya ka jo character show karaya hai ye Sirf ek jhalak thi jo asal me wo hai us bare me soch bhi nahi sakte abhi to shuruat hai age Jaa k story banegi...

haaso bhai kal review na dene ke wajah se tum kuch naraj lag rahe the hame to tumhe khush karne ke liye hi pahli baar aisa review diya hai
aur bhai rahi copy karne ki baat to
yaar maine kaha tha na
for the brand new story bhai wo isliye ki sachme yeh plot bilkul naya hai
aur rahi us story ki baat to bhai mera matlab tha ki ye story meri love story se thodi si milti yaani meri real life love story se( I mean galat londiya se ishq aur kya),copy nahi hai story wo me bas majak kar raha tha
aur rahi riya ki baat to woh main bhi jaanta hu ke woh kuch confusing sa character hai to jahir si baat hai kuch to alag hoga usme,
rating 5th update ke baad denge.
waiting for next update brother

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[Aakash.]

Ana qonda likes Riya. Riya is settled in his heart and mind. Glad the two have at least become Facebook friends, now things are happening slowly. After reading the story, it seems that romance is coming soon in the story.
Today's update was very good, now let's see what happens next.....

 

[Trinity]

Thread closed as per Thread Starter's request.

 

[Siraj Patel]

Hello, Ladies & Gentleman,
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.

Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.

Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.

Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.

Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.



On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Siraj Patel

 

[Aakash.]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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"Chance to win cash prize up to Rs 8000"
Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 15th February ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 5th March 2024 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread

Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread

Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	4000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	1500 Rupees + Award + 3500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	1000 Rupees + 2000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories)
3rd Runner-UP	750 Rupees + 1000 Likes
Best Supporting Reader	750 Rupees + Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff