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क्या बात है लकी सेठ ! पहले अपडेट में ही धमाल मचा दिया ‌‌‌। काफी फनी और कामेडी से भरपूर अपडेट था यह । वैसे भी जब दोस्तों के बीच दारू की पार्टी होती है तो काफी मजेदार बातें होती हैं । मजा आ जाता है ।

निश्छल और अंकिता की बातें पढ़कर किसी को भी हंसी आ जाए ! अंकिता का बार बार एक ही बात की रट लगाए रहना " तु मुझसे मिलने क्यों नहीं आया " और निश्छल का छिपकली वाला प्रसंग सच में काफी मजेदार था ।

ऐसे ही लिखते रहिए । रोमांस के साथ साथ कामेडी और कुछ कुछ उत्तेजक प्रसंग भी एड करते जाइए ।

मुझे तो बहुत ही बेहतरीन लगा प्रथम अपडेट ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग ।

आपको अपडेट पसंद आया ये देख कर बहुत अच्छा लगा मुझे
आगे भी इसी तरह की कामेडी जारी रहेगी ।

आपका बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद SANJU ( V. R. ) भाई

 

[Lucky..]

Nice and awesome update...

bahot bahot dhanywaad bhai

 

[Prem pyasa]

Me ek or story likhne ja raha hu
or ye story
romance, comedy, drama story hogi ..
Aap sab ke support ki bahot jaroorat hogi
story me guide karne ke liye mujhe.
to support kariye ga...
Pehla Update 4 din bad dunga..​

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[Lucky..]

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Thank you Prem pyasa bhai

 

[Lucky..]

waise yeh londa nischal hain bara tej ek se breakup kiya nahin aur doosri se pyar bhi ho gaya... lagta hain chhipkali kee delivery karwane waali doctor hogi jisse pyar kiya ... khair ankita ko bulana chahiye tha namakaran pe... isiliye naraj ho gayee hain bichari... ab chhipkali jitni bhi value na karoge toh tape fasega hi ludki ka...

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waise breakup ka karan chhipkali ke bachhe ka baap kaun hain yahee hoga... shaq kee sui sidha nischal pe hi jata hain... akhir delivery kee wakt ek achhe pita kee tarah maujood jo tha... bechari ankita... bewafa nischal...

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khair udhar behenjee na naraj ho jaye shaadi chhor ke chhipakali kee kisse suna rahe hain dosto ko...

aapke adhbhut REVO ke liye bahot bahot dhanywaad aalu bhai

 

[Lucky..]

Superb Updatee

Toh update ki suruaat hi nashediyo ke saath hua hai. Aur inn nashediyo mein sabse bada nashedi aur ladkibaaz Nischal bhi shamil hai.

Ek ladki se breakup hue 15 din nhi hua kamine ko love at first sight hogya.

Dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai.


Update mein jo comedy hai woh aise hi rakhnaa padhne mein maza aaya.

college me padhay karta hai to gf to hogi hi na and ye jaroori to nahi ki aapki pehli Gf hi aapki jivan sathi ho...kabhi kabhi log States and beauty dekh kar hi Gf bf ban jate hai..

Aapke sandaar revo ke liye Shukriya Jaguaar bhai

 

[Naina]

Intezaar

 

[DREAMBOY40]

UPDATE - 01
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ek marriage hall ke piche char ladke daru ki do bottle leke chale jate hai...
ye charo best friend hai or yaha in charo mese ladka2 ki bahan ki shadi hai marriage hall me...

Charo marriage hall ke piche aa jate hai jaha andhera tha or kisi ke aane ko bhi chance nahi tha to charo hi niche jamin par hi beth jate hai or bottle or chakna, glass, pani ki battle bich me rakh dete hai..


" yaar jaldi se peck banao.. sala bahot dino bad daru mili hai " …. Ladka4 bolta hai..

" 2 min bc itni jaldi kya hai...chala branded mal dekh kar teri lar tapakne lagti hai " ladka2 bola..

ladke3 bolta hai :- are tu batua chor ki bat chod or bottle khol be..

" haan be kholta hu..." ladka2 daru ki bottle ka dhakkan kholta hai..

ladka2 daru ki bottle ka dhakkan khol kar fir
char plastic ke glass me daru nikalta hai ..
fir charo glass ne pani bhi dalta hai or
charo ke pack ban jate hai..

ladka2,ladka3,ladka4 tino apne apne pack le lete hai..
ladka1 abhi chup chap betha tha..
to ladka2 use dekh kar bolta hai..

Ladka2 :- nishu darling tu aise kyu muh latka ke betha hai be?… le peck laga ..

ladka4 bolta hai : - breakup ho gaya iska lagta hai..

ladka4 ki baat sun kar ladka2 bolta hai :- kya hua bhai tuje?..

Ladka 1 pehle apna pack leke ek hi sans me pura gale me utar deta hai or fir bolta hai..

Ladka 1 :- are yaar vo mene ek ladki ko kal mall me dekha tha... or mujhe use dekh kar pehli nazar me hi pyaar ho gaya hai yaar..

Ladka 2 :- abe teri to pehle se Gf hai na ..?

Ladka 2 :- hain nahi be thi 15 din pehle hi breakup kar liya mene..

Ladka 2 :- kyu be kya hua tha dikhne me to achi thi fir kuch lafda hua tha kya? Or uska name Kya tha be ?.

"Ankita ".. ladka4 fatak se bola..

Ladka 3 :- tu bahot yaad rakh raha be iski Gf ka name ?

Ladka 2 :- abe tum dono chup betho...
nishu kya hua tha ankita or tere bich jo tune breakup kar liya?..

( Ladka1 koi or nahi nischal hi hai)

Ladka 1 :- Nischal ( nishu)

Ladka 2 :- Vicky ( Vicky

Ladka 3 :- Divyesh ( dhula)

Ladka : - Pankaj ( loe)


Nischal :- hmmm… to suno tum logo ko to pata
hi hoga ki is vaction me papa Dubai gaye the..
to papa mujhe apni office ki or business ki
jimedari mujh par chhod gaye the ..

To me office sambhal ne me itna busy tha ki
Ankita ko milne hi nahi gaya 20 din tak..
Mujhe time hi nahi milta tha..
papa ke bina business sambhal na bahot hard tha mere liye or uper se Ankita call pe call kar rahi thi...me call par thodi bahot bat kar leta tha..
par ankita ko to bas milna tha..

Ek din dopaher ko me office me beth kar file dekh raha tha ki Ankita ka call aaya..

Mene call receive kar liya..or jaise hi mene kan par fone lagaya to udhar se ankita itni badki hue thi ki mene jaise hi hello bola...

Nischal :- hello jaan...

Ankita :- me yaha tumhe har pal yaad karti rehti hu..1-1 min tumhe miss karti hu or call bhi me samne se karti hu tab … tumhe meri kuch chinta bhi hai ya nahi... kitne din se tum mujhe milne nahi aaye or naa hi thik se baat karte ho...me tujhe kitna pyaar hu or ek tum ho apne kam me busy rehte ho...aisa bhi kya kam karte ho jo tum mujhe milne ke liye bhi nahi aa sakte...

Ek hi sans me itna bol gay ankita ki me to sun te hi reh gaya...

Nischal :- relax baby... me abhi papa ka office ka kam sambhal raha hu is liye time nahi mil pa raha hai milne ka..

Ankita :- haan to kaam to sab karte hai mujhe bhi ghar me bahot kam hai fir bhi me hamare liye time nikal leti hu..

Nischal :- me papa ki office or business sambhal raha hu yrr..

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya??

Nischal :- important meeting me busy tha office me..

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya?

Nischal :- are yaar ye kya ek hi sawal leke Beth gay tu..

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya?

Nischal :- sunay nahi deta kya..bol to raha hu ki office ke kam me busy hu...papa Dubai hai to office ka jimma mere par hai..

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya .?

Nischal ( teri maa ×××××××..) :- ( gusse se chilate hue ) sun office me ek chipkali hai.. vo pregnant thi to ek din achanak hi uske pet me dard hone laga...
to fir me use hospital le gaya or uski delivery karvay..
7 bacho ko janam diya hai… or saare bache healthy hue hai or ab kal un sab ka name karan rakha hai mene..

Ankita :- ( rone lagi) aahhaahaha...aahhhaahahaa…

Nischal :- rona band karo or suno kal hum milte hai betway coffee shop me okk..

Anikta ka rona band ho jata hai ek min me or bolti hai :- okk jaan …byyy love you...

Or call cut ho jata hai...

Nischal ne kehna band hi kiya tha ki Leo bol padta hai..

Leo :- chipkali bacha na peda kare a andda muke andda.…

Nischal :- haan tere baap ne chipkali ka business khol rakha hai to vo roj chipkaliyo ki delivery karvata hoga jo tujhe sab pata hai bhosdk...

Vicky :- hahahahaa …..haahahaaa...hahahaaaa…. Tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya?….

Tino pet pakad ke hasne lage.…
or fir thodi der me hasna band kar ke wapis peck banaya or vo pack pite hue vicky bola..

Vicky : - haan to ab aage kya hua tu coffee shop me milne gaya tha ya nahi ?

Nischal : - haan batata hu pehle pack to pi lene de...

( Story ki thodi si jhalak hai baki sab ka intro details agle update me dunga..)

 

[Kala Nag]

Koi Faryaad Tere Dil Main Dabi Ho Jaise.
Tu Nai Aankhon Se Koi Baat Kahi Ho Jaise.

Jaagtey Jaagtey Ek Umar Kati Ho Jaise..
Jaan Baki Ho Magar Saans Ruki Ho Jaise..

Har Mulakaat Pe Mehsus Yehi Hota Hai..
Mujh Se Kuch Teri Nazar Puch Rahi Ho Jaise..

Raah Chalte Hue Aksar Yeh Goman Hota Hai.
Woh Nazar Chup Ke Mujhe Dekh Rahi Ho Jaise.

Ake Lamhe Main Simat Aya Sadyon Ka Safar.
Zindgi Teaz Bohut Teaz Chali Ho Jaise.

Is Tarha Pehron Tujhe Sochta Rehta Hon Main.
Meri Har Saans Tere Naam Likhi Ho Jaise.

वाह क्या बात है
रोमांस हमेशा से मेरा प्रिय विषय रहा है
पर चूंकि मेरा लेखन इस क्षेत्र में बहुत दुर्बल है इसलिए मैं इस परिधि से स्वयं को दूर ही रखता हूं
इस नए कहानी के लिए अभिनंदन व शुभकामनाएं

 

[DREAMBOY40]

UPDATE - 01
​

ek marriage hall ke piche char ladke daru ki do bottle leke chale jate hai...
ye charo best friend hai or yaha in charo mese ladka2 ki bahan ki shadi hai marriage hall me...

Charo marriage hall ke piche aa jate hai jaha andhera tha or kisi ke aane ko bhi chance nahi tha to charo hi niche jamin par hi beth jate hai or bottle or chakna, glass, pani ki battle bich me rakh dete hai..


" yaar jaldi se peck banao.. sala bahot dino bad daru mili hai " …. Ladka4 bolta hai..

" 2 min bc itni jaldi kya hai...chala branded mal dekh kar teri lar tapakne lagti hai " ladka2 bola..

ladke3 bolta hai :- are tu batua chor ki bat chod or bottle khol be..

" haan be kholta hu..." ladka2 daru ki bottle ka dhakkan kholta hai..

ladka2 daru ki bottle ka dhakkan khol kar fir
char plastic ke glass me daru nikalta hai ..
fir charo glass ne pani bhi dalta hai or
charo ke pack ban jate hai..

ladka2,ladka3,ladka4 tino apne apne pack le lete hai..
ladka1 abhi chup chap betha tha..
to ladka2 use dekh kar bolta hai..

Ladka2 :- nishu darling tu aise kyu muh latka ke betha hai be?… le peck laga ..

ladka4 bolta hai : - breakup ho gaya iska lagta hai..

ladka4 ki baat sun kar ladka2 bolta hai :- kya hua bhai tuje?..

Ladka 1 pehle apna pack leke ek hi sans me pura gale me utar deta hai or fir bolta hai..

Ladka 1 :- are yaar vo mene ek ladki ko kal mall me dekha tha... or mujhe use dekh kar pehli nazar me hi pyaar ho gaya hai yaar..

Ladka 2 :- abe teri to pehle se Gf hai na ..?

Ladka 2 :- hain nahi be thi 15 din pehle hi breakup kar liya mene..

Ladka 2 :- kyu be kya hua tha dikhne me to achi thi fir kuch lafda hua tha kya? Or uska name Kya tha be ?.

"Ankita ".. ladka4 fatak se bola..

Ladka 3 :- tu bahot yaad rakh raha be iski Gf ka name ?

Ladka 2 :- abe tum dono chup betho...
nishu kya hua tha ankita or tere bich jo tune breakup kar liya?..

( Ladka1 koi or nahi nischal hi hai)

Ladka 1 :- Nischal ( nishu)

Ladka 2 :- Vicky ( Vicky

Ladka 3 :- Divyesh ( dhula)

Ladka : - Pankaj ( loe)


Nischal :- hmmm… to suno tum logo ko to pata
hi hoga ki is vaction me papa Dubai gaye the..
to papa mujhe apni office ki or business ki
jimedari mujh par chhod gaye the ..

To me office sambhal ne me itna busy tha ki
Ankita ko milne hi nahi gaya 20 din tak..
Mujhe time hi nahi milta tha..
papa ke bina business sambhal na bahot hard tha mere liye or uper se Ankita call pe call kar rahi thi...me call par thodi bahot bat kar leta tha..
par ankita ko to bas milna tha..

Ek din dopaher ko me office me beth kar file dekh raha tha ki Ankita ka call aaya..

Mene call receive kar liya..or jaise hi mene kan par fone lagaya to udhar se ankita itni badki hue thi ki mene jaise hi hello bola...

Nischal :- hello jaan...

Ankita :- me yaha tumhe har pal yaad karti rehti hu..1-1 min tumhe miss karti hu or call bhi me samne se karti hu tab … tumhe meri kuch chinta bhi hai ya nahi... kitne din se tum mujhe milne nahi aaye or naa hi thik se baat karte ho...me tujhe kitna pyaar hu or ek tum ho apne kam me busy rehte ho...aisa bhi kya kam karte ho jo tum mujhe milne ke liye bhi nahi aa sakte...

Ek hi sans me itna bol gay ankita ki me to sun te hi reh gaya...

Nischal :- relax baby... me abhi papa ka office ka kam sambhal raha hu is liye time nahi mil pa raha hai milne ka..

Ankita :- haan to kaam to sab karte hai mujhe bhi ghar me bahot kam hai fir bhi me hamare liye time nikal leti hu..

Nischal :- me papa ki office or business sambhal raha hu yrr..

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya??

Nischal :- important meeting me busy tha office me..

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya?

Nischal :- are yaar ye kya ek hi sawal leke Beth gay tu..

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya?

Nischal :- sunay nahi deta kya..bol to raha hu ki office ke kam me busy hu...papa Dubai hai to office ka jimma mere par hai..

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya .?

Nischal ( teri maa ×××××××..) :- ( gusse se chilate hue ) sun office me ek chipkali hai.. vo pregnant thi to ek din achanak hi uske pet me dard hone laga...
to fir me use hospital le gaya or uski delivery karvay..
7 bacho ko janam diya hai… or saare bache healthy hue hai or ab kal un sab ka name karan rakha hai mene..

Ankita :- ( rone lagi) aahhaahaha...aahhhaahahaa…

Nischal :- rona band karo or suno kal hum milte hai betway coffee shop me okk..

Anikta ka rona band ho jata hai ek min me or bolti hai :- okk jaan …byyy love you...

Or call cut ho jata hai...

Nischal ne kehna band hi kiya tha ki Leo bol padta hai..

Leo :- chipkali bacha na peda kare a andda muke andda.…

Nischal :- haan tere baap ne chipkali ka business khol rakha hai to vo roj chipkaliyo ki delivery karvata hoga jo tujhe sab pata hai bhosdk...

Vicky :- hahahahaa …..haahahaaa...hahahaaaa…. Tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya?….

Tino pet pakad ke hasne lage.…
or fir thodi der me hasna band kar ke wapis peck banaya or vo pack pite hue vicky bola..

Vicky : - haan to ab aage kya hua tu coffee shop me milne gaya tha ya nahi ?

Nischal : - haan batata hu pehle pack to pi lene de...

( Story ki thodi si jhalak hai baki sab ka intro details agle update me dunga..)

Gf ki Zid dekh kar mujhe to lg rha h ki story ki heroine Ankita ko hi rahana chahiye .. taaki nischal babu ki band bajti rahe aur khopdi sulagti rahe

Naina dekho ju ka the great nischal ek nmbr ka chhichhora hai
Ladki nhi bus samjh liya ek gayi nhi ki dusri pkd li .

Waise ye saala daarubaaz vicky khud ki bahan ki sadi me bhi pi rha hai to asal me kaisa hoga ye to wo hi jaane .

Spolier alert
Idhar nischal nyi heroine ki yado me khoya hai , mujhe to lag rha h kahi ye log drink khatam krke shadi me waps jaye aur heroine dulhal ki saheli na nikal jaaye


Joke spat alag baat hai Lekin kahani majedar tarike se suru hui hai ..
Readers ko kahani ke suru se jodne me apka andaj nirala hai .

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