Romance RANG TERE ISHQ KA

[Lucky..]

UPDATE - 01
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ek marriage hall ke piche char ladke daru ki do bottle leke chale jate hai...
ye charo best friend hai or yaha in charo mese ladka2 ki bahan ki shadi hai marriage hall me...

Charo marriage hall ke piche aa jate hai jaha andhera tha or kisi ke aane ko bhi chance nahi tha to charo hi niche jamin par hi beth jate hai or bottle or chakna, glass, pani ki battle bich me rakh dete hai..


" yaar jaldi se peck banao.. sala bahot dino bad daru mili hai " …. Ladka4 bolta hai..

" 2 min bc itni jaldi kya hai...chala branded mal dekh kar teri lar tapakne lagti hai " ladka2 bola..

ladke3 bolta hai :- are tu batua chor ki bat chod or bottle khol be..

" haan be kholta hu..." ladka2 daru ki bottle ka dhakkan kholta hai..

ladka2 daru ki bottle ka dhakkan khol kar fir
char plastic ke glass me daru nikalta hai ..
fir charo glass ne pani bhi dalta hai or
charo ke pack ban jate hai..

ladka2,ladka3,ladka4 tino apne apne pack le lete hai..
ladka1 abhi chup chap betha tha..
to ladka2 use dekh kar bolta hai..

Ladka2 :- nishu darling tu aise kyu muh latka ke betha hai be?… le peck laga ..

ladka4 bolta hai : - breakup ho gaya iska lagta hai..

ladka4 ki baat sun kar ladka2 bolta hai :- kya hua bhai tuje?..

Ladka 1 pehle apna pack leke ek hi sans me pura gale me utar deta hai or fir bolta hai..

Ladka 1 :- are yaar vo mene ek ladki ko kal mall me dekha tha... or mujhe use dekh kar pehli nazar me hi pyaar ho gaya hai yaar..

Ladka 2 :- abe teri to pehle se Gf hai na ..?

Ladka 2 :- hain nahi be thi 15 din pehle hi breakup kar liya mene..

Ladka 2 :- kyu be kya hua tha dikhne me to achi thi fir kuch lafda hua tha kya? Or uska name Kya tha be ?.

"Ankita ".. ladka4 fatak se bola..

Ladka 3 :- tu bahot yaad rakh raha be iski Gf ka name ?

Ladka 2 :- abe tum dono chup betho...
nishu kya hua tha ankita or tere bich jo tune breakup kar liya?..

( Ladka1 koi or nahi nischal hi hai)

Ladka 1 :- Nischal ( nishu)

Ladka 2 :- Vicky ( Vicky

Ladka 3 :- Divyesh ( dhula)

Ladka : - Pankaj ( loe)


Nischal :- hmmm… to suno tum logo ko to pata
hi hoga ki is vaction me papa Dubai gaye the..
to papa mujhe apni office ki or business ki
jimedari mujh par chhod gaye the ..

To me office sambhal ne me itna busy tha ki
Ankita ko milne hi nahi gaya 20 din tak..
Mujhe time hi nahi milta tha..
papa ke bina business sambhal na bahot hard tha mere liye or uper se Ankita call pe call kar rahi thi...me call par thodi bahot bat kar leta tha..
par ankita ko to bas milna tha..

Ek din dopaher ko me office me beth kar file dekh raha tha ki Ankita ka call aaya..

Mene call receive kar liya..or jaise hi mene kan par fone lagaya to udhar se ankita itni badki hue thi ki mene jaise hi hello bola...

Nischal :- hello jaan...

Ankita :- me yaha tumhe har pal yaad karti rehti hu..1-1 min tumhe miss karti hu or call bhi me samne se karti hu tab … tumhe meri kuch chinta bhi hai ya nahi... kitne din se tum mujhe milne nahi aaye or naa hi thik se baat karte ho...me tujhe kitna pyaar hu or ek tum ho apne kam me busy rehte ho...aisa bhi kya kam karte ho jo tum mujhe milne ke liye bhi nahi aa sakte...

Ek hi sans me itna bol gay ankita ki me to sun te hi reh gaya...

Nischal :- relax baby... me abhi papa ka office ka kam sambhal raha hu is liye time nahi mil pa raha hai milne ka..

Ankita :- haan to kaam to sab karte hai mujhe bhi ghar me bahot kam hai fir bhi me hamare liye time nikal leti hu..

Nischal :- me papa ki office or business sambhal raha hu yrr..

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya??

Nischal :- important meeting me busy tha office me..

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya?

Nischal :- are yaar ye kya ek hi sawal leke Beth gay tu..

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya?

Nischal :- sunay nahi deta kya..bol to raha hu ki office ke kam me busy hu...papa Dubai hai to office ka jimma mere par hai..

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya .?

Nischal ( teri maa ×××××××..) :- ( gusse se chilate hue ) sun office me ek chipkali hai.. vo pregnant thi to ek din achanak hi uske pet me dard hone laga...
to fir me use hospital le gaya or uski delivery karvay..
7 bacho ko janam diya hai… or saare bache healthy hue hai or ab kal un sab ka name karan rakha hai mene..

Ankita :- ( rone lagi) aahhaahaha...aahhhaahahaa…

Nischal :- rona band karo or suno kal hum milte hai betway coffee shop me okk..

Anikta ka rona band ho jata hai ek min me or bolti hai :- okk jaan …byyy love you...

Or call cut ho jata hai...

Nischal ne kehna band hi kiya tha ki Leo bol padta hai..

Leo :- chipkali bacha na peda kare a andda muke andda.…

Nischal :- haan tere baap ne chipkali ka business khol rakha hai to vo roj chipkaliyo ki delivery karvata hoga jo tujhe sab pata hai bhosdk...

Vicky :- hahahahaa …..haahahaaa...hahahaaaa…. Tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya?….

Tino pet pakad ke hasne lage.…
or fir thodi der me hasna band kar ke wapis peck banaya or vo pack pite hue vicky bola..

Vicky : - haan to ab aage kya hua tu coffee shop me milne gaya tha ya nahi ?

Nischal : - haan batata hu pehle pack to pi lene de...

( Story ki thodi si jhalak hai baki sab ka intro details agle update me dunga..)

 

[Naina]

Ankita :- ( rone lagi) aahhaahaha...aahhhaahahaa

ye ro rahi hai ki hansh rahi hai

 

[Lucky..]

ye ro rahi hai ki hansh rahi hai

Rone ki acting kar rahi hai

 

[Naina]

so chaar dost baith ke bahot dino baad drinking party kar rahe the.... waise lage kisi ki shaadi mein aaye hai... ab us ladke ya ladki ki shaadi ki khushi ke mauke pe in logo ne extra party kar rahe ho ..
well...... so kahani ki suruvaat mein hi the great one nischal ka break up ho gaya hai....aur iski wajah jab batane laga.....ultimate comedy ka tadka laga diya hai uske baad to.....

Nischal ankita ko baar baar samjha raha tha ki wo kyun milne nahi aa pa raha hai... lekin ankita jaise purane jamane ke recorder ki tarah ek hi baat ko repeat kiye jaa rahi thi...

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya??

Aur nischal ka jawab

sun office me ek chipkali hai.. vo pregnant thi to ek din achanak hi uske pet me dard hone laga...
to fir me use hospital le gaya or uski delivery karvay..
7 bacho ko janam diya hai… or saare bache healthy hue hai or ab kal un sab ka name karan rakha hai mene..

Ankita :- ( rone lagi) aahhaahaha...aahhhaahahaa…

Dhett teri ki, chipkali ki delivery
7 bachhe ki maa bani chipkali ko kis hospital mein le gaya tha ye sawal nahi pucha ankita ne kya
are wo to ek sawal kiye jaa rahi thi ki usse milne kyun nahi gaya wo
waise ankita ki behavior aur baatein padh yehi lage ki wo bas isliye nischal ko pyar karne ka natak kar rahi thi just because nischal amirzada hai....

well...comedy se laba lab ek behtareen suruaat huyi hai kahani ki...

ek hilarious comedy ka mahol banane mein aap mahir hai... jishe padhte waqt mann prasanna ho jaaye..aur hanshi...pet dukhne tak na ruke... Really writer sahab ne bahot hi ummda aur ek details ke sath comedy scenes create ki hai update mein nischal aur ankita ke vartalaap ke jariye, Jo sach mein adbhut aur prashansaniya hai sath hi hashyamay bhi...

Shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan aur sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Naina]

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya??

Nischal :- important meeting me busy tha office me..

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya?

Nischal :- are yaar ye kya ek hi sawal leke Beth gay tu..

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya?

Nischal :- sunay nahi deta kya..bol to raha hu ki office ke kam me busy hu...papa Dubai hai to office ka jimma mere par hai..

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya .?

 

[Naina]

Chipkali ne 7 bacho ko janam diya hai… or saare bache healthy hue hai or ab kal un sab ka name karan rakha hai mene..

naam karan waise chipkali ke bachho ka naam kya rakhte

 

[Naina]

BTW Lucky.. is comedy ka zayka aise hi barkar rakhna...

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

क्या बात है लकी सेठ ! पहले अपडेट में ही धमाल मचा दिया ‌‌‌। काफी फनी और कामेडी से भरपूर अपडेट था यह । वैसे भी जब दोस्तों के बीच दारू की पार्टी होती है तो काफी मजेदार बातें होती हैं । मजा आ जाता है ।

निश्छल और अंकिता की बातें पढ़कर किसी को भी हंसी आ जाए ! अंकिता का बार बार एक ही बात की रट लगाए रहना " तु मुझसे मिलने क्यों नहीं आया " और निश्छल का छिपकली वाला प्रसंग सच में काफी मजेदार था ।

ऐसे ही लिखते रहिए । रोमांस के साथ साथ कामेडी और कुछ कुछ उत्तेजक प्रसंग भी एड करते जाइए ।

मुझे तो बहुत ही बेहतरीन लगा प्रथम अपडेट ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग ।

 

[Lucky..]

BTW Lucky.. is comedy ka zayka aise hi barkar rakhna...

Okay and aapke adhbhut revo ka reply thodi der bad dunga abhi TU KI JANE PYAAR MERA wali story par update likh raha hu..

 

[parkas]

UPDATE - 01
​

ek marriage hall ke piche char ladke daru ki do bottle leke chale jate hai...
ye charo best friend hai or yaha in charo mese ladka2 ki bahan ki shadi hai marriage hall me...

Charo marriage hall ke piche aa jate hai jaha andhera tha or kisi ke aane ko bhi chance nahi tha to charo hi niche jamin par hi beth jate hai or bottle or chakna, glass, pani ki battle bich me rakh dete hai..


" yaar jaldi se peck banao.. sala bahot dino bad daru mili hai " …. Ladka4 bolta hai..

" 2 min bc itni jaldi kya hai...chala branded mal dekh kar teri lar tapakne lagti hai " ladka2 bola..

ladke3 bolta hai :- are tu batua chor ki bat chod or bottle khol be..

" haan be kholta hu..." ladka2 daru ki bottle ka dhakkan kholta hai..

ladka2 daru ki bottle ka dhakkan khol kar fir
char plastic ke glass me daru nikalta hai ..
fir charo glass ne pani bhi dalta hai or
charo ke pack ban jate hai..

ladka2,ladka3,ladka4 tino apne apne pack le lete hai..
ladka1 abhi chup chap betha tha..
to ladka2 use dekh kar bolta hai..

Ladka2 :- nishu darling tu aise kyu muh latka ke betha hai be?… le peck laga ..

ladka4 bolta hai : - breakup ho gaya iska lagta hai..

ladka4 ki baat sun kar ladka2 bolta hai :- kya hua bhai tuje?..

Ladka 1 pehle apna pack leke ek hi sans me pura gale me utar deta hai or fir bolta hai..

Ladka 1 :- are yaar vo mene ek ladki ko kal mall me dekha tha... or mujhe use dekh kar pehli nazar me hi pyaar ho gaya hai yaar..

Ladka 2 :- abe teri to pehle se Gf hai na ..?

Ladka 2 :- hain nahi be thi 15 din pehle hi breakup kar liya mene..

Ladka 2 :- kyu be kya hua tha dikhne me to achi thi fir kuch lafda hua tha kya? Or uska name Kya tha be ?.

"Ankita ".. ladka4 fatak se bola..

Ladka 3 :- tu bahot yaad rakh raha be iski Gf ka name ?

Ladka 2 :- abe tum dono chup betho...
nishu kya hua tha ankita or tere bich jo tune breakup kar liya?..

( Ladka1 koi or nahi nischal hi hai)

Ladka 1 :- Nischal ( nishu)

Ladka 2 :- Vicky ( Vicky

Ladka 3 :- Divyesh ( dhula)

Ladka : - Pankaj ( loe)


Nischal :- hmmm… to suno tum logo ko to pata
hi hoga ki is vaction me papa Dubai gaye the..
to papa mujhe apni office ki or business ki
jimedari mujh par chhod gaye the ..

To me office sambhal ne me itna busy tha ki
Ankita ko milne hi nahi gaya 20 din tak..
Mujhe time hi nahi milta tha..
papa ke bina business sambhal na bahot hard tha mere liye or uper se Ankita call pe call kar rahi thi...me call par thodi bahot bat kar leta tha..
par ankita ko to bas milna tha..

Ek din dopaher ko me office me beth kar file dekh raha tha ki Ankita ka call aaya..

Mene call receive kar liya..or jaise hi mene kan par fone lagaya to udhar se ankita itni badki hue thi ki mene jaise hi hello bola...

Nischal :- hello jaan...

Ankita :- me yaha tumhe har pal yaad karti rehti hu..1-1 min tumhe miss karti hu or call bhi me samne se karti hu tab … tumhe meri kuch chinta bhi hai ya nahi... kitne din se tum mujhe milne nahi aaye or naa hi thik se baat karte ho...me tujhe kitna pyaar hu or ek tum ho apne kam me busy rehte ho...aisa bhi kya kam karte ho jo tum mujhe milne ke liye bhi nahi aa sakte...

Ek hi sans me itna bol gay ankita ki me to sun te hi reh gaya...

Nischal :- relax baby... me abhi papa ka office ka kam sambhal raha hu is liye time nahi mil pa raha hai milne ka..

Ankita :- haan to kaam to sab karte hai mujhe bhi ghar me bahot kam hai fir bhi me hamare liye time nikal leti hu..

Nischal :- me papa ki office or business sambhal raha hu yrr..

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya??

Nischal :- important meeting me busy tha office me..

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya?

Nischal :- are yaar ye kya ek hi sawal leke Beth gay tu..

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya?

Nischal :- sunay nahi deta kya..bol to raha hu ki office ke kam me busy hu...papa Dubai hai to office ka jimma mere par hai..

Ankita :- tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya .?

Nischal ( teri maa ×××××××..) :- ( gusse se chilate hue ) sun office me ek chipkali hai.. vo pregnant thi to ek din achanak hi uske pet me dard hone laga...
to fir me use hospital le gaya or uski delivery karvay..
7 bacho ko janam diya hai… or saare bache healthy hue hai or ab kal un sab ka name karan rakha hai mene..

Ankita :- ( rone lagi) aahhaahaha...aahhhaahahaa…

Nischal :- rona band karo or suno kal hum milte hai betway coffee shop me okk..

Anikta ka rona band ho jata hai ek min me or bolti hai :- okk jaan …byyy love you...

Or call cut ho jata hai...

Nischal ne kehna band hi kiya tha ki Leo bol padta hai..

Leo :- chipkali bacha na peda kare a andda muke andda.…

Nischal :- haan tere baap ne chipkali ka business khol rakha hai to vo roj chipkaliyo ki delivery karvata hoga jo tujhe sab pata hai bhosdk...

Vicky :- hahahahaa …..haahahaaa...hahahaaaa…. Tu mujhe milne kyu nahi aaya?….

Tino pet pakad ke hasne lage.…
or fir thodi der me hasna band kar ke wapis peck banaya or vo pack pite hue vicky bola..

Vicky : - haan to ab aage kya hua tu coffee shop me milne gaya tha ya nahi ?

Nischal : - haan batata hu pehle pack to pi lene de...

( Story ki thodi si jhalak hai baki sab ka intro details agle update me dunga..)

Nice and awesome update...