Romance RANG TERE ISHQ KA

[Naina]

Matlab comedy ka tadka jaari hai is update mein bhi....
sach mein ankita aur nischal ne to pura dhamaka hi kar puri story thread pe hi khas kar anita ne....

Pichli baar ankita ke paas gaya kyun nahi nischal, is baat ko baar baar lagtar repeat kar rahi thi... is baar coffee order karne par repeat karne lag gayi ki coffee mangvayi kyun
Lagat hai is ankita ke kuch dimagi screw dhile pad gaye hain
mana ki hai thodi pagal lekin ye bhi ek sach ki ek number kamini bhi hai..... Ushe nischal nahi uske pause se pyar hua, waise ye jabardasti ka pyar tha kyunki blackmail karke nischal ki life mein entry li thi usne....
actually ye ek tarah se domination hai aur sath hi saamne ko mentaly torture karke ankita ko maza aata hai... isliye wo sab karti thi wo.... ek tarah agar nischal agar baitha hai tab bhi ushe problem aur agar kahi chala gaya hai tab bhi ushe problem...

Sukar hai ki nischal ne apne parents ..matlab apni mom ko saari baatein bata di.... shayad us ankita ke ghar jaake uske parents ke saamne saari baatein saaf saaf baatake nischal ka picha chhod dene ke liye kahi ho... Ankita ke parents ne bhi ankita ko samjhaya ho isliye nischal ki jaan bach gayi us kapti ankita se...

Khair..... jo bhi comedy bharpoor create kar sakti hai ankita
Bichara wo waiter next time waha agar ankita gayi to caffe chhod ke hi bhaag jaaye shayad

Shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan aur sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

 

[Dhaal Urph Pradeep]

Me ek or story likhne ja raha hu
or ye story
romance, comedy, drama story hogi ..
Aap sab ke support ki bahot jaroorat hogi
story me guide karne ke liye mujhe.
to support kariye ga...
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एक ओर नई स्टोरी के लिए बहुत बहुत बधाई। आप की पिछली स्टोरी नहीं पढ़ पाए लेकिन इस स्टोर में देर सवेर अंत टक साथ बना रहूंगा।

 

[Lucky..]

Superbb Updatee

Yeh Ankita toh puri tarah se mentally sick hai. Ek hi baat ke pichhe padh jaati hai. Aur nautanki mein iska koi jawaab hi nhi hai. Aisi ladki ko Nischal ne 3 saal tak sambhala tha.

Itna toh pakka hai ke Ankita ek bahot hi lalchi kisam ki ladki hai jo Nischal ke saath sirf aur sirf uske paiso ke liye saath thi.

Par finally Nischal ko uss pagal se shanti mili. Aur yeh kaam mein uska saath diya uski maa ne jisko Nischal har ek baat bata deta tha.


Tumne Coffee kyo mangwayi

Bahot bahot dhanywaad Jaguaar Bhai

 

[Lucky..]

Next update

REVO nahi aa rahe jyada...

 

[Lucky..]

Matlab comedy ka tadka jaari hai is update mein bhi....
sach mein ankita aur nischal ne to pura dhamaka hi kar puri story thread pe hi khas kar anita ne....

Pichli baar ankita ke paas gaya kyun nahi nischal, is baat ko baar baar lagtar repeat kar rahi thi... is baar coffee order karne par repeat karne lag gayi ki coffee mangvayi kyun
Lagat hai is ankita ke kuch dimagi screw dhile pad gaye hain
mana ki hai thodi pagal lekin ye bhi ek sach ki ek number kamini bhi hai..... Ushe nischal nahi uske pause se pyar hua, waise ye jabardasti ka pyar tha kyunki blackmail karke nischal ki life mein entry li thi usne....
actually ye ek tarah se domination hai aur sath hi saamne ko mentaly torture karke ankita ko maza aata hai... isliye wo sab karti thi wo.... ek tarah agar nischal agar baitha hai tab bhi ushe problem aur agar kahi chala gaya hai tab bhi ushe problem...

Sukar hai ki nischal ne apne parents ..matlab apni mom ko saari baatein bata di.... shayad us ankita ke ghar jaake uske parents ke saamne saari baatein saaf saaf baatake nischal ka picha chhod dene ke liye kahi ho... Ankita ke parents ne bhi ankita ko samjhaya ho isliye nischal ki jaan bach gayi us kapti ankita se...

Khair..... jo bhi comedy bharpoor create kar sakti hai ankita
Bichara wo waiter next time waha agar ankita gayi to caffe chhod ke hi bhaag jaaye shayad

Shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan aur sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills

Itni gehray se update ko pathne or samjane ke liye apka bahot bahot dhanywaad Naina ji

AAPKA SANDAAR REVO KE KIYE SHUKRIYA....

 

[Luffy]

UPDATE - 02​

hum charo ne pack khatam kiya or loe fir bola..

LOY : - ab aage bata coffee shop gaya tha ki nahi?

NISCHAL :- hmmm...to suno...


RESTAURANT KE UNDER...ANKITA WITH NISCHAL..


hum dono ek table par bethe the..
Restaurant bahot mast tha.. under music bhi baj raha tha romantic wala..

Ankita chup chap bethi thi kuch bhi bol nahi rahi thi to mene pucha...

NISCHAL :- kya hua tujhe kab se yuhi chup bethi ho..?..

ANKITA :- ........

NISCHAL : -(pyar se) kya hua?

ANKITA: - .............

ab mujhe gussa bhi aane laga tha ankita kuch bol nahi rahi thi is liye..

NISCHAL :- kyaa........hua....?

bc ab bhi kuch nahi boli..

NISCHAL :- ( jorr se ) kyaa huaa...?

ankita rone lagi....

UskiI rone ki avaj sun kar waiter aa gaya hamare table pe vo niche jhuk kar mera or ankita ka face dekhne laga...

NISCHAL :- kya hai be?

WAITER :- order...

NISCHAL :- to tu mere sar pe chad ke order likhega kya? ...dur khada re be.. jaa do cup chai leke aa..

ankita jo rona band kar ke hum dono ko dekh rahi thi vo fatak se boli..

ANKITA :- mujhe chai nahi pini...

NISCHAL :- to coffee order kar du..?

ANKITA :- no mujhe coffee bhi nahi pini..

NISCHAL :- baby coffee to tumhe bahot pasand hai na to fir kyu nahi pini?

ANKITA :- yuhi...mujhe nahi pini...

waiter ankita ko puchne laga

WAITER :- pasta lau mem..

NISCHAL :- coffee..

WAITER :- pasta..

NISCHAL :- tu jaa bhe do cup coffee leke aa...

waiter chala gaya or ankita boli..

ANKITA :- tune coffee kyu mangvay?

NISCHAL :- yaar vo sab chod hum kitne din bad mile hai kuch achhi bat karte hai na..

ANKITA :- teri wajah se....tune coffee kyu magvay?

NISCHAL :- kuch or baat kare?.. tumhare liye office ka sara kam chhod kar aaya hu..ab puri raat jaag kar mujhe Din ka sara kam khatam karna hoga..

ANKITA :- to isme me kya karu?....tune coffee kyu magvay?

saala mera dimang kharab ho raha tha par fir bhi me use pyar se bat karne ki sochi...

NISCHAL :- tujhe pata hai mane aaj white colour ki baniyan pehni hai..

ANKITA :- tune coffee kyu magvay?
NISCHAL : - ( bh***** ) tu aaj mast dikh rahi hai..ek dam hot...

ANKITA :- hmmm.. thank you... but tune coffee kyu magvay?

NISCHAL :- udhar dekh red top wali ladki bhi coffee pi rahi hai...

ANKITA :- ( gusse me or jorr se) tera dhyan us kamini par hai .. tune coffee kyu magvay?..

Ankita itni jor se boli thi ki restaurant ke under ke sare log hamari taraf dekh rahe the..

NISCHAL : - ( dheere se) dekh sab log hume hi dekh rahe hai to dheere bol....

ANKITA :- tumhe sab logo ki padi hai sivay mere...tune coffee kyu magvay ?

NISCHAL :- abe yaar coffee kyu mangavate hai log?...pine ke liye.. to mene bhi pine ke liye hi mangvay hogi na ..

ANKITA :- par mujhe coffee nahi pini to tune coffee kyu magvay ?

ab mera dimang kharab ho gaya tha bc .. to me fir gusse me bola..

NISCHAL : -( gusse se) tujhe coffee nahi pini to teri coffee me pi jaunga ...

ANKITA :- tujhe do do cup coffee pini thi to tune mere liye coffee mangvane ka natak kyu kiya?..

NISCHAL :- ( gusse me) tujhe coffee nahi pini to me kya karu ...ab order kiya hai to pini to padegi na..

ANKITA : - mere mana karne ke bad bhi tune coffee kyu mangvay? Me nahi piyungi to tujhe bhi nahi pini chahiye na..

NISCHAL ( gusse me table pe gusa mar ke ) ye mere baap ka restaurant nahi hai jo hume free me bethne dega

Me itni jor se bola tha ki restaurant me jo music chal raha tha vo bhi band ho gaya...

ANKITA :- ( rote hue) kitna jorr se chilaya tu...music bhi band ho gaya...

NISCHAL :- (music bajane wale waiter se) o bhai music chalu rakh..

ANKITA :- kitne dino bad hum mile hai fir bhi tum muj par itna gussa kar raha hai.. mere mana karne ke bad bhi tune coffee mangay...mujhe fikar nahi hogi kya tumhari...tumhare papa kitni mehnat karke paisa kamate hoge or tum aise paise barbad kar rahe ho...tum ne coffee kyu magvay ?..

bc mujhe ab bahot gussa aa raha tha kab se ek hi bat pe atki hai ye...tabhi waiter aa gaya ..

WAITER :- lo sir apki coffee ....

mene gusse me waiter ka coller pakad ke niche khisa or bola :- teri coffee ab daal de apni g**d ke under....kaha dalega?

WAITER :-( darte hue) under..

NISCHAL :- kaha dalega.?

WAITER :- meri g***d ke under...

mene waiter ko choda or bill ke paise table pe rakh kar jaldi nikal gaya restaurant se...
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LOY :- haahaahaahaaa.....tune coffee kyu mangvay....hahahahaaa.....

NISCHAL : - Saala mene sapne me bhi ye nahi socha tha ki coffee bhi kisika breakup kara sakti hai...

Vicky :- ( girl ki avaj nikal te hue) tune coffee kyu magvay .....hahhaaaahhaa...

NISCHAL : - abe ab pack banao bc...

LOY :- dhule fatafat char glass coffee bana...hahahaahaaa...

DHULE : - abe fatisar uska breakup ho gaya or tujhe masti chadi hai be..

NISCHAL :- abe mujhe breakup ho gaya uska gam nahi hai... vaise bhi me ankita ko pyaar nahi karta tha vo to usne mujhe blackmail karke haa bulvaya tha..tum chutiyo ko to pata hai na usne kya natak kiya tha school me..

VICKY :- haan be yaad hai...usne propose kiya tha to tune mana kar diya tha to vo school ki building par chad kar kudne ki dhamki di tab jake tune ha kaha tha..

NISCHAL :- mene haa kaha tab se mere credit card ka istemal itna hua hai ki utna to mene 10 saal me bhi nahi kiya hoga utna tin saal me ho gaya....
har bar 50 hajar...1 laakh utne ki shopping karti hai vo or to or uske sare kharche vo mere paiso se hi karti...mobile bhi mene use gift kia tha iPhone vo bhi usne samne se hi manga apni birthday par...fir activa bhi mere paiso se li usne ... saala jab papa mujhe puchte ki tere credit card se itne paisa kaha kharch karta hai...to me kuch bol hi nahi pata...saala Pareshan ho gaya tha is liye ab usase dur hi rahunga...or mene maa ko sab bata diya hai to maa ne sab handle kar liya hai....

LOY :- Abe tu aunty ko sab bate kyu bata deta hai...? Bhala aisi bate apni maa ko kon batata hai be..?

NISCHAL :- abe meri life me agar koi hai jise me koi bhi bat nahi chupata to vo meri maa hai.. tum logo ne suna hoga ki maa or beti sabse best saheliya hoti hai... or aise hi mere or maa ke bich bhi best friend wala rista bhi hai....bas fark itna hai ki me beta hu par maa mujhe beti ki tarah rakhti hai apni saheli hi manti hai... isi liye to maa ne mera nick name nishu rakha hai...

jab ankita ne school me jo nakat kiya vo bhi maine usi din maa ko sab bata diya tha..

tab maa ne bhi kaha tha ki abhi use proposal ko accpet kar le abhi use mana kar dega to fir se suicide karne ki Koshish kar sakti hai...kuch jyada problem ho to mujhe bata dena me sab dekh lungi...
Or phir mene restaurant wali bat batay maa ko to maa ankita ke ghar gay thi..
maa ne ankita ke ghar jake kya kiya ye to mene nahi pucha par tab se ankita ka ek bhi call ya msg nahi aaya hai...

VICKY :- aunty sach me tera bahot dhyan rakhti hai...jaise Tu aaj bhi 1, 2 saal ka chota bachha ho...

Abhi hum baat kar hi rahe the ki koi hume dhundte hue idhar hi aa raha tha or...vickida...kaha chala gaya...nalayak...
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TO BE CONTINUED.................

Superb update

 

[Dhaal Urph Pradeep]

Heroine ka name meri xgf ka rakhne wala hu..

अरे भाई क्यो xgf को याद करके दिल पर छाले पड़वा रहे हों जो अभी अभी हैं उसी को याद करों

 

[Dhaal Urph Pradeep]

Heroine ka name meri xgf ka rakhne wala hu..

अरे भाई क्यो xgf को याद करके दिल पर छाले पड़वा रहे हों जो अभी अभी हैं उसी को याद करों

SANJU ( V. R. ) aalu Xabhi Luffy Ankitarani Jaguaar Mahi Maurya Sauravb DARK WOLFKING DREAMBOY40 Dhaal Urph Pradeep
revo jarur dijiyega is story pe....

आज ही टपके है तो रेवो भी जल्दी ही दे दुंगा

 

[Lucky..]

अरे भाई क्यो xgf को याद करके दिल पर छाले पड़वा रहे हों जो अभी अभी हैं उसी को याद करों

Naina ji se uski aisi ki taisi karvani hai...

 

[Lucky..]

अरे भाई क्यो xgf को याद करके दिल पर छाले पड़वा रहे हों जो अभी अभी हैं उसी को याद करों

आज ही टपके है तो रेवो भी जल्दी ही दे दुंगा

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