Incest Ratna aur uska beta

[Abhi123]

Waiting bro

 

[Mass]

Seriously, such a sexy story..but left in between...yeh bhi adhoora reh gaya..so bad...
Update kaa to doubt hi hain...

 

[Siraj Patel]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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As you all know, in previous week we announced USC and also opened Rules and Queries thread after some time. Before all this, chit-chat thread already opened in Hindi section.

Well, Just want to inform that it is a Short story contest, in this you can post post story under any prefix. with minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words . That is why, i want to invite you so that you can portray your thoughts using your words into a story which whole xforum would watch. This is a great step for you and for your stories cause USC's stories are read by every reader of Xforum. You are one of the best writers of Xforum, and your story is also going very well. That is why We whole heatedly request you to write a short story For USC. We know that you do not have time to spare but even after that we also know that you are capable of doing everything and bound to no limits.

And the readers who does not want to write they can also participate for the "Best Readers Award" .. You just have to give your reviews on the Posted stories in USC

"Winning Writer's will be awarded with Cash prizes and another awards "and along with that they get a chance to sticky their thread in their section so their thread remains on the top. That is why This is a fantastic chance for you all to make a great image on the mind of all reader and stretch your reach to the mark. This is a golden chance for all of you to portrait your thoughts into words to show us here in USC. So, bring it on and show us all your ideas, show it to the world.

Entry thread will be opened on 7th February, meaning you can start submission of your stories from 7th of feb and that will be opened till 25th of feb. During this you can post your story, so it is better for you to start writing your story in the given time.

And one more thing! Story is to be posted in one post only, cause this is a short story contest that means we can only hope for short stories. So you are not permitted to post your story in many post/parts. If you have any query regarding this, you can contact any staff member.


To chat or ask any doubt on a story, Use this thread — Chit Chat Thread

To Give review on USC's stories, Use this thread — Review Thread

To Chit Chat regarding the contest, Use this thread— Rules & Queries Thread

To post your story, use this thread — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	500 Rupees + Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership
Best Supporting Reader	Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff

 

[चंनदंनमिश्रा]

Update 12
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Ratna khali haath ghar toh aa gyi thee lekin ab kuuch Bholu kee bhuukh ka intezaam bhi karna tha. Ratna ne tabhi 500 ka krara note apne blouse mein se nikala aur Bholu ko uski psnd ki sabzi bazaar se laane ko bola dia. Bholu apne mann pasand dhaabe par gya aur bdia see 2 sabzia apne aur Ratna ke liye pack krwa kar le aaya. Itni der tak Ratna yehi soch rhi thee jo Babli aur uska beta kar rhe thay woh kitna jayaz tha. Ratna ka dimaag ab sahi galat se yha pohoch gya tha ki aakhir woh kitna jayaz hai, uske vichar aur swabhaav dono mein parivarton toh ho rha tha aur sabse ajeeb baat toh ye hi thee subah hee usne Bholu se apni choot mein jeebh firvayi thee tab bhi usko sharam thee ki kya sahi aur kya galat!! Aadha galat toh subah hee krke baithi thee.

Bholu sabzia lekar aa gya aur Ratna bhi rotia sek kar baithi hui thee. Dono maa bete khana kha rhe thay aur baatein kr rhe thay.

Bholu : "Maa aaj pta hai meine kya dekha"

Ratna(mann mein): "Ptani aaj kya dekh aaya ye ladka fir ajeebo gareeb sawaal karega."

Bholu : "Sun rahi hai maa?"

Ratna : "Haan haan bta aaj kya dekha?"

Bholu : "Maa aaj Hamid Chacha Nargis ke saath thay aur apne ghar ke pichwade mein apna munna uske muuh mein daal rhe thay. Ye kya hota hai maa? Shayd unke munna mein bhi dard hoga."

Ratna ka khana atak jaata hai.

Bholu : "Maa ye Nargis munna ko chus rhi thee, aur ye Hamid Chacha ka munna mere se chotta hai... "

Ratna : "Matlab matlab..?"

Bholu : "Maa woh Nargis Hamid Chacha ka munna chus rhi thee aur baar baar bol rhi thee ki nanu tumhara hathiyaar boht swaad hai?, ye hathiyaar kya hota hai maa aur ye swaad kyu hota hai mein kha skta hu?"

Ratna : "Nahi Balwaan ye hathiyaar khuud nahi chuste, khata nahi hai isko koi, Nargis Hamid Chacha ke munna ka dard duur kr rhi thee."

Bholu : "Haan Hamid Chacha karaah bhi rhe thay aur Nargis ke baal bhi pakad rkhe thay.."

Ratna : "Haan ho skta hai."

Bholu : "Maa ek baat bta na jab Hamid Chacha ko aaram pd gya toh unhone Ratna ke muuh par safed susu kyu kia?"

Ratna : "Arre Buddhu woh susu nahi tha woh tu ye samajhle unke Munna ki Malai thee, jaise meri Munia mein se aati hai na vaise hee thee."

Bholu : "Maa tu toh malai mere muuh mein daalti hai na? Toh Hamid Chacha ne woh malai uske chehre par kyu daal di."

Ratna : "Usko khani nahi hogi na."

Bholu : "Kha toh rahi thee woh maa, apne chehre par unglio se lga lga key."

Ratna : "Fir galti se gir gyi hogi.."

Bholu(bd bda kar): "Badi ajeeb glti hai, muuh ke bahar sab gira dia."

Ratna : "Tu ye sab kitni der dekhta rha wha?"

Bholu : "4-5 minute, fir mein chla gya wha sey."

Ratna : "Jab bhi aisa munna munia ka kuuch hua kare na wha se chla jaya kar, ruka mat kr kisi ko aise dekhna acchi baat ni hoti."

Bholu : "Theek hai maa tu kehti hai toh theek hee hoga."

Ratna : "Chal khana khaley kal firse jaldi jana hai dukaan par kaam boht hai, bistar par chalte hai."

Dono maa bete khana khtm krke, gate lgakar apne kamre mein chaley jaate hai aur dono bistar laite hote hai.

Ratna : "Balwaan"

Bholu : "Haan maa"

Ratna : "Soya toh nahi na?"

Bholu : "Nahi maa bta kya hua, chai bnani hai?"

Ratna : "Nahi nahi chai nahi bnani, accha ek baat bta mein tujhey kaisi lgti hu?"

Bholu : "Sabse acchi."

Ratna : "Sacchi sacchi bta maskhari nahi"

Bholu : "Sacch mein maa"

Ratna : "Tujhey lgta hai ki mein tere saath galat karungi kuuch ya tera galat hone dungi?"

Bholu : "Nahi maa tu boht samajhdaar hai, tu hmesha saath rhegi toh mujhye koi dikkat nahi aayegi."

Ye sunkar bechari Ratna ko bhi taras aa gya ki jo ladka jisko sab mandh buddhi kehte hai woh bhi apni maa ke pyar aur gusse ko chinta hee smjhta tha.

Ratna : "Mere baad kya hoga tera balwaan?"

Bholu : "Aise mt bol maa, ajeeb lgta hai"

Ye bolkar Bholu apni kamar uski taraf kr deta hai aur karvat palat deta hai.

Ratna : "Accha sun na bura kyu maan rha hai, sun toh sahi."

Bholu firse uski taraf dekhta hai.

Ratna : "Chal ja andar se meri nayi saree lekar aa, meine 2 hafte se pehnkar nahi dekhi dikkat hogi toh kal vapis bhi ho jayengi ja lekar aa."

Bholu uth jata hai aur apni maa ki saree lekar vapis kmre mein aa jaata hai.

Ratna bistar se neechay utarkar apni saree kholna shuru kar deti hai lekin iss baar uska dhyan Bholu aur uske lund pr hee tha. Bholu bde dhyan se apni maa ko dekh rha tha usko khabar hee nahi thee ki aaj Ratna ki nazar bhi uspar thee. Ratna sabse pehle apni saree utar deti hai, Bholu bhi dekhe jaa rha tha, Ratna fir apna santari peticoat ka naada khol deti hai aur naada chorrte huye Bholu ko hee dekh rhi hoti hai. Jaise jaise Ratna ka peticoat niche girta hai vaise vaise Bholu ke pajame mein baitha sultaan tight hona shuru ho jaata hai. Ratna ko sharam toh aa rhi thee ki aakhir woh kya kar rhi thee lekin naa jaane apni tareef sunne ka mann usko itna kyu kar rha tha. Ratna ab bas ek santari blouse mein thee aur uska baaki shareer nanga tha.

Ratna : "Ab bta kaisi lg rhi hu mein?"

Bholu : "Maa pehle kapdey toh pehnkar dikha."

Ratna : "Buddhu hai tu ek number ka,", aur ye bolkar woh apna blouse bhi khol deti hai.

Ratna ke bdde bdde safed chuchay ekdm se baahr aa jaate hai. Chuche kaseelay nahi thay lekin itne sundar thay ki koi bhi aadmi unko dekhkar unka dhuudh hee peenay baith jaaye. Ratna apne haanthon se apne chucho ko sehla rhi thee.

Ratna : "Iss panni mein ye peela blouse lekr aa aur pehn ne mein meri mdad kar, wha baitha mt reh"

Bholu uthta hai aur blouse lekr uske pass aa jaata hai. Ratna blouse mein dono haath daal leti hai aur Bholu ko saamne se button lgane ko bolti hai. Ye blouse Ratna ko 2 number chotta tha usko pta tha ki ye aaram se band toh hoga nahi woh dekhna chahti thee ki Bholu isko band kr bhi paayega ya nahi.

Bhola(boht masakkat ke baad): "Maa ye toh band nahi ho rha hai tight toh nahi hai."

Ratna : "Jaan nahi hai tere mein? Kitna khilati hu tujhey dhang se band kar, dhyan lga."

Bholu firse masakkat krne lg jaata hai aur iss bheech mein uske haath baar baar Ratna ki chuchio ko masal rhe thay, jab jab Ratna ka blouse band hone ko aata Ratna ki chuchia aapas mein pisne lg jaati jisse usko firsey charam ka ehsaas hota. Bechara Bholu puri koshish kar rha tha par nakaam tha. Ek baar mein Bholu ne jhatka lgakar band toh kr dia lekin Ratna ne jaise hee saas bahar choddi, button todkar blouse firse khul gya ab Bholu apni maa ko dekh rha tha ki kya kare? Ratna bhi Bholu ko dekh rhi thee aur hass padi uska chehra hee aisa ho gya tha jaisey usne aisa hote huye na suna aur na dekha.

Ratna : "Chal tu baith ja wha ho gya iska kabada, mein toh suit hee pehn leti hu isko vapis kar dungi kal, laa woh button de uthkar"

भोलू बटन उत्थान दे देता है और बिस्तर पर बैठा जाता है। रत्ना जल्दी से कपडे बदलकर अपना घर वाला सूट पहनने लेटी है।

भोलू: "माँ तेरा ये तो बहुत बड़े बड़े हैं?"

रत्ना: "ये क्या?"

भोलू उसके चुचो की तरफ इशारा करता है।

रत्ना: "इन्को धोते कहते हैं"

भोलू : "इनमे दुध है?"

रत्ना: "नहीं मेरे में अब नहीं है, पहले था।"

भोलू : "खा गया? तुने पेशाब लिया?"

रत्ना: "नहीं निकममे तुने पी लिया, जब छोटा था तो इतना धुध पीठ था मेरी जान निकल जाती थी। अब उमर हो गई है मेरी धुध नहीं आता है इनमे"

भोलू : "फिर माँ ये इतने बड़े क्यों है जब इनमे कुछ नहीं है।"

रत्ना अब क्या ही बोले इन देखालो के जवाब किसी पर नहीं होते।

रत्ना: "बस भगवान ने ऐसे ही दिए हैं।"

भोलू: "इनमे तो ख़ूब सारा धुध होता में सारा पी जाता।"

रत्ना: "हां हां क्यों नहीं।"

मन-मस्तिष्क मे अपनी माँ के प्रति कोई गलत भावना नही थी,

 

[Devang]

Update 1
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Ratna Parashar ek sajjan mahila thee jiski umar kareeban 42 saal thee. Shadi toh acche himachali ghar mein hui thee pati bhi accha mila tha lekin kismat itni kharab thee ki bechari shadi hote hee vidhwa ho gyi. Uske pati dil ke dore se jawani mein hee ja basey. Jaatey jaatey Ratna ko ek baccha bhi de gye jiska naam Balwan tha. Ratna usko pyar se bholu bulati thee. Ratna ko bachpan se aas thee ki uska beta bda hokar collector bnega lekin uski ye aas bhi kabhi puri na ho paayi bachpan mein ilaaz karake pta chla ki Bholu yaani Balwaan dimaag se boht kamzor hai. Woh kaam toh kar skta hai lekin uske baski sochna samajhna zyada nahi hai. Bholu bechara kuuch zyada bolta bhi nahi tha. Ratna ko bachpan mein ye ek karara jhatka lga tha par usne haar na maanke apne bete ko dimaagi nahi toh sharirik taur par mazboot bnane ki thaan li. Yha par Ratna par bhagwaan ne koi prakop nahi kia. Bholu aaj 22 saal ka tha lekin shareer se ekdm pehlwaan tha. Zyada kuuch bolta nahi thee dikhne mein theek thaak tha toh koi zyada usko chidata chedta nahi thaa. Bholu dil ka bhi accha tha logon ki mdad bhi karta tha isliye mohalle mein usko koi pareshan nahi karta tha. Ratna ko apne bete par boht naaz tha aakhir usne itni dikkato ke baad bhi samaaj mein jagah bna li aur Bholu bhi apni maa ka agyakaari aur pujari dono hee tha. Woh apni maa se dilo jaan se pyar krta tha. Ratna aur Bholu kabhi lautkar Himachal se nahi gye aur Ranikhet mein hee unhone apni zameen par kheti aur market mein ek chotti parchoon ki dukaan shuru kar di thee.

Ratna ne kheto ko kiraye par de dia tha jinka har 6 mhine mein fasal katne par bhada aa jata tha. Khet theek thaak thay aur parchoon ki dukaan par woh Bholu ke saath khud baitha karti thee. Ratna galla sambhalti thee aur Bholu samaan nikalta tha. Isi sahare dono maa beto ki gaadi ek dusre ke bharose acchi chal rhi thee.

Ratna jaanti toh thee ki uska beta dimaag se kamzor hai aur zyada sawaal jawaab nahi karta hai, toh woh usse kuuch chupna chupana nahi karti thee. Woh nahakar uske aage se nikal jaati, Bholu bechara kuuch janta samajhta toh tha nahi kabhi kuch bolta nahi thaa aur Ratna bhi zyada iss baat par dhyan na deti.

Ek din dukaan ka kaam krke Ratna aur Bholu ghar jaa rhe thay, bechari Ratna bhi aaj pura din dukaan mein lagi rhi kyuki bheed hee itni thee Diwali aa rhi thee, log jamkar samaan khareed rhe thay, acchi kamai bhi ho rhi thee par kaam itna zyada tha ki dono maa bete puri tarah vyast thay tab bhi log bheed ke maare vapis ja rhe thay.

Ratna aur Bholu dono ghar ja rhe thay.

Ratna(chalte chalte) : "Arre mere balwaan ghar jaakar mere pair toh dbaiyo, mar gyi teri maa aaj thaqaan mein."
Bholu : "Haan maa"
Ratna : "Kab tak mujhey aisey hee pareshan karega, shadi vaadi kar ley aur mujhey fursat de iss kaam sey"

Bholu kuuch nahi bola.

Ratna : "Arre bolta kyu nahi hai re kuuch, kab karega shadi"
Bholu(Kuuch sochkar) : "Nahi maa, vrna tu akeli ho jayegi"
Ratna : "Mere sher kab tak meri chinta karega thodda tu apne par bhi dhyan dey"

Bholu fir kuuch nahi bolta

Ratna : "Samajh gyi nahi bolega kuuch tu, chal pehle tu ghar chal ke mere pair dba"



Dono maa beta ghar pohoch jaate hai, raat toh ho hee chuki thee. Ratna darwaaza band kar deti hai aur dono khana khake andar waale kamre mein chale jaate hai. Ratna bistar par lait jaat hai aur Bholu uske pairo ke pass tel ki shishi lekar baith jaata hai. Ratna apni saree aur peticoat thodda upar ghutno tak kr leti hai.

Bholu har baar ki tarah tel haatho par lgakar uske ghutno par lgana shuru kr deta hai.

Ratna : "Thodda upar kar Bholu, ghutno mein nahi jangho mein dard hai aur thodda dheemay masak beta itni jaan nahi hai budhia ki taango mein"

Bholu baat sun leta hai aur apne haath Ratna ki gori janghon mein upar ki tarah firane lgta hai, Bholu ka sakht haanth lagne par Ratna ko aaram pad rha tha. Bholu bechare ko kuuch pta toh nahi tha woh toh apna dhyan lgakar Ratna ki jaanghon ki malish kar rha tha lekin uska haanth galti se Ratna ki jhaaton mein lg gya aur ek baal khich kar tuut gya.

Ratna : "Daiyaa mar gyi re, agar kya kar rha hai bholu aaram se kar, baal kheech diye re mere."

Bholu haan men sir hilata hai aur fir aaram se maalish krne lgta hai par fir se Ratna ke baal khich jaate hai aur woh dard mein cheek padti hai.

Ratna : "Kya kar rha hai satya nashiye baal kyu noch rha hai mere."

Bholu : "Maa peticoat mein kuuch dikh nahi rha hai toh pta nahi chal rha hai haath kahan ja rha hai, abse dhyan rkhunga"

Ratna ko Bholu ki baat sahi lgti hai, usko bura bhi lgta hai ki woh uspr bewajah chilla di. Ratna koshish yehi karti thee ki Bholu par kamse se kamse gussa kare lekin maa toh maa hai pyar kregi toh daategi bhi. Ratna kuuch sochti hai aur apna peticoat kamar tak upar kar leti hai.

Ratna : "Ab kar aaram sey beta dekh kar, pyar sey."

Bholu fir haan mein sir hila deta hai. Bholu bhi pehli baar peticoat ke andar ki cheez dekh rha tha. Uske saamne 2 gori jaanghein aur unke beech ek baalo mein fsi hui choot thee. Ratna ki jhaato ka jungle boht ghana tha, uski choot toh usi mein kahi chupi hui thee. Bholu bechare ko pta toh tha nahi ki ye kya hai, woh toh yehi soch rha tha ki uske pairo ke beech jo hai woh yha kyu nahi hai?

Behtareen update

 

[Devang]

Update 2

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Kyuki Bholu zyada sawaal karta nahi tha toh Ratna bhi uske shaamne sharam sharmana kam hee karti thee. Bholu haanthon se malish toh kar rha tha lekin uski aankhein aur dimaag abhi bhi apni maa ke pairo ke beech thee, uska dimaag abhi bhi yehi soch rha tha ki aakhir kisi ke neechay itne baal ho kaise sakte hai aur baal ho bhi toh uska lund kahan hai? Bechare Bholu ko pta hee nahi thaa ki aurat ke pass lund nahi balki sabse shaktishaali hathiyaar choot hoti hai.

Dimaag kahi aur hone se bechare Bholu ke haanth dheeray chal rhe thay, aankh band kre leti Ratna usk taraf dekhti hai ki aakhir uske haanth dheemay kyu ho gye hai aur dekhti hai ki uska beta bde gaur se uski choot dekh rha hai. Ratna ko thodda ajeeb toh lgta hai lekin woh yehi sochkar taal deti hai ki uska beta kya hee janta hai kya hee puchlega, puchega bhi toh woh usko kuuch aur bolkar taal degi.


Bholu : "Maa"
Ratna : "Haan"
Bholu : "Ek baat puchu?"
Ratna : "Bol beta"
Bholu : "Maa tere yha itne baal kyu hai?"
Ratna : "Beta sabhi ke hote hai meine bss htaye nahi hai, tere bhi hongey par ye sab tu bahar kisi se mt bolna acchi baat nahi hai aise puchna"

Bholu ye sunkar chup ho jata hai. Ratna bhi firse shant hokar laiti rehti hai.

Bholu : "Maa"
Ratna : "Ab kya?"
Bholu : "Ek baat aur puchu?"
Ratna(muuh banakar) : "Puuch"
Bholu : "Maa tere pairo ke beech kuuch nahi hai, kahan gya?"

Ye sunkar Ratna ki hasi nikal jaati hai, usko yakeen nahi ho rha tha ki uska beta itna seedha hai.

Ratna : "Hai toh sahi, tujhe nahi dikh rhi hai, tu mard hai na tere pass alag chiz hoti hai aurat ke pass yehi hota hai."
Bholu : "Kuuch dikh toh nahi rha maa, kahan hai kuuch?"
Ratna(maathe par haath marke) : "Baalon ke neechay hai beta, tu kis kaam mein lg gya tu malish karna itna soch mat."

Ye sunkar Bholu chup ho jata hai aur 10 minute kuuch nahi bolta. Ratna ko bura lgta hai ki ek toh uska beta kabhi kabhi usse sawaal karta hai aur ab woh usko chup kar rhi hai. Ratna ye bhi soch rhi thee ki Bholu ko ye sab btana theek hoga ya nahi lekin ant mein woh yehi sochti hai ki Bholu jo baat krta hai usse hee karta hai toh ab kya hee chupana aur btana.

Ratna : "Balwaan"
Bholu : "Haan maa"
Ratna : "Baalo ko haath se hta kar dekh"

Bholu malish se haath htakar jhaato ke neechay Ratna ki choot dhundh leta hai.

Ratna(choot par haath lgte hi) : "Yehi hai beta jo hm aurton ke pass hota hai."
Bholu : "Ek baat aur puchu maa?"

Ratna soch leti hai aaj ye kissa khtm krke hee soyegi.

Ratna : "Haan puch beta."
Bholu : "Isko kehte kya hai?"

Ab Ratna fass jaati hai ki ab woh kya bole agar usne Bholu ko btaya ki isko choot kehte hai toh kahi agar galti se bhi usne bahar ye boldia toh aaj tak jo izzat bni thee uska kabada ho jayega.

Ratna(boht sochkar) : "Beta isko munni kehte hai."
Bholu : "Munni"
Ratna : "Haan"
Bholu : "Maa fir mere pass kya hai?"
Ratna : "Munna!! Tere pass Munna hai."
Bholu : "Accha maa"
Bholu : "Maa ye dono alag alag kyu hai?"

Ratna ko samajh nahi aa rha tha ki woh uske sawaal ka jawaab kaise de, woh Bholu ke iss sawaal ka jawaab nahi deti hai aur usko so jaane ke liye bolti hai. Bholu bechara chup chaap sone lgta hai.

Ratna(mann mein): "Aaj isko kya ho gya, itne sawaal kaisey aa rhe hai iske dimaag mein, ", ye sochte sochte uske dimaag mein baat ghumne lgti hai ki kaisey har doctor usko yehi keh rha tha ki Bholu theek tabhi ho skta hai jab uski iccha sakti ko koi dbaye na. Ratna ko lg toh rha tha ki usne kahi galti na krdi ho lekin fir bhi woh chup chaap so hee jaati hai.

Subah uthkar bhi Ratna thoddi bechain thee, ab woh khudko kosh rhi thee ki itne saal mein jaakar Bholu ne kuuch puchna shuru kia aur usne usko nakaar dia. Ratna ko iss baat se ab sir dard ho rha tha ki kahi uski wajah se Bholu aisa hee na reh jaaye. Uska dimaag ab har jagah ghoom rha tha. Ratna kuuch bhi kar skti thee lekin apne ladke ki zindagi apne haanthon nahi kharab kar skti thee. Ye khyal aate hee Ratna faisla kar leti hai ki ab Bholu kuuch puchega toh woh usko mna nahi kregi chahe kuuch bhi ho bhaad mein jaaye sab.

Bholu aur Ratna subah apni dukaan par chal dete hai. Dukaan par puray din ka kaam krke woh shaam ko laut aate hai. Ratna bistar par baithi hoti hai aur Bholu uske pair dba rha hotah hai. Ratna firsey apna peticoat kamar tak upar kar leti hai lekin Bholu iss baar kuuch nahi bolta. Ratna kuuch der aur koshish karti hai lekin Bholu ka dhyan aaj pair dbane mein hee tha.

Ek dam se bijli ki tarah uske seenay mein bachpan ke doctor ki baat aati hai agar kisi ne Bholu ke sawaal krne pr uski iccha sakti ko dbaya toh shayd Bholu uske baad kabhi sawaal na kre, Ratna ka dil tutne lgta hai ki shayd usne hee apne bete ko puri zindagi ke liye aisa kar dia hai. Ye chand second boht bhari thay Ratna khud ko sambhalti hai.

Ratna : "O mere balwaan"
Bholu(malish karte huye) : "Haan maa"
Ratna : "Aaj kuuch ni puchega tu munia ke baare mein?"

Bholu chup rehta hai.

Ratna : "Accha chal mujhe lga ki tu kuuch puchega toh btaungi par chal koi ni tera mann nahi hai toh"
Bholu : "Nahi nahi maa, puchna hai."

Ye Sunkar hee Ratna ke kaleje mein kuuch thandak padti hai.

Ratna : "Toh puchna fir chup kyu baitha hai?"
Bholu : "Dategi toh nahi na maa"
Ratna : "Nahi re, tu puchna nahi kahungi kuuch aaj, puch jo puchna hai"
Bholu(utsahit hokar) : "Hai maa, theek hai, pehle toh ye btana maa ki ye aisi kyu hai aur aisa kyu lag rha hai isme boht jagah hai?"
Ratna : "Ab ye aisi kyu hai toh ka jawaab nahi hai mere pass par haan jagah boht hoti hai isme,(pet par haath maarke) pura ka pura baccha nikal deti hai ye munia"
Bholu : "Accha maa bcche yha se aate hai?"
Ratna : "Haan beta isi se aate hai."

Bholu aur gaur se Ratna ki choot dekhne lgta hai.

Ratna(bistar par khadi hokar) : "Ek mint ruk, aise nahi ", ye bolkar Ratna apni saree utar deti hai aur peticoat ka naada khol deti hai, ab Ratna bas ek laal blouse mein thee aur neechay se puri nangi thee. Ye karke Ratna firse bistar par lait jaati hai

Ratna(choot ki faakein kholkar) : "Dekh aisi dikhti hai ye, andar sey"

Bholu dheeray se apni ungli aage badhata hai aur Ratna ko choot ko chookar dekhta hai. Ratna ki siskari nikalne hee waali thee par woh usko dba jaati hai.

Bholu : "Maa par mere pass ye kyu nahi hai?"
Ratna : "Beta tere pass jo hai woh mardo ke pass hee hota hai, baccha usme se aata hai aur aurat mein chla jata hai"
Bholu : "Matlab mere pet mein baccha hai?"
Ratna(sir pakadkar) : "Arre buddhu nahi, tere andar ek paani hai usse baccha banta hai woh paani aurat ke andar jaata hai aur fir andar baccha ban jaata hai, bss itni see baat hai!!"
Bholu : "Kahan hai paani maa, meine toh ni dekha aisa kuuch?"

Ratna ka paara ab high hone lga tha, uske sabra ki bhi seema thee lekin gusse mein woh ye nahi chahti thee ki Bholu ko kuuch bol padey jisse Bholu chup ho jaaye.

Ratna : "Tu apna pajama utar"

Bholu apna pajama utar deta hai, Bholu ne andar toh kuuch nahi pehna tha, jaisey hee woh apna pajama utarta hai uska bhari bharkam 8" ka kaala lund bahar aa jata hai. Ratna ye dekh kar chauk jaati hai ki uske bete ka lund aakhir khda kyu thaa?

Ratna : "Bholu ek baat bta beta, ye tera munna aisa kabse hai?"
Bholu : "Kaisa maa?"
Ratna : "Mera matlab ye tight kabse hai?"
Bholu : "Jabse teri malish kar rha hu"

Ratna 2 minute ke liye toh Bholu ke lund ko hee niharti rehti hai, usko kabhi pta hee nahi chla ki uske beta itna buda lund lekar ghum rha tha, Ratna ne aaj tak kahania hee suni thee ki kisi kisi mard ka lund itna bda hota hai, Bholu ka 8 inch ka lund seedha tna hua tha, dekhne mein lg rha tha ki uska lund ek haath ki pakad mein muskil se aayega, lund mota bhi boht tha.

Ratna : "Ye tera munna kab kab aisa rehta hai?"
Bholu : "Jab jab teri malish karta hu"
Ratna(muskura kar) : "Aadmi kitna hee bhola ho ya bewkoof uska lund hmesha khda ho hee jata hai, wha re upar waale ki maaya, itna bdia lund dia toh woh bhi bete ko, ek aadmi bhi bhej dete prabhu iska toh kya hee karu mein?"

Bholu apni maa ko taak rha hota hai usko ek shabd nahi smjh aata ki aakhir uski maa kya bol rhi hai aur ye lund kya hota hai?

Bholu : "Maa ye aisa nahi hona chahiye kya?"
Ratna : "Nahi beta koi baat nahi, ye aisa hee hota hai jab bhi koi aadmi aurat ke pass aata hai toh ye sakht ho jata hai, teri isme koi galti nahi hai"

Ye sunkar Bholu ki jaan mein jaan aati hai.

Ratna : "Par manna padega beta, bhagwaan ne buddhi nahi dee tujhey lekin tera munna itna bda hai ki koi bhi aurat shadi karlegi, ab shadi krwate time tere munna ka naap btana padega", ye bolkar Ratna has deti hai, bholu bhi muskura deta hai.

Ratna ab bistar par baith jaati hai aur usne keval lal blouse hee pehna hua tha, Bholu bhi bss T-shirt mein tha, uska pajama toh neechay pda tha, woh bhi apni maa ke saamne hee baith jaata hai.

Ratna(Bholu ke aando ko pakadkar) : "Isme hota hai baccha yha se aata hai aur munia mein jaata hai, theek hai samajh gya, khush ab?"
Bholu : "Haan maa"
Ratna(man mein): "Ye ladka bhi na kya sawaal lekar baith gya, mein toh buri fss gyi, mna kar nahi sakti, jawab dene mein meri jaan nikal jaati hai. Kha fsa dia bhagwaan?"
Bholu : "Maa"
Ratna(pareshan hokar): "Haan"
Bholu : "Teri munia mein jagah toh boht lag rhi hai isme rkhte kya hai?"
Ratna : "Isme rakhte kuuch nahi hai, aadmi ka munna jaata hai isme"
Bholu : "Matlab mera munna teri munia mein ja sakta hai?"
Ratna(Paseenay pochte huye): "Nahi beta maa beta ye sab nahi karte?"
Bholu : "Kya nahi karte maa?"

Ratna samajh gyi thee bholu ab sawaal mein sawaal puchta chla jayega. Usko khushi thee ki aakhir uska ladka kuuch puch toh rha tha lekin usko darr bhi tha kahi ye ladka ye sawalo ke jawaab kisi aur se na puuch ley. Ratna ke andar har ek sawaal ka jawaab deni ki shakti nahi thee.


Ratna : "Kuuch nahi kuuch nahi kar skte hai haan tera munna ja skta hai meri munia mein."

Ratna ki halata kharab thee usne taalne ke bol toh dia ki ja sakta hai lekin agar Bholu ne apna lund daalne ko bol dia toh kya woh ye karva payegi yehi soch soch kar uski jaan nikal rhi thee.

Bholu : "Theek hai maa"
Ratna(jaldi sey): "Accha beta ab tu soja baaki sawaal kal karna, kal dukaan band hai abhi ke liye soja kal saare sawaal puchna"


Bholu uski baat maan leta hai aur sone lg jaata hai. Ratna ki jaan aaj ke liye toh bach jaati hai lekin kal kya hoga usko bhi nahi maloom tha.

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Subah ho chalti hai, Bholu aur Ratna dono uth jaate hai. Aaj dukaan kholni nahi thee toh aaj dono maa bete free thay, Ratna yehi soch rhi thee ki Bholu usko kabhi bhi lekar baith jayega aur ajeebo gareeb munna munia ke sawaal karne lgega. Ratna bechari duvidha mein fss chuki thee, Bholu apne aur apni maa ke liye 2 cup chai bna lata hai aur dono maa bete bistar par baithey chai pee rhe hote hai. Ratna akhbaar padh rhi thee, Bholu chai ki chuskia le rha tha.

Bholu : "Maa"

Ratna ye sunte hee samajh gyi ki aaj ye usko nahi chorrne wala, uske sawalo ke jawab dete dete woh thaq chuki thee aur na hee uske pass itne saaf shabd thay ki woh Bholu ko smjh skey aakhir sab majra hota kya hai? Uske saamne woh choot aur lund istemaal nahi kar skti thee, munna munia usko samajh aate thay lekin usko bechare ko kisi baare mein kuuch pta hee kahan tha. Ratna kosey toh kosey kisey?

Ratna(akhbar se dhyan htakar) : "Haan"
Bholu : "Ek baar munia dikhayegi?"
Ratna : "Abhi? Kyu kya hua?"

Ratna 2 minute gehri saas leti hai aur apna akhbaar side mein rkh deti hai, aur apna peticoat firsey upar utha leti hai. Bholu ko firsey apni maa ki jhaaton waali gucchedaar choot ke darshan ho jaate hai.

Bholu(Haste huye): "Maa jab tu ye dikhati hai na toh mujhey accha lgta hai, tu hmesha ye dikhati rha kar na."
Ratna : "Oh ho ladke tu bhi na kitna besharam hai"(paini nighao se usko dekhkar bolti hai).

Bholu baari baar use sawaal kre jata hai aur Ratna uske jawaab badi muskil se deti rehti hai. Ratna samajh chuki thee iske sawalo ka koi ant nahi hai usko hee kuuch karna hoga.

Ratna : "Sun bholu tereko ek bdia cheez sikhati hu"
Bholu : "Kya maa?"
Ratna : "Chal tu lait ja, aur apna muuh munia ki taraf kr"
Bholu bistar par pet ke bal lait jata hai aur uska muuh ab Ratna ke pairo ke beech tha.
Ratna(choot par haath fairte huye): "Sun beta, sawaal jawaab krengey baad mein abhi tujhey mera ek kaam karna hai"
Bholu(chokkanna hokar) : "Haan maa bta kya kaam hai."

Ratna bed ke sirhane rakhi ek toffee uthati hai aur Bholu ko dikhati hai.

Ratna : "Dekh ye toffee hai jo tujhey boht psnd hai. Ye toffee gayi andar," ye bolkar Ratna toffee ko apni munia ke andar daal deti hai, aur usko sehla sehla kar aur andar ki taraf khiska deti hai.
Ratna : "Ab dekh tujhey ye toffee bahar nikalni hai kaisi bhi aur haan haath istemaal nahi krne keval jeebh"
Bholu : "Theek hai maa"
Ratna : "Chal fir shuru ho ja"

Ratna ke pair garam ho rhe thay, uska shareer itne samay baad hone waale sparsh ki tyari kar rha tha. Ratna khudko kos rhi thee par khudko smjha bhi rhi thee ki Bholu ko chup krne ka yehi ek tareeka tha, usko darr bhi sata rha tha ki kahi Bholu ki haddein aur aage na badh jaaye. Apne bete ki pehli jeebh lagtey hee uske shareer mein current dodha aur usi ke saath uska dimaag sunn ho gya. Ab woh sahi galat nahi balki anand ke baare mein soch rhi thee. Bholu bechara bail jaisa aadmi jisse mehnat se matlab tha woh neechay lga pda tha aur uski maa Ratna upar aakhein bnd krke siskaria chorr rhi thee. Ratna ko mza aur sza ek saath mehsoos ho rhi thee. Bholu toh kisi agyakaari bacche ki apni jeebh choot mein ghusaye ja rha tha. Usse har hamle par Ratna ki awaazein nikal rhi thee jinhe jo nakami ke saath rok rhi thee. Bholu kisi janwar ki tarah apni maa ki jhaato mein se munia chaat rha tha usko toh bss woh ek toffee chahiye thee. Itne saalo baad ho rhe iss hamle se Ratna ki choot puri tarah paniya rhi thee, lgatar paani usse nikal rha tha. Bholu ki toffee bahar nahi aa rhi thee par uska swaad usko zrur muuh mein aa rha tha. Ratna ki choot ka resa aur toffee andar mix ho rhe thay jo beh beh kar Bholu ki jeebh par gir rha tha. Bholu jitna andar jeebh maarta usko utna hee swaad aata aur fir agli baar woh aur andar jeebh daalne ka prayas karta.

Ratna ka dimaag ekdm sunn ho chuka tha, usko iss tarah ma mza zindagi mein kabhi nahi mila tha. Bholu ke papa toh usko bs ek baar maa bna kar chle gye thay, na uske baad kabhi kuuch aur na Ratna ko koi nya suukh ka ehsaas hua. Lekin aaj ka din toh kuuch alag hee tha, Ratna ke mann mein sahi galat ka farak ab itna mazbooti se nahi tha aur iss charam sukh ka lalach dheeray dheeray apni jagah bna rha tha.

Bholu baar baar jeebh ke gehre hamle kar rha tha. Ratna ki taangein har baar kaap jaati, woh toh bss aankh bnd krke koshish kar rhi thee ki kaise bhi apni awaaz aur mann ko seemit rkha jaaye par bechari kahi kamyaab nahi hone waali thee. Awwazein toh woh muuh dbakar rok rahi thee lekin uska mann toh bechain ho hee chuka tha. Kareeban 5 ghante ke mukh chodan ke baad Ratna ka baandh tutne lga uski choot mein sailaab utne lga aur ek tezz awwaz ke saath Ratna sikhar ke upar se jhad gyi, uske pair dheelay pad gye jisse andar fasi toffee bhi bahar aa gyi, jab toffee andar gyi thee toh badi thee lekin ab toh keval ek dawai jitni hee bahar aayi. Baaki saari uska beta Bholu iss dauran pighla chuka tha.

Ratna ke pair kaanp rhe thay, uski choot uske ras aur apne bete ke thook se sani hui thee. Ratna ka shareer garam ho chuka tha, uska dil dhadhak rha tha aur woh puri bhatti bn chuki thee. Ratna ne khuud par kaabu paaya aur kuuch der mein woh shant hui. Woh janti thee isse aage badhna toh boht hee galat hoga, uska mann baar baar keh rha tha ki kuuch kia jaaye lekin woh khuud par kaabu paa chuki thee aur usne wahi rukna hee theek samjha. Usko ek sharam bhi thee ki usne apne bete ke saath ye kya kar dia aur dusri taraf aaj jo usko chain mila tha uspr toh saath khoon bhi maaf thay. Apni hee baato ke andar woh fass chuki thee usko samajh nahi aa rha tha ki woh sahi hai ya galat.

Bholu : "Maa meine toffee nikal di"

Ratna : "Sabash mere sher, chal ye chai thandi ho gyi hai isko khtm kr mei fir khane ki tyari karti hu"

Bholu aur Ratna dono apni thandi ho chuki chai khatam karte hai aur fir Ratna Bholu ko kheto par bhej deti hai aur khuud rasoi mein khana bnane lg jaati hai.

Ratna ke dimaag mein yehi ghuum rha tha ki aakhir jo hua woh sahi tha ya nahi. Insaani dimaag ki ek khass baat hai jab aap kuuch manna chahte hai na toh aapka dimaag aisi cheezein dhundhna shuru kr deta hai ya aise tark bnana shuru kr deta hai jisse aapko lgey ki aap sahi hai. Ye ek tareeka tha dimaagi soch ka jissey hmare purvaj khatre se duur rehte thay par ab ye keval hmare dimaag mein hmari hee baato ko aur mazbooti se sthapit karta hai.

Ratna kuuch samay toh khuud se ladti rhi ki ye galat hai aur absey woh aise nahi karegi, par woh janti thee ki jo mza usko aaj subah aaya hai usko gwana uske baski baat nahi hai. Accha yehi rhega ki woh itne par seemit rhe lekin usko lalach bhi tha toh woh ruka bhi nahi chahti thee, ant mein usne yehi faisla kia ki woh ye toffee wala khel nahi khelegi aur iske aagey Bholu ko koi mauka nahi degi.

Ratna faisla toh kar chuki thee par ab bhi uska mann toh dusri taraf tha woh toh chahti thee roz uska Bholu aisi hee uski munia ki safai kar dey, par inn khayalo ko woh dbake baithi thee aur nahi chahti thee ki ye sab uss par haafi ho.

Bholu kheto ka kaam krke dophar mein vapis ghar aa jaata hai.

Bholu : "Maa mein vapis aa gya"
Ratna : "Theek hai beta naah dho ley aur khana khaley"

Bholu nahakar aa jaata hai aur dono maa beta baithkar khana kha rhe hotey hai.

Ratna : "Gapa gap khana khaaye ja rha hai nikamme bna kaisa hai ye toh bta dey?"
Bholu : "Haan maa bdia bna hai ekdm swadisht"
Ratna : "Hmm Balwan tu toh bss"

Bholu firse khane mein dhyan lga leta hai aur dono maa beta khana khake aaram krne lait jaate hai. Bholu(Balwan) apni maa ke pair dba rha tha, jab jab uska haath Ratna ki jaangho par lgta tab tab Ratna ko subah yaad aane lgti. Woh koshish toh boht kar rhi thee par iss ladai mein hawas jeet rhi thee. Ratna kuuch samay toh khuud ko rok kr rkhti hai.

Ratna(achanak sey): "Bholu pehle mera ek kaam kar!!"

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Bholu(Utsuk hokar): "Kya kaam maa?"

Ratna bhi samajh jaati hai Bholu ki iccha shakti badh rhi hai, woh ab cheezo ko lekar icchuk bhi hone lga hai. Woh ek chain ki saas leti hai.

Ratna : "Tereko pta hai na subash tunay kaisey (choot ki taraf ungli krke) pyar kia tha"
Bholu : "Pyar? Mein toh toffee nikal rha tha na maa?"
Ratna : "Haan wahi mere bholu, jab bhi tu isko jeebh se chooyega toh usko pyar hee kehte hai aur aaj tunay khuub saara pyar kia isko"

Bholu ab bhi nahi samajh paa rha tha ki ye sab kya hota hai?

Ratna : "Bholu dekh jaise mein roz aati hu na dukaan sey toh mein thaq jaati hu tu mere pair dbata hai fir mujhey aaram aata hai aisi hee kabhi kabhi meri munia bhi thaq jaati hai jisko keval jeebh se dbate hai aur woh firse theek ho jaati hai usme dard band ho jaata hai"
Bholu : "Accha maa, maa subah tera dard band ho gya tha nahi hua tha toh teri munia ko firse dba du"

Ratna ye sunkar hich kicha gyi. Usko andar ek garmi mehsoos hui. Bholu ne toh puri masumiyat se bola tha, woh toh apni maa ko dard mein nahi dekh skta tha lekin Ratna ko ek second ke liye lga maano Bholu bholepan mein nahi balki gandi baatein bol rha hai.

Ratna(mann mein) : "Nahi Bholu aisa nahi soch payega, mein bhi kya kya soch rhi hu, buddhi bhrasht na ho jaaye meri bhagwaan"
Ratna : "Haan beta mera dard bnd ho gya tha tunay itne pyar se dbaya usko,"
Bholu : "Haan maa tu btana tunay pehle kyu ni btaya teri munia mein dard hota hai mein toh pair dbata hee hu lge haath usko bhi dba dunga."

Ratna apne bete ki masumiyat par fida tha, uska beta jaanta hee nahi tha ki woh apni maa ki choot chaat rha tha naaki koi sewa kar rha tha. Ek tarah ki sewa toh hai ye lekin aisi jisko bahar nahi bta sakte. Ratna soch rhi thee ki uska Balwan usko ek second bhi dard mein nahi dekh skta.

Ratna : "Haan haan beta tu chinta na ley ab dard hoga toh dba dungi"
Bholu : "Ruk maa tu baad mein btana ek baar mujhey teri munia par jeebh lgane dey vrna tu dard mein hee rhegi."

Ratna usko laakh mna karti hai par Bholu baat par atak jaaye toh atak hee jaata tha. Ratna usko samjhati hai lekin woh ek nahi maanta. Ant mein Ratna hee apna sir pakad leti hai.

Ratna(sir pakadkar) : "Le tu dbale meri munia ko, tu baat toh maanta nahi hai itna bda ho gya hai lekin teri zidd abhi tak baccho waali hai, le dba ley"

Ye bolkar Ratna bistar par seedhi lait jaati hai aur apne pair faila leti hai. Iss baar Bholu khuud hee smjh jata hai aur uske pairo ke beech lait jata hai. Ratna apne pair Bholu ke kandho par rkh deti hai. Ab nazara kuuch aisa tha ki Ratna laiti hui thee uske pair Bholu ke kandho par thay aur Bholu uske pairo ke beech laita hua tha.

Bholu : "Maa"
Ratna : "Haan?"
Bholu : "Toffee kha hai maa?"
Ratna : "Bewkoof itni bdia cheez tere saamne rkhi hai tujhey iske saath bhi toffee chahiye, ye ladka bhi na, shareer bhagwaan ne pahalwan ka dia aur buddhi gadhe ki, ab tere liye toffee kha se lau", Ratna se ruka nahi ja rha tha aur yha uska beta toffee ki baatein kr rha tha, swabhavik hai ki ye toh hona hee tha.
Ratna : "Aaj bina toffee ke dard khatam krde Balwaan, teri maa ki munia mei boht dard hai", Ratna karhane ki acting karne lagti hai.

Bholu uski acting samajh nahi pata aur iss baat ko sochkar ki uski maa dard mein hai woh apna dhyan uski choot par lga deta hai. Bholu bde dhyan se aur aaram se uski choot mein apni jeebh ghuma rha hota hai.

Ratna(sisakte huye): "Aah aaram se balwan, mere balwaan aaram sey, aisi hee beta mza aa rha hai dard khtm ho jayega aisi hee karta reh"

Bholu usi dheemi gati ke saath Ratna ka daana masalta rehta hai, Ratna ki choot mein jeebh kisi chakki ki tarah chal rhi thee. Ratna ko madhoshi aa rhi thee pichli baar toh woh khuud ko rok rhi thee lekin iss baar usne aisa kuuch nahi socha tha. Ratna Bholu ke baal pakad rhi thee, mann karta tha ki woh Bholu ka sir apni choot mein puri tarah dba ley lekin ab bhi woh khudko roke huye thee.

Bholu apni jeebh se puri kahani likhe ja rha tha aur uss kahani mein uski maa ki aadakari dekhne layak thee. Ratna ki bhari bhari jangho ka wazan koi aam aadmi toh utha hee nahi sakta tha, kyuki Bholu ki kad-kathi ek pahalwaan jaisi thee uske liye Ratna ka wazan uthana muskil nahi tha. Ratna 5'5'' ki gori chitti aurat thee, bhari bharkam gaand aur vishal kaay chuchay liye woh kisi haseena se kam nahi lagti thee. Umar bhaley hee 44 thee lekin shareer mein jawani thee. Wahi uska beta Bholu 22 saal ka jawaan ladka tha, 6'1'' ka Bholu kad kathi mein pehelwaan tha, uske liye Ratna ko uthana baaye haath ka khel tha. Ratna ko pta tha ki Bholu ke shareer mein boht jaan hai isiliye woh bhi acche se pair lapet kar uske upar laiti hui thee.

Ratna ki aakhein bnd thee, choot mein se paani aur Bholu ki jeebh se pure kamre mein awaaz ho rhi thee. Beech beech mein Ratna siskaria chorr deti, jisko Bholu ye samajhta ki uski maa ko abhi bhi dard ho rha tha. Aisi hee 8-10 minute hone ke baad Ratna ke pair akadne lgey, pair akadte akadte uski choot ne jharna khol dia. Ratna ek dm se Bholu ke muuh par jhad gyi aur dheeli pad gyi. Ratna ki saas fuul rhi thee aur halki halki usko need bhi aa rhi thee. Anand ki iss raftaar se uska shareer pura dheela pad chuka tha aur maano kuuch minute ke liye toh uske andar hilne ki bhi shakti nahi thee. Bholu ko lga ki uski maa so gyi hai toh woh bhi uske pairo se nikalkar uske barabar mein lait gya.

Ratna : "Bholu chal 2 cup chai bna la, shareer mein thoddi akadan hai woh bh chali jayegi"

Bholu uthkar chai bnane chla jata hai. Ratna firsey yehi soch rhi thee usne 4 ghnte pehle hee sochta tha ki woh abse Bholu ke saath kuch nahi karegi aur usne firsey mukh chodan krwa hee lia. Ratna apni stithi par taras kha rhi thee, lekin iss baat se khush thee ki Bholu ye baat apne tak hee rkhega kisi ko btayega nahi aur ab woh koshish kregi ki aisa kuuch har giz na ho.

Bholu uske liye chai bna lata hai. Ratna chai pee rhi thee aur apne hee khyalo mein khoyi thee. Ratna ke sir hawas bhi jagah bna rhi thee par uska dil nahi maan rha tha. Dimaag se aurat aur dil se maa ka mail kuuch baith nahi rha tha. Ratna bechari har waqt yahi sochti ki usko yhi par ruk jana chahiye samaj kya kahega lekin fir usko usi samaj se nafrat hoti jo uske saath kabhi nahi khda tha. Ratna mazboot aurat thee lekin zindagi ke utar chadaav dekh kar woh samaj ka chintan karna kam kar chuki thee. Samaj ke liye aaj jo galat hai kal woh sahi ho jata hai.

Ratna ka dimaag yehi keh rha tha ki band kamro mein kya hota hai kisi ko kya pta aur dunia kaun hee hoti hai sahi galat ka faisla karne waali?

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Yahi chintan mein uska puri shaam aur raat nikal gyi. Bholu bhi ghar ke kaam puray krne mein magan tha, Ratna bhi 2 baar ke mukh chodan se khush thee usme boht kuuch krne ki aag thee lekin sharam ka parda usko roke baitha tha. Uska dimaag daleel toh de rha tha par dil nahi qubool kar rha tha. Isi chintan mein dono maa bete bistar par laite thay parantu baat nahi kar rhe thay. Ratna ka dhyan barabar mein laitey Bholu par gya aur Bholu bhi kuuch soch rha tha, Ratna Bholu ko sochte huye kam hee dekhti thee isliye uska dhyan apne bete par kendrit ho gya

Ratna : "Ae Balwaan kya soch rha hai?"
Balwan : "Kuuch nahi maa,"
Ratna : "Arre btana kya soch rha hai? bde dhyan se deewar dekh rha hu"
Balwan : "Maa agar mein ameer hota toh tujhey sab kuuch khareed kar de deta, fir hme dukaan aur kheto mein itni mehnat na karni pdti"

Ratna: "Tera paise ka rona fir shuru ho gya, abhi bhi kaunsa hm bhookey mar rhe hai? Kya kami hai bta? Tujhey bola hai na kam dimaag chalaya kar", Ratna ye boli pr fil sambhal gyi, "Mera matlab ki dimaag sahi cheezon par lgaya kar paise vaise ka mt soch, hm bhi ameer hai"
Balwan : "Hm bhi ameer hai? Kaisey? Maa tere pass khajana hai kya?"
Ratna : "Khajana toh hai beta, lekin tu uss khajane ki tijori nahi khol payega"
Balwan : "Kyu maa? Tu bta boht jaan hai mere mein, koi bhi tijori khol dunga mein"
Ratna(haskar): "Bewkoof tu nahi smjhega ye waali tijori pyar se khulti hai zabardasti nahi."

Balwan firse apni maa ko dekh rha tha usse koi baat nahi samajh aa rhi thee.

Ratna : "Acchal chal soja ab subah dukaan jaldi kholni hai, boht log aayengey samaan lene"
Ye sunkar Bholu so jata hai aur uski maa bhi neend mein chali jaati hai.

Agli Subah dono maa bete subah jaldi jaldi dukaan kholne chale jaate hai. Dukaan par bheed thee, aisa nahi hai aas pass dukaane nahi thee par Ratna aur Balwaan ka swabhav itna ghula mila tha ki log unse hee lena pasand krte thay baakio ki hamdardi thee ki ek bechari widhwa aur uske dimaagi kamzor bete ka ghar chal jayega. Ratna ko logon ki ye baatein acchi nahi lgti thee par jin baato se ghar chalte hai unko naa chahte huye bhi maan lena chahiye aur yehi Ratna ne kia. Bholu jitna seedha Ratna utni hee tezz thee.

Saara samaan baatne ke baad kareeban subah 8 bjey dono maa bete free huye. Tabhi dukaan par Hamid mia aaye. Hamid mia Rani khet mein hee carpenter thay, swabhaav se milan saar aadmi khari baat krne waale, zindagi mein khoob izzat kamayi lekin hmesha kismat itni kharab ki paise na kma paaye. Hamid mia ne zindagi bhar mehnat kari thee sabhi unki izzat karte thay ek wahi thay jo akeli aurat ka dukh samajhte thay kyuki unki khudi beti Fatima bhi boht kam umar mein akeli ho gyi thee, uska pati mar jaata toh accha tha lekin woh usse choorkar bhaag gya tha. Pura gao hee yehi kehta tha ki uss ladki ke saath boht galat hua. Jawani mein hee Fatima apne pati ka ghar chorr Delhi se vapis apne abbu ke ghar Rani Khet aa gyi thee aur saath mein apne pet mein ek bcchi bhi lekar aayi.

Hamid Mia aaj kareeban 62 saal ke thay umar se zyada hee lagte thay par insaan acche thay. Unki beti Fatima bhi ab kareeban 42 saal ki ho gyi thee jo Ratna ki acchi dost bhi thee, zyada milna julna tha nahi lekin dono ne ek jaisi dikaatein dekhi thee toh ek ham dardi unn dono mein ek dusre ke liye thee. Fatima ki bacchi jisko pet mein lekar woh apne ghar vapis aayi thee aaj woh bhi badi ho gyi thee.

Ratna : "Kaisey ho Hamid chacha, aaj kaisey aana hua"
Hamid : "Arre Ratna bitia hm badia, tu aur tera beta itni dua dete ho mujhey kya hoga? Accha tera Balwaan kahan hai dikh nahi rha"
Ratna : "Balwan toh samaan lene pass ke gao gya hai, subah subah hee sab bik gya dukaan par firse samaan lgana hai kal fir bekna hai"
Hamid : "Oh ho, kab tak aayega woh?"
Ratna : "Woh toh shaam tak aayega chacha, aap batao kaisey aana hua?"
Hamid : "Meri chotti bitia hai na Nargis(Fatima ki beti) kal se woh college ki padhai shuru krne waali hai, aaj isliye socha kuuch accha bnaya jaaye toh raashan paani lene aa chla, Bholu toh hai nahi samaan ghar kaun pohchayega"
Ratna : "Arre Chacha Nargis hmari bhi bitia hee hai, aap samaan likhwa do mein pohcha dungi shaam tak"
Hamid : "Haan bitia boht bhla hoga tera, ye karvadey shaam ko usko kuuch accha khilana hai accha tu bhijwana ye le list abhi mein chalta hu baaki kaam krke aata hu"

Ratna ne Hamia Chacha se list leli aur woh samaan usne ek pinni mein pack kr dia. Bholu toh shaam tak aane wala tha aur dukaan par baithna ab bekar hee tha toh usne socha ki woh ye samaan unke ghar khuud dekar ghar vapis chli jayegi. Hamid mia toh jaldi mein thay par koi ni usne socha kisi buddhe se samaan kya uthwana, Ratna ke katta uthaya aur chaldi Hamid mia ke ghar ki taraf. Pahad se thodda utarkar Ratna Hamid mia ke ghar ki taraf chli gyi. Hamid mia ka ghar baado mein andar ki taraf tha, jagah boht hee par zyada kuuch bna nahi tha, ek kaccha ghar hee tha 2 kamro ka jo khda tha side mein, jisme Hamid unki beti Fatima aur uski beti Nargis rehte thay. Ratna ne socha ki ye samaan dene ke bahane Fatima aur Nargis se mil lia jaaye. Ratna ne samaan ka katta ghar ke peechay lga dia taaki koi dekh na ley aur chorri na krley. Hamid Chacha ke baski nahi hai dobara samaan lena aur nahi Ratna ke baski muft mein samaan baatna so durgatna na hee toh hee accha, kaun hee bharpai karega. Ratna ne peechay se katta lga toh dia aur peechay hee angwaade se usne ghar mein jana theek samjha.

Ratna bahar chappal utarkar andar toh aa gyi, Ratna dusra darwaaja kholkar andar hee jaane waali thee ki tabhi uski nazar khidki se bed par padi toh uski aakhein hee bahar aane ko ho gyi. Uske dil ki raftaar tezz ho padi. Andar ka nazara dekh kar usko chakkar se aane lagey.

Andar chotte se kamre mein Hamid Chacha puray nange laitey thay. Fatima unki beti unke upar bina kapdo ke kisi maharani ki tarah baithi aur Hamid mia ka sir apni poti Nargis ki godh mein tha. Ratna ka galaa sukh gya, usne isse pehle aisa kuuch nahi dekha tha. Woh bhi nahi smjh rhi thee ki usko itna darr kyu lag rha tha. Ratna chup chaap uski khidki mein se jhakti rhi.

Fatima ka jaisa naam tha vaisa thee shareer, Fatima 42 ki thee aur uska sharrer bhi vaisa thee. Bhari bharkam shareer sudool gaand aur gora chehra, agar koi aadmi usko dekh le toh kabhi usse duur na jaaye. Fatima ki beti Nargis usse bhi awwal thee. Nargis ka husan ptla tha, shareer mein agaadi pichai thodddi kam thee parantu uska bhi bhavisya sunehra hee tha. Nargis ke nain nakhas kisi vishwa sundari jaise thay. Hamid mia pure nange laitey thay Fatima unke upar baithi thee, Hamid mia ka sir Nargis ki godhi mein tha aur Nargis unke baalo mein haath fair rhi thee. Nargis aur Fatima dono ne hi kapdey kahi duur fenkey huye thay.

Ratna ko samajh nahi aa rha tha ye kya ho rha hai lekin uska shareer wha se jana bhi nahi chah rha tha. Nargis apne nana ke sir par haath fair rhi thee aur uski maa Fatima bhi kuuch bol rhi thee. Abhi tak toh Ratna ke kaano mein uske hee dil ki awaaz aa rhi thee lekin jaise jaisey uska dimaag shant hona shuru hua usko unki baatein sunai deni shuru ho gyi.

Fatima : "Abbu bahir ka darwaza dhyan se lga dia tha? Pichli baar khurram chacha ne dekho lia tha, allah bachaye aisi dikkat sey"

Hamid Chacha Apni do unglio se nargia ki baayi chuchi dba rhe thay aur baari baari masal rhe thay. Nargis ki chuchi aur chuchia dono hee chotti aur nazuk lag rhi thee.

Hamid : "Chinta kyu karti hai bitia khurram aur uski khatoon ki vaise hee koi nahi maanta, usne agar bahir kisi ko bola na ki Hamid mia apni hee dukhtar(beti) ke saath humbistar thay koi yakeen nahi manega, tu itni pareshani sir na ley apne gate bnd hai koi ni aa rha hai aaj haan bas shaam ko Bholu aayega samaan lekar ya uski maa tab ki tab dekhengey"

Fatima Hamid ke upar baithi thee aur apne shareer ka nichla bhaag apne abbu ke pait par ragad rhi thee, Jab jab Fatima thoddi aage hoti tab tab Hamid mia ke aand Ratna ko dikhte, Hamid mia khuud bhi saawale thay par dono bitia, poti ekdm gori thee. Dudh jaisa rang, Hamid mia bhi pehle gore hee thay itne samay kisani aur mehnat majdoori kar kar ke kaale pad chukay thay.

Fatima : "Abbu tumhey ni lgta ye Ratna bhi apne bete ke saath humbistar hoti hogi?"

Fatima ke muuh se aisi baat sunkar Ratna gusse mein aa gyi. Ratna ko jo darr tha wahi baat ho rhi thee lekin mze ki baat ye thee ki Ratna ne aaj tak kuuch bhi aisa nahi kia tha, haan 2 baar usne apne bete ke saath kuuch toh kia tha lekin hum bistar toh woh aaj tak kisi ke saath nahi hui. Ratna ka paara chadh rha tha lekin woh asal mein janna chahti thee ye dunia uske baare mein kya sochti hai?

Hamid : "Lgta kya hai hme toh pura yakeen hai Ratna ki gaand itni bahar khuudsey toh nahi aayegi na, aur uska ladka bhi dimaag se kamzor hai kya pta chalega, Bholu ka lund gheeye jaisa hai, kheto mein moot rha hai tha ek baar mere saath tab dekha tha, itna bda lund Ratna bina liye toh gaand fula nahi legi."

Ye sunkar Ratna ka chehra laal ho gya woh pair patak-kar peechay se bahar aa gyi. Uski saas ful rhi thee, jis Hamid ko woh apna chacha smjhti thee wohi chacha uske baare mein aisa bolega usne kabhi na socha tha. Ratna khud ko kos rhi thee ki jo log parivar mein hum bistar hote hai wohi uske jaiso ka mzaak bna rhe hai. Ratna ne thodda dheeraj dikhaya aur firse wahi khidki ke pass chali gyi unki baatein firse sunne.

Fatima : "Abbu kya hee kare bechari, itni mehnat se paala posa hai ladka, aur koi parivar mein hai nahi toh woh kya hee kare bechari, Ratna shayd iss gao ki sabse acchi aurat hai, hmari hee kitni mdad karti hai apni nargis ko woh kabhi kabhi suit dilwa deti hai, ye koi bhla kam hai kya? Lekin acchi aurat hone ka ye matlab thoddi hai uski koi jismani zarurat nahi hai, na bhai na mujhey toh iss baat mein koi sujh nahi lagti"

Fatima ab bhi apne baap ke upar baithey ragde diye ja rhi thee.
Hamid : "Kyu bitia Nargis, tumhey nahi lgta Bholu aur Ratna band kamro mein kuuch karte hongey", ye bolkar Hamid Nargis ki chuchi dba deta hai.
Nargis(Chilla kar): "Aah nanu kya kar rhe ho, aaram se chuchi nikal hee jayegi."
Hamid : "Arre meri bitia, tu toh jawaan jitna beecho jha se beecho ras hee niklega, tu bta Ratna chachi lagta hai kya karti hongi?"
Nargis : "Nanu ammi mein hoti aur mera beta itna hatta gatta hota mein toh lund se muuh hee na htati"

Ye sunkar Hamid aur Fatima has padte hai, aur ye baat sunkar Ratna ka maatha garam ho rha tha. Aisa lg rha tha usko bukhaar aa rho, usko pta nahi chal rha tha ki ye andar kya ho rha hai?

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Ratna ke bahar khde khde pair duukh gye thay, woh aaj jane ke mood mein hee nahi thee. Usne barabar mein rkha stool aaram se kheecha aur usi ke upar khidki ki taak mein baith gyi. Aaj woh inn teeno ke saare bheed jaanakr hee jana chahti hai aur khashkar ki woh Bholu aur uske baare mein kya sochte hai kyuki agar ye ghar kuuch aisa sochta hai toh baaki sab bhi sochte hee hongey, usko apni samajik izzat ka darr sta rha tha.

Hamid : "Ab toh hmari Nargis bitia bhi badi ho gyi hai, kal college chali jayegi aur fir iski shadi karni padegi, college jaakar khuub mehnat karna bitia, tu abhi jo tuition padhati hai usse bhi hmara kharcha nikal jaata hai lekin acchi sarkari naukri karna aur apne iss buddhe nana ko khoob sair krana"

Fatima : "Buddhe? Aapka asla toh kuuch aur hee keh rha hai? Kya keh rha hai nargis dekh iski jawani buddha buddha kehte hai aur dekh kaisey tambu ki tarah khda ho rha hai, abhi ht jau na iske upar se, minar ki tarah seedha ho jaayega, abbu itne buddhe ho gye toh meri nayaam(choot) ko aaram dona, "

Hamid : "Nahi bitia itna buddha nahi hua hu abhi, teri iss nayam ke sahare toh budhapa kat rha hai, iske bina toh aur 10 saal umar kam ho jayegi meri"

Fatima : "Abbu mein mar gyi toh kya hoga tumhara aur tumhare hathiyaar ka, meri yaad mein saari golia khali kar dogey kya?"

Nargis : "Nanu ammi ko chorro meri nayam pakdo ammi ki nayam toh kisi bhagoney jaisi ho gyi hai."

Hamid ye sunkar has deta hai. Fatima kuuch muuh bna leti hai aur Nargis chalaki se has rhi hoti hai. Ratna abhi bhi inn sabhi ko dekh rhi thee, inki inn baato se zyada woh apne baare mein sunna chahti thee. Aurat bhi kya hee nayab cheez hai log pareshan karte hai muuh ke aage acche bnte hai aur gharo mein usi ke baare mein baatein karte hai.

Hamid : "Nargis bitia aaj hm tumhari kuwariyat(seal) khtm krne hee baithey hai, aaj tumhari nayam hmari ho jayegi aur sda ke liye ujala tumhari nayam mein fail jayega."

Nargis : "Dard hoga na nanu? Meri dost bta rhi thee ki dard hota hai pehli baari mein, chorro na nanu fir kabhi dekhengey aaj rehne dete hai."

Fatima : "Nargis rani ye kaam jitna jaldi ho jaaye utna accha kal se tum college chli jaogi aur koi na koi tumhari andar apna beej bithaney ki tyari kar hee lega, isse bdia hai ghar se sb seekhkar jao fir bahar jo chahe woh krna, haan lekin ek baat yaad rkhna agar mere abbu ne ek baar teri nayam mein apna hathiyar sta dia na uske baad shayd tujhey ye aaj kal ke nausikhyo raas na jaaye, 20 saal ka tajurba toh tere nanu ka mere upar hee hai aur mujhey aaj tak koi sikhayat nahi hai, (has kar) tere nanu ne jab mein vapis ghar aayi meri ek baar aisi jamkar pichwade ki tafteesh ki thee ki mere mann se toh dusri shadi ka khwaab hee nikal gya tha, tu bhi koshish krle shayd tera mann bhi yhi lg jaaye"

Hamid : "Nargis bitia aaj ke baad shayd tumhara mann hee na kre apne nanu se alag hone ka, aaj tak tumhari nayam hmne bacha ke rkhi thee lekin aaj hm tumhari nayam ko apne mardaani taqat se pyar krengey,"

Nargis sun rhi thee, thoddi sharam se laal thee par sun rhi thee. Uske liye ye baatein nayi nahi thee par aaj pehli baar uske saath woh hona tha jo usko lga tha kayi saalo mein hoga, college mein number aa jane ki wajah se Nargis ki nayam(choot) aaj khulne waali thee. Hamid mia hee Nargis ke pairo ke beech garam joshi krne waale thay. Ratna ye soch kar paseenay paseenay ho rhi thee ki Nargis jaisi pyari bacchi kaise iss aadmi ko jhel payegi. Jitna bhi Hamid ka lund Ratna ko dikhta utna dekh kar hee woh pareshan ho jaati, kyuki woh apne bete Bholu ke hathiyaar se bhi bda lg rha tha, kaala lund dekhkar Ratna ko dhakka toh lga lekin woh smbhal gyi. Ratna ab bardhast nahi kar paa rhi thee woh inn sabse apne baare mein janna chahti thee lekin ye log toh apni kahanio mein magan thay.

Fatima : "Ye Bholu shaam ko aayega na, kha gya hai kahi ghar par Ratna ke pairo mein toh nahi fsa hua na kahi?"

Nargis : "Haan Ammi, Bholu ke chehre ki chamak dekh kar lgta toh hai isko humbistari samay se mil rhi hai, koi gao ki ladki toh milegi nahi lgta hai apni ammi ke saath hee raatein rangeen ho rhi hai."

Hamid : "Bdia hai Ratna ki nayam bhi bdi kaseeli hogi, Bholu ki toh kismat khul gyi, itni bdia aurat ghar mein hee mil gyi."

Ratna ye sab sun sun kar sharam mein paani paani ho rhi the. Kuuch na hote huye bhi sab uske baare mien ye sab bol rhe thay.

Hamid : "Accha hee hoga ki Ratna bitia ko uska sahara mil jaaye"

Nargis : "Haan nanu sahara bhi mil jayega aur uspr baith bhi jayengi"

Fatima ye sunkar has deti hai,

Fatima : "Haan haan aaj toh badi zubaan chal rhi hai, dekhlo abbu bigad rhi hai tumhari ladki"

Hamid : "Ye umar hai aisi hai, bigdo bitia bigdo sab karo jawani vapis nahi aati hai, college jao zidagi jeeo aur iss buddhe ko fir khoob ghumana, zimmedario se bahar kabhi nikla hee nahi isi gao mein khaak chanta reh gya"

Fatima : "Sun le Nargis, abbu ko ghumane ki zimmedari absey teri hai"

Nargis : "Haan haan ammi zimmedari meri, mein ghumaungi nanu ko, par abhi aap toh ghumo yha sey, baith hee gyi ho."

Fatima ye sunkar usko aankho ka gussa dikhati hai, jisko Hamid dekh leta hai aur muskura deta hai.

Ratna ko bahar baithey baithey boht der ho gyi thee. Ratna ko bhi ab wahan nikalna samajhdaari lagi, uska ab wha par mann nahi lg rha tha. Pta nahi uske dimaag mein kya chal rha tha. Ratna chup chaap pecchay se jaise aayi hee vaise hee gao mein vapis nikal gyi. Kadmo ki raftaar tezz aur muuh neechay aur dimaag mein sab kuuch liye woh vapis apne ghar ki ore bhaag rhi thee. Ratna ki aakhein jo dekh kar aayi thee uska dil woh nahi maan rha tha.

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