Aisi niklegi koi soch bhi nahi skta, usse pehle iss gao ke baare mein janna boht bdia rhega ki aakhir sabne sab cheezein shuru kaise kari, chudai likhna ek part mein hee ho jata hai plot ki sense banni chahiye vrna kya mza?
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Fatima toh ghar ki ore nikal chuki thee. Usko pta tha ki Ratna aayegi zrur ek baar kisi aurat ke jism mein aag lg jaaye toh woh samay ke saath aur badhti hee hai kam nahi hoti. Ye baat Fatima bakhuubi jaanti thee kyuki woh khuud iss aag ke lapete mein na jaane kabse thee. Ratna dukaan par baithi soch rhi thee ki usko jana chahiye ya nahi. Ratna baar baar yehi soch rhi thee ki ye sahi hai ya galat, lekin aaj uska maan itna vichlit nahi tha jitna kuuch din pehle tha ab woh kuuch der khuud se ladkar faisle kar hee leti thee. Ratna Bholu ko dukaan smbhalne ke liye bolti hai aur woh bhi mann ki baat maankar Fatime ke ghar chali jaati hai.
Fatima apne ghar ke bahar kaam hee kar rhi thee ki Ratna aa jaati hai.
Fatima : "Mujhey yakeen tha aap aaogi didi."
Ratna : "Haan aa gyi mein, nahi rha gya."
Fatima : "Chalo aa jao andar chalo."
Fatima Ratna ko andar le jaati hai aur usi bed par bitha deti hai jispar uska parivar ek dusre ke saath hum bistari karta tha. Ratna bed sheet par baithne se pehle hich kicha rhi thee ki kahi ye gandi na ho.
Fatima : "Pareshan mt ho didi bed sheet saaf roz saaf bichati hu raat tak hote hote gandi ho jaati hai, ye toh nayi hai ekdm kori."
Ratna sankoch htakar bistar par baith jaati hai. Bistar kaafi mulayam pura ghar gareebo ka tha lekin ek bistar hee aleeshaan tha.
Fatima : Ab btao didi video dikhau ya chai bnau pehley?, aap toh kuuch nahi bologi mein aisa karti hu chai bna hee deti hu.", ye bolkar Fatima chai bnane lg jaati hai. Uski chotti hee rasoi wahi bistar ke barabar mein hee neechay zameen par thee.
Ratna : "Ek baat puchu Fatima tu ye sab kabse kar rhi hai?"
Fatima : "Kya didi?"
Ratna : "Apne abbu ke saath matlab Hamid Chacha ke saath."
Fatima : "Arre abbu ke saath toh kitne saal ho gye, abbu shadi ke baad se hee meri fursat kar rhe hai."
Ratna : "Itna itna lamba time.."
Fatima : "Haan didi, lekin tab itna nahi tha jabse shadi ke baar ghar vapis aayi tabsey zindagi aisi hee hai."
Ratna : "Tu shadi ke baad vapis isiliye aayi thee?"
Fatima : "Arre nahi nahi didi mere shohar acche aadmi nahi thay, shadi ke time toh woh bdia lgey lekin uske baad wahi daaru, jua sab buri aadte thay aur nahi unki maa acchi thee ladai jhagda karti thee. Ab toh kuuch yaad hee nahi lekin mere abbu vapis le aaye thay mujhye usi din."
Ratna : "Toh tera usi din se shuru ho gya?"
Fatima : "Kahan didi time lga, shadi se pehley toh meine kuuch bhi nahi kia, ye mere sohar ne 1-2 baar kia tha uss wajah mein darne lgi thee woh galat krte thay mein kuuch bhi nahi karti thee fir abbu ne dheeray dheeray mujhey pyar krke khol lia pura. Ab toh ye haal hai neend nahi aati jab tak ek baar abbu mere upar na aa jaaye"
Ratna ye sunkar kuuch soch hee rhi hoti hai.
Fatima : "Aapko sunkar ajeeb lag rha hoga, ki ye Fatima kya kar rhi hai kyu kar rhi hai? Ye sab galat hai ye sab nahi hona chahiye"
Ratna : "Nahi nahi aisa.."
Fatima : "Mein toh bss yehi kehti hu didi jeo aur jeenay do, hm bahar muuh nahi maarte ghar mein kya krte hai kisi ko kya matlab."
Ye sunkar Ratna ko thodda bura lgta hai kyuki woh baaki sabke gharo mein boht dilchaspi le rhi thee. Woh khuud toh ghar mein kya kuuch nahi kar rhi the aur dusro ko bewajah naap tol rhi thee ki kaun sahi hai aur kaun galat.
Fatima : "Shohar ki pitai se toh bdia abbu ka pyar hai, pyar se lete hai jaisey chahe vaise aur fir itni mehnat krke hmara pait bhi paaltey hai. Har aadmi ki jismani zarurat toh hoti hee hai, aadmi kya aurat ki zyada hoti hai isiliye mein apne abbu ki sewa samajh kar leti hu, mza bhi aata hai woh nahi jhuuth bolungi ki mza nahi aata."
Ratna : "Ye sab shuru kaisey hua shadi ke baad teri?"
Fatima : "Toh aapko sab janna hai, lo ye pakdo chai mein soch rhi thee aapko video dikhaungi par koi ni aapko mein apni hee saari dastaan bta deti hu, mera mann bhi halka ho jayega. Mein shayd 22 ki thee ya 23 ki jab mein ghar vapis aayi thee mujhey yaad hai meri saas ne bda zaleel krke nikala tha mujhey ghar sey uss time bechare abbu bhi gareeb thay kuuch bole nahi chup chaap mujhey vapis le aaye aur woh mera karamjala shohar kuuch ni bola. Uski biwi ko ghar se nikal dia lekin chup chaap khda rha. Usi din meine faisla kar lia tha ki yallaah mar jaungi lekin iss ghar mein firsey vapis nahi aaungi."
Ratna ko Fatima se hamdardi hone lgi. Ek aurat hee aurat ka dukh samajh paati hai. Ratna Fatima ke kandhe ko sehlane lgi. Fatima ko bhi accha lga ki koi uski baat sun rha hai aur samajh rha hai.
Fatima : "Boht gareebi thee tab didi, vapis aa gye ghar par, mein yahi ek dukaan par kaam krne lgi aur abbu carpentry aur dusre chotte motte kaam karte thay. Par ghar mein jitna paisa aata saara abbu mujhey de dete, izzat mili woh alag aur meri liye nayi nayi cheezein laate thay woh pyar mila woh alag. Fir ek din mein raat ko kutte bhagan ke liye uthi, toh meine dekha tha ki abbu ghar ke pichwade par meri kacchi sungh sungh kar apna hathiyaar hila rhe thay. us din pta nahi kya hua didi puray shareer mein current ghum gya ye sochkar ki mere abbu meri gandi kacchi sungh rhe hai. Kasam se didi nazara boht garam tha abbu apne bde lund ko upar neechay kar rhe thay, haaye kitna mota hua karta tha uss time unka hathiyaar."
Ratna ye sunkar apne galey ka thookh satak rhi thee.
Fatima : "Fir didi mein bhi unhey roz raat ko yehi karte huye dekhti, ek din meine masti ke liye kacchi chupa didi, bechare abbu puri raat dhundhte rhe aur mein laiti laiti hass rhi thee."
Ratna Fatima ki besharmi par hairaan thee, ki aakhir ye itni khul kaise gyi. Ratna ko uski baatein sun sun kar aisa lag rha tha ki asli khushi toh Fatima ki zindagi mein hai. Ratna ne itna sab kurbaan kia lekin chehre par hasi hafto- 2 hafto mein aati thee aur yha ye Fatima apne baap se chudne ki baatein krte huye bhi khil khila rahi thee. Ratna ko thoddi jalan mehsoos hui Fatima ki hum bistari se nahi balki uski khushi sey yehi khushi usko chahiye thee. Ratna ki mahine ki kamai aur Fatima ki kamai mein zameen aasmaan ka antar tha par bhi ek maalkin jaisi haisiyat waali Ratna Fatima se kam khush thee.
Fatima : "Arre didi chup ho gyi kuuch boliye na."
Ratna ka chehra mayoos tha. Fatima samajh gyi ki kuuch toh baat hai, jo Ratna ko lg gyi.
Fatima : "Kya baat hai didi?"
Ratna : "Aisi khushi mere pass nahi hai Fatima?"
Ye sunkar Fatima ka kaleja bhi fatt gya pehli baar koi aurat uske aage chudai ka raag rona na krke khushio ki baat kar rhi thee. Fatima uske kandhe par haath rkhti hai aur usko santvana deti hai ki aisa kuuch nahi hai.
Ratna : "Tu dekh kitni khush hai, meine puri zindagi kya kia? Ubad khaabad zindagi jee bahar izzat bhi mili lekin khush nahi hu, aur ab bahar ke log ye bhi bolte hai ki mein Balwaan ke saath soti hu, kya hee faayda mera toh?"
Fatima : "Arre didi logon ka kaam hai bolna aapka kam hai apni zindagi jeena, jo aapne aur bholu bhaiya ne time dekha hai woh ye log nahi smjh skte inn haramzado ko toh muuh chalane se matlab, ye pushpa hai na, yehi baniyain jiski dukaan hai pahadi se neechay badi baatein chorrti thee ki ladki aisi laungi ladki vaise laungi aur iski khudki beti apne baap se chudti hai, haan Nargis ki dost hai aur itni tezz ladki hai phone mein record kr krke rkhti hai Nargis ne mujhey bheji thee, didi logon ko bs bolna hota hai kuuch nahi milega toh woh kuuch khuud bna lengey aapko sochna hai aapko jeena hai ya bss unn logon ki galat fehmi mein jeena hai. Dekho didi mera kissa hee lelo, mera shohar toh kisi kaam ka nahi rha na, jab mera baap mera pait paal rha hai aur meri bcchi ko padha rha hai toh mein kyu na uska saath du, keval beti chod dene se koi bura nahi ho jaata hai, jab tak dono ki haami hoti hai kuuch galat nahi hai, Kaunsa hm kisi ko maar rhe hai? Jo kar rhe hai band kamre mein kar rhe hai."
Ratna ye sunkar subakna band kar deti hai. Ye satvana sunkar uske andar ek jaan aa jaati hai ab usko Fatima ke andar ek saheli dikh rhi thee jo usko aaj tak nahi mili thee.
Ratna : "Sahi keh rhi hai logon ne mujhey nahi baksha toh kya hee hota hoga baakio ka"
Fatima : "Arre chorro na didi maaro goli inn logon ko, aap apna intezaam karo bss, ab ye btao Bholu bhaiya ke saath kya kya kar lia"
Ratna ye sunkar has padti hai.
Ratna : "Kuuch nahi kia, abhi toh", Ratna jhooth bol deti hai.
Fatima : "Arre didi dhatt teri, kuuch toh karo na logon ki mt socho aap apna dekho aapki khushi kisme hai, didi aapne mehnat mein puri zindagi nikal di ab thodda anand aap bhi lelo. Mehnat hee karti rahogi kya?"
Ratna ke mann mein ab yehi baat baith gyi thee ki woh aaram ki zindagi kab jeeyegi.
Fatima : "Isi bahane Bholu bhaiya ko aurat ke jisam ki pehchan bhi ho jayegi, kuuch toh sikhao unko, 2 baar Bholu bhaiya se jamkar chud logi na uske baad mann nahi krega unse alag hone ka,", ye bolkar Fatima aur Ratna dono hee has padti hai.
Ratna : "Keh toh sahi rhi hai par koi dekh lega toh toh.."
Fatima : "Band ghar mein kaun hee aayega, mujhey toh 20 saal ho gye aap hee pehli baar aayi ho usse pehle toh koi bhi nahi aaya."
Ratna firse kuuch sochne lgti hai.
Fatima : "Didi kitna sochti ho thodda jee bhi lo saare baal safed ho gye hai sir key isi chakkar mein."
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Fatima toh ghar ki ore nikal chuki thee. Usko pta tha ki Ratna aayegi zrur ek baar kisi aurat ke jism mein aag lg jaaye toh woh samay ke saath aur badhti hee hai kam nahi hoti. Ye baat Fatima bakhuubi jaanti thee kyuki woh khuud iss aag ke lapete mein na jaane kabse thee. Ratna dukaan par baithi soch rhi thee ki usko jana chahiye ya nahi. Ratna baar baar yehi soch rhi thee ki ye sahi hai ya galat, lekin aaj uska maan itna vichlit nahi tha jitna kuuch din pehle tha ab woh kuuch der khuud se ladkar faisle kar hee leti thee. Ratna Bholu ko dukaan smbhalne ke liye bolti hai aur woh bhi mann ki baat maankar Fatime ke ghar chali jaati hai.
Fatima apne ghar ke bahar kaam hee kar rhi thee ki Ratna aa jaati hai.
Fatima : "Mujhey yakeen tha aap aaogi didi."
Ratna : "Haan aa gyi mein, nahi rha gya."
Fatima : "Chalo aa jao andar chalo."
Fatima Ratna ko andar le jaati hai aur usi bed par bitha deti hai jispar uska parivar ek dusre ke saath hum bistari karta tha. Ratna bed sheet par baithne se pehle hich kicha rhi thee ki kahi ye gandi na ho.
Fatima : "Pareshan mt ho didi bed sheet saaf roz saaf bichati hu raat tak hote hote gandi ho jaati hai, ye toh nayi hai ekdm kori."
Ratna sankoch htakar bistar par baith jaati hai. Bistar kaafi mulayam pura ghar gareebo ka tha lekin ek bistar hee aleeshaan tha.
Fatima : Ab btao didi video dikhau ya chai bnau pehley?, aap toh kuuch nahi bologi mein aisa karti hu chai bna hee deti hu.", ye bolkar Fatima chai bnane lg jaati hai. Uski chotti hee rasoi wahi bistar ke barabar mein hee neechay zameen par thee.
Ratna : "Ek baat puchu Fatima tu ye sab kabse kar rhi hai?"
Fatima : "Kya didi?"
Ratna : "Apne abbu ke saath matlab Hamid Chacha ke saath."
Fatima : "Arre abbu ke saath toh kitne saal ho gye, abbu shadi ke baad se hee meri fursat kar rhe hai."
Ratna : "Itna itna lamba time.."
Fatima : "Haan didi, lekin tab itna nahi tha jabse shadi ke baar ghar vapis aayi tabsey zindagi aisi hee hai."
Ratna : "Tu shadi ke baad vapis isiliye aayi thee?"
Fatima : "Arre nahi nahi didi mere shohar acche aadmi nahi thay, shadi ke time toh woh bdia lgey lekin uske baad wahi daaru, jua sab buri aadte thay aur nahi unki maa acchi thee ladai jhagda karti thee. Ab toh kuuch yaad hee nahi lekin mere abbu vapis le aaye thay mujhye usi din."
Ratna : "Toh tera usi din se shuru ho gya?"
Fatima : "Kahan didi time lga, shadi se pehley toh meine kuuch bhi nahi kia, ye mere sohar ne 1-2 baar kia tha uss wajah mein darne lgi thee woh galat krte thay mein kuuch bhi nahi karti thee fir abbu ne dheeray dheeray mujhey pyar krke khol lia pura. Ab toh ye haal hai neend nahi aati jab tak ek baar abbu mere upar na aa jaaye"
Ratna ye sunkar kuuch soch hee rhi hoti hai.
Fatima : "Aapko sunkar ajeeb lag rha hoga, ki ye Fatima kya kar rhi hai kyu kar rhi hai? Ye sab galat hai ye sab nahi hona chahiye"
Ratna : "Nahi nahi aisa.."
Fatima : "Mein toh bss yehi kehti hu didi jeo aur jeenay do, hm bahar muuh nahi maarte ghar mein kya krte hai kisi ko kya matlab."
Ye sunkar Ratna ko thodda bura lgta hai kyuki woh baaki sabke gharo mein boht dilchaspi le rhi thee. Woh khuud toh ghar mein kya kuuch nahi kar rhi the aur dusro ko bewajah naap tol rhi thee ki kaun sahi hai aur kaun galat.
Fatima : "Shohar ki pitai se toh bdia abbu ka pyar hai, pyar se lete hai jaisey chahe vaise aur fir itni mehnat krke hmara pait bhi paaltey hai. Har aadmi ki jismani zarurat toh hoti hee hai, aadmi kya aurat ki zyada hoti hai isiliye mein apne abbu ki sewa samajh kar leti hu, mza bhi aata hai woh nahi jhuuth bolungi ki mza nahi aata."
Ratna : "Ye sab shuru kaisey hua shadi ke baad teri?"
Fatima : "Toh aapko sab janna hai, lo ye pakdo chai mein soch rhi thee aapko video dikhaungi par koi ni aapko mein apni hee saari dastaan bta deti hu, mera mann bhi halka ho jayega. Mein shayd 22 ki thee ya 23 ki jab mein ghar vapis aayi thee mujhey yaad hai meri saas ne bda zaleel krke nikala tha mujhey ghar sey uss time bechare abbu bhi gareeb thay kuuch bole nahi chup chaap mujhey vapis le aaye aur woh mera karamjala shohar kuuch ni bola. Uski biwi ko ghar se nikal dia lekin chup chaap khda rha. Usi din meine faisla kar lia tha ki yallaah mar jaungi lekin iss ghar mein firsey vapis nahi aaungi."
Ratna ko Fatima se hamdardi hone lgi. Ek aurat hee aurat ka dukh samajh paati hai. Ratna Fatima ke kandhe ko sehlane lgi. Fatima ko bhi accha lga ki koi uski baat sun rha hai aur samajh rha hai.
Fatima : "Boht gareebi thee tab didi, vapis aa gye ghar par, mein yahi ek dukaan par kaam krne lgi aur abbu carpentry aur dusre chotte motte kaam karte thay. Par ghar mein jitna paisa aata saara abbu mujhey de dete, izzat mili woh alag aur meri liye nayi nayi cheezein laate thay woh pyar mila woh alag. Fir ek din mein raat ko kutte bhagan ke liye uthi, toh meine dekha tha ki abbu ghar ke pichwade par meri kacchi sungh sungh kar apna hathiyaar hila rhe thay. us din pta nahi kya hua didi puray shareer mein current ghum gya ye sochkar ki mere abbu meri gandi kacchi sungh rhe hai. Kasam se didi nazara boht garam tha abbu apne bde lund ko upar neechay kar rhe thay, haaye kitna mota hua karta tha uss time unka hathiyaar."
Ratna ye sunkar apne galey ka thookh satak rhi thee.
Fatima : "Fir didi mein bhi unhey roz raat ko yehi karte huye dekhti, ek din meine masti ke liye kacchi chupa didi, bechare abbu puri raat dhundhte rhe aur mein laiti laiti hass rhi thee."
Ratna Fatima ki besharmi par hairaan thee, ki aakhir ye itni khul kaise gyi. Ratna ko uski baatein sun sun kar aisa lag rha tha ki asli khushi toh Fatima ki zindagi mein hai. Ratna ne itna sab kurbaan kia lekin chehre par hasi hafto- 2 hafto mein aati thee aur yha ye Fatima apne baap se chudne ki baatein krte huye bhi khil khila rahi thee. Ratna ko thoddi jalan mehsoos hui Fatima ki hum bistari se nahi balki uski khushi sey yehi khushi usko chahiye thee. Ratna ki mahine ki kamai aur Fatima ki kamai mein zameen aasmaan ka antar tha par bhi ek maalkin jaisi haisiyat waali Ratna Fatima se kam khush thee.
Fatima : "Arre didi chup ho gyi kuuch boliye na."
Ratna ka chehra mayoos tha. Fatima samajh gyi ki kuuch toh baat hai, jo Ratna ko lg gyi.
Fatima : "Kya baat hai didi?"
Ratna : "Aisi khushi mere pass nahi hai Fatima?"
Ye sunkar Fatima ka kaleja bhi fatt gya pehli baar koi aurat uske aage chudai ka raag rona na krke khushio ki baat kar rhi thee. Fatima uske kandhe par haath rkhti hai aur usko santvana deti hai ki aisa kuuch nahi hai.
Ratna : "Tu dekh kitni khush hai, meine puri zindagi kya kia? Ubad khaabad zindagi jee bahar izzat bhi mili lekin khush nahi hu, aur ab bahar ke log ye bhi bolte hai ki mein Balwaan ke saath soti hu, kya hee faayda mera toh?"
Fatima : "Arre didi logon ka kaam hai bolna aapka kam hai apni zindagi jeena, jo aapne aur bholu bhaiya ne time dekha hai woh ye log nahi smjh skte inn haramzado ko toh muuh chalane se matlab, ye pushpa hai na, yehi baniyain jiski dukaan hai pahadi se neechay badi baatein chorrti thee ki ladki aisi laungi ladki vaise laungi aur iski khudki beti apne baap se chudti hai, haan Nargis ki dost hai aur itni tezz ladki hai phone mein record kr krke rkhti hai Nargis ne mujhey bheji thee, didi logon ko bs bolna hota hai kuuch nahi milega toh woh kuuch khuud bna lengey aapko sochna hai aapko jeena hai ya bss unn logon ki galat fehmi mein jeena hai. Dekho didi mera kissa hee lelo, mera shohar toh kisi kaam ka nahi rha na, jab mera baap mera pait paal rha hai aur meri bcchi ko padha rha hai toh mein kyu na uska saath du, keval beti chod dene se koi bura nahi ho jaata hai, jab tak dono ki haami hoti hai kuuch galat nahi hai, Kaunsa hm kisi ko maar rhe hai? Jo kar rhe hai band kamre mein kar rhe hai."
Ratna ye sunkar subakna band kar deti hai. Ye satvana sunkar uske andar ek jaan aa jaati hai ab usko Fatima ke andar ek saheli dikh rhi thee jo usko aaj tak nahi mili thee.
Ratna : "Sahi keh rhi hai logon ne mujhey nahi baksha toh kya hee hota hoga baakio ka"
Fatima : "Arre chorro na didi maaro goli inn logon ko, aap apna intezaam karo bss, ab ye btao Bholu bhaiya ke saath kya kya kar lia"
Ratna ye sunkar has padti hai.
Ratna : "Kuuch nahi kia, abhi toh", Ratna jhooth bol deti hai.
Fatima : "Arre didi dhatt teri, kuuch toh karo na logon ki mt socho aap apna dekho aapki khushi kisme hai, didi aapne mehnat mein puri zindagi nikal di ab thodda anand aap bhi lelo. Mehnat hee karti rahogi kya?"
Ratna ke mann mein ab yehi baat baith gyi thee ki woh aaram ki zindagi kab jeeyegi.
Fatima : "Isi bahane Bholu bhaiya ko aurat ke jisam ki pehchan bhi ho jayegi, kuuch toh sikhao unko, 2 baar Bholu bhaiya se jamkar chud logi na uske baad mann nahi krega unse alag hone ka,", ye bolkar Fatima aur Ratna dono hee has padti hai.
Ratna : "Keh toh sahi rhi hai par koi dekh lega toh toh.."
Fatima : "Band ghar mein kaun hee aayega, mujhey toh 20 saal ho gye aap hee pehli baar aayi ho usse pehle toh koi bhi nahi aaya."
Ratna firse kuuch sochne lgti hai.
Fatima : "Didi kitna sochti ho thodda jee bhi lo saare baal safed ho gye hai sir key isi chakkar mein."
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Fatima : "Didi kitna sochti ho thodda jee bhi lo saare baal safed ho gye hai sir key isi chakkar mein."
Ratna fir kuuch sochne lgti hai. Ye sochne ki itni gandi bimari hee usko koi faisla lene se rokti thee. Har baat par usko tension rehti thee abhi jhijak khulne mein time toh lgna hee tha.
Fatima(Khoni maarke): "Abhi sir ke safed ho rhe hai uske bhi baal safed ho jayengey kuuch karlo"
Ratna firse mand mand muskura deti hai. Ratna aur Fatima abhi baat hee kr rhe hote hai ki itne mein Nargis aa jaati hai. Nargis market mein hee kuch samaan lene gyi thee. Nargis andar aati hai Ratna ko dekh kar wahi baith jaati hai.
Nargis : "Ratna tai aap kaisey aa gyi aaj?"
Ratna : "Bas aa gyi tu bta kha se aa rhi hai?"
Nargis : "Mein toh bazaar mein gyi thee samaan khareednay."
Ratna : "Accha."
Fatima : "Nargis accha hua tu aa gyi, mein tujhey bta rhi thee na kal Ratna tai aayi thee ghar yehi aayi thee aur inko samajh nahi aa rha hai ye Bholu bhaiya ke saath kya kre?"
Nargis : "Oh toh aap dono ne sab baat karli hai, mujhey bhi ajeeb lga tha tai ko dekhkar, bdia hai, tai aap jaldi chli gyi thoddi der aur rukti toh meri seal bhi tut tey huye dekh leti".
Nargis jitni jawaan thee utni hee bebaak bhi, kuuch bhi bol jaati thee aur kisi ke aage bhi.
Nargis : "Tai ye btao Bholu ke saath kuch kia ya nahi?"
Ratna : "Nahi meine kuuch ni kia."
Nargis : "Kya tai ghar mein itna jawaan ladka hai, itna hatta gatta mze lo aakhir hai toh beta hee na, boht masti dilayega tumhey."
Ratna ye sunkar firse se hil jaati hai. Usko aisi bhasha ki aadat nahi thee aur Nargis fatta fat baatein bna rhi thee.
Nargis : "Mote lund ke mze hee kuuch hai, nanu toh budhe ho gye, Bholu bhaiya jawaan hai krwalo kuuch time baad toh tumhari hee kamar mein dard rehne lgega."
Nargis zubaan chalayi jaa rhi thee aur yha baithi Ratna usko sunay ja rhi thee. Ratna se zyada khush toh nargis hee lag rhi thee. Nargis aur Fatima dono Ratna ke dimaag mein azaadi aur man mein jo chahe aaye aur krne ke khwab bhar dete hai. Ratna bhi sun rhi thee kahi sehmat hoti thee kahi jhijakti thee lekin uska dimaag ab khul rha tha. Usko zindagi zimmedario se bhi badi lgne lgi thee. Zimmedari aadmi tabhi nibha paata hai jab sukhi ho, agar insaan khush nahi hai toh na woh zimmedaria nibha paata aur nahi woh zimmedar bn paata.
Nargis : "Ye dekho tai, isko dekho aap."
Nargis apne phone mein ek video khol deti hai. Uss video mein ek kaafi jawaan ladki thee jisne phone pakda hua tha aur saamne waala camera on, uski gaand ko peechay se ek thodda saawla aur takla aadmi jiski umar kaafi zyada thee pakad ke chodh rha tha. Uss ladki ki umar Nargis se bhi kam lag rhi thee aur woh aadmi hatta gatta tha par umar mein saaf pta chal rha tha ki boht hai. Woh aadmi ladki ki kasi hui gaand pakad kar apna lund ghusaye ja rha tha. Ladki ne keval upar bhoore rang ki bra pehni thee, camera hilta uske saath se toh woh aadmi bhi dikhta aur kabhi kabhi uska lund.
Nargis : "Ye baap beti hai chowk par hee rehte hai, mota kaam hai paisa boht hai aish kar rhe hai, mujhey toh kuuch galat nahi lgta biwi ghodi bne ya beti, baap chode ya pati baaat hai khushi ki jisko jo krna hai krey, hme kya?"
Ratna aankhein gadaye video dekh rhi thee, woh aadmi badi shiddat ke saath uski ladki ko peechay se chod rha tha. Ladki camera pakdey bss ahh papa aah papa please aah papa aur tez karke apne honth kaat rhi thee.
Nargis : "Ek ye bhi zindagi hai aur ek ye bhi hai ki kuuch na karo aapki marzi."
Teeno aurte aapas mein aise hee kaafi der baat krne lgti hai aur subah ke 10 bj aaye thay. Ratna ko yha 2 ghnte ho chukay, Ratna unn sey vida lekar vapis dukaan chali jaati hai. Ratna jaakar dukaan ka galla firse smbhal leti hai aur Bholu se galle ka hisaab le leti hai. Firse dukaan par beech beech mein log aate jaate rehte hai aur woh unko samaan pkdate rehte hai.
Mahina October ka tha, pahado mein thand aur raat dono hee jaldi aa jaati hai. Ratna aur Bholu shaam ko dukaan badha kar ghar nikal jaate hai. Ratna ke dimaag mein Nargis ki hee baatein ghuum rhi thee. Jis ladki ko woh nadaan samajhti thee wahi usko aaj dunia ka gyan de gyi thee.
Ghar pohochkar Ratna kiwaad ka taala deti hai aur dono maa bete kamre mein chale jaate hai. Ratna Bed mein se kambal nikal leti hai. Thand shuru ho gyi thee agar ab saawdhani nahi barti toh Bholu firse bimar pad jana tha. Balwaan(Bholu) shareer se mazboot boht tha lekin mausam badalne par uska bimar hona aam tha, har saal woh mausam badalte huye bimaar ho jata tha. Isi sawdhaani ke liye Ratna ne aaj hee kambal nikal liye thay.
Khana khake dono maa bete bistar par baithey hote hai. Ratna sone se pehle apne kapde badalne lgti hai. Bholu firse usko aankhein tikaye dekh rha tha. Ratna jaise jaise kapdey utar rhi thee vaise vaise Bholu bhi apna pajama masal rha tha. Bholu pajama masal rha tha aur Ratna uski ore dekh rhi thee. Ratna ko aaj Bholu ki harkato mein alag hee dilchaspi aa rhi thee. Ratna kapde pehnkar bistar par aa jaati hai.
Ratna : "Balwaan mujhey dekh kar tu kya kar rha tha?"
Bholu : "Kuuch nahi maa bas jab tu kapdey badalti hai na toh mere dard hone lgta hai."
Ratna : "Dard kaisa dard?"
Bholu : "Mere munna mein boht tight ho jaata hai."
Ratna : "Accha bahar nikal zra apne munna ko."
Bholu kambal ke saath apna pajama bhi neechay kar deta hai. Bholu ka kaala mota lund jhatke marta hua ek baari mein bahar aa jaata hai. Ratna usko bde dhyan se dekh rhi thee Bholu ke lund ki bnawat hee kabil-e-tareef thee. Bholu ka lund bilkul uske shareer jaisa tha, lmbda chorra aur ekdm bda, aisa lg rha tha kisi ne shakargandi rkh di ho. Lund pe upar naso ka ubhar dikh rha tha, jaise kisi train ka steam engine ho.
Bholu : "Kya karu maa roz dard hota hai ismey"
Ratna : "Roz matlab har din?"
Bholu : "Haan jab bhi tu kapdey badalti hai ya teri munia ko dbata hu."
Ratna : "Accha, chal theek hai jab bhi dard hua kre isko bahar nikal lia kar aur mujhey bta dia kar. Mein bhi toh dekhu ye tere munna mein kitna dard hota hai."
Bholu : "Theek hai maa, abhi dard ho rha hai bahar nikal lu."
Ratna : "Haan haan abhi bhi nikal ley."
Bholu apna lund bahar hee rehnde deta hai, thand lagti hai toh usko kambal ke andar kar leta hai. Bholu apne phone mein lga hua tha lekin uska lund abhi bhi top ki tarah kambal mein khda tha. Ratna ascharya mein thee ki bina dhyan ke bhi kisi ka lund itna tight kaise reh skta hai. Ratna laitne ki koshish karti lekin baar baar uska dhyan Bholu ke tambu par hee jaata.
Ratna : "Ab bhi dard ho rha hai?"
Bholu : "Haan lekin thodda kam, pajame mein zyada tha."
Ratna : "La mujhe dikha."
Ratna ye bolkar kambal ke andar hee Bholu ka lund pakad leti hai. Kisi aurat ke pehle sparsh ke hote hee Bholu ke lund mein firse khoon behne lgta hai aur Ratna ki mutthi ke andar hee Bholu ka lund aur tight hona shuru ho jaata hai. Ratna ko apne haath mein Bholu ke lund ka khoon aur garmi dono mehsoos ho rhi thee, woh smjh rhi thee ki uska jawaan ladka dimaag se kaisa bhi ho lekin neechay se ek mard hee tha. Ratna bss Bholu ke lund ko mutthi mein beechay baithi thee. Ratna ko aaj pehli baar haanthon mein hal chal mehsoos ho rhi thee uske pair halke ho rhe thay. Ratna ka haath kase ja rha tha uska mann tha ki aaj woh apne bete ke lund ki taqat hee dekh ley. Ratna apne khayalo mein thee aur Bholu ka lund kse ja rhi thee. Bholu thodda masti mein tha toh aakhein bnd krke baitha tha. Ratna ne usko dekha toh woh smjh gyi ki uska beta bhi madhoshi mein hai.
Bholu ke mann mein kya chal rha tha ye toh wohi jaane lekin Ratna ke mann mein 200 ki raftaar se saari kahania chal rhi thee. Ratna ke mann mein hr tarah ka khyal aa rha tha, uske shareer mein bhi garmi ban rhi thee. Ratna thoddi der mein Bhola ka lund apne haanthon se azaad kar deti hai.
Ratna : "Aaram pada kuuch."
Bholu : "Haan"
Ratna : "Dard hua kare toh bta dia kar mein yehi kar dia karungi."
Bholu : "Theek hai maa. Lekin maa mujhey aaram kyu pda?"
Ratna : "Woh bss aise hee hota hai jab koi aurat pakadti hai toh aadmio ko aaram aata hee hai."
Bholu : "Accha, maa toh pakad hee ley na aur aaram pad jayega abhi bhi dard kam nahi ho rha hai."
Ratna : "Ruk mere pass isse bdia ilaaj hai."
Ratna Bholu ki taraf chehra kar leti hai aur uska haath uske pajame mein chla jaata hai. Ratna apne mulayam haantho se pehle uske ando ko pakad leti hai. Isi pakad se bechare Bholu ki sitti pitti gum ho jaati hai ek masuum aah uske muuh se nikal jaati hai. Apne bete ko iss madhoshi mein dekh kar Ratna ko aur hosla mil jaata hai, Ratna apna dusra haath bdhakar Bholu ke lund par rkh deti hai, Bholu ka lund bhatti ki tarah garam aur tight tha. Ratna uske lund ki khaal ko peechay karti hai, lund bechara itna tight tha ki khaal aaram se peechay bhi nahi ja rhi thee. Ratna ne haath ka ek jhatka maarke Bholu ke supade ko aazadi dila dee. Ek aah ke saath Ratna ka haath ab supade se neechay aa chuka tha. Ratna ki mutthi mein Bholu ka lund sma nahi rha tha, Supada unglio ke upar aur Bholu ke aand uske haath ne neechay thay. Supada khulte hee Ratna ko masti chadi usne apna haath Bholu ke lund par upar neechay firana shuru kar dia.
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Fatima : "Didi kitna sochti ho thodda jee bhi lo saare baal safed ho gye hai sir key isi chakkar mein."
Ratna fir kuuch sochne lgti hai. Ye sochne ki itni gandi bimari hee usko koi faisla lene se rokti thee. Har baat par usko tension rehti thee abhi jhijak khulne mein time toh lgna hee tha.
Fatima(Khoni maarke): "Abhi sir ke safed ho rhe hai uske bhi baal safed ho jayengey kuuch karlo"
Ratna firse mand mand muskura deti hai. Ratna aur Fatima abhi baat hee kr rhe hote hai ki itne mein Nargis aa jaati hai. Nargis market mein hee kuch samaan lene gyi thee. Nargis andar aati hai Ratna ko dekh kar wahi baith jaati hai.
Nargis : "Ratna tai aap kaisey aa gyi aaj?"
Ratna : "Bas aa gyi tu bta kha se aa rhi hai?"
Nargis : "Mein toh bazaar mein gyi thee samaan khareednay."
Ratna : "Accha."
Fatima : "Nargis accha hua tu aa gyi, mein tujhey bta rhi thee na kal Ratna tai aayi thee ghar yehi aayi thee aur inko samajh nahi aa rha hai ye Bholu bhaiya ke saath kya kre?"
Nargis : "Oh toh aap dono ne sab baat karli hai, mujhey bhi ajeeb lga tha tai ko dekhkar, bdia hai, tai aap jaldi chli gyi thoddi der aur rukti toh meri seal bhi tut tey huye dekh leti".
Nargis jitni jawaan thee utni hee bebaak bhi, kuuch bhi bol jaati thee aur kisi ke aage bhi.
Nargis : "Tai ye btao Bholu ke saath kuch kia ya nahi?"
Ratna : "Nahi meine kuuch ni kia."
Nargis : "Kya tai ghar mein itna jawaan ladka hai, itna hatta gatta mze lo aakhir hai toh beta hee na, boht masti dilayega tumhey."
Ratna ye sunkar firse se hil jaati hai. Usko aisi bhasha ki aadat nahi thee aur Nargis fatta fat baatein bna rhi thee.
Nargis : "Mote lund ke mze hee kuuch hai, nanu toh budhe ho gye, Bholu bhaiya jawaan hai krwalo kuuch time baad toh tumhari hee kamar mein dard rehne lgega."
Nargis zubaan chalayi jaa rhi thee aur yha baithi Ratna usko sunay ja rhi thee. Ratna se zyada khush toh nargis hee lag rhi thee. Nargis aur Fatima dono Ratna ke dimaag mein azaadi aur man mein jo chahe aaye aur krne ke khwab bhar dete hai. Ratna bhi sun rhi thee kahi sehmat hoti thee kahi jhijakti thee lekin uska dimaag ab khul rha tha. Usko zindagi zimmedario se bhi badi lgne lgi thee. Zimmedari aadmi tabhi nibha paata hai jab sukhi ho, agar insaan khush nahi hai toh na woh zimmedaria nibha paata aur nahi woh zimmedar bn paata.
Nargis : "Ye dekho tai, isko dekho aap."
Nargis apne phone mein ek video khol deti hai. Uss video mein ek kaafi jawaan ladki thee jisne phone pakda hua tha aur saamne waala camera on, uski gaand ko peechay se ek thodda saawla aur takla aadmi jiski umar kaafi zyada thee pakad ke chodh rha tha. Uss ladki ki umar Nargis se bhi kam lag rhi thee aur woh aadmi hatta gatta tha par umar mein saaf pta chal rha tha ki boht hai. Woh aadmi ladki ki kasi hui gaand pakad kar apna lund ghusaye ja rha tha. Ladki ne keval upar bhoore rang ki bra pehni thee, camera hilta uske saath se toh woh aadmi bhi dikhta aur kabhi kabhi uska lund.
Nargis : "Ye baap beti hai chowk par hee rehte hai, mota kaam hai paisa boht hai aish kar rhe hai, mujhey toh kuuch galat nahi lgta biwi ghodi bne ya beti, baap chode ya pati baaat hai khushi ki jisko jo krna hai krey, hme kya?"
Ratna aankhein gadaye video dekh rhi thee, woh aadmi badi shiddat ke saath uski ladki ko peechay se chod rha tha. Ladki camera pakdey bss ahh papa aah papa please aah papa aur tez karke apne honth kaat rhi thee.
Nargis : "Ek ye bhi zindagi hai aur ek ye bhi hai ki kuuch na karo aapki marzi."
Teeno aurte aapas mein aise hee kaafi der baat krne lgti hai aur subah ke 10 bj aaye thay. Ratna ko yha 2 ghnte ho chukay, Ratna unn sey vida lekar vapis dukaan chali jaati hai. Ratna jaakar dukaan ka galla firse smbhal leti hai aur Bholu se galle ka hisaab le leti hai. Firse dukaan par beech beech mein log aate jaate rehte hai aur woh unko samaan pkdate rehte hai.
Mahina October ka tha, pahado mein thand aur raat dono hee jaldi aa jaati hai. Ratna aur Bholu shaam ko dukaan badha kar ghar nikal jaate hai. Ratna ke dimaag mein Nargis ki hee baatein ghuum rhi thee. Jis ladki ko woh nadaan samajhti thee wahi usko aaj dunia ka gyan de gyi thee.
Ghar pohochkar Ratna kiwaad ka taala deti hai aur dono maa bete kamre mein chale jaate hai. Ratna Bed mein se kambal nikal leti hai. Thand shuru ho gyi thee agar ab saawdhani nahi barti toh Bholu firse bimar pad jana tha. Balwaan(Bholu) shareer se mazboot boht tha lekin mausam badalne par uska bimar hona aam tha, har saal woh mausam badalte huye bimaar ho jata tha. Isi sawdhaani ke liye Ratna ne aaj hee kambal nikal liye thay.
Khana khake dono maa bete bistar par baithey hote hai. Ratna sone se pehle apne kapde badalne lgti hai. Bholu firse usko aankhein tikaye dekh rha tha. Ratna jaise jaise kapdey utar rhi thee vaise vaise Bholu bhi apna pajama masal rha tha. Bholu pajama masal rha tha aur Ratna uski ore dekh rhi thee. Ratna ko aaj Bholu ki harkato mein alag hee dilchaspi aa rhi thee. Ratna kapde pehnkar bistar par aa jaati hai.
Ratna : "Balwaan mujhey dekh kar tu kya kar rha tha?"
Bholu : "Kuuch nahi maa bas jab tu kapdey badalti hai na toh mere dard hone lgta hai."
Ratna : "Dard kaisa dard?"
Bholu : "Mere munna mein boht tight ho jaata hai."
Ratna : "Accha bahar nikal zra apne munna ko."
Bholu kambal ke saath apna pajama bhi neechay kar deta hai. Bholu ka kaala mota lund jhatke marta hua ek baari mein bahar aa jaata hai. Ratna usko bde dhyan se dekh rhi thee Bholu ke lund ki bnawat hee kabil-e-tareef thee. Bholu ka lund bilkul uske shareer jaisa tha, lmbda chorra aur ekdm bda, aisa lg rha tha kisi ne shakargandi rkh di ho. Lund pe upar naso ka ubhar dikh rha tha, jaise kisi train ka steam engine ho.
Bholu : "Kya karu maa roz dard hota hai ismey"
Ratna : "Roz matlab har din?"
Bholu : "Haan jab bhi tu kapdey badalti hai ya teri munia ko dbata hu."
Ratna : "Accha, chal theek hai jab bhi dard hua kre isko bahar nikal lia kar aur mujhey bta dia kar. Mein bhi toh dekhu ye tere munna mein kitna dard hota hai."
Bholu : "Theek hai maa, abhi dard ho rha hai bahar nikal lu."
Ratna : "Haan haan abhi bhi nikal ley."
Bholu apna lund bahar hee rehnde deta hai, thand lagti hai toh usko kambal ke andar kar leta hai. Bholu apne phone mein lga hua tha lekin uska lund abhi bhi top ki tarah kambal mein khda tha. Ratna ascharya mein thee ki bina dhyan ke bhi kisi ka lund itna tight kaise reh skta hai. Ratna laitne ki koshish karti lekin baar baar uska dhyan Bholu ke tambu par hee jaata.
Ratna : "Ab bhi dard ho rha hai?"
Bholu : "Haan lekin thodda kam, pajame mein zyada tha."
Ratna : "La mujhe dikha."
Ratna ye bolkar kambal ke andar hee Bholu ka lund pakad leti hai. Kisi aurat ke pehle sparsh ke hote hee Bholu ke lund mein firse khoon behne lgta hai aur Ratna ki mutthi ke andar hee Bholu ka lund aur tight hona shuru ho jaata hai. Ratna ko apne haath mein Bholu ke lund ka khoon aur garmi dono mehsoos ho rhi thee, woh smjh rhi thee ki uska jawaan ladka dimaag se kaisa bhi ho lekin neechay se ek mard hee tha. Ratna bss Bholu ke lund ko mutthi mein beechay baithi thee. Ratna ko aaj pehli baar haanthon mein hal chal mehsoos ho rhi thee uske pair halke ho rhe thay. Ratna ka haath kase ja rha tha uska mann tha ki aaj woh apne bete ke lund ki taqat hee dekh ley. Ratna apne khayalo mein thee aur Bholu ka lund kse ja rhi thee. Bholu thodda masti mein tha toh aakhein bnd krke baitha tha. Ratna ne usko dekha toh woh smjh gyi ki uska beta bhi madhoshi mein hai.
Bholu ke mann mein kya chal rha tha ye toh wohi jaane lekin Ratna ke mann mein 200 ki raftaar se saari kahania chal rhi thee. Ratna ke mann mein hr tarah ka khyal aa rha tha, uske shareer mein bhi garmi ban rhi thee. Ratna thoddi der mein Bhola ka lund apne haanthon se azaad kar deti hai.
Ratna : "Aaram pada kuuch."
Bholu : "Haan"
Ratna : "Dard hua kare toh bta dia kar mein yehi kar dia karungi."
Bholu : "Theek hai maa. Lekin maa mujhey aaram kyu pda?"
Ratna : "Woh bss aise hee hota hai jab koi aurat pakadti hai toh aadmio ko aaram aata hee hai."
Bholu : "Accha, maa toh pakad hee ley na aur aaram pad jayega abhi bhi dard kam nahi ho rha hai."
Ratna : "Ruk mere pass isse bdia ilaaj hai."
Ratna Bholu ki taraf chehra kar leti hai aur uska haath uske pajame mein chla jaata hai. Ratna apne mulayam haantho se pehle uske ando ko pakad leti hai. Isi pakad se bechare Bholu ki sitti pitti gum ho jaati hai ek masuum aah uske muuh se nikal jaati hai. Apne bete ko iss madhoshi mein dekh kar Ratna ko aur hosla mil jaata hai, Ratna apna dusra haath bdhakar Bholu ke lund par rkh deti hai, Bholu ka lund bhatti ki tarah garam aur tight tha. Ratna uske lund ki khaal ko peechay karti hai, lund bechara itna tight tha ki khaal aaram se peechay bhi nahi ja rhi thee. Ratna ne haath ka ek jhatka maarke Bholu ke supade ko aazadi dila dee. Ek aah ke saath Ratna ka haath ab supade se neechay aa chuka tha. Ratna ki mutthi mein Bholu ka lund sma nahi rha tha, Supada unglio ke upar aur Bholu ke aand uske haath ne neechay thay. Supada khulte hee Ratna ko masti chadi usne apna haath Bholu ke lund par upar neechay firana shuru kar dia.
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Bai hum incest story padthaho ma beta ki must chudi dekney ka liye, ye hero ki ma hey or side part me dosre ki ma ,
Is me kuch farak nehi padtha he, ratna jopdi me ma bete ki jo scen dekay ,o bohuth ajebsi scen hey ,or bothuth acha laga,but job beta apni ma ko chodne ki liye toiyar howa us time ratna wahase chola gia, us bohuth bora laga , hum ye dekna chatha ho beta apni ma ko kith na piayr ki sath chudtha he , ye up ki writing me pora detail dekna chiye, tnx, must story
Is me kuch farak nehi padtha he, ratna jopdi me ma bete ki jo scen dekay ,o bohuth ajebsi scen hey ,or bothuth acha laga,but job beta apni ma ko chodne ki liye toiyar howa us time ratna wahase chola gia, us bohuth bora laga , hum ye dekna chatha ho beta apni ma ko kith na piayr ki sath chudtha he , ye up ki writing me pora detail dekna chiye, tnx, must story