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Fantasy Reincarnated With The Strongest System Hindi Version
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Bhai start toh karo sahi se....
Abhi likhna chalu bhi nhi kiya hai sahi se aur aap like karne ko bol rhe ho....
Upar se itna bda gap dekar aap aaye aur sidha demand kar diye ho....
Aap likhna chalu toh karo likes aur comments apne aap aajayenge....
Morale down nhi kar rha hu....
Bura lage toh I'm Sorry....
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Update 3
"Aao aao sharmao mat""Aisa lgta hain maine apko pahale bhi kabhi dekha hai, mujhe to apse pahli nazar me hi pyar ho gaya"
"kya apko CPR dena aata hain kyuki apko dekhkar meri saanse band ho gayi please mujhe CPR de do"
"Agra sexy hona jurm hain, to ap sabse bade julmi ho"
Willium apne aas pass ke ho rahe mahoul ko bahut shocked hokar dekh raha tha, Usse lag raha tha ki vah kisi aisi Market me a gaya jaha par dukandaaro ko graahko ko thagkar bas apna saman bechna hai aur kuch nahi.
Willium ne Temple ke andar kadam rakhe hi the ki use ye Baajar jaisa mahoul dekhne ko mil gaya aur kamal ki baat to yah thi ki jo dukandaar li trah pesh aa rahe the Voh sabhi Gods the, aur unme se kuch gods to apas me Souls ka Petron God banne ke liye ladne bhi lag gaye the.
Actually yaha kuch aisa hota ki ek God ka wajood uske upar bharosa rakhne waale logo se banta hain, yaani Jitne jyada log kisi ek God par bharosa karenge vah God utna hi shaktishaali hoga, example ke liye maan lijiye log yakeen karte hain Aaag ek bhagwaan hain aur yahi yakeen se us god ka Janm bhi ho hota hai jise God of Fire kahte hai.
Filhal apna hero jo is waqt apne aaspaas ke mahaul ko samjhne ki kosis kar raha tha ek wajandhar Admi sir par topi lagaye willium se bolta hai ki
“Good day, young friend,” kya tum duniya sabse takatwar admi banna chahoge.
Willium ne sabse pahle apne aaspas dekha jab use koi nahi mila to usne apne taraf ungli karte huwe us wajandaar admi se kaha" kya ap mujhse baat kar rahe hain"
"Haa" us wajahndaar admi ne jabab diya aur aage kaha "mujhe ijaajat deejiye ki main apane baare mein bata sakoon. mera naam Gavin hai aur main sabhee tredon ka bhagavaan hoon. yadi aap is mandir mein sabase adbhut Petron God kee talaash kar rahe hain to vah main hoon, aur mujhe log God of All trades bulate".
Itna Kahte hi Gavin ke sir par ek jor se apple padta hain
"you basterd tumhari Himmat kaise huwi bachho se jhuth bolne ki" Ek khubsurat si ladki jisne sir 'Tree hat' jo chhote chhote apples se bhari huwi thi, pahn rakhi thi aur fir aage boli "Tumhari himmat kaise huwi Gavin apne ap ko Is temple ka sabse amazing Petron God batane ki, Suno ladke iski bakwas mat suno aur mere pass aao mujhe apna Petron god banao."
Us ladki ne " mere pass aao kaha" aur willium pataa nahi kaise par use apni body us ladki ki khichti huwi mahsoos hone lagi. willium apna best kar raha tha par fir bhi na jane kaise par willium khud ko rok nahi pa raha tha.
"mera name lulu hain aur me Apple Goddess hu" Willium jab lulu ke karib tab apne introduction dete huwe us ladki ne kaha" tumne apple ke baare me voh kahavat to suni hi hogi"
“An apple a day keeps the doctor away?” willium ne kaha.
"tum sirf aadhe sahi ho" lulu halki smile dete huwe boli."
"lulu, use pahle maine dekha tha mujhse us ludke churane ki kosish mat karo" Gavin ne kaha.
mandir ke andar ke Gods sabhee pratispardhee the. har baar "chune hue logon" ka ek Group prakat hota tha, ve sabhee apane agala janm lene se pahale unhen apana follower banaane kee pooree koshish karate the.
"bhaago yaha se" lulu ne chillate huwe Gavin se kaha aur apni tree hat se ek apple Gavin ki taraf fek diya, aur us apple ka size bich hawa me badhne lag gaya aur seedhe Gavin se takra gaya.
Gavin isse dur jakar ek diwaal se takra gaya.
"tumne dekha willium" lulu boli aur aage kaha “An apple a day keeps everyone away, agar tum zor se fekte ho to!”
"right" willium ne kaha aur dheere dheere lulu se dur hatne laga.
“Aww, don’t be like that.” lulu dheere dheere william ke pass aayi "ham ek dusre ko pahle jan lete na, tumhe pata hain agar tum mujhe apna petron god bana lo to me tumhe bahut se fayde dungi"
"kaise fayde"
“udaaharan ke lie, main tumhen kaheen bhee seb ke ped ugaane kee shakti de sakati hoon. chaahe vah ek registaan ho, paanee ke neeche, ya koee bhee jagah jahaan aap ek seb ugaana chaahate hain. aur aap ise apane shareer mein bhee vikasit kar sakate hain!"
"yah paryaavaran ke anukool lagata hai," William hakalaate huwe bola.
"mujhe pata hai!?" lulu muskuraayi. "ab, bas is Contact par hastaakshar karo."
lulu ne hava se ek contract aur ek kalam nikala aur usane vyaktigat roop se willam ke kaampate haathon ko kalam bhee saump dee aur use contract par hastaakshar karane ka aagrah kiya.
William contract par hastaakshar karane ke lie taiyaar nahin tha, lekin usake kandhon par tight grip use bhaagane se rok rahee thee.
Fortunately gaivin laut aaya aur lulu kee baanh ko william se door kar diya.
"niyamon se chalo!" gaivin william aur lulu ke beech mein khada tha. "ham kisi ko bhi contract par hastaakshar karane ke lie majaboor nahin kar sakate!"
"you basterd, mera contract bas hone hi wala tha" lulu ne gusse me boli.
Gavin viliyam ke paas khada ho gaya aur usake kandhe ko thapathapaaya. "chinta mat karo, bhai. jab tak main aasapaas hoon, koee bhee aapako contract par hastaakshar karane ke lie majaboor nahin kar sakata hai! choonki aap abhee aae hain, mujhe apana tour guide banane kee anumati den.
gaivin ne tab lulu ko "aapako isse koee samasya hai?" wala look diya jisane Apple goddess ko shock kar diya.
lulu fir apane staal par laut aayi, lekin aisa karane se pahale, usane william ko bulaaya aur usse kaha ki agar use koee God nahin mila jo usake anukool ho to vah kabhi bhi usake paas vaapas aa sakata hai.
Gavin William ke saath kandhe se kandha milaakar chal rahe the jab unhonne baajaar ka daura kiya tab Gavin ne william ke savaalon ka javaab diya aur bhagavaan ke baare mein ladake kee kuchh galataphemiyon ko bhee theek kiya.
"Gods teen prakaar ke hote hain," gavin ne samajhaaya jab ve chal rahe the. "aadikaaleen devata (The Primordial Gods) , vaiyaktikaran devata(The Personification Gods), aur naee peedhee ke devata(the New Generation Gods). The Primordial Gods mein ve Gods shaamil hain jo us samay paida hue the jab multiverse banaaya gaya tha jaise God of fire, Water, Earth, Air, Thunder aadi ko Gods ke roop mein jaan sakate hain.
"The Personification Gods bhaavanaon se paida hue bhagavaan hain jaise God of Fear, God of Lust , God of Pride aur kuch jaise God of War, God of Hunters, God of Music, God of Art, peshe se paida hue bhagavaan bhi The Personification Gods hain.
apana baat jaaree rakhane se pahale Gavin ruke. "the New Generation Gods aise devata hain jo abhee haal hee mein paida hue the aur unme bahut hee anokhee visheshataen hain."
"anokhee visheshataen jaise ?" viliyam ne poochha.
Gavin ne uttar diya, "ham jald hee in New Generation Gods mein se ek ko dekhenge." "William tum vaha logo us lambi line ko dekh rahe ho? ve us New Generation God ke sath contract par sign karne ke lie line lagakar baithe hain.
viliyam kee jigyaasa ko dekhate hue, Gavin ne ek kutil muskaan dee aur ladake ko us Goddess ko dekhane ke lie le gaya jo stall chala rahee thee.
ek chhotee ladakee, jo baarah varsh se adhik umr kee nahin lag rahee thee, apane chehare par ek badee muskaan ke saath ek kishor ladake se haath mila rahee thee. uske gulaabee baal, laal aankhen aur pyaare honth use behad manmohak bana rahe the.
"big brother, ye lo" nanhee Goddess ne ladke ke gaal ko chooma. "ab, please apana sign yahaan par karen."
ladake ne khushee-khushee contract par sign kar diye, jabaki line mein khade log "ab hamari baari" aur "hame bhi sign karna hai" jaise naare laga rahe the.
chhotee ladaki aur gevin ko dekhate hee william jam gaya par use is baat ka andaaja tha ki devee kaun hai, lekin vah shat pratishat nishchit nahin tha.
maano uske vichaaron ko padhakar Gavin ne sir hilaaya. "yah stall loli goddess, lily ka hai."
"loli Goddess?"
"haan, vah ek New Generation Gods me se ek hain jo ... anokhe svaad vaale logon kee maanyataon se paida huee hain.
maano yah mahasoos karate hue ki ve usake baare mein baat kar rahe hain, lily ne william aur Gavin ko dekha loly muskuraee aur william kee taraph haath hilaaya.
Gavin muskuraaya aur apane storage dimension se reeding glaas nikaala.
Gavin phusaphusaaya, "jo tum dekhte ho usse dhokha mat khao." "ise pahno."
"yah kya hai?" william ne poochha.
Gavin ne samajhaaya, "yah ek divine artifact hai jise Glasses of Truth kaha jaata hai." "iski madad se kisee bhee bhes aur bhram ke maadhyam se dekha ja sakata hai."
William ne chashma pahanane se pahale gavin ko sandehapoorn nazar se dekha phir usne Loli ko haath hilaate hue dekha aur sadame mein jam gaya.
Loli kaheen najar nahin aa rahee thee isake bajaay, jhurreedaar chehare aur badee naak vaala ek bauna vaapas use ghoor raha tha. bauna muskuraaya aur william uske teen daanton ko dekh sakata tha jo uske masoodon se baahar nikal rahe the ek daant oopar aur do neeche.
loli Goddess ne aankh maaree aur william ko ek flying kis diya pankhon vaala ek gulaabee dil patalee hava se nikala, aur yuva ladake kee or ud gaya william ne udate hue dil ko pharsh kee or bhej diya.
apne mission ko poora karane ke lie drdh sankalpit, gulaabee dil ne khud ko dhool chata dee kyonki vah dheere-dheere pharsh se uth khada hua. phir usne udne ke lie apane pankh phadaphadaane ka prayaas kiya durbhaagy se, william ne ise vaapas udne ka mauka nahin diya.
usne us par kadam rakha aur uske tukade-tukade kar die yah sunishchit karane ke baad ki dil pooree tarah se nasht ho gaya hai, vah bhaag gaya jaise ki shaitaan uske peeth ke peechhe tha.
apanee jaan bachaane ke lie bhaag rahe aur ghabarae hue ladake ka peechha karate hue Gavin hans pada uski najar mein william ek bahut hee dilachasp vyakti tha ho sake to vah chaahata tha ki william uska follower bane.
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Kafi wakt baad darsan huye bhai is kahani ke, William ko tour guide ke roop me Gavin use Har jagah ko dikha rha hai jaha pr use bahut si jankariya mili janne ko...
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