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Awesome updateUpdate......22
Bhaiyaaaaa......
Mansi Vikram ke gale lag gayi......aur fut fut ke rone lagi.....
Mansi....kahan the bhaiya aap.....pata hai main kitna akeli ho gayi thi....main kitna dar gayi thi......Mummy aur baki sab log apko galat boltr hai......lekin mere bhaiya kabhi koi galat kam nhi kar sakte......
Mansi rote rote bol rahi thi....aur Vikram se gile kar rahi thi.....lekin jab apne bhaiya ko koi jawab dete nhi paayi...to dur hoke Vikram ke chehre ko dekhne lagi.....
Jahan uske chehre pe ansoon the.....lekin sath hi ek muskan bhi......Manu......
bas itna hi bola paya Vikram.....ke Mansi phir se uske gale lag gayi......
Mansi....kaha chale gaye the app ....haa...boliye na chup kyun hai.....
Mansi ne rote huye hi phirse boli...
Vikram.....kuch mat bol...bas aise hi gale lagi reh.....
(man me.....tujhe kaise bataun ke kitna tadpa hun main.....kitne sadiyo baad phirse mile hai hum...bas kuch din ki baat hum phirse ek ho jayenge....)
Mansi....(man me.....is bar inhe apne man ki baat bata ke rahungi....kuch din bad mera Bday hai....usi din mujhe yeh kam karna hoga....)
aur Mansi man hi man muskura di....
kuch der bad Mansi ne jab Vikram ko chodi to usko apne charo taraf ka dhyan ayi.....ke wo kahan hai aur kaun kaun hai uske pas......wo dekhti hai ke Radhika ke sath 3 aur ladkiya hai.....jo use dekhke Muskura rahi thi....jisse Mansi sharma jati hai.....lekin apna dhyan phirse Vikram ke upar le jati hai......
Mere gake nhi lagogi.....ek awaj piche se aati hai.....to Mansi palat ke awaj ke taraf dekhti hai ke kisne awaj di.....jab Shaks ko dekhti hai to...ekdum shocked reh jati hai....bas itna hi muh se nikalta hai.......aaap..........
Dusri traf...Island pe....
Malini aur Didi ki halat kharab ho chuki thi.....unka physical health to thik thi...kyunki dono Maids unhe bhukha pyasa nhi rehne dete the.....lekin wo unhe bar bar unke kiye ka yaad dilate rehti hai....jisse unke mental health ekdum kharab ho gayi thi........aur upar se akela pan....unhe kured kured kar mar rahi thi....
dono abhi ek hi room mein baithe huye the.....aur unke samne ek badi Tv screen thi....tabhi Tv chalu ho jaati hai.....aur usme ek Party ka Video show hone lagta hai....
Pehle to doni mein se kisika bhi dhyan nhi jaata....lekin shor sharabe se unka dhyan chala jata hai.....unhe thodi hi samay lagta hai Video ko pehchan. Ne mein......tabhi Video shift hota hai unke ghar ke undar ke taraf Vikram pe.....
Vikram apne room mein taiyar ho raha hota hai....aur jaise hi wo apne room se nikalke sidiyo pe ata hai.....waise hi dikhata hai ke Kaberi bachao bachao chillate huye bahar nikal jaati hai.....aur Vikram hakka bakka reh jata hai.....
Phir scene us taraf chala jata hai jaha sab log Vikram ko hi kasoorbar man rahe the.....aur Vijendra aur kuch log milke use mar rahe hote hai.....
kuch der bad jab woh log ruk jate hai....to dikhaya jata hai ke Didi use thappad mar rahi hoti hai...aur use darinda aur na jane kitni galiya de rahi hoti hai.....aur phir Malini ke upar focus hota hai....jab unke samne bhikh mang raha tha ke usne kuch nhi kiya....phir bhi Malini ne apna muh fher liya tha.....
phir scene usi Khai ke tarf chala jata hai....jaha Didi ke hathon mein Gun thi......aur Vikram ro raha tha aur bol raha tha ke wo nirdosh hai.....aur khudko na marne ki bheekh mang raha tha.....scene bar bar Vikram ke masoom ansooun se bhige chehre pe jaa raha tha.....
Jise dekhne ke bad to Malinu aur didi dono ki dil dehel jata hai....unke khud ke zamir unhe dhut karne lagti hai....
Didi....bas karo .....bas karo....main aur nhi dekh sakti....haan haa main katil hun.....maine apne hi haato se khud ke bhai ko mara hai....
Malini ne jab apne beti ko dekhi ke wo pagalo jaisi harkat kar rahi hai....to wo daur ke jaake use gale laga leti hai....aur shant karne ki kosish karne lagti hai.....kyunke apne khud ke galti se usne apne bete ko to kho diya....lekin apne beti ko khona nhi chahti thi.....
Malini....shaant ho ja beti....dekh mai bhi utni hi zimmedar hun.....
Didi...kaise shant ho jaun maa.....kaise shant ho jaun...usne kitni bar bola ke wo nirdosh hai....lekin humne uski ek bhi na suni....main ek behen kehlane ke layak hi nahi hun....mujhe to mar jana chahiye....
yeh bolke wo apne aspas dekhne lagi ke kuch aisa mil jaye jisse wo apna jindagi khatam kar de....
Tabhi Tv pe Vikram ka chehra dikhta hai.....jo muskura raha tha.....
Vikram....kaise ho Maa Didi...
Jaise hi dono ne Vikram ki awaj suni to dono ne ftaak se Tv ke taraf dekhi ke Vikram waha pe dikh raha hai...jo muskura raha hai....
Vikram ke aise haste huye chehre ko dekhke dono aur bhi Glani se bhar jate hai ....
Vikram.....maut itni bhi asan nhi hai....mujhe bhi nhi mili thi....pata hai kitna tadpaya tha aap logo ne.....mujhe chhod dene ko kitni hi binti ki thi maine...kaash ap logo ne ek bar meri baat sun li hoti....
khair nafrat mein insaan andha ho hi jata hai......aap mere katil ho....aap dono....yeh kehte huye Vikram ke ankhon mein ansoon aa gaye....aur Tv band ho gaya.....
Didi...daud ke aake Tv pe hath pitne lagi...aur rote rote bolne lagi....mujhe maaf karde mere bhai...mujhe maaf karde....main ek behen nhi ban payi....
Malini apni beti ke pagalpan ko dekhti rahi.....aur khudke bare mein sochne lagi ke woh bhi utni hi gunehgar hai.....wo bhi utni hi zimedar hai.....unhone jo dekhaya gya tha...wohi dekhi thi....lekin apne khudke bete pe ekbar bhi yakin na aya....ekbar bhi uski baat na suni.....
jab uspe apne hi behen ne Gun tan ke rakhi thi....ya jab trigger dabaya tha....wo apne nafrat mein itni andhi ho gayi thi ke....ekbar bhi rokne ki na sochi....aj unki astitva....unka matritva unhe dhutkar raha tha.....
apne hi hatho apne aulad ka khub ka iljam unke upar aa gaya tha.......ab wo apne beti ko koi bhi santwana bhi dene ki kosish karna chhod di thi....unhe ab khudse nafrat ho rahi thi....aur apne beti se bhi....
marna chahti thi....lekin mar bhi nhi sakti thi....kyunki wo samajh chuki thi ke jo bhi unhe waha lake rakhe the...unhe marna nhi chahte the.....unhe unke kiye ki saja de rahe the.......unhe tadpana chahte the....jo asal mein ho bhi raha tha.....
Chaliye inhe aise tadapte dete hai.....bas dekhna yeh hai ke Vikram ne inke liye age kya socha hai...
Kahi ek aur jagah mein Vijendra bhi ek kanre mein band tha....use bhi Sachai ka pata chal chuka tha.....aur kisne aur kyun use Kidnap kiya tha woh bhi pata chal chuka tha.....aur har din use jitna Physically torcher kiya jaa raha tha...utna hi mentally...
Use hr din apne galtiyo ko dikhaya jaata.....use apne pehli biwi ko dikhaya jata...kisi aur admi ke baho mein......apne beti ko uske khud ke bete ko goli marte huye dikhaya jata....aur dikhaya jata ke kaise uski khud ki biwi ne uske khilaf shadiyantra racha.....
wo ab apne jindagi se hatash ho chuka tha....use ab jine ki koi icha nhi thi.....aisi halat thi ke agar use ek aur shock laga to wo pagal ho jayega....Vikram ne use iss had tak tod chuka tha.....
Jab use khana dene ek Banda aya to Vijendra usse maut ki bheekh mangne laga......
Vijendra.....please mujhe mar do....nhi jiya jata aur.....aur sehne ki himmat nhi hai mujhme.....mujhe mar do....mujhe mar do....
usne hath jod ke bheekh mangte huye bola.....
Tabhi Vikram waha aa gaya....aur use dekhke hasne laga......hahahhahahaha......maut .....maut itni sasti to nhi hai....hahahhahaha...
Vijendra ne jaise hi Vikram ko dekha to wo ghutno ke bal chalke Vikram ke pas aya....aur uske pairon pe jhuk kar bola....
Vijendra.....main manta hun....maine galat kiya hai....maine gunaah kiya hai....main tumhara gunnehgar hun....mujhe tumhari Maa ke sath wo sab nhi karna chahiye tha......lekin main aur nhi seh sakta.....mujhme aur himmat nhi hai....mujhe mar do....plzz.....mujhe mar do....
Vikram......Death is a mercy......matlab maut to daya hai.....aur main koi daya dikhane ke mood mein nhi hun.....tu jindagi bhar aise hi tadpega.....aur tu sahi rahe iska dhyan main rakhunga.....chalta hun....phir mulakat hogi.....
yeh bolke Vikram nikal gaya aur Chhod gaya Rota bilakhta Vijendra ko jo wahi farsh pe leta rota raha....apne kismat ko kosta raha.....
akhir aisa kya Hua tha ke Vikram apne baap ke prati itna kathor ho gaya......
to be continued.......
Awesome UpdateUpdate......22
Bhaiyaaaaa......
Mansi Vikram ke gale lag gayi......aur fut fut ke rone lagi.....
Mansi....kahan the bhaiya aap.....pata hai main kitna akeli ho gayi thi....main kitna dar gayi thi......Mummy aur baki sab log apko galat boltr hai......lekin mere bhaiya kabhi koi galat kam nhi kar sakte......
Mansi rote rote bol rahi thi....aur Vikram se gile kar rahi thi.....lekin jab apne bhaiya ko koi jawab dete nhi paayi...to dur hoke Vikram ke chehre ko dekhne lagi.....
Jahan uske chehre pe ansoon the.....lekin sath hi ek muskan bhi......Manu......
bas itna hi bola paya Vikram.....ke Mansi phir se uske gale lag gayi......
Mansi....kaha chale gaye the app ....haa...boliye na chup kyun hai.....
Mansi ne rote huye hi phirse boli...
Vikram.....kuch mat bol...bas aise hi gale lagi reh.....
(man me.....tujhe kaise bataun ke kitna tadpa hun main.....kitne sadiyo baad phirse mile hai hum...bas kuch din ki baat hum phirse ek ho jayenge....)
Mansi....(man me.....is bar inhe apne man ki baat bata ke rahungi....kuch din bad mera Bday hai....usi din mujhe yeh kam karna hoga....)
aur Mansi man hi man muskura di....
kuch der bad Mansi ne jab Vikram ko chodi to usko apne charo taraf ka dhyan ayi.....ke wo kahan hai aur kaun kaun hai uske pas......wo dekhti hai ke Radhika ke sath 3 aur ladkiya hai.....jo use dekhke Muskura rahi thi....jisse Mansi sharma jati hai.....lekin apna dhyan phirse Vikram ke upar le jati hai......
Mere gake nhi lagogi.....ek awaj piche se aati hai.....to Mansi palat ke awaj ke taraf dekhti hai ke kisne awaj di.....jab Shaks ko dekhti hai to...ekdum shocked reh jati hai....bas itna hi muh se nikalta hai.......aaap..........
Dusri traf...Island pe....
Malini aur Didi ki halat kharab ho chuki thi.....unka physical health to thik thi...kyunki dono Maids unhe bhukha pyasa nhi rehne dete the.....lekin wo unhe bar bar unke kiye ka yaad dilate rehti hai....jisse unke mental health ekdum kharab ho gayi thi........aur upar se akela pan....unhe kured kured kar mar rahi thi....
dono abhi ek hi room mein baithe huye the.....aur unke samne ek badi Tv screen thi....tabhi Tv chalu ho jaati hai.....aur usme ek Party ka Video show hone lagta hai....
Pehle to doni mein se kisika bhi dhyan nhi jaata....lekin shor sharabe se unka dhyan chala jata hai.....unhe thodi hi samay lagta hai Video ko pehchan. Ne mein......tabhi Video shift hota hai unke ghar ke undar ke taraf Vikram pe.....
Vikram apne room mein taiyar ho raha hota hai....aur jaise hi wo apne room se nikalke sidiyo pe ata hai.....waise hi dikhata hai ke Kaberi bachao bachao chillate huye bahar nikal jaati hai.....aur Vikram hakka bakka reh jata hai.....
Phir scene us taraf chala jata hai jaha sab log Vikram ko hi kasoorbar man rahe the.....aur Vijendra aur kuch log milke use mar rahe hote hai.....
kuch der bad jab woh log ruk jate hai....to dikhaya jata hai ke Didi use thappad mar rahi hoti hai...aur use darinda aur na jane kitni galiya de rahi hoti hai.....aur phir Malini ke upar focus hota hai....jab unke samne bhikh mang raha tha ke usne kuch nhi kiya....phir bhi Malini ne apna muh fher liya tha.....
phir scene usi Khai ke tarf chala jata hai....jaha Didi ke hathon mein Gun thi......aur Vikram ro raha tha aur bol raha tha ke wo nirdosh hai.....aur khudko na marne ki bheekh mang raha tha.....scene bar bar Vikram ke masoom ansooun se bhige chehre pe jaa raha tha.....
Jise dekhne ke bad to Malinu aur didi dono ki dil dehel jata hai....unke khud ke zamir unhe dhut karne lagti hai....
Didi....bas karo .....bas karo....main aur nhi dekh sakti....haan haa main katil hun.....maine apne hi haato se khud ke bhai ko mara hai....
Malini ne jab apne beti ko dekhi ke wo pagalo jaisi harkat kar rahi hai....to wo daur ke jaake use gale laga leti hai....aur shant karne ki kosish karne lagti hai.....kyunke apne khud ke galti se usne apne bete ko to kho diya....lekin apne beti ko khona nhi chahti thi.....
Malini....shaant ho ja beti....dekh mai bhi utni hi zimmedar hun.....
Didi...kaise shant ho jaun maa.....kaise shant ho jaun...usne kitni bar bola ke wo nirdosh hai....lekin humne uski ek bhi na suni....main ek behen kehlane ke layak hi nahi hun....mujhe to mar jana chahiye....
yeh bolke wo apne aspas dekhne lagi ke kuch aisa mil jaye jisse wo apna jindagi khatam kar de....
Tabhi Tv pe Vikram ka chehra dikhta hai.....jo muskura raha tha.....
Vikram....kaise ho Maa Didi...
Jaise hi dono ne Vikram ki awaj suni to dono ne ftaak se Tv ke taraf dekhi ke Vikram waha pe dikh raha hai...jo muskura raha hai....
Vikram ke aise haste huye chehre ko dekhke dono aur bhi Glani se bhar jate hai ....
Vikram.....maut itni bhi asan nhi hai....mujhe bhi nhi mili thi....pata hai kitna tadpaya tha aap logo ne.....mujhe chhod dene ko kitni hi binti ki thi maine...kaash ap logo ne ek bar meri baat sun li hoti....
khair nafrat mein insaan andha ho hi jata hai......aap mere katil ho....aap dono....yeh kehte huye Vikram ke ankhon mein ansoon aa gaye....aur Tv band ho gaya.....
Didi...daud ke aake Tv pe hath pitne lagi...aur rote rote bolne lagi....mujhe maaf karde mere bhai...mujhe maaf karde....main ek behen nhi ban payi....
Malini apni beti ke pagalpan ko dekhti rahi.....aur khudke bare mein sochne lagi ke woh bhi utni hi gunehgar hai.....wo bhi utni hi zimedar hai.....unhone jo dekhaya gya tha...wohi dekhi thi....lekin apne khudke bete pe ekbar bhi yakin na aya....ekbar bhi uski baat na suni.....
jab uspe apne hi behen ne Gun tan ke rakhi thi....ya jab trigger dabaya tha....wo apne nafrat mein itni andhi ho gayi thi ke....ekbar bhi rokne ki na sochi....aj unki astitva....unka matritva unhe dhutkar raha tha.....
apne hi hatho apne aulad ka khub ka iljam unke upar aa gaya tha.......ab wo apne beti ko koi bhi santwana bhi dene ki kosish karna chhod di thi....unhe ab khudse nafrat ho rahi thi....aur apne beti se bhi....
marna chahti thi....lekin mar bhi nhi sakti thi....kyunki wo samajh chuki thi ke jo bhi unhe waha lake rakhe the...unhe marna nhi chahte the.....unhe unke kiye ki saja de rahe the.......unhe tadpana chahte the....jo asal mein ho bhi raha tha.....
Chaliye inhe aise tadapte dete hai.....bas dekhna yeh hai ke Vikram ne inke liye age kya socha hai...
Kahi ek aur jagah mein Vijendra bhi ek kanre mein band tha....use bhi Sachai ka pata chal chuka tha.....aur kisne aur kyun use Kidnap kiya tha woh bhi pata chal chuka tha.....aur har din use jitna Physically torcher kiya jaa raha tha...utna hi mentally...
Use hr din apne galtiyo ko dikhaya jaata.....use apne pehli biwi ko dikhaya jata...kisi aur admi ke baho mein......apne beti ko uske khud ke bete ko goli marte huye dikhaya jata....aur dikhaya jata ke kaise uski khud ki biwi ne uske khilaf shadiyantra racha.....
wo ab apne jindagi se hatash ho chuka tha....use ab jine ki koi icha nhi thi.....aisi halat thi ke agar use ek aur shock laga to wo pagal ho jayega....Vikram ne use iss had tak tod chuka tha.....
Jab use khana dene ek Banda aya to Vijendra usse maut ki bheekh mangne laga......
Vijendra.....please mujhe mar do....nhi jiya jata aur.....aur sehne ki himmat nhi hai mujhme.....mujhe mar do....mujhe mar do....
usne hath jod ke bheekh mangte huye bola.....
Tabhi Vikram waha aa gaya....aur use dekhke hasne laga......hahahhahahaha......maut .....maut itni sasti to nhi hai....hahahhahaha...
Vijendra ne jaise hi Vikram ko dekha to wo ghutno ke bal chalke Vikram ke pas aya....aur uske pairon pe jhuk kar bola....
Vijendra.....main manta hun....maine galat kiya hai....maine gunaah kiya hai....main tumhara gunnehgar hun....mujhe tumhari Maa ke sath wo sab nhi karna chahiye tha......lekin main aur nhi seh sakta.....mujhme aur himmat nhi hai....mujhe mar do....plzz.....mujhe mar do....
Vikram......Death is a mercy......matlab maut to daya hai.....aur main koi daya dikhane ke mood mein nhi hun.....tu jindagi bhar aise hi tadpega.....aur tu sahi rahe iska dhyan main rakhunga.....chalta hun....phir mulakat hogi.....
yeh bolke Vikram nikal gaya aur Chhod gaya Rota bilakhta Vijendra ko jo wahi farsh pe leta rota raha....apne kismat ko kosta raha.....
akhir aisa kya Hua tha ke Vikram apne baap ke prati itna kathor ho gaya......
to be continued.......