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aage.....
Mansi kisi ko dekhke chouki aur boli.....aaap yaha.....
Shaks ek ladki thi....jo Mansi ko dekhke muskura rahi thi....aur boli....kya hua chhoti lagta hai tum mujhe dekhke khush nhi ho....
Mansi.......nnnnnaahi...nahi Didi aisi baat nhi hai......lekin maine aapko yaha expect nhi kiya tha.....isi liye mujhe shock laga....
Shaks.....hihihi....mereko tujhe surprise jo dena tha.....
Mansi.....mujhe pata nhi aaj kitne surprise aur milenge.....wo Vikram ko dekhke boli....jo muskura raha tha....phir Mansi ne Shaks ke taraf dekhke boli.....lekin Didi jaha tak mujhe pata hai....apme aur Bhaiya me kabhi banti nhi thi.... Phir apko bhaiya ke bare mein kaise pata chala.....???
ji haa yeh Tamanna hi thi....
Tamanna.....jo dikhta hai wohi sach ho .....yeh to nhi hai.....maine kabhi bhi Vikram ko na pasand nhi kiya.....bas sab ke samne aisi dikhati ke main isse nafrat karti....aur wo kyun tum age jaan jaoge.....aur main yaha kaise aayi to suno.........
Flashback......
baat kuch mahine pehle ki hai.....jab Vikram earth pe wapas aya tha......
To earth pe ake usne sabse phele uske Zinda hone ki baat usne Tamanna ko batayi thi.....
Tamanna ko jab pata chala ke Vikram zinda hai....to wo bohot hi jyada shock huyi ......lekin phir jab Vikram usse mila tha tab use yakin aaya tha ke wo jinda hai.....
Usne Vikram ke looks aur uske kya hua tha .....kaha tha....yeh sab jab puchi thi to Vikram ne wahi scientist ke formula wali baat ko bataya tha......
Vikram ne use yeh bhi kaha tha abhi kisi ko uske bare mein kuch bhi na batane ko aur uske sath kya hua tha use sunne ke bad Tamanna bhi maan gayi thi.....aur office mein Vikram ka hi phone aya tha....jisne use apne yaha bulaya tha....
present.....
Mansi.....iska matlab apne kabhi bhi bhai se nafrat nhi kiya tha.....bas sabke samne dikhawa karti thi.....
Tamanna....bas haa mein apna sar hilati hai...muskurtae huye....
Mansi ne Vikram ke taraf dekhke boli......aap bohot khamosh reh liye....ab bolna suru kijiye yaha kya chal raha hai.....aur aapka chehra aur baki ka sab kuch kaise badal gaya......??
Vikram.....aao pehle baitho .....phir sab bata ta hun......tumhe bohot kuch janne ko hai.......
Phir sab log sofe pe baith jaate hai....aur Vikram apne jindagi ke panno ko kholne lagta hai....
Flashback......
Vijendra ne jab Malini se shaadi karke use apne ghar laya to...usje god mein Vikram ki Didi thi.....Kaberi to pehle bohot naraj huyi aur apne maike bhi chali gayi......
Sath hi sath Vijendra ki Dono behne Keya aur Rekha dono bhi naraj huyi apne bhai ke is harkat se.....
lekin akhirkar sabne Malini ko man hi liye jab Malini ne Vikram ko janam di....Kaberi ne Vijendra ko man li....unke jindagi hasi khusi bitne lagi....aur 1.5 sal bad Mansi ka bhi janam hua.....
Kaberi jis baat se thodi ukhdi ukhdi si rehne lagi....kyunke use beta nhi hua tha.....jisse uske betiyo ko jaydad mein hissa nhi milega....yeh uska manna tha....
lekin usne yeh kabhi dikhaya nahi....wo Vikram ko bhi aur uski Didi ko bhi oyar karne ka dikhawa karti thi.....aur sabke samne show karti thi ke Malini uski chhoti behen hai....lekin woh andar hi andar jalti thi....
Jiske karan woh Malini se apna sara kam karwane lagi thi....Malini bhi Kaberi ko badi bahen manke uski sari baat manti thi....uska har kaha pe biswas karti thi.......
Dheere dheere Vikram aur uski behen jab bade hone lage....to Kaberi Vikram ko physically torture karna suru ki....jab aspas koi nhi hota....aur Vikram ko darati thi ke agar usne kisise kuch bhi kaha to uske Maa ko wo mar degi.....
Ghar mein akela ladka hone ke karan Vikram ko bohot hi dular aur pyar milne laga tha.....Khas kar Apne Dadaji aur chhoti bua se.....kyunke Chhoti bua ko bas do Hi Beti thi....koi Beta nhi tha...
Dadaji ko ekdin Kaberi ke iradon ki bhanak lag gayi thi.....Dadaji humesha Vikram ko kehte ke wohi khandan ki warish hai....aur unke khandan ke dharohar ko use hi sambhalna hai....Is baat ko Vikram ne kabhi samjha nhi....
aur jab unhe Kaberi ke isrado ka pata chala......aur jab Vikram ki halat unhone dekha to.....unhone adhe se jyada Property Vikram ke naam kardi....aur apni kuch secret property aur kuch aisi cheej jo...ksii ko nhi pata siwaye unke wakil ko.....jo waqt aane pe Vikram ko sahi rasta dikhate....kyunke Kaberi ne Vikram ko bachpan se medicine deke use lallu type bana diya tha....
Haa sahi samjhe.....Vikram bachpan se lallu nhi tha....Kaberi ne hi Vikram ko waisi banayi thi.....aur usne puri kosish ki thi ke Vikram ek napunsak ban jaye....
Ekdin jab gharpe Vikram aur Kaberi hi thi....to kisi baat ko leke usne Vikram ko bohot mari thi.....jo Tamanna ne dekh ki...jo apne dost ke ghar se jaldi aa gayi thi....tab usne Vikram ki chot pe dawai lagayi...aur uska treatment ki....aur tabse hi use Vikram ke upar nafrat aur nhi rahi....
Kyunke......woh phele ghar mein akeli ek bchi thi...jisse sarra pyar use hi nilta tha....lekin jab Vikram paida hua....to sab Vikram ko pyar karne lage....jisse use laga ke sab usse sab kam pyar karte the....jisse usne iska kasoorbar Vikram ko maan li....aur usse nafrat karne lagi thi....
Samay bitta raha aur Kaberi ko pata chala property ke bare mein....to wo aur bhi nafrat karne lagi Malini aur uske bacho se.....lekin jabtak Vikram 18 ka nhi ho jata woh kuch kar nhi sakti thi....kyunke agar 18 se pehle Vikram ko kuch ho jata to sab kuch ek trust mein chala jata....
Aur isi bich Dadaji bhi chal base.....jiske badse to sab kuch badalne laga.....Vijendra jo Vikram ke paida hone ke bad apni aiyashi band kar di thi.....woh phir se aiyashi karne laga....aur gharpe aake Malini aur Vikram aur uske behen ko torture karne laga tha....jismein Kaberi ake bich bachao karti thi....Malini ka bharosa aur bhi gambhir karne ke liye....
Dheere dheere dono Bua ne bhi rishta tod diya....aur Family mein arajakta failne lagi.....Vikram ko bhi Kaberi ne dheere dheere sabke najro mein Vikram ko gidane lagi....choti choti galtiyo mein use fasake....aur sabko uske khulaf bhad kake....
Isiliye Tamanna ne kabhi bhi sabke samne Vikram se pyar nhi jatati thi......aur yeh baat wo Vikram ko bhi samjhati thi....
In sabme Vikram ke sath ek cheej achi huyi thi ke use ek Gudiya mila tha....Mansi....jo use sabse jyada pyar karti thi....aur humesha uske hi sath rehti thi....Kaberi ne in dono ko alag karne ki bohot si kosishen ki lekin kuch bhi kam nhi kiya.....
Phir aya wo manhoos din....Jis din Mansi ka 18th Bday tha.....Tamanna ne Vikran ko kuch kaam diya tha....jise karke wo party ke liye taiyar hone mein late ho gaya tha....jis liye wo akela hi ghar ke andar apne Room mein taiyar ho raha tha....ane wale pal se anjan....
Kaberi ne is din ke liye bohot hi ache se plan kiya tha.....Vikram ko humesha ke liye dur karne ka aur property apne naam karne ke liye.....woh bohot din se isi mauke ke intejar mein thi....jab sab log ek sath ho.....jab usne dekhi ke Vikram apne room se nikal raha hai....to usne fatafat apna Makeup kharab ki....apne kapde fadi....aur aisa dikhlane ki kosish ki hai ke uske sath rape hone wala tha.....
Jab usne khud ko taiyar kar li....to Vikram sidiyon pe tha....to wo bachao bachao chikhte huye....sidiyo se daudte huye....bahar ko aa gayi....jab sab logo ne uski yeh halat dekhi to sab log puchne lage ke kya hua....to wo rote huye batayi ke Vikram ne uska rape karne ki kosish ki....aur rone lagi...
Vikram ne jab piche piche pohocha to Vijendra aur uske piche piche Kaberi ka bhai use pakad liya....aur marna chalu kar diya.....Vikram to us samay bhondu type ka tha....use kuch bhi samajh nhi aya....wo rone laga....jab usne kuch bolne ki kosish karne laga to Kaberi aur jorse rone lagi....aur Vijendra aur Kaberi ka bhai use aur jor se marne lage.....
Malini aur Didi ko pehle to yakin nhi hua.....lekim unke samne jo kuch bhi tha....use wo jhutla bhi nhi paa rahi thi....Didi bhi jake Vikram ko thappad marne lagi aur galiya dene lagi....Aur Malini Kaberi ko sambhalne lagi....
Phir Police aa gayi...aur Vikram ko admare halat mein arrest karke le gayi....yeh Kaberi kahi setup kiya hua tha....Police ne Vikram ke upar Rape charges lagaye....jo hua hi nhi tha....aur jhuthi Medical report bhi taiyar ho gayi thi.....
Jail mein hi Kaberi ne chalaki se Vikram se Property ke kagajato pe sign karwa li thi....jisse property uske naam ho gayi....phir Usne Malini aur Didi ko bhadkane lagi...Vikram ke khilaf....
Unhe batane lagi ke Vikram use humesha gandi najri se dekhta tha....yahi nhi usne Didi pe gandi najar daal rakhi thi....aur Tamanna ke sath bhi sote waqt gandi harkat karne ki kosish ki thi....jisse Didi ko Vikram se nafart ho gayi....aur usdin khayi ke pas wo Vikram ko marne chali gayi....
Present....
Saari sachai sunne ke bad Mansi ro rahi thi...use yakin hi nhi ho raha tha ke uski Maa aisa kar sakti hai.....
Vikram use apne bahon mein leke chup karane laga....thodi der bad jab woh chup huyi to wo puchi ke uske bad kya hua......Phir Vikram ne use bhi wahi sab scientist wali baatein batayi....Mansi ko yakin nhi hua....lekin sab kuch uske samne tha......
phir Vikram ne Tamanna aur Mansi ko Siya Miya Shaily aur Radhika se bhi milwaya....Radhika ko usne apni dost batya.....jiski usne madat ki thi....phir Radhika ke maa se bhi milwaya...
In sabke bich Tamanna aur Mansi ko chhod ke kisi ke bhi chehre pe dukh nhi tha....jo Mansi ne note kar li.....to usne Vikram ki taraf dekhi to Vikram ne use badme ka ishara kar diya....
phir raat ko khane ke bad Vikram ke sath aaj Mansi soyi....jisko sabne man liya....
in bed...
Vikram....mujhe pata hai....bohot kuch ajeeb hai...aur tunhare man mein bohot se sawal hain....hum kal kahi jaane wale hai...uske bad tumhe sab kuch pata chal jayega....thik hai na....
Mansi.....thik hai bhaiya....jaisa aap kahein.....lekin mujhe ab apke bahon mein sona hai......
yeh bolke woh Vikram ko jakar ke so gayi....
To be continued.....
aage.....
Mansi kisi ko dekhke chouki aur boli.....aaap yaha.....
Shaks ek ladki thi....jo Mansi ko dekhke muskura rahi thi....aur boli....kya hua chhoti lagta hai tum mujhe dekhke khush nhi ho....
Mansi.......nnnnnaahi...nahi Didi aisi baat nhi hai......lekin maine aapko yaha expect nhi kiya tha.....isi liye mujhe shock laga....
Shaks.....hihihi....mereko tujhe surprise jo dena tha.....
Mansi.....mujhe pata nhi aaj kitne surprise aur milenge.....wo Vikram ko dekhke boli....jo muskura raha tha....phir Mansi ne Shaks ke taraf dekhke boli.....lekin Didi jaha tak mujhe pata hai....apme aur Bhaiya me kabhi banti nhi thi.... Phir apko bhaiya ke bare mein kaise pata chala.....???
ji haa yeh Tamanna hi thi....
Tamanna.....jo dikhta hai wohi sach ho .....yeh to nhi hai.....maine kabhi bhi Vikram ko na pasand nhi kiya.....bas sab ke samne aisi dikhati ke main isse nafrat karti....aur wo kyun tum age jaan jaoge.....aur main yaha kaise aayi to suno.........
Flashback......
baat kuch mahine pehle ki hai.....jab Vikram earth pe wapas aya tha......
To earth pe ake usne sabse phele uske Zinda hone ki baat usne Tamanna ko batayi thi.....
Tamanna ko jab pata chala ke Vikram zinda hai....to wo bohot hi jyada shock huyi ......lekin phir jab Vikram usse mila tha tab use yakin aaya tha ke wo jinda hai.....
Usne Vikram ke looks aur uske kya hua tha .....kaha tha....yeh sab jab puchi thi to Vikram ne wahi scientist ke formula wali baat ko bataya tha......
Vikram ne use yeh bhi kaha tha abhi kisi ko uske bare mein kuch bhi na batane ko aur uske sath kya hua tha use sunne ke bad Tamanna bhi maan gayi thi.....aur office mein Vikram ka hi phone aya tha....jisne use apne yaha bulaya tha....
present.....
Mansi.....iska matlab apne kabhi bhi bhai se nafrat nhi kiya tha.....bas sabke samne dikhawa karti thi.....
Tamanna....bas haa mein apna sar hilati hai...muskurtae huye....
Mansi ne Vikram ke taraf dekhke boli......aap bohot khamosh reh liye....ab bolna suru kijiye yaha kya chal raha hai.....aur aapka chehra aur baki ka sab kuch kaise badal gaya......??
Vikram.....aao pehle baitho .....phir sab bata ta hun......tumhe bohot kuch janne ko hai.......
Phir sab log sofe pe baith jaate hai....aur Vikram apne jindagi ke panno ko kholne lagta hai....
Flashback......
Vijendra ne jab Malini se shaadi karke use apne ghar laya to...usje god mein Vikram ki Didi thi.....Kaberi to pehle bohot naraj huyi aur apne maike bhi chali gayi......
Sath hi sath Vijendra ki Dono behne Keya aur Rekha dono bhi naraj huyi apne bhai ke is harkat se.....
lekin akhirkar sabne Malini ko man hi liye jab Malini ne Vikram ko janam di....Kaberi ne Vijendra ko man li....unke jindagi hasi khusi bitne lagi....aur 1.5 sal bad Mansi ka bhi janam hua.....
Kaberi jis baat se thodi ukhdi ukhdi si rehne lagi....kyunke use beta nhi hua tha.....jisse uske betiyo ko jaydad mein hissa nhi milega....yeh uska manna tha....
lekin usne yeh kabhi dikhaya nahi....wo Vikram ko bhi aur uski Didi ko bhi oyar karne ka dikhawa karti thi.....aur sabke samne show karti thi ke Malini uski chhoti behen hai....lekin woh andar hi andar jalti thi....
Jiske karan woh Malini se apna sara kam karwane lagi thi....Malini bhi Kaberi ko badi bahen manke uski sari baat manti thi....uska har kaha pe biswas karti thi.......
Dheere dheere Vikram aur uski behen jab bade hone lage....to Kaberi Vikram ko physically torture karna suru ki....jab aspas koi nhi hota....aur Vikram ko darati thi ke agar usne kisise kuch bhi kaha to uske Maa ko wo mar degi.....
Ghar mein akela ladka hone ke karan Vikram ko bohot hi dular aur pyar milne laga tha.....Khas kar Apne Dadaji aur chhoti bua se.....kyunke Chhoti bua ko bas do Hi Beti thi....koi Beta nhi tha...
Dadaji ko ekdin Kaberi ke iradon ki bhanak lag gayi thi.....Dadaji humesha Vikram ko kehte ke wohi khandan ki warish hai....aur unke khandan ke dharohar ko use hi sambhalna hai....Is baat ko Vikram ne kabhi samjha nhi....
aur jab unhe Kaberi ke isrado ka pata chala......aur jab Vikram ki halat unhone dekha to.....unhone adhe se jyada Property Vikram ke naam kardi....aur apni kuch secret property aur kuch aisi cheej jo...ksii ko nhi pata siwaye unke wakil ko.....jo waqt aane pe Vikram ko sahi rasta dikhate....kyunke Kaberi ne Vikram ko bachpan se medicine deke use lallu type bana diya tha....
Haa sahi samjhe.....Vikram bachpan se lallu nhi tha....Kaberi ne hi Vikram ko waisi banayi thi.....aur usne puri kosish ki thi ke Vikram ek napunsak ban jaye....
Ekdin jab gharpe Vikram aur Kaberi hi thi....to kisi baat ko leke usne Vikram ko bohot mari thi.....jo Tamanna ne dekh ki...jo apne dost ke ghar se jaldi aa gayi thi....tab usne Vikram ki chot pe dawai lagayi...aur uska treatment ki....aur tabse hi use Vikram ke upar nafrat aur nhi rahi....
Kyunke......woh phele ghar mein akeli ek bchi thi...jisse sarra pyar use hi nilta tha....lekin jab Vikram paida hua....to sab Vikram ko pyar karne lage....jisse use laga ke sab usse sab kam pyar karte the....jisse usne iska kasoorbar Vikram ko maan li....aur usse nafrat karne lagi thi....
Samay bitta raha aur Kaberi ko pata chala property ke bare mein....to wo aur bhi nafrat karne lagi Malini aur uske bacho se.....lekin jabtak Vikram 18 ka nhi ho jata woh kuch kar nhi sakti thi....kyunke agar 18 se pehle Vikram ko kuch ho jata to sab kuch ek trust mein chala jata....
Aur isi bich Dadaji bhi chal base.....jiske badse to sab kuch badalne laga.....Vijendra jo Vikram ke paida hone ke bad apni aiyashi band kar di thi.....woh phir se aiyashi karne laga....aur gharpe aake Malini aur Vikram aur uske behen ko torture karne laga tha....jismein Kaberi ake bich bachao karti thi....Malini ka bharosa aur bhi gambhir karne ke liye....
Dheere dheere dono Bua ne bhi rishta tod diya....aur Family mein arajakta failne lagi.....Vikram ko bhi Kaberi ne dheere dheere sabke najro mein Vikram ko gidane lagi....choti choti galtiyo mein use fasake....aur sabko uske khulaf bhad kake....
Isiliye Tamanna ne kabhi bhi sabke samne Vikram se pyar nhi jatati thi......aur yeh baat wo Vikram ko bhi samjhati thi....
In sabme Vikram ke sath ek cheej achi huyi thi ke use ek Gudiya mila tha....Mansi....jo use sabse jyada pyar karti thi....aur humesha uske hi sath rehti thi....Kaberi ne in dono ko alag karne ki bohot si kosishen ki lekin kuch bhi kam nhi kiya.....
Phir aya wo manhoos din....Jis din Mansi ka 18th Bday tha.....Tamanna ne Vikran ko kuch kaam diya tha....jise karke wo party ke liye taiyar hone mein late ho gaya tha....jis liye wo akela hi ghar ke andar apne Room mein taiyar ho raha tha....ane wale pal se anjan....
Kaberi ne is din ke liye bohot hi ache se plan kiya tha.....Vikram ko humesha ke liye dur karne ka aur property apne naam karne ke liye.....woh bohot din se isi mauke ke intejar mein thi....jab sab log ek sath ho.....jab usne dekhi ke Vikram apne room se nikal raha hai....to usne fatafat apna Makeup kharab ki....apne kapde fadi....aur aisa dikhlane ki kosish ki hai ke uske sath rape hone wala tha.....
Jab usne khud ko taiyar kar li....to Vikram sidiyon pe tha....to wo bachao bachao chikhte huye....sidiyo se daudte huye....bahar ko aa gayi....jab sab logo ne uski yeh halat dekhi to sab log puchne lage ke kya hua....to wo rote huye batayi ke Vikram ne uska rape karne ki kosish ki....aur rone lagi...
Vikram ne jab piche piche pohocha to Vijendra aur uske piche piche Kaberi ka bhai use pakad liya....aur marna chalu kar diya.....Vikram to us samay bhondu type ka tha....use kuch bhi samajh nhi aya....wo rone laga....jab usne kuch bolne ki kosish karne laga to Kaberi aur jorse rone lagi....aur Vijendra aur Kaberi ka bhai use aur jor se marne lage.....
Malini aur Didi ko pehle to yakin nhi hua.....lekim unke samne jo kuch bhi tha....use wo jhutla bhi nhi paa rahi thi....Didi bhi jake Vikram ko thappad marne lagi aur galiya dene lagi....Aur Malini Kaberi ko sambhalne lagi....
Phir Police aa gayi...aur Vikram ko admare halat mein arrest karke le gayi....yeh Kaberi kahi setup kiya hua tha....Police ne Vikram ke upar Rape charges lagaye....jo hua hi nhi tha....aur jhuthi Medical report bhi taiyar ho gayi thi.....
Jail mein hi Kaberi ne chalaki se Vikram se Property ke kagajato pe sign karwa li thi....jisse property uske naam ho gayi....phir Usne Malini aur Didi ko bhadkane lagi...Vikram ke khilaf....
Unhe batane lagi ke Vikram use humesha gandi najri se dekhta tha....yahi nhi usne Didi pe gandi najar daal rakhi thi....aur Tamanna ke sath bhi sote waqt gandi harkat karne ki kosish ki thi....jisse Didi ko Vikram se nafart ho gayi....aur usdin khayi ke pas wo Vikram ko marne chali gayi....
Present....
Saari sachai sunne ke bad Mansi ro rahi thi...use yakin hi nhi ho raha tha ke uski Maa aisa kar sakti hai.....
Vikram use apne bahon mein leke chup karane laga....thodi der bad jab woh chup huyi to wo puchi ke uske bad kya hua......Phir Vikram ne use bhi wahi sab scientist wali baatein batayi....Mansi ko yakin nhi hua....lekin sab kuch uske samne tha......
phir Vikram ne Tamanna aur Mansi ko Siya Miya Shaily aur Radhika se bhi milwaya....Radhika ko usne apni dost batya.....jiski usne madat ki thi....phir Radhika ke maa se bhi milwaya...
In sabke bich Tamanna aur Mansi ko chhod ke kisi ke bhi chehre pe dukh nhi tha....jo Mansi ne note kar li.....to usne Vikram ki taraf dekhi to Vikram ne use badme ka ishara kar diya....
phir raat ko khane ke bad Vikram ke sath aaj Mansi soyi....jisko sabne man liya....
in bed...
Vikram....mujhe pata hai....bohot kuch ajeeb hai...aur tunhare man mein bohot se sawal hain....hum kal kahi jaane wale hai...uske bad tumhe sab kuch pata chal jayega....thik hai na....
Mansi.....thik hai bhaiya....jaisa aap kahein.....lekin mujhe ab apke bahon mein sona hai......
yeh bolke woh Vikram ko jakar ke so gayi....
To be continued.....
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