Fantasy RISHI the SAVIOR(BEING EVIL)

[Reza]

Shander update sis...
Waiting for next

 

[Raj]

CHALO AARTI KE MAYKE ME SAB SAMBHAL GAYA SAB AARTI SE MIL KE KHUS HAIN SHIVAY ARUNA KE DEKHATE HAIN GURU JI KYU PARESHAAN HAI YE TOH AGALE UPDATE ME PATA CHAL HI JAYEGA.
MERA MANANA HAI KI AARTI KA ARUNA AUR USKE SASURAAL WALON KO HERO HI MILAYE TOH KAHANI AURROCHAK HO JAYEGI KYUNKI TAB TAK UNKI TADAP HAD PAAR KAR CHUKI HOGI ( AGER ARUNA AUR AARTI KE BEECH KA JO BHI RUKHAPAN HAI WOH CLEAR HO JAYE AUR DONO PHIR BHI NA MIL PAAYE SANKOCH VASH.AUR HERO KE DADA JI KO BHI PATA HO KI UNKA EK POTA BHI HAI AUR WOH BHI APNE BETE BAHU KE SATH POTE SE BHI MILANE KO TADPE.)
TAB HERO UN SABKO MILAYE TAB JO PYAR NIKAL KAR AAYEGAA SAB KE DILON SE WOH EK ALAG HI CHHAP CHHODEGI.
KHAIR YE MERA VIEW HAI.
BAKI AAP KO JAUSA ACHCHHHA LAGE

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

waiting for the next update

 

[luv4sale696969]

Good... Waiting for next...

 

[Baba__Bhai]

Hello guys..
Ye meri 2nd thread hea yaha par..
1st thread just friends jisse mene english mea likha tha sayad islli yaha par usse jadda prem na mila jiske chalte muje wo thread band karni pari qki uske sare updates already mene english mea likh diye the..

Khair is story ke baad jarur usse hindi mea subbed kar fir post karumgi qki mea apni pehli he kahani ko adhuri ni chodna chahti..

Ab aate hea is kahani ko likhne ki waja bolo ya prerna..

Par jesa ki mene dekha he yaha par jada magic related story karna pasand karte hea sab..
Toa fir mene b isme apna hath aajmane ka socha..

Par mea batadu ki meri hindi jadda achi ni hea qki suru sea he english lagualan he jada use ki thi bachpan se..
Isliye thori bohot mistake hogu jarur mujse toa jell lena ha plss..

Mea pichle kuch dino se is story ke plot ke bareme soch rahi thi..
Par kuch khass idea he ni aaya..

Tab mere friend jinki yaha ek story already chal rahi hea unhone kaha ki mea pehlea kuch stories read karu fir muje kaise or kya likhna he uska idea aayega..

Fir kya tha hogai suru..
2 din mea mene bohot sari stories pari jiski links mere dost ne he muje bejithi..

Jisse muje ye toa pata chal gaya ki yaha par magic ke sath sath adultery incest romance agar ye sab ho story mea toa almost sabi reader's usse parna pasand karengea..

Mea pehlea toa upar likhe prefixes ki story parna b pasand ni karti thi..
Par jab mene meri family mera goan or mea,dil ka rista,chehek ta chirag,aise b or b links he par mene abi tak ye 3 he pari hea...

Ye muje kafi achi lagi..
Bhale he inka content extraordinary tha par usme b inke writers ki mehnat saaf dikhai deti thi..
Isliye mene b socha ki ek try karti hu..
Achi hui or aap sabi ko pasand aai toa tk warna waise b muje kisise farak ni parta(joking)..

Toa fir jada bor na karte huye shuru karti hu meri story..

RISHI THE SAVIOR(BEING EVIL)..

ab isse acha naam muje ni suja..
Agar app logo ke pass koi suggestion ho toa jarur dena..
N koi acha cover ho toa b aap muje pm me suggest kar sakte ho..

Or batadu ki mea ye story me jitna hosake aaplogon pasand aaye wo content likne ki puri kosis karungi..

Or yaha agar kisiko index banana aata he toa pls pm me..

INTRODUCTION jald he post hoga..

Sabse pehle to aapko
nayi story likhne ke liye..
.
Ye aapne bohot achchha kiya ki story english me nahin hindi me post karne ki sochi...
.
Tittle change karne ki zaroorat nahin hai.. bohot hi mastt tittle hai..
Or "Dil ka Rishta" story meri bhi favorite rahi hai..
or aap full hindi par zyada na sochen..
Usme common words use karen..
.
Baat rahi Ayush ki, to vo ek behad hi mastt banda hai... Jo sabki help ke liye sabse aage rehta hai..
..
Aap apni story me magic sabse alag type ka rakhna... Jisse ki readers ko ek naye experience ki prapti ho..
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Or story me asli maza tabh hi aata hai
. Jab incest me romance mix-up ho jaye...
.
KEEP POSTING
KEEP SMILING

 

[·.·★ R♥I♥S♥H♥U♥ ★·.·]

Awesome update

Keep going

Will wait for next update

Thnx for ur review n support..
Nxt update 2 baje tak post hoga..
Hope aage ki kahani b aapko aise he pasand aaye..
Keep commenting..
Keep supporting

 

[·.·★ R♥I♥S♥H♥U♥ ★·.·]

Very nice and fantastic update

awesome update

Good... Waiting for next...

Thnx for ur review n support guys..
Nxt update 2 baje tak post hoga..
Hope aage ki kahani b aapko aise he pasand aaye..
Keep commenting..
Keep supporting

 

[Acme]

Congratulations for new story... Bahut hi badhiya plot hai story ka... Keep writing.. waiting for next update

 

[·.·★ R♥I♥S♥H♥U♥ ★·.·]

Shander update sis...
Waiting for next

waiting for the next update

Congratulations for new story... Bahut hi badhiya plot hai story ka... Keep writing.. waiting for next update

Thnx for ur review n support guys..
Nxt update 2 baje tak post hoga..
Hope aage ki kahani b aapko aise he pasand aaye..
Keep commenting..
Keep supporting

 

[·.·★ R♥I♥S♥H♥U♥ ★·.·]

CHALO AARTI KE MAYKE ME SAB SAMBHAL GAYA SAB AARTI SE MIL KE KHUS HAIN SHIVAY ARUNA KE DEKHATE HAIN GURU JI KYU PARESHAAN HAI YE TOH AGALE UPDATE ME PATA CHAL HI JAYEGA.
MERA MANANA HAI KI AARTI KA ARUNA AUR USKE SASURAAL WALON KO HERO HI MILAYE TOH KAHANI AURROCHAK HO JAYEGI KYUNKI TAB TAK UNKI TADAP HAD PAAR KAR CHUKI HOGI ( AGER ARUNA AUR AARTI KE BEECH KA JO BHI RUKHAPAN HAI WOH CLEAR HO JAYE AUR DONO PHIR BHI NA MIL PAAYE SANKOCH VASH.AUR HERO KE DADA JI KO BHI PATA HO KI UNKA EK POTA BHI HAI AUR WOH BHI APNE BETE BAHU KE SATH POTE SE BHI MILANE KO TADPE.)
TAB HERO UN SABKO MILAYE TAB JO PYAR NIKAL KAR AAYEGAA SAB KE DILON SE WOH EK ALAG HI CHHAP CHHODEGI.
KHAIR YE MERA VIEW HAI.
BAKI AAP KO JAUSA ACHCHHHA LAGE

Thnx for ur beautiful review n support ..
N aapke suggestion par jarur gor karungi..
Mera b kuch waisa he karne ka irada hea..
Aise apne reviews ke jariye guide karte rehna..
Hope aage ki kahani b aapko aise he pasand aaye..
Keep commenting..
Keep supporting