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Thnx for ur beautiful review n wishes babajjSabse pehle to aapko
nayi story likhne ke liye..
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Ye aapne bohot achchha kiya ki story english me nahin hindi me post karne ki sochi...
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Tittle change karne ki zaroorat nahin hai.. bohot hi mastt tittle hai..
Or "Dil ka Rishta" story meri bhi favorite rahi hai..
or aap full hindi par zyada na sochen..
Usme common words use karen..
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Baat rahi Ayush ki, to vo ek behad hi mastt banda hai... Jo sabki help ke liye sabse aage rehta hai..
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Aap apni story me magic sabse alag type ka rakhna... Jisse ki readers ko ek naye experience ki prapti ho..
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Or story me asli maza tabh hi aata hai
. Jab incest me romance mix-up ho jaye...
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KEEP POSTING
KEEP SMILING
..N aapke suggestion par jarur gor karungi..
Sahi kaha aapne aayush@warrior boy is very good person..
Ab b muje index update karne mea wo he madad karte hea..
Aise he bohot bar unhone meri help ki hea yaha par..
Aise apne reviews ke jariye guide karte rehna..
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UPDATE 12
Toa guys ab suru karti hu aaj ka 1st update ..
Jaha gurudev aarti ka hath dekh sadme mea ja chuke the or dar se unka bura haal horaha tha..
Guruji man me..
Bapre abi tak paida ni hua hea fir b itni devniya or bhayankar kundli hea is balak ki..
Guruji ko u shant dekh aarti ki maa sushila devi ne pucha..
Kya baat hea gurudev aap kuch bol q ni rahe..
Tabi guruji ke mukh se apne aap nikal gaya..
Inko putra hoga jo hamesa larkio se gira hua rahega..
Isko dil kabi ek larki par tikna muskil hoga..
Swayam kamdev ne kundli banayi ho aisa lagraha hea..
Abi ye haal hea..
Agar jab ye balak aayega tab iske grah naksaktra mea kya pher badal honge..
Kehna muskil hea..
Gurudev ki baate sun jaha aarti muskura rahi thi wahi shushila devi chintit hogayi par unko abi b ek ass thi..
Qki abi tak bache ki kundli bani hea wo toa uske paida hone par he banegi..
Filal toa uski graho ki dasha dekh kar he gurudev ne ye sab bataya hea..
Apna kaam kar or aarti ko aashirwad dea gurudev waha se nikal pohach gaye aaruna ke ghar jaha unko besabri se intazar ho raha tha..
Qki mahurat khatam hone mea kafi kam samay bacha tha..
Aaruna se b kuch puja or rasham karwa gurudev ne uski b hatheli deki..
Bichare gurudev yaha b unko waisa he jatka lagga jaise aarti ke yaha lagga tha..
Par unki halat pehle se jada kharab thi..
Wo toa kapne lagge the..
Tabi rohit nea pucha kya baat hea gurudev..
Gurudev fir vartamaan mea aa haklate huye bole..
Ye ye shaitan k sath sath kamdevi ka dusra roop hogi..
Iska gussa bohot khatarnak hoga..
Gurudev ki baat sun waha sabi chounk gaye the par aruna normal he thi..
Jaise usse sab patta ho pehlea sea..
Tabi aruna ke pita ARUNLAL bole..
Toa gurudev iska koi upay nai hea kya..
Gurudev - Bas intazar he kar sakte hea..
Qki abi iske janam lene mea 3 mah ses hea..
Tab tak iski grah naksaktra ki chal mea fer badal ho sakte hea..
Guru dev ne fir aruna ko ashirvad dea waha se chalegaye..
Aishe he haste khelte or 3 mahine biitgaye or wo din b aagaya jisne sabki jindagi ko badaldena tha..
Jispar aarti aruna or unke pariwar ke sath sath pure brahmhandka bhavishya b nirbar tha..
Aarti or aruna dono ko he ek sath labour pain suru hogaya tha..
Or dono he apne apne hospitals ke ot room mea the..
Ek jagha aruna ke yaha sab khush the qki naye mehman ke aaneka samay hogaya tha wahi aarti ke taraf aarti ne operation karwane se mana kardiya tha..
Jab tak uski baat raaj se ni hoti tab tak..
Dr. Ke lakh samajane ke baad b wo ni mani isliye thak har kar dr. Ne usse call karne ki permission dea di..
Or waha australia mea raaj bas abi b apne private jet mea baitha tha india aaneke liye tabi uske mobile par aarti ka call aaya..
Or usne jatse call receive kiya or tabi usse aarti ki chikhe sunai dii jisse sun wo samaj gaya ki uska beta aanewala he isliye usne call cut kar video call kiya..
Ab aarti b apne pati ko dur se he sahi par apne pass paa thori shant hui or fir dr. Ne operation suru kardiya..
Or kuch he der mea dr. Kr hatho mea chotasa pyarasa navjat sissu tha..
Par wo ro ni raha tha usse b jadda herani wali baat ye thi ki wo apne hath per hila raha tha or uske chote se cute sea face par ek smile thi..
Jisse dekh dr. Ka b ek tak uski smile ko dekhe jaa rahi thi..
Raaj b apne biwi bache dono ko sahi salamat dekh khush tha or uski aakho mea b aasu the par kis wajase ye toa waqt he batayega..
Khair drs ne aarti ko nind ka injection diya taki kuch der wo aaram kar sake or uske bache ko ussi ke pass palne mea sula diya..
Ot ke bahar khare aarti ke pita or uski behen ye baat sunke kafi khush the ki aarti ko larka hua hea..
Khashkar ARUNLAL q ye toa wo he batayengea tabi archana ke mobile par sushila devi ka call aaya jisse usne jatse pick kiya or yaha ka haal bataya..
SHUSILA ne b aruna ke safe delivery or ek larki ke hone ki khabar di thi..
Jisse sun dono baap beti b khush the..
Waha australia mea raaj aarti se baat karne or apne bache ko dekhne ke baad rote huye pilot ko take off karne ko kaha..
Or wo shishe se bahar dekhte huye sochne lagga..
Maaf karna aarti par ye sab sirf hamare liye or hamare bache ke liye kar raha hu..
Tabi wo hua jiski sayad he kabi kisine kalpana ki ho khaskar aarti nea..
Ab next update se story sidha after 18 years start hogi..
So guys iss update ko parkar jarur batana kahi koi galti hui ho toa..
Thora jald he khatam karna para bich wale part ko qki hero bday kafi lamba hochala tha..
Par jo jo chije cover karni thi uski puri kosis ki hea mene ki sahi dang se wo communicate ho ..
IMP NOTE..
Mea ye baat batadu ki jo hero he wo omni king ni hea..
Omni king ne toa bas apne body ko uske liye tyga tha..
Qki unke alawa wo power or sehen sakti kisi ke body meni thi jisse apne hero ko bhavishya mea hasil karna hea..
Isliye unhone apne deh tyaga..
Or unki soul abi b 0 universe mea hea..
Matlab omni king alag he or hero alag hea..
Dono ko alag he rakhna warna aage jol japata hojayega..
Toa guys ab suru karti hu aaj ka 1st update ..
Jaha gurudev aarti ka hath dekh sadme mea ja chuke the or dar se unka bura haal horaha tha..
Guruji man me..
Bapre abi tak paida ni hua hea fir b itni devniya or bhayankar kundli hea is balak ki..
Guruji ko u shant dekh aarti ki maa sushila devi ne pucha..
Kya baat hea gurudev aap kuch bol q ni rahe..
Tabi guruji ke mukh se apne aap nikal gaya..
Inko putra hoga jo hamesa larkio se gira hua rahega..
Isko dil kabi ek larki par tikna muskil hoga..
Swayam kamdev ne kundli banayi ho aisa lagraha hea..
Abi ye haal hea..
Agar jab ye balak aayega tab iske grah naksaktra mea kya pher badal honge..
Kehna muskil hea..
Gurudev ki baate sun jaha aarti muskura rahi thi wahi shushila devi chintit hogayi par unko abi b ek ass thi..
Qki abi tak bache ki kundli bani hea wo toa uske paida hone par he banegi..
Filal toa uski graho ki dasha dekh kar he gurudev ne ye sab bataya hea..
Apna kaam kar or aarti ko aashirwad dea gurudev waha se nikal pohach gaye aaruna ke ghar jaha unko besabri se intazar ho raha tha..
Qki mahurat khatam hone mea kafi kam samay bacha tha..
Aaruna se b kuch puja or rasham karwa gurudev ne uski b hatheli deki..
Bichare gurudev yaha b unko waisa he jatka lagga jaise aarti ke yaha lagga tha..
Par unki halat pehle se jada kharab thi..
Wo toa kapne lagge the..
Tabi rohit nea pucha kya baat hea gurudev..
Gurudev fir vartamaan mea aa haklate huye bole..
Ye ye shaitan k sath sath kamdevi ka dusra roop hogi..
Iska gussa bohot khatarnak hoga..
Gurudev ki baat sun waha sabi chounk gaye the par aruna normal he thi..
Jaise usse sab patta ho pehlea sea..
Tabi aruna ke pita ARUNLAL bole..
Toa gurudev iska koi upay nai hea kya..
Gurudev - Bas intazar he kar sakte hea..
Qki abi iske janam lene mea 3 mah ses hea..
Tab tak iski grah naksaktra ki chal mea fer badal ho sakte hea..
Guru dev ne fir aruna ko ashirvad dea waha se chalegaye..
Aishe he haste khelte or 3 mahine biitgaye or wo din b aagaya jisne sabki jindagi ko badaldena tha..
Jispar aarti aruna or unke pariwar ke sath sath pure brahmhandka bhavishya b nirbar tha..
Aarti or aruna dono ko he ek sath labour pain suru hogaya tha..
Or dono he apne apne hospitals ke ot room mea the..
Ek jagha aruna ke yaha sab khush the qki naye mehman ke aaneka samay hogaya tha wahi aarti ke taraf aarti ne operation karwane se mana kardiya tha..
Jab tak uski baat raaj se ni hoti tab tak..
Dr. Ke lakh samajane ke baad b wo ni mani isliye thak har kar dr. Ne usse call karne ki permission dea di..
Or waha australia mea raaj bas abi b apne private jet mea baitha tha india aaneke liye tabi uske mobile par aarti ka call aaya..
Or usne jatse call receive kiya or tabi usse aarti ki chikhe sunai dii jisse sun wo samaj gaya ki uska beta aanewala he isliye usne call cut kar video call kiya..
Ab aarti b apne pati ko dur se he sahi par apne pass paa thori shant hui or fir dr. Ne operation suru kardiya..
Or kuch he der mea dr. Kr hatho mea chotasa pyarasa navjat sissu tha..
Par wo ro ni raha tha usse b jadda herani wali baat ye thi ki wo apne hath per hila raha tha or uske chote se cute sea face par ek smile thi..
Jisse dekh dr. Ka b ek tak uski smile ko dekhe jaa rahi thi..
Raaj b apne biwi bache dono ko sahi salamat dekh khush tha or uski aakho mea b aasu the par kis wajase ye toa waqt he batayega..
Khair drs ne aarti ko nind ka injection diya taki kuch der wo aaram kar sake or uske bache ko ussi ke pass palne mea sula diya..
Ot ke bahar khare aarti ke pita or uski behen ye baat sunke kafi khush the ki aarti ko larka hua hea..
Khashkar ARUNLAL q ye toa wo he batayengea tabi archana ke mobile par sushila devi ka call aaya jisse usne jatse pick kiya or yaha ka haal bataya..
SHUSILA ne b aruna ke safe delivery or ek larki ke hone ki khabar di thi..
Jisse sun dono baap beti b khush the..
Waha australia mea raaj aarti se baat karne or apne bache ko dekhne ke baad rote huye pilot ko take off karne ko kaha..
Or wo shishe se bahar dekhte huye sochne lagga..
Maaf karna aarti par ye sab sirf hamare liye or hamare bache ke liye kar raha hu..
Tabi wo hua jiski sayad he kabi kisine kalpana ki ho khaskar aarti nea..
Ab next update se story sidha after 18 years start hogi..
So guys iss update ko parkar jarur batana kahi koi galti hui ho toa..
Thora jald he khatam karna para bich wale part ko qki hero bday kafi lamba hochala tha..
Par jo jo chije cover karni thi uski puri kosis ki hea mene ki sahi dang se wo communicate ho ..
IMP NOTE..
Mea ye baat batadu ki jo hero he wo omni king ni hea..
Omni king ne toa bas apne body ko uske liye tyga tha..
Qki unke alawa wo power or sehen sakti kisi ke body meni thi jisse apne hero ko bhavishya mea hasil karna hea..
Isliye unhone apne deh tyaga..
Or unki soul abi b 0 universe mea hea..
Matlab omni king alag he or hero alag hea..
Dono ko alag he rakhna warna aage jol japata hojayega..
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awesome update
lagta hi Aruna ko omi ki ladki Hui hi
waiting for the next update
jaldi karna hero heroin hi personality ka inrto de dena
lagta hi Aruna ko omi ki ladki Hui hi
waiting for the next update
jaldi karna hero heroin hi personality ka inrto de dena
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Now about the update it was great.
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Ye aruna ki beti king omni ki beti lagti h..
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Hero ki entry hogye h re baba story mai.
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Lagta h raaj ka plane blast ho gya h.
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Ab dekhte h aage kya hota h aur kahani kya turn leti h.
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Good going.
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Keep posting.
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