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Fantasy RISHI the SAVIOR(BEING EVIL)

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Nub_Ag

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update 11
nice update shayad joh airport pe aaya tha woh rohit tha aur rohit and raaj dono friend hai ye toh pakka hai aur aruna aur aarti ko jaldi se mila do guruji dekhte hai kya karte hai sabke samne ghabrane ki wajah se unse sawal bhi puche jayenge lekin woh uske sahi jawab bhi nahi de sakte sab ke samne waiting for next update
 

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update 12
awesome update ye kya gurujj ne toh sabke samne raaj khol diya hero aur draguna ke dusre janam ka hero ka janam bhi ho gaya hai lagta hai raaj ne apne aapko mara hua dikhana hai aur kisi ko shayad hu batayi ho usne ye baat aur agar batayi hai toh kisko ye janne ka besabri se wait hai
 

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awesome update lagta hai nani ka birthday hai aur rishi rohit se milke dono ko milana chahta hai aur woh shayad pehle bhi mila hai aruna se apni pehchan chupa ke aur iss update me raaj ka koi jikaar nahi hua ki last update me kya hua tha waiting for next update
 
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Wish You A Merry Christmas ....
May This Festival Bring ....
Abundant Joy Happiness In Your Life ....
 
Awesome Update ....

Superb update dear


Excellent update.... waiting for next update

Superb update sis...
Waiting for next

Great job bro

Keep going

Very nice and fantastic update
Thnx for ur beautiful review n support guys:hi::hi:..
Acha lagga ki aapko story pasand aarahi hea..
Hope aage ki kahani b aapko aise he pasand aaye:peace::peace:..
Aap sabi ko mere taraf se happy Christmas
Keep commenting:poet::poet:..
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Nice..

Aaj aarti ka bday h means Aruna ka b h aur Rohit Aruna ka husband b Aruna ki bday party k bare m kah Raha tha but wo baat kisse Kar rahe the ye dekhna padega bcoz wo beta karke bol Rahe to maybe wo rishi ho..

Aur ha .. apne choti si mistake kardi ..
Rajasthan s bua ni maasi aarahi h Jahan tk mujhe yaad h Archana aarti ki sister hna ki Raaj ki to archana maasi hui na..

Well , rishi ka to Bata dia . maa k ladle h aur wahi riya ka b same h . Wo b apni MAA Aruna ko bht pyar karti h ..


Well , ab to next drama shayad sham ki bday party m dekhne ko Milne Wala h...

Let's see..
Thnx for ur beautiful review :hi::hi:..
Thnx first off all mistake correct karne ke liye..
Wo thora galti se mistake hogiya mujse..
N bday party kiski hea ye aane wale update mea jarur pata chalega...
Acha lagga ki aapko story pasand aarahi hea..
Hope aage ki kahani b aapko aise he pasand aaye:peace::peace:..
Aap ko mere taraf se happy Christmas
Keep commenting:poet::poet:..
Keep supporting:party:
 
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Good update.
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Ye ek ullu or ek chamakadar ek murgi bas meri hi kami reh gye h wha. Ooops mai to hu hi rishi........Meri heroine pe najar mat rakho.
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Rohit lagta h mujh se baat kar rha tha but mai nhi batuga.
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Good going.
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Keep posting.
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Thnx for ur beautiful review :hi::hi:..
Acha lagga ki aapko story pasand aarahi hea..
Hope aage ki kahani b aapko aise he pasand aaye:peace::peace:..
Aap ko mer taraf se happy Christmas
Keep commenting:poet::poet:..
Keep supporting:party:
 
awesome update
lagta hi Aruna ko rishi Kon h nahi malum
jabardast party main maza aayega
Thnx for ur beautiful review :hi::hi:..
Aapka kehna sahi he ki nai ye aane wale update mea pata chal jayega..
Acha lagga ki aapko story pasand aarahi hea..
Hope aage ki kahani b aapko aise he pasand aaye:peace::peace:..
Aap ko mer taraf se happy Christmas
Keep commenting:poet::poet:..
Keep supporting:party:
 
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Jabardast Update

Rishi ka introduction badiya rha

Or Riya ka bhii uske character k hisab se Setani vala rha

Rohit kisse bat kar rha tha

Rishi ki konsi darling ka birthday h lagta h koi khash h

Abii aarchna or uski nanad aa rhe h to dekhte h aage kya hota h

Do do Update dete ho to mja bhii duguna ho jata h

Thank you do do Update dene k liye
Thnx for ur beautiful review :hi::hi:..
Abi kuch din thora free thi toa jada jada likhne ki kosis ki mene..
Abi toa sahi mayno mea story suru hui hea..
Aage aapko or maja aayega..
Acha lagga ki aapko story pasand aarahi hea..
Hope aage ki kahani b aapko aise he pasand aaye:peace::peace:..
Aap ko mer taraf se happy Christmas
Keep commenting:poet::poet:..
Keep supporting:party:
 
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