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UPDATE 14
Toa guys thori deri hogai ye update aane mea par kya karu vacation the toa ghar jane ka plan kiya or nikal aayi hostel se..
Toa traveling ke karan wo din toa gaya ab free hui hu toa ye update likh rahi hu..
Ha toa jada bore na karte huye ye update ki suruwat karti hu..
Jaisa aapne last mea dekha tha (dekha toa bohot kuch tha par last wala scene yaad dila deti hu) ki rishi ne nikki ko call kar shopping ke liye bulaya tha joki wo apni darling ke liye karne wala hea..
Toa chalo aaj dekhte hea kya hotay shopping par or kon hea wo darling..
Rishis POV-..
Ghar se nikal te he mene gadi nikki ke ghar ke taraf mod di jo mere ghar se jada toa nai par itni dur jarur tha ki waha pohachne mea muje 15 min toa lag he jaye..
(Jab tak ye nikki ke pass pohach ta hea ham aruna ke yaha hoke aate hea)
Aaruna riya ko jaga kar uske liye breakfast banane kitchen mea chali gayi or unki ghar ki maid (jisse ham filal maid he kahengea) ko riya ke room mea jaa waha ki saaf safai karneko bol gayi thi..
Or upar riya apne kamre mea maa ke jate he firse bed par bed jati hea..
Or apne dono per fold karke unpar hath rakh..
Pagalo jaise apne bal gol gol gumane lagti hea..
Isse dekh aisa lag raha tha ki iske andar chandramukhi aagayi ho..
Kher riya aisa karte huye apni shaitani smile mu par lekar aati hea..
Tabi uske kamre ke bahar kisi ki dar se chikne ki awaje aati hea..
Uski awaj itni daravni thi ki kitchen mea kaam kar rahi aaruna b dar jati hea..
Par bichari maid toa riya ko dekh itni dar gayi thi wo ek chik ke baad wahi ke wahi dadam se gir gayi..
Jisse dekhte hea riya apna pet pakar jor jorse hasne lagi or aruna jo ab tak thori sambhal chuki thi wo maid ki chik sun pehle toa gabra gayi par jab usse yaad aaya ki usne maid ko riya ke kamre mea beja tha toa aruna ka b mata thanka or usne apna matha pit liya..
Or khud se boli..
Ye shaitan ki nani aaj nai bachegi mere hato se..
Itna bol aruna ne kitchen mea se belen utha liya or chal pari riya ke kamre ke taraf..
(Ye scene yahi par rokna parega qki waha rishi nikki ke yaha pohach gaya hea..
Ab wo scene b imp heana..)
Rishi nikki ke ghar ke bahar ko ki normal si society mea tha..
Par wo society b kafi achi thi..
Like high Porsche society hoti hea..
Usmea nikki ka ghar 18th floor par tha (3bhk) jisme nikki or uske nana nani rehte the..
Nikki ke mama mami us mea job karte hea kisi software company mea...
Or wahi se inke liye har mahine paise bej diya karte the..
Ha toa mea(rishi) nikki ke society ke niche pohach usse fir ek bar call karta hu or niche aajaneko kehta hu..
Nikki b 2 min ka aaneka bol call rakh deti hea..
Or aglea 2 min ke he andar he muje nikki apni society ke wing mea sea aate huyi dikhi..
Usne is waqt red crop top or niche short jeans pehna tha..
Jo ki uske gutno ke thore he upar tak tha..
Yani na jada body show tha na he jada decent nikki ko aise he dresses pasand the..
Or isme wo kamal dikh rahi thi..
Mene usse car se bahar nikal greet kiya hug kar ke or fir uske liye car ka door b khola like a gentleman..
Jispar usne car mea bethte huye meri tang khichte huye kaha..
Aaj bada gentleman bana gum raha hea tu yaar kya baat he..
Lagtay aaj bohot jaruri kaam he rishi tuje warna tu or
Ye sab impossible..
Mene bas uski bato par smile kiya or car aage bada di jo sidha AR mall ke samne jaa rukhi( sahi pehchana ye mall mere dad ka yani mera he hea aise he kayi or business mea unhone invest kar rakha tha jiske bareme aage batadegi aapko ye lekika mohtarma..
N muje ye sab pata he ki nai ye baat ko filal suspense he rakh te hea..)
Mall ke parking mea car park kar ham dono bahar nikle..
Or mall mea enter huye..
Waha har koi ham dono ko he dekh raha tha..
Akhir meri personality he itni solid thi bale he 18 ka he hu par 6 pack and..
Nice face cut or posture..
Or upar se sath me nikki jaisi khubsurat ladki toa har kisi ka hame dekhna ban ta tha..
Khair hamdono ne insabi chijo ko ignore karte huye mall mea aage badte badte ek jwelljewe shop par aakar rukhe or fir mene nikki se kaha..
Yaar nikku tuje pata hena aaj darling ka birthday hea toa unke liye koi acha sa set select karlenaa.
Tuje toa pata hea mea insab chijo mea anadi hu..
Ye sab mene badi he masumiyat se kaha jisse sun or dekh nikki nea haste huye mere shoulder par punch mara or boli..
Oye gareebo ke darshan raval(
i know ye meri insult thi kamse kam ameero ke darshan raval boldeti par ye writer na apne man aaya wo kar rahi hea iska kuch karna parega
)
Tujpar ye bhole banne wali acting suit na hoti..
Sidhe sidhe apne rang mea aa or bata darling ke liye toa necklace or usse select karne ke liye meri kitni commission hea..
Saste mea toa ni choudungi tuje aaj
..
Ye sab bolte huye nikki kisi dayan se kam na lag rahi thi..
Par me marta kya karta koi chara na tha mere pass is musibat se nikal ne ka isliye mene b usse apne liye jo uska man kare wo select karne ke liye keh diya tha..
Jispar nikki ne meri pit thap thap thapate huye
good boy bola or lag gayi meri darling ke liye necklace select karne mea..
(Ab yaha ek ladki shopping par lagi hui hea wo b jewellery ki toa aam baat he usme inko gante bit jane hea tab tak ham yaha inko dekh bore hone se acha kahi gum aate hea..
Toa fir
Rishi ke dadaji ke yaha b ek round laga aate hea..
Aakhir unka b hal chal lena jaruri hea..)
Toa yaha rajgadh mea mohol mea thori chal pahal thi..
Har taraf bas aane wale mele ke bareme he baat chit horahi thi..
Joki aaj se tk 11 mahine baad tha..
Par yaha chal pahal mele ki khusi mea nai balki dar mea thi..
Qki raajgadh or uske sath jude 101 gaavo ka raaja isi mele mea niyukt hoga jo ki aane wale 50 saal tak raaj karega if wo chal basa bich me he toa uska waris uske baad raaja banta hea..
Or yaha veer bahadur ke pariwar se abi tak koi b khabar ni aayi thi Ki unka umidwar kon hoga..
Wahi unke opposition mea is baat ka fayda uthakar 5 umidwar ab tak gosit hochuke hea..
Ab inme kon dost hea or kon dusman ye toa aage he pata chalega..
Khair bam haveli mea chalte hea jaha veer bahadur ramu se baat kar rahe the..
Chalo dekhte hea kya chal raha hea..
Veer - Ramu ab ham kuch ni karsakte..
Mere kiye ke wajase aaj mere pariwar ke sath sath mere praja ko b iska bugtan karna padega..
Ramu - Malik q fikar karte ho upar wale ke ghar der hea ander nai..
Jarur usne kuch acha socha hoga isliye ab tak aapko intazar karwaya hea unhone..
Veer - Par raamu raak ki maa ki halat ab din ba din bigadti jaa rahi hea..
Ab agar usne raaj ko nai dekha toa aage kya hoga mea bata b ni sakta..
Itna bol veer bahadur ke ankho se b 2 bund aasu nikal gaye..
Jisse dekh ramu in mind..
Maaf karna malik par raaj bhai ke kasam ke wajase rukna para he muje par ab waqt aagaya he ki is haveli or yaha ki praja ko unko agala raaja mile..
Bas ek baar uski training hojaye fir mea usse yaha lea aaunga malik..
Rishis POV-
(Yaha rishi or nikki ki shopping hogayi thi jisme nikki nea ek sundar sa kundan wala necklace choose kiya rishi ke darling ke liye or wahi apne liye usne sirf ek simple sa bracelet liya jisme ek secret locket tha or usme kuch likhwaya tha usne par ye baat usne muje(rishi) ni batayi thi..
Mene b koi jada dyan ni diya..
Par usse itna jarur kaha tha ki wo b apne liya kuch b lea sakti hea..
Par usne simple sa bracelet he liya..
Khair waha se nikal hamdono chal pare food court ke taraf qki shopping mea he nikki nea 3 gante lagwa diye the..
Bichre sales person b pareshan hogaya tha usse dikha te dikhate par isse kuch pasand he nai aaraha tha..
Bari muskil se usne ye necklace choose kara tha..
Khair hamdono food court mea pohach mera all tym favorite mc. Fries with peri peri + coke or nikki ka b same he tha..
Ab hamdono beth suru hogaye apne apne kaam mea..
Joki batadu ki nikki toa sirf mujse bate karte huye khaye ja rahi thi..
Par mea yaha waha dekh raha tha khate huye..
Ye baat toa yaha kuch readers samaj he gaye honge ki ek jawan ladka yaha waha q dekh ta hea wo b mall mea..
Tabi meri najar tk mere samne ke 2 table chor ladki par padi haye daya..
Kya cute dikh rahi thi wo..
Fair color + indian dress upar se specs wo gol gol..
Mea toa ek he baar me flat hogaya..
Or mere samne baithi nikki jo sirf khate huye mujse baat kar rahi thi..
Par mera koi response na paa usne muje dekha toa..
Muje uske piche ke taraf gurta paya
Or jab ussne meri najar ka picha kiya toa usse dekh nikki ka chera lal hogaya..
Or usne table ke niche se he mere pero par apne heels se hole karne lagi..
Jis karan mera dyan tutta..
Or mene nikki ke taraf sawaliya najro se dekha..
Jispar usne kaha..
Ankhe sekhna hogayi ho toa khane pe dyan doo..
Sharam nai aati ha tumhe..
Mea tumhare samne baithi hu or tum ladkia tad rahe hoo..
Sudar jau..
Warna kisi din kisi ladki se pit jauge..
Jispar mea haste huye bola .
Kya yaar nikku tu janti he hea...
Duniya mea 2 chijo ko kitna b dekhU mera man nai bharta
Nikki - Ha ha pata hea pata wahi gishpita dialogue maroge..
Bachpan se sunti aarahi hu..
Ab bas hua..
Ha..
Rishi - Aise kaise chor du..
Ek toa mera favorite dialogue hea upar se tu aisa kar rahi hea..
Dekh sunna hea toa sun..
Warna mea toa waise b bolunga hee..
Nikki irritate hote huye ab jaldi bolo or chalo yaha se..
Rishi - jaldi me kuch hota mujse..
Ha toa..
Mea kaha tha..
Haa yaad aaya..
Toa duniya mea 2 chije mea kitna b dekhu mera man ni bharta
Pehli DDLJ or dusri ladkiya..
Ye line bolte huye mene sharukh khan wala pose mara tha baithe baithe..
Apne dono bahe faila kar..
Jisse dekh aas pass ke kuch loglhas rahe the..
Or inme wo specs wali ladki b samil thi..
Haye mea toa apne hatho ko failaye huye he freeze hoagaya uski smile dekhke..
Or wo b muje apne taraf yu dekhta dekh aankho se muje kya hea ka ishara kiya jispar mea bas ek smile pass karta rehgaya..
Isbar mera dyan mere mobile ke ring se tuti..
Or jab mene mobile screen par naam dekha toa mere ankho mea chamak se aagayi thi..
Toa frnds jarur batana ki ye update kaisa tha..
Or koi suggestion ho toa pm kar deana muje..
Qki ab mea 2 kahaniya simultaneously likhungi toa kahi koi garbar na hojaye mujse..
So just keep commenting positive or negative..
Everything is acceptable but only on story haa..
Warna .
..
Just kidding..
Toa guys thori deri hogai ye update aane mea par kya karu vacation the toa ghar jane ka plan kiya or nikal aayi hostel se..
Toa traveling ke karan wo din toa gaya ab free hui hu toa ye update likh rahi hu..
Ha toa jada bore na karte huye ye update ki suruwat karti hu..
Jaisa aapne last mea dekha tha (dekha toa bohot kuch tha par last wala scene yaad dila deti hu) ki rishi ne nikki ko call kar shopping ke liye bulaya tha joki wo apni darling ke liye karne wala hea..
Toa chalo aaj dekhte hea kya hotay shopping par or kon hea wo darling..
Rishis POV-..
Ghar se nikal te he mene gadi nikki ke ghar ke taraf mod di jo mere ghar se jada toa nai par itni dur jarur tha ki waha pohachne mea muje 15 min toa lag he jaye..
(Jab tak ye nikki ke pass pohach ta hea ham aruna ke yaha hoke aate hea)
Aaruna riya ko jaga kar uske liye breakfast banane kitchen mea chali gayi or unki ghar ki maid (jisse ham filal maid he kahengea) ko riya ke room mea jaa waha ki saaf safai karneko bol gayi thi..
Or upar riya apne kamre mea maa ke jate he firse bed par bed jati hea..
Or apne dono per fold karke unpar hath rakh..
Pagalo jaise apne bal gol gol gumane lagti hea..
Isse dekh aisa lag raha tha ki iske andar chandramukhi aagayi ho..
Kher riya aisa karte huye apni shaitani smile mu par lekar aati hea..
Tabi uske kamre ke bahar kisi ki dar se chikne ki awaje aati hea..
Uski awaj itni daravni thi ki kitchen mea kaam kar rahi aaruna b dar jati hea..
Par bichari maid toa riya ko dekh itni dar gayi thi wo ek chik ke baad wahi ke wahi dadam se gir gayi..
Jisse dekhte hea riya apna pet pakar jor jorse hasne lagi or aruna jo ab tak thori sambhal chuki thi wo maid ki chik sun pehle toa gabra gayi par jab usse yaad aaya ki usne maid ko riya ke kamre mea beja tha toa aruna ka b mata thanka or usne apna matha pit liya..
Or khud se boli..
Ye shaitan ki nani aaj nai bachegi mere hato se..
Itna bol aruna ne kitchen mea se belen utha liya or chal pari riya ke kamre ke taraf..
(Ye scene yahi par rokna parega qki waha rishi nikki ke yaha pohach gaya hea..
Ab wo scene b imp heana..)
Rishi nikki ke ghar ke bahar ko ki normal si society mea tha..
Par wo society b kafi achi thi..
Like high Porsche society hoti hea..
Usmea nikki ka ghar 18th floor par tha (3bhk) jisme nikki or uske nana nani rehte the..
Nikki ke mama mami us mea job karte hea kisi software company mea...
Or wahi se inke liye har mahine paise bej diya karte the..
Ha toa mea(rishi) nikki ke society ke niche pohach usse fir ek bar call karta hu or niche aajaneko kehta hu..
Nikki b 2 min ka aaneka bol call rakh deti hea..
Or aglea 2 min ke he andar he muje nikki apni society ke wing mea sea aate huyi dikhi..
Usne is waqt red crop top or niche short jeans pehna tha..
Jo ki uske gutno ke thore he upar tak tha..
Yani na jada body show tha na he jada decent nikki ko aise he dresses pasand the..
Or isme wo kamal dikh rahi thi..
Mene usse car se bahar nikal greet kiya hug kar ke or fir uske liye car ka door b khola like a gentleman..
Jispar usne car mea bethte huye meri tang khichte huye kaha..
Aaj bada gentleman bana gum raha hea tu yaar kya baat he..
Lagtay aaj bohot jaruri kaam he rishi tuje warna tu or
Ye sab impossible..
Mene bas uski bato par smile kiya or car aage bada di jo sidha AR mall ke samne jaa rukhi( sahi pehchana ye mall mere dad ka yani mera he hea aise he kayi or business mea unhone invest kar rakha tha jiske bareme aage batadegi aapko ye lekika mohtarma..
N muje ye sab pata he ki nai ye baat ko filal suspense he rakh te hea..)
Mall ke parking mea car park kar ham dono bahar nikle..
Or mall mea enter huye..
Waha har koi ham dono ko he dekh raha tha..
Akhir meri personality he itni solid thi bale he 18 ka he hu par 6 pack and..
Nice face cut or posture..
Or upar se sath me nikki jaisi khubsurat ladki toa har kisi ka hame dekhna ban ta tha..
Khair hamdono ne insabi chijo ko ignore karte huye mall mea aage badte badte ek jwelljewe shop par aakar rukhe or fir mene nikki se kaha..
Yaar nikku tuje pata hena aaj darling ka birthday hea toa unke liye koi acha sa set select karlenaa.
Tuje toa pata hea mea insab chijo mea anadi hu..
Ye sab mene badi he masumiyat se kaha jisse sun or dekh nikki nea haste huye mere shoulder par punch mara or boli..
Oye gareebo ke darshan raval(
i know ye meri insult thi kamse kam ameero ke darshan raval boldeti par ye writer na apne man aaya wo kar rahi hea iska kuch karna parega)Tujpar ye bhole banne wali acting suit na hoti..
Sidhe sidhe apne rang mea aa or bata darling ke liye toa necklace or usse select karne ke liye meri kitni commission hea..
Saste mea toa ni choudungi tuje aaj
..Ye sab bolte huye nikki kisi dayan se kam na lag rahi thi..
Par me marta kya karta koi chara na tha mere pass is musibat se nikal ne ka isliye mene b usse apne liye jo uska man kare wo select karne ke liye keh diya tha..
Jispar nikki ne meri pit thap thap thapate huye
good boy bola or lag gayi meri darling ke liye necklace select karne mea..(Ab yaha ek ladki shopping par lagi hui hea wo b jewellery ki toa aam baat he usme inko gante bit jane hea tab tak ham yaha inko dekh bore hone se acha kahi gum aate hea..
Toa fir
Rishi ke dadaji ke yaha b ek round laga aate hea..
Aakhir unka b hal chal lena jaruri hea..)
Toa yaha rajgadh mea mohol mea thori chal pahal thi..
Har taraf bas aane wale mele ke bareme he baat chit horahi thi..
Joki aaj se tk 11 mahine baad tha..
Par yaha chal pahal mele ki khusi mea nai balki dar mea thi..
Qki raajgadh or uske sath jude 101 gaavo ka raaja isi mele mea niyukt hoga jo ki aane wale 50 saal tak raaj karega if wo chal basa bich me he toa uska waris uske baad raaja banta hea..
Or yaha veer bahadur ke pariwar se abi tak koi b khabar ni aayi thi Ki unka umidwar kon hoga..
Wahi unke opposition mea is baat ka fayda uthakar 5 umidwar ab tak gosit hochuke hea..
Ab inme kon dost hea or kon dusman ye toa aage he pata chalega..
Khair bam haveli mea chalte hea jaha veer bahadur ramu se baat kar rahe the..
Chalo dekhte hea kya chal raha hea..
Veer - Ramu ab ham kuch ni karsakte..
Mere kiye ke wajase aaj mere pariwar ke sath sath mere praja ko b iska bugtan karna padega..
Ramu - Malik q fikar karte ho upar wale ke ghar der hea ander nai..
Jarur usne kuch acha socha hoga isliye ab tak aapko intazar karwaya hea unhone..
Veer - Par raamu raak ki maa ki halat ab din ba din bigadti jaa rahi hea..
Ab agar usne raaj ko nai dekha toa aage kya hoga mea bata b ni sakta..
Itna bol veer bahadur ke ankho se b 2 bund aasu nikal gaye..
Jisse dekh ramu in mind..
Maaf karna malik par raaj bhai ke kasam ke wajase rukna para he muje par ab waqt aagaya he ki is haveli or yaha ki praja ko unko agala raaja mile..
Bas ek baar uski training hojaye fir mea usse yaha lea aaunga malik..
Rishis POV-
(Yaha rishi or nikki ki shopping hogayi thi jisme nikki nea ek sundar sa kundan wala necklace choose kiya rishi ke darling ke liye or wahi apne liye usne sirf ek simple sa bracelet liya jisme ek secret locket tha or usme kuch likhwaya tha usne par ye baat usne muje(rishi) ni batayi thi..
Mene b koi jada dyan ni diya..
Par usse itna jarur kaha tha ki wo b apne liya kuch b lea sakti hea..
Par usne simple sa bracelet he liya..
Khair waha se nikal hamdono chal pare food court ke taraf qki shopping mea he nikki nea 3 gante lagwa diye the..
Bichre sales person b pareshan hogaya tha usse dikha te dikhate par isse kuch pasand he nai aaraha tha..
Bari muskil se usne ye necklace choose kara tha..
Khair hamdono food court mea pohach mera all tym favorite mc. Fries with peri peri + coke or nikki ka b same he tha..
Ab hamdono beth suru hogaye apne apne kaam mea..
Joki batadu ki nikki toa sirf mujse bate karte huye khaye ja rahi thi..
Par mea yaha waha dekh raha tha khate huye..
Ye baat toa yaha kuch readers samaj he gaye honge ki ek jawan ladka yaha waha q dekh ta hea wo b mall mea..
Tabi meri najar tk mere samne ke 2 table chor ladki par padi haye daya..
Kya cute dikh rahi thi wo..
Fair color + indian dress upar se specs wo gol gol..
Mea toa ek he baar me flat hogaya..
Or mere samne baithi nikki jo sirf khate huye mujse baat kar rahi thi..
Par mera koi response na paa usne muje dekha toa..
Muje uske piche ke taraf gurta paya
Or jab ussne meri najar ka picha kiya toa usse dekh nikki ka chera lal hogaya..
Or usne table ke niche se he mere pero par apne heels se hole karne lagi..
Jis karan mera dyan tutta..
Or mene nikki ke taraf sawaliya najro se dekha..
Jispar usne kaha..
Ankhe sekhna hogayi ho toa khane pe dyan doo..
Sharam nai aati ha tumhe..
Mea tumhare samne baithi hu or tum ladkia tad rahe hoo..
Sudar jau..
Warna kisi din kisi ladki se pit jauge..
Jispar mea haste huye bola .
Kya yaar nikku tu janti he hea...
Duniya mea 2 chijo ko kitna b dekhU mera man nai bharta
Nikki - Ha ha pata hea pata wahi gishpita dialogue maroge..
Bachpan se sunti aarahi hu..
Ab bas hua..
Ha..
Rishi - Aise kaise chor du..
Ek toa mera favorite dialogue hea upar se tu aisa kar rahi hea..
Dekh sunna hea toa sun..
Warna mea toa waise b bolunga hee..
Nikki irritate hote huye ab jaldi bolo or chalo yaha se..
Rishi - jaldi me kuch hota mujse..
Ha toa..
Mea kaha tha..
Haa yaad aaya..
Toa duniya mea 2 chije mea kitna b dekhu mera man ni bharta
Pehli DDLJ or dusri ladkiya..
Ye line bolte huye mene sharukh khan wala pose mara tha baithe baithe..
Apne dono bahe faila kar..
Jisse dekh aas pass ke kuch loglhas rahe the..
Or inme wo specs wali ladki b samil thi..
Haye mea toa apne hatho ko failaye huye he freeze hoagaya uski smile dekhke..
Or wo b muje apne taraf yu dekhta dekh aankho se muje kya hea ka ishara kiya jispar mea bas ek smile pass karta rehgaya..
Isbar mera dyan mere mobile ke ring se tuti..
Or jab mene mobile screen par naam dekha toa mere ankho mea chamak se aagayi thi..
Toa frnds jarur batana ki ye update kaisa tha..
Or koi suggestion ho toa pm kar deana muje..
Qki ab mea 2 kahaniya simultaneously likhungi toa kahi koi garbar na hojaye mujse..
So just keep commenting positive or negative..
Everything is acceptable but only on story haa..
Warna .
..Just kidding..
