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Fantasy RISHI the SAVIOR(BEING EVIL)

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Awesome story rishu ji,
abhi maine first update hi padha hai
aur review dene se khud ko rok nhi saka,
Starting jabardast hai,
universe ki rachana se lekar earth ke vikash tak aapne sab kuchh behad hi
shandaar andaaz me darsaya hai,
ab aage ka padhakar baki ka review deta hoon
 
UPDATE 15

Toa frnds pichle update mea aapne dekha tha ki rishi n nikki shopping par jate hea or wahi uske dadaji apne waris or gaave ke hone wale raja ko lekar chintit hea..
Wahi riya ki shaitanio ki b kuch jalak dekhne mea mili hame..

Toa fir aaj ke update se suruwat karte hea..

Rishis pov

Mea abi us ladki(specs wali)
Ko haste huye dekh he raha tha ki mera mobile baja or call tha meri masi archana ka..

Jisse dekh mea kafi khush tha..

Mene jatse call pick kiya or unhe namaste karte huye pucha..

Kaha ho masi aaye nai ab tak..

Archana masi(masi maa likhunga yaha se) - masi ke bache kaha hea tu aaya nai ab tak..
Pichle aadhe gante se khadi hu mea airport par..

Masi ki baat sun mea jatse apne mobile screen par tym daikha toa mea shock mea tha qki maa ne kaha tha masi ki flight sham ko 4-5 baje ke pass land hogi par abi toa bas 2 hi baje the..

Tabi muje masi maa ke piche se kisi ladki ke hasi ke aawaj aai jisse mea samaj gaya ki masi maa mujse majak kar rahi hea..

Tabi mene kaha..

Masi maa kya aap b juth bol rahe ho mea kabi ka airport ke bahar he lounge mea khada hu..
Or aap ho ki rajasthan airport par khade rah kar mera majak bana rahe ho..

Par aap bhul gaye ho..
Rishi ko bevkoof bana itna ashan nai hea..
Or aap ke piche jo has rahi hea usse b batadena ki last tym wo mujse bach gayi thi par isbar uski chutiya(choti) mene kaat deni hea..

Tabi masi maa b jor jor se hasne lagi meri baat sun or mujse boli..

Rishi tuje har bar kaise pata chal jata hea mea majak kar rahi hu..
Ye radhika(masi maa ki nanad ) ko mene kaha tha par wo kaha meri baate sunti hea..
Ye sab uski ka plan tha..
Mea b tere sath hu kaat dena tu iski chutiya ko..

Hamdono he last wali line par milkar thaka mar hasne lagge tabi radhika ne masi maa se phone chin liya or mujse boli..

Q be chapad ganju tu har dam meri chutiya ke piche he q para rehta hea..

Uski baat par mene haste huye kaha..

Qki chudailo ki shakti unki chutiya(choti) me he hoti hea or jo koi b usse katle wo us chudail ka malik ban jata hea..
Toa jahir se baat he mea b tumhara malik banna chahta hu..

Mene apni baat ko complete kar hasne laga or wahi radhika ne bina kuch kahe he call cut kardiya..

Masi maa ne radhika ka chera lal surkdekh pucha

radhu kya baat hea tumhara chera itna lal q hogaya hea..

Jis par radhika ko airport announcement walo ne bacha liya unki flight announce kar..

Par yaha radhika ka chera gusse se lal tha ya phir kuch or baat thi ye toa waqt he batayega..

Wahi rishi ne phone rakhne ke baad nikki se kaha..
Joki call aane se lekar ab tak bas rishi ko he dekhe ja rahi thi or fir ek bar usse gussa aaraha tha..
Najane kis baat par..

Rishi - kya hua nikku lal phul jadi q bani hui hoo..
Kya hua tumhe..

Jispar nikki ne kuch nai kaha or fir dono ne chup chap apna khana khatam kiya..

Par yaha ab wo chasmis larki rishi ko dekhe ja rahi thi..
Jisse rishi ne b note kiya par dyan nai diya..

Khair undono ke khane pine ke program ke baad wo dono kuch der mall me gum tym pass kiya or phir nikki ko uske ghar chor aaya rishi party ke liye tayar hone ke liye..
Or wo chal para airport par apni masi maa or radhika ko pick karne ke liye

Yaha rohit raichand ke yaha uske ghar aate he usne aaruna or riya ko ready hone ko kaha ye kehkar ki ek business frnd ke party mea jana hea..

Aaruna na pehlea toa mana kiya par badme usse rohit ki baat mani pari..

Wahi riya toa party ka naam sun jatse ready hone bhag gayi apne kamre mea..

Jisse dekh uske maa papa hasne lagge..
Tabi aruna ne rohit se kaha..

Aruna - Rohit mea kya keh rahi thi rishi ko b bula lo hamre sath aajayega party mea wo..
Bichara pure din akele he rehta he apne ghar..
Bas wo or uski kitabe..

Jispar rohit ne gabrate huye kaha..

Aruna rishi ko ni bulasakte he ham..
Qki wo kal he kahi bahar chala gaya tha kaam se..
Mene call kiya tha usse ghar aanesea pehlea tabi usne ye baat batayi..

Aruna rohit ki baat sun udass hote huye apnea kamre mea chali gayi or wahi rohit uparwale ko bachane ke liye thnx kehne lagga qki..
Aruna kabi baat ke teh tak jaye bina nai rukti thi wahi aaj usne rohit ke baat ka asani se yakin kar liya tha..

(Ab aap log socho ge ki agar aruna itni he tej hea toa uske or aarti ke bich aisa kya hua jispar dono ke bich ab tak coldwar chal raha hea toa wo b jald pata chalega)

Wahi rishi ke airport lounge mea pohachte he archana ke flight ke landing announcement hui..
Or wo (rishi) bas airport exit ke taraf dekhne lagga apni masi maa ke aaneke intazar mea..

Tabi usse masi maa apne luggage ke sath aate huyi dikhi or unke piche radhika aarahi thi
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Short introduction

Radhika singh
Age 20
Ye filal apne second year engineering mea hea..
Par inhone apne ghar se dur dusre state mea admission liya hea taki ye khulke apni life enjoy kar sake..
Kafi khule vicharo ki hea..
Or iske or archana ki bohot achi banti hea..
Dono saheliya jaise rehtea..

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Radhika ko dekhte he mea toa bas apne jagga par khade khade he jam sa gaya tha..
Kya dikh rahi thi wo..
Yea haal sirf mera nai balki airport par majuud lag bhag har male carraspond ka tha..

Meara dyan tab tuta jab masi maa mere samne aa apna hatho se muje hilaya..
Or haste huye mujse boli .

Kya hua beta kaha kho gaye tum..

Mea unki baat par jepsa gaya tha..
Jispar us chudail(radhika) ne or aag laga te huye kaha..

Q be chapad ganju kaha dekh raha tha itne der se..

Usne ye baat apni kamar par hath rakh apni navel dikhate huye kaha tha..

Jispar meri halat or b bigadne lagi or mere sarir me halchal hona suru hogai thi..
Isliye apne aap ko bachane ke liye mene masi maa ko hug karte huye greet kiya or unke bags lekar unko car ke taraf chalne ko kaha..

Mene ye sab had baddi mea kaha tha jispar wo dono piche khadi ho has rahi thi..
Or masi maa ne haste huye radhika ke sar par tapli marte huye kaha..

Q pareshan kar rahi hea mere bache ko..

Radhika - mea kaha kar rahi hu didi apka bacha he muje gure jaa raha tha..
Dekha nai aapne uski kya halat ho rahi thi..

Masi maa - Tum na kabi nai sudhrogi..
Abi tum uske maje lea rahi ho..
Par jab wo apne pe aaya na tab muje naa kehna..
Ki rishi aisa kiya waisa kiya .
Tum he bichare ko jala rahi ho..

Yahi sab baate karte huye wo dono meri piche piche car tak aagaye..
Or usme beth ham tino ghar ke liye rawana hogaye..

Car chalate huye mene undono se kuch baat nai ki thi bas apne man me kaha .

Is radhika ki bachi ko mea chodunga nai..
Bas ek baar party hojaye fir isse dikha ta hu..
Rishi se panga lene se kya hota hea..

Wahi radhika man me..

Bachu abi toa sirf surwat he aage aage dekh kaise tuje tadpati hu mea apna ye husn se..
Itna bol wo apne man me he hasne laggi..

Aise he ham dono apne apne man me aage ke planning karne lagge or pohach gaye ghar

Ghadi se utarte huye ham tino ghar ke andar ke taraf barne lagge..
Or andar pohach masi maa
ek najar charo taraf gumate huye fir boli..

Waise sab kaha hea koi dikh nai raha..

Tabi unke piche se awaj aai..
Jijii..

Ji ha ye koi or nai balki meri maa he thi wo dono apass me gale mil unko bato mea lag gaye jisse mene break lagate huye kaha..

Baate badme karna jaldi se aap sab ready hojau hame party hall ke liye nikal na hea..
Warna aisa na jo jiski party hea wahi tym na pohache..

Meri baat maan wo sab b ready hone apne kamre mea chalagaye..
Jisme masi maa ka toa pehlea se ek room tha he..
Jaha wo pehlea raha karti thi..
Radhika ko 1st floor par mere baju wala room mila..

Or wo b apne kamre mea chaligayi tayar hone..

Karib 1 gante baad ham sabi tayar ho ghar ke hall mea mile jisme mere nana nani mom masi maa radhika or mea majud the..

Fir ham sabi do gadio mea baith party hall ke liye nikal pare..
Jisme ek car mea toa ek car driver drive kar raha tha..
Mere sath nana nani or radhika bethe the..

Ham abi aadhe raste he pohache the tabi nani ne nana se pucha..

Waise ye kisiki party hea jiske liye ham sabi jarahe hea..
Ghar par b pucha tha tabi aapne koi jawab nai diya tha..

Jispar nana ke jagha mene kaha..

Kya hua nani darling q pareshan hoingg.
Ab jaa he rahe hea party mea tab dekh leana..

Wahi rohit or uski family party hall pohach chuke the..
Sath he sare invited guests b..
Bas intazar ho raha tha toa hamara..

Ham b kuch he der mea party hall pohach gaye..
Or jaise he andar enter huye tabi hall ke sari lights band higayi or ek spot light aa meri darling nani par pari jisse sab ka dyan hamare upar gaya..

Tabi mene mike pakad nani ke liye gana gana suru kiya..

Bar bar din ye aaye..
Bar bar dil ye gaye..
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Happy birthday to you..
Ha ha happy birthday to you..

Jispar hall mea ek sath talliyo ki garh garahat gunj uthi..

Nani itna acha gift dekh unke ankho se aasu behene lagge..
Or wo yaha waha muje dundne laagi par mea abi waha se thodi dur apne dusre plan ko anjam dene ke liye khada tha..

Wahi aruna apni maa baba or didi ko dekh kafi khush thi or wo aage bad apne maa ko gale lagne jaa rahi thi tabi fir ek baar hall mea mari awaj gunji jisse wo wahi khadi hogaye jaha wo khade the..

Rishi - toa guys muje batate huye behad khushi horahi hea..
Ki meri dream girl meri darling ka aaj 55th birthday hea..
Par aaj b wo 24 ki dikhti hea..

Khair sidhe mudde par aate huye yahi kahunga ki har maa ki tarha meri nani maa ki b ek icha hea or mea aap sabi se puchna chahunga kya unke bacho ko unki icha puri karni chahiye ki nai..

Iss waqt hall mea sirf meri awaj he aarahi thi par kisiko me dikhai nai dea raha tha..

Tabi hall mea ek sath haa ka swar gunjaa..

Tabi mene fir kaha..
Meri darling ki b ek ichaa he jo ki aaj se nai balke pichle 22 saal se adhuri hea..
Or ab mea aap sabi se ye nivedan karna chahunga ki aap sabi mere behaafpar unke bacho se request kare ki wo apni maa ki wish puri karre tabi hall me fir ek bar andhera hua or tin spot light aakar 3 logo par giri..

Un tino ke sath sath unke pariwar wale b shock the ye sab dekh..

Tabi upar se ek badi screen niche aane lagi or hall mea majud sabi ka dyan uspar gaya or uss screen par kuch drisya chalne lagge jisse dekh un tino ke sath sath waha khade har vyakti ki aankhe nam hogayi..
 

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