Fantasy RISHI the SAVIOR(BEING EVIL)

[·.·★ R♥I♥S♥H♥U♥ ★·.·]

Your story iss fantastic,mein iss story Ko shuru se padh Raha tha but as a silent reader kyunki mujhe lagta tha ki baaki writers ki tarah aap bhi story Ko aadha adhura chod doge Lekin now I think aap iss story Ko complete jarur karoge
Now coming to story I think aapne multi universe aur Omni king ka concept anime"dragon Ball super" se Liya hae with a little bit of modification
Aur aapne story mein Naya concept use Kiya hae Omni king ka nahi toh jitni bhi stories padhi hae meine Usme tridevo se upar level gaya hae and I hope ki agar enemies itne strong hae toh action bhi jabardast hoga stroy mein
Jaisa ki aapne bataya ki story mein ki hero ke andar kaam Dev ka ansh hae toh heroine bhi kaafi hongi I think, mujhe lagta ki aap heroine Kam rakhna,aur hero mein thoda bohat attitude bhi dalna,aur ye hero ki darling kon hae ye bhi jaldi bhi bata do,Rahi baat Raaj ke pariwar ke baare mein toh vo mujhe itna khaas nahi laga,aur Raj ka kya hua ye bhi Abhi tak suspense mein hae

Thnx for ur beautiful review..
Sahi kaha apne story ka suru ka kuch hissa DBS se aspire hoke likha hea mene..
Qki i m big DBS fan..
N story ke completion ko lekar aap befikar rahiye qki mea khud ek lekhak se pehlea reader thi..
Toa muje pata hea ek adhuri story parna mea kitna gussa aata hea..
N story mea action ki koi kami ni hogi..
Meri kosis rahegi ki mea action ko jitna ho sake utna ache se elabaratee karu..
Hero ke heroines ke bareme toa aage he pata chalega par ha aapka sujav par jarur gor karungi..
Raaj ki family ka ab tak koi important role ya u kahu ki khul ke unke bareme abi tak mene kuch nai bataya he qki mene aage kuch soch rakha he unke liye..
Bohot jald uske pariwar ka b khukar description aayega..
N darling wala raaj kal ke update mea khul jayega..
Acha lagga ki aapko story pasand aarahi hea..
Hope aage ki kahani b aapko aise he pasand aaye..
Aap sabi ko mere taraf se happy Christmas
Keep commenting..
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[Loveshuda111]

Riya to bdi natkhat h
Nikky bhi moke ka fayda uthaya
Sayad wo bhi rishi se pyar krti h
Khi darling riya to nhi jiske liye shopping hui h

 

[crazyrex]

nice update

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

waiting for the next update

 

[RAJIV SHAW]

Super update hai madam ji waiting for next update

 

[Jutt Bro]

Update ni aya abi tak

 

[luv4sale696969]

Still waiting..

 

[·.·★ R♥I♥S♥H♥U♥ ★·.·]

nice update

waiting for the next update

Super update hai madam ji waiting for next update

Update ni aya abi tak

Still waiting..

Thnx for ur beautiful review n support guys..
Update aaj raat he dungi is thread par meri dusri thread meri jindagi par aaj ek update diya he jarur read kare..
Acha lagga ki aapko story pasand aarahi hea..
Hope aage ki kahani b aapko aise he pasand aaye..
Aap sabi ko mere taraf se happy Christmas
Keep commenting..
Keep supporting

 

[·.·★ R♥I♥S♥H♥U♥ ★·.·]

Riya to bdi natkhat h
Nikky bhi moke ka fayda uthaya
Sayad wo bhi rishi se pyar krti h
Khi darling riya to nhi jiske liye shopping hui h

Thnx for ur beautiful review n support..
Nikki ke side ka kya pata nai hea ab tak ha par riya ki shaitanio ki toa abi shurwat hui hea bas..
N darling ka pata b aaj he chal jaye aisi kosis rahegi..
Update aaj raat he dungi is thread par meri dusri thread meri jindagi par aaj ek update diya he jarur read kare..
Acha lagga ki aapko story pasand aarahi hea..
Hope aage ki kahani b aapko aise he pasand aaye..
Aap sabi ko mere taraf se happy Christmas
Keep commenting..
Keep supporting

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

waiting for the next update