Fantasy RISHI the SAVIOR(BEING EVIL)

[Prince sarkash]

Awesome update

Keep going

 

[Reza]

Superb update bro...
Waiting for next

 

[Aj1980]

Shandar update bhai

 

[sonukale]

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[Faizan_okerlund]

Bhot hi kmal ki story hai apki
Superb plot
Omni king with 9 universe's something new:biggboss:
Pmni king se galti hogyi not so cool mean itna powerful phir kaise mostake hogyi or usne 8 shaktiya bana di
Or har galti ka koi bad 3ffect hona lazim hai so ban gyi demon queen
Omni king apni shaktiya ko khid khatm nhi kar skta isliye usne apni body tyaag di
Hero or hero ki family ka to intro ho chuka hai and acha tha zyada ghachelu si famoly ni hai kam log hain to koi confusion bho nhi hai

Or ek request hai
Rishi ki famoly mese koi ko hardcore villian ni bnana plz plz plz
KAHI Riya heroine to nahi
Ab apna hero superman bane ga
Or dekhte hain shaitan ki nanni ko ko kaise sabak sikhata hai
Ap shahid wo kamdev wala part bhool to ni gyi
Vasna jaagi nhi abhi
Rishi ne family ko phir se jod diya hai
Or trainong bhi shuru hogyi hai
Lets see kia hota hai
Aggefor nest next

 

[Raj]

SUPERB AWESOME FANTASTIC AND INTERESTING UPDATES RISHU JI

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

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[RAJIV SHAW]

Mast update hai madam ji waiting for next

 

[RAAZ]

UPDATE 5

Aaj ke 1st update mea aap sabi ka response acha tha..
At least meri pichli story se toa bohot he acha tha..

Hope ye response aage or b bare or ye story ko kamayab banaye..

Meri taraf se toa puri kosis rahegi hi..

Chalo bore ni karti hu jada or aaj ke 2nd update ki surwat karti hu..

Ha toa uparwalo ki conversation toa aap sabhi ne padli ab niche walo ke taraf rukh karte hea..

Toa sabse pehle chalte hea Australia..

Australia ke ek research lab mea 2 scientist the jo dono apne apne kamo mea wyast the..

Sayad kisi chij ki khoj bin kar rahe the wo log..

Par jaha unki research lab thi wo jagha kafi ajeeb thi..

Vo research lab jungle me thi..
Or uske ass pass bohot sare guards the jo apne ass pass ki jagho par najar rakh rahe the..

Kuch der tak dono scientist apne apne kamo me lage rahe tabi (scientist ko sc 1 or sc 2 likhungi)..
Sc 1 ne sc 2 ko apne pass bulaya or usse bola(inke bich hui baat chit hinglish mea likh rahi hu..
Bhale he vastavik ta me eng me ho rahi ho batchit..
N aage b jo conversation australia se related ho samaj leana ki wo english mea tha)

Sc1- mil gaya formula..
Sayad is bar banaya hua formula kaam kar jaye yaar..

Uski baat sun sc2 ke chere ka rang fikha padgaya jese usse kisi ne uska jeevan mang liya ho..
Or sc2 kuch sochte huye bola..

Sc2-pichle 3 salo se yahi bol raha hea tu..
Or har bar tera banaya hua formula galat nikal jata hea..
Isbar b waisa he hoga dekh lena..

Sc1-Saale tu mere sath he ya mere khilaf hamesa narkundi lagata hea..

Fir sc1 ne banaye huye formula ko ek tube mea liya or hydro mixture mea daal gumane lagga..

Or dusre taraf sc2 us mixture ko dekh bagwan se prathna kar raha tha ki har baar ki tarha is baar b wo formula galat he nikle..
Warna puri duniya tabha hojayegi..

Tabi wo hydro mixture jor jorse hilne lagga jisse dekh sc2 ki b dhadkane tej hogayi thi..
Jese uska b dil andar jor jor se hil raha ho .

Tabi..
Achanak wo hydro mixture shant hua or ek dam se fatgaya..
Dhamaka bohot he khatarnak tha..
Jis table par wo mixture tha wo table ka namonishan he ni bacha tha..

Wo table aise gayab hua jese ganje ke sar se baal or
Gadhe ke sar se singh..

Bas antar itna tha ki wo dekh kar kisi mea deshat ni hoti thi..
Or yaha sc2 ke dil mea dehshat ghar kar gayi thi..

Par sc1 ka reaction dekh usse sukun mila qki sc1 ko lagraha tha ki formula galat tha isbar b..

Par sc2 ke reaction dekh lag raha tha ki usne yamraj ko dekh liya ho apne samne..

Chalo inko yahi chodte hea or aap logo ko aarti ke pass lea chalti hu..

Jo ki iswaqt shubha ke 8 bajne par b apne bi apne bistar par aaram se leti hui thi..

Par bichari ka chera dekh lagraha tha ki raatko kafi roi ho wo..

Par usse kya pata tha ki ab swayam bagwan he uska putr ke roop mea aane wale the...

Chalo isko b pata chalwa dete hea..
Tabi usse sapna aaya..
Jisme wo ek andheri jagha me kaid thi..
Jaha sirf dur dur tak gana andhera tha..

Aarti ye sab dekh gabra gayi thi..
Isliye..
Wo yaha waha dornelagi..
Or raaj (raaj bahadur) ko pukarne lagi..

Tabi uske samne achanak ek rosni prakat hui or us roshni ko dekh aarti or gabra gayi..

Tabi usmea se ek awaj aai..

Gabro nai aarti mea yaha tumhari sahayata karne aaya hu..

Roshni ke muh se apna naam sun aarti chounk gayi or uske kadam wahi ke wahi jam gaye or wo ek tak ussi roshni ke taraf dekh rahi thi..

Tabi uss roahni ka aakar badalne lagga or dhire dhire kar khud omni king aarti ke samne khare the..

Par aarti ko kya pata ki uske samne kon he isliye wo ek tak samne wale ko matlab omni king ko dekhe jarahi thi..

Tabi fir omni king bole..

Beta mea janta hu tumme ek bache ki lalsa he or pichle kuch salo mea tumhare sath kya hua ye b muje pata hea..
Par ab tumhe bohot jak putr sukh prapt hoga par usme ek muskil hea..

Aarti toa pehle he omni king ko apne bareme mea ye sab janta dekh chounki huyi thi.
Or ab unki last wali bate sun usse laga ki..
Usko barso ki maa banne ki murad ab puri hogi..
Isliye usne turant he jawab diya..

Kaisi muskil baba..
Pls mea apse minatee mangti hu kuch b kare par muje ek bache ke banne ke sukh prapt hojaye..
Baba..
Mea har muskil se gujarne ko tayar hu..

Aarti ki ek bache ke prati chah or lagav dekh omni king ko laga ki aarti he sayi hogi rakshak ke janam ke liyea..

Tabi we bole..

Beti tumhare nasib mea ek putr laab he or wo bohot jald is duniya mea kadam rakhega parantu..

Itna bol omni king wahi rakgaye..

Aarti unhe yu rukta dekh kafi dar si gayi thi isliye ruaasi awaj mea boli..

Baba mea har muskilo ko jelne ke liye tayar hu..
Aap sirf bolke toa dekhiye..

Omni king - beti tumhara jo beta hoga uska janam jan heet ke liye hone wala hea isliye usme kayi devya saktiya b hongi..
Ye oro bacho se kafi alag hoga..

Par kehte heana jaha achai he wahi burai b milegi..
Toa tumhare bete mea swayam kaam dev ka ansh hoga..
Jisse usme kaam dev ki b saktiya hogi..
Jisse bavishya me uske liye koi b rista mayne ni rakega..

Omni king ki baate sun aarti apne gutno ke bal beth gayi..
Or rote huye boli..
Ye sab mere sath he q hota he..
Ab tak ek bache ke liye taras rahi thi or ab jab uske hone ki asha ki kiran dikhi toa ye sab hogaya..

Itna bol aarti fir rone lagi..

Omni king ko b bichari par daya aane lagi thi..
Isliye we bole..

Beti isme rone jaisa kuch ni hea ye sab toa niyati ka khel hea..
Tumhare bete ko puri duniya juk kar pranam karegi..
Wo sabi ke liye hamesa acha he sochega ha par kaam dev ka ansh hone ke karan kaam wasna mea uski bari ruchi rahegi..

Par issbe bari takleef ye heki wo itna jada taqatwar hoga..
Ki muje dar he ki wo kahi isi taqat ke ahankar or gamand ke niche na dab jaye..

Isliye usse tumhe bohot achi parwarish deni hogi taki bare hone par uska pehla udeshya dusro ki bhalayi ho..

Omni king bato se aarti sambal chuki thi or usne kaha..

Tk hea babaji mea apne bete ko bohot achi parwarish dungi..

Omni king - or haa beti tumhare beta uske nanhi haal mea he janam lena chahiye..
Isliye ho sake toa jald he waha chalijana..

Itna bol omni king waha se chale gaye..

Or aarti ki b nind khul gayi..

Aarti nind se jaag kar soch mea dub gayi..
Ki aakhir jo kuch b usne dekha kya wo sach tha..

Yahi sab sochte huye wo apni din chariya mea vyast ho gai..

Or aise he 4 mahine bit gaye..

Or ab aarti 3 mahine ki pet se thi..
Or usse ab jo kuch b usne dekha tha wo sab sach lagne lagga tha isliye usne raaj ko b apna sapne ke bareme batane ko socha isliye wo raatka besabri se intazar kar rahi thi..

Or wahi AR grp of companies ke head quarter mea bethe raaj kafi pareshan tha..
Q ye kal bataungi..
Gn frnds

To tayyaria ho gayi hain. Stage is set for new one to come. Ab yah aarti pe depend karta hain ki woh kis raste usko lagati hain. Aur scientists ke RAAZ bhi abhi poshida hi hain.

 

[sonukale]

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