Romance Rishta nibhana na aaya

[Smith_15]

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[Rudra@14]

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Aaj aa jayega bhai.lagbhag likh chuka hu bass edit karke upload karna hai. 11 baje tak aa jayega.

 

[Smith_15]

1:17pm, no update

 

[Smith_15]

No update brother

 

[Smith_15]

No update brother

 

[Smith_15]

When will the update come.

 

[Smith_15]

Bhai tuesday ho gaya but update nahi aaya.

 

[Rudra@14]

Bhai tuesday ho gaya but update nahi aaya

Sorry bhai nahi de paya. Mujhe time hi nhi mil raha. Jabki updates likhe hue hai. Bass edit karke upload karna hai. Abhi itna busy ho gya hu na bhai abhi 2 baje free hua hu. Khana abhi aadhe ghante pahle khaya hai bhai. Shaadi ka time hai bhai bahut busy hu. Mujhe kabhi v aadhe ghante ka v time Mila bhai mai upload kar dunga.

 

[Naik]

रिश्ता निभाने ना आये

कहीं कसमें खाके भी रिश्ता निभाने ना आये।
भूलकर भी ना भूलने के बहाने ना आये।।

रुलाया है तुमने खुद को मुझ से भी ज्यादा।
तब ही आज हमें हँसाने ना आये।।

दारु और दवा दोनों बन गये हो तुम।
पर जहर भी ख़ुशी से पिलाने ना आये।।

सवालिया निशाँ तेरी खूबूसरती पर।
कभी हमारा घर सजाने ना आये।।

लगे अपनों ने ही छीन ली मेरी निंदिया
प्यार की झंकार सुनाने ना आne diya।।

जगमगाते तारों से उलझते रहे रातभर।
बेकाबू इन जुल्फों से सुलझाने ना आये।।

Bahot khoobsurat gazal shaandaar

 

[Naik]

Update -1


"Lalallaaaaa.....llaaaalllaaaaaaallllllaaaaalalallalllllllaaaaalalalalalalalalalalll"

rishta nibhana na aaya lalllallalalalla....

raat ke 1 baje ek ladka ek ghar ke samne khada hai aur chillam pite hue dhuaan par dhuaan uda raha hai. Aur aansu bahaye jaa raha hai.

Aur saath me gaa raha hai.... Lalllallalalalla lalllallalalalla rishta nibhana na aaya..... Lalllallalalalla lalllallalalalla lalllallalalalla

Ladka dhire dhire chalte hue chillam pite hue aage jaa raha tha. Iss lambi kali ghani raat me kuch alag hi bedhanga pan tha usss ladke ki chaal me. Lambe kaale ghane baal kaali aankhein shyamla-halka genhua raang ka chahra magar aakarshak. 6 feet height sarir se tagda malum hota hai. Fir v Naa jaane Dil me kaun si aag lagi hai ki shaant hi nhi rahta.

Ek ekant jagah jaakar baith gya. Yeh jagah Mandir thi. Khaas baat yeh thi ki Mandir me baith ke samshaan dikh jata. Aisa hi haal iss ladke kaa v tha. Mandir me sab jivaan apna uddeshya khojne aate hai magar usse apna sab kuch samsan me Nazar ata.

Ladka- lagta hai aaj v koi aapse milne pahuch gya. Mujhe kab bulaoge. Hahahahahah hahahahaha hahhaha.

ladka wahi baitha rahta hai thik 4 baje kapde khol kar wahi sath bane talab me naha kar bholenath ki pooja karne lagta hai. Pooja khatam karke ladka wahi baith ke fir chillam ke kasa marne lagta hai.

Aaj mausam kuch badla hua tha iss garmi ke mausam me v halki thandi hawa chal rahi thi. Suraj v jaldi nikalne ki purjor koshish kar raha tha magar badal usse dhake hue the.

kuch samay baad ...

"mujhe v milega bholenath ka parsad" ek aghori ne uss ladke se kaha.

ladka sar utha ke dekhta hai. Ek daityakar insan lagbhag 7 foot ka halki kali ujli dadhi sayad avi jawani khatam hui ho. Magar fir v sarir se balisht.

Ladka- haa baba kyu nhi..

Aghori ( chillam ka kas lekar) - mere saath chaloge. Yeh joh dard hai tumhare andar isko Kam kar sakte ho magar khatam nhi kar sakte. Lekin ek naya lakshay sayad tumhe nayi zindagi de de.

ladka- ( fiki muskan lekar) baba abb yeh dard hi mere pass hai uski aakhri nishani ke taur par. Yeh dard mujhe apni zindagi se jaydi pyaari hai.

aghori- yeh tumhara apna niji jiwan hai. Magar tum chaho toh aise hazaro laakhon ki madad kar sakte ho. Jaisa tumhare saath hua sayad kisi ke saath na ho.

ladka- lagta hai bholenath ke Jayda hi param bhakt ho jiske karan mere baare me kuch Jayda hi pata hai.

aghori- chaloge mere saath.

ladka- ab kisi kaam ka toh nhi magar sayad bhagwaan kisi aur ki madad karwa rahe hai toh acchi baat hai.

Aghori- chalo apna saman baandh ke yahi milna kal.

ladka-rahne dijiye. Mujhe kuch nhi chahiye.

after 4 years........

Badhiya shuruwat
Dekhte h aghori baba kaha leker jaa rehe iss naujawan ko