Incest Rishta

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

You use plain , simple language , short words and brief sentence...... That's the way to write.

As always awesome....

 

[amita]

You use plain , simple language , short words and brief sentence...... That's the way to write.

As always awesome....

Thanks for the comments

 

[happyraj]

Update post kar diya hai

nice

 

[Rajesh Sarhadi]

Perfect portrayal of Ruchika's mindset, though married with father yet the daughter in her keeps coming back and makes her stop Mohanlal to get free access, on the other hand Monhanlal too is acting mature as expected, restraining himself but his limit is expiring, the only way infront of him is to make Ruchika extremely hot unable to stop his advances.

 

[happyraj]

Welcome to the Thread.

Thanks for reading, liking and appreciatimg

u r most welcome

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Thanks for the comments

अमिता जी... आप के लिखने का जो स्टाइल है..... समझने वाली भाषा में ।........हर कोई उसे फील कर सके ।....... ऐसे ही तो कहानियां लिखते हैं । वो लेंग्वेज किस काम का जहां किसी तरह की फीलिंग न हो । और आप की लेखनी में वो जबरदस्त फीलिंग है।

 

[amita]

nice

Thanks for liking and enjoying

 

[amita]

Perfect portrayal of Ruchika's mindset, though married with father yet the daughter in her keeps coming back and makes her stop Mohanlal to get free access, on the other hand Monhanlal too is acting mature as expected, restraining himself but his limit is expiring, the only way infront of him is to make Ruchika extremely hot unable to stop his advances.

Your review is no doubt marvelous. It described everything in nutshell.

Your valuable suggestions would be taken care of.

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[amita]

u r most welcome

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[amita]

अमिता जी... आप के लिखने का जो स्टाइल है..... समझने वाली भाषा में ।........हर कोई उसे फील कर सके ।....... ऐसे ही तो कहानियां लिखते हैं । वो लेंग्वेज किस काम का जहां किसी तरह की फीलिंग न हो । और आप की लेखनी में वो जबरदस्त फीलिंग है।

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