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[amita]

Mangalasutra scene was very good, I felt very good. I enjoyed the update. Each activity between the two was very sensual and lovely. I understand everything but I am not able to say it in words. Ruchika is not mentally prepared or scared for the first time, it will take a little time to prepare herself.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Once again Fantastic review.
Well you liked the scene gives me pleasure.

Further I would like to tell you that Ruchika was mentally ready as per the Update, however she was worried about the start of the menstrual cycle on Suhagraat.

Anyway Thanks so much for your constant support

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[amita]

so nice

Thanks so much for appreciating and sharing your views

 

[player7]

Once again Fantastic review.
Well you liked the scene gives me pleasure.

Further I would like to tell you that Ruchika was mentally ready as per the Update, however she was worried about the start of the menstrual cycle on Suhagraat.

Anyway Thanks so much for your constant support

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Amita you are excellent but aakash your reviw is always suprtb amita you are so lucky though your supporters are as well best

 

[amita]

Amita you are excellent but aakash your reviw is always suprtb amita you are so lucky though your supporters are as well best

Thanks for the appreciation.
Your comments have weight

 

[happyraj]

apane

so nice lov

 

[Rajesh Sarhadi]

how could I miss this twist, not a twist rather the only way left to open up between the two where Ruchika said she wanted to proceed further but for periods hence that turmoil which we expected as readers did not exist it was nature's role which helped them open up much more.
Well done, you know how to play and depict a character's feelings and your writing has a depth which one seldom sees.

 

[amita]

so nice lov

Thanks for reading, liking and appreciating.

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[Rajesh Sarhadi]

may I dare asking for an update tonight....pehli baar request ki hai

 

[amita]

how could I miss this twist, not a twist rather the only way left to open up between the two where Ruchika said she wanted to proceed further but for periods hence that turmoil which we expected as readers did not exist it was nature's role which helped them open up much more.
Well done, you know how to play and depict a character's feelings and your writing has a depth which one seldom sees.

I knew from the beginning that with this twist my Readers would run away as I shattered their hopes.

However, Real Reader would accept it with grace. Moreover you are a great Writer yourself, so you can understand the depth of this particular twist. I expected such intelligent review from you and it's there, which is the fruit of my hard work behind this Mega update and would expect such critical reviews from your end, not necessarily appreciation rather criticism is equally welcome.

Thanks so much

 

[amita]

may I dare asking for an update tonight....pehli baar request ki hai

You would definitely get an update tonight, but it could be around Midnight.