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Please read and review at your leisure.Not read yet......just a walkthrough.......will reveal lots.......and all future happenings will depend on this.......
Thank you......
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Story ho to amita ka Rishta ho , kya likhti he yeh madamUpdate 73
Mohanlal aur Ruchika kamre me aa gaye tu Mohanlal ne Ruchika ko apani banhon me bhar liya aur uske hothon par apane hothon ko rakhkar uska chumban lene laga tu Ruchika ne kaha 'Lipistick kharab ho jayegi' tu Mohanlal ne usse kaha 'Lipistick ki chinta hai, meri nahi' aur ye sunte hi Ruchika ne bhi uske hothon ko chumne me sath dene lagi. Mohanlal uski kamar ko pakad kar apane se liptate hue 'You are my Love' aur uske nitambon ko daba diya tu vo fir peeche hone lagi tu Mohanlal ne usse peeche nahi hone diya aur ek hath tu uska nitamb par tha aur dusre hath ko Ruchika ke boobs ko press karne laga. Ruchika ne apane hath ko uske hath par rakhte hue 'Chalen, nahi tu flight miss ho jayegi' Mohanlal ne kaha 'itni sundar biwi banhon me ho' tu ek kya sau flight bhi chhut jayen tu gam nahi' Tab Ruchika ne kaha 'chalte hain nahi tu aapke dost pata nahi kya kya sochenge. Fir Mohanlal ne beman se kaha 'Theek hai chalo' aur vo donon flight pakadkar ghar aa gaye.
Ghar panhuchne ke baad agle din subah subah hi Mohanlal chala gaya. Mohanlal ke jane ke baad Ruchika ka man nahi lag raha tha. Usse lag raha tha ki kucch tu tha aisa jisse usse khalipan ka ehsaas hone lagata. Sara din uski Mom Sandhya jo ab ek tarah se uski soutan bhi ban chuki thi, uske addmission ki vajah se uss par bahut pyaar nyochavar kar rahi thi.
Vo man me soch rahi thi ki uski beti ab hostel me chali jayegi tu uske sath jayada se jayada waqt bitaun. Uss bechari ko kya pata tha ki uski jaan se jayada pyari beti ne uske Pati par hi daka daal diya hai. Ruchika udass lag rahi thi. Uski udassi ko Sandhya samajh rahi thi ki vo ghar se dur ja rahi hai, shayad isliye preshan hai, iss baat ko sochate hue Sandhya apani beti Ruchika ko samjhane me lagi hui thi ki usse chinta karne ki jarurat nahin hai aur uska jab man kare ghar aa Jaye ya kisi ko bula le. Uss bechari ko kya pata th ki vo apane hi pair par kulhadi maar rahi hai.
Ruchika ka man bilkul nahi lag raha tha aur vo jaldi se jaldi Mohanlal se baat karna chah rahi thi lekin uski Mom usse akele chhod hi nahi rahi thi. Udhar Mohanlal bhi baat karna chah raha tha lekin uske man me dar tha ki kahin baat karte hue Sandhya ke samne unka Raaj khul na jaye isliye usne apane man ko pakka karke phone na karne ki sochi.
Raat ko sone ke waqt Ruchika ke naye number ke whatsapp par Mohanlal ka message aaya
M : kaisi hai meri jaan
Ruchika ne jaise hi message dekha uske dil ki dhadkan badh gayi aur usne apane kamre se bahar aakar dekha ki baki sab shayad so gaye hain, lekin usne apane kamre ki andar se kundi lagai aur fir bed par lait kar Mohanlal ko yaad karte hue
R: Main theek hun, aap kaise hain
M: Main apani Jaan ke bina kaisa hounga
R: Fir mujhe akela kyoun chhod kar chale gaye
M: kya karta, tumhari Mom ko tu maine kaha tha ki Main tumhare sath nahi ja paunga aur usne sath jane ke liye jid ki thi, isliye gaya tha. Ab agar Main ruk jata tu usse pata lag jata ki kucch gadbad hai, isliye vanha se yanha aa gaya.
R: Aap mana kar dete jane se aur koi bahana bana dete
M: Tumne bhi tu kaha tha ki abhi paanch din ruk jao
R: Maine ye thodhi na kaha tha ki mujhse dur chale jao
M: Main dur kanha hun
R: Mere paas bhi tu nahi ho
M: ye samajh ka fer hai, vaise tum tu mere dil me ho
R: Ab aapse duri bardasht nahi ho rahi
M: vaise tu Main tum se dur nahi hu, fir bhi agar tumhari baat maan bhi lu tu
Duriyon Se Hi Ehsaas Hota Hai Ki;
Nazdikiya Kitni Khaas Hoti Hain.
R: Aankhon ki zuban woh samajh nahin paate,
Honth magar kuch bhi keh nahin paate,
Apni bay basi kis tarah kahain,
Koi hay jis k bina hum rah nahin paate.
M: Meri zindagi meri Jaan Ho tum,
Mere sukoon Ka dusra Naam ho tum.
R: Fir bhi mujhse dur ho
M: Ye soch hai apani apani, tum tu mere dil me, tum bhi zara apane dil ko tatolo, main mil jaunga.
R: Aap kab aaoge
M: Tum jis din addmission ke liye jaogi, Main aaunga aur tumhare sath akele me waqt bitaunga
R: Mujhe intezaar rahega
M: ab so jao
R: Mujhe neend nahi aayegi
M: aankhein band karo aur mujhe dekho neend aa jayegi
R: koshish karti hun, nahi tu phone kar dungi
M: Jarurat nahi padegi, Good Night.
Aise hi paanch din beet gaye aur Mohanlal vapis aa gaya aur uski jaruri cheezon ki khariddari karwa kar usse chhodne jana tha tu Sandhya ne Mohanlal se Ruchika ke sath jakar usse chhodne ke liye kaha. Mohanlal ne aisa dikhaya jaise vo jane me asmarth hai lekin Sandhya ki vajah se ja raha hai aur vo sab sone chale gaye. Mohanlal aur Ruchika ka man tu nahi lag raha tha sone ke liye, lekin majburi thi tu so gaye aur un donon ke man me yahi tha ki vanha jakar akele me waqt bitane ka mouka milega.
Agle din Mohanlal aur Ruchika jaldi hi taiyar ho gaye aur jane ke liye unhone Taxi bulwai thi. Jab vo jane lage tu Sandhya bhi taiyar hokar aa gayi aur unhe kehne lagi ki vo bhi sath jayegi. Un donon ke liye tu ye sunna kisi shock se kam nahi tha. Ruchika ne kaha bhi ki vo Papa ke sath chali jayegi tu Sandhya ne kaha 'kyoun tu nahi chahti ki Main dekhun ki meri beti vanhan aaram se rah bhi payegi ya nahi' Usne baat hi aisi kahi thi ki un donon ko man maarkar chup rehna pada.
Ruchika tu bilkul hi uddas ho gayi. Sandhya ne uski udassi dekhkar kaha ki 'abhi ghar se nikal rahi ho tu uddas ho gayi aur jab vanha akeli rahogi tu kya hoga, maine isliye tumhare sath jane ka faisla kiya hai. Mohanlal usse kya kehkar aur kaise mana kare, uski samajh se pare tha, isliye beman se Sandhya ko bhi sath chalne ke liye bol diya.
Ab kai dinon se Mohanlal aur Ruchika enjoy karne ka plan banate rahe aur ek hi jhatke me unke plan ki dhajjiya udd gayi, isliye vo donon preshan ho rahe the aur pareshani un donon ke cheron par saaf saaf jhalak rahi thi jo Sandhya se chhupi nahi rahi. Usne Mohanlal se iss bare me puccha tu usne kaha ki vo yeh soch raha tha ki Ruchika ko chhodne ke baad vanhi se flight pakadkar chala jayega, lekin ab usse Sandhya ko chhodne aana padega. Sandhya ne kaha ki vo akeli vapis aa jayegi tu Mohanlal ne mana kar diya aur kah ki vo chhodne aayega.
Taxi aane ke baad teenon ne taxi me saman rakha aur Mohanlal aage baithne laga tu un donon ne mana kar diya aur kaha ki nahi teenon peeche baithenge aur gappe marenge.
Sabse pehle Ruchika, fir Sandhya aur fir Mohanlal pichali seat par baith gaye. Taxi liuxry thi, jisme driver aur passanger ke beech ke parde ko gira diya jane se pichali seat ki privacy bani rahti hai. Mohanlal ne ye Taxi isliye book karwai thi ki vo Ruchika ke sath privacy enjoy kar sake, lekin yanha tu Sandhya ke aane se uske mansubo par pani fir gaya tha. Khair unhone parda gira diya aur privacy bana li.
Sandhya Ruchika ki taraf munh karke 'Dekh kucch rah gaya ho tu bata de, ya tu aaj hi kharid lena nahi tu paise de dete hain, tum apane aap le lena'
Ruchika 'Nahin abhi tu koi khaas jarurat nahi lag rahi, lekin jab jarurat hogi tu aapse maang lungi, aap mana tu nahi karogi na'
Sandhya 'Tujhe pata hai ki tumhare liye main kucch bhi kar sakti hun, tum bilkul bhi chinta na karna, bejhijhak hokar maang lena'
Ruchika 'Aisi koi cheez jo aapko bahut pyari ho aur vo mujhe bhi chahiye ho tab main aapse kaise mang paungi'
Sandhya 'Dekh agar aisi koi cheez tujhe jarurat hai tu abhi bata abhi ke abhi de dungi aur uff bhi nahi karungi. Koi bhi cheez chahe mujhe kitni bhi pyari ho, vo tumhari khushi se jyada keemati nahi ho sakti'
Ruchika unki baat sunkar unke gale lag jati hai aur kehti hai 'Aap bahut mahan hai' uski aankhon me thodhi nami aa jati hai aur man me sochne lagti hai ki maine sahi kiya ya galat. Vo apani Mom ke gale lagi hoti hai ki Mohanlal jo Sandhya ke banyi side me baitha hota hai, vo Ruchika ke galon ko apane hathon se sehla deta hai, jisse Ruchika thodhi dar jati hai ki kahin uski Mom ko pata na vhal jaye. Vo apani aankhein upar karke Mohanlal ko na karne ka ishara karti hai tu Mohanlal ulta aur jor se uske galon ko sehla deta hai tu vo Sandhya se dur jane lagti hai tu Mohanlal uske hath ko pakad kar apani taraf kheencta hai. Sandhya ko aisa lagta hai jaise Ruchika ne usse chhoda aur fir bhavuk hokar fir se jor se gale lag gayi ho. Ruchika ki peeth ko sehlate hue Sandhya ne kaha 'chinta na karo, jab bhi tumhe kisi cheez ki jarurat ho bas ek phone kar dena' tabhi Mohanlal ne uska hath aur jayada kheencha tu Sandhya ko laga ki vo jayada bhavuk ho gayi hai. Sandhya ne usse kaha 'chal chal bahut ho gaya chinta na kar, main tujhe kabhi bhi koi takleef nahi hone dungi, mujhse jo ban padega karungi'
Ruchika apane hath ko Mohanlal ke hath se chhuda kar seedhi hokar baith gayi. Uske dil ki dhadkan badhi hui thi. Usse accha bhi lag raha tha ki uske Papa jo ab Pati bhi hain uski Mom ke hote hue usse chhedne me gurej nahi kar rahe the, lekin usse ye dar bhi laga hua tha ki uski Mom ko pata chal gaya tu pata nahi kya hoga. Apane dil ki dhadkan ko sanyat karne ke liye usne apani nazre neeche kar li taki usse Mohanlal ki nazron ka samna na karna pade.
Sandhya ab Mohanlal ki taraf mudkar kehne lagi 'Dekho ji Ruchika ko koi bhi taklif nahi honi chahiye aur haan isse kucch bhi chahiye tu aapko mujhse kucch bhi pucchane ki jarurat nahin hai, balki uski har khawahish puri kar dena'
Mohanlal 'Tum usse itna pyaar dikhaogi tu ye bigad jayegi'
Sandhya 'Agar aap mujhse pyaar karte hain tu uski har baat manoge aur usse koi bhi taklif na ho'
Mohanlal ne apani danyi baju uski gardan ke peeche se uske kandhe par le jakar usse apane aagosh me karte hue kaha 'Tum janti ho main tumhari baat ko mana nahin karta lekin iski har baat manogi tu iske bigadane ke chances hain' Ruchika ne ye baat suni tu usne Mohanlal ke haath par chikoti kaat li. Mohanlal ke munh se 'aah' nikali tu Sandhya ne uski taraf dekha tu Mohanlal ne apane chehre ke bhavon ko chupate hue kaha 'kaash tum iss tarah mere sath ghumane Jaya karti'
Sandhya ke kuch kehne se pehle hi Ruchika ne ek chikoti aur kaat li. Mohanlal apane upar niyantran rakhte hue Ruchika ki taraf gusse se dekhta hai tu vo usse apani jeebh nikalkar chidhati hai. Idhar Sandhya apane sar ko Mohanlal ke kandhe par rakh deti hai aur kehti hai 'aap ye samajh lena ki agar aap Ruchika ki koi baat maan rahe ho tu vo aap meri baat maan rahe hain na ki Ruchika ki'
Mohanlal usse apane paas karte hue kehta hai ki 'ab tum aaram kar lo, safar lamba hai aur tumhe aadat bhi nahi hai tu thak jaogi' Sandhya uski baat maankar apani aankhein band kar leti hai. Thodhi der gujri hogi ki Mohanlal ne apane hath ko dheere se Ruchika ki taraf badha kar uske kandhe par rakhna chaha tu Ruchika ne apane aap ko thodha dur kar liya jisse Mohanlal ka hath uss tak na panhuch paye.
Mohanlal ne usse aankhon ke ishare se paas aane ke liye kaha tu Ruchika ne gardan hila kar mana kar diya. Mohanlal ab usse request karta raha aur Ruchika kab tak dur rehti kyounki uska man bhi tu Mohanlal ki banhon me jane ka kar raha tha, lekin vo jagah aisi thi ki uski Mom ko pata chal gaya tu uska kya hoga, iss dar se nazdik nahin aa rahi thi. Fir pata nahi usne kya socha ki vo najdik aa gayi tu Mohanlal ne apane hath ko uske kandhe par rakh kar uski gardan aur kandhe ke beech ki jagah ko sehlane laga jisse Ruchika ko bhi accha lagne laga.
Mohanlal ne ab apane hath ko uski gardan se gaal par le gaya aur sehalate hue beech beech me masal bhi raha tha tu Ruchika ke munh se sisakariyan nikalane lagi, lekin Ruchika ne chunni ko apane munh me lete hue in siskariyon ko daba diya taki uske munh se nikalne wali aawaze Sandhya na sun le. Mohanlal apane hath ko gaal ko sehalate hue pichale hisse me lejakar kaan ke neeche ke hisse ko sehlane laga tu Ruchika se bardasht karna mushkil ho raha tha aur usne Mohanlal ka hath pakad ka usse apane se dur kar diya aur khud lambi lambi saansen lene lagi.
Mohanlal intezaar kar raha tha ki kab uski saansen sambhle aur vo usse apane nazdik bulaye. Jab usne Ruchika ko apane nazdik fir se aane ke liye kaha tu vo mana karne lagi. Tabhi Mohanlal ki nazar uske boobs par padi jo dupatte ke hatne ki vajah se kafi had tak nagan ho gayi thi. Mohanlal unhe niharate hue Ruchika ko nazdik aane ke liye manata raha aur iss baar vo jaise hi paas aayi tu Mohanlal ne seedha uske boobs ko pakad kar masal diya jiski vajah se Ruchika ke munh se jor ki awaz nikali jisse Sandhya ki bhi kacchi neend khul si gayi aur pucchane lagi 'kya hua'
Your review truly depicts how much deeply you have been involved in this story.Emotions at war truly depicted. On one side Ruchika is haapy and desirous of Mohanlal on otherside she is sad to have stolen the most loved person from her mom, to satisfy her guilt she asks her mom will you give your most loved thing to me, she dare not say person as it would unfolded the deceit committed by father and daughter. On the other hand it seems that deep in heart Sandhya knows about Mohanlal's interest in her daughter and that is why she keeps pushing him towards her asking again and again that he would satisfy and keep the daughter always happy. Sandhya feels guilty not to have carnally satisfied Mohanlal and not being part of his society for being uneducated due to which she developed a lot of complexes. And these complexes were solved by her son not by her husband that is why she started loving her son and became all out ready to go further with him, though it was difficult for her being mom too yet internally she realised she has no one else to fall back upon and that her son was always there be she behaves like mom or like GF, she could realise that this dual behaviour tormented her son to keep shifting roles and live under fear, lest she becomes angry and hence she finally took her decision she she wanted to by his GF and would live up to the role of a modern day GF.
Very well done Amita, the most important factor in this story was to leave hidden clues for readers to ponder upon and some direct influences of surroundings of each charachter to understand why what is happening and you are a master in that.
Kya sahi vishleshan kiya hai aur kam shabdon me sab byaan kar diya.बेचारी रूचिका ! दिल के अरमां आसूंओं में बह गए । ?
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Awesome n Sweet Update.
Thanks AmitaPlease read and review at your leisure.
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Marvelous Review, charectrising each character's domain and possible thinking.Shortly, the two are unhappy with each other and both are desperate to meet again, showing their immense love. Most people read the story, I feel the story.
Sandhya is playing the role of kabab me haddi. ?? Sandhya does not know what Ruchika is talking about, she is unaware of the reality. Mother daughter's love is amazing, but knowing the reality, anything can go wrong. ? When the children go out of the house, we worry, the same is happening with Sandhya. ?
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Update is in progress. Hope to post tonightwaiting for next