Incest Rishta

[amita]

Bahot shaandaar khoobsurat update amita ji

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[amita]

Story ho to amita ka Rishta ho , kya likhti he yeh madam

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[Rocky 4]

Good 1

 

[amita]

Thanks Amita

A small update (length wise) but very interesting one. As I said earlier this update will reveals lots and will establish the direction of upcoming updates

Ruchika - A kind of mixed emotions - Guilt, cheating, envy, love and jealousy

Guilt and Cheating - Taking away Sandhya husband from her and keeping her in dark about their newly developed relationship .....well no body will reveal if did such kind of act

Envy, Love and Jealousy - Can't tolerate Mohanlal cosiness with his first mom albeit her mom - woman behaviour - love that behaviour.

The upcoming updates will establish Sandhya's strong stand why she drifted towards her son as his girlfriend. Perhaps she will discover her husband and daughter new relationship and out of anger and revenge she want to establish the same kind with her son..... but AFIK anger and revenge will never be a part of your story......only love...and only Amita can reveal...., Women sixth sense are very powerful

Mohanlal Ji is now getting bolder and daring arousing Ruchika in her mom presence, squeezing Ruchika boobs very hard. No sign of remorse and fear.....aur ek baat Mohanlal Ji ke haath bade lambe hain......

In the end love your update as usual......keep entertaining readers like us with your superb style of story writing and narration......

Thank you....

What a detailed analysis?
Would say analysis not a Review.

You have detailed everything with possible future directions, which makes me scarry that my updates are becoming predictable.

Happy to see your in depth involvement.

Well length wise update was lengthy as per the number of words, however I can understand that 'Dil mange more' and would like to update soon.


Thanks so much for such a nice analysis

 

[amita]

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[Iron Man]

Waiting for next update

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

Kya sahi vishleshan kiya hai aur kam shabdon me sab byaan kar diya.

Vaise shabdon ki sankhya ke hisaab se tu update bada tha, haan aap sahi hain kyonki yatra puri hone se pehle samapt ho gaya.

Aapki baat ka pura dhyaan rakha jayega.

Dhanyavaad

क्या करूं ? बढ़िया लगता है तो सोचता हूं कि कुछ और पढ़ता । लेकिन आप दिन रात मेहनत करके हफ्ते में कई बार अपडेट दे देती हैं तो ज्यादा प्रेशर भी नहीं दे सकता ।

लेकिन दिल है कि मानता नहीं..... वेटिंग नेक्स्ट अपडेट ?

 

[Rajesh Sarhadi]

waiting

 

[player7]

Varsha ritu you are absolutely right amita is doing her best but ye dil ha ke manta nahi

 

[Naik]

Update ka intizar h amita ji