Incest Rishta

[amita]

Very well written Amita ji..
Liked the way how you have shown this encounter but it should have been more erotic than it would have created magic.......

This is my personal opinion, so don't mind it. This is not for hurting your sentiments...

Thanks for liking it.

Well your suggestions are welcome, however it has been done to avoid duplicacy. Anyway will take care about your suggestions.

Thanks once again

 

[amita]

nice update ..dobara prem me doob gaye maa bete ya kaho premi ?..

Thanks for liking and leave it to you what they are now

 

[amita]

Bahot shaandaar lajawab update amita ji

Aapne isse saraha, bahut khushi hui.
Aage bhi jude rahiye.
Dhanyavad

 

[amita]

ek sawal tha ki kya sandhya ki bimari theek ho gayi ?? use sex karne se yoni me koi problem hoti thi ( pura yaad nahi kya thi problem ) ..ab to 2 baar kar rahe hai dono ..

Mujhe bahut khushi hui ki Aapne yeh prasahan puccha jo yeh batata hai ki aap ek jagruk Pathak hain.

Vaise aapko baata dun ki aapke prashan ka jawaab pehle hi Update 37 me de diya gaya tha ki kaise jaan bhujkar Sandhya ne dawai nahi khayi thi aur ab dawai khane se vo normal behave kar rahi hai.

Dhanyavad

 

[amita]

exactly............ahi mera sawal tha.............
mohan aur sandhya ke beech dooriyan hi isi pareshani ki wajah se bani thi............
isiliye mohan jadatar bahar rahta tha

ab bete ke sath 2-2 bar kar liya sandhya ne

Aaj kafi waqt ke baad Aapke comments phadne ko mile bahut khushi hui.


Vaise aapko baata dun ki aapke prashan ka jawaab pehle hi Update 37 me de diya gaya tha ki kaise jaan bhujkar Sandhya ne dawai nahi khayi thi aur ab dawai khane se vo normal behave kar rahi hai.

Janha tak mujhe yaad hai Aapne iss baat par react bhi kiya tha ki khud hi ilaaj nahi kar rahi aur dosh Mohanlal par.

Dhanyavad

 

[amita]

Bahot shaandaar kamukta se bharpoor update amita ji

Thanks so much once again for appreciating

 

[amita]

Often people get lost in the euphoria of love and they are not conscious and then all understand later. Well, both of them have surrendered to each other, I am happy with it but it happened very soon, I did not expect it. The movements between the two was very erotic.
Don't know why I didn't enjoy it this time, maybe I didn't read it properly, but something is wrong.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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I am happy to note that you don't hide your emotions whether you like or don't like.

Well, going through your review I am sorry to say that you didn't enjoy as it happened so early. It may be sometimes that the story is not going as per your expectations, but it has been written as the requirements of the story line.

Thanks so much

 

[kamdev99008]

no comment

 

[Jassybabra]

Nice

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

bilkul sahi bataya aapne..................
ab aage sandhya aur mohanlal ka ek dusre se is mudde par aamna samna hone ka intzar hai.............

tab isi sawal ka jawab sandhya mohanlal ko kya degi.................?
mohan ko janbujhkar saalo-saal tak tadpane ke baad............ab khud dusre se usi maje ko lene ke liye apni marji se dawa khane lagi
mohanlal ne agar ruchika se rishta joda to uski janbujhkar ki gayi galti nahi............natural need thi...jise sandhya pura nahi kar rahi thi...kahne par bhi
lekin kya sandhya...................is adhaar par khud ko sahi to kya..............galat na hone ka bhi pramanit kar payegi

शायद दो बच्चों के होने के बाद संध्या की योनि में प्रोब्लम हुई थी....उसे डर था कि कहीं इसका इलाज करवाने से उसके जान पर खतरा न बन जाए और फिर उसके दोनों बच्चों का देखभाल सही तरीके से न हो पाए..... आखिर उसका हसबैंड मोहनलाल तो हमेशा टुर पर ही रहता था ।

या हो सकता है कि संध्या को मोहनलाल पसंद ही न हो.... क्योंकि जैसा झुकाव उसका आदित्य पर हुआ है वैसा झुकाव मोहनलाल के लिए था ही नहीं ।
या हो सकता है कि मोहनलाल को संध्या से वैसा प्रेम नहीं हो जैसा प्रेम उसने रूचिका के लिए दर्शाया है....... रूचिका तैयार है सेक्स के लिए लेकिन मोहनलाल उसके जरा जरा सी दुखों का ख्याल करके उसके साथ सेक्स करने से मना कर देता है जबकि संध्या की प्रोब्लम जानते हुए भी उससे हमेशा सेक्स की इच्छा जताता है ।
फिर भी कुछ सवाल तो है ही लेकिन फिल्म अभी बाकी है ।