Incest Rishta

[pie]

nice update ..kahani me naya mode aa gaya ..sandhya ki yaddasht chali gayi aur wo maa bhi ban gayi ..
par gussa tha aditya se phir bhi ghar chhodkar jaane ka faisla galat liya .
shruti ki bhi shadi ho gayi ..aditya ab akela pad gaya hai upar se ira madam bhi vidhwa ho gayi ..ab lagta hai ira aur aditya ek dusre ka sahara ban sakte hai ..

Yeh Rishta kya kehlata hain......

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

sandhya ko aditya ne jo kaha wo bura laga par usko chhod ke jaana ...kya wo beta samajhkar uske saath nahi reh sakti thi ..
aur itne mahine ho gaye na mohan naa ruchika naa hi aditya ek dusre ko phone karke haalchal puchh rahe hai ..
matlab har koi sirf apne me hi goom hai pariwar ke dusre member ki koi chinta nahi ..

sandhya ka dusre shahar jaana samajh sakta hu kyunki us situation me har koi wahi karta ..

 

[pie]

Above is Just a phrase from an Indian daily soap...

 

[KEKIUS MAXIMUS]

ghar ke har sadasya ne apna thikana badal diya hai ..aditya bhi dusre shahar me job kar raha hai ..aur jis tarah ghar ko mohan ne sandhya ke naam pe kiya tha usse yahi lagta hai ki wo bhi dobara yaha ( inka main ghar ya shahar ka naam yaad nahi ) nahi aana chahta tha ..

sandhya ko dono ke baare me pata tha par kya mohan ko pata tha ji sandhya sab jaanti hai ..agar nahi pata hai to sandhya aur aditya ke jaanne ki koshish nahi kar raha hai ..

aur agar wo kabhi yaha aa jaaye aur usko pata chale ki sandhya ne ghar bech diya hai aur dono yaha nahi rehte tab wo kya karega aur mohan ko ye bhi nahi pata ki aditya job kaha karta hai ..

sandhya aur aditya ki duriyo ki wajah sirf aur surf ruchika hai agar wo sandhya ke mann me ye nahi daalti ki aditya usko pasand karta hai to sandhya utna aage nahi badhti aur dono me sirf maa bete wala pyar hota ..
par ab saara pariwar bikhar gaya hai ...kisiko pata nahi ki kaun kaha hai ,,sirf mohan aur ruchika hi saath hai ..

 

[Aakash.]

Sandhya is hurt, so she decides to leave the house, but I don't understand Aditya's mind, how can he leave her mother and go to work? If mother or wife is angry, then convince her, It's not good to leave like this, No emotions feelings in mind?
In this I find equal fault of both, The story is moving very fast and there are new twists in the story. Sandhya's memory is gone and she is pregnant and in such condition Aditya is not with her, what would be worse. Everything was ruined, Amita ji.

Udhar Aakash job karne me busy ho jata hai,
fix this.

As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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[maakaloda]

garam kahani hai

 

[amita]

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update

Thanks so much for reading, liking and appreciating

 

[amita]

Amita ji kafi accha update tha.......
Kahani tp puri 360° mein ghoom gayi......


Ab ye dekhna dilchasp hoga ki aage kya hota hai........

Aapka iss kahani me itni ruchi dekhkar bahut khushi hui

Aapko ye update pasand aaya, khushi hui.

Agla update aaj hi aayega

 

[kamdev99008]

no comment

 

[amita]

Nice update

But one thing came to my mind after reading this update

IS THERE A COMPLETE COMMUNICATION BLACKOUT IN THE FAMILY.

Sandhya has been missing for more than 9 - 10 months and nobody is inquiring about her whereabouts.

1. Has Mohanlal Ji informed by Ruchika about their relationship and due that and out of shame Mohanlal Ji is not communicating with Sandhya and neither interested to know anything about her.

2. Ruchika encouraged Sandhya to start relationship with Aditya, she also seems to forgotten her - no inquiry about her

3. Aditya for a brief inquire about her and also tried to find her and seeing no contacts he's almost forget her, didn't do any indepth thinking why she has let what wrong he has said - sign of immaturity plus carelessness and selfishness this time

To me this update though look nicer from writing POV but more than that it seems filmy update reminds me of Bollywood movies of 60 - 70 era where heroine after getting cheated or failed in love chooses to go in hidden, gave birth to their love child until discovered by her lover, husband, family or loved ones.....


Thank you........

Your analysis has made me happy for the first time.

Till now most of the Readers asked one or the other question which related to seduction and invest relationship of their liking.

If the update related to the couple of their liking was read with interest otherwise skipped, but no one asked questions as you asked now.

It was surprising for me and was thinking that the Readers except one or two had other interests rather than story.

It made me to think that the story should be cut down and started writing in the Fast mode so that it could be concluded.


Well all your questions are very much valid and if you go through the story once again you wouldn't ask such questions as everything is crystal clear.

Thanks so much for the detailed analysis and deep interest in the story