Incest SAAJAN

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Awsm update

 

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SAAJAN
UPDATE-191​

Payal didi ne pahle kitab ko khol kar dekha lekin unhe aage kuch likha nahi mila to unhone vo paridhi ko thama di… paridhi ne uske aage ka jaise hi page khola to usme upar ek shayari likhi huyi thi…aur uske niche ek ajib sawal.

“Upar Ambar Niche Dharti, Beech Mein Hain Dil Ke Afsaane
Afsaano Mein Dard Hai Kitna, Pyar Ke Dushman Ye Kya Jaane.”
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Sawal—“Chouki Par Baithi Ek Rani, Sir Par Aag Badan Mein Pani."

Ab Aage.......

Paridhi—Ye kya likha hai.... ? shayari aur paheli.... !

Payal—Paheli ka answer to jarur Mombatti hona chahiye.

Paridhi—Lekin mombatti to har ghar me aur har jagah mil jayengi…

Raj—Payal didi ka jawab bilkul sahi hai….iss paheli ka matlab mombatti hi hoga.

Neha—lekin iss kitab me ka iss paheli se kya sambandh ho sakta hai….?

Raj—kyon ki ye paheli hi hame mani aur minakshi tak pahuchayegi.

Payal—Ohhh…lekin ek baat meri samajh me nahi aayi ki mani hasil karne ki itni saral paheli kaise ho sakti hai…? Aur yadi ye sahi hai to aaj tak koi uss mani tak kyon nahi pahuch paya….?

Saloni—balkul sahi kaha payal tumne…mujhe bhi yahi doubt hai.

Raj—doubt kyo….? Achcha aap ek baat batao ki mani tak pahuchne ka rasta kya hai, apko kaise malum hua…..?

Paridhi—iss kitab ke jariye.

Raj—correct……to jab koi aaj tak iss kitab ko hasil hi nahi kar paya to unhe kya pata ki mani tak pahuchne ka kya marg hai…..?

Payal—omg…..ye to maine socha hi nahi tha…..you are genious raj…uummmmmmm

Raj—kya didi…..ab aap badi ho gayi ho, sab kya sochenge….mera poora gaal geela kar diya.

Payal—wahi to……main to badi ho gayi hu lekin tu to mere liye ab tak chhota hi hai mere munne raja….aur rahi baat kisi ke dekhne aur sochne ki to mujhe kisi ka darr nahi hai.

Neha—ye ladki na sach me pagal hai

Divya—lekin didi……baat to abhi bhi sochne wali hai…jaisa ki paridhi di ne kaha……mombatti to har jagah avaiable ho sakti hai….par iska matlab ye to nahi ho sakta na ki minakshi vaha har jagah par mil jayegi….?

Raj—shayad tumne dhyan nahi diya ki uss sawal ke sath me ek shayari bhi likhi huyi hai……mombatti ka sambandh uss shayari se hai……aur uss shayari ka sambandh minakshi se…….aur minakshi ka sambandh mani se hai.

Saloni—par hum mombatti dhoodenge kaha kaha…..? aur iss shayari ka matlab kya hai...... ?

Neha—mombatti ke liye to pahle hame yaha se kisi tarah nikal kar apne ghar jana hoga…apne ghar me bhi to candles hain.

Payal—hmmm chachi…..raj yaha se jane ka kuch soch na…..grah ke chakkar me kaha aa phanse….?

Raj—ab chalo yaha se aage chalte hain……mombatti ke liye kahi jane ki jarurat nahi hai…..kyon ki minakshi issi black hole ke andar qaid hai kahi par.

Sab—kyaaaaa….?

Raj—haa…..isliye bas chalte chalo……shayad iss samay hum kisi dusre hi dimension me pahuch chuke hain….kahi na kahi hame koi na koi clue jarur milega.

Payal—theek hai…chalo

Hum thodi si iss yatra viram karne ke pashchat punah apne agle padav ki oor agrasar ho chale…..divya chalte huye aaj ke ghatna kram ke bare me sochte huye usme hi kho gayi thi.

Kuch samay pahle………

Samundra me rakshas ke dwara uttapann uss bawander ne divya ko uchhal kar bahut door phenk diya….vo samundra ki upar niche hoti lahro ke sath bahte huye ek kinare par ja pahuchi aur vahi behosh ho gayi.

Hosh aane par jab usne apne aas paas kisi ko vishes kar saajan ko nahi dekha to usko laga ki uss rakshas ne apne bawandar me sab ko phansa kar maar diya.

Mann me ye khyal aate hi vo bechain ho uthi….samundra ke kinare kinare hi bhagne lagi….lekin use door door tak phaile vishal jal sagar ke atirikt kuch bhi nazar nahi aaya.

Uska komal hriday ek bar phir se saajan ko khone ke darr se atyant bhavuk ho gaya…..vahi niche baith kar vo rone lagi.

Divya (rote huye)—mere sath hi ye har bar aisa kyo hota hai…..? akhir kab tak mujhe apne pyar ko pane ke liye dar dar ki thokre khani padengi……? Jab saajan hi nahi rahe to main jivit rah kar kya karungi…..main bhi jal samadhi le lungi…..hey samundra devta mujhe bhi apni sharan me le lo.

Divya—meri kaya samudra hai, usme jab saajan par drashti dalti hu to uss saajan ko apne hriday me dekhti hu....mano mera hriday darpan hai aur usme mera saajan darshan dikhata hai….netro ke liye vah nikat hai kintu pahuchne ke liye atyadhik door hai, isliye ab uske liye main chintit ho kar main marr rahi hu…..mera saajan mere hriday me hi hai kintu vidambana yah hai ki usse milna nahi ho raha hai…koun usse mujhe milaye….? Kisse main usse milane ke liye ro kar kahu…..?

Divya—meri saans nitya hi mere saajan ke paas aati jati hai kintu yah uska koi sandesh vaha se aa kar nahi kahti hai saajan ke bina mera jeevan vyarth hai….main bhi iss sagar me doob kar apni jaan de dungi…jivit rahte na sahi par shayad marne ke baad hi hamara milan ho sake…..?

Itna soch kar divya pani me doobne hi ja rahi thi ki kisi ne awaz de kar usko rok diya…usne apni ashru poorit ankho se palat kar dekha to vaha ek sundar stri khadi usko pukar rahi thi….jiske sharir par aisa tez tha jaise ki hazaro surya ka prakash usme sama gaya ho.

Divya—aap koun hain…? Aur iss veeran sthan par kya kar rahi hain…..?

“Mera to ghar hi yahi hai…..Tum apni jaan dene kyo ja rahi ho…..?” uss stri ne jawab diya.

Divya—aap kya karogi ye jaan kar …..?…..ab jaan dene ke siwa mere paas bacha hi kya hai…..?

“Marna kisi samasya ka samadhan nahi hai….yaha tum apni jaan dene par amada ho aur ek vaha ek admi divya divya chillate huye apni jaan gawa raha hai” uss stri ne kaha.

Divya (chounk kar)—kya kaha aap ne…..usne divya ka naam pukara….? Jarur vo mera saajan hi hai…..chalo batao mujhe jaldi….kaha hai vo……?

Stri—lekin tum kyo chounk gayi……kya tumhara naam divya hai…..?

Divya—haa….jaldi mujhe le chalo vaha…saajan main aa rahi hu.

Stri—chalo.....vo udhar....uss ped ke niche leta hai.

Uss stri ne ek ped ki taraf ishara kiya......divya turant girte padte paglo ki tarah badhawashi me doudte aur saajan saajan chillate huye uss ped tak aa pahuchi jaha saajan leta hua tha.

Saajan bhi divya ki pukar sun kar uth khada hua aur divya ki taraf mud kar apni baahe phaila di......divya uski baaho me samane ke liye tezi se bhagi kintu nazdik pahuchte hi ruk gayi.

Saajan—ruk kyo gayi divya......tum nahi janti tumhe jinda dekh kar mujhe kitni khushi ho rahi hai....maine to samjha tha ki shayad tum bhi sab ki tarah uss bawandar me doob gayi....main khud nirash ho kar pran tyagne hi wala tha...ab jaldi se meri baaho me aa jao aur na tadpao

Divya (serious)—koun ho tum...... ? tum mere saajan nahi ho sakte…..?

Saajan—ye kaisi bahki bahki baate kar rahi ho divya…..? main hi tumhara saajan hu…..?

Divya—saajan meri ruh aur mere jism ke katre katre me basa hai…..meri har saans par basa hai…..meri har dhadkan uske naam se chalti hai…..beshak tumhari shakal aur surat mere saajan jaisi hai kintu tum mere saajan nahi ho… tumhare paas aate hi meri dhadkane rukne si lagi hain jabki saajan ke paas aate hi mere dil ki dhadkane tez ho jati hain….(achanak kroadh me)…..koun ho tum….? Apna asli parichay do warna mere saajan ka roop banane wale bahurupiye …main tumhari gardan dhad se ukhad dungi…..bata jaldi koun hai tu….? Mere saajan ka roop dharan karne ki himmat bhi kaise ki tune…..?

Divya ne gusse me kisi sherni ki tarah tezi dikhate huye paas me padi ek choti chattan ko utha liya aur jaise hi uss saajan ke upar marne wali thi vaise hi uss stri ki baat sun kar palat gayi...itne me saajan vaha se gayab ho gaya.

Stri—shant ho jao divya…..tumhara saajan jivit hai.

Divya—aap koun hain……? Sach sach bataiye……? Itna tez kisi samanya stri me sambhav nahi hai….? Mere sath aisa chhal kyo kiya aap ne……?

Stri—main tumhari pariksha le rahi thi putri.

Divya (shocked)—pariksha..... ? kaisi pariksha...aur aap apna parichay kyo nahi de rahi..... ?

Stri—main samundra kanya.....aur shri hari patni laxmi hu......main tumhare prem ki pariksha le rahi thi.....tum dhanya ho divya...tumhare rahte saajan ko kuch nahi ho sakta...tumhare sachche prem aur qurbaniyo ka kawach hamesha uski hifajat karta rahega.

Divya (bhavuk)—kya mera saajan hai.... ? kaha hai vo….? Mujhe kshama karna maa….main apko pahchan nahi saki

Laxmi—putri….meri kripa to hamesha hi tum par hai……singhal garh meri hi kripa se hamesha ajey raha hai….tumhara padmini ka janam bhi meri hi kripa ka parinam hai.

Divya—apki kripa pa kar main dhanya ho gayi maa……kripya mujhe apne vastavik roop ke darshan karaye mata.

Laxmi—mere vastavik roop ke darshan karne ki kshamta tumhare netro me nahi hai putri…..mere vastavik roop ke tez ko tumhari ankhe sahan nahi kar payengi.

Divya—to phir mujhe bhi koi aisi shakti de dijiye jisse main apke aloukik roop ke darshan kar saku.

Laxmi—putri shaktiya kisi ki kripa se ya daan me nahi milti hain…..kisi ke bahut achcha hone ya ananya bhakt hone par bhi shaktiya nahi milti hain.....shaktiya to sirf kathor safal tapasya se hi milti hain……yahi srasti ka niyam hai jisse tridev bhi bandhe huye hain….phir bhi mera darshan vyarth nahi jata to main tumhe ashirwad me kuch dena chahti hu.

Divya—theek hai maa…agar aap kuch dena hi chahti hain to .bas meri ek vinti maan lijiye ki mere saajan par hamesha apni daya drasti banaye rakhna mata.

Laxmi—putri…tumhara saajan kya hai ye to tum bhi nahi janti……bas ek baat dhyan rakhna ki kabhi bhi uska sath mat chhodna kyon ki tum hi uski taqat ho aur pyar uski kamjori.

Divya—main kaha saajan ka sath chhodne wali hu maa…….agar aap bhi chhodne ko kahti tab bhi main saajan ko nahi chhodti……meri dhristata ke liye kshama kare mata

Laxmi (mushkura kar)—main janti hu putri....aur main tumhe ye ashirwad deti hu ki tum apne saajan se dhyan me kabhi bhi baat kar sakti ho…. apni ankhe band karo main tumhe tumhare saajan ke paas pahucha deti hu.

Agle hi pal divya ke ankhe band karte hi laxmi ji ne usko saajan ke paas pahucha diya aur khud antardhyan ho gayi jab chalte huye kisi paththar se uska pair takraya tab kahi jakar vo apni soch se bahar aa gayi….lekin uske niche girne se pahle hi kisi ne usko apni baaho me thaam liya.

Divya ke chehre par par mushkurahat aur harsh ki lahar doud gayi…..vo iss marm sparshi aur sukhad sparsh se sadiyo se parichit hai…..bina dekhe hi vo samajh gayi ki usko girne se bachane wali ye majboot baahe uske saajan ki hain.

Dil Ki Har Yaadon Me, Main Sawanru Tujhe
Tu Dikhe To In Ankho Me Utaru Tujhe,
Tere Naam Ko Juban Par Aise Sajaau
So Jau To Khwabo Me, Bas Pukaru Tujhe...
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Akhir kar chalte huye hum jungle se bahar nikal aaye……jungle ka drishya jitna bhayavah tha uske ulat uske bahar har taraf ka vatavaran behad hi aakarshak evam khubsurat dikh raha tha.

Charo oor hare bhare ped poudhe….kal kal karti pani ki lahre aur pakshiyo ke kalrav karne ki madhur dhwani sunayi de rahi thi.

Payal—chalte chalte pair dukhne lage mere…..ab aur nahi chala jayega mujhse.

Paridhi—lagta hai iss dimension me koi nahi rahta hai....thak to main bhi gayi hu...aur pyas bhi lagi hai.

Raj—kuch na kuch to milna chahiye…..dekhte hain…..aa jao meri god me dono.

Vo dono to jaise yahi chahti thi…..turant hi khush hokar ek pith me to ek samne se mere upar latak gayi….baki dono ko dekh kar hasne lagi.

Aise hi chalte huye hum ek sthan par pahuch gaye…..vaha sab kuch apne dharti jaisa hi lag raha tha…..tabhi hamari nazar door se aati huyi kuch makano par gayi.

Payal—raj…vo dekho vaha samne…lagta hai vaha koi ghar bane hain.

Raj—hmmmm.....chal ke dekhte hain.

Kuch hi samay me hum vaha pahuch gaye…..makan bilkul hamare dharti jaise hi bane the…..vaha ke logo ka rahan sahan aur pahnava bahut had tak hamse milta julta tha sirf unki height hamse adhik thi aur sabhi ka rang gora tha.

Paridhi—mujhe pani pina hai....

Raj—pahle niche utro dono...phir kisi se puchta hu.

Unke niche utarte hi hum ek jagah aa gaye jaha kafi bheed bhad thi.....kayi mahilaye aur purush ekattha the vaha par maine un logo se hi pani mangna uchit samjha.

Raj—bhai....pine ke liye thoda pani milega kya....... ?

Admi—chatu cham chak chaya chabo chal chara chahe chaho….? chak chaya chacha chahi chaye chabha chai.

Payal—ye pagal kya bol raha hai...... ?

Raj (kuch der soch kar)—vo bol raha hai ki tum kya bol rahe ho.... ? kya chahiye bhai.... ? lagta hai yaha ke log har akshar ke pahle cha lagate hain.....yahi inki bhasa hogi shayad.

Saloni—ohhhhh.....to ye baat hai.....tab to hum bhi ye bhasa bol sakte hain….har akshar ke pahle cha add kar ke.

Payal—main puch ke dekhti hu......(uss admi se)—chapi ahane chake chali chaye chapa chani chami chale chaga chak chaya…..? ( Pine ke liye pani milega kya..... ?)

Admi—chaha chaha.....chaj charu char chami chale chaga......chaye chagi challi chapa chani chala chana chaj chara.... (haa....haaa...jarur milega .....(ek aurat se)....ye gilli pani lana jara)

Payal—wow.....ye samajh gaya.....iska matlab main bhi sikh gayi inki bhasa.

Thodi hi der me vo aurat apne ghar se jo ki paas me hi tha.....ek ghade me pani le aayi.....sabne pani piya...pani ka swad bahut badhiya tha.

(Yaha se jo bhi conversation baki logo se hoga vo unki hi bhasa me hoga....lekin yaha hindi me hi dikhega sab ko.. aap sabhi har akshar ke pahle cha lagakar padh lena)

Admi—kaho bhai kaha se aaye ho jo itne payase the….? Yaha ke to kadapi nahi lag rahe….?

Raj—aap ne sahi kaha…..hum yaha ke nahi hain….bahut door se aaye hain.....bas rasta bhatak gaye hain.

Dusra admi—lagta hai ki ye log bhi utsav dekhne ja rahe hain...... ?

Raj—kaisa utsav bhai...... ? aur ye koun si jagah hai.... ?

Teesra admi—lo iss utsav ke bare me nahi jante..... ? ye utsav to madhya lok ki shaan hai.

Saloni—ohhh to iska matlab iss jagah ka naam madhya lok hai.

Raj—kya kya hota hai iss utsav me…..?

Admi—Ye sirf ek utsav nahi hai balki jung ka maidan hai…..jaha door door desho ke raja maharaja, veer yoddha, yaha tak ki kayi devta aur rakshas bhi roop badal kar isme bhag lete hain.

Dusra admi—yahi nahi…kayi jadugar, tantrik aur shaitan ke pujari bhi apni apni shaktiyo ka pradarshan karte hain ek dusre par……ye jung tab tak chalti hai jab tak ki baki sab maare nahi jate…kewal ek hi jivit bachta hai ant me aur vahi vijeta banta hai.

Divya—Par aisa kyo karte hain vo sab…..?

Teesra admi—Ek Talwar ke liye..

Neha—kyaaaa sirf ek talwar ke liye…….?

Choutha—Haa…Lekin vo koi mamuli Talwar nahi hain…..kahte hain ki uss talwar me bahut si divya shaktiya hain….ye talwar na jane kab se ek hi sthan par jamin ke andar gadi huyi hai,kewal uska aadha hissa hi jamin ke upar hai…. Aaj ke din uss talwar me se bahut tez roshni nikalti hai.

Pahla admi—lekin durbhagya ye hai ki aaj tak koi bhi uss talwar ko hasil karna to bahut door ki baat hai, koi usko hath tak nahi laga saka

Saloni—kyo…..?

Dusra admi—koi uske paas tak pahuch hi nahi pata……jaise hi koi uske najdik jane ki koshish karta hai vaise hi uski roshni tez hone lagti hai ki kuch bhi dikhayi nahi deta hai……koi uske tez ke samne tik hi nahi pata.

Raj—interesting……badi ajib baat hai ye to.

Divya—tab to hame bhi chal kar ye utsav dekhna chahiye.

Raj—jarur…..

Pahla admi—tum bahut khushnasib ho bhai….jo tumhe itni khubsurat paanch paanch biwiya mili hain…..jara savdhan rahna.

Uss admi ki baat sunte hi jaha sabhi khushi se jhoom uthi vahi neha chachi buri tarah se sakpaka gayi…..vo kuch kahne hi ja rahi thi ki maine dhire se unka hath daba diya jisse vo sir jhuka kar chup rah gayi.

Payal—kyo vaha koi khatra hai…..?

Dusra admi—khubsurat phoolo ke paas bhanwaro ko bulane ki jarurat nahi padti….vo khud hi sugandh soonghte huye doude chale aate hain unka ras pine ko.

Payal—aisa thappad marungi na uske kaan ke niche ki unki maa dubara bachche paida karna hi bhool jayegi.

Raj—kab hai ye utsav aur kitni door hai yaha se……?

Pahla admi—aaj hi hai…..hum sab vahi ja rahe hain…..jyada door nahi hai…….kuch doori par hi rajdhani hai..vahi hoga ye utsav…..tum log bhi chalo hamare sath hi.

Raj—chaliye.

Hum sab bhi unn logo ke sath hi ye utsav dekhne ke liye rawana ho gaye…..na jane kyo mujhe iss utsav me jane ki behad dilchaspi ho rahi thi….shayad inn logo ne jaisa bataya uske karan ho ya phir kuch aur……?

Divya—jaisa ki aapne bataya ki aaj ke in uss talwar me se divya roshni nikalti hai, jiski vajah se koi use hasil nahi kar paya……kintu baki din to usme se roshni nahi nikalti hogi, tab to talwar hasil kar sakte the…..?

Choutha admi—kaha se hasil kar lenge….baki saal bhar vo talwar adrishya rahti hai sirf aaj ke din hi dikhayi deti hai vo.

Paridhi—badi ajib baat hai ye to.

Neha—jab se yaha aaye hain tab se ajib ajib hi to ho raha hai sab kuch hamare sath.

Raj—vaise ye talwar hai kiski aur yaha par aayi kaise…..? kya kisi ne usko jamin me gadaya tha...... ?

Teesra—kya pata bhai..... ? Ye ek bahut bada rahasya hai sab ke liye aaj bhi..... ? ye koi nahi janta ki ye divya talwar kiski hai aur yaha kaise aayi, kisne jamin me gadi..... ? ho sakta hai ki yaha ke rajguru hi shayad kuch jante ho to jante ho..... ? vaise iss talwar se judi kayi kahaniya sunate hain log magar sach kya hai ye aaj bhi ye ek raaz hi hai.

Divya—vaise kya kahaniya sunate hain log is talwar ke vishay me..... ?

Pahla admi—kuch log to yaha tak kahte hain ki.....

Choutha admi (beech me hi)—Ye lo hum pahuch gaye raja ki rajdhani.

Pahle admi ki baat adhuri rah gayi….mujhe janne ki mann me behad jigyasa uttapann ho rahi thi….khair maine baad me puchne ka socha iss vishay par.

Rajdhani bahut hi khubsurat thi…..har taraf sadak ke dono kinaro par raahgiro ke liye hare bhare ped lage huye the.. thodi thodi doori par musafiro ke pyas bujhane ke liye pani ki vyastha ki gayi thi.

Hum unn logo ke sath utsav sthal par pahuch gaye……andar ka nazara dekh kar aisa laga ki jaise koi jan sailab umad aaya ho….laakho ki sankhya me jan samudaay vaha upasthit tha…..

Iss utsav ki vishesata aur mahatta ka andaza ye dekhte hi lag gaya….ki logo ke mann me iss utsav ke prati kitni utsukta hai….charo oor kolahal hi kolahal ka swar goonj raha tha.

Hum bhi sab ke sath ek khali jagah dekh ke baith gaye……beech me bahut bada maidan khali tha, vaha ki mitti ko khod kar akhade jaisa banaya gaya tha.

Maine charo taraf nazar ghuma kar dekha to kahi bhi mujhe vo talwar dikhayi nahi di…..achanak kolahal shant ho gaya…..sab apni apni jagah se uth kar khade ho gaye….vatavaran me niravta chha gayi….

Aur Tabhi………

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Nice update

 

[Raguhalkal]

Congratulation bhai aapne 1000 pages complte kiya

 

[Raguhalkal]

Yahi ek story hai jisne pehle 1000 pages complete kiya hai

 

[Reza]

Superb update bro...
Waiting for next

 

[Kalyansurya]

Bhut he jabardast mind blowing update hai bhai
Khani me naya mod aaya hai ki talwar kiski hai our usme kya kya saktiya hai
Good luck for next superb update

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Waah kya likhte ho aap.
Har line khoobsurt .
To maine jaise socha tha waisa hi hua yani ki divya ko bhi shakti mili ki o kabhi bhi sajan se baat kar sakti h dhyan ke madhyam se wowwww shandar h.
Or paheli ka hal dhundhte ye log pahunch gye is pradarshni me.
Or jo bhasha aapne use ki vo kamal ki lagi.
Dekhne wali baat hogi ki yaha kya hoga , kya raaj bhag lega is samaroh me ??

Or isiliye ,
Aage ka intjaar

SAAJAN
UPDATE-191​

Payal didi ne pahle kitab ko khol kar dekha lekin unhe aage kuch likha nahi mila to unhone vo paridhi ko thama di… paridhi ne uske aage ka jaise hi page khola to usme upar ek shayari likhi huyi thi…aur uske niche ek ajib sawal.

“Upar Ambar Niche Dharti, Beech Mein Hain Dil Ke Afsaane
Afsaano Mein Dard Hai Kitna, Pyar Ke Dushman Ye Kya Jaane.”
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Sawal—“Chouki Par Baithi Ek Rani, Sir Par Aag Badan Mein Pani."

Ab Aage.......

Paridhi—Ye kya likha hai.... ? shayari aur paheli.... !

Payal—Paheli ka answer to jarur Mombatti hona chahiye.

Paridhi—Lekin mombatti to har ghar me aur har jagah mil jayengi…

Raj—Payal didi ka jawab bilkul sahi hai….iss paheli ka matlab mombatti hi hoga.

Neha—lekin iss kitab me ka iss paheli se kya sambandh ho sakta hai….?

Raj—kyon ki ye paheli hi hame mani aur minakshi tak pahuchayegi.

Payal—Ohhh…lekin ek baat meri samajh me nahi aayi ki mani hasil karne ki itni saral paheli kaise ho sakti hai…? Aur yadi ye sahi hai to aaj tak koi uss mani tak kyon nahi pahuch paya….?

Saloni—balkul sahi kaha payal tumne…mujhe bhi yahi doubt hai.

Raj—doubt kyo….? Achcha aap ek baat batao ki mani tak pahuchne ka rasta kya hai, apko kaise malum hua…..?

Paridhi—iss kitab ke jariye.

Raj—correct……to jab koi aaj tak iss kitab ko hasil hi nahi kar paya to unhe kya pata ki mani tak pahuchne ka kya marg hai…..?

Payal—omg…..ye to maine socha hi nahi tha…..you are genious raj…uummmmmmm

Raj—kya didi…..ab aap badi ho gayi ho, sab kya sochenge….mera poora gaal geela kar diya.

Payal—wahi to……main to badi ho gayi hu lekin tu to mere liye ab tak chhota hi hai mere munne raja….aur rahi baat kisi ke dekhne aur sochne ki to mujhe kisi ka darr nahi hai.

Neha—ye ladki na sach me pagal hai

Divya—lekin didi……baat to abhi bhi sochne wali hai…jaisa ki paridhi di ne kaha……mombatti to har jagah avaiable ho sakti hai….par iska matlab ye to nahi ho sakta na ki minakshi vaha har jagah par mil jayegi….?

Raj—shayad tumne dhyan nahi diya ki uss sawal ke sath me ek shayari bhi likhi huyi hai……mombatti ka sambandh uss shayari se hai……aur uss shayari ka sambandh minakshi se…….aur minakshi ka sambandh mani se hai.

Saloni—par hum mombatti dhoodenge kaha kaha…..? aur iss shayari ka matlab kya hai...... ?

Neha—mombatti ke liye to pahle hame yaha se kisi tarah nikal kar apne ghar jana hoga…apne ghar me bhi to candles hain.

Payal—hmmm chachi…..raj yaha se jane ka kuch soch na…..grah ke chakkar me kaha aa phanse….?

Raj—ab chalo yaha se aage chalte hain……mombatti ke liye kahi jane ki jarurat nahi hai…..kyon ki minakshi issi black hole ke andar qaid hai kahi par.

Sab—kyaaaaa….?

Raj—haa…..isliye bas chalte chalo……shayad iss samay hum kisi dusre hi dimension me pahuch chuke hain….kahi na kahi hame koi na koi clue jarur milega.

Payal—theek hai…chalo

Hum thodi si iss yatra viram karne ke pashchat punah apne agle padav ki oor agrasar ho chale…..divya chalte huye aaj ke ghatna kram ke bare me sochte huye usme hi kho gayi thi.

Kuch samay pahle………

Samundra me rakshas ke dwara uttapann uss bawander ne divya ko uchhal kar bahut door phenk diya….vo samundra ki upar niche hoti lahro ke sath bahte huye ek kinare par ja pahuchi aur vahi behosh ho gayi.

Hosh aane par jab usne apne aas paas kisi ko vishes kar saajan ko nahi dekha to usko laga ki uss rakshas ne apne bawandar me sab ko phansa kar maar diya.

Mann me ye khyal aate hi vo bechain ho uthi….samundra ke kinare kinare hi bhagne lagi….lekin use door door tak phaile vishal jal sagar ke atirikt kuch bhi nazar nahi aaya.

Uska komal hriday ek bar phir se saajan ko khone ke darr se atyant bhavuk ho gaya…..vahi niche baith kar vo rone lagi.

Divya (rote huye)—mere sath hi ye har bar aisa kyo hota hai…..? akhir kab tak mujhe apne pyar ko pane ke liye dar dar ki thokre khani padengi……? Jab saajan hi nahi rahe to main jivit rah kar kya karungi…..main bhi jal samadhi le lungi…..hey samundra devta mujhe bhi apni sharan me le lo.

Divya—meri kaya samudra hai, usme jab saajan par drashti dalti hu to uss saajan ko apne hriday me dekhti hu....mano mera hriday darpan hai aur usme mera saajan darshan dikhata hai….netro ke liye vah nikat hai kintu pahuchne ke liye atyadhik door hai, isliye ab uske liye main chintit ho kar main marr rahi hu…..mera saajan mere hriday me hi hai kintu vidambana yah hai ki usse milna nahi ho raha hai…koun usse mujhe milaye….? Kisse main usse milane ke liye ro kar kahu…..?

Divya—meri saans nitya hi mere saajan ke paas aati jati hai kintu yah uska koi sandesh vaha se aa kar nahi kahti hai saajan ke bina mera jeevan vyarth hai….main bhi iss sagar me doob kar apni jaan de dungi…jivit rahte na sahi par shayad marne ke baad hi hamara milan ho sake…..?

Itna soch kar divya pani me doobne hi ja rahi thi ki kisi ne awaz de kar usko rok diya…usne apni ashru poorit ankho se palat kar dekha to vaha ek sundar stri khadi usko pukar rahi thi….jiske sharir par aisa tez tha jaise ki hazaro surya ka prakash usme sama gaya ho.

Divya—aap koun hain…? Aur iss veeran sthan par kya kar rahi hain…..?

“Mera to ghar hi yahi hai…..Tum apni jaan dene kyo ja rahi ho…..?” uss stri ne jawab diya.

Divya—aap kya karogi ye jaan kar …..?…..ab jaan dene ke siwa mere paas bacha hi kya hai…..?

“Marna kisi samasya ka samadhan nahi hai….yaha tum apni jaan dene par amada ho aur ek vaha ek admi divya divya chillate huye apni jaan gawa raha hai” uss stri ne kaha.

Divya (chounk kar)—kya kaha aap ne…..usne divya ka naam pukara….? Jarur vo mera saajan hi hai…..chalo batao mujhe jaldi….kaha hai vo……?

Stri—lekin tum kyo chounk gayi……kya tumhara naam divya hai…..?

Divya—haa….jaldi mujhe le chalo vaha…saajan main aa rahi hu.

Stri—chalo.....vo udhar....uss ped ke niche leta hai.

Uss stri ne ek ped ki taraf ishara kiya......divya turant girte padte paglo ki tarah badhawashi me doudte aur saajan saajan chillate huye uss ped tak aa pahuchi jaha saajan leta hua tha.

Saajan bhi divya ki pukar sun kar uth khada hua aur divya ki taraf mud kar apni baahe phaila di......divya uski baaho me samane ke liye tezi se bhagi kintu nazdik pahuchte hi ruk gayi.

Saajan—ruk kyo gayi divya......tum nahi janti tumhe jinda dekh kar mujhe kitni khushi ho rahi hai....maine to samjha tha ki shayad tum bhi sab ki tarah uss bawandar me doob gayi....main khud nirash ho kar pran tyagne hi wala tha...ab jaldi se meri baaho me aa jao aur na tadpao

Divya (serious)—koun ho tum...... ? tum mere saajan nahi ho sakte…..?

Saajan—ye kaisi bahki bahki baate kar rahi ho divya…..? main hi tumhara saajan hu…..?

Divya—saajan meri ruh aur mere jism ke katre katre me basa hai…..meri har saans par basa hai…..meri har dhadkan uske naam se chalti hai…..beshak tumhari shakal aur surat mere saajan jaisi hai kintu tum mere saajan nahi ho… tumhare paas aate hi meri dhadkane rukne si lagi hain jabki saajan ke paas aate hi mere dil ki dhadkane tez ho jati hain….(achanak kroadh me)…..koun ho tum….? Apna asli parichay do warna mere saajan ka roop banane wale bahurupiye …main tumhari gardan dhad se ukhad dungi…..bata jaldi koun hai tu….? Mere saajan ka roop dharan karne ki himmat bhi kaise ki tune…..?

Divya ne gusse me kisi sherni ki tarah tezi dikhate huye paas me padi ek choti chattan ko utha liya aur jaise hi uss saajan ke upar marne wali thi vaise hi uss stri ki baat sun kar palat gayi...itne me saajan vaha se gayab ho gaya.

Stri—shant ho jao divya…..tumhara saajan jivit hai.

Divya—aap koun hain……? Sach sach bataiye……? Itna tez kisi samanya stri me sambhav nahi hai….? Mere sath aisa chhal kyo kiya aap ne……?

Stri—main tumhari pariksha le rahi thi putri.

Divya (shocked)—pariksha..... ? kaisi pariksha...aur aap apna parichay kyo nahi de rahi..... ?

Stri—main samundra kanya.....aur shri hari patni laxmi hu......main tumhare prem ki pariksha le rahi thi.....tum dhanya ho divya...tumhare rahte saajan ko kuch nahi ho sakta...tumhare sachche prem aur qurbaniyo ka kawach hamesha uski hifajat karta rahega.

Divya (bhavuk)—kya mera saajan hai.... ? kaha hai vo….? Mujhe kshama karna maa….main apko pahchan nahi saki

Laxmi—putri….meri kripa to hamesha hi tum par hai……singhal garh meri hi kripa se hamesha ajey raha hai….tumhara padmini ka janam bhi meri hi kripa ka parinam hai.

Divya—apki kripa pa kar main dhanya ho gayi maa……kripya mujhe apne vastavik roop ke darshan karaye mata.

Laxmi—mere vastavik roop ke darshan karne ki kshamta tumhare netro me nahi hai putri…..mere vastavik roop ke tez ko tumhari ankhe sahan nahi kar payengi.

Divya—to phir mujhe bhi koi aisi shakti de dijiye jisse main apke aloukik roop ke darshan kar saku.

Laxmi—putri shaktiya kisi ki kripa se ya daan me nahi milti hain…..kisi ke bahut achcha hone ya ananya bhakt hone par bhi shaktiya nahi milti hain.....shaktiya to sirf kathor safal tapasya se hi milti hain……yahi srasti ka niyam hai jisse tridev bhi bandhe huye hain….phir bhi mera darshan vyarth nahi jata to main tumhe ashirwad me kuch dena chahti hu.

Divya—theek hai maa…agar aap kuch dena hi chahti hain to .bas meri ek vinti maan lijiye ki mere saajan par hamesha apni daya drasti banaye rakhna mata.

Laxmi—putri…tumhara saajan kya hai ye to tum bhi nahi janti……bas ek baat dhyan rakhna ki kabhi bhi uska sath mat chhodna kyon ki tum hi uski taqat ho aur pyar uski kamjori.

Divya—main kaha saajan ka sath chhodne wali hu maa…….agar aap bhi chhodne ko kahti tab bhi main saajan ko nahi chhodti……meri dhristata ke liye kshama kare mata

Laxmi (mushkura kar)—main janti hu putri....aur main tumhe ye ashirwad deti hu ki tum apne saajan se dhyan me kabhi bhi baat kar sakti ho…. apni ankhe band karo main tumhe tumhare saajan ke paas pahucha deti hu.

Agle hi pal divya ke ankhe band karte hi laxmi ji ne usko saajan ke paas pahucha diya aur khud antardhyan ho gayi jab chalte huye kisi paththar se uska pair takraya tab kahi jakar vo apni soch se bahar aa gayi….lekin uske niche girne se pahle hi kisi ne usko apni baaho me thaam liya.

Divya ke chehre par par mushkurahat aur harsh ki lahar doud gayi…..vo iss marm sparshi aur sukhad sparsh se sadiyo se parichit hai…..bina dekhe hi vo samajh gayi ki usko girne se bachane wali ye majboot baahe uske saajan ki hain.

Dil Ki Har Yaadon Me, Main Sawanru Tujhe
Tu Dikhe To In Ankho Me Utaru Tujhe,
Tere Naam Ko Juban Par Aise Sajaau
So Jau To Khwabo Me, Bas Pukaru Tujhe...
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Akhir kar chalte huye hum jungle se bahar nikal aaye……jungle ka drishya jitna bhayavah tha uske ulat uske bahar har taraf ka vatavaran behad hi aakarshak evam khubsurat dikh raha tha.

Charo oor hare bhare ped poudhe….kal kal karti pani ki lahre aur pakshiyo ke kalrav karne ki madhur dhwani sunayi de rahi thi.

Payal—chalte chalte pair dukhne lage mere…..ab aur nahi chala jayega mujhse.

Paridhi—lagta hai iss dimension me koi nahi rahta hai....thak to main bhi gayi hu...aur pyas bhi lagi hai.

Raj—kuch na kuch to milna chahiye…..dekhte hain…..aa jao meri god me dono.

Vo dono to jaise yahi chahti thi…..turant hi khush hokar ek pith me to ek samne se mere upar latak gayi….baki dono ko dekh kar hasne lagi.

Aise hi chalte huye hum ek sthan par pahuch gaye…..vaha sab kuch apne dharti jaisa hi lag raha tha…..tabhi hamari nazar door se aati huyi kuch makano par gayi.

Payal—raj…vo dekho vaha samne…lagta hai vaha koi ghar bane hain.

Raj—hmmmm.....chal ke dekhte hain.

Kuch hi samay me hum vaha pahuch gaye…..makan bilkul hamare dharti jaise hi bane the…..vaha ke logo ka rahan sahan aur pahnava bahut had tak hamse milta julta tha sirf unki height hamse adhik thi aur sabhi ka rang gora tha.

Paridhi—mujhe pani pina hai....

Raj—pahle niche utro dono...phir kisi se puchta hu.

Unke niche utarte hi hum ek jagah aa gaye jaha kafi bheed bhad thi.....kayi mahilaye aur purush ekattha the vaha par maine un logo se hi pani mangna uchit samjha.

Raj—bhai....pine ke liye thoda pani milega kya....... ?

Admi—chatu cham chak chaya chabo chal chara chahe chaho….? chak chaya chacha chahi chaye chabha chai.

Payal—ye pagal kya bol raha hai...... ?

Raj (kuch der soch kar)—vo bol raha hai ki tum kya bol rahe ho.... ? kya chahiye bhai.... ? lagta hai yaha ke log har akshar ke pahle cha lagate hain.....yahi inki bhasa hogi shayad.

Saloni—ohhhhh.....to ye baat hai.....tab to hum bhi ye bhasa bol sakte hain….har akshar ke pahle cha add kar ke.

Payal—main puch ke dekhti hu......(uss admi se)—chapi ahane chake chali chaye chapa chani chami chale chaga chak chaya…..? ( Pine ke liye pani milega kya..... ?)

Admi—chaha chaha.....chaj charu char chami chale chaga......chaye chagi challi chapa chani chala chana chaj chara.... (haa....haaa...jarur milega .....(ek aurat se)....ye gilli pani lana jara)

Payal—wow.....ye samajh gaya.....iska matlab main bhi sikh gayi inki bhasa.

Thodi hi der me vo aurat apne ghar se jo ki paas me hi tha.....ek ghade me pani le aayi.....sabne pani piya...pani ka swad bahut badhiya tha.

(Yaha se jo bhi conversation baki logo se hoga vo unki hi bhasa me hoga....lekin yaha hindi me hi dikhega sab ko.. aap sabhi har akshar ke pahle cha lagakar padh lena)

Admi—kaho bhai kaha se aaye ho jo itne payase the….? Yaha ke to kadapi nahi lag rahe….?

Raj—aap ne sahi kaha…..hum yaha ke nahi hain….bahut door se aaye hain.....bas rasta bhatak gaye hain.

Dusra admi—lagta hai ki ye log bhi utsav dekhne ja rahe hain...... ?

Raj—kaisa utsav bhai...... ? aur ye koun si jagah hai.... ?

Teesra admi—lo iss utsav ke bare me nahi jante..... ? ye utsav to madhya lok ki shaan hai.

Saloni—ohhh to iska matlab iss jagah ka naam madhya lok hai.

Raj—kya kya hota hai iss utsav me…..?

Admi—Ye sirf ek utsav nahi hai balki jung ka maidan hai…..jaha door door desho ke raja maharaja, veer yoddha, yaha tak ki kayi devta aur rakshas bhi roop badal kar isme bhag lete hain.

Dusra admi—yahi nahi…kayi jadugar, tantrik aur shaitan ke pujari bhi apni apni shaktiyo ka pradarshan karte hain ek dusre par……ye jung tab tak chalti hai jab tak ki baki sab maare nahi jate…kewal ek hi jivit bachta hai ant me aur vahi vijeta banta hai.

Divya—Par aisa kyo karte hain vo sab…..?

Teesra admi—Ek Talwar ke liye..

Neha—kyaaaa sirf ek talwar ke liye…….?

Choutha—Haa…Lekin vo koi mamuli Talwar nahi hain…..kahte hain ki uss talwar me bahut si divya shaktiya hain….ye talwar na jane kab se ek hi sthan par jamin ke andar gadi huyi hai,kewal uska aadha hissa hi jamin ke upar hai…. Aaj ke din uss talwar me se bahut tez roshni nikalti hai.

Pahla admi—lekin durbhagya ye hai ki aaj tak koi bhi uss talwar ko hasil karna to bahut door ki baat hai, koi usko hath tak nahi laga saka

Saloni—kyo…..?

Dusra admi—koi uske paas tak pahuch hi nahi pata……jaise hi koi uske najdik jane ki koshish karta hai vaise hi uski roshni tez hone lagti hai ki kuch bhi dikhayi nahi deta hai……koi uske tez ke samne tik hi nahi pata.

Raj—interesting……badi ajib baat hai ye to.

Divya—tab to hame bhi chal kar ye utsav dekhna chahiye.

Raj—jarur…..

Pahla admi—tum bahut khushnasib ho bhai….jo tumhe itni khubsurat paanch paanch biwiya mili hain…..jara savdhan rahna.

Uss admi ki baat sunte hi jaha sabhi khushi se jhoom uthi vahi neha chachi buri tarah se sakpaka gayi…..vo kuch kahne hi ja rahi thi ki maine dhire se unka hath daba diya jisse vo sir jhuka kar chup rah gayi.

Payal—kyo vaha koi khatra hai…..?

Dusra admi—khubsurat phoolo ke paas bhanwaro ko bulane ki jarurat nahi padti….vo khud hi sugandh soonghte huye doude chale aate hain unka ras pine ko.

Payal—aisa thappad marungi na uske kaan ke niche ki unki maa dubara bachche paida karna hi bhool jayegi.

Raj—kab hai ye utsav aur kitni door hai yaha se……?

Pahla admi—aaj hi hai…..hum sab vahi ja rahe hain…..jyada door nahi hai…….kuch doori par hi rajdhani hai..vahi hoga ye utsav…..tum log bhi chalo hamare sath hi.

Raj—chaliye.

Hum sab bhi unn logo ke sath hi ye utsav dekhne ke liye rawana ho gaye…..na jane kyo mujhe iss utsav me jane ki behad dilchaspi ho rahi thi….shayad inn logo ne jaisa bataya uske karan ho ya phir kuch aur……?

Divya—jaisa ki aapne bataya ki aaj ke in uss talwar me se divya roshni nikalti hai, jiski vajah se koi use hasil nahi kar paya……kintu baki din to usme se roshni nahi nikalti hogi, tab to talwar hasil kar sakte the…..?

Choutha admi—kaha se hasil kar lenge….baki saal bhar vo talwar adrishya rahti hai sirf aaj ke din hi dikhayi deti hai vo.

Paridhi—badi ajib baat hai ye to.

Neha—jab se yaha aaye hain tab se ajib ajib hi to ho raha hai sab kuch hamare sath.

Raj—vaise ye talwar hai kiski aur yaha par aayi kaise…..? kya kisi ne usko jamin me gadaya tha...... ?

Teesra—kya pata bhai..... ? Ye ek bahut bada rahasya hai sab ke liye aaj bhi..... ? ye koi nahi janta ki ye divya talwar kiski hai aur yaha kaise aayi, kisne jamin me gadi..... ? ho sakta hai ki yaha ke rajguru hi shayad kuch jante ho to jante ho..... ? vaise iss talwar se judi kayi kahaniya sunate hain log magar sach kya hai ye aaj bhi ye ek raaz hi hai.

Divya—vaise kya kahaniya sunate hain log is talwar ke vishay me..... ?

Pahla admi—kuch log to yaha tak kahte hain ki.....

Choutha admi (beech me hi)—Ye lo hum pahuch gaye raja ki rajdhani.

Pahle admi ki baat adhuri rah gayi….mujhe janne ki mann me behad jigyasa uttapann ho rahi thi….khair maine baad me puchne ka socha iss vishay par.

Rajdhani bahut hi khubsurat thi…..har taraf sadak ke dono kinaro par raahgiro ke liye hare bhare ped lage huye the.. thodi thodi doori par musafiro ke pyas bujhane ke liye pani ki vyastha ki gayi thi.

Hum unn logo ke sath utsav sthal par pahuch gaye……andar ka nazara dekh kar aisa laga ki jaise koi jan sailab umad aaya ho….laakho ki sankhya me jan samudaay vaha upasthit tha…..

Iss utsav ki vishesata aur mahatta ka andaza ye dekhte hi lag gaya….ki logo ke mann me iss utsav ke prati kitni utsukta hai….charo oor kolahal hi kolahal ka swar goonj raha tha.

Hum bhi sab ke sath ek khali jagah dekh ke baith gaye……beech me bahut bada maidan khali tha, vaha ki mitti ko khod kar akhade jaisa banaya gaya tha.

Maine charo taraf nazar ghuma kar dekha to kahi bhi mujhe vo talwar dikhayi nahi di…..achanak kolahal shant ho gaya…..sab apni apni jagah se uth kar khade ho gaye….vatavaran me niravta chha gayi….

Aur Tabhi………

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