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Aj1980

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लेखक एक प्रतिभाशाली मनुष्य होता है ,जो की अपनी कहानी के हर एक पात्र को जीता है तथा उसके दृष्टिकोण से सोचता है। प्रतिभाशाली लेखक को सभी दृष्टिकोण से विचार करना होता है।

आप की लेखनी जबरदस्त है और आप एक प्रतिभाशाली लेखक हैं ।
 

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Ek Amar Prem Gaatha

Mata Parvati—Putri jo prem ki amar katha main tumhe sunane ja rahi hu ye vo maha gatha hai jisne prem ki ek nayi shrankhla ko janam diya...Jaha se is prem ki shuruwat ki neev padi

Tumne yadi prem kiya hai to prem par vishwash karna bhi sikh lo....prem ka rasta kaanto ka rasta hai....isme sukh kam aur dukh jyada hote hain lekin jo sachcha premi hota hai vo in dukho se vichlit nahi hota balki in dukho me bhi vo sukh ki anubhuti kar hi leta hai

Prem marg anya margo se bhinn hai....baki margo par pairo se chal kar jana padta hai kintu prem marg me sar ke bal chalna padta hai...ye aisa kaanto bhara rasta hai jis par chalne ka sahas ya to koi chor kar sakta hai ya phir sachcha premi

Prem ki prapti utni hi durgam hai jitni ki kaal par vijay ki prapti aur uski uplabdhi me sabse badi badha apna sharir hai....sadhe teen hatho ka yeh sharir beech me sumeru parvat ban kar aa jamta hai, isliye jo sir dekar iske path par pair rakhta hai vahi sachche prem ko pa sakta hai

Sachche premi ko is sharir ke nav-dwaro aur panch-vikaro par adhikar karna avashyak hai anyatha uska prem kabhi safal nahi ho sakta...samay ke chhote se thapedo se hi vo toot kar bikhar jata hai....iska hi parinam hai ki aaj sansar me jise log sachcha prem kahte hain vo chhoti chhoti bato par galat fahmiyo ka shikar ban jata hai...vastav me vo sachcha prem na hokar soundarya ke akarshan se uttapann hawas mishrit prem hai....sachche prem me hawas ke liye koi sthan hi nahi hota hai

Ye kahani bhi aise hi premiyo ki hai….jinhone prem ka ek alag hi itihas likh diya…..is kahani ki shuruwat aaj se kayi hazar saal pahle Dwapar yug me huyi thi

Tab yaha samudra ke tat par prithvi par sapt dwipo me se ek Singhal garh namak dwip hua karta tha....bade bade parvato se aachchhadit ye rajya atyant sundar evam ramniya tha

Singhal dwip par us samay sugandh naresh Gandharva Sen ka Shasan tha…vaha ki maharani Champavati thi… sugandh naresh maine isliye kaha kyon ki us rajya ki samast nari vibhinn pushpo ke gandh ki thi

Jehi Jehi Baran Phool Phulwari,
Tehi Tehi Baran Sugandh So Nari
Gandharv sen ki chhappan karod ki sena thi aur uski ashwa shala me solah sahastra shyam karn ghode the….uski gajshala me saat sahastra singhli hasti (mahavat) the....nar patiyo me vah narendra tha aur bhu-patiyo ka vah indra kahlata tha..... vah aisa chakrawarti raja tha ki sabhi khando me uska dabdaba tha aur sabhi desho ke raja uske aage sar jhukate the

Koi bhi agar singhal dwip ke nikat pahuchta to aisa lagta ki vah kailash ke nikat aa gaya ho…ghani aamra vatika charo taraf lagi huyi thi...uske sabhi taruvar aise sugandhit the mano malay giri ke chandan ke vriksh lagaye ho aur unki chhaya aisi ho rahi thi jaise ki rajni ho rahi ho...yadi koi yatri dhoop se thaka hua vaha pahuchta aur un vriksho ki chhaya me aaram kar leta to uska samast dukh thakan vismrit ho jata tha

Vaha aur bhi kayi tarah ke vriksh jaise ki kathal, aanwla, nariyal, khajur, santra, jaam phal, kela, anar, angoor, aam ityadi lage huye the jisse kisi yatri ko bhukha bhi nahi rahna padta tha

Singhal garh me logo ki pani ki suvidha ke liye pag pag par koop (kuwa) aur vapiya (bawdi) ke sath sath har jagah kund bane huye the jinki bathak aur sidhiya saje rahte the....har kund ke paas dev sthan bana hua tha aur ashram the jaha rishi muni rahte the

Vaha ka sarovar maan sarovar ki bhanti samundra ke jaise bhara hua, nirmal aur vistirna tha isliye us sarovar ko maan sarodak kaha jata tha

Sarovar me jab paniharine pani bharne aati thi to log unke roop soundarya ko dekh kar thage ke thage rah jate the…vo sabhi aisi lagti thi jaise ki mom ki bani murtiya ho…sabhi dev lok ki apsarao ki tarah anupam sundari thi unke jism se kayi tarah ke sungandhit phoolo ki mahakti khushbu kisi ko bhi madhosh kar sakti thi

Singhal dwip me charo oor pushpa vatikaye lagi huyi thi….jinke vriksh vriddh hokar chandan ki si suvas ke ho gaye the….unme saghan lataye thi jo bahutere phoolo se phooli huyi thi tatha kewda, champa, chameli,kund, gulab, fenda, ratrani, kadamb, juhi,nagkeshar,mouli shri, bela aur bhi nana prakar ke phool lage huye the….vo phool unhi ke mashtako par chadhte the jinke mashtak me bhagya ki mani hoti thi

Singhal dwip ka mahal bhavya aur vishal tha….mahal ke charo taraf hazaro shero ka pahra hardam hota tha…. Singhal garh me Neer aur Kshir naam ki do nadiya thi…..dono nadiyo ka udgam motiyo ke choorn se bane ek kund se hua tha

Us kund ka pani amrit aur keechad kapoor tha….us kund ki sabse badi vishesta yeh thi ki uska pani pine wala jab tak jinda rahega jawan rahega vo vriddh nahi ho sakta kabhi bhi…..kund ke paas me hi ek kanchan ka vriksh tha…uski jade patal tak thi….vah vriksh indra lok ke kalaptaru ki tarah khas tha

Vo vriksh ka phal kabhi kabhar hi nazar aata tha….jab usme phal lagta to uske ujale se poora singhal dwip me tez roshni phail jati….us phal ko khane wala ajivaj jawan aur nirogi rahega aisi uski vishesta thi

Kintu kabhi koi bhi na to us kund se pani nikal kar pi saka aur na hi kanchan vriksh ke us adbhut phal ko prapt kar paya…kund ke pani aur us phal ko pane ke liye jane kitne hi log apni jaan gawa baithe

Maharani Champavati atyant roopvati aur sadguno ki khan thi…vah battis shubh lakshano se yukt thi…unki sundarta ka bakhan poora singhal dwip karta tha…Champavati ke samanta ki koi bhi stri us samay kisi dwip me nahi thi

Maharani champavati is samay garbhvati thi….sare rajya me harsh aur ullas ka mahoul vyapt tha…maharaj Gandharv sen khushi se phoole nahi sama rahe the

Kisi ko kya pata tha ki Maharani Champavati garbhvati hokar kewal santan paida karne nahi ja rahi hain apitu vo ek itihas ki rachna karne ja rahi hain

Maharani champavati singhal dwip ko ek aisa deepak dene ja rahi thi jiska prakash sarvatra ujiyara phailane vala aur har kisi ke mann ko sammohit kar ek naye yug ki shuruwat karne wala tha

Champavati bhagwan shiv ki ananya bhakta thi….roj subah uth kar snan aadi se nivratt hone ke baad nitya din vo unke rajmandir ko chandan se lepan karti thi aur bhagwan ashutosh ki pooja karti thi

Jab se vo garbhvati huyi thi maharani ke hriday me ek aloukik prakash ki anubhuti hoti thi….jyo jyo garbh badhta ja raha tha tyo tyo maharani ke udar me us jyoti punj ka prakash bhi tez hota ja raha tha

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Mata Parvati—Putri Priyadarshini…..abhi tumhe bulane koi aane wala hai…ye lo pushtak..isme tumhe aage ki katha likhi huyi mil jayegi…tumhare siwa aur kisi ko bhi isme likha nazar nahi ayega

Priyadarshini ke hatho me vo pushtak dekar mata antardhyan ho gayi….aur tabhi usi samay diksha use khana khane ke liye bulane aa gayi

Darwaja khatkhatane se Priyadarshini apne dhyan se bahar aa gayi....usne mann hi mann maa gouri ko pranam kiya aur jakar darwaja khola

Diksha—aapka sabhi khane par intazar kar rahe hain

Priyadarshini—ji main abhi aayi

Main abhi payal didi aur divya ke sath dinner karne aa gaya…halanki chanchal ke sath khana kha chuka tha phir bhi sabhi meri vajah se abhi tak bhukhe the to unke pyar ka maan to rakhna hi tha

Mamta—beta kaha chala gaya tha…? Kam se kam bata to diya kar

Raj—sorry maa…dubara khyal rakhunga

Veer—tumhare chakkar me kisi din bhukha rahna padega

Mrinal—bilkul sahi pakde hain…aap mutra balatkari

Sab chounk kar mrinal aur veer ki taraf dekhne lage….veer ke gale me to khana hi atak gaya…..bechara chup chap gardan niche jhuka liya aur khansne laga

Kajal—arey koi use kuch pine ko do

Mrinal—mai pilaungi…main hu na……lo veer…mutra piyo

Ruchi (dhire se)—betu…is ashleel ladki ko kaha se pakad laya hai…..?

Is baar to sab ke gale me khana phans gaya aur vo khansne lage….jab ki mujhe hasi aane lagi…..payal didi ne mujhe ghur kar dekha to maine jaldi se pani ka gilas unki aur bakiyo ki taraf sarka diya

Meera—ye kya besharmi hai……?

Roopa—ise vapis lana hi nahi tha…..besharmi ki bhi koi had hoti hai

Vidhya (chilla kar)—chal dur hat mere bete ke paas se

Mrinal—kyo ab kya hua…….? Mai bhi to veer ko vahi pila rahi hu jo aap log pilane wali thi…….(phir veer ki oor palat kar) lo tum kyo pareshan hone lage….piyo na…main tumhe pailaungi mutra piyo..piyo

Vidhya (gusse)—behaya….besharam…tu aise nahi manegi…

Vidhya mousi gusse me apni jagah se uth kar mrinal ko marne ke liye jaise hi hath uthaya to turant maine unka hath beech me hi pakad liya

Raj—nahi…mousi ji…aisi galti dubara phir nahi honi chahiye

Sarita (jor se)—Rajjjjjj......ye kya tarika hai..... ? kya tumne hame isliye yaha rahne ko kaha taki hamari be-ijjati kar sako aur dusro ko bhi karne do......chalo didi hum apne ghar abhi jayenge

Priyadarshini (hath jodkar)—dekhiye hum yaha naye hain....agar mrinal ne kuch galat kah diya to main apse hath jod kar uski mafi mangti hu....use kshama kar dijiye....uska irada aap logo ka dil dukhane ka bilkul bhi nahi hai

Mamta—beta ye sab kya hai.... ?

Raj—pls sab shant ho jao...kuch nahi hai maa...darasal mrinal ko hindi nahi aati hai...vo abhi sikh rahi hai...isliye vo kuch ka kuch samajh baithti hai.....vo mitra ko mutra kahti hai aur chamatkari ko balatkari

Sab (shock)—kyaaaaaa..... ?

Mrinal—bilkul sahi pakde hain..... raj ji

Iske baad sabhi ne chup chap dinner khatam kiya aur apne apne room me chale gaye....mai bhi apne room me aa gaya jaha payal didi ke sath vidhi bhi thi

Vidhi—saajan ye dono ladkiya mujhe samanya nahi lagti

Payal—koun dono..... ?

Vidhi—mrinal aur priyadarshini

Raj—kyo..... ?

Vidhi—mai jinni hu...mai unke chehre ka tez dekh sakti hu apni shaktiyo se......khas kar priyadarshini me mujhe bahut tez jhalak raha hai...itna tez to kisi dev kanya me hi ho sakta hai aur kisi me itna samarthya nahi itna tez sahan karne ka

Payal—whattttt...... ? kya kuch bhi bolti ho tum vidhi...dev kanya aur yaha...... ? aisa kuch nahi lagta mujhe

Raj—chalo chhodo in bato ko

Payal—ab pahle batao ki tum pareshan kyo the din me…..?

Raj—aisa kuch nahi hai…mujhe need aa rahi hai ab

Payal—dekho mujhe kasam dene par vivash mat karo

Raj—kal bata dunga…abhi sab ghar me hain aur deewaro ke bhi kaan hote hain aaj kal

Payal—theek hai….magar main puche bina chhodungi nahi

Raj—mai ruchi didi ke paas se aata hu

Vidhi—lekin jaldi aana saajan….kahi main so na jau

Payal—ha to so ja na….mere samne kuch mat karna…..nahi to akele kuch nahi karne dungi main…soch lena isiliye tumhe apne sath rakha hai maine

Raj—tabhi to main sochu ki aapne vidhi ko apne sath kaise rakh liya itni asani se

Payal—to kya isko dusre room me rahne deti jisse tum iske paas apna muh kala karte raho aur main yaha tadapti rahu

Vidhi—tum bhi to saajan ki biwi ho…to isme tadapna kaisa…….?

Payal—mai to taiyar hu…par saajan se hi pucho…..inko karne me dikkat hoti hai mere sath

Raj—jab tak hamari shadi nahi hoti tab tak control karo…ayega vo din bhi jarur ayega….ok ab main chalta hu ruchi didi ke paas

Main ruchi didi ke room ja hi raha tha ki tabhi neha chachi ka room khula aur vo mujhe dekh kar ruk gayi…mai bhi bina kuch bole aage badh gaya tabhi

Neha—raj…mujhe tumse baat karni hai….andar aa jao

Raj—sorry…mujhe ab kuch nahi kahna chachi…main ab is baat ko tamasha nahi banana chahta

Neha—pls…bas kuch der

Raj—ok

Raj (andar akar)—kahiye jo bhi kahna hai…..mujhe need aa rahi hai

Neha (hath jod kar)—raj…..paridhi kaha hai…..pls

Raj—mai bata chuka hu

Neha (ruwansi hokar)—tumne kaha tha ki vo jinda hai

Raj—apko vo jaldi mil jayengi….mai iske aage kuch nahi bata sakta

Neha (lagbhag rone jaisi)—meri beti kaha hai…rajj….pls bata do….mai hath jodti hu….tumhare pair bhi pakadne ko taiyar hu…pls..bata do

Raj—ye kya kari hain aap…..kah to diya maine ki didi jaldi hi mil jayengi…abhi main khud bhi nahi janta ki vo kaha hai aur kis haal me hain…..bas itna pata chala hai ki vo jinda hain

Neha (sisakte huye)—meri beti ko vapis la do….tum jo kahoge main karungi…..jaise rahne ko kahoge main rah lungi

Raj—aapko rone ki koi jarurat nahi hai…..unhone jab mere liye itna kiya hai to itna main karunga hi…aap nishchint raho

Main unke room se nikal kar ruchi didi ke room me aa gaya….didi meri hi tasveer se baate kar rahi thi…meri awaz sun kar vo turant darwaja khol mujhse lipat gayi

Mai ruchi didi ke sath bed par let kar bate karne laga…..vo mujhse chipke huye hi apne pyar ka izhar aur apni majburiya batati rahi….maine unke hotho par apne hoth rakh diye aur kiss karne laga

Didi bhi khushi se jhumte huye mera sath dene lagi…..jab tak saans nahi phool gayi tab tak dono me ek dusre ke hotho ka ras pine ki prati spardha chalti rahi

Maine unhe apne chipka liya..vo aise hi chipke huye meri baho me so gayi…..unke sote hi maine apni ankhe band kar khud ko do bhago me vibhakt kar liya aur paridhi didi ke room ki talashi lene par mili us cheez (Locket) ko dhyan se dekhne laga




Kuch der tak dekhne ke baad maine apna ek roop vahi chhod kar adrishya hokar ek sun san jagah par aa gaya aur unicorn ko yaad kiya…agle hi pal vo mere samne aa gaya

Unicorn—ji malik

Raj—Dark Lok chalo

Unicorn—ji malik..kintu vaha bahut khatra hai

Raj—vo dekhna mera kaam hai….tumse jitna kaha hai utna karo

Unicorn—ji malik..aaiye

Phir main unicorn ke sath dark lok ke ek anjane safar par nikal gaya….vaha pahuchte hi jaise maine apna pair dark lok ki jamin par rakha ki tabhi……..

Unicorn (chillate huye)—malikkkkkkkk
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Ek Amar Prem Gaatha Continues…………

Singhal garh me khushiya manayi ja rahi thi….maharaj Gandharv sen ke mann me umango ka tyohar jaisa mahoul tha..

Antah akhir vo din bhi aa hi gaya jab maharani champavati ko prasav pida honi shuru ho gayi….maharaj bechain hokar raj mahal me idhar udhar tahal rahe the….unke kaan kisi shubh samachar sunne ko aatur the

Maharani ke garbh ki ghadi poori hote hi unhone madhya ratri ke samay ek sundar kanya ko janam diya….Kamal ke phool jaisi uski ankhe aur khushbu thi kamal ki pankhudi jaise hi uske hoth the

Vah kanya janam ke samay aisi lagi jaise ki surya ki kiran ho aur jo surya se nikal kar bahar aayi ho……balki surya ki kiran ki chamak bhi uske samne kam thi aur vo kanya usse bhi badh kar thi

Bhaye dus maas poori bhayi ghari, Kamal nayni kanya avtari
Jaise suraj kiran huyi kadhi, Suraj kiran ghati vah baadhi


Ratri me hi din ke jaisa prakash ho gaya…..aur samast raj mandir prakashit hokar kailash ki bhanti chamakne laga….vah itni sundar thi ki purnima ka shashi bhi uski sundarta se haar maan kar ksheen hokar ghatne laga

Vah shashi itna ghata ki ghatate ghatate amavashya ki ratri ho gayi aur chaand agle do dino tak lajja ke karan bhumi me gada raha…

Tadnantar jab vah chandrama punah udit hua tab vah dwitiya ka naya chaand ban kar uday hua….us kanya ki kamal gandh ne vasna se sabko sammohit kar diya aur ras evam roop par nyochhavar hone wale bhramar tatha patange uske charo taraf madrane lage

Padam Gandh Vedha Jag Baasa, Bhanwar Patang Bhaye Chahu Paasa

Uski atyadhik sundar thi, apma maa champavati se bhi badh kar uska roop abhi se tha…vah desh dhanya hai jaha aisi sundar aur Divya kanya ka janam hua

Kintu shayad kisi ne ye dhyan nahi diya ki theek us samay jab singhal garh me is divya kanya ka janam hua usi samay par teen anya balko ka bhi janam hua….ek hi nakshatra, ek hi din aur ek hi samay par

Singhal garh ke paas ke dwip me hi ek anya kanya ne janam liya….vo bhi atyant sundar thi…halanki dono kanyayo ki sundarta me koi samanta nahi thi

Ek anya balak ne Jambu dwip me janam liya…..in teeno ka janam dharti par hua…kintu in sabke viprit ek anya divya kanya ne inke janam ke samay par hi dev lok me janam liya…..uski sundrta bhi singhal garh me janmi us divya kanya se kisi bhi prakar kam na thi

Aaiye abhi hum chalte hain singhal garh, kanya janam se maharaj bahut khush huye…unhone sari praja me mithayi batwayi..raj mahal ko kisi nav naveli dulhan ki tarah sajaya gaya…har desho se badhayi aane ka tanta lag gaya

Janam ke baad chhathe din khushi me utsav manaya gaya…kul guru ko bulakar poojan archan kiya gaya…agle din naam karan karne ka nishchit kiya gaya

Subah hone par kul guru aur unke sath kayi rishi muni bhi aaye…..unhone purano aur puratan granth ko nikal kar kanya ke janam samay ke grah nakshatra aadi ki gadna aur arth karne lage

Gurudev—kanya ka janm uttam muhurta me hua hai….ye aisa chandrama hai jo bhumi par udit hua hai kintu jiske uday se swarg bhi prakashit hua gaya hai…is divya kanya ne jagat me kanya rashi me janam liya hai…iski ankhe, hoth, khushbu sab kuch padam (kamal) ki bhanti hi divya hai….isliye hum is divya aloukik kanya ka naam Padmini ya Divya rakhte hain

Gandharv Sen—Gurudev…agar meri putri itni sundar aur divya hai to uska vivah kaha hoga….? Kya meri putri ke yogya koi yuvak hoga kahi par….?

Gurudev—sansar me surya ki sparsh mani se jab krida huyi to uski kiran ke janam grahan karne se Heera nag (ratna) uttapann hua…kintu us nutan padarth ki kala us heere se bhi adhik hai, jo ki is kanya ke yogya hi nirmal ratna ke roop me uttapann hua hai

Champavati—vo koun hai gurudev….? Vo kis desh ke raja ki santan hai.... ? kya meri putri uske sath sukhi rah sakegi.. ? kya vo hamare maharaj ki tarah bahadur hoga..... ?

Gurudev—bhavishya ki bate samay par chhodiye maharani….agar ye divya kanya battis shubh lakshano se yukta hai to sochiye jisse ye kanya prem karegi vo kitna soubhagya shali hoga....Isse prem karne wala iske roop ke vashibhoot hokar usi prakar sab kuch bhool baithega jis prakar deepak ke vashibhut hokar patanga sab kuch bhul baithta hai

Padmini (divya) ki janam patrika bana kar aur use ashirwad dekar gurudev shishyo sahit vaha se chale gaye...dusri taraf janmi anya kanya ka naam Pari rakha gaya jabki dev lok me jiska janam hua us adbhut vilakshan divya kanya ka naam Priyadarshini ke naam se naam karan hua

Dhire dhire samay ka pahiya chalne laga aur dekhte hi dekhte Padmini (divya) paanch varsh ki ho gayi.......to usko ved aur puran padhne ke liye bitha diya gaya....

Jiske phal swaroop Jaldi hi vo vidwan aur gunvati ho gayi…..ye baat sabhi dwip khando ke rajao ne suni ki singhal garh ke raja ke yaha ki balika ko ishwar ne atyant gunvati aur mahasurup avtarit kiya hai




Sabhi sochne lage ki "Ek to vah Divya aur Padmini hai dusri gunvan aur padhi huyi hai, pata nahi kis var ke yogya ishwar ne aisi kanya ka nirman kiya hai, Jiske bhagya me ghar me Laxmi ka aana likha hoga, vahi aisi vidushi aur Lavanyavati ko prapt karega"

Dhire dhire samay gujarta raha, ab Padmini apne yauvan me kadam rakh chuki thi...uska roop rang aisa nikhar aaya tha ki log uski ek jhalak dekhne ke liye taraste rahte hi....nav-yuvak to chhodo vriddh jan tak uski jhalak pane ko hamesha lalayit rahte the....uske adbhut saundarya ne samuche singhal garh aur sabhi desho ke rajao ko sammohit kar liya tha

Padmini ke roop aur gun ki prashansa sun kar saato dwipo ke var aate the kintu koi uttar na pakar vo chup chap nirash hokar lout jate the

Maharaj Gandharv Sen sabhi se garv se kahta ki—"Main is dharti ka Indra hu, is dharti me koun meri samanta kar sakta hai aur main kis se apni putri ki bariksha karu"

Jab Padmini ne yuvavastha me padarpan kiya to maharani ne Gandharv Sen ko bataya ki hamari kanya ab vivah ke yogya sayani ho gayi hai

Gandharv Sen ka saat khando ka ek dhawal grah (saat manzila mahal) tha, jise maharaj ne Padmini ko rahne ke liye de diya

Padmini apni sabhi sakhi saheliyo ke sath us mahal me aa gayi....sabhi saheliya nav.balaye thi aur vo padmini ke paas aise lagti thi jaise ki kamal ke paas kumudni viksit ho rahi ho

Hum Phir Loutenge is Chhote se Break ke Baad

Main dark lok ki jamin par jaise hi apna pahla kadam rakha to vaise hi kisi gahre daldal me gardan tak dhans gaya…. Mujhe keechad me fasta dekh kar unicorn jor se chilla utha

Unicorn (chilla kar)—malikkkkkkk

Raj—unicorn ab tum yaha se vapis jao…..tumhara yaha adhik der tak rukna theek nahi hai….ye Devil King ka Rajya hai behtar hoga tum jao ab

Unicorn—kintu main apko musibat me chhod kar kaise ja sakta hu……?

Raj—tum meri fikar mat karo…..aisi musibato se main pahle bhi nipat chuka hu…kya tum agyant ko bhul gaye jab vo aise hi daldal me phansa tha….mujhe in halato se nipatna aata hai

Unicorn—kintu us jagah aur yaha me bahut antar hai…ye devil ka ghar hai

Raj—tumhe jitna kaha hai sirf utna karo…jao yaha se

Unicorn—jaisi apki agya

Unicorn vaha se adrishya hokar vapis lout gaya…..main gardan tak us daldal me phans chuka tha....hil dul tak nahi pa raha tha

Kafi der ho gaye mujhe aisi hi halat me phanse huye.......na to ye keechad mujhe andar khich raha tha aur na hi bahar nikalne de raha tha...aisa lag raha tha jaise ki kisi ne gardan ke niche ke hisse ko cement aur concrete se chunwa diya ho

Maine bahut koshish ki khud ko is musibat se azad kar lu lekin jab hath pair hi hila nahi pa raha tha to azad kaise karwa pata....yaha tak ki gardan ko bhi idhar udhar nahi ghuma pa raha tha

Main abhi khud ko is daldal se chhudane ki mashakkat me hi laga hua tha ki tabhi mujhe vaha par kisi ke aane ki aahat mahsus huyi....vo jo koyi bhi tha piche ki taraf se aa raha tha meri taraf jise main gardan na ghuma sakne ki vajah se dekh nahi pa raha tha sirf mahsus kar sakta tha

Dhire dhire chalte huye vo mere bilkul karib aa gaya.....kuch der tak mujhe ghurta raha....uske nathuno se aati badbu mujhe sahan nahi ho rahi thi

Raj—koun hai...samne aao..... ?

Mere kahne se vo jor jor se hasta hua mere samne aa gaya.....tab jakar meri nazar us par gayi....vo ek vishalkay kekda tha jiska muh bahut bada tha

Raj—koun ho tum..... ?

Kekda—hahahaha......main yaha ka pahredar hu.....mujhse bach kar koi nahi ja sakta

Raj—mujhe kyo pakda hai..... ?

Kekda—tu yaha aaya kaise…..? tujhe pata nahi ki ye devil ka rajya hai....vaise bhi chalo achcha hi hua bahut dino se kisi manav ka maans khane ko nahi mila tha..devil ne meri vafadari se khush hokar inam diya hai tujhe yaha bhej kar...hahahaha

Raj—dekh mujhe yaha se aage jane de tu mujhe nahi kha sakta

Kekda—hahaha....chup manav...awaz nahi...ye mere bhojan ka samay hai...

Raj—tujhe antim baar samjha raha hu….mujhe marna tere vash ki baat nahi hai….behtar hoga mujhe chhod de

Kekda (jor se)—bahut bolta hai tu tuchh manav…..ab dekh main kaise tujhe khata hu

Usne apna vishal muh phaila kar mere gardan ke karib aane laga……ye dekh maine apni ankhe band kar li….jaise hi usne apne muh me meri gardan ko bharne ki koshish ki vaise hi ek tez visfot ke sath uske jism ke chithde ho gaye aur sath me ek visfot us daldal me bhi hua jisse main uchalkar bahar aa gaya

Raj—sale maine samjhaya tha lekin nahi samjha….ja bhugat ab

Us daldal se azad hokar main aage badhne laga aur ek bar phir se apni ankhe band karke paridhi didi ko dhyan me dekhne laga

Kafi der tak dhyan me rahne ke baad mujhe vo nazar aayi.....unki halat dekh kar mere jism ka rowa rowa kaamp utha aur gusse se meri ankhe ekdam lal ho gayi

Idhar ghar me subah meri need khuli to didi ab bhi meri baho me chipki padi so rahi thi….mujhe unke chehre par santosh jhalak raha tha

Maine jhuk kar unke hotho ko halke se chum liya…..to unhone kasmasa kar aur bhi jyada jor se mujhse chipak gayi maine is bar apne hotho ko unke hotho se chipka kar jor jor se unke adhro ka ras pine laga

Pahle to vo sakpaka gayi lekin jab unhe ehsaas hua ki ye main hu to unhone kissing me mera sath dena shuru kar diya….maine kiss karte huye apne ek hath ko unke sudoul pushta stano par rakh diya aur unhe dhire dhire sahlane dabane laga to dusre hath ko unke mansal chutdo par tika diya

Kiss karte huye ruchi didi ki chuchiyo aur naram makhmali gand ko masalne dabane ka sukhad ehsaas milte hi sikandar apna sar utha kar apni jagah talashne me jut gaya

Kuch der tak kissing aur chuchi dabane ke baad maine dusra hath jo unki gand par tha usko uth kar unki salwar me andar dalne hi ja raha tha ki tabhi payal didi ne door knock karna chalu kar diya

Unke beech me door knock karne se hum hosh me aa gaye….maine ruchi didi ke chehre ki oor dekha to unhone sharma kar apna muh mere sine me chhupa liya

Maine ek bar phir se unke hotho ko halke se chum kar door khola aur phulan devi ko pakad ke gale se laga liya vo bhi chipak gayi

Payal—itna time kyo lagaya door kholne me……?

Raj—so raha tha..darling

Payal—chal jaldi fresh ho ja…main coffee banati hu

Maine unke hotho ko bhi dhire se chum kar apne room me aa gaya lekin vaha shayad vidhi naha rahi thi to main upar ek khali room wale bathroom me ghus gaya..lekin vaha ghuste hi jo nazara maine dekha usse to meri ankhe hi choundhiya gayi
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Awesome update
Apne jis tarh divya ka varnan kiya lajwab hai.
Uski sundarata ke anupm varnan kiya.
Divya raj pari or priyadarshini charo ka janm sath hua.
Ek amar prem gatha ki start ho chuki hai.
Raj dark lok me kichad me fas gaya.
Lakin devil king ke paltu raj ko khane aaya.
Lakin ek visfot ke sath vo mar gaya.
Raj ne paridhi ko devil lok me dekha.
Idher raj ne ghar ke bathroom me kisse dekhkar shock ho gaya.
 

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  • Mind Blowing Update
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  • Divya ki sundarta ka bahut hi sundar varnan kiya hai
  • Ek ek shabd dil me utar jane wala aur mann ko sammohit kar dene wala hai
  • Priyadarshini aur Pari ki kahani bhi ab isme jud gayi hai
  • Lekin abhi tak inke bare me koi varnan nahi aaya hai
  • Specially Saajan ke bare me koi tika tippani nahi huyi update me abhi tak
  • Rajguru ne divya ki shadi ke vishay me bataya ki jisse bhi hogi vo heere se bhi anmol hoga
  • Lekin yaha Rajgarh ka koi jikra nahi hai....? shayad Pari ki asli kahani hi kuch aur hai, jo pari bhi nahi janti, ho sakta hai ki pari ki wohi kahani yaha aaye
  • Raj dark lok ke kichad me phans gaya lekin apni power se usne kekda ko mar kar azad ho gaya
  • Usne paridhi ko kin halato me dekha ki usko itna gussa aa gaya....?
  • Unicorn ko vapis bhej diya..ye bhi theek tha
  • Idhar ghar me raj ke subah ki shuruwat romance se shuru huyi aur suspense par khatam
  • Bahut hi umda aur bemishal update
  • Nishchay hi aap ek top class ke writer hain
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  • Overall Amazing & Fabulous update
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Ek Amar Prem Gaatha Continues…………

Singhal garh me khushiya manayi ja rahi thi….maharaj Gandharv sen ke mann me umango ka tyohar jaisa mahoul tha..

Antah akhir vo din bhi aa hi gaya jab maharani champavati ko prasav pida honi shuru ho gayi….maharaj bechain hokar raj mahal me idhar udhar tahal rahe the….unke kaan kisi shubh samachar sunne ko aatur the

Maharani ke garbh ki ghadi poori hote hi unhone madhya ratri ke samay ek sundar kanya ko janam diya….Kamal ke phool jaisi uski ankhe aur khushbu thi kamal ki pankhudi jaise hi uske hoth the

Vah kanya janam ke samay aisi lagi jaise ki surya ki kiran ho aur jo surya se nikal kar bahar aayi ho……balki surya ki kiran ki chamak bhi uske samne kam thi aur vo kanya usse bhi badh kar thi

Bhaye dus maas poori bhayi ghari, Kamal nayni kanya avtari
Jaise suraj kiran huyi kadhi, Suraj kiran ghati vah baadhi


Ratri me hi din ke jaisa prakash ho gaya…..aur samast raj mandir prakashit hokar kailash ki bhanti chamakne laga….vah itni sundar thi ki purnima ka shashi bhi uski sundarta se haar maan kar ksheen hokar ghatne laga

Vah shashi itna ghata ki ghatate ghatate amavashya ki ratri ho gayi aur chaand agle do dino tak lajja ke karan bhumi me gada raha…

Tadnantar jab vah chandrama punah udit hua tab vah dwitiya ka naya chaand ban kar uday hua….us kanya ki kamal gandh ne vasna se sabko sammohit kar diya aur ras evam roop par nyochhavar hone wale bhramar tatha patange uske charo taraf madrane lage

Padam Gandh Vedha Jag Baasa, Bhanwar Patang Bhaye Chahu Paasa

Uski atyadhik sundar thi, apma maa champavati se bhi badh kar uska roop abhi se tha…vah desh dhanya hai jaha aisi sundar aur Divya kanya ka janam hua

Kintu shayad kisi ne ye dhyan nahi diya ki theek us samay jab singhal garh me is divya kanya ka janam hua usi samay par teen anya balko ka bhi janam hua….ek hi nakshatra, ek hi din aur ek hi samay par

Singhal garh ke paas ke dwip me hi ek anya kanya ne janam liya….vo bhi atyant sundar thi…halanki dono kanyayo ki sundarta me koi samanta nahi thi

Ek anya balak ne Jambu dwip me janam liya…..in teeno ka janam dharti par hua…kintu in sabke viprit ek anya divya kanya ne inke janam ke samay par hi dev lok me janam liya…..uski sundrta bhi singhal garh me janmi us divya kanya se kisi bhi prakar kam na thi

Aaiye abhi hum chalte hain singhal garh, kanya janam se maharaj bahut khush huye…unhone sari praja me mithayi batwayi..raj mahal ko kisi nav naveli dulhan ki tarah sajaya gaya…har desho se badhayi aane ka tanta lag gaya

Janam ke baad chhathe din khushi me utsav manaya gaya…kul guru ko bulakar poojan archan kiya gaya…agle din naam karan karne ka nishchit kiya gaya

Subah hone par kul guru aur unke sath kayi rishi muni bhi aaye…..unhone purano aur puratan granth ko nikal kar kanya ke janam samay ke grah nakshatra aadi ki gadna aur arth karne lage

Gurudev—kanya ka janm uttam muhurta me hua hai….ye aisa chandrama hai jo bhumi par udit hua hai kintu jiske uday se swarg bhi prakashit hua gaya hai…is divya kanya ne jagat me kanya rashi me janam liya hai…iski ankhe, hoth, khushbu sab kuch padam (kamal) ki bhanti hi divya hai….isliye hum is divya aloukik kanya ka naam Padmini ya Divya rakhte hain

Gandharv Sen—Gurudev…agar meri putri itni sundar aur divya hai to uska vivah kaha hoga….? Kya meri putri ke yogya koi yuvak hoga kahi par….?

Gurudev—sansar me surya ki sparsh mani se jab krida huyi to uski kiran ke janam grahan karne se Heera nag (ratna) uttapann hua…kintu us nutan padarth ki kala us heere se bhi adhik hai, jo ki is kanya ke yogya hi nirmal ratna ke roop me uttapann hua hai

Champavati—vo koun hai gurudev….? Vo kis desh ke raja ki santan hai.... ? kya meri putri uske sath sukhi rah sakegi.. ? kya vo hamare maharaj ki tarah bahadur hoga..... ?

Gurudev—bhavishya ki bate samay par chhodiye maharani….agar ye divya kanya battis shubh lakshano se yukta hai to sochiye jisse ye kanya prem karegi vo kitna soubhagya shali hoga....Isse prem karne wala iske roop ke vashibhoot hokar usi prakar sab kuch bhool baithega jis prakar deepak ke vashibhut hokar patanga sab kuch bhul baithta hai

Padmini (divya) ki janam patrika bana kar aur use ashirwad dekar gurudev shishyo sahit vaha se chale gaye...dusri taraf janmi anya kanya ka naam Pari rakha gaya jabki dev lok me jiska janam hua us adbhut vilakshan divya kanya ka naam Priyadarshini ke naam se naam karan hua

Dhire dhire samay ka pahiya chalne laga aur dekhte hi dekhte Padmini (divya) paanch varsh ki ho gayi.......to usko ved aur puran padhne ke liye bitha diya gaya....

Jiske phal swaroop Jaldi hi vo vidwan aur gunvati ho gayi…..ye baat sabhi dwip khando ke rajao ne suni ki singhal garh ke raja ke yaha ki balika ko ishwar ne atyant gunvati aur mahasurup avtarit kiya hai




Sabhi sochne lage ki "Ek to vah Divya aur Padmini hai dusri gunvan aur padhi huyi hai, pata nahi kis var ke yogya ishwar ne aisi kanya ka nirman kiya hai, Jiske bhagya me ghar me Laxmi ka aana likha hoga, vahi aisi vidushi aur Lavanyavati ko prapt karega"

Dhire dhire samay gujarta raha, ab Padmini apne yauvan me kadam rakh chuki thi...uska roop rang aisa nikhar aaya tha ki log uski ek jhalak dekhne ke liye taraste rahte hi....nav-yuvak to chhodo vriddh jan tak uski jhalak pane ko hamesha lalayit rahte the....uske adbhut saundarya ne samuche singhal garh aur sabhi desho ke rajao ko sammohit kar liya tha

Padmini ke roop aur gun ki prashansa sun kar saato dwipo ke var aate the kintu koi uttar na pakar vo chup chap nirash hokar lout jate the

Maharaj Gandharv Sen sabhi se garv se kahta ki—"Main is dharti ka Indra hu, is dharti me koun meri samanta kar sakta hai aur main kis se apni putri ki bariksha karu"

Jab Padmini ne yuvavastha me padarpan kiya to maharani ne Gandharv Sen ko bataya ki hamari kanya ab vivah ke yogya sayani ho gayi hai

Gandharv Sen ka saat khando ka ek dhawal grah (saat manzila mahal) tha, jise maharaj ne Padmini ko rahne ke liye de diya

Padmini apni sabhi sakhi saheliyo ke sath us mahal me aa gayi....sabhi saheliya nav.balaye thi aur vo padmini ke paas aise lagti thi jaise ki kamal ke paas kumudni viksit ho rahi ho

Hum Phir Loutenge is Chhote se Break ke Baad

Main dark lok ki jamin par jaise hi apna pahla kadam rakha to vaise hi kisi gahre daldal me gardan tak dhans gaya…. Mujhe keechad me fasta dekh kar unicorn jor se chilla utha

Unicorn (chilla kar)—malikkkkkkk

Raj—unicorn ab tum yaha se vapis jao…..tumhara yaha adhik der tak rukna theek nahi hai….ye Devil King ka Rajya hai behtar hoga tum jao ab

Unicorn—kintu main apko musibat me chhod kar kaise ja sakta hu……?

Raj—tum meri fikar mat karo…..aisi musibato se main pahle bhi nipat chuka hu…kya tum agyant ko bhul gaye jab vo aise hi daldal me phansa tha….mujhe in halato se nipatna aata hai

Unicorn—kintu us jagah aur yaha me bahut antar hai…ye devil ka ghar hai

Raj—tumhe jitna kaha hai sirf utna karo…jao yaha se

Unicorn—jaisi apki agya

Unicorn vaha se adrishya hokar vapis lout gaya…..main gardan tak us daldal me phans chuka tha....hil dul tak nahi pa raha tha

Kafi der ho gaye mujhe aisi hi halat me phanse huye.......na to ye keechad mujhe andar khich raha tha aur na hi bahar nikalne de raha tha...aisa lag raha tha jaise ki kisi ne gardan ke niche ke hisse ko cement aur concrete se chunwa diya ho

Maine bahut koshish ki khud ko is musibat se azad kar lu lekin jab hath pair hi hila nahi pa raha tha to azad kaise karwa pata....yaha tak ki gardan ko bhi idhar udhar nahi ghuma pa raha tha

Main abhi khud ko is daldal se chhudane ki mashakkat me hi laga hua tha ki tabhi mujhe vaha par kisi ke aane ki aahat mahsus huyi....vo jo koyi bhi tha piche ki taraf se aa raha tha meri taraf jise main gardan na ghuma sakne ki vajah se dekh nahi pa raha tha sirf mahsus kar sakta tha

Dhire dhire chalte huye vo mere bilkul karib aa gaya.....kuch der tak mujhe ghurta raha....uske nathuno se aati badbu mujhe sahan nahi ho rahi thi

Raj—koun hai...samne aao..... ?

Mere kahne se vo jor jor se hasta hua mere samne aa gaya.....tab jakar meri nazar us par gayi....vo ek vishalkay kekda tha jiska muh bahut bada tha

Raj—koun ho tum..... ?

Kekda—hahahaha......main yaha ka pahredar hu.....mujhse bach kar koi nahi ja sakta

Raj—mujhe kyo pakda hai..... ?

Kekda—tu yaha aaya kaise…..? tujhe pata nahi ki ye devil ka rajya hai....vaise bhi chalo achcha hi hua bahut dino se kisi manav ka maans khane ko nahi mila tha..devil ne meri vafadari se khush hokar inam diya hai tujhe yaha bhej kar...hahahaha

Raj—dekh mujhe yaha se aage jane de tu mujhe nahi kha sakta

Kekda—hahaha....chup manav...awaz nahi...ye mere bhojan ka samay hai...

Raj—tujhe antim baar samjha raha hu….mujhe marna tere vash ki baat nahi hai….behtar hoga mujhe chhod de

Kekda (jor se)—bahut bolta hai tu tuchh manav…..ab dekh main kaise tujhe khata hu

Usne apna vishal muh phaila kar mere gardan ke karib aane laga……ye dekh maine apni ankhe band kar li….jaise hi usne apne muh me meri gardan ko bharne ki koshish ki vaise hi ek tez visfot ke sath uske jism ke chithde ho gaye aur sath me ek visfot us daldal me bhi hua jisse main uchalkar bahar aa gaya

Raj—sale maine samjhaya tha lekin nahi samjha….ja bhugat ab

Us daldal se azad hokar main aage badhne laga aur ek bar phir se apni ankhe band karke paridhi didi ko dhyan me dekhne laga

Kafi der tak dhyan me rahne ke baad mujhe vo nazar aayi.....unki halat dekh kar mere jism ka rowa rowa kaamp utha aur gusse se meri ankhe ekdam lal ho gayi

Idhar ghar me subah meri need khuli to didi ab bhi meri baho me chipki padi so rahi thi….mujhe unke chehre par santosh jhalak raha tha

Maine jhuk kar unke hotho ko halke se chum liya…..to unhone kasmasa kar aur bhi jyada jor se mujhse chipak gayi maine is bar apne hotho ko unke hotho se chipka kar jor jor se unke adhro ka ras pine laga

Pahle to vo sakpaka gayi lekin jab unhe ehsaas hua ki ye main hu to unhone kissing me mera sath dena shuru kar diya….maine kiss karte huye apne ek hath ko unke sudoul pushta stano par rakh diya aur unhe dhire dhire sahlane dabane laga to dusre hath ko unke mansal chutdo par tika diya

Kiss karte huye ruchi didi ki chuchiyo aur naram makhmali gand ko masalne dabane ka sukhad ehsaas milte hi sikandar apna sar utha kar apni jagah talashne me jut gaya

Kuch der tak kissing aur chuchi dabane ke baad maine dusra hath jo unki gand par tha usko uth kar unki salwar me andar dalne hi ja raha tha ki tabhi payal didi ne door knock karna chalu kar diya

Unke beech me door knock karne se hum hosh me aa gaye….maine ruchi didi ke chehre ki oor dekha to unhone sharma kar apna muh mere sine me chhupa liya

Maine ek bar phir se unke hotho ko halke se chum kar door khola aur phulan devi ko pakad ke gale se laga liya vo bhi chipak gayi

Payal—itna time kyo lagaya door kholne me……?

Raj—so raha tha..darling

Payal—chal jaldi fresh ho ja…main coffee banati hu

Maine unke hotho ko bhi dhire se chum kar apne room me aa gaya lekin vaha shayad vidhi naha rahi thi to main upar ek khali room wale bathroom me ghus gaya..lekin vaha ghuste hi jo nazara maine dekha usse to meri ankhe hi choundhiya gayi
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Divya (padmani),Pari,Priyadarshini aur Raj ka janam ek sath ek hi nakshtra me hua unhe divye gun bhi prapat huye itna update ke phele bhag se samjh aya...

Devil ke grah me kya huta yeh dekhna bada dilchasp hogya..

aur Raj ne paridhi ko ki awastha me dekha aur wo kaha ye suspence abhi bhi barkar hai..
 
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