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To ab mani ka agle bhaag ka adventure start ho gaya magar kia priya wapas swarglok jaayegi aur kab raj wapas dharri lok me pohchay ga shayad yaha adventure me usay zada waqt lage to kyu na wo apne ek ansh waha bhej de taki sab ki chinta na rahey.SAAJAN
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Nani (vidhya ko)—chaatttaaakkk….band kar apne ye magar machchh ke anshoo…..aaj tune mujhe apni hi nazaro me gira diya….apni bahan ke sath ye karte tujhe jara bhi sharam nahi aayi.
Priyadarshini—aap unko kyo bol rahi ho….? Jo aap ne kiya vahi to usne bhi kiya hai…..jaisi maa vaisi beti.
Nani (gusse me)—tu hoti koun hai beech me bolne wali.... ? ye hamare pariwar ka matter hai....tu yaha ek mehmaan hai aur mehmaan ki tarah chupchap rah samjhi.
Nani ki ye baat priyadarshini ke paas me khadi mrinal ke dil me jahar me bujhe huye kisi teer ki bhanti ja chubhi.....uska poora gora mukh mandal atyant kroadh se tamtama gaya......gusse ki vajah se uske chehre par pasine ki boonde chhalak aayi.
Ab Aage......
Mrinal gusse me nani ke upar shakti prayog karne hi wali thi ki tabhi uske mann me uski maa ki awaz sunayi dene lagi jisse uska dhyan nani ke upar se hat gaya.
"Putri Mrinal tum kaha ho.... ? aur Rajkumari Priyadarshini kaha hai... ? Yaha sabhi unko lekar pareshan hain...Tum shighra hi unko lekar swarg log vapis lout aao." Uski maa ne kaha.
Mrinal—hum dono sakushal se hain maa, theek hai maa hum dono jaldi hi loutenge.
Mrinal ne apni maa se baat karne ke pashchat jaise hi nani ki taraf ghumi to vo vaha se ja chuki thi...mrinal unko khojne jane hi wali thi ki priyadarshini ne uski mansha bhanp kar uska hath pakad ke na me ishara kiya.
Mrinal (mann me)—agar mujhe tumhare prem ka khyal nahi hota to ab tak ye budhiya narak wasi ban chuki hoti…par sabak to isko jarur sikhaungi main ab.
Jabki vahi room me sabhi mamta ko gher kar khade huye the….usko abhi tak hosh nahi aaya tha….doctor’s ki team apne prayas me lagi huyi thi…par chanchal dahleez se hi dekh rahi thi.
Mrinal—sakhi yahi sahi mouka hai….iss ghar ke logo ke dil me apni jagah banane ka….tum kisi tarah se maa ji ko hosh me le aao…..aisa karne se unke dil me tumhari jagah bhi banegi aur raj ka khichav bhi tumhari oor hoga.
Priyadarshini—tumhara kahna theek hai mrinal….main unko theek to jarur kar sakti hu, kintu maa ji ka raj ke aane tak behosh rahna hi jyada uchit lagta hai.. agar vo hosh me aa gayi to iss samay unke hriday me itni adhik taklif hai ki unke dard me doobe anshuo se ye poora ghar hi bah jayega….unko sambhalna bahut mushkil hoga…saajan iss paristhiti ko asani se sambhal sakte hain…..tum kyo koshish nahi karti…?
Mrinal—main kya koshish karu….? Mujhse to koi dhang se baat bhi nahi karta……aur vo balatkari veer to mujhe dekh kar aise door bhagta hai jaise ki mujhe koi chhut ki bimari ho aur mere paas aate hi usko lag jayegi.
Priyadarshini—vaise tum dono ki jodi achchi rahegi.
Mrinal—meri jodi ki chinta chhodo aur swarg log jane ki taiyyari karo....devraj ne tumhe turant bulaya hai.
Priyadarshini (chintit)—meri bhi baat ho chuki hai unse....bas ek baar saajan ka prem mil jaye to phir mujhe kisi ki chinta nahi hai.
Mrinal—saajan ke vapis aate hi khul kar unse apne dil ka haal bayan kar de....phir jo hoga dekha jayega.
Priyadarshini—hmmmm....chalo himmat karti hu iss baar.
Vahi dusri taraf uss anjan jagah par hum jungle me nirantar aage badhte ja rahe the iss baat se bekhabar ki hamare piche kya chal raha hai…?
Neha—pata nahi ye jungle kab khatam hoga…?
Raj—chalte raho dekhte hain.
Hum sabhi aise hi baate karte huye aage badhte ja rahe the….jab kafi der ne payal didi ke kuch bhi nahi bola to mujhe behad hairani huyi.
Raj (mann me)—kya baat hai….didi itni shant kaise hain…..? lagta hai unicorn ko bulane se mere mana karne ki vajah se naraz ho gayi hongi….warna itne samay tak to vo mujhse bina baat kiye shant rah hi nahi sakti….shayad chalte chalte thak bhi gayi hongi…..chalo unko apni god me utha leta hu….unki jyada der tak narazgi main bardast nahi kar sakta.
Ye soch kar main jaise hi piche palta to hairan rah gaya….piche jungle ka door door tak kahi koi namo nishan tak nahi tha aur na hi payal didi ka.
Mera poora dimag jhanjhana gaya…..jism me rakt pravah hona jaise tham gaya tha….mere aise achanak rukne se baki sab bhi piche ki oor palat gaye….unki halat bhi dahshat aur khauf ke ghere me aa gayi.
Neha (shocked)—omg…..ye kya hai….? Payal kaha hai….? Vo jungle kaha gaya….?
Paridhi—achanak itna andhera kaise ho gaya…….?
Divya—lagta hai hamare sath dhokha hua hai….?
Raj (jor se chillate huye)—payal didiiiiiii
Neha—payal betaaaaaaaa
Paridhi—payalllllll
Divya—didiiiiiiiiiii
Lekin kisi ke baar baar chillane par bhi koi pratyuttar nahi aaya….to sabhi ghabra gaye…..maine turant apni ankhe band kar ke dhyan laga kar payal didi ko dekhne ki koshish karne laga.
Dhyan me bhi siway ghanghor andhkar ke kuch bhi nazar nahi aa raha tha……na hi payal didi ka kuch pata chal raha tha…. mere hriday me bechaini badhne lagi thi….mera dhyan toot gaya tha.
Mere dil me payal didi ki ahmiyat ka andaza lagane ka main kabhi soch bhi nahi sakta tha…..vo mujhe har khatre se bachane ke liye hamesha meri dhaal ban kar mere samne khadi ho jati thi.
Aaj mere rahte huye bhi unko khatre me hone ka andesha hote hi meri ruh kaamp gayi…..meri ankho me nami utar aayi aur mujhe khud par gussa aane laga.
Raj (nam ankho se)—sab meri vajah se hua hai…..agar maine didi ki baat maan kar unicorn ki shakti ka use kar leta to ye naubat hi nahi aati.
Neha (ghabrate huye)—jaldi kuch karo raj……mujhe meri payal sahi salamat chahiye…..main didi ko kya muh dikhaungi…kya kahungi unse ki maine apni beti paridhi ki jaan bachane ke liye unki kokh ujad di….kaise samna karungi unka….?
Saloni—ye sochne ka nahi kuch karne ka samay hai raj.
Paridhi (sisakte huye)—ye sab meri vajah se ho raha hai…..main hi manhoos hu.
Raj (bhigi palke)—kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai......dhyan me bhi didi kahi nahi dikh rahi hain.....didi aap kaha ho..aa jao...aap jaisa kahogi main vaisa hi karunga.
Divya—agar aap hi himmat haar jaoge to didi ko koun bachayega iss khatre se..... ? aur phir mere vishwash ka kya hoga……?
Main ankhe band kar ke vahi niche baith gaya aur khud ki bhavnao ko niyantrit karne ka prayas karne laga…kuch der me jab maine apne aap ko shant kar liya tab aage kya karna hai iss vishay me sochne laga.
Saloni—ab kaha talash kare payal ko...upar se ye andhera pata nahi kaise tapak pada.
Raj—hame piche jana hoga....kyonki didi hamare piche piche chal rahi thi aur vahi se gayab ho gayi to jahir hai ki jo kuch hua hai vo sab iss andhere ke karan hi hai.
Divya—to phir chaliye jaldi.
Raj—aage koi bhi khatra ho sakta hai….sab ek dusre ka hath pakad kar chalo mere sath.
Neha—ok
Sab ek dusre ka hath pakad kar mere sath sath chal pade….jaise hi maine uss andhkar me pahla kadam rakha tabhi vaha kisi ke jor se cheekhne ki awaz goonj uthi…..ye awaz sunte hi main chounk gaya, kyon ki ye minakshi ki awaz thi.
“Aaaahhhhhhh……agyantttttt……bachaaaooooo.”
Neha—ye kis ke cheekhne ki awaz hai…..? kahi payal kisi khatre me to nahi phans gayi….?
Raj—ye minakshi ki awaz hai…..par yaha par minakshi kaise...... ?
Divya—kahi minakshi iss jagah hi to qaid nahi hai….?
Tabhi ek baar phir se minakshi ki dard me chillane ki awaze aane lagi…..main sab ka hath pakde uss awaz ki disha me tezi se badhne laga…lekin ashcharya ki baat ye thi ki ab vaha koi jungle nahi tha kyon ki andhere me chalne ke bavjud hum kisi ped se nahi takra rahe the.
Main lagatar minakshi ki awaz ka picha karte huye aage badhta ja raha tha….abhi kuch hi aage gaya tha ki tabhi dusri disha se ek aur awaz chillane ki aayi jisne mere kadmo ko vahi rok diya.
“Raajjjjjjj……bachaaaoooooo.”
Paridhi (chounk kar)—ye to payal ki awaz hai…..lagta hai ki vo yahi kahi hai.
Main turant payal didi ki awaz ki disha me palat gaya……kuch door jane par phir se minakshi ki awaz aane lagi aur dusri disha se payal didi ki…..mera to dimag hi kharab ho gaya ki jau to kidhar jau….?
Neha—pahle payal ko bachao rajj..
Main minakshi ki awaz ko ansuna karte huye payal didi ko bachane ke liye badh gaya….main jitni bhi door jata tha awaz mujhse utni hi door hoti ja rahi thi.
Hum badhawash ho kar idhar se udhar bhatakne lage…lekin kahi koi kinara nahi mil raha tha….tabhi chalte huye hum chhapak se gahre pani me gir gaye….pani me girte hi sab ke hath ek dusre se alag ho gaye.
Achanak ye beech me pani aa jane se main chounk gaya……hum pani ke andar doobne lage….ab kisi ki bhi awaz sunayi nahi de rahi thi yaha tak ki neha chachi, saloni, paridhi ya phir divya ki.
Raj (jor se)—chachi……paridhi….saloni…divyaaaaaa
Lekin kisi ka koi response na milne se main boukhala gaya....aur pani me idhar udhar hath pair marte huye bhagne laga jor jor se sab ka naam chillate huye.
Phir achanak vaha prakash phail gaya aur roshni hote hi jo nazara mere samne aaya usko dekhte hi main ek baar phir se hairan rah gaya.
Kyon ki meri ankho ke samne iss samay athah samundra phaila hua tha.....maine charo taraf nazar doudayi to kisi ka kahi ata pata nahi tha .....agar tha to sirf vishal jal sagar....divya ko vaha na dekh kar mera mann bawla hone lag gaya...aisa lagne laga jaise uske bina meri dhadkane hi ruk jayengi.
Tabhi mere kaano me kisi ke chillane ki awaz sunayi di to maine jaise hi udhar dekha to gusse se meri ankhe lal ho gayi.... ek rakshas neha, paridhi,saloni ko khichte huye samundra me liye ja raha tha.
Main doudte huye uske paas jane laga...sab ki nazar mujh par padte hi aur jor jor se cheekhne lagi...mujhe vaha dekh kar vo rakshas mere upar aag ke gole barsane laga.
Lekin main unhe pani se bujha deta tha....ab ki baar usne burf ke gole fekna shuru kar diya..maine aag ke gole fenk unko pani bana diya.
Apni shaktiyo ko vifal hote dekh usne gusse me aa kar pani me bawandar banane laga...mere kuch karne se pahle hi usne sab ko utha ke ussi bawandar me fenk diya....vo pani ka bawandar itna vikral ho gaya ki usne divya ko uchhal kar bahut door phenk diya samundra me jabki bakiyo ko dubo diya.....ye dekh main apna aapa kho baitha aur meri ankho se bijli ki tarange nikalne lagi....unn tarango ke lapete me aate hi vo cheekhte huye bhasm ho gaya aur phir maine pani ki shakti se uske bawandar ko shant kar diya.
Bawandar shant hote hi jab mera gussa thanda hua to main phir se sab ko dhoondne laga....mujhe divya bhi kahi nahi mil rahi thi.....mera mann vyathit hone laga.
Raj (mann me)—kisko pukaru...kiske paas jau... jo sankat ke samay iss sthan par mera mitra ho…? Lagta hai sab ko ye samudra hi nigal gaya hai aur sath me meri divya ko bhi……uss samudra manthan ke samay jo shaktiya thi, vo aaj kaha hain….? Vo brahma, vishnu aur mahesh kaha hain….? Aur kaha vah meru parvat aur shesh hain…? Aaj vaisa saaz koun lakar jutayega ki vasuki rassi ho aur meru manthan dand ho..... ? punah koun uss prakar samudra ka manthan kar sakta hai jaise kshir sagar matha gaya tha... ? jab tak jeev prano ko dekar koi manthan nahi karta hai, tab tak kuch sambhav nahi hai...meri divya ko nigal kar samudra nishchint ho gaya hai.....ab to uske upar koi kathinayi pade to hi vah meri divya ko lekar prakat hoga....ab koun uss chandra ko udghatit kar ke mere hriday ko prakashit karega. Agar meri divya hi nahi rahi to phir mera jeevan hi vyarth hai...main bhi samundra me doob kar apni jaan de deta hu.
Main abhi ye soch hi raha tha ki tabhi…..mujhe divya meri taraf aati huyi dikhi…..usko jinda dekh kar mera tan mann jhum utha.
Divya—kaha chale gaye the.... ? main kab se dhoond rahi hu.
Raj (serious)—koun ho tum….?
Divya—ye kaisi baate kar rahe ho…? Main divya hu tumhari divya…lagta hai iss jagah jarur koi maya hai jo mujhe pahchan nahi rahe ho.
Raj—nahi tum meri divya nahi ho sakti….divya ko dekhte hi mera dil jor jor se dhadakne lagta hai…mujhe apni antar aatma me ek alag hi khushi mahsoos hone lagti hai…..beshak tum divya ki tarah dikhti ho..sab kuch vaisa hi hai lekin tum meri divya nahi ho sakti…tum jao yaha se.
Divya (rote huye)—main hi divya hu…ab kaise yakin dilau tumhe…..? theek hai agar mujhse mann bhar gaya hai to main hi samundra me kood ke apni jaan de deti hu.
Raj—dekho tum koun ho aur kyo ro rahi ho….? Main pahle bhi kah chuka hu ki tum meri divya nahi ho sakti…main divya ki saanso ki khushbu ko bhali bhanti pahchanta hu…..main uske liye apne pran bhi nyochhavar kar sakta hu .. koi aur stri divya ki jagah kabhi nahi le sakti…bhanwra bhale hi samast phoolo par udta phirta hai lekin vo unn phoolo ki khushbu nahi leta hai……vah to kewal malti ko dhoodta phirta hai….vah jaha par malti ki khushbu pata hai, uska daas hokar uss par apna jeev nyochhavar kar deta hai…...isliye rona band karo aur apna parichay do.
Aur tabhi vo ladki jisne divya ka roop dharan kiya hua tha, vaha se adrishya ho gayi aur vaha divya prakash phail gaya………uss prakash punj ke beecho beech uss jagah par swayam kamlasan par devi mahalaxmi virajman ho kar mujhe dekhte huye mushkura rahi thi.
Main unhe dekhte hi unke charno me jhuk gaya aur apni asabhyata aur agyanta ke liye ke liye kshama yachna karne laga.
Mahalaxmi—hey putra…maine tumhari satya nistha ka bhav dekha hai….main to bas tumhare prem aur paurush ki pariksha le rahi thi jisme tum uttirn huye.
Raj—main aaj apke darshano se kritarth ho gaya maa…mera ye nashwar jeevan safal ho gaya….kintu main divya ke bina jivit nahi rah sakta maa…uske bina to meri saanse bhi apna rasta bhatak jati hain.
Mahalaxmi—tumhari divya jivit hai….tumhare paas aane se pahle maine uski hi pariksha li thi…tum dono ka prem shaswat, nirmal, ahankar rahit aur nishchal hai…tum dono ka prem sabhi lok ke liye ek mishal hai.
Raj—main kuch samjha nahi maa….?
Mahalaxmi—abhi tumhare sath jo bhi kuch ghatit hua vo meri hi maya ka ek ansh tha….
Raj—maa…kya baki sab bhi jivit hain…?
Mahalaxmi—haa putra...vo sab tumhe ussi jagah milenge jaha par tumne payal ki khoj shuru ki thi..sirf divya ko chhod kar.
Raj—divya kaha hai maa..... ? aur ye kaisi maya thi apki jisme mujhe minakshi ki awaz sunayi de rahi thi.... ?
Mahalaxmi—ye maya maine tum dono ki pariksha lene ke liye hi rachi thi......minakshi uss black hole me hi qaid hai kintu uske charo taraf mayavi shaktiyo ka pahra hai aur dusra uske paas mani hai...
Raj—mujhe baki ke mani ke ansh kaha milenge..... ?
Mahalaxmi—rajgarh se tumne jo tilismi kitab hasil ki hai…uske andar kuch sawal hain…tumhe unn sawalo ke jawab ki khoj karni hogi….jaise hi tum kisi sawal ka uttar pa loge to tumhe mani ka ek ansh milne ka rasta bhi mil jayega ek sawal ka hal matlab mani ka ek ansh….sawal ke jariye hi tum minakshi tak pahuch sakte ho….kintu dhyan rahe ki khatra har jagah hai…sawal ka jawab kahi par bhi ho sakta hai..dharti..akash..patal ya phir koi bhi lok me.
Raj—jaisi apki agya mata
Mahalaxmi—ye lo putra..meri taraf se tumhare liye ashirwad....
Mata ne antardhyan hone se pahle mujhe paanch cheeze apne ashirwad swaroop pradan ki..Amrit, hans, raj pakshi, shardul aur paras patthar..sath hi unhone ye bhi bata diya ki divya mujhe kaha milegi.
Maine maa mahalaxmi ke inn ashirwad ko swikar kar ke divya ki taraf chala gaya...mujhe dekhte hi vo bhagte huye aa kar mujhse lipat gayi.....ab vaha koi samundra nahi tha..palak jhapakte hi vo adrishya ho gaya tha.
Divya—ye samundra kaha gaya.... ? aur baki sab kaha hain.... ?
Raj—chalo mere sath
Main divya ko lekar ussi jagah aa gaya....jaha sabhi baith kar ro rahi thi....mujhe dekhte hi vo sab bhi rote huye bhag kar mujhse lipat gayi.
Neha—agar tum uss rakshas ko nahi marte to aaj vo hame kha jata.
Raj—aap log yaha kaise pahuchi…?
Paridhi—jab uss rakshas ne hame uss bawandar me phenk diya to hum doobne lagi phir behosh ho gayi jab ankh khuli to yaha paya khud ko.
Neha / saloni—mere sath bhi yahi hua.
Raj—aur aap kaha chali gayi thi didi.
Payal—main kahi nahi gayi thi....achanak se kisi ne mera gala daba diya tha jisse main behosh ho gayi thi...jab hosh aaya to tujhe yaha na dekh baith kar yahi ro rahi thi.
Raj—ohhh..thanks god.....achcha didi...vo tilismi kitab kaha rakhi hai..... ?
Payal—vo main hamesha apne sath me hi rakhti hu.....kya pata kahi vo budhiya hi na chura le kabhi... ? kyo... ?
Raj—usme aage kya likha hai..padhna jara.
Paridhi—par aage padhne ke liye to mani ka dusra ansh chahiye na jo ki minakshi ke paas hai.... ?
Raj—iss baar aap padho...kuch na kuch likha jarur milega vaha.
Paridhi—theek hai
Payal didi ne pahle kitab ko khol kar dekha lekin unhe aage kuch likha nahi mila to unhone vo paridhi ko thama di… paridhi ne uske aage ka jaise hi page khola to usme upar ek shayari likhi huyi thi…aur uske niche ek ajib sawal.
“Upar Ambar Niche Dharti, Beech Mein Hain Dil Ke AfsaaneSawal—“Chouki Par Baithi Ek Rani, Sir Par Aag Badan Mein Pani."
Afsaano Mein Dard Hai Kitna, Pyar Ke Dushman Ye Kya Jaane.”
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