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Birthday Special
Ghar loutne ke baad use koi mouka na milta dekh ritu soch me pad gayi…kyon ki nahate samay to kisi na kisi ki nazar padni hi thi…to usne subah achche se fresh na ho pane ka bahana kar lota le ke ghar se nikal akeli hi nikal padi..aur iss bar usne gaon ke bahar bane sunsan khandahar ki taraf kadam badha diye.
Khandahar ke paas pahuch kar usne ek bar apne charo taraf dekha aur phir tezi se uss khandahar me ghus gayi...abhi ritu khandahar ke andar ghusi hi thi ki tabhi agle hi pal ritu ke cheekhne ki awaz uss khandahar me goonj uthi...
"Bachaaaooooo....Raaaajjjjj.....Bachaaaaoooooo"
Ab aage......
Main uss samay fresh ho kar khet se lout raha tha ki tabhi meri nazar ritu didi par gayi...unhe khandahar ki taraf jate dekh kar mujhe behad hairani huyi kyon ki uss taraf log bahut hi kam jate the khas kar ke aurat aur ladkiya to bilkul bhi nahi.. uss khandahar me pahle kayi kand ho chuke the jiske karan logo ke mann me uske prati darr baith gaya tha...sirf main hi yaha aata rahta tha jab kisi ko chodne ki koi dhang ki jagah na milti to main yaha la kar unhe pelta tha tension free ho kar.
Ritu didi ko udhar jate dekh kar mere ,mann me hairani paida ho gayi to main bhi chupke chupke unka picha karte huye khandahar ki taraf nikal gaya...mere vaha pahuchne tak vo meri ankho se ojhal ho chuki thi...tabhi mere kano me kisi ke cheekhne ki awaz sunayi padi.
Awz sunte hi main pahchan gaya ki ye ritu didi ki awaz hai to ghabra kar turant tezi se khandar ke andar daud pada... andar pahuchte hi maine jaise hi nazre ghuma kar dekha to dekhte hi buri tarah se choumk gaya.
Khandar ke andar toote huye kamre me ek taraf ritu didi niche padi huyi buri tarah chhatpata rahi thi...aur unke muh se safed jhaag jaisa kuch nikal kar bahar aa raha tha...ye dekhte hi mere to hosh hi ud gaye aur main ghabra kar turant ritu didi ke paas pahuch gaya.
Raj (ghabrate huye)—didi...kya hua….? Ritu didiii..ankhe kholo..didiii…didiii…kya hua… didiii….?
Lekin ritu didi ne ankhe nahi kholi….maine unhe pakad kar kayi bar hilaya..lekin koi asar nahi hua….unke hath pair ekdam burf ki tarah thande padte ja rahe the..aur pair ke nakhuno ka rang kala hota ja raha tha….tabhi vaha kuch sarsarahat ki awaz sun kar meri nazar udhar gayi to phir chounk gaya…ek kaali nagin sarsarate huye vaha se bahar ja rahi thi.
Ye dekh kar mujhe samajhte der nahi lagi ki ritu didi ke sath kya hua hoga…? Maine ghabra kar loya ek taarf phenka aur unke pairo ko dekhne laga…salwar upar karte hi mujhe unke ek pair me do daant ke nishan dikhayi diye..vaha se bahta hua khoon kala pad chuka tha…ritu didi ab tak behosh ho chuki thi…unka chhatpatana band ho chuka tha.
Raj (hilate huye)—ritu didi..ankhe kholo…didi ankhe kholo….
Ritu didi ke sharir me koi halchal hote na dekh kar mera mann bahut ghabrane laga aur ankho se anshu khud ba khud bahne lage…maine unke loye me thoda bahut girne ke baad bhi bacha hua pani unke chehre par lekin tab bhi unki ankhe nahi khuli…ghabrahat aur tension ke karan meri samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kya karu..? phir mere mann me filme me dikhaye jane wale vo scenes yaad aane lage jab ladki ko saanp ke kaatne par hero uska jahar choos kar nikalta hai.
Itna yaad aate hi main yaha vaha ankhe ghuma kar koi kapda dekhne laga lekin jab kuch nazar nahi aaya to maine jaldi se apna shirt utar ke didi ke uss pair me ghutne ke thoda niche achchi tarah se kas ke baandh diya..
Raj (bahte anshu)—main aap ko kuch nahi hone dunga ritu didi….agar aaj aap ko kuch ho gaya to main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi karunga..
Maine turant jhuk kar unke pair me jaha uss nagin ke daant ke nishan the, vaha par apna muh rakh diya aur vaha se jahar chusne ki koshish karne laga….paanch minute chusne me hi mera sir ghumne laga aur ankho ke samne andhera chhane laga.
Raj (mann me)—ye mujhe kya ho raha hai….? Mujhe dhundhla dhundhla kyo dikhayi de raha hai aur chakkar bhi aa raha hai…? Mujhe didi ko jaldi se hospital le jana hoga…main aap ko kuch nahi hone dunga didi…
Maine kisi tarah ritu didi ko apni god me uthaya aur ladkhadate huye khandahar se bahar nikal kar tezi se ghar ki taraf bhagne laga...mujhe apni ankho ke samne kuch bhi saaf nahi dikhayi de raha tha phir main bhagta chala ja raha tha .. mere dilo dimag par sirf ritu didi ko bachane ka hi khyal ghum raha tha.
Udhar mere khandahar se bahar nikalte hi andar dusre bagal wale kamre se koi saya bahar nikla aur mujhe aise rote bhagte dekh kar uske chehre par ek kutil mushkan tairne lagi.
""Ek teer se do shikar.....pahle khud ko to bacha le, phir use bachane ki sochna...bewaqoof...par afsos dono ka hi bachna namumkin hai kyon ki....... "Mout Se Bhi Bhala Koi Bacha Hai Aaj Tak."....hihihihihi."" uss saaye ne mann hi mann khush hote huye kaha.
Mann hi mann khush hote huye vo saaya khandahar se chupchap bahar nikal gaya…idhar main kisi tarah girte padte ghar pahucha to mujhe apni baaho me ritu ko uthaye dekh kar sab ghabra gaye…do char second me hi ghar ke sabhi log bahar mere paas daudte huye aa gaye….
Malti (ghabra kar)—rajjj..kyaa huaaa…ritu ko….?
Sheetal (ghabra kar daudte huye)—rajjjj…rituu ko kyaaa huaaa….?
Roopa (tension)—rajjj…meri beti ko kyaaa huaaa….?
Raj (ladkhadate huye)—sa……saa…..saa..nnn…ppppp…
Roopa (shocked)—kyaaaaa...saanp ne kaata meri beti ko….?
Iske aage main kuch bol hi nahi paya aur ladkhada kar niche girne laga ki tabhi minakshi ne ritu ko girne se pahle hi pakad liya...lekin main niche gir gaya..iske baad kya hua mujhe kuch yaad nahi raha.
Sheetal (cheekh kar)—raaaajjjjjjjjj...
Mere girte hi sheetal darr aur ghabrahat ke karan jor se cheekh padi...usne jaldi se mera sir apni god me rakh kar mujhe hilate huye jor jor se rone lagi....aaj abhi tak ghar me jo khushi ka mahoul tha achanak hi vo dukhmay ho gaya...kuch ritu didi ko uthane me lage the jo ki behosh thi..aur kuch mujhe hosh me laane ki koshish me...
Sheetal (rote huye)—rajjj..uth naa...kya hua... ? sadhanaaaa……jaldiii se gadiii nikaalllll…
"kk…kyaaa huaa rajjj kooo….? Saanp ne kaat liya kyaaa….aur ritu ko bhi kaat liyaaa…?" tabhi bahar kheto ki taraf se haanfte aate huye seema ne kaha.
Sheetal (rote huye gusse me)—tumhe kaise malummm..ki saanp ne kaata haiii….? Tum to abhi abhi aati ja rahi ho bahar se….tumhe kaiseeeee malummmm…..? sadhannnaaaa…jaldi se gadiii nikallll…
Seema (hadbadate huye)—vo…vo….abhi abhi radha ne khet me aate hi mujhe bataya to main sab chhod kar turant vaha se daudte huye aa rahi hu…
Tabhi sadhana ne chabi la kar gadi start ki…sab ne jaldi se usme ritu aur mujhe litaya….sheetal mujhe apne seene se chipka kar baith gayi jabki roopa chachi ritu ko sambhalne lagi…maa aage baith gayi…aur phir turant hi sadhana tezi se hospital ki taraf full speed me gadi daudane lagi.
Piche kuch log ganga mousi ki gadi me baith kar rawana ho gaye…aaj ke janam din ka sara program khatayi me pad gaya.. ab kisi ko janam din ka hosh hi kaha rah gaya tha.
Raste me hi sheetal ne call kar ke rote huye mohini ko sab bata diya…uss samay vo ghar me hi thi…sunte hi vah jaisi position me thi, ussi position me turant hospital ke liye tezi se rawana ho gayi..
Hospital pahuchte hi turant dono ko ICU me le jaya gaya….tab tak doctor mohini aur ganga mousi ki gadi bhi pahuch chuki thi..usne turant hi treatment start kar diya...kahi se ye khabar haweli aur jyoti tak bhi pahuch gayi to thakurain, arti, vandana aur jyoti bhi kuch der me ghabrayi huyi halat me hospital pahuch gayi.
ICU ke bahar baithe sabhi ro rahe the..sabse bura haal to sheetal didi aur roopa chachi ka tha…sadhana aur rashmi didi dono ko sambhalne me lagi huyi thi…lagbhag ek ghante chale treatment ke baad ICU ka darwaja khula aur mohini bahar nikli…uske bahar nikalte hi sab dono ke baare me puchne lage.
Sheetal (roti huyi)—doctor, mera raj kaisa hai ab…? Kya hua use…? Ab theek to hai na vo…?
Roopa (rote huye)—doctor, mera beta aur meri beti kaise hain ab…? Dono theek to hain na…?
Mohini—agar paanch minute ki bhi deri aur ho jati to hum ritu ko nahi bacha paate…kyon ki jisne use kaata hai vo koi bahut jahareeli nagin hai…iss baat ki ganimat maano ki raj ne apni jaan khatre me daal kar uska jahar chus kar uske sharir se kafi kam kar diya tha warna ritu yaha pahuchne ke bahut pahle hi mar chuki hoti..lekin ab vo khatre se bahar hai.. do ghante me hosh aa jana chahiye use…
Sheetal (roti huyi)—doctor..rajj kaisa haii…?
Mohini—ritu ke sharir se jahar chus kar nikalne ke chakkar me kuch jahar uske andar chala gaya..jiske karan vo behosh ho gaya…raj ke sharir se jahar nikalna to mushkil hai…phir bhi maine treatment kar diya hai..phir bhi khatra abhi tala nahi hai….abhi hamne usko observation me rakha hai…jab tak usko hosh nahi aa jata tab tak kuch kahna mushkil hai..
Malti (sisakte huye)—aisa mat kaho doctor, ek hi to beta hai mera…
Mohini—dekhiye, bhagwan par bharosa rakhiye..vo sab theek karega..
Sheetal (siakte huye jor se)—aise kaise jahar nikalna mushkil hai…?
Mohini apne cabin me chali ..uske piche piche sheetal chillati huyi ghus gayi to sath me sadhana aur rashmi bhi vahi uske cabin me andar aa gayi…
Sadhana—haan, doctor..jyada khatra to ritu ko hona chahiye tha..phir ko khatra kaise hua…?
Mohini—dekho, uss nagin ka jahar bahut tez hai…jaisa ki maine bataya ritu ke sharir se jahar ko chuste huye vo shayad thukne ki jagah andar nigal gaya hoga..raj ki body se jahar nikalna isliye mushkil hai kyon ki uske blood me already pahle se hi poison inject kiya hua hai…
Rashmi—agar uss jahar ko nikala nahi ja sakta to use kisi medicines ke jariye khatam to kiya ja hi sakta hoga na…?
Mohini—haan, khatam kiya ja sakta tha shayad lekin maine ek risk liya hai…
Sheetal (sisakte huye)—kaisa risk….mere bhai ko jaan se maarne ka….?
Mohini—nahi, use bachane ka…
Sadhana—aap kahna kya chahti hain….?
Mohini—dekho, jis tarah loha hi lohe ko kaat-ta hai ussi tarah jahar hi jahar ko maarta hai….ho sakta hai ki ye nagin ka jahareela jahar raj ke blood me moujud poison ko khatam kar de ya phir kam kar de…? Dono me se koi bhi ek kaam agar iss jahar ne kar diya to raj ki sabse badi problem solve ho jayegi…bas yahi soch kar, sach kahu to maine raj ka koi treatment kiya hi nahi…
Teeno (shocked)—kyaaaaaa….?
Sheetal (rote huye mohini ka gala pakad ke)—tumne jaan bujh kar mere bhai ko mout ke muh me dhakel diya….kaisi doctor ho tum..? agar mere raj ko kuch bhi hua to main tumhe jaan se maar dungi…
Sadhana /Rashmi (chhudate huye)—chhodo..sheetall..nahii…
Mohini—dekho maine jo bhi kiya hai, vo raj ki bhalayi ke liye hi kiya hai…jab tumhe pata hai ki raj ke blood me moujud sex virus aur poison ka koi ilaz nahi hai, aise me uska nishchit hai….jyada se jyada 5-6 mahine..iske upar nahi ja payega vo. Usko theek karne ke liye agar maine risk liya, to kya galat kiya maine…?
Sadhana—aur agar aap ka ye idea fail ho gaya, tab to raj abhi hi mar jayega na…ye kyo nahi sochti aap…?
Mohini—uske blood me already poison hai…ye jahar ya to pahle wale poison ko khatam kar dega ya uska asar kam kar dega…ya phir ho sakta hai ki uss poison ko aur taqatwar bana de….vaise bhi ye iss baat par depend karta hai ki raj ke andar kitni matra me uss nagin ka jahar gaya hai…lekin raj ko aise hi til til kar marne dene se to risk lena hi jyada theek laga mujhe..
Rashmi (tension)—ohhh.no…doctor..aapne to bahut badi musibat khadi kar di….
Mohini—bas dua karo ki raj ko agle do se chaar ghante me hosh aa jaye...agar use hosh aa gaya to samjho ki ye experiment bhi kamyab ho gaya…aur phir uske baad sheetal ka ilaz bhi kiya ja sakta hai..
Sheetal (rote huye)—agar raj ko kuch bhi hua to main tumhe jinda nahi chhodungi doctor…ye yaad rakhna tum…
Uske baad sadhana aur rashmi, sheetal ko pakad kar bahar le jane ke liye palat gayi, lekin darwaje par khadi jyoti aur thakurain ko dekh kar teeno hadbada gayi…unn dono ki ankho me bhi anshu the, jo iss baat ka sabut de rahe the ki unhone poori baat sun li hai.
Thakurain (anshu bahate)—itni badi baat tum logo ne chhupa kar rakhi…?
Jyoti (sisakte huye)—agar raj ko kuch bhi hua to main tum teeno ko kabhi maaf nahi karungi…
Rashmi—hum majbur the…
Sadhana aur rashmi, sheetal ko le kar bahar chali gayi…Jaha sabhi ki ankhe nam thi…ab sabhi raj ke liye pareshan the…aur vahi bahar baith kar dono ke hosh me aane ki pratiksha kar rahe the….jabki thakurain aur jyoti, sidhe doctor mohini ke paas pahuch gayi…majburan mohini ko unhe poori baat batani padi.
Thakurain (gusse se mann me)—jisne bhi raj ko maarne ki koshish ki hai, main use jinda nahi chhodungi…ab chahe vo dharti, akash, patal jaha chhup jaye, vaha se ghasit kar bahar nikalungi…agar maine ek hafte ke andar use nahi pakda to main bhi thakurain nahi…
Jyoti (mann me)—jisne bhi ye kiya hai, main use ab chain ki saans nahi lene dungi…aaj se mera ek hi maqsad hai, uss harami ko dhoondna jisne mere raj ki jaan lene ki koshish ki hai…
Dono mann hi mann dridh nishchay kar ke aur mohini se sakht lahze me kuch baate karne ke baad uske cabin se gusse aur dard me bahar nikal kar sab ke paas aa gayi.
Jaisa ki mohini ne kaha tha, ritu ko agle do ghante me hosh aa gaya…hosh me aate hi khud ko hospital ke bed par dekh kar chounk gayi..phir agle hi pal use sab yaad aane laga..ki vo jaise hi vo khandahar me ghusi to ek jagah niche lota rakh kar mangal sutra utarne ke liye apne gale me bandha hua dupatta kholne hata kar mangal sutra ko hath lagaya hi tha ki tabhi piche se kisi ne uske pair me kaat liya aur vo dard se chhatpatate huye niche gir gayi.
Niche girte hi uska dhyan apne samne rakhe ek shivling par lipti huyi kali nagin ki taraf gaya jo uski taraf hi gusse se fufkar rahi thi..aur phir use dekhte hi vo jor se cheekh padi…uske baad uski ankhe band hoti chali gayi..phir kya hua kuch bhi yaad nahi raha.
Sab yaad aate hi vo ek bar phir se ‘bachaaooo..raajjj..bachaaooo’ chillane lagi….uske hosh me aane ki khabar sun kar mohini turant uska check up karne lagi…jab sab kuch normal dikha to usne sab ko usse milne ki ijazat de di…kisi ke aane se pahle hi ritu ne dupatte se mangal sutra ko chhupa liya…lekin mohini ki nazar treatment karte samay uss par pad chuki thi pahle hi..ritu ke gale me mangal sutra dekh kar chounk to vah bhi gayi thi, …lekin usne iss baare me kisi se kuch nahi kaha tha.
Mohini—aap log ritu se mil sakte hain ab..vo poori tarah ab khatre se bahar hai…
Ye sunte hi sab ek sath uske paas pahuch gaye...roopa ne uske sir ko chum kar uske baalo ko sahlane lagi..abhi bhi uski ankho se anshu bah rahe the..
Roopa (sisakte huye)—tu theek ho gayi meri bachchi... meri to jaan hi nikal gayi thi…
Ritu (bahte anshu)—maa, mujhe yaha koun laya…? Mujhe to saanp ne kaat liya tha…? Kisne bachaya mujhe…?
Ragini—aur koun bachayega…hosh me aate hi jiska naam le kar bachane ke liye chilla rahi thi, ussi ne bachaya hai tujhe..
Ritu (shocked)—kyaaa..rajj ne…?
Roopa (sisakte huye)—haan beti…ab tu theek hai..chinta mat kar..
Seema (nam ankhe)—haan beti…raj ne hi bachaya hai tujhe…agar thodi si bhi deri ho jati to tera bachna namumkin tha…lekin dekho, jis raj ne apni jaan khatre me daal kar teri jaan bachayi iss samay vo khud hi jindagi aur mout se lad raha hai..
Ritu (shocked)—kkk…kyaaaaa…? (ghabrate huye)…Kya hua ..rajj ko…? Maa..batao na..kya hua raj ko…?
Phir roopa ne rote rote poori baat bata di….jise sunte hi ritu ki rulayi phut padi aur vo jor jor se rone lagi…sab use samjha kar shant karne ki koshish karne lagi…lekin vo shant hi nahi ho rahi thi…
Ritu (rote huye)—maa, rajj kaha hai…? Mujhe rajj ke paas jana hai.... ?
Malti (sisakte huye)—beti, doctor abhi usse kisi ko milne nahi de rahe hain...doctor ka kahna hai ki agar use teen char ghante me hosh nahi aaya to kuch bhi ho sakta hai....
Ritu (rote huye)—nahi badi maa...raj ko kuch nahi hoga....main use kuch nahi hone dungi...mujhe abhi raj ko dekhna hai.. badi maa mujhe raj ke paas le chalo...
Ritu ki baat par mohini ne use ek bar raj ko dekhne ki ijazat de di..aur khud hi apne sath le gayi...raj ko iss halat me dekh kar use apne seene par bahut dard mahsoos hone laga.
Ritu (aatma ki awaz)—dekh le ritu...achchi tarah se dekh le..ye vahi raj hai..vahi tera bhai hai...jiska naam tu apni kismat se mitane ja rahi thi...agar aaj aur iss samay tu jinda khadi hai to ussi raj ki vajah se...jisne tujhe bachane ke liye apni jaan tak ki parwah nahi ki...agar raj vaha nahi pahuchta to shayad teri laash bhi kisi ko kabhi nahi milti..kyon ki uss khandahar me to koi aata jata hi nahi hai...ye vahi raj hai jiske baare me tu hawashi, darinda aur na jane kya kya soch rahi thi...ussi darinde ne tujhe to bacha liya lekin khud mout se lad raha hai...agar raj ko kuch ho gaya to kya tu apne aap ko kabhi maaf kar payegi... ?
Ritu (rote huye jor se chilla kar)—nahiiii....aisa nahi ho sakta...utho rajjj utho...ek bar ankhe kholo rajj...pls..uth jao raj..pls.. meri choti si galti ki itni badi saza mat do mujhe...
Ritu ko chillate dekh kar nurse use jabardasti pakad kar baahr le gayi uske bed par…
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Update Abhi Incomplete Hai.
To ye tha seema chachi ka plan .
Ritu ko markar raj ka birthday spoil karna par raj ke beech me aane se khel ruka gaya hai ab raj ko hosh kab aata hai ?.
Seema kjud hi jahrili aur sath me jahrili nagin bhi rakhti hai pahle bhi sheetal ko aise hi kuye giraya tha .
Ab eska khel jald kahtam karna hoga.
