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bechare Raj ki sabne mil kar chaaro taraf se le rakh-khi hai .. iske to sabhi aur se dushman isko maarene ke chakkar mein lage hue hai .. ghar ke andar bhi aur ghar ke bahar bhi .. ab bechara kis - kis se bache .. lekin ye asli aasteen ka saanp kaun hai ghar mein .. shayad ye ek se jyaada vyakti hai .. aur ye khandar mein dusra saaya kaun tha .. kya wo seema chachi thi ya Raagini didi .. ya fir koi aur .. Mohini ne to apna kaam kar diya hai .. ab dekhte hai experiment sahi kaam karta hai ya fir Raj ke liye aur musibat khadi hone wali hai .. aur ye Sheetal ka ilaaz kaise sambhav hai .. aur iss kahani ki asli dabang ladki bhi iss khel mein khud chuki hai .. Thakurain .. kyonki wo he asli diler ladki hai Sheetal se alag jo apne Raj pe jaan chod-ti hai .. Sheetal to bechari ek aam si gharelu ladki hai magar Thakurain to resourceful ladki hai .. aur usko ye tigdam bajji aapne bhaiyo se virasat mein mili hai .. ab dekhte hai ki vo kaise Raj aur uski family ki madad kar paati hai .. bahut he lajawaab update ...
 

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Ghar loutne ke baad use koi mouka na milta dekh ritu soch me pad gayi…kyon ki nahate samay to kisi na kisi ki nazar padni hi thi…to usne subah achche se fresh na ho pane ka bahana kar lota le ke ghar se nikal akeli hi nikal padi..aur iss bar usne gaon ke bahar bane sunsan khandahar ki taraf kadam badha diye.

Khandahar ke paas pahuch kar usne ek bar apne charo taraf dekha aur phir tezi se uss khandahar me ghus gayi...abhi ritu khandahar ke andar ghusi hi thi ki tabhi agle hi pal ritu ke cheekhne ki awaz uss khandahar me goonj uthi...

"Bachaaaooooo....Raaaajjjjj.....Bachaaaaoooooo"

Ab aage......

Main uss samay fresh ho kar khet se lout raha tha ki tabhi meri nazar ritu didi par gayi...unhe khandahar ki taraf jate dekh kar mujhe behad hairani huyi kyon ki uss taraf log bahut hi kam jate the khas kar ke aurat aur ladkiya to bilkul bhi nahi.. uss khandahar me pahle kayi kand ho chuke the jiske karan logo ke mann me uske prati darr baith gaya tha...sirf main hi yaha aata rahta tha jab kisi ko chodne ki koi dhang ki jagah na milti to main yaha la kar unhe pelta tha tension free ho kar.

Ritu didi ko udhar jate dekh kar mere ,mann me hairani paida ho gayi to main bhi chupke chupke unka picha karte huye khandahar ki taraf nikal gaya...mere vaha pahuchne tak vo meri ankho se ojhal ho chuki thi...tabhi mere kano me kisi ke cheekhne ki awaz sunayi padi.

Awz sunte hi main pahchan gaya ki ye ritu didi ki awaz hai to ghabra kar turant tezi se khandar ke andar daud pada... andar pahuchte hi maine jaise hi nazre ghuma kar dekha to dekhte hi buri tarah se choumk gaya.

Khandar ke andar toote huye kamre me ek taraf ritu didi niche padi huyi buri tarah chhatpata rahi thi...aur unke muh se safed jhaag jaisa kuch nikal kar bahar aa raha tha...ye dekhte hi mere to hosh hi ud gaye aur main ghabra kar turant ritu didi ke paas pahuch gaya.

Raj (ghabrate huye)—didi...kya hua….? Ritu didiii..ankhe kholo..didiii…didiii…kya hua… didiii….?

Lekin ritu didi ne ankhe nahi kholi….maine unhe pakad kar kayi bar hilaya..lekin koi asar nahi hua….unke hath pair ekdam burf ki tarah thande padte ja rahe the..aur pair ke nakhuno ka rang kala hota ja raha tha….tabhi vaha kuch sarsarahat ki awaz sun kar meri nazar udhar gayi to phir chounk gaya…ek kaali nagin sarsarate huye vaha se bahar ja rahi thi.

Ye dekh kar mujhe samajhte der nahi lagi ki ritu didi ke sath kya hua hoga…? Maine ghabra kar loya ek taarf phenka aur unke pairo ko dekhne laga…salwar upar karte hi mujhe unke ek pair me do daant ke nishan dikhayi diye..vaha se bahta hua khoon kala pad chuka tha…ritu didi ab tak behosh ho chuki thi…unka chhatpatana band ho chuka tha.

Raj (hilate huye)—ritu didi..ankhe kholo…didi ankhe kholo….

Ritu didi ke sharir me koi halchal hote na dekh kar mera mann bahut ghabrane laga aur ankho se anshu khud ba khud bahne lage…maine unke loye me thoda bahut girne ke baad bhi bacha hua pani unke chehre par lekin tab bhi unki ankhe nahi khuli…ghabrahat aur tension ke karan meri samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kya karu..? phir mere mann me filme me dikhaye jane wale vo scenes yaad aane lage jab ladki ko saanp ke kaatne par hero uska jahar choos kar nikalta hai.

Itna yaad aate hi main yaha vaha ankhe ghuma kar koi kapda dekhne laga lekin jab kuch nazar nahi aaya to maine jaldi se apna shirt utar ke didi ke uss pair me ghutne ke thoda niche achchi tarah se kas ke baandh diya..

Raj (bahte anshu)—main aap ko kuch nahi hone dunga ritu didi….agar aaj aap ko kuch ho gaya to main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi karunga..

Maine turant jhuk kar unke pair me jaha uss nagin ke daant ke nishan the, vaha par apna muh rakh diya aur vaha se jahar chusne ki koshish karne laga….paanch minute chusne me hi mera sir ghumne laga aur ankho ke samne andhera chhane laga.

Raj (mann me)—ye mujhe kya ho raha hai….? Mujhe dhundhla dhundhla kyo dikhayi de raha hai aur chakkar bhi aa raha hai…? Mujhe didi ko jaldi se hospital le jana hoga…main aap ko kuch nahi hone dunga didi…

Maine kisi tarah ritu didi ko apni god me uthaya aur ladkhadate huye khandahar se bahar nikal kar tezi se ghar ki taraf bhagne laga...mujhe apni ankho ke samne kuch bhi saaf nahi dikhayi de raha tha phir main bhagta chala ja raha tha .. mere dilo dimag par sirf ritu didi ko bachane ka hi khyal ghum raha tha.

Udhar mere khandahar se bahar nikalte hi andar dusre bagal wale kamre se koi saya bahar nikla aur mujhe aise rote bhagte dekh kar uske chehre par ek kutil mushkan tairne lagi.

""Ek teer se do shikar.....pahle khud ko to bacha le, phir use bachane ki sochna...bewaqoof...par afsos dono ka hi bachna namumkin hai kyon ki.......
"Mout Se Bhi Bhala Koi Bacha Hai Aaj Tak."....hihihihihi."" uss saaye ne mann hi mann khush hote huye kaha.

Mann hi mann khush hote huye vo saaya khandahar se chupchap bahar nikal gaya…idhar main kisi tarah girte padte ghar pahucha to mujhe apni baaho me ritu ko uthaye dekh kar sab ghabra gaye…do char second me hi ghar ke sabhi log bahar mere paas daudte huye aa gaye….

Malti (ghabra kar)—rajjj..kyaa huaaa…ritu ko….?

Sheetal (ghabra kar daudte huye)—rajjjj…rituu ko kyaaa huaaa….?

Roopa (tension)—rajjj…meri beti ko kyaaa huaaa….?

Raj (ladkhadate huye)—sa……saa…..saa..nnn…ppppp…

Roopa (shocked)—kyaaaaa...saanp ne kaata meri beti ko….?

Iske aage main kuch bol hi nahi paya aur ladkhada kar niche girne laga ki tabhi minakshi ne ritu ko girne se pahle hi pakad liya...lekin main niche gir gaya..iske baad kya hua mujhe kuch yaad nahi raha.

Sheetal (cheekh kar)—raaaajjjjjjjjj...

Mere girte hi sheetal darr aur ghabrahat ke karan jor se cheekh padi...usne jaldi se mera sir apni god me rakh kar mujhe hilate huye jor jor se rone lagi....aaj abhi tak ghar me jo khushi ka mahoul tha achanak hi vo dukhmay ho gaya...kuch ritu didi ko uthane me lage the jo ki behosh thi..aur kuch mujhe hosh me laane ki koshish me...

Sheetal (rote huye)—rajjj..uth naa...kya hua... ? sadhanaaaa……jaldiii se gadiii nikaalllll…

"kk…kyaaa huaa rajjj kooo….? Saanp ne kaat liya kyaaa….aur ritu ko bhi kaat liyaaa…?" tabhi bahar kheto ki taraf se haanfte aate huye seema ne kaha.

Sheetal (rote huye gusse me)—tumhe kaise malummm..ki saanp ne kaata haiii….? Tum to abhi abhi aati ja rahi ho bahar se….tumhe kaiseeeee malummmm…..? sadhannnaaaa…jaldi se gadiii nikallll…

Seema (hadbadate huye)—vo…vo….abhi abhi radha ne khet me aate hi mujhe bataya to main sab chhod kar turant vaha se daudte huye aa rahi hu…

Tabhi sadhana ne chabi la kar gadi start ki…sab ne jaldi se usme ritu aur mujhe litaya….sheetal mujhe apne seene se chipka kar baith gayi jabki roopa chachi ritu ko sambhalne lagi…maa aage baith gayi…aur phir turant hi sadhana tezi se hospital ki taraf full speed me gadi daudane lagi.

Piche kuch log ganga mousi ki gadi me baith kar rawana ho gaye…aaj ke janam din ka sara program khatayi me pad gaya.. ab kisi ko janam din ka hosh hi kaha rah gaya tha.

Raste me hi sheetal ne call kar ke rote huye mohini ko sab bata diya…uss samay vo ghar me hi thi…sunte hi vah jaisi position me thi, ussi position me turant hospital ke liye tezi se rawana ho gayi..

Hospital pahuchte hi turant dono ko ICU me le jaya gaya….tab tak doctor mohini aur ganga mousi ki gadi bhi pahuch chuki thi..usne turant hi treatment start kar diya...kahi se ye khabar haweli aur jyoti tak bhi pahuch gayi to thakurain, arti, vandana aur jyoti bhi kuch der me ghabrayi huyi halat me hospital pahuch gayi.

ICU ke bahar baithe sabhi ro rahe the..sabse bura haal to sheetal didi aur roopa chachi ka tha…sadhana aur rashmi didi dono ko sambhalne me lagi huyi thi…lagbhag ek ghante chale treatment ke baad ICU ka darwaja khula aur mohini bahar nikli…uske bahar nikalte hi sab dono ke baare me puchne lage.

Sheetal (roti huyi)—doctor, mera raj kaisa hai ab…? Kya hua use…? Ab theek to hai na vo…?

Roopa (rote huye)—doctor, mera beta aur meri beti kaise hain ab…? Dono theek to hain na…?

Mohini—agar paanch minute ki bhi deri aur ho jati to hum ritu ko nahi bacha paate…kyon ki jisne use kaata hai vo koi bahut jahareeli nagin hai…iss baat ki ganimat maano ki raj ne apni jaan khatre me daal kar uska jahar chus kar uske sharir se kafi kam kar diya tha warna ritu yaha pahuchne ke bahut pahle hi mar chuki hoti..lekin ab vo khatre se bahar hai.. do ghante me hosh aa jana chahiye use…

Sheetal (roti huyi)—doctor..rajj kaisa haii…?

Mohini—ritu ke sharir se jahar chus kar nikalne ke chakkar me kuch jahar uske andar chala gaya..jiske karan vo behosh ho gaya…raj ke sharir se jahar nikalna to mushkil hai…phir bhi maine treatment kar diya hai..phir bhi khatra abhi tala nahi hai….abhi hamne usko observation me rakha hai…jab tak usko hosh nahi aa jata tab tak kuch kahna mushkil hai..

Malti (sisakte huye)—aisa mat kaho doctor, ek hi to beta hai mera…

Mohini—dekhiye, bhagwan par bharosa rakhiye..vo sab theek karega..

Sheetal (siakte huye jor se)—aise kaise jahar nikalna mushkil hai…?

Mohini apne cabin me chali ..uske piche piche sheetal chillati huyi ghus gayi to sath me sadhana aur rashmi bhi vahi uske cabin me andar aa gayi…

Sadhana—haan, doctor..jyada khatra to ritu ko hona chahiye tha..phir ko khatra kaise hua…?

Mohini—dekho, uss nagin ka jahar bahut tez hai…jaisa ki maine bataya ritu ke sharir se jahar ko chuste huye vo shayad thukne ki jagah andar nigal gaya hoga..raj ki body se jahar nikalna isliye mushkil hai kyon ki uske blood me already pahle se hi poison inject kiya hua hai…

Rashmi—agar uss jahar ko nikala nahi ja sakta to use kisi medicines ke jariye khatam to kiya ja hi sakta hoga na…?

Mohini—haan, khatam kiya ja sakta tha shayad lekin maine ek risk liya hai…

Sheetal (sisakte huye)—kaisa risk….mere bhai ko jaan se maarne ka….?

Mohini—nahi, use bachane ka…

Sadhana—aap kahna kya chahti hain….?

Mohini—dekho, jis tarah loha hi lohe ko kaat-ta hai ussi tarah jahar hi jahar ko maarta hai….ho sakta hai ki ye nagin ka jahareela jahar raj ke blood me moujud poison ko khatam kar de ya phir kam kar de…? Dono me se koi bhi ek kaam agar iss jahar ne kar diya to raj ki sabse badi problem solve ho jayegi…bas yahi soch kar, sach kahu to maine raj ka koi treatment kiya hi nahi…

Teeno (shocked)—kyaaaaaa….?

Sheetal (rote huye mohini ka gala pakad ke)—tumne jaan bujh kar mere bhai ko mout ke muh me dhakel diya….kaisi doctor ho tum..? agar mere raj ko kuch bhi hua to main tumhe jaan se maar dungi…

Sadhana /Rashmi (chhudate huye)—chhodo..sheetall..nahii…

Mohini—dekho maine jo bhi kiya hai, vo raj ki bhalayi ke liye hi kiya hai…jab tumhe pata hai ki raj ke blood me moujud sex virus aur poison ka koi ilaz nahi hai, aise me uska nishchit hai….jyada se jyada 5-6 mahine..iske upar nahi ja payega vo. Usko theek karne ke liye agar maine risk liya, to kya galat kiya maine…?

Sadhana—aur agar aap ka ye idea fail ho gaya, tab to raj abhi hi mar jayega na…ye kyo nahi sochti aap…?

Mohini—uske blood me already poison hai…ye jahar ya to pahle wale poison ko khatam kar dega ya uska asar kam kar dega…ya phir ho sakta hai ki uss poison ko aur taqatwar bana de….vaise bhi ye iss baat par depend karta hai ki raj ke andar kitni matra me uss nagin ka jahar gaya hai…lekin raj ko aise hi til til kar marne dene se to risk lena hi jyada theek laga mujhe..

Rashmi (tension)—ohhh.no…doctor..aapne to bahut badi musibat khadi kar di….

Mohini—bas dua karo ki raj ko agle do se chaar ghante me hosh aa jaye...agar use hosh aa gaya to samjho ki ye experiment bhi kamyab ho gaya…aur phir uske baad sheetal ka ilaz bhi kiya ja sakta hai..

Sheetal (rote huye)—agar raj ko kuch bhi hua to main tumhe jinda nahi chhodungi doctor…ye yaad rakhna tum…

Uske baad sadhana aur rashmi, sheetal ko pakad kar bahar le jane ke liye palat gayi, lekin darwaje par khadi jyoti aur thakurain ko dekh kar teeno hadbada gayi…unn dono ki ankho me bhi anshu the, jo iss baat ka sabut de rahe the ki unhone poori baat sun li hai.

Thakurain (anshu bahate)—itni badi baat tum logo ne chhupa kar rakhi…?

Jyoti (sisakte huye)—agar raj ko kuch bhi hua to main tum teeno ko kabhi maaf nahi karungi…

Rashmi—hum majbur the…

Sadhana aur rashmi, sheetal ko le kar bahar chali gayi…Jaha sabhi ki ankhe nam thi…ab sabhi raj ke liye pareshan the…aur vahi bahar baith kar dono ke hosh me aane ki pratiksha kar rahe the….jabki thakurain aur jyoti, sidhe doctor mohini ke paas pahuch gayi…majburan mohini ko unhe poori baat batani padi.

Thakurain (gusse se mann me)—jisne bhi raj ko maarne ki koshish ki hai, main use jinda nahi chhodungi…ab chahe vo dharti, akash, patal jaha chhup jaye, vaha se ghasit kar bahar nikalungi…agar maine ek hafte ke andar use nahi pakda to main bhi thakurain nahi…

Jyoti (mann me)—jisne bhi ye kiya hai, main use ab chain ki saans nahi lene dungi…aaj se mera ek hi maqsad hai, uss harami ko dhoondna jisne mere raj ki jaan lene ki koshish ki hai…

Dono mann hi mann dridh nishchay kar ke aur mohini se sakht lahze me kuch baate karne ke baad uske cabin se gusse aur dard me bahar nikal kar sab ke paas aa gayi.

Jaisa ki mohini ne kaha tha, ritu ko agle do ghante me hosh aa gaya…hosh me aate hi khud ko hospital ke bed par dekh kar chounk gayi..phir agle hi pal use sab yaad aane laga..ki vo jaise hi vo khandahar me ghusi to ek jagah niche lota rakh kar mangal sutra utarne ke liye apne gale me bandha hua dupatta kholne hata kar mangal sutra ko hath lagaya hi tha ki tabhi piche se kisi ne uske pair me kaat liya aur vo dard se chhatpatate huye niche gir gayi.

Niche girte hi uska dhyan apne samne rakhe ek shivling par lipti huyi kali nagin ki taraf gaya jo uski taraf hi gusse se fufkar rahi thi..aur phir use dekhte hi vo jor se cheekh padi…uske baad uski ankhe band hoti chali gayi..phir kya hua kuch bhi yaad nahi raha.

Sab yaad aate hi vo ek bar phir se ‘bachaaooo..raajjj..bachaaooo’ chillane lagi….uske hosh me aane ki khabar sun kar mohini turant uska check up karne lagi…jab sab kuch normal dikha to usne sab ko usse milne ki ijazat de di…kisi ke aane se pahle hi ritu ne dupatte se mangal sutra ko chhupa liya…lekin mohini ki nazar treatment karte samay uss par pad chuki thi pahle hi..ritu ke gale me mangal sutra dekh kar chounk to vah bhi gayi thi, …lekin usne iss baare me kisi se kuch nahi kaha tha.

Mohini—aap log ritu se mil sakte hain ab..vo poori tarah ab khatre se bahar hai…

Ye sunte hi sab ek sath uske paas pahuch gaye...roopa ne uske sir ko chum kar uske baalo ko sahlane lagi..abhi bhi uski ankho se anshu bah rahe the..

Roopa (sisakte huye)—tu theek ho gayi meri bachchi... meri to jaan hi nikal gayi thi…

Ritu (bahte anshu)—maa, mujhe yaha koun laya…? Mujhe to saanp ne kaat liya tha…? Kisne bachaya mujhe…?

Ragini—aur koun bachayega…hosh me aate hi jiska naam le kar bachane ke liye chilla rahi thi, ussi ne bachaya hai tujhe..

Ritu (shocked)—kyaaa..rajj ne…?

Roopa (sisakte huye)—haan beti…ab tu theek hai..chinta mat kar..

Seema (nam ankhe)—haan beti…raj ne hi bachaya hai tujhe…agar thodi si bhi deri ho jati to tera bachna namumkin tha…lekin dekho, jis raj ne apni jaan khatre me daal kar teri jaan bachayi iss samay vo khud hi jindagi aur mout se lad raha hai..

Ritu (shocked)—kkk…kyaaaaa…? (ghabrate huye)…Kya hua ..rajj ko…? Maa..batao na..kya hua raj ko…?

Phir roopa ne rote rote poori baat bata di….jise sunte hi ritu ki rulayi phut padi aur vo jor jor se rone lagi…sab use samjha kar shant karne ki koshish karne lagi…lekin vo shant hi nahi ho rahi thi…

Ritu (rote huye)—maa, rajj kaha hai…? Mujhe rajj ke paas jana hai.... ?

Malti (sisakte huye)—beti, doctor abhi usse kisi ko milne nahi de rahe hain...doctor ka kahna hai ki agar use teen char ghante me hosh nahi aaya to kuch bhi ho sakta hai....

Ritu (rote huye)—nahi badi maa...raj ko kuch nahi hoga....main use kuch nahi hone dungi...mujhe abhi raj ko dekhna hai.. badi maa mujhe raj ke paas le chalo...

Ritu ki baat par mohini ne use ek bar raj ko dekhne ki ijazat de di..aur khud hi apne sath le gayi...raj ko iss halat me dekh kar use apne seene par bahut dard mahsoos hone laga.

Ritu (aatma ki awaz)—dekh le ritu...achchi tarah se dekh le..ye vahi raj hai..vahi tera bhai hai...jiska naam tu apni kismat se mitane ja rahi thi...agar aaj aur iss samay tu jinda khadi hai to ussi raj ki vajah se...jisne tujhe bachane ke liye apni jaan tak ki parwah nahi ki...agar raj vaha nahi pahuchta to shayad teri laash bhi kisi ko kabhi nahi milti..kyon ki uss khandahar me to koi aata jata hi nahi hai...ye vahi raj hai jiske baare me tu hawashi, darinda aur na jane kya kya soch rahi thi...ussi darinde ne tujhe to bacha liya lekin khud mout se lad raha hai...agar raj ko kuch ho gaya to kya tu apne aap ko kabhi maaf kar payegi... ?

Ritu (rote huye jor se chilla kar)—nahiiii....aisa nahi ho sakta...utho rajjj utho...ek bar ankhe kholo rajj...pls..uth jao raj..pls.. meri choti si galti ki itni badi saza mat do mujhe...

Ritu ko chillate dekh kar nurse use jabardasti pakad kar baahr le gayi uske bed par…

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Birthday Special

Ghar loutne ke baad use koi mouka na milta dekh ritu soch me pad gayi…kyon ki nahate samay to kisi na kisi ki nazar padni hi thi…to usne subah achche se fresh na ho pane ka bahana kar lota le ke ghar se nikal akeli hi nikal padi..aur iss bar usne gaon ke bahar bane sunsan khandahar ki taraf kadam badha diye.

Khandahar ke paas pahuch kar usne ek bar apne charo taraf dekha aur phir tezi se uss khandahar me ghus gayi...abhi ritu khandahar ke andar ghusi hi thi ki tabhi agle hi pal ritu ke cheekhne ki awaz uss khandahar me goonj uthi...

"Bachaaaooooo....Raaaajjjjj.....Bachaaaaoooooo"

Ab aage......

Main uss samay fresh ho kar khet se lout raha tha ki tabhi meri nazar ritu didi par gayi...unhe khandahar ki taraf jate dekh kar mujhe behad hairani huyi kyon ki uss taraf log bahut hi kam jate the khas kar ke aurat aur ladkiya to bilkul bhi nahi.. uss khandahar me pahle kayi kand ho chuke the jiske karan logo ke mann me uske prati darr baith gaya tha...sirf main hi yaha aata rahta tha jab kisi ko chodne ki koi dhang ki jagah na milti to main yaha la kar unhe pelta tha tension free ho kar.

Ritu didi ko udhar jate dekh kar mere ,mann me hairani paida ho gayi to main bhi chupke chupke unka picha karte huye khandahar ki taraf nikal gaya...mere vaha pahuchne tak vo meri ankho se ojhal ho chuki thi...tabhi mere kano me kisi ke cheekhne ki awaz sunayi padi.

Awz sunte hi main pahchan gaya ki ye ritu didi ki awaz hai to ghabra kar turant tezi se khandar ke andar daud pada... andar pahuchte hi maine jaise hi nazre ghuma kar dekha to dekhte hi buri tarah se choumk gaya.

Khandar ke andar toote huye kamre me ek taraf ritu didi niche padi huyi buri tarah chhatpata rahi thi...aur unke muh se safed jhaag jaisa kuch nikal kar bahar aa raha tha...ye dekhte hi mere to hosh hi ud gaye aur main ghabra kar turant ritu didi ke paas pahuch gaya.

Raj (ghabrate huye)—didi...kya hua….? Ritu didiii..ankhe kholo..didiii…didiii…kya hua… didiii….?

Lekin ritu didi ne ankhe nahi kholi….maine unhe pakad kar kayi bar hilaya..lekin koi asar nahi hua….unke hath pair ekdam burf ki tarah thande padte ja rahe the..aur pair ke nakhuno ka rang kala hota ja raha tha….tabhi vaha kuch sarsarahat ki awaz sun kar meri nazar udhar gayi to phir chounk gaya…ek kaali nagin sarsarate huye vaha se bahar ja rahi thi.

Ye dekh kar mujhe samajhte der nahi lagi ki ritu didi ke sath kya hua hoga…? Maine ghabra kar loya ek taarf phenka aur unke pairo ko dekhne laga…salwar upar karte hi mujhe unke ek pair me do daant ke nishan dikhayi diye..vaha se bahta hua khoon kala pad chuka tha…ritu didi ab tak behosh ho chuki thi…unka chhatpatana band ho chuka tha.

Raj (hilate huye)—ritu didi..ankhe kholo…didi ankhe kholo….

Ritu didi ke sharir me koi halchal hote na dekh kar mera mann bahut ghabrane laga aur ankho se anshu khud ba khud bahne lage…maine unke loye me thoda bahut girne ke baad bhi bacha hua pani unke chehre par lekin tab bhi unki ankhe nahi khuli…ghabrahat aur tension ke karan meri samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kya karu..? phir mere mann me filme me dikhaye jane wale vo scenes yaad aane lage jab ladki ko saanp ke kaatne par hero uska jahar choos kar nikalta hai.

Itna yaad aate hi main yaha vaha ankhe ghuma kar koi kapda dekhne laga lekin jab kuch nazar nahi aaya to maine jaldi se apna shirt utar ke didi ke uss pair me ghutne ke thoda niche achchi tarah se kas ke baandh diya..

Raj (bahte anshu)—main aap ko kuch nahi hone dunga ritu didi….agar aaj aap ko kuch ho gaya to main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi karunga..

Maine turant jhuk kar unke pair me jaha uss nagin ke daant ke nishan the, vaha par apna muh rakh diya aur vaha se jahar chusne ki koshish karne laga….paanch minute chusne me hi mera sir ghumne laga aur ankho ke samne andhera chhane laga.

Raj (mann me)—ye mujhe kya ho raha hai….? Mujhe dhundhla dhundhla kyo dikhayi de raha hai aur chakkar bhi aa raha hai…? Mujhe didi ko jaldi se hospital le jana hoga…main aap ko kuch nahi hone dunga didi…

Maine kisi tarah ritu didi ko apni god me uthaya aur ladkhadate huye khandahar se bahar nikal kar tezi se ghar ki taraf bhagne laga...mujhe apni ankho ke samne kuch bhi saaf nahi dikhayi de raha tha phir main bhagta chala ja raha tha .. mere dilo dimag par sirf ritu didi ko bachane ka hi khyal ghum raha tha.

Udhar mere khandahar se bahar nikalte hi andar dusre bagal wale kamre se koi saya bahar nikla aur mujhe aise rote bhagte dekh kar uske chehre par ek kutil mushkan tairne lagi.

""Ek teer se do shikar.....pahle khud ko to bacha le, phir use bachane ki sochna...bewaqoof...par afsos dono ka hi bachna namumkin hai kyon ki.......
"Mout Se Bhi Bhala Koi Bacha Hai Aaj Tak."....hihihihihi."" uss saaye ne mann hi mann khush hote huye kaha.

Mann hi mann khush hote huye vo saaya khandahar se chupchap bahar nikal gaya…idhar main kisi tarah girte padte ghar pahucha to mujhe apni baaho me ritu ko uthaye dekh kar sab ghabra gaye…do char second me hi ghar ke sabhi log bahar mere paas daudte huye aa gaye….

Malti (ghabra kar)—rajjj..kyaa huaaa…ritu ko….?

Sheetal (ghabra kar daudte huye)—rajjjj…rituu ko kyaaa huaaa….?

Roopa (tension)—rajjj…meri beti ko kyaaa huaaa….?

Raj (ladkhadate huye)—sa……saa…..saa..nnn…ppppp…

Roopa (shocked)—kyaaaaa...saanp ne kaata meri beti ko….?

Iske aage main kuch bol hi nahi paya aur ladkhada kar niche girne laga ki tabhi minakshi ne ritu ko girne se pahle hi pakad liya...lekin main niche gir gaya..iske baad kya hua mujhe kuch yaad nahi raha.

Sheetal (cheekh kar)—raaaajjjjjjjjj...

Mere girte hi sheetal darr aur ghabrahat ke karan jor se cheekh padi...usne jaldi se mera sir apni god me rakh kar mujhe hilate huye jor jor se rone lagi....aaj abhi tak ghar me jo khushi ka mahoul tha achanak hi vo dukhmay ho gaya...kuch ritu didi ko uthane me lage the jo ki behosh thi..aur kuch mujhe hosh me laane ki koshish me...

Sheetal (rote huye)—rajjj..uth naa...kya hua... ? sadhanaaaa……jaldiii se gadiii nikaalllll…

"kk…kyaaa huaa rajjj kooo….? Saanp ne kaat liya kyaaa….aur ritu ko bhi kaat liyaaa…?" tabhi bahar kheto ki taraf se haanfte aate huye seema ne kaha.

Sheetal (rote huye gusse me)—tumhe kaise malummm..ki saanp ne kaata haiii….? Tum to abhi abhi aati ja rahi ho bahar se….tumhe kaiseeeee malummmm…..? sadhannnaaaa…jaldi se gadiii nikallll…

Seema (hadbadate huye)—vo…vo….abhi abhi radha ne khet me aate hi mujhe bataya to main sab chhod kar turant vaha se daudte huye aa rahi hu…

Tabhi sadhana ne chabi la kar gadi start ki…sab ne jaldi se usme ritu aur mujhe litaya….sheetal mujhe apne seene se chipka kar baith gayi jabki roopa chachi ritu ko sambhalne lagi…maa aage baith gayi…aur phir turant hi sadhana tezi se hospital ki taraf full speed me gadi daudane lagi.

Piche kuch log ganga mousi ki gadi me baith kar rawana ho gaye…aaj ke janam din ka sara program khatayi me pad gaya.. ab kisi ko janam din ka hosh hi kaha rah gaya tha.

Raste me hi sheetal ne call kar ke rote huye mohini ko sab bata diya…uss samay vo ghar me hi thi…sunte hi vah jaisi position me thi, ussi position me turant hospital ke liye tezi se rawana ho gayi..

Hospital pahuchte hi turant dono ko ICU me le jaya gaya….tab tak doctor mohini aur ganga mousi ki gadi bhi pahuch chuki thi..usne turant hi treatment start kar diya...kahi se ye khabar haweli aur jyoti tak bhi pahuch gayi to thakurain, arti, vandana aur jyoti bhi kuch der me ghabrayi huyi halat me hospital pahuch gayi.

ICU ke bahar baithe sabhi ro rahe the..sabse bura haal to sheetal didi aur roopa chachi ka tha…sadhana aur rashmi didi dono ko sambhalne me lagi huyi thi…lagbhag ek ghante chale treatment ke baad ICU ka darwaja khula aur mohini bahar nikli…uske bahar nikalte hi sab dono ke baare me puchne lage.

Sheetal (roti huyi)—doctor, mera raj kaisa hai ab…? Kya hua use…? Ab theek to hai na vo…?

Roopa (rote huye)—doctor, mera beta aur meri beti kaise hain ab…? Dono theek to hain na…?

Mohini—agar paanch minute ki bhi deri aur ho jati to hum ritu ko nahi bacha paate…kyon ki jisne use kaata hai vo koi bahut jahareeli nagin hai…iss baat ki ganimat maano ki raj ne apni jaan khatre me daal kar uska jahar chus kar uske sharir se kafi kam kar diya tha warna ritu yaha pahuchne ke bahut pahle hi mar chuki hoti..lekin ab vo khatre se bahar hai.. do ghante me hosh aa jana chahiye use…

Sheetal (roti huyi)—doctor..rajj kaisa haii…?

Mohini—ritu ke sharir se jahar chus kar nikalne ke chakkar me kuch jahar uske andar chala gaya..jiske karan vo behosh ho gaya…raj ke sharir se jahar nikalna to mushkil hai…phir bhi maine treatment kar diya hai..phir bhi khatra abhi tala nahi hai….abhi hamne usko observation me rakha hai…jab tak usko hosh nahi aa jata tab tak kuch kahna mushkil hai..

Malti (sisakte huye)—aisa mat kaho doctor, ek hi to beta hai mera…

Mohini—dekhiye, bhagwan par bharosa rakhiye..vo sab theek karega..

Sheetal (siakte huye jor se)—aise kaise jahar nikalna mushkil hai…?

Mohini apne cabin me chali ..uske piche piche sheetal chillati huyi ghus gayi to sath me sadhana aur rashmi bhi vahi uske cabin me andar aa gayi…

Sadhana—haan, doctor..jyada khatra to ritu ko hona chahiye tha..phir ko khatra kaise hua…?

Mohini—dekho, uss nagin ka jahar bahut tez hai…jaisa ki maine bataya ritu ke sharir se jahar ko chuste huye vo shayad thukne ki jagah andar nigal gaya hoga..raj ki body se jahar nikalna isliye mushkil hai kyon ki uske blood me already pahle se hi poison inject kiya hua hai…

Rashmi—agar uss jahar ko nikala nahi ja sakta to use kisi medicines ke jariye khatam to kiya ja hi sakta hoga na…?

Mohini—haan, khatam kiya ja sakta tha shayad lekin maine ek risk liya hai…

Sheetal (sisakte huye)—kaisa risk….mere bhai ko jaan se maarne ka….?

Mohini—nahi, use bachane ka…

Sadhana—aap kahna kya chahti hain….?

Mohini—dekho, jis tarah loha hi lohe ko kaat-ta hai ussi tarah jahar hi jahar ko maarta hai….ho sakta hai ki ye nagin ka jahareela jahar raj ke blood me moujud poison ko khatam kar de ya phir kam kar de…? Dono me se koi bhi ek kaam agar iss jahar ne kar diya to raj ki sabse badi problem solve ho jayegi…bas yahi soch kar, sach kahu to maine raj ka koi treatment kiya hi nahi…

Teeno (shocked)—kyaaaaaa….?

Sheetal (rote huye mohini ka gala pakad ke)—tumne jaan bujh kar mere bhai ko mout ke muh me dhakel diya….kaisi doctor ho tum..? agar mere raj ko kuch bhi hua to main tumhe jaan se maar dungi…

Sadhana /Rashmi (chhudate huye)—chhodo..sheetall..nahii…

Mohini—dekho maine jo bhi kiya hai, vo raj ki bhalayi ke liye hi kiya hai…jab tumhe pata hai ki raj ke blood me moujud sex virus aur poison ka koi ilaz nahi hai, aise me uska nishchit hai….jyada se jyada 5-6 mahine..iske upar nahi ja payega vo. Usko theek karne ke liye agar maine risk liya, to kya galat kiya maine…?

Sadhana—aur agar aap ka ye idea fail ho gaya, tab to raj abhi hi mar jayega na…ye kyo nahi sochti aap…?

Mohini—uske blood me already poison hai…ye jahar ya to pahle wale poison ko khatam kar dega ya uska asar kam kar dega…ya phir ho sakta hai ki uss poison ko aur taqatwar bana de….vaise bhi ye iss baat par depend karta hai ki raj ke andar kitni matra me uss nagin ka jahar gaya hai…lekin raj ko aise hi til til kar marne dene se to risk lena hi jyada theek laga mujhe..

Rashmi (tension)—ohhh.no…doctor..aapne to bahut badi musibat khadi kar di….

Mohini—bas dua karo ki raj ko agle do se chaar ghante me hosh aa jaye...agar use hosh aa gaya to samjho ki ye experiment bhi kamyab ho gaya…aur phir uske baad sheetal ka ilaz bhi kiya ja sakta hai..

Sheetal (rote huye)—agar raj ko kuch bhi hua to main tumhe jinda nahi chhodungi doctor…ye yaad rakhna tum…

Uske baad sadhana aur rashmi, sheetal ko pakad kar bahar le jane ke liye palat gayi, lekin darwaje par khadi jyoti aur thakurain ko dekh kar teeno hadbada gayi…unn dono ki ankho me bhi anshu the, jo iss baat ka sabut de rahe the ki unhone poori baat sun li hai.

Thakurain (anshu bahate)—itni badi baat tum logo ne chhupa kar rakhi…?

Jyoti (sisakte huye)—agar raj ko kuch bhi hua to main tum teeno ko kabhi maaf nahi karungi…

Rashmi—hum majbur the…

Sadhana aur rashmi, sheetal ko le kar bahar chali gayi…Jaha sabhi ki ankhe nam thi…ab sabhi raj ke liye pareshan the…aur vahi bahar baith kar dono ke hosh me aane ki pratiksha kar rahe the….jabki thakurain aur jyoti, sidhe doctor mohini ke paas pahuch gayi…majburan mohini ko unhe poori baat batani padi.

Thakurain (gusse se mann me)—jisne bhi raj ko maarne ki koshish ki hai, main use jinda nahi chhodungi…ab chahe vo dharti, akash, patal jaha chhup jaye, vaha se ghasit kar bahar nikalungi…agar maine ek hafte ke andar use nahi pakda to main bhi thakurain nahi…

Jyoti (mann me)—jisne bhi ye kiya hai, main use ab chain ki saans nahi lene dungi…aaj se mera ek hi maqsad hai, uss harami ko dhoondna jisne mere raj ki jaan lene ki koshish ki hai…

Dono mann hi mann dridh nishchay kar ke aur mohini se sakht lahze me kuch baate karne ke baad uske cabin se gusse aur dard me bahar nikal kar sab ke paas aa gayi.

Jaisa ki mohini ne kaha tha, ritu ko agle do ghante me hosh aa gaya…hosh me aate hi khud ko hospital ke bed par dekh kar chounk gayi..phir agle hi pal use sab yaad aane laga..ki vo jaise hi vo khandahar me ghusi to ek jagah niche lota rakh kar mangal sutra utarne ke liye apne gale me bandha hua dupatta kholne hata kar mangal sutra ko hath lagaya hi tha ki tabhi piche se kisi ne uske pair me kaat liya aur vo dard se chhatpatate huye niche gir gayi.

Niche girte hi uska dhyan apne samne rakhe ek shivling par lipti huyi kali nagin ki taraf gaya jo uski taraf hi gusse se fufkar rahi thi..aur phir use dekhte hi vo jor se cheekh padi…uske baad uski ankhe band hoti chali gayi..phir kya hua kuch bhi yaad nahi raha.

Sab yaad aate hi vo ek bar phir se ‘bachaaooo..raajjj..bachaaooo’ chillane lagi….uske hosh me aane ki khabar sun kar mohini turant uska check up karne lagi…jab sab kuch normal dikha to usne sab ko usse milne ki ijazat de di…kisi ke aane se pahle hi ritu ne dupatte se mangal sutra ko chhupa liya…lekin mohini ki nazar treatment karte samay uss par pad chuki thi pahle hi..ritu ke gale me mangal sutra dekh kar chounk to vah bhi gayi thi, …lekin usne iss baare me kisi se kuch nahi kaha tha.

Mohini—aap log ritu se mil sakte hain ab..vo poori tarah ab khatre se bahar hai…

Ye sunte hi sab ek sath uske paas pahuch gaye...roopa ne uske sir ko chum kar uske baalo ko sahlane lagi..abhi bhi uski ankho se anshu bah rahe the..

Roopa (sisakte huye)—tu theek ho gayi meri bachchi... meri to jaan hi nikal gayi thi…

Ritu (bahte anshu)—maa, mujhe yaha koun laya…? Mujhe to saanp ne kaat liya tha…? Kisne bachaya mujhe…?

Ragini—aur koun bachayega…hosh me aate hi jiska naam le kar bachane ke liye chilla rahi thi, ussi ne bachaya hai tujhe..

Ritu (shocked)—kyaaa..rajj ne…?

Roopa (sisakte huye)—haan beti…ab tu theek hai..chinta mat kar..

Seema (nam ankhe)—haan beti…raj ne hi bachaya hai tujhe…agar thodi si bhi deri ho jati to tera bachna namumkin tha…lekin dekho, jis raj ne apni jaan khatre me daal kar teri jaan bachayi iss samay vo khud hi jindagi aur mout se lad raha hai..

Ritu (shocked)—kkk…kyaaaaa…? (ghabrate huye)…Kya hua ..rajj ko…? Maa..batao na..kya hua raj ko…?

Phir roopa ne rote rote poori baat bata di….jise sunte hi ritu ki rulayi phut padi aur vo jor jor se rone lagi…sab use samjha kar shant karne ki koshish karne lagi…lekin vo shant hi nahi ho rahi thi…

Ritu (rote huye)—maa, rajj kaha hai…? Mujhe rajj ke paas jana hai.... ?

Malti (sisakte huye)—beti, doctor abhi usse kisi ko milne nahi de rahe hain...doctor ka kahna hai ki agar use teen char ghante me hosh nahi aaya to kuch bhi ho sakta hai....

Ritu (rote huye)—nahi badi maa...raj ko kuch nahi hoga....main use kuch nahi hone dungi...mujhe abhi raj ko dekhna hai.. badi maa mujhe raj ke paas le chalo...

Ritu ki baat par mohini ne use ek bar raj ko dekhne ki ijazat de di..aur khud hi apne sath le gayi...raj ko iss halat me dekh kar use apne seene par bahut dard mahsoos hone laga.

Ritu (aatma ki awaz)—dekh le ritu...achchi tarah se dekh le..ye vahi raj hai..vahi tera bhai hai...jiska naam tu apni kismat se mitane ja rahi thi...agar aaj aur iss samay tu jinda khadi hai to ussi raj ki vajah se...jisne tujhe bachane ke liye apni jaan tak ki parwah nahi ki...agar raj vaha nahi pahuchta to shayad teri laash bhi kisi ko kabhi nahi milti..kyon ki uss khandahar me to koi aata jata hi nahi hai...ye vahi raj hai jiske baare me tu hawashi, darinda aur na jane kya kya soch rahi thi...ussi darinde ne tujhe to bacha liya lekin khud mout se lad raha hai...agar raj ko kuch ho gaya to kya tu apne aap ko kabhi maaf kar payegi... ?

Ritu (rote huye jor se chilla kar)—nahiiii....aisa nahi ho sakta...utho rajjj utho...ek bar ankhe kholo rajj...pls..uth jao raj..pls.. meri choti si galti ki itni badi saza mat do mujhe...


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Ghar loutne ke baad use koi mouka na milta dekh ritu soch me pad gayi…kyon ki nahate samay to kisi na kisi ki nazar padni hi thi…to usne subah achche se fresh na ho pane ka bahana kar lota le ke ghar se nikal akeli hi nikal padi..aur iss bar usne gaon ke bahar bane sunsan khandahar ki taraf kadam badha diye.

Khandahar ke paas pahuch kar usne ek bar apne charo taraf dekha aur phir tezi se uss khandahar me ghus gayi...abhi ritu khandahar ke andar ghusi hi thi ki tabhi agle hi pal ritu ke cheekhne ki awaz uss khandahar me goonj uthi...

"Bachaaaooooo....Raaaajjjjj.....Bachaaaaoooooo"

Ab aage......

Main uss samay fresh ho kar khet se lout raha tha ki tabhi meri nazar ritu didi par gayi...unhe khandahar ki taraf jate dekh kar mujhe behad hairani huyi kyon ki uss taraf log bahut hi kam jate the khas kar ke aurat aur ladkiya to bilkul bhi nahi.. uss khandahar me pahle kayi kand ho chuke the jiske karan logo ke mann me uske prati darr baith gaya tha...sirf main hi yaha aata rahta tha jab kisi ko chodne ki koi dhang ki jagah na milti to main yaha la kar unhe pelta tha tension free ho kar.

Ritu didi ko udhar jate dekh kar mere ,mann me hairani paida ho gayi to main bhi chupke chupke unka picha karte huye khandahar ki taraf nikal gaya...mere vaha pahuchne tak vo meri ankho se ojhal ho chuki thi...tabhi mere kano me kisi ke cheekhne ki awaz sunayi padi.

Awz sunte hi main pahchan gaya ki ye ritu didi ki awaz hai to ghabra kar turant tezi se khandar ke andar daud pada... andar pahuchte hi maine jaise hi nazre ghuma kar dekha to dekhte hi buri tarah se choumk gaya.

Khandar ke andar toote huye kamre me ek taraf ritu didi niche padi huyi buri tarah chhatpata rahi thi...aur unke muh se safed jhaag jaisa kuch nikal kar bahar aa raha tha...ye dekhte hi mere to hosh hi ud gaye aur main ghabra kar turant ritu didi ke paas pahuch gaya.

Raj (ghabrate huye)—didi...kya hua….? Ritu didiii..ankhe kholo..didiii…didiii…kya hua… didiii….?

Lekin ritu didi ne ankhe nahi kholi….maine unhe pakad kar kayi bar hilaya..lekin koi asar nahi hua….unke hath pair ekdam burf ki tarah thande padte ja rahe the..aur pair ke nakhuno ka rang kala hota ja raha tha….tabhi vaha kuch sarsarahat ki awaz sun kar meri nazar udhar gayi to phir chounk gaya…ek kaali nagin sarsarate huye vaha se bahar ja rahi thi.

Ye dekh kar mujhe samajhte der nahi lagi ki ritu didi ke sath kya hua hoga…? Maine ghabra kar loya ek taarf phenka aur unke pairo ko dekhne laga…salwar upar karte hi mujhe unke ek pair me do daant ke nishan dikhayi diye..vaha se bahta hua khoon kala pad chuka tha…ritu didi ab tak behosh ho chuki thi…unka chhatpatana band ho chuka tha.

Raj (hilate huye)—ritu didi..ankhe kholo…didi ankhe kholo….

Ritu didi ke sharir me koi halchal hote na dekh kar mera mann bahut ghabrane laga aur ankho se anshu khud ba khud bahne lage…maine unke loye me thoda bahut girne ke baad bhi bacha hua pani unke chehre par lekin tab bhi unki ankhe nahi khuli…ghabrahat aur tension ke karan meri samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kya karu..? phir mere mann me filme me dikhaye jane wale vo scenes yaad aane lage jab ladki ko saanp ke kaatne par hero uska jahar choos kar nikalta hai.

Itna yaad aate hi main yaha vaha ankhe ghuma kar koi kapda dekhne laga lekin jab kuch nazar nahi aaya to maine jaldi se apna shirt utar ke didi ke uss pair me ghutne ke thoda niche achchi tarah se kas ke baandh diya..

Raj (bahte anshu)—main aap ko kuch nahi hone dunga ritu didi….agar aaj aap ko kuch ho gaya to main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi karunga..

Maine turant jhuk kar unke pair me jaha uss nagin ke daant ke nishan the, vaha par apna muh rakh diya aur vaha se jahar chusne ki koshish karne laga….paanch minute chusne me hi mera sir ghumne laga aur ankho ke samne andhera chhane laga.

Raj (mann me)—ye mujhe kya ho raha hai….? Mujhe dhundhla dhundhla kyo dikhayi de raha hai aur chakkar bhi aa raha hai…? Mujhe didi ko jaldi se hospital le jana hoga…main aap ko kuch nahi hone dunga didi…

Maine kisi tarah ritu didi ko apni god me uthaya aur ladkhadate huye khandahar se bahar nikal kar tezi se ghar ki taraf bhagne laga...mujhe apni ankho ke samne kuch bhi saaf nahi dikhayi de raha tha phir main bhagta chala ja raha tha .. mere dilo dimag par sirf ritu didi ko bachane ka hi khyal ghum raha tha.

Udhar mere khandahar se bahar nikalte hi andar dusre bagal wale kamre se koi saya bahar nikla aur mujhe aise rote bhagte dekh kar uske chehre par ek kutil mushkan tairne lagi.

""Ek teer se do shikar.....pahle khud ko to bacha le, phir use bachane ki sochna...bewaqoof...par afsos dono ka hi bachna namumkin hai kyon ki.......
"Mout Se Bhi Bhala Koi Bacha Hai Aaj Tak."....hihihihihi."" uss saaye ne mann hi mann khush hote huye kaha.

Mann hi mann khush hote huye vo saaya khandahar se chupchap bahar nikal gaya…idhar main kisi tarah girte padte ghar pahucha to mujhe apni baaho me ritu ko uthaye dekh kar sab ghabra gaye…do char second me hi ghar ke sabhi log bahar mere paas daudte huye aa gaye….

Malti (ghabra kar)—rajjj..kyaa huaaa…ritu ko….?

Sheetal (ghabra kar daudte huye)—rajjjj…rituu ko kyaaa huaaa….?

Roopa (tension)—rajjj…meri beti ko kyaaa huaaa….?

Raj (ladkhadate huye)—sa……saa…..saa..nnn…ppppp…

Roopa (shocked)—kyaaaaa...saanp ne kaata meri beti ko….?

Iske aage main kuch bol hi nahi paya aur ladkhada kar niche girne laga ki tabhi minakshi ne ritu ko girne se pahle hi pakad liya...lekin main niche gir gaya..iske baad kya hua mujhe kuch yaad nahi raha.

Sheetal (cheekh kar)—raaaajjjjjjjjj...

Mere girte hi sheetal darr aur ghabrahat ke karan jor se cheekh padi...usne jaldi se mera sir apni god me rakh kar mujhe hilate huye jor jor se rone lagi....aaj abhi tak ghar me jo khushi ka mahoul tha achanak hi vo dukhmay ho gaya...kuch ritu didi ko uthane me lage the jo ki behosh thi..aur kuch mujhe hosh me laane ki koshish me...

Sheetal (rote huye)—rajjj..uth naa...kya hua... ? sadhanaaaa……jaldiii se gadiii nikaalllll…

"kk…kyaaa huaa rajjj kooo….? Saanp ne kaat liya kyaaa….aur ritu ko bhi kaat liyaaa…?" tabhi bahar kheto ki taraf se haanfte aate huye seema ne kaha.

Sheetal (rote huye gusse me)—tumhe kaise malummm..ki saanp ne kaata haiii….? Tum to abhi abhi aati ja rahi ho bahar se….tumhe kaiseeeee malummmm…..? sadhannnaaaa…jaldi se gadiii nikallll…

Seema (hadbadate huye)—vo…vo….abhi abhi radha ne khet me aate hi mujhe bataya to main sab chhod kar turant vaha se daudte huye aa rahi hu…

Tabhi sadhana ne chabi la kar gadi start ki…sab ne jaldi se usme ritu aur mujhe litaya….sheetal mujhe apne seene se chipka kar baith gayi jabki roopa chachi ritu ko sambhalne lagi…maa aage baith gayi…aur phir turant hi sadhana tezi se hospital ki taraf full speed me gadi daudane lagi.

Piche kuch log ganga mousi ki gadi me baith kar rawana ho gaye…aaj ke janam din ka sara program khatayi me pad gaya.. ab kisi ko janam din ka hosh hi kaha rah gaya tha.

Raste me hi sheetal ne call kar ke rote huye mohini ko sab bata diya…uss samay vo ghar me hi thi…sunte hi vah jaisi position me thi, ussi position me turant hospital ke liye tezi se rawana ho gayi..

Hospital pahuchte hi turant dono ko ICU me le jaya gaya….tab tak doctor mohini aur ganga mousi ki gadi bhi pahuch chuki thi..usne turant hi treatment start kar diya...kahi se ye khabar haweli aur jyoti tak bhi pahuch gayi to thakurain, arti, vandana aur jyoti bhi kuch der me ghabrayi huyi halat me hospital pahuch gayi.

ICU ke bahar baithe sabhi ro rahe the..sabse bura haal to sheetal didi aur roopa chachi ka tha…sadhana aur rashmi didi dono ko sambhalne me lagi huyi thi…lagbhag ek ghante chale treatment ke baad ICU ka darwaja khula aur mohini bahar nikli…uske bahar nikalte hi sab dono ke baare me puchne lage.

Sheetal (roti huyi)—doctor, mera raj kaisa hai ab…? Kya hua use…? Ab theek to hai na vo…?

Roopa (rote huye)—doctor, mera beta aur meri beti kaise hain ab…? Dono theek to hain na…?

Mohini—agar paanch minute ki bhi deri aur ho jati to hum ritu ko nahi bacha paate…kyon ki jisne use kaata hai vo koi bahut jahareeli nagin hai…iss baat ki ganimat maano ki raj ne apni jaan khatre me daal kar uska jahar chus kar uske sharir se kafi kam kar diya tha warna ritu yaha pahuchne ke bahut pahle hi mar chuki hoti..lekin ab vo khatre se bahar hai.. do ghante me hosh aa jana chahiye use…

Sheetal (roti huyi)—doctor..rajj kaisa haii…?

Mohini—ritu ke sharir se jahar chus kar nikalne ke chakkar me kuch jahar uske andar chala gaya..jiske karan vo behosh ho gaya…raj ke sharir se jahar nikalna to mushkil hai…phir bhi maine treatment kar diya hai..phir bhi khatra abhi tala nahi hai….abhi hamne usko observation me rakha hai…jab tak usko hosh nahi aa jata tab tak kuch kahna mushkil hai..

Malti (sisakte huye)—aisa mat kaho doctor, ek hi to beta hai mera…

Mohini—dekhiye, bhagwan par bharosa rakhiye..vo sab theek karega..

Sheetal (siakte huye jor se)—aise kaise jahar nikalna mushkil hai…?

Mohini apne cabin me chali ..uske piche piche sheetal chillati huyi ghus gayi to sath me sadhana aur rashmi bhi vahi uske cabin me andar aa gayi…

Sadhana—haan, doctor..jyada khatra to ritu ko hona chahiye tha..phir ko khatra kaise hua…?

Mohini—dekho, uss nagin ka jahar bahut tez hai…jaisa ki maine bataya ritu ke sharir se jahar ko chuste huye vo shayad thukne ki jagah andar nigal gaya hoga..raj ki body se jahar nikalna isliye mushkil hai kyon ki uske blood me already pahle se hi poison inject kiya hua hai…

Rashmi—agar uss jahar ko nikala nahi ja sakta to use kisi medicines ke jariye khatam to kiya ja hi sakta hoga na…?

Mohini—haan, khatam kiya ja sakta tha shayad lekin maine ek risk liya hai…

Sheetal (sisakte huye)—kaisa risk….mere bhai ko jaan se maarne ka….?

Mohini—nahi, use bachane ka…

Sadhana—aap kahna kya chahti hain….?

Mohini—dekho, jis tarah loha hi lohe ko kaat-ta hai ussi tarah jahar hi jahar ko maarta hai….ho sakta hai ki ye nagin ka jahareela jahar raj ke blood me moujud poison ko khatam kar de ya phir kam kar de…? Dono me se koi bhi ek kaam agar iss jahar ne kar diya to raj ki sabse badi problem solve ho jayegi…bas yahi soch kar, sach kahu to maine raj ka koi treatment kiya hi nahi…

Teeno (shocked)—kyaaaaaa….?

Sheetal (rote huye mohini ka gala pakad ke)—tumne jaan bujh kar mere bhai ko mout ke muh me dhakel diya….kaisi doctor ho tum..? agar mere raj ko kuch bhi hua to main tumhe jaan se maar dungi…

Sadhana /Rashmi (chhudate huye)—chhodo..sheetall..nahii…

Mohini—dekho maine jo bhi kiya hai, vo raj ki bhalayi ke liye hi kiya hai…jab tumhe pata hai ki raj ke blood me moujud sex virus aur poison ka koi ilaz nahi hai, aise me uska nishchit hai….jyada se jyada 5-6 mahine..iske upar nahi ja payega vo. Usko theek karne ke liye agar maine risk liya, to kya galat kiya maine…?

Sadhana—aur agar aap ka ye idea fail ho gaya, tab to raj abhi hi mar jayega na…ye kyo nahi sochti aap…?

Mohini—uske blood me already poison hai…ye jahar ya to pahle wale poison ko khatam kar dega ya uska asar kam kar dega…ya phir ho sakta hai ki uss poison ko aur taqatwar bana de….vaise bhi ye iss baat par depend karta hai ki raj ke andar kitni matra me uss nagin ka jahar gaya hai…lekin raj ko aise hi til til kar marne dene se to risk lena hi jyada theek laga mujhe..

Rashmi (tension)—ohhh.no…doctor..aapne to bahut badi musibat khadi kar di….

Mohini—bas dua karo ki raj ko agle do se chaar ghante me hosh aa jaye...agar use hosh aa gaya to samjho ki ye experiment bhi kamyab ho gaya…aur phir uske baad sheetal ka ilaz bhi kiya ja sakta hai..

Sheetal (rote huye)—agar raj ko kuch bhi hua to main tumhe jinda nahi chhodungi doctor…ye yaad rakhna tum…

Uske baad sadhana aur rashmi, sheetal ko pakad kar bahar le jane ke liye palat gayi, lekin darwaje par khadi jyoti aur thakurain ko dekh kar teeno hadbada gayi…unn dono ki ankho me bhi anshu the, jo iss baat ka sabut de rahe the ki unhone poori baat sun li hai.

Thakurain (anshu bahate)—itni badi baat tum logo ne chhupa kar rakhi…?

Jyoti (sisakte huye)—agar raj ko kuch bhi hua to main tum teeno ko kabhi maaf nahi karungi…

Rashmi—hum majbur the…

Sadhana aur rashmi, sheetal ko le kar bahar chali gayi…Jaha sabhi ki ankhe nam thi…ab sabhi raj ke liye pareshan the…aur vahi bahar baith kar dono ke hosh me aane ki pratiksha kar rahe the….jabki thakurain aur jyoti, sidhe doctor mohini ke paas pahuch gayi…majburan mohini ko unhe poori baat batani padi.

Thakurain (gusse se mann me)—jisne bhi raj ko maarne ki koshish ki hai, main use jinda nahi chhodungi…ab chahe vo dharti, akash, patal jaha chhup jaye, vaha se ghasit kar bahar nikalungi…agar maine ek hafte ke andar use nahi pakda to main bhi thakurain nahi…

Jyoti (mann me)—jisne bhi ye kiya hai, main use ab chain ki saans nahi lene dungi…aaj se mera ek hi maqsad hai, uss harami ko dhoondna jisne mere raj ki jaan lene ki koshish ki hai…

Dono mann hi mann dridh nishchay kar ke aur mohini se sakht lahze me kuch baate karne ke baad uske cabin se gusse aur dard me bahar nikal kar sab ke paas aa gayi.

Jaisa ki mohini ne kaha tha, ritu ko agle do ghante me hosh aa gaya…hosh me aate hi khud ko hospital ke bed par dekh kar chounk gayi..phir agle hi pal use sab yaad aane laga..ki vo jaise hi vo khandahar me ghusi to ek jagah niche lota rakh kar mangal sutra utarne ke liye apne gale me bandha hua dupatta kholne hata kar mangal sutra ko hath lagaya hi tha ki tabhi piche se kisi ne uske pair me kaat liya aur vo dard se chhatpatate huye niche gir gayi.

Niche girte hi uska dhyan apne samne rakhe ek shivling par lipti huyi kali nagin ki taraf gaya jo uski taraf hi gusse se fufkar rahi thi..aur phir use dekhte hi vo jor se cheekh padi…uske baad uski ankhe band hoti chali gayi..phir kya hua kuch bhi yaad nahi raha.

Sab yaad aate hi vo ek bar phir se ‘bachaaooo..raajjj..bachaaooo’ chillane lagi….uske hosh me aane ki khabar sun kar mohini turant uska check up karne lagi…jab sab kuch normal dikha to usne sab ko usse milne ki ijazat de di…kisi ke aane se pahle hi ritu ne dupatte se mangal sutra ko chhupa liya…lekin mohini ki nazar treatment karte samay uss par pad chuki thi pahle hi..ritu ke gale me mangal sutra dekh kar chounk to vah bhi gayi thi, …lekin usne iss baare me kisi se kuch nahi kaha tha.

Mohini—aap log ritu se mil sakte hain ab..vo poori tarah ab khatre se bahar hai…

Ye sunte hi sab ek sath uske paas pahuch gaye...roopa ne uske sir ko chum kar uske baalo ko sahlane lagi..abhi bhi uski ankho se anshu bah rahe the..

Roopa (sisakte huye)—tu theek ho gayi meri bachchi... meri to jaan hi nikal gayi thi…

Ritu (bahte anshu)—maa, mujhe yaha koun laya…? Mujhe to saanp ne kaat liya tha…? Kisne bachaya mujhe…?

Ragini—aur koun bachayega…hosh me aate hi jiska naam le kar bachane ke liye chilla rahi thi, ussi ne bachaya hai tujhe..

Ritu (shocked)—kyaaa..rajj ne…?

Roopa (sisakte huye)—haan beti…ab tu theek hai..chinta mat kar..

Seema (nam ankhe)—haan beti…raj ne hi bachaya hai tujhe…agar thodi si bhi deri ho jati to tera bachna namumkin tha…lekin dekho, jis raj ne apni jaan khatre me daal kar teri jaan bachayi iss samay vo khud hi jindagi aur mout se lad raha hai..

Ritu (shocked)—kkk…kyaaaaa…? (ghabrate huye)…Kya hua ..rajj ko…? Maa..batao na..kya hua raj ko…?

Phir roopa ne rote rote poori baat bata di….jise sunte hi ritu ki rulayi phut padi aur vo jor jor se rone lagi…sab use samjha kar shant karne ki koshish karne lagi…lekin vo shant hi nahi ho rahi thi…

Ritu (rote huye)—maa, rajj kaha hai…? Mujhe rajj ke paas jana hai.... ?

Malti (sisakte huye)—beti, doctor abhi usse kisi ko milne nahi de rahe hain...doctor ka kahna hai ki agar use teen char ghante me hosh nahi aaya to kuch bhi ho sakta hai....

Ritu (rote huye)—nahi badi maa...raj ko kuch nahi hoga....main use kuch nahi hone dungi...mujhe abhi raj ko dekhna hai.. badi maa mujhe raj ke paas le chalo...

Ritu ki baat par mohini ne use ek bar raj ko dekhne ki ijazat de di..aur khud hi apne sath le gayi...raj ko iss halat me dekh kar use apne seene par bahut dard mahsoos hone laga.

Ritu (aatma ki awaz)—dekh le ritu...achchi tarah se dekh le..ye vahi raj hai..vahi tera bhai hai...jiska naam tu apni kismat se mitane ja rahi thi...agar aaj aur iss samay tu jinda khadi hai to ussi raj ki vajah se...jisne tujhe bachane ke liye apni jaan tak ki parwah nahi ki...agar raj vaha nahi pahuchta to shayad teri laash bhi kisi ko kabhi nahi milti..kyon ki uss khandahar me to koi aata jata hi nahi hai...ye vahi raj hai jiske baare me tu hawashi, darinda aur na jane kya kya soch rahi thi...ussi darinde ne tujhe to bacha liya lekin khud mout se lad raha hai...agar raj ko kuch ho gaya to kya tu apne aap ko kabhi maaf kar payegi... ?

Ritu (rote huye jor se chilla kar)—nahiiii....aisa nahi ho sakta...utho rajjj utho...ek bar ankhe kholo rajj...pls..uth jao raj..pls.. meri choti si galti ki itni badi saza mat do mujhe...


Ritu ko chillate dekh kar nurse use jabardasti pakad kar baahr le gayi uske bed par…

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Update Abhi Incomplete Hai.
jabardast update.... ritu isiliye chillayi thi ki usko sanp ne kata hai...or raj ne bhi wahi tha or raj khud chus chus ke jeher bahar nokala hai or khud ke ander jeher le liya hai or ab hospital me padha hai....or is baat ka pata jab ritu ko pata chaki tab wo khud ko gunagar manne lagi or jor jor se rone lagi....or raj ke pash jane ke loye jid bhi karne lagi or mohini ne usko le geya or raj ko dekh ke rone lagi....or seema chachi to acting achhi tarah kiya....mujhe lagta hai iss update me bhi ek hind hai ki vibhisan koun hai....or mujhe lagta hai khandahar ke dusre room se jo saya nikle the wo seema chachi hi thi....kyu ki jab sheetal pucha ki apko kaise maloom ritu ko saanp ne kata hai.. to seema chachi hadbada geyi thi or sach me radha ne usko bataya hoti to aisa nhi hadbada thi...
or bhai apne kaha tha ko iss update me kahi raaz khulega or create hoga...raaz to create ho geyi liken abhi tak ek bhi raaz nhi khula jaha tak main samajhta hu....
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Maine apni jeb se market se laya hua gift nikal kar ritu didi ke piche aa kar khada ho gaya aur unke gale me pahna diya... gale me pahnane ke baad maine unko ankhe dhire dhire kholne ko kaha.

Raj—didi, ab dhire dhire apni ankhe kholiye....aur dekh lijiye apna gift...

Meri baat sunte hi ritu didi ne khushi se chahakte huye apni ankhe kholne lagi aur phir jaise hi samne aaine par nazar padi to unke hosh hi ud gaye....unke upar jaise aas maan hi toot pada....

Ab aage.....

Ritu didi shocked ho kar kabhi meri taraf to kabhi aaine me apne gale me latak rahe neckless ki taraf dekhti...aur main didi ko dekh raha tha..unhe samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki ek hi pal me ye kya ho gaya.

Raj—didi, kaisa laga giift... ?

Ritu (gusse me)—chatttaaakkkk...kutte, ye kya kiya tune... ?

Raj—didi, gift pasand nahi aaya to sidha bol do na..isme maarne ki kya jarurat thi... ?

Ritu (gusse me)—bata kyo kiya tune aisa mere sath..chatttaaakkk…bata….?

Raj (gaal sahlate huye)—ek to main dophar me ja kar aap ke liye dus lakh ka neckless le kar aaya…khush hone ki bajaye aap ulta mujhe maar rahi ho…? Madarchod, aaj ka mera din hi kharab hai...
mujhe sabne mandir ka ghanta samajh liya hai.. jisko bhi dekho vahi subah se bajaye ja raha hai..

Ritu (gusse me)—kamine main neckless ki baat nahi kar rahi..ye jo tune neckless ke sath pahna diya mujhe, main uski baat kar rahi hu…

Raj—aur kya pahnaya maine.. ? kewal neckless bhar hi to pahnaya hai...

Ritu (gusse me)—(neckless upar ke dikhate huye)..to ye mangalsutra kaha se aa gaya mere gale me…?

Raj (shocked)—mangalsutra..! dikhao jara….(dekh kar)..areey haan, ye to sach much ka mangalsutra hai…lekin ye aaya kaha se…? ab samjha. didi, aapne chori chhupe shadi bhi kar li aur kisi ko bataya tak nahi…?

Ritu (chilla kar)—chup kar kutte…(rone jaisi surat)….ye tune kya anarth kar diya rajjj…? Muujhe laga tha ki tu apni subah ki harkat ke liye sach me sharminda hai aur isliye mafi maang raha hai…mujhe kya pata tha ki tu apni hawash me itna niche gir jayega…?

Raj—Main samajh gaya, ki aap mujhe pyar hi nahi karti...aur na hi kinjal didi karti..dono hamesha se mujhse ladti aayi ho....aap dono mujhse nafrat karti ho….tabhi to shadi khud kisi se kar li chupchap…ab mere upar aarop laga kar mujhe sab ki nazro me girana chahti ho…aap subah ka badla le rahi ho mujhse..jabki maine to mafi bhi maang li hai uss baat ke liye..

Ritu (ruwansi)—achcha main jhuth bol rahi hu..? tujhe sheetal ki kasam, bol ki tere paas mangalsutra nahi tha aur tune mujhe nahi pahnaya.... ? agar tune jhuth bola, to tu sheetal ka mara hua muh dekhe...

Raj—didiiiii, aap ko jo bolna hai mere baare me bolo..sheetal didi ke baare me kuch nahi…

Ritu—to bata mujhe…

Raj—haan, mere paas tha mangalsutra…

Ritu—kyo kharida tune mangalsutra aur kis ke liye….?

Raj—vo to dukan wale ne iss dus laakh ke neckless ke sath free diya tha aur vo ye bhi bol raha tha ki ye mangalsutra bahut lucky hai to maine le liya…

Ritu—to dikha mujhe vo mangalsutra…

Raj—abhi dikhata hu..(jeb me dekhte huye)..ohh..no..kaha gaya…meri jeb me hi to tha…

Ritu (sisakte huye)—ab bhi nahi samjha ki kaha gaya…? Ye vahi mangalsutra hai jo tune mujhe pahna diya….ye tune kya anarth kar diya rajjj..kyo kiya tune aisa rajj,,mere sath..kyo…?

Raj (shocked)—ohh shitt…lagta hai ki jab maine jeb se neckless nikala to ye bhi usme lipat kar aa gaya hoga aur dhokhe se neckless pahnane ke chakkar me ye gadbad ho gayi..I’m sirry didi…maine jaan bujh kar ye nahi kiya..jo bhi hua vo sab galti se hua…mujhe maaf kar do didi..

Ritu (sisakte huye)—lekin teri iss gadbad ne to mujhe kahi muh dikhane layak nahi rakha…meri zindagi barbad kar di tune..

Raj—kuch nahi hua didi…abhi kuch nahi bigda hai…aise kaise zindagi kharab ho jayegi….koun sa kisi ne dekha hai…jaldi se utar do ye mangalsutra..

Ritu (sisakte huye)—hey bhagwan..ye kaisa paap ho gaya…?

Raj—didi, kuch nahi hua hai..aap bekar me hi ro rahi ho…aaj kal ladkiya roj aise mangalsutra pahanti hain aur utarti hain.. chalo main nikalta hu..

Ritu (sisakte huye)—ek paap to kar chuka hai, ab dusra paap karne ja raha hai..

Raj—haan to paap mujhe lagega na…lagne do…idhar aao..utarne do mujhe ye..

Ritu (dhakka dete huye)—rajjjj…

Main ritu didi ke gale se mangalsutra utarne ke liye jaise hi hath mangalsutra ki taraf badhaya, to vaise hi ritu didi ne ghabra kar jor se mujhe chilla kar dhakka de diya aur sisakte huye vaha se bhag gayi...unko aise ghabrate huye bhagte dekh kar main bhi turant unke piche gaya lekin unhone apne room ka darwaja bhitar se band kar liya tha.

Raj—didi, pls darwaja kholo….(mann me)..ye kya bewaqoofi ho gayi mujhse..? kahi ritu didi apne aap ko kuch kar na le..? lekin maine bhi to jaan bujh kar nahi kiya kuch bhi...

Ritu (rote huye andar se hi)—rajj, tum jao yaha se…mujhe akeli chhod do….

Maine ritu didi ko bahut samjhane ki koshish ki lekin vo kuch sunne ko taiyar hi nahi thi...tabhi meri awaz sun kar kinjal didi pata nahi kaha se aa gayi..unhone mujhe darwaja knock karte dekha to sidhe mere paas aa gayi...

Kinjal (gusse me)—kyo khat khata raha hai darwaja...aur maine tujhe mana kiya tha na kamine mere room me aane ke liye…? Phir kyo aaya…?

Maine unki baat ka koi jawab nahi diya aur sidha apne room me aa gaya gadi ki chabi lene…vaise hi mere piche piche kinjal didi bhi aa gayi gusse se tamtamate huye…aur aav dekha na taav aate hi mujhe maarne ke liye hath utha liya to maine turant unka hath beech me hi pakad liya.

Kinjal (gusse me hath uthate huye)—bol kamine…kya kiya tune ritu ke sath…?

Raj (hath pakad kar)—didi hai to didi ki tarah rah..sheetal didi banne ki koshish mat kar..samajh gayi…dubara hath uthaya to main ye bhul jaunga ki tum meri badi bahan ho..

Kinjal (gusse me)—kamine..chhod mera hath…kya kar lega…? Main aaj sab ko teri kartoot bataungi…?

Raj (gusse me)—ja bata de madarchod, jisko batana hai...teri maa ko chodu...kya batayegi sab ko...? yahi na ki maine tumhari bur dekhi hai aur chuchiya bhi dabayi hain… agar ye hath dubara mere upar utha na to teri maa ko chodu, tujhe nangi kar ke poore ghar me ghasit ghasit ke teri bur chodunga…na teri maa kuch kar legi aur na hi teri baap meri jhaant ukhad lega…samjhi..

Maine kinjal didi ka hath chhoda aur chabi le kar gusse me room se bahar nikal gaya….kinjal didi ekdam shocked ho kar mujhe jate huye but bani dekhti rahi..

Main abhi gadi start kar ke shilpa ke ghar ki taraf ja hi raha tha ki tabhi mera phone bajne laga..maine screen ki taraf dhyan diye bina hi call pick kar liya.

Raj—hello..

Dusri taraf se…

S T A R....B L A C K S T A R

Dimag to mera kharab tha hi, black star ka naam sunte hi aur bhi kharab ho gaya….

Raj (gusse me)—
bol madarchodd…apni amma chudwane ke liye bar bar phone karta hai…? Areey gaand me dum hai to mere samne aa kar baat kar gaandu..

Black Star—hahahaha…tujhe bada ajib lag raha hoga na ki tu mujhe gaali de raha hai aur main phir bhi has raha hu..

Raj (dimag kharab)—
ruk gaya…aage bol..ya phir madarchod..kisi ne tere muh me lund ghused diya….?

Black Star—tujhe gusse me dekh kar mujhe tujh par bahut taras aata hai..vo ek kahawat to suni hogi tune..Khisiyani billi khambha noche…teri halat bhi kuch vaisi hi hai….kyo mila meri congratulation ki paheli bujho ka hal…? Kyo nahi mila na…? hahahaha

Raj (gusse me)—
madarchodd..teri maa chod dalunga..bhosdi ke…ek bar tera address bhar mil jaye, phir dekhna kaise teri daiya aur maiya dono kaise chodta hu…

Black Star—aur vo tujhe kabhi milega nahi..kyon ki mera pata to mujhe khud bhi nahi malum..to tujhe batayega koun aur kya batayega….? Hihihihihi

Raj (gusse me)—
madarchodd…jab iss saand ka Qutub minar jitna lund teri gaand me ghusega na to teri gaand phat ke Taj Mahal ban jayegi aur phir teri gaand ka taj mahal bante hi poori duniya ko tera address malum ho jayega..

Black Star—tere lund me kitna dum hai, vo to dikh hi raha hai…jo ek paheli ko solve nahi kar paya…bechara, kare bhi to kya kare…? Oye.oye..oye..oye…Bahut daya aa rahi hai mujhe tere upar…

Raj—
madarchod..teri daya ki bhi maa chod dunga..bhosdi ke..gaandu..jab dekho kukurmutta ka chhata liye ghumta rahta hai.bakchod..

Black Star—tu na waqai me ek saand hi hai…sab tujhe saand theek hi kahte hain…jaise saand ko bas khana, pina, mootna, jaha bhi gaay dikh jaye to chodna aur dusra koi uss gaay par chadhne ki koshish kare to usse bhid jana…dimag to unka lund me hi hota hai…bas yahi khubiya saand me hoti hain aur teri bhi hain..tujhe bhi itne ke alawa kuch nahi aata ..teri dimag ki tanki to bilkul khali hai..agar kisi ko marwana ho to bas uss admi ke paas lal kapda baandh do.. samajh lo ki kaam ho gaya, baki kuch karne ki jarurat hi nahi hai..kyon ki lal kapda dekhte hi saand use jinda chhodega hi nahi…tu bhi vaisa hi hai…taqat bhi tere andar saand ke jaisi hi hai….tujhe bhi lal kapda dikhana padta hai…ab dekh le pichli bar maine tujhe lal kapda dikha diya tha to tune unko maar diya jinko main tere hatho marwana chahta tha..ab ki bar nahi dikhaya to tu lund hilate yaha vaha ghum raha hai..tujhe kuch samajh me hi nahi aa raha hai…kyo sahi kaha na saand babu…?

Raj (gusse me)—madarchod..teri maiya ko chodu..bhosdike..gaandu..

Black Star—hahahahaha…ab nahi dikhayega apni taqat pichli bar ki tarah…vaise bhi iss bar ka game to tu haar gaya… hahahaha…bye..agle plan par phir call karunga.

Iske baad usne call cut kar diya..aur main ab tension me aa gaya ki akhir black star karna kya chahta hai..maine gadi side me laga uski bato par sochne laga.

Raj (mann me)—akhir ye madarchod karne kya wala hai…? Iss bar kuch bataya bhi to nahi sale gaandu ne..dayachand, sita, pammy, janki, shraddha, damini, aur unn ladkiyo par to hath dalega nahi shayad…kyon ki ye baat vo bhi achchi tarah se janta hai ki mera sabse pahle focus inpe hi jayega..aise uske liye inn sab ko kidnap karna uske liye easy nahi hoga… jarur iss bar uska plan kuch aur hi hai…hamara dhyan inn sab ki suraksha me rahega, baki cheezo ki taraf jayega hi nahi, aur vo apna kaam badi asani se kar jayega…shayad isliye hi usne sirf congratulation diya hai, bataya kuch nahi…

Raj (mann me)—dusri baat ye bhi ho sakti hai ki usne pichli bar apne plan ke baare me sirf ek ghante pahle bataya tha, jisse ki main itne kam samay me kisi ko bacha na saku…lekin maine phir bhi bacha liya..uske andar iss baat ka darr baith gaya hai ki agar usne apne plan ke baare me kuch bhi bataya to uska plan phir fail ho sakta hai..yahi soch kar usne kuch nahi bataya..ek aur karan ye bhi lag raha hai ki iss bar samay ek ghante se kahi jyada ka hai uska plan ko kriyanvit karne ka.

Raj (mann me)—lekin iss baat par bhi dhyan dena jaruri hai ki pichli bar plan fail hone par usne kaha tha ki inn sab ko bachane ke liye mujhe bar bar kismat ka sath chahiye aur use sirf ek bar…aise me main inn sab ki security me koi dheel bhi nahi de sakta.

Raj (mann me)—agar usne apne plan me iss bar inn sab ko target nahi kiya hai to akhir uska inn sab se hat kar naya plan kya ho sakta hai….? Philhal to inn sab ki security tight kar deta hu.

Phir maine unn sabhi ladkiyo (jo ki apne ghar vapis ja chuki hain) ke nazdik ke police thane me vaha ke thana prabhari ko call kar ke unn sabhi ki suraksha ki jimmedari de di..shraddha aur baki teen ladkiyo ka bhi intazam kar diya..uske baad main shilpa ke ghar ki taraf nikal gaya…jaha vo mera hi intazar kar rahi thi..

Shilpa—main kab se tumhara intazar kar rahi thi raj..aur tum ho ki abhi aa rahe ho…?

Raj—bas yaar..vo sheetal didi ko college chhodne chala gaya tha to time lag gaya….

Shilpa—abhi yahi khade rahna hai kya…? …chalo bedroom me…

Raj—kaki nahi dikh rahi…

Shilpa—maa ko pata hai ki uski beti ki aaj nath utarne wali hai..isliye vo khet chali gayi hai..

Raj—nath utarne ka program baad me karenge, pahle tum kapde pahan ke ready ho jao…

Shilpa—har bar tum yahi karte ho….jab bhi mujhe karne ka number aata hai to tum hamesha kisi na kisi bahane se taal jate ho…raj, kya mujhe karne ka tumhara mann nahi hota…? Kya main sundar nahi hu…? Gaon ki to poori ladkiyo ko karte ho, phir mere sath kyo nahi karna chahte…?

Raj—kyon ki tum gaon ki baki ladkiyo se bilkul alag ho…unn sabse sundar ho..tumhara nature unn sabse achcha hai.. aur tum meri best friend me se ek ho..jiski main dil se izzat karta hu…tum unn ladkiyo me se ek ho jin ke liye mere dil me hawash nahi balki sirf pyar aur caring hai..

Shilpa—to kya tum mere sath nahi karoge…?

Raj—karunga..lekin abhi pahle jo bol raha hu vo karo..jaldi se ready ho..

Shilpa—kaha jana hai…?

Raj—sab pata chal jayega…kapde to pahno pahle..

Shilpa—jab ye kapde utarungi tabhi to dusre pahnungi na…?

Raj—haan to jaldi se change kar lo na..

Shilpa—raj, tumhi utar do na mere kapde..

Raj—jis din tumhe karunga..uss din hi tumhe bina kapdo ke dekhunga..lekin abhi nahi..

Shilpa—vo din kab ayega raj…?

Raj—aaj bata dunga…

Shilpa (gale lag kar)—I Love You, Rajj

Raj (hoth chum kar)—ummmm…ab kapde pahno jaldi..

Phir shilpa ke ready hote hi usne ghar ki chabi khidki ke paas rakh ke main usko le kar nikal gaya…main abhi shilpa ko le kar city ke bus stand ke paas se gujra hi tha ki tabhi meri ankho ne gadi me lage side mirror me kuch aisa dekha ki jise dekh kar maine turant brake laga kar gadi reverse gear me daal di.

Asal me bus stand par meri choti bahan radha apni ek saheli ke sath khadi thi…aur vaha khade kuch manchale unse chhedchhad kar rahe the..mirror me achanak nazar padte hi jaise maine radha ko uss ladke ke gaal par thappad maarte dekha to turant brake laga diya… dimag to mera aaj vaise bhi kharab hi tha.

Maine gadi ko road ke ek side khadi kiya aur shilpa ko vahi rukne ko bol kar uss taraf chal diya…raste me khadi ek cycle ki chain khich kar nikal li aur use hath me lapet kar chal diya...ek ladka jo bar bar radha ka hath pakadne ki koshish kar raha tha, aur dusra uski saheli se badatmizi kiye ja raha tha…

Jabki radha aur uski saheli lagatar unka virodh kar rahi thi…vaha dus barah log aur bhi khade the lekin unhe aas paas ki duniya se koi matlab hi nahi tha…vo gandhi ji ke teen bandar ban kar khade the…pahuchte hi maine ek punch sidha uske muh par maar diya jisse vo turant niche gira…mujhe vaha dekh kar radha bhi chounk gayi..sath hi vaha khade ho kar tamasha dekh rahi public bhi…

Raj (gusse me)—dhishooommmm….madarchodddd….tadaaakkkkkk….teri maa ko chodu..kya kar raha tha…? tadaaakkkk

Radha (chounk kar)—bhaiyaaa..!

Ladka—aaaaaa…tuuuu…jantaaa…nahiiii…mainnn..koun huuuu….

Raj (gusse me)—tadaaakkkk….madarchoddd…..main teri maa ko chod kar tujhe paida karne wala tera baap hu… chatttaaakkkkkk

Main uss ladke ko andhadhundh peetne me lag gaya….hath me chain lapete uske muh me punch dhada dhad maare ja raha tha…itne me bheed me se kisi ne thane me call kar diya ya phir shayad dusre ladke ne hi…kyon ki main civil dress me tha aur meri gadi bhi thoda dusri side khadi thi, isliye kisi ne pahchana nahi….

Ladka (chillate huye)—aaaaaaaaaaaaa……aaaaaaaa……bachaaaooooooo…..bachaaaoooo….aaaaaaaaaa

Uss ladke ke muh aur naak se lagatar khoon ki dhara bahe chali ja rahi thi..uske aadhe daant ke sath sath, naak ki haddi bhi toot gayi thi…aur vo dard me chillaye ja raha tha…

Apne sathi ko maar khate dekh dusra ladka turant daud kar paas me khadi ek maruti van se talwar nikal laya..use meri taraf talwar le kar daudte dekh radha ghabra gayi aur chilla padi…

Radha (jor se)—bhaiyaaaaa…

Vo ladka maar khate khate behosh ho chuka tha lekin main tab bhi use peete ja raha tha..radha ke chillane ki awaz sun kar mera dhyan bhang hua..tab tak vo ladka bilkul mere paas aa kar jaise hi talwar se prahar kiya to maine vaise hi chain ko dono hatho me pakad liya jisse uska vaar sidhe chain par ja kar laga.

Maine uske agla vaar karne se pahle hi chain ko talwar par lapet diya aur uske pet me ek jor se laat maar kar usko chheen liya…laat padne se vo piche ki taraf gir gaya.

Ladka 2—aaaaaaaaa….sale..tu janta nahi ki..tune jise mara hai vo high court ke judge ka ladka hai….aur main collector ka …. ab tujhe koi nahi bacha sakta….aaaaaaaaaaaa

Raj (gusse me)—tadaaakkkk…taddaaakkkk….teri aisi ki taisi bhosdike….judge aur collector ka ladka hai to kya..raah chalti ladkiyo ko chhedegaa….? Taddaaakkkkkk

Judge aur collector ke ladko ki pitayi ki khabar sun kar vaha ka thanedar turant action me aa gaya…aur apne sath dus sipahiyo ko le kar vaha aa dhamka….do sipahiyo ne daudte huye mujhe piche se pakad liya to maine chain lapeta hua vahi punch ghuma kar uski kanpati me chipka diya jisse vo kaan se khoon bahate huye vahi ludhak gaya aur dusre wale ki bina maare hi gaand phat gayi.

Thanedar (chillate huye)—rukk jaoo..warna goli maar dunga…

Raj (jor se)—madarchodo…jaha ho vahi khade raho…
"Koi Gaandu Gaand Nahi Hilayega.”

Aur phir main jaise hi palat kar uski taarf ghuma to vo bhi chounk gaya..aur aage badh rahe sipahi bhi jaha ke taha khade ho gaye..ye dekh kar public aur bhi hairan ho gayi.

Thanedar (shocked)—SP Sahab..‼

Raj (gusse me)—haan to kya bol raha tha tu..collector ka ladka hai…taddaaaakkkk…tadaaaakkkkkk

Main usko bhi tabiyat se bajane laga…ye dekh kar thanedar ko apni naukri khatre me nazar aane lagi…vo bhag kar mere paas aa gaya aur dono ko chhodne ko kahne laga…dusra ladka bhi ab tak lahu luhan ho chuka tha aur shayad behosh bhi.

Thanedar—(tension)..sir, ye dono judge sahab aur collector ke ladke hain…itna maarenge to dono marr jayenge…

Raj (gusse me)—to ladkiyo ko chhedenge…? Dono ke upar case file karo aur Le jao dono ko hospital me admitt kar do.. aur ek baat ka dhyan rakhna,
agar meri permission ke bina inko chhoda to tera ye danda teri hi gaand me ghused dunga. Samajh gaya…le jao dono madarchodo ko…

Raj (radha se)—tum dono chalo..meri gadi me baitho..

Thanedar ne apne chehre se pasina pochte huye hospital call karne laga… aur main radha aur uski saheli ko gadi me baitha kar aage nikal gaya..dono abhi bhi sadme jaisi halat me thi...radha ko yaha dekh kar shilpa bhihairanhuyi to shilpa ko meri gadi me dekh kar radha bhi chounk gayi.

Raj—tum dono ka kya chakkar tha inse... ?

Radha—koi chakkar nahi hai bhaiya, vo dono hame do teen din se aate jate raste me pareshan kar rahe the..aur aaj bus stand par badatmizi kar rahe the..maine kal ek ko thappad mara tha to aaj dono uska hi badla lene aaye the..hum dono ko apni gadi me baithne ko bol rahe the..jab maine mana kiya to vo ladka mera hath pakadne laga to maine aaj phir usko thappad maar diya..

Raj—jab pareshan kar rahe the to tune bataya kyo nahi mujhe…?

Saheli—vo bhaiyaa…hame laga tha ki ab vo kal ke thappad ke baad pareshan nahi karenge isliye maine hi radha ko batane se mana kar diya tha.

Raj—it’s ok..jab bhi koi problem ho to mujhe call kar diya karo..main turant handle kar lunga..

Dono—ji bhaiyaa..

Saheli (kaan me)—radha, tere bhaiya kitne handsome hain aur bahadur bhi…apne bhaiya se meri dosti karwa de na… main tera zindagi bhar ehsaan manungi..

Radha (gusse se, dhire se)—mere bhaiya ki taraf apni gandi nigah dali to tera muh noch lungi..samjhi..

Saheli (dhire se)—tu to meri pakki wali saheli hai yaar..itna bhi nahi kar sakti mere liye…?

Radha (dhire se)—nahi, bilkul nahi…kabhi sochna bhi mat..

Saheli (kaan me)—maine to suna hai ki tere bhaiya bahut bade chudakkad hain..aur to aur tere bhaiya ka lund bhi bahut bada hai..isliye sab tere bhaiya ko saand bolte hain…

Radha (dhire se)—sab teri jaisi hi ladkiya mere bhaiya ko badnam karti phirti hain har jagah..

Saheli (kaan me)—agar apne bhaiya se meri dosti karwa degi to tera kya bigad jayega... ? phategi to meri na, lekin dosti karwane me teri kyo phat rahi hai... ? kahi aisa to nahi ki tu bhi apne bhaiya se apni phadwane ke firaq me ho... ?

Radha (gusse me,kaan me)—kamini main tera gala daba dungi..samjhi..agar mere bhaiya ke baare me kuch bhi ulta sidha bola to...teri usme itni jyada khujli ho rahi hai to kyo nahi chali gayi uss collector ke ladke ke sath.. ? dono mil ke teri sari khujli mita dete..aage se bhi aur piche se bhi..

Saheli (dhire se)—haaye, ab to main apni ye khujli tere bhaiya se hi mitwaungi...dekh lena..

Radha (ghurte huye)—kalmuhi tu phir mere bhaiya ke bare me boli...na dekh lena, theek nahi hoga...teri meri dosti aaj se khatam..

Saheli (kaan me)—achcha baba, naraz kyo hoti hai.. ? pahle tu lena apne bhaiya ka phir to main tere baad le sakti hu na..?

Radha—ab tu maar khayegi mere hath se..

Maine ek jagah gadi rok kar thoda nasta kiya aur unhe bhi karwaya…uske baad aage chal pade..lekin iss bar radha turant mere bagal wali seat par aa ke baith gayi jisse shilpa ko piche baithna pada.

Radha—bhaiya, vo gift ki dukan par gadi rok dena..

Raj—kyo…?

Radha—kyo ki mujhe gift lena hai..

Raj—gift, lekin kis liye…?

Radha—uufff bhaiya, aap bhi..itna bhi yaad nahi hai ki kal aap ka birthday hai…

Raj (shocked)—kyaaaa…?

Shilpa /saheli—kyaaa..kal birthday hai…?

Radha—haan, kal mere bhaiya ka birthday hai..aur dekho jinka birthday hai unhe khud hi yaad nahi hai apna janam din..

Raj (mann me)—ooh sala..kal to mera birthday hai..aur mujhe khud hi dhyan nahi hai..gajab ho gaya…

Phir achanak hi na jane mere dimag ki ghanti bajne lagi….aur mere chehre par khushi se mushkurahat aa gayi..jaise ki mujhe aladin ka chirag mil gaya ho….? maine radha ko khushi ke maare pakad kar apni baaho me khich liya aur usko chumne laga..uske gaal..uske hoth..uski ankhe..ye dekh kar shilpa aur uski saheli hairan rah gayi..khud radha bhi.

Raj (khushi me)—ohhh..meri gudiya…uuuummmm…uuummmm…uuummm…I Love U..my sister….uuummmm.. tune mera dil khush kar diya…congratulation..my sweet heart…you are my lucky sister..uuuummmmm

Radha (shocked, mann me)—ye bhaiya ko achanak kya ho gaya…? Bhaiya ne mere hotho me bhi chummi li.
Awesome update bhai

Black star ne Congratulations kiss liye kaha ye to samajh me aa gya but uske piche kya reason ho sakta hai or itna v samajh me aaya ki rak ko koi saboot mil gya jiss se vo khus ho gya

Culprit ka v pta chal gya seema chachi lakin aisi kya wajha ho sakti hai jo unhe aisa kerna pad raha hai apna hi ghar dubana kiu chahto hai vo

Or ab kinjal kya kere gi raj ki kartooto ka parda fash kare gi ya nahi

Or ek sawal phir se aagya ki sheetal ye sadma sahe sake gi ki nahi ki raj kitni sari ladkio ke sath so chuka hai or itna hi nahi but unhe maa v bana chuka hai

Kuch to hint de do bro

But there is always next time

All the best for next update
 

Wwesunshine

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Awesome update bhai

Black star ne Congratulations kiss liye kaha ye to samajh me aa gya but uske piche kya reason ho sakta hai or itna v samajh me aaya ki rak ko koi saboot mil gya jiss se vo khus ho gya

Culprit ka v pta chal gya seema chachi lakin aisi kya wajha ho sakti hai jo unhe aisa kerna pad raha hai apna hi ghar dubana kiu chahto hai vo

Or ab kinjal kya kere gi raj ki kartooto ka parda fash kare gi ya nahi

Or ek sawal phir se aagya ki sheetal ye sadma sahe sake gi ki nahi ki raj kitni sari ladkio ke sath so chuka hai or itna hi nahi but unhe maa v bana chuka hai

Kuch to hint de do bro

But there is always next time

All the best for next update
ये सब बता देगा तो स्टोरी मे क्या मजा रह जायेगा
 

Mr.SAM

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@Mr.SAM BHAI YE KIDS FOURUM NAHI HAI.AGAR SEX HI PASAND NAHI HAI TO YAHA KIA KAR RAHA HAI.
GHAR ME NOVEL PADH I YE.
AUR ANAND BHAI KISI KE SATH RACE NAHI LAGA RAHE HAI.
JO STORY JALDI JALDI KHATAM KOR DENA HOGA.
YE XF KI 1 no story hai.
Speed
@Mr.SAM BHAI YE KIDS FOURUM NAHI HAI.AGAR SEX HI PASAND NAHI HAI TO YAHA KIA KAR RAHA HAI.
GHAR ME NOVEL PADH I YE.
AUR ANAND BHAI KISI KE SATH RACE NAHI LAGA RAHE HAI.
JO STORY JALDI JALDI KHATAM KOR DENA HOGA.
YE XF KI 1 no story hai.
Speed wala do page ki story ko koi yaad nahi rakhta.
CHOTI STORY BHI ACHA HOTA HAI.MAGAR YE LEKHOK KE UPDAR NIRBHOR KARTA HAI.
Chota story koi bhi likh saatha hai magar mahakabya likhne ki shamta kuch logo ki hote hai.

Saand ka kam hi chodna.
Agar sex nahi kore ga kia USKO loli pop chusene swia aur koi rasta nahi rah gaye hai.

[maine is lekha ko modify kia kiu ki mujhe age ki reply perfect nahi laga ]
Koi kisi writer ko force nai krta or krna bhi nai chahiye but har kisi ka point of view hota hai mera maine describe kr diya.
Ye sirf suggestion hoty hain writer k liye.
 
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