Incest SAAND

[Sushant Devgan]

Nice update bro

 

[Sabhi91]

First, Most Welcome Brother,
Sabse pahle to aapka hardik swagat hai dost.

Aapne bilkul sahi kaha, stories likhne me bahut samay waste hota hai..koi bhi scene create karne se pahle usko ghanto sochna padta hai, tab ja kar kuch likh pana sambhav ho pata hai.

Daily kam se kam 8-10 hrs isme lag hi jate hain balki kabhi kabhi to isse bhi jyada samay lagta hai.

Mujhe views, reviews ya likes milne ka moh nahi hai bas Likhna mere liye ek passion hai, ek junoon hai..jab bhi mere paas khali waqt hota hai to main likhne baith jata hu.

Abhi to corona ke chalte ghar par hi hu phir bhi work from home to karna hi padta hai.

Jab job rahti hai to poora din office me nikal jata hai..office se loutne ke baad dinner vagairah se free ho kar likhne baith jata hu aur subah hone tak likhne ka hi kaam karta hu, bina palak jhapkaye..yahi kram continue 3 din chalta hai..fourth day sirf night me sone ka kaam karta hu..uske baad phir se agle 3 din vaisa hi chalta hai.

Jaha tak likhne ke badle me kuch milne ki baat hai to milta hai na bhai, bahut kuch milta hai yaha..logo ki maa aur bahan ki gaaliya milti hain..log kisi na kisi bahaane se nicha dikhane ki koshish karte hain..yahi inaam milta hai…magar iske sath sath kuch sachche dost bhi milte hain jo swarthi aur matlabi nahi hote, jo girgit ki tarah apna rang nahi badalte, aur yahi meri sabse badi anmol kamayi hai.

Isliye apne unhi sachche dosto ki khatir main likhta hu..phir chahe mujhe kitna bhi tez fever ho, ghar me mehman aa jaye tab bhi main likhta jarur hu.

Jab tak mere sharir me taqat, hath me kalam aur aise sachche dosto ka sath rahega..tab tak main likhta rahunga,,bina ruke, bina jhuke.

Anand bhai, aap wakai mai bahut hi kathin mehnat kar rahe hai. Sararik mehnat se kahi zayada mansik mehnat kathin hota hai......
Koi story likhna koi chhoti baat nhi hai. Uske lye kitni mehnat or kitna samay lagta hai ye wo hi bhakhubi bata sakta hai jisne kavi story likhne ki koshish ki ho.......

Gali wo hi dete jisme koi kabiliyat na ho. Jo khud to kuch kar nhi paate hai or jo kuch karne ki koshish karta hai to uske aagae rora atkate hai. Apko shayed malum hoga jo v kisi story pe galat shabdon ka prayog karta hai usne kavi koi story likhne ki himmat tak nhi kiya hoga..... Aise logo ko ignore kijye Anand bhai. Aise log har jagh milte hai. In Jaison ko react karne k bajaye ignore karna hi achha hai. Pure duniya mai aisa koi sucessful nhi hoga jo aise alachoko ka samna na kiya ho. Insan ko to chhodiye bhagwan ko v gali dene wale mil jate hai.....

Aap apne niji jindgi se jujhte hue hum savi k liye itna mehnat karte hai or hum savi k lye tym se update karte hai uske liye bahut bahut dhanyawad...... Mera savi writter se ek hi request hai agar tym pe update de paye ya update late hone lage to inform kar diya kijye. Is se reader ko thodi kam pareshani hogi...... Mai janta hu aap humesha se ye karte aa rahe hai. Mai bas apne dil ki baat kah raha tha. Meri yahi ummid har writter se rakhta hai

 

[Sabhi91]

SAAND
UPDATE- 256
KALA KAMRA​

Ye mahsoos hote hi sheetal ne turant apne pairo ki taraf dekha..phir ghabra kar daaye, phir baaye, upar phir niche dekha.. tab use apne dil ki dhadkane rukti huyi si mahsoos hone lagi..

Sheetal (shocked)—omg…ye main kaha pahuch gayi hu aur kaise …?

Ab aage….

Sheetal kisi registan me thi..ji, haan, ye registan hi to tha…poore chaand ki raat thi..taaro bhara akash tha..chaand apne youvan par tha..jaha tak nazar jati thi, jaha tak vo dekh sakti thi..vaha tak ret ke unche unche teele phaile huye the..koi makaan, koi abadi, door door tak nahi thi…aur ye sab khade hi khade chand lamho me jane kya se kya ho gaya tha..?

Jane vah kaha aa gayi thi..? ye koun si jagah thi..? ye koun sa ilaka tha…? Sheetal abhi khadi khadi apni tez chalti saanso aur chetna ko sanyat hi karne me lagi huyi thi ki tabhi ek saaya uske upar nazar aaya aur phad phadahat ke sath cheekhte huye aage nikal gaya.

Ret par uss saaye ka akaar bahut bada tha...use aisa mahsoos hua jaise ko koi pakshi uske sir ko chhute huye gujra ho... pankho ki phadphadahat aur Cheekh ki awaz sunte hi sheetal ghabra gayi aur turant uski nazar upar chali gayi...lekin upar akash me koi cheez nazar nahi aa rahi thi.

Chandni apne poorn youvan par thi...door door tak registan phaila hua tha...thandi thandi hawaye chal rahi thi…yeh mahoul, ye manzar sheetal ki pasand the, uski kamjori the…aur ye drishya, sheetal ne ab tak kewal english filmo me hi dekha tha..lekin ab to vah khud kisi film ka hissa ban gayi thi..aisi film ka hissa jiska na to koi director tha aur na hi koi photographer tha.

Sheetal apne dhadakte dil par kabu karne ka prayas karte huye khadi rahi..par tabhi kahi se chham..chham ki awaz aane lagi...jaise ki kisi ke pair me ghunghroo bandhe ho..aur vah daudta chala aa raha ho.

Awaz ki disha me sheetal ne nazre ghumayi to samne se ek saaya aata hua nazar aaya...karib aa kar uss akriti ne shakal surat apna li, ye ek oontni thi jis par koi sawar nahi tha...vo oontni uske paas pahuch kar ruk gayi aur phir khud hi vahi ret par baith gayi..use yaha dekh kar sheetal shocked ho kar rah gayi..uske dimag me kayi tarah ke khyal panapne lage.

Sheetal (shocked)—ye oontni yaha kaha se aa gayi…? Khair, aayi jaha se bhi aayi ho lekin aa kar ye mere hi samne kyo baith gayi….? Pahle uss kaale kamre me ghuste hi na jane main yaha itna jaldi kaise pahuch gayi…yahi soch soch kar mera dinag tension se phata ja raha tha ki ab ye bhi ek nayi tension gale aan padi..

Sheetal abhi yahi soch soch kar hairan aur uljhan ka shikar ho rahi thi ki tabhi vo apne karib se aati huyi kisi ki awaz sun kar buri tarah se chounk gayi.

“Iss oontni par baith jao..ye tumhare liye hi bheji gayi hai.” Kisi ki awaz sunayi padi.

Sheetal ne awaz sunte hi chounk kar apne charo taraf dekha magar bolne vala kahi nahi dikhayi diya..ye uske liye behad hairan karne wali baat thi…

Sheetal (shocked)—ye sab kya ho raha hai mere sath..? jab se uss kaale kamre me ghusi hu, tab se sab kuch ajib ho raha hai…ab to awaz bhar sunayi de rahi hai lekin bolne wala dikhayi nahi de raha hai…kya chakkar hai ye…? Iske piche kya raaz hai….? ab kya karu…? (kuch soch kar)..khair jab okhali me sir daal hi diya hai to ab ghabrana kaisa..jo hoga dekha jayega..

Mann hi mann kuch faisla kar ke vo dhadakte dil ke sath oontni par sawar ho gayi…sheetal ke baithte hi vo oontni hilore leti huyi uth kar khadi ho gayi jaise ki vo uske sawar hone ki hi pratiksha kar rahi thi…kaale kamre me pravesh karne ke baad uske sath ghatit ho rahi sabhi ghatnaye behad apratyashit aur rahasyamayi thi…oontni halani behad ehtiyaat ke sath uthi thi lekin phir bhi sheetal aage piche jhool kar rah gayi.

Sheetal ke sawar hote hi oontni ne chamakte chaand ki disha me chalna shuru kar diya…phir kuch der baad hi usne apni raftaar badhayi aur dekhte hi dekhte vah hawa se baate karne lagi.

Raat ka waqt, oontni ki sawari, chandni raat aur door door tak phaila registan aur sath me ek apsara jaisi sundar jawan ladki..ajib nazara tha, koi bhi insaan ye sab dekh leta to but ban kar rah jata, lekin yaha to sheetal ke alawa door door tak koi insaan hi nahi dikh raha tha.

Ye sabhi ghatnaye behad ashcharya janak thi…sheetal ko aisa mahsoos ho raha tha jaise ki vo kisi aur hi duniya me aa gayi ho..? drishya par drishya badalte ja rahe the.

Chaand ab bhi samne tha aur dhire dhire apni chamak khota ja raha tha….aur phir antatah daudte daudte oontni ki raftaar kam hone lagi..aur vo chalte huye ek jagah pahuch kar ruk gayi jaise ki use pahle se hi pata ho ki kaha par pahuch kar use rukna hai…?

Safar karte huye jaane kitna waqt gujar gaya tha…? Vo na jaane kitna fasla tay kar aayi thi…? Raat ka jadu toot chuka tha. Aur suraj kisi laal tave ki tarah bahut dhire dhire ujagar ho raha tha.

Oontni ke baithne par sheetal uski pith se utar gayi aur khade ho kar nikalte suraj ko dekhne lagi…ye registan ki subah thi. Aisi manbhavan aur khubsurat subah sheetal pahli baar dekh rahi thi..samne kuch nahi tha, bas ret ke teele the aur kshitiz par sir ubharta suraj tha…upar aas maan aur inn cheezo ke dwara hi banaye huye iss landscape, iss drishya ki dilkashi aur saundarya ka koi jawab nahi tha.

Sheetal iss anokhi subah ke iss jadu me khoyi huyi thi ki tabhi use achanak apni pith par pankho ki tez phadphadahat ki awaz sunayi di…uss awaz me ek cheekh bhi shamil thi…usne palat kar dekha to aas maan par kuch nahi tha, lekin dharti par kisi udte huye pakshi ka saaya jarur dikhayi de raha tha.

Ye vichitra manzar tha…sheetal ne uss saaye ko dharti par door tak jate huye dekha..ret par padta ye saya itna bada tha ki lagta tha ki vah pakshi bahut nichi udan le raha ho..

Sheetal abhi iss saaye ko door gayab hoye huye dekh hi rahi thi ki use apne piche ek saaya aur bhi nazar aa gaya..dekhne me vo kisi admi ka saya lag raha tha.

Aise lagta tha jaise ki koi chadar odhe huye hai..suraj, kyon ki abhi nikal raha tha aur vo jo koi bhi tha, vo suraj ke samne tha, isliye uss saaye ka akaar bhi asadharan dikh raha tha.

Vo saaya sidhe sheetal ki taraf hi badhta aa raha tha…yaha tak ki dharti par sarakte uss insaani saaye ka sir sheetal ke kadmo me aa gaya…aur apne pairo par saaye ke aate hi sheetal ko ek ajib sa ehsaas hua…

Sheetal ne ghabra kar piche palat kar use dekhne chaha lekin tab tak der ho chuki thi.

Vahi dusri taraf main jaise hi tanu ke room se bahar nikla vaise hi kisi se takra gaya…takrate hi kisi ke girne ki awaz aayi, sath me uske chillane ki bhi..awaz sun kar tanu bhi room se bahar nikal aayi..maine samne dekha to tip top bani ek aur niche jamin par padi huyi thi aur gusse aur dard me gaaliya bakte huye apni kamar sahlaye ja rahi thi.

“Uuuiii..maaa, mar gayi….andha hai kya, harami..dikhta nahi hai kya tujhe, haaye saand jaise thok diya…? Koun hai tu…? Aur yaha haweli me tujhe ghusne kisne diya..aaaaahhh..meri kamar…?” uss aurat ne dard me karahte huye meri tarif me kuch anmol vachan kahe.

Tanu—mummyyy... ! .kyaa huaaa...aap gir kaise gayi.... ?

Raj (mann me)—ohh, to iska matlab ki ye tanu didi ki mummy hai matlab ki meri chachi..

Aurat—aaaahhhh...giri kaha thi..iss saand ne gira diya...koun hai ye... ? koi naya naukar rakha hai kya haweli me... ?

Raj—maine jaan bujh kar nahi giraya..aap hi mujhse takra kar gir gayi thi chachi..

Kalyani(gusse me)—kyaa kaha chachi... ? main tujhe chachi nazar aati hu kamine... ? naukar ho kar juban ladata hai...ruk abhi batati...

Vo gusse me uth kar mujhe thappad maarne ko huyi vaise hi maine tanu ko pakad kar apne aage kar diya jisse uska thappad mujhe padne ki jagah tanu ke gaalo par pad gaya..ab to dono maa beti mere upar bhadak gayi..ye dekh main vaha se bahar jane laga…

Dono gusse me mujhe maarne ke liye mere piche daud padi..tabhi samne se abhay aa gaya...main ja kar uske piche chhup gaya..

Raj—chacha, dekho didi aur chachi mujhe maar rahi hain aur mujhe gandi gandi gaaliya bhi de rahi hain..

Kalyani (gusse me)—vaha kaha ja raha hai kamine..rum main teri abhi khaal udhedti hu...

Abhay (chillate huye)—kalyaniii...kya hai ye sab... ? aur tanu, maine kya samjhaya tha tumhe…? Ek baar me samajh me nahi aata kya ... ? agar meri barso ki mehnat par iss bar pani phira to main tum dono ko kaat kar beech chourahe par phenk dunga..samajh gayi..

Kalyani—ye kya abhay..? tum ek naukar ke liye mujhe aur tanu ko daant rahe ho…?

Abhay (jor se)—shut up..bewaqoof..vo naukar nahi hai, balki mere bade bhai vivek ka ladka raj hai, samjhi..aaya kuch samajh me ..aur agar nahi aaya to tanu se ja kar pucho ki maine kya kaha tha ise aur kyo…? Jao yaha se..aur ek baat dhyan rakhna, yaha raj ko tab tak koi taklif nahi honi chahiye..

Kalyani (shocked)—kyaaaaa….ye rajjj haii….?

Tanu—haan mummy..

Kalyani—to tune mujhe pahle kyo nahi bataya…?

Tanu—aapne mujhe batane ka mouka hi kaha diya..chaliye mere room me main batati hu…

Uske baad tanu apne sath kalyani ko room me le gayi aur jo jo abhay ne usse aur suraj se kaha tha, sab batane lagi…ye sun kar kalyani ki ankho me ek chamak aa gayi.

Kalyani—ye sab tumhe pahle batana chahiye tha…agar vo bhag jata yaha se to hamara sara plan fail ho jata…ab se raj ko kisi tarah se bahla fusla kar apne vash me karna hoga..

Tanu se baat karne ke baad kalyani chachi turant mere paas aa gayi aur bade pyar se mujhse baat karne lagi…dekhne me vo thodi moti thi, rang gora…badi badi chuchiya aur piche kudrat ki nayab naqqasi ke roop me kisi matka jaise do bade bade chutad..kul mila kar dekhne me theek hi thi.

Kalyani—raj beta, main tumhe maar thodi rahi thi,,,bas thoda sa mazak kar rahi thi..hihihihi..tu to mera ladla beta hai.. gussa to nahi hai na apni chachi se..?

Raj—pahle to gali de rahi thi aap..

Kalyani—maine kaha na ki vo to bas ek mazak tha,,,dekh ab maaf bhi kar de apni chachi ko..

Tanu—haan raj, mujhe bhi..dekh phir hum dono na aaj bahar shopping karne chalenge..

Raj (khush)—sachchi..theek hai phir maaf kar deta hu dono ko..

Kalyani—beti sath me body guards le kar jana..raj ke sath koi gadbad nahi honi chahiye…raj hamare khazane ki chabi hai..

Tanu—tension mat lo mummy..main ab iska khas khyal rakhungi..

Thodi hi der me main taiyar ho kar, tanu ke sath shopping karne chala gaya…piche piche do gadiyo me karib dus hathiyar band body guards bhi sath le liye the tanu ne.

Update Abhi Incomplete Hai.

Superb....

Tanu line pe aa rahi hai bahut jald tanu ki phatne wali hai.....
Waiting for next....

 

[Black water]

Fabulous update bhai

 

[Krishu89]

SAAND
UPDATE- 256
KALA KAMRA​

Ye mahsoos hote hi sheetal ne turant apne pairo ki taraf dekha..phir ghabra kar daaye, phir baaye, upar phir niche dekha.. tab use apne dil ki dhadkane rukti huyi si mahsoos hone lagi..

Sheetal (shocked)—omg…ye main kaha pahuch gayi hu aur kaise …?

Ab aage….

Sheetal kisi registan me thi..ji, haan, ye registan hi to tha…poore chaand ki raat thi..taaro bhara akash tha..chaand apne youvan par tha..jaha tak nazar jati thi, jaha tak vo dekh sakti thi..vaha tak ret ke unche unche teele phaile huye the..koi makaan, koi abadi, door door tak nahi thi…aur ye sab khade hi khade chand lamho me jane kya se kya ho gaya tha..?

Jane vah kaha aa gayi thi..? ye koun si jagah thi..? ye koun sa ilaka tha…? Sheetal abhi khadi khadi apni tez chalti saanso aur chetna ko sanyat hi karne me lagi huyi thi ki tabhi ek saaya uske upar nazar aaya aur phad phadahat ke sath cheekhte huye aage nikal gaya.

Ret par uss saaye ka akaar bahut bada tha...use aisa mahsoos hua jaise ko koi pakshi uske sir ko chhute huye gujra ho... pankho ki phadphadahat aur Cheekh ki awaz sunte hi sheetal ghabra gayi aur turant uski nazar upar chali gayi...lekin upar akash me koi cheez nazar nahi aa rahi thi.

Chandni apne poorn youvan par thi...door door tak registan phaila hua tha...thandi thandi hawaye chal rahi thi…yeh mahoul, ye manzar sheetal ki pasand the, uski kamjori the…aur ye drishya, sheetal ne ab tak kewal english filmo me hi dekha tha..lekin ab to vah khud kisi film ka hissa ban gayi thi..aisi film ka hissa jiska na to koi director tha aur na hi koi photographer tha.

Sheetal apne dhadakte dil par kabu karne ka prayas karte huye khadi rahi..par tabhi kahi se chham..chham ki awaz aane lagi...jaise ki kisi ke pair me ghunghroo bandhe ho..aur vah daudta chala aa raha ho.

Awaz ki disha me sheetal ne nazre ghumayi to samne se ek saaya aata hua nazar aaya...karib aa kar uss akriti ne shakal surat apna li, ye ek oontni thi jis par koi sawar nahi tha...vo oontni uske paas pahuch kar ruk gayi aur phir khud hi vahi ret par baith gayi..use yaha dekh kar sheetal shocked ho kar rah gayi..uske dimag me kayi tarah ke khyal panapne lage.

Sheetal (shocked)—ye oontni yaha kaha se aa gayi…? Khair, aayi jaha se bhi aayi ho lekin aa kar ye mere hi samne kyo baith gayi….? Pahle uss kaale kamre me ghuste hi na jane main yaha itna jaldi kaise pahuch gayi…yahi soch soch kar mera dinag tension se phata ja raha tha ki ab ye bhi ek nayi tension gale aan padi..

Sheetal abhi yahi soch soch kar hairan aur uljhan ka shikar ho rahi thi ki tabhi vo apne karib se aati huyi kisi ki awaz sun kar buri tarah se chounk gayi.

“Iss oontni par baith jao..ye tumhare liye hi bheji gayi hai.” Kisi ki awaz sunayi padi.

Sheetal ne awaz sunte hi chounk kar apne charo taraf dekha magar bolne vala kahi nahi dikhayi diya..ye uske liye behad hairan karne wali baat thi…

Sheetal (shocked)—ye sab kya ho raha hai mere sath..? jab se uss kaale kamre me ghusi hu, tab se sab kuch ajib ho raha hai…ab to awaz bhar sunayi de rahi hai lekin bolne wala dikhayi nahi de raha hai…kya chakkar hai ye…? Iske piche kya raaz hai….? ab kya karu…? (kuch soch kar)..khair jab okhali me sir daal hi diya hai to ab ghabrana kaisa..jo hoga dekha jayega..

Mann hi mann kuch faisla kar ke vo dhadakte dil ke sath oontni par sawar ho gayi…sheetal ke baithte hi vo oontni hilore leti huyi uth kar khadi ho gayi jaise ki vo uske sawar hone ki hi pratiksha kar rahi thi…kaale kamre me pravesh karne ke baad uske sath ghatit ho rahi sabhi ghatnaye behad apratyashit aur rahasyamayi thi…oontni halani behad ehtiyaat ke sath uthi thi lekin phir bhi sheetal aage piche jhool kar rah gayi.

Sheetal ke sawar hote hi oontni ne chamakte chaand ki disha me chalna shuru kar diya…phir kuch der baad hi usne apni raftaar badhayi aur dekhte hi dekhte vah hawa se baate karne lagi.

Raat ka waqt, oontni ki sawari, chandni raat aur door door tak phaila registan aur sath me ek apsara jaisi sundar jawan ladki..ajib nazara tha, koi bhi insaan ye sab dekh leta to but ban kar rah jata, lekin yaha to sheetal ke alawa door door tak koi insaan hi nahi dikh raha tha.

Ye sabhi ghatnaye behad ashcharya janak thi…sheetal ko aisa mahsoos ho raha tha jaise ki vo kisi aur hi duniya me aa gayi ho..? drishya par drishya badalte ja rahe the.

Chaand ab bhi samne tha aur dhire dhire apni chamak khota ja raha tha….aur phir antatah daudte daudte oontni ki raftaar kam hone lagi..aur vo chalte huye ek jagah pahuch kar ruk gayi jaise ki use pahle se hi pata ho ki kaha par pahuch kar use rukna hai…?

Safar karte huye jaane kitna waqt gujar gaya tha…? Vo na jaane kitna fasla tay kar aayi thi…? Raat ka jadu toot chuka tha. Aur suraj kisi laal tave ki tarah bahut dhire dhire ujagar ho raha tha.

Oontni ke baithne par sheetal uski pith se utar gayi aur khade ho kar nikalte suraj ko dekhne lagi…ye registan ki subah thi. Aisi manbhavan aur khubsurat subah sheetal pahli baar dekh rahi thi..samne kuch nahi tha, bas ret ke teele the aur kshitiz par sir ubharta suraj tha…upar aas maan aur inn cheezo ke dwara hi banaye huye iss landscape, iss drishya ki dilkashi aur saundarya ka koi jawab nahi tha.

Sheetal iss anokhi subah ke iss jadu me khoyi huyi thi ki tabhi use achanak apni pith par pankho ki tez phadphadahat ki awaz sunayi di…uss awaz me ek cheekh bhi shamil thi…usne palat kar dekha to aas maan par kuch nahi tha, lekin dharti par kisi udte huye pakshi ka saaya jarur dikhayi de raha tha.

Ye vichitra manzar tha…sheetal ne uss saaye ko dharti par door tak jate huye dekha..ret par padta ye saya itna bada tha ki lagta tha ki vah pakshi bahut nichi udan le raha ho..

Sheetal abhi iss saaye ko door gayab hoye huye dekh hi rahi thi ki use apne piche ek saaya aur bhi nazar aa gaya..dekhne me vo kisi admi ka saya lag raha tha.

Aise lagta tha jaise ki koi chadar odhe huye hai..suraj, kyon ki abhi nikal raha tha aur vo jo koi bhi tha, vo suraj ke samne tha, isliye uss saaye ka akaar bhi asadharan dikh raha tha.

Vo saaya sidhe sheetal ki taraf hi badhta aa raha tha…yaha tak ki dharti par sarakte uss insaani saaye ka sir sheetal ke kadmo me aa gaya…aur apne pairo par saaye ke aate hi sheetal ko ek ajib sa ehsaas hua…

Sheetal ne ghabra kar piche palat kar use dekhne chaha lekin tab tak der ho chuki thi.

Vahi dusri taraf main jaise hi tanu ke room se bahar nikla vaise hi kisi se takra gaya…takrate hi kisi ke girne ki awaz aayi, sath me uske chillane ki bhi..awaz sun kar tanu bhi room se bahar nikal aayi..maine samne dekha to tip top bani ek aur niche jamin par padi huyi thi aur gusse aur dard me gaaliya bakte huye apni kamar sahlaye ja rahi thi.

“Uuuiii..maaa, mar gayi….andha hai kya, harami..dikhta nahi hai kya tujhe, haaye saand jaise thok diya…? Koun hai tu…? Aur yaha haweli me tujhe ghusne kisne diya..aaaaahhh..meri kamar…?” uss aurat ne dard me karahte huye meri tarif me kuch anmol vachan kahe.

Tanu—mummyyy... ! .kyaa huaaa...aap gir kaise gayi.... ?

Raj (mann me)—ohh, to iska matlab ki ye tanu didi ki mummy hai matlab ki meri chachi..

Aurat—aaaahhhh...giri kaha thi..iss saand ne gira diya...koun hai ye... ? koi naya naukar rakha hai kya haweli me... ?

Raj—maine jaan bujh kar nahi giraya..aap hi mujhse takra kar gir gayi thi chachi..

Kalyani(gusse me)—kyaa kaha chachi... ? main tujhe chachi nazar aati hu kamine... ? naukar ho kar juban ladata hai...ruk abhi batati...

Vo gusse me uth kar mujhe thappad maarne ko huyi vaise hi maine tanu ko pakad kar apne aage kar diya jisse uska thappad mujhe padne ki jagah tanu ke gaalo par pad gaya..ab to dono maa beti mere upar bhadak gayi..ye dekh main vaha se bahar jane laga…

Dono gusse me mujhe maarne ke liye mere piche daud padi..tabhi samne se abhay aa gaya...main ja kar uske piche chhup gaya..

Raj—chacha, dekho didi aur chachi mujhe maar rahi hain aur mujhe gandi gandi gaaliya bhi de rahi hain..

Kalyani (gusse me)—vaha kaha ja raha hai kamine..rum main teri abhi khaal udhedti hu...

Abhay (chillate huye)—kalyaniii...kya hai ye sab... ? aur tanu, maine kya samjhaya tha tumhe…? Ek baar me samajh me nahi aata kya ... ? agar meri barso ki mehnat par iss bar pani phira to main tum dono ko kaat kar beech chourahe par phenk dunga..samajh gayi..

Kalyani—ye kya abhay..? tum ek naukar ke liye mujhe aur tanu ko daant rahe ho…?

Abhay (jor se)—shut up..bewaqoof..vo naukar nahi hai, balki mere bade bhai vivek ka ladka raj hai, samjhi..aaya kuch samajh me ..aur agar nahi aaya to tanu se ja kar pucho ki maine kya kaha tha ise aur kyo…? Jao yaha se..aur ek baat dhyan rakhna, yaha raj ko tab tak koi taklif nahi honi chahiye..

Kalyani (shocked)—kyaaaaa….ye rajjj haii….?

Tanu—haan mummy..

Kalyani—to tune mujhe pahle kyo nahi bataya…?

Tanu—aapne mujhe batane ka mouka hi kaha diya..chaliye mere room me main batati hu…

Uske baad tanu apne sath kalyani ko room me le gayi aur jo jo abhay ne usse aur suraj se kaha tha, sab batane lagi…ye sun kar kalyani ki ankho me ek chamak aa gayi.

Kalyani—ye sab tumhe pahle batana chahiye tha…agar vo bhag jata yaha se to hamara sara plan fail ho jata…ab se raj ko kisi tarah se bahla fusla kar apne vash me karna hoga..

Tanu se baat karne ke baad kalyani chachi turant mere paas aa gayi aur bade pyar se mujhse baat karne lagi…dekhne me vo thodi moti thi, rang gora…badi badi chuchiya aur piche kudrat ki nayab naqqasi ke roop me kisi matka jaise do bade bade chutad..kul mila kar dekhne me theek hi thi.

Kalyani—raj beta, main tumhe maar thodi rahi thi,,,bas thoda sa mazak kar rahi thi..hihihihi..tu to mera ladla beta hai.. gussa to nahi hai na apni chachi se..?

Raj—pahle to gali de rahi thi aap..

Kalyani—maine kaha na ki vo to bas ek mazak tha,,,dekh ab maaf bhi kar de apni chachi ko..

Tanu—haan raj, mujhe bhi..dekh phir hum dono na aaj bahar shopping karne chalenge..

Raj (khush)—sachchi..theek hai phir maaf kar deta hu dono ko..

Kalyani—beti sath me body guards le kar jana..raj ke sath koi gadbad nahi honi chahiye…raj hamare khazane ki chabi hai..

Tanu—tension mat lo mummy..main ab iska khas khyal rakhungi..

Thodi hi der me main taiyar ho kar, tanu ke sath shopping karne chala gaya…piche piche do gadiyo me karib dus hathiyar band body guards bhi sath le liye the tanu ne.

Update Abhi Incomplete Hai.

Bhai Maan nahi bahara update se ye bhut chota sa tha, please raat me ek or update de do

 

[Sanju]

Mast update bhai ab lagta hai tanu aur kalyani ki ram nam satya hone bali hai aur sheetal ke sath kiya hone bala hai

 

[monika]

Small update

 

[monika]

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[Fighter]

Anand bhai, aap wakai mai bahut hi kathin mehnat kar rahe hai. Sararik mehnat se kahi zayada mansik mehnat kathin hota hai......
Koi story likhna koi chhoti baat nhi hai. Uske lye kitni mehnat or kitna samay lagta hai ye wo hi bhakhubi bata sakta hai jisne kavi story likhne ki koshish ki ho.......

Gali wo hi dete jisme koi kabiliyat na ho. Jo khud to kuch kar nhi paate hai or jo kuch karne ki koshish karta hai to uske aagae rora atkate hai. Apko shayed malum hoga jo v kisi story pe galat shabdon ka prayog karta hai usne kavi koi story likhne ki himmat tak nhi kiya hoga..... Aise logo ko ignore kijye Anand bhai. Aise log har jagh milte hai. In Jaison ko react karne k bajaye ignore karna hi achha hai. Pure duniya mai aisa koi sucessful nhi hoga jo aise alachoko ka samna na kiya ho. Insan ko to chhodiye bhagwan ko v gali dene wale mil jate hai.....

Aap apne niji jindgi se jujhte hue hum savi k liye itna mehnat karte hai or hum savi k lye tym se update karte hai uske liye bahut bahut dhanyawad...... Mera savi writter se ek hi request hai agar tym pe update de paye ya update late hone lage to inform kar diya kijye. Is se reader ko thodi kam pareshani hogi...... Mai janta hu aap humesha se ye karte aa rahe hai. Mai bas apne dil ki baat kah raha tha. Meri yahi ummid har writter se rakhta hai

Sahi kaha bro

 

[Fighter]

First, Most Welcome Brother,
Sabse pahle to aapka hardik swagat hai dost.

Aapne bilkul sahi kaha, stories likhne me bahut samay waste hota hai..koi bhi scene create karne se pahle usko ghanto sochna padta hai, tab ja kar kuch likh pana sambhav ho pata hai.

Daily kam se kam 8-10 hrs isme lag hi jate hain balki kabhi kabhi to isse bhi jyada samay lagta hai.

Mujhe views, reviews ya likes milne ka moh nahi hai bas Likhna mere liye ek passion hai, ek junoon hai..jab bhi mere paas khali waqt hota hai to main likhne baith jata hu.

Abhi to corona ke chalte ghar par hi hu phir bhi work from home to karna hi padta hai.

Jab job rahti hai to poora din office me nikal jata hai..office se loutne ke baad dinner vagairah se free ho kar likhne baith jata hu aur subah hone tak likhne ka hi kaam karta hu, bina palak jhapkaye..yahi kram continue 3 din chalta hai..fourth day sirf night me sone ka kaam karta hu..uske baad phir se agle 3 din vaisa hi chalta hai.

Jaha tak likhne ke badle me kuch milne ki baat hai to milta hai na bhai, bahut kuch milta hai yaha..logo ki maa aur bahan ki gaaliya milti hain..log kisi na kisi bahaane se nicha dikhane ki koshish karte hain..yahi inaam milta hai…magar iske sath sath kuch sachche dost bhi milte hain jo swarthi aur matlabi nahi hote, jo girgit ki tarah apna rang nahi badalte, aur yahi meri sabse badi anmol kamayi hai.

Isliye apne unhi sachche dosto ki khatir main likhta hu..phir chahe mujhe kitna bhi tez fever ho, ghar me mehman aa jaye tab bhi main likhta jarur hu.

Jab tak mere sharir me taqat, hath me kalam aur aise sachche dosto ka sath rahega..tab tak main likhta rahunga,,bina ruke, bina jhuke.

Great bro
sahi kaha esa hota pta nhi log kyo kisi ko badhte nhi dekh sakte
Ab ispe jyada kya kah sakta hu pr aapki mehnat jarur kaabile tarif h aapke jese mene pahli bar dekh rha hu