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Nice update bro lekin aapne to pura scene likhne ka kaha tha aur wo hua nahin aur to aur rachna se to bat honi thi kuch nahin hua aapne kahe anusar rachana+kusum+vicky ka pura scene clear hona to rah hi gaya
Aur dusri bat bhai aapko bura bhi lag sakti h ki aapne kusum ko ghar aane aur vicky se bat karane ke is update jaise likha h bahut lamba update jaroor h magar isko rabad ki tarah khicha gaya h yesa lag raha h thik h aap bhavnao ko bhi dikhana chahte hain magar itna lamba khichne se kahin na kahin vicky aur kusum ka ye update feeka nazar aaya
Baki aap jaisa uchit samjhe aapki marji
Bohut sunder bohut lajawab update thaa aakher hero kee sub say bari khuwahis puri huwi Kusum didi nay apna sub qabol kur leya super keep going
Bahut badia update dost akhir kusum vicky se mil gyi
Bahut badia update dost akhir kusum vicky se mil gyi
Happy holi
great going ..
keep rocking ..
bahut badhiya pandit ji....................
lekin meri bhi yahi ray hai ki emotions ke flow ko control karein
jisse kahani aage badhti hui lage..................
ab kusum se kya bat hoti hai..................dekhte hain agle update mein
usse bhi jyada interesting hai..........rachna se bat hona.......kyonki un naujawani ke dino ke bad to rachna aur vicky mein koi bat hi nahin hui hai
idhar dakshina ki beti ka mamla bhi kya rukh badalta hai.............
agar gaon jana ho sake to .......rachna ke ghar ka bhi haalchaal de dena
keep it up
Waahh Mr. Pandit bhai. Super duper update. Maja aa gaya pandit bhai_______
Dakshina ne kusum ko samjha bujha kar hero ke paas bhej hi diya. Vicky aur kusum ka scene kafi jabardast hai bhai aur kafi emotional bhi. Jiska itne time se intjar tha wo aakhir ho hi gaya. Kamaal ka likha hai bhai. Thoda khicha huwa to laga lekin fir bhi mast tha______
Rachna ka bhi case lage hath nipta hi do pandit bhai. Akhir kab tak usko ignore karoge. Waise to be continue likha aur fir gayab. Ye kya chakkar hai________
Pandit bhai ab thoda speed badhao story ki. Abhi kiran bhi aa rahi hai aur udhar kiran ke husband ka bhi lafda hai. Inspector ek alag hi paheli sa bana huwa hai. Ye sab jaldi clear karo bhai. Abhi dakshina apne aur Vicky ke bare me story bhi flashback me sunayegi. Flashback ko bhi jaldi hi khatam karna. Uske baad ho sake to ek jhalak gaav ki bhi dikhana. Udhar ka bhi jaanna hai ki in logo ke aane ke baad waha kya huwa_______
So waiting for the next update_______