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Thriller Safar ek rahsya (secret of journey)~ Completed

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Nice update Bhai
 
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Black water

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Kahani ka pehla bhag sampann hua..
Dusra aadhya kabse suru hoga...?
 
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ashish_1982_in

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UPDATE 54
LAST UPDATE OF PART 1

Birju ka ishara milte hi shabhi toot pade mere upar mai bhi kaha se normal insan tha un sab ke liye to mai ek sadharan manav hi tha lekin mere paas kaun si shakitya thi mujhe khud hi nhi pta tha

kUKi maine abhi tak apne andar jhanka bhi nhi tha ki mai kya hu aur kyu hu bs jab jab mujhe gussa aata mai aut of control ho jata uske baad mujhe kuch bhi yaad nhi rhata aisa sirf ek baar hi huwa lekin itne din ho gye phir mai apni shaktyon se anbhigya tha

kkhir idhar unki tadad jyda thi mai akela wo bhi normal log the nhi wo sb ke sb mayavi the

mai unse nirantar abhi tak defense kar rha tha dhire dhire unki speed badhne lagi aur wo sb akramak hone lage in sab se mera phir se dimag ghumne laga

aaur ab mai out of control hone lga jisse ab mai khud un sab ki taraf japat chuka tha aur is pahli hi dhad me mere maine 4 ko pal bhar me phad diya jisse wo sb achanak huwe is hamle se hadbada gye aur

aab mai kya kr rha hu samne wala bhi nhi samjh pata usse pahle kisi ki gardan kisi ka hath kisi ka jabda toot ta ukhdata ja rha tha kuch hi der me waha gine chune hi birju ke aadmi bache the jinke aankho me bhay saaf dekha ja sakta tha

iis samay mai pura khun se nahaya huwa tha kuch khoon mera bhi nikla tha aur baki ka un sab ke marne se mai pura khoon se bhig chuka tha

mai unki taraf phir se lapakne ko huwa tabhi mere kaano me ek aawaj goonj uthi

aajay bacha lo mujhe ajay ye sb mujhe bhi nhi chodenge bacha lo mujhe

jjab mai us aawaj ki taraf ghuma to dekha birju kajal ke gale pe talwar liye huwe khada tha aur kajal mujhe bachane ke liye pukar rhi thi

Birju - ruk ja ladke nhi to teri is premika ki gardan dhad se alag kar doonga

mai - apna jivan chahta hai to tu talvar ko Kajal ki gardan se hata le mai tujhe jinda chod dunga

Birju - hahahaha hahahaha jaal me tu mere phansa huwa hai aur tu mujhe order de rha hai hahahaha

aagar tera ek kadam bhi hila to samajh le ye jinda nhi bachegi

MaI - ab bhi bol rha hu chod de use teri dusmani mujhse hai himmat ho to aa mujh se lad

Birju- hahahaha hahahaha tu itna tadap rha hai ise chod du le mai ise chod deta hu
itna bol ek usne baato baato me hi apne ek aadmi ko isara kiya aur kajal ko uski taraf dhakel diya

tABhi ek sath do chikh gunji ek meri aur ek kajal ki mai - nhiii iiíi
Kajal - Aaajjjjjayyyyy

Kuki
maI abhi kuch karta usse pahle us aadmi ne apni talwar kajal ke pet ke aar paar kar diya

mai whi apne ghutne le baith gya aur meri aankho se aansu girne lagae udhar wo sb mil ke jor jor se hans rhe the

jjissse mera gussa badh raha tha mere aankhe puri garam ho ke laal ho gyi thi unse ab lapte nikal rhi thi

mmai unsab pe kood pada aur pal bhar me sab ke sb mare pade the shbhi ke chitde idhar udhar bhikre huwe the ab sirf mai aur pirju hi bache the

Birju mujhe marne ko dauda apni talwar le ke usne apni talwar mere gardan ko nisana bana kar chalaya uski talawar mere gardan ke paas pahunchti usse pahle hi maine uski talwar oakad ke uske pet pe puri takat se ek laat mara

mmere ek hi laat se wo ghista huwa karib 10 ped ko todta huwa ek ped se takara kar gir gya wo whi khoon ki ulti karne lga

aBhi wo khada hota usse pahle hi mai uske sine pe chad chuka tha aur bola

maI - tune isi hath se kajal ke gardan pe talwar rakhi thi na ha
itna kahkar purk takat laga kar uska hath uske kandho se se alag kar diya
waha se bahut hi bahaynak dardnaak chikh goon uthi uski

mmai itne pe hi nhi ruka maine uske ek jaangh ko apne pair se dabakar dusra pair ko pakad kar usko chirne lga jitna jor mai uske pair pe deta uski chik utni tez hoti gyi

Mai bhi pura jaan laga kar chikhne laga aur uske sarir ko do bhaag me chir aur use utha ke do taraf phenk diya

mmera gussa abhi shant nhi huwa tha mere gusse ke karan wha bahut bhayank aag lg chuki thi

mmaine kajal ko apne god me uthaye bahar ke taraf chal diya meri aanko se lagatar aag nikal rhi thi jissse aag mere sath sath pakadne lagi thi

aabhi mai kuch dur hi chala tha tabhi mere samne ek ujala phail gya aur usme se ek prakash nikal ke mujhse lga mere hath se Kajal mere hath se chut ke gir gayi

mmujhe ashaniya dard hone lga jaise mere andar se koi kuch khinch ke bahar nikal rha ho

kkuch der baad mai ghutno pe apne gir gya aur mujhe ab hons bhi aa gya aur meri nazar kajal pe padi aur mere dimag me puri baat ghum gyi aur ab tak jo jo huwa wo yaad aate hi maine samne dekha tabhi mere samne guruji prakat huwa aur bole

Guruji - putra tum apni is pariksha me asafal hue tumhara khud pe se kabu nhi rha aur tum yha se nikalne ke baad aam logo ko bhi nuksan pahucha dete isi liye mujhe aadesh mila mai tumhe roku

aaur tumhari sari shaktiya wapas le lu kyuki ab tum is pariksha pe fail ho chuke ho kintu ab tumhe dobara ek daitva milega jiska tumhe samay aane pe pta chalega

ttab tak ke liye mai tumhe kuch shaktiya deta hu jisse tum apna aur apne parivar ki raksha kar sako aur unke hath se ek prakas nikla aur mere andar sama gya aur mai whi behos ho gya uske baad guruji ne hath ghumaya aur pura jagal phle ki trah ho gya

Whi gufa se mere aane ke baad birju ka sharir dhire dhire paas aane lga aur uske kate phate ang jud gye uske sare ghav thik ho gye
aur wo uth ke baith gya
Birju - hahahaha hahahaha tu kya mujhe marega aa rha hu hu mai wapas tab tak tu apni zindagi ji le
whi ye sab hone ke 10 saal baad

AAjay ek hospital ke bahar lobby me tahahal rha tha whi baki ke ghar wale waha lage hue sofe pe baithe the

ttabhi ot se ek doctor bahar nikali aur mere paas aa ke boli congratulations sir aapko beta huwa hai

uuski baat sun ke mai turant Ot me ghus gya jaha pe meri bivi abhi behos leti huwi thi aur uske bagal me ek bachha leta huwa tha jiske chehra pe abhi se hi kafi tez zhalak rha tha use dekh ke mere mukh se nikla

Tu Surya ke tez se nikla wo akshar hoga
jis akshar se hi ant aur aarabh hoga
tu wo aag hai jisme agni ka waas hoga
tu hi wo vinash hoga jisme rudra ka hi hath hoga


. The End.
fantastic update bhai Lekin kahani abhi khatam nahi hui hai agle update ka intezar rehega bhai
 
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