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Jiske paas jakar mai behos huwa wo koi aur nhi balki mere papa the jo ki bahut dino se kaid hone ke karan unki halat aisi ho gyi thi aur jab mai behos huwa uske baad ke baare me mujhe kuch bhi pta nhi ki kya huwa mere bohos hone ke baad
aur jab meri chetna wapas aayi yani jab mai hos me aaya tab mai kahi aur nhi balki mai apne ghar me apne bed par leta huwa tha
Mai aur maa aur shruti sath me ek hi bed pe soye huwe the aap sab ko to pta hi hoga amiro ke ghar ke bed kaise hote hai
king size bed tha hame koi dikkat nahi hui
Maine dekha ki maa aur Shruti kqfi dubli ho gyi thi Shruti ke aankho ke neeche kale ghere aa gye the
lekin sote huwe bhi in dono ke chehre pe halki si muskan thi aur Shruti to mujhe jakad ke so rhi thi
jab mai gaya tha meri wo bahan nhi dikh rhi thi jaisi pahle thi mai aise hi soch rha tha
Mujhe kuch thakan abhi bhi mahsoos ho rhi thi mai dobar phir se kab so gya mujhe nhi pta
Jab subha meri neend khuli to maa shyad chali gayi thi aur shruti mujhe pakad ke soyi hui thi
Mai utha aur dekha to wo bade sukoon se soyi hui thi jaise lag raa tha ki aaj hi use sukoon ki nind mili ho
Shruti ka chehra pahle ki trah nahi rah gaya tha aur uska chehra thoda feeka pan aa gaya tha
Lekin itne din baad shyad mere wapas lautne se uski muskan wapas aa gaya thi aur uske chehre pe ek pyari si muskan jhalak rahi thi
Jaise wo neend me bhi bahut khus ho mai bhi itne baad shruti se mila to mujhe apni pyari bahan pe bahut pyar aa raha tha
Aur maine uske mathe pe aur galo pe kiss kiya aur bola
Mai - gudiya uth ja ab subha ho gayi hai kitna soyegi
Wo - aankh band kar ke bhaiyaabhi aur sone dijiye na aaj aapke sath kitne dino baad soyi hu aur maine aapko bahut miss kiya itne dino se
Aur wo mujhe dobara phir se kheech ke sula di aur mere upar pair rakh ke so gayi
Mai bhi is baar utha nahi aur waise hi pada raha
Abhi kuch hi der huwa tha ki maa kamre me aayi aur boli
Maa - he bhagwan dekho kaise dono so rahe hai 8bj gaya hai aur ab dobo bistar me hi pade hai utho utho jaldi
Shruti - huu huuuuuuu kya mammi aap bhi aaj sone nahi de rahi rahi
Mammi - huu ki bachi chal ab uth ja
Ab tera bhai aa gya hai ab ise kahi nhi jane dungi abhi chod de tere bhaiya ko dadaji bahar bula rahe hai
Aur kab se tum dono ka sab bahar intzar kar rahe hai aaye aur nashta kare aur tum dono to kharrate mar rahe hai
Mai - kya mammi kya meri naak se aawaj aati hai
Maa - has kar jo bhi ho dono jaldi fresh ho ke neeche aao
Aur uske baad maa neeche chali gayi aur ham done fresh hone lage aur shruti apne kamare me fresh hone chali gayi
Ham dono maa ko kabhi kabhi mammi aur maai bhi bolte hai
Kyuki ham dono gaanv me pale hai to asar to rahega na
Aur ham doni fresh ho ke neeche pahuche aur sab se goog morning bole uske baad ham bhi dining table pe nashte ke liye baith gaye aur sabhi baithe huwe the
Aaj hamari puri family puri thi aur shabhi ek sath baithe huwe the aur dadaji beech wali kursi pe baithe huwe the
Aur mujhe unhone apne samne wali kursi pe baithne ko bola aur mai uspe baith gaya aur uske baad ek side maa aur ek side shruti phir puja phir komal aise hi sab dono side huwe the
mujhe tajjub huwa sab aise normal behave kar rhe hai jaise kich huwa hi na ho kyuki shabhi ke chere bta rhe the ki shabhi ki halat kharab dikh rhi thi aur mujhe na koi sawal aur na koi puch tach sab unexpected tha
shabhi ko dekh kar maine hi socha mai hi kuch bol ke dekta hu
Aaj itne dino baad ghar ka kuch khane ja raha tha to uski mahak se hi meri bukh badhne lagi thi
Mai - are wahh aaj to nashte me mera favorite aalo ka paratha dikh raha rah hai
Dadi ji - are kyu nahi mera pota itna din baad aaya hai aur meri bahu ne apne bete ka pasandida nashta banai hai (ham sab hi jante hai tere jane ke baad is ghar ka kya hal huwa tha)
Mai - hmm aaj to mja aa jayega aur uske baad maine to sabse pahle khane laga aur ek paratha khane ke baad dekha to sab mujhe hi dekh rahe the
To mai bola
Mai - are aap sab mujhe is trah se kyu dekh rahe hai aap sab bhi khaiye na
Sab - ha ha kyu nahi aur uske baad sab nashta karne lage aur nashta kare ke baad dadaji bole
Dadaji - aur beta ab tumhe kaisa lag raha hai
Mai - dadaji mai to ek dam fit hu mujhe kya hoga mai to ek dam theek lag raha hu waise aap aisa kyu puch rhe hai
Dadaji - kuch nhi bas aise hi achha aur tum waha kaise us jangal me pahuch gaye
mai - are dadaji mai aise hi gumte ghumte waha pahuc gaya aur waha ka sab ghera huwa tuta tha to mai jangal me chala gaya
Aur jab wapas aane ke liye muda to wo rashta hi gayab tha jaha se mai gaya tha
Dadaji - achha aur tum wapas kaise aaye mtlab waha se kaise bache
Mai - mai waha se aage badh gaya aur uske baad jo jo huwa wo sab bataya kuch baato ko chod kar aur phir use marne ke baad mai papa ke paas aaya aur phir mai behosh ho gaya aur uske baad mai yaha kaise pahucha mujhe nahi pta
Aur waise aaj kitni tarikh ho gyi hai tab dadaji ne jo bataya main sun ke hang ho gya aur soachne laga ki mai 15 din gayab rha aur tab maine kuch sochte huwe papa.se pucha
Papa aap bataiye na mai waha se yaha kaise pahucha
Papa - are beta jane de wo sb jaan ke kya karega tu
Chod ye sab baat
Aur ab kya karna
Mai - karna kya hai kuch nahi waise dono bua nahi dikh rahi hai
Kaha hai wo sab
Nikhil - wo kya hai na sab tere gayab hone ke kuch din baad chale gaye aur sab aaj aa rahe hai dopahar tak pahuch jayenge
Mai - ,achha maa mai to sarpanch ji ke ghar ja raha hu waha bhi un sab se mil lu
Koi kuch bola nahi mera dhyan in sab ke upar nhi tha aur mai bola mai sarpapanch ji ke ghar ja rha hu aur uth ke jane laga tabhi dada ji bole
Dadaji - ruko to beta kaha ja rhe ho
Dadaji -beta kahan ja rahe ho abhi tum sahi ho gaye ho thoda aaram bhi kar lo
Mai -arey Dadaji Jyada time nahi Kuch der Mein Wapas Aa Jaunga
Dadi -chal baith abhi nashta kiya hai Aaram kar lo aur Tumhare Dadaji bhi Sahi bol rahe Abhi Tumhe Aaram karna chahiye
Mai - yaar UP Satta 15 din me Ajeeb Ho Gayi Hai Uske Pehle Toh aise nahi rokte the Aap Sab MujHey Bhagwan Kisi Tarah yeah Ruk Jaye aur wahan pe Na Ja nahi toh pata chalega to kya gujregi ispe jab chalega Toh Kya hoga mere bete ka
Abhi Abhi Toh Ho Saya hai aur Agar Ye Jaane ka ki Kajal ko kuch ho gaya to Kaise Jiye Hum Sab Sambhalenge
mujhe lagta tha In Dono Ko Dekha to make Dosti Se Pyar Karti Thi Daayan liye Tu Mujhe Mil Jaye Teri Aankhon mein galat Khushi hoti thi Pyar Karne Wale me hoti hai
Agar aisa huwa to mera beta khud ko kaie sambhalega
Papa - Arabi Todna sawal jawab nahi karna chahiye kal chale jana Aaj Aaram Kar Lo Aaj Hum Sab Ki Baat Maan lo Tumhe Koi Nahi
Mai - thik aap sab Itna bol rahe To Nahi Jaunga lekin mujhe lag raha aap se mujhe kuch chupa Itna mana kar rahe hain
Dadi - Tu Bhi ekdum pagal hai kya kya Sochta rehta hai chal aaj aaram kar le
aur uske baad mein bhi Main Choti Parande Mein bat Gaya tabhi gate se ek Army wala Kisi doctor Ko li ke andar aaya aur bola Thakur Sahab Mehta ji Aaye Hain
Dadaji- Mehta ji Aye Aye mai aap hi ka kab se Intezar kar raha tha
good afternoon Lagaya Aur Main abhi Bahar Hoon Main Chala Gaya Kyunki mujhe pata de Sab apni Baatein apne Mein Lage rahenge main Bahar Aaya to mai dekha haMera Ghar Ke vahar
Bahar cafe hi Security dikh rahi thi Jaga Jaga Army Wale Hath Mein gun liye ghar ke charo taraf yani dwar pepahra de rahe the
Ab mujhe sakh ho raha tha ki koi na koi ghatna jarur hui hai Koi bahut badi ghatna hui ho isliye itni high security lagai gayi hai
Maine apna phone nikala aur kajal ke ghar call lagaya
Aur man me soacha ki waha aaj ja nahi sakta to kya huwa kajal se baat to ho sakti hai
Mai ne call lagaya lekin phone switch off aa raha tha aur maine land line bhi call kiya wo bhi switch off aa raha tha mai kai baar try kiya lekin koi fayda nahi huwa
Tabhi bahar nikhil aaya aur bola
Nikhil - are bhai yaha kya kar rahe ho andar doctor bula rahe hai
Mai - kya karne ke liye doctor mujhe bula rahe hai
Nikhil - bol rahe hai tumhara ceck up karna hai
Mai andar aaya aur doctor ne mera checkup kiya mujhe laga tamam itruction dene ki ye ye karo abhi aram ki jarurat hai falana dekana
Mai tang ho ke bola are uncle mai koi bachha thodhe na hu jo mujhe nahi pta rahega ki mai theek hu ya nahi
Aise hi kuch der me doctor bahar chala gaya aur mai maa se pucha
Mai - mammi ye kajal ke ghar ka no kyu nahi lag raha hai
Maa - hadbada ke ha wo ha shyad kharab hoga
Mai - are landline bhi thode hi na band hoga
Aur aap sab mujh se kuch chupa rahe hai bahar itni high security kyu lagai gayi hai
Dadaji - wo kya hai na jab se tu gaya hai gaanv ke halat bahut kharab chal rahe hai aur isi liye security rakhi gayi hai
Mai - ab mujhe pura yakin hai aap sab mujh se kuch chipa rahe hai ab aap sach sach mujhe sab bata dijiye
Shabhi sar niche kar ke baith gaye koi kuch nahi bol raha tha
Mai - gudiya tu hi bta na kya huwa hai jo sab is trah.se muh latkaye huwe hai
Wo bhi kuch nahi bol rahi thi aur wo un sab ka mukh dekh rahi thi
Mai - theek hai aap sab nahi batayenge mai khud ja ke pta kaRTA hu gusse me
Aur mai bahar jane laga mai dadaji ki aawaj sun ke mai ruk gaya
Dadaji - isliye ham sab tumhe rok rahe the kyuki ab wo nahi rahe ������
Sorry friends update late aaya do din se time nhi mila likhne ke liye
Jiske paas jakar mai behos huwa wo koi aur nhi balki mere papa the jo ki bahut dino se kaid hone ke karan unki halat aisi ho gyi thi aur jab mai behos huwa uske baad ke baare me mujhe kuch bhi pta nhi ki kya huwa mere bohos hone ke baad
aur jab meri chetna wapas aayi yani jab mai hos me aaya tab mai kahi aur nhi balki mai apne ghar me apne bed par leta huwa tha
Mai aur maa aur shruti sath me ek hi bed pe soye huwe the aap sab ko to pta hi hoga amiro ke ghar ke bed kaise hote hai
king size bed tha hame koi dikkat nahi hui
Maine dekha ki maa aur Shruti kqfi dubli ho gyi thi Shruti ke aankho ke neeche kale ghere aa gye the
lekin sote huwe bhi in dono ke chehre pe halki si muskan thi aur Shruti to mujhe jakad ke so rhi thi
jab mai gaya tha meri wo bahan nhi dikh rhi thi jaisi pahle thi mai aise hi soch rha tha
Mujhe kuch thakan abhi bhi mahsoos ho rhi thi mai dobar phir se kab so gya mujhe nhi pta
Jab subha meri neend khuli to maa shyad chali gayi thi aur shruti mujhe pakad ke soyi hui thi
Mai utha aur dekha to wo bade sukoon se soyi hui thi jaise lag raa tha ki aaj hi use sukoon ki nind mili ho
Shruti ka chehra pahle ki trah nahi rah gaya tha aur uska chehra thoda feeka pan aa gaya tha
Lekin itne din baad shyad mere wapas lautne se uski muskan wapas aa gaya thi aur uske chehre pe ek pyari si muskan jhalak rahi thi
Jaise wo neend me bhi bahut khus ho mai bhi itne baad shruti se mila to mujhe apni pyari bahan pe bahut pyar aa raha tha
Aur maine uske mathe pe aur galo pe kiss kiya aur bola
Mai - gudiya uth ja ab subha ho gayi hai kitna soyegi
Wo - aankh band kar ke bhaiyaabhi aur sone dijiye na aaj aapke sath kitne dino baad soyi hu aur maine aapko bahut miss kiya itne dino se
Aur wo mujhe dobara phir se kheech ke sula di aur mere upar pair rakh ke so gayi
Mai bhi is baar utha nahi aur waise hi pada raha
Abhi kuch hi der huwa tha ki maa kamre me aayi aur boli
Maa - he bhagwan dekho kaise dono so rahe hai 8bj gaya hai aur ab dobo bistar me hi pade hai utho utho jaldi
Shruti - huu huuuuuuu kya mammi aap bhi aaj sone nahi de rahi rahi
Mammi - huu ki bachi chal ab uth ja
Ab tera bhai aa gya hai ab ise kahi nhi jane dungi abhi chod de tere bhaiya ko dadaji bahar bula rahe hai
Aur kab se tum dono ka sab bahar intzar kar rahe hai aaye aur nashta kare aur tum dono to kharrate mar rahe hai
Mai - kya mammi kya meri naak se aawaj aati hai
Maa - has kar jo bhi ho dono jaldi fresh ho ke neeche aao
Aur uske baad maa neeche chali gayi aur ham done fresh hone lage aur shruti apne kamare me fresh hone chali gayi
Ham dono maa ko kabhi kabhi mammi aur maai bhi bolte hai
Kyuki ham dono gaanv me pale hai to asar to rahega na
Aur ham doni fresh ho ke neeche pahuche aur sab se goog morning bole uske baad ham bhi dining table pe nashte ke liye baith gaye aur sabhi baithe huwe the
Aaj hamari puri family puri thi aur shabhi ek sath baithe huwe the aur dadaji beech wali kursi pe baithe huwe the
Aur mujhe unhone apne samne wali kursi pe baithne ko bola aur mai uspe baith gaya aur uske baad ek side maa aur ek side shruti phir puja phir komal aise hi sab dono side huwe the
mujhe tajjub huwa sab aise normal behave kar rhe hai jaise kich huwa hi na ho kyuki shabhi ke chere bta rhe the ki shabhi ki halat kharab dikh rhi thi aur mujhe na koi sawal aur na koi puch tach sab unexpected tha
shabhi ko dekh kar maine hi socha mai hi kuch bol ke dekta hu
Aaj itne dino baad ghar ka kuch khane ja raha tha to uski mahak se hi meri bukh badhne lagi thi
Mai - are wahh aaj to nashte me mera favorite aalo ka paratha dikh raha rah hai
Dadi ji - are kyu nahi mera pota itna din baad aaya hai aur meri bahu ne apne bete ka pasandida nashta banai hai (ham sab hi jante hai tere jane ke baad is ghar ka kya hal huwa tha)
Mai - hmm aaj to mja aa jayega aur uske baad maine to sabse pahle khane laga aur ek paratha khane ke baad dekha to sab mujhe hi dekh rahe the
To mai bola
Mai - are aap sab mujhe is trah se kyu dekh rahe hai aap sab bhi khaiye na
Sab - ha ha kyu nahi aur uske baad sab nashta karne lage aur nashta kare ke baad dadaji bole
Dadaji - aur beta ab tumhe kaisa lag raha hai
Mai - dadaji mai to ek dam fit hu mujhe kya hoga mai to ek dam theek lag raha hu waise aap aisa kyu puch rhe hai
Dadaji - kuch nhi bas aise hi achha aur tum waha kaise us jangal me pahuch gaye
mai - are dadaji mai aise hi gumte ghumte waha pahuc gaya aur waha ka sab ghera huwa tuta tha to mai jangal me chala gaya
Aur jab wapas aane ke liye muda to wo rashta hi gayab tha jaha se mai gaya tha
Dadaji - achha aur tum wapas kaise aaye mtlab waha se kaise bache
Mai - mai waha se aage badh gaya aur uske baad jo jo huwa wo sab bataya kuch baato ko chod kar aur phir use marne ke baad mai papa ke paas aaya aur phir mai behosh ho gaya aur uske baad mai yaha kaise pahucha mujhe nahi pta
Aur waise aaj kitni tarikh ho gyi hai tab dadaji ne jo bataya main sun ke hang ho gya aur soachne laga ki mai 15 din gayab rha aur tab maine kuch sochte huwe papa.se pucha
Papa aap bataiye na mai waha se yaha kaise pahucha
Papa - are beta jane de wo sb jaan ke kya karega tu
Chod ye sab baat
Aur ab kya karna
Mai - karna kya hai kuch nahi waise dono bua nahi dikh rahi hai
Kaha hai wo sab
Nikhil - wo kya hai na sab tere gayab hone ke kuch din baad chale gaye aur sab aaj aa rahe hai dopahar tak pahuch jayenge
Mai - ,achha maa mai to sarpanch ji ke ghar ja raha hu waha bhi un sab se mil lu
Koi kuch bola nahi mera dhyan in sab ke upar nhi tha aur mai bola mai sarpapanch ji ke ghar ja rha hu aur uth ke jane laga tabhi dada ji bole
Dadaji - ruko to beta kaha ja rhe ho
Dadaji -beta kahan ja rahe ho abhi tum sahi ho gaye ho thoda aaram bhi kar lo
Mai -arey Dadaji Jyada time nahi Kuch der Mein Wapas Aa Jaunga
Dadi -chal baith abhi nashta kiya hai Aaram kar lo aur Tumhare Dadaji bhi Sahi bol rahe Abhi Tumhe Aaram karna chahiye
Mai - yaar UP Satta 15 din me Ajeeb Ho Gayi Hai Uske Pehle Toh aise nahi rokte the Aap Sab MujHey Bhagwan Kisi Tarah yeah Ruk Jaye aur wahan pe Na Ja nahi toh pata chalega to kya gujregi ispe jab chalega Toh Kya hoga mere bete ka
Abhi Abhi Toh Ho Saya hai aur Agar Ye Jaane ka ki Kajal ko kuch ho gaya to Kaise Jiye Hum Sab Sambhalenge
mujhe lagta tha In Dono Ko Dekha to make Dosti Se Pyar Karti Thi Daayan liye Tu Mujhe Mil Jaye Teri Aankhon mein galat Khushi hoti thi Pyar Karne Wale me hoti hai
Agar aisa huwa to mera beta khud ko kaie sambhalega
Papa - Arabi Todna sawal jawab nahi karna chahiye kal chale jana Aaj Aaram Kar Lo Aaj Hum Sab Ki Baat Maan lo Tumhe Koi Nahi
Mai - thik aap sab Itna bol rahe To Nahi Jaunga lekin mujhe lag raha aap se mujhe kuch chupa Itna mana kar rahe hain
Dadi - Tu Bhi ekdum pagal hai kya kya Sochta rehta hai chal aaj aaram kar le
aur uske baad mein bhi Main Choti Parande Mein bat Gaya tabhi gate se ek Army wala Kisi doctor Ko li ke andar aaya aur bola Thakur Sahab Mehta ji Aaye Hain
Dadaji- Mehta ji Aye Aye mai aap hi ka kab se Intezar kar raha tha
good afternoon Lagaya Aur Main abhi Bahar Hoon Main Chala Gaya Kyunki mujhe pata de Sab apni Baatein apne Mein Lage rahenge main Bahar Aaya to mai dekha haMera Ghar Ke vahar
Bahar cafe hi Security dikh rahi thi Jaga Jaga Army Wale Hath Mein gun liye ghar ke charo taraf yani dwar pepahra de rahe the
Ab mujhe sakh ho raha tha ki koi na koi ghatna jarur hui hai Koi bahut badi ghatna hui ho isliye itni high security lagai gayi hai
Maine apna phone nikala aur kajal ke ghar call lagaya
Aur man me soacha ki waha aaj ja nahi sakta to kya huwa kajal se baat to ho sakti hai
Mai ne call lagaya lekin phone switch off aa raha tha aur maine land line bhi call kiya wo bhi switch off aa raha tha mai kai baar try kiya lekin koi fayda nahi huwa
Tabhi bahar nikhil aaya aur bola
Nikhil - are bhai yaha kya kar rahe ho andar doctor bula rahe hai
Mai - kya karne ke liye doctor mujhe bula rahe hai
Nikhil - bol rahe hai tumhara ceck up karna hai
Mai andar aaya aur doctor ne mera checkup kiya mujhe laga tamam itruction dene ki ye ye karo abhi aram ki jarurat hai falana dekana
Mai tang ho ke bola are uncle mai koi bachha thodhe na hu jo mujhe nahi pta rahega ki mai theek hu ya nahi
Aise hi kuch der me doctor bahar chala gaya aur mai maa se pucha
Mai - mammi ye kajal ke ghar ka no kyu nahi lag raha hai
Maa - hadbada ke ha wo ha shyad kharab hoga
Mai - are landline bhi thode hi na band hoga
Aur aap sab mujh se kuch chupa rahe hai bahar itni high security kyu lagai gayi hai
Dadaji - wo kya hai na jab se tu gaya hai gaanv ke halat bahut kharab chal rahe hai aur isi liye security rakhi gayi hai
Mai - ab mujhe pura yakin hai aap sab mujh se kuch chipa rahe hai ab aap sach sach mujhe sab bata dijiye
Shabhi sar niche kar ke baith gaye koi kuch nahi bol raha tha
Mai - gudiya tu hi bta na kya huwa hai jo sab is trah.se muh latkaye huwe hai
Wo bhi kuch nahi bol rahi thi aur wo un sab ka mukh dekh rahi thi
Mai - theek hai aap sab nahi batayenge mai khud ja ke pta kaRTA hu gusse me
Aur mai bahar jane laga mai dadaji ki aawaj sun ke mai ruk gaya
Dadaji - isliye ham sab tumhe rok rahe the kyuki ab wo nahi rahe ������
Sorry friends update late aaya do din se time nhi mila likhne ke liye
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