thanks a lot bhai aapne bahut achha explain kiya aur aapka andaza bhi kuchh kuchh sahi haiWah bhai awesome update lekin kya se kya ho gaya ,Muzay laga tha riya gate kholegi magar yaha chutki ne bend baja di .kher hona jana kuch nahi hai bus mummy ko apni story ek baar aur chutki ko sunani padegi . Vinu kitna tharki hai ye to usey pata hai hai ...
main sach mein aapki lekhni ka bahut bada fan hun mahi ji. main koi aise hi aapki lekhni ki tarif nahi karta, aap sach mein tarif ke kabil ho. ek aur baat aapki contest mein story blatkari se mohabbat, art ka ek behatarin namoona tha, dekhiye review dena harek ka adhikar ke kaisa bhi de, lekin maine dekha ke review dene walon ne aapki story aur uske characters ke saath insaaf nahi kiya, yeh baat mujhe to buri lagi hi, yahan par ek aur bahut badi lekhika hain unko bhi buri lagi, lekin ham kar bhi kya sakte hain kisi ki soch ko to badal nahi sakte na.क्या सर जी।
आप हमेशा हमें बड़ा रचनाकार बताते हैं। जो अभी फिलहाल हम हैं नहीं। ये तो आप का बड़प्पन है।
वैसे हमारी पहली कहानी समाप्त हो गई है। अगर आप एक बार उधर अपनी नज़र इनायत कर देते तो अच्छा होता।। क्योंकि आपके ही मार्गदर्शन में हमने अपनी कहानी शुरू की थी। तो आपकी एक प्रतिक्रिया की प्रतीक्षा कहानी समाप्त होने के बाद हमें अभी भी है।।
you are right bro their haste made it waste, but we cant do anything after doing, they were caught by chhutki, let us see what happens next, I am really thankful to you sir for your valuable review. You go in the depth of story and notice each and every point of it, and after that you give your review, which is really an honor for me. please keep reading and commenting on it because it fills my heart with extreme happinessHastes makes waste.
Vinay was being impatient, and in such cases most of the time, you make mistakes. They couldn't control their moans and that innocent girl saw all that which she couldn't have imagined in her lifetime. What would now she be thinking of her brother, a sex-hungry guy, who believes in no relation, everything is flesh for him, be it his mom or his sister. Cause he was after her too, and now she is in a very compromised position with his mother, where no son should be. How would Vinay now explain everything to her, her tears say everything, that she is not gonna forgive him, that she is being cheated, by her mother, by her brother? I mean how would she comprehend all that, her lovely brother and her mother together.
Aftermath, interesting everything is gonna be interesting after that, how would her mother explains herself, Vinni already knew about his brother's intentions, but she wasn't aware of her mother's actions. It's gonna be tough for them.
The first thing they are cheating her father would come to her mind, and secondly, how could a mother and son do that.
Eagerly Waiting.
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thank you so much bro...please keep reading and commentingBahut hi badhiya update diya hai bhai...
Nice and excellent update..
thank you so much bro...please keep reading and commentingwaiting for the next update..
thank you so much bro...please keep reading and commentingBehad hi shanadar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Waiting 4 next update